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Marika - quantum jump

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TmuraYukarin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年9月13日 at 8:24:17

Artist: Marika
Title: quantum jump
Source: フレラバ ~Friend to Lover~
Tags: visual novel eroge game opening moe galgame angel note smee fureraba
BPM: 130
Filesize: 15257kb
Play Time: 04:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (3.27 stars, 598 notes)
  2. Insane (4.41 stars, 685 notes)
  3. Normal (1.7 stars, 319 notes)
Download: Marika - quantum jump
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hitsound on plz
ABD007
Insane
00:50:147 (2) - rhythm with this slider is unsuitable at here, u can make it like 00:48:993 (1,2,3) - is good enough with different pattern :)
would be nice this circle 00:47:147 (3) - stacked properly on 00:47:609 (5) - . here too 01:02:840 (1) - 01:03:763 (4) -
please reduce a overlap in this diff . also this stream 03:16:686 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - is too much . make it more easier imo .
also consider your rhythm too .

Hard
this diff too , have a bad pattern and flow . consider to fix it , okay ! xP
make it clean , stacked properly , like this 01:02:840 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , it's so messy imo .
sometime u make this 00:48:070 (1,3) - , sometime this 00:51:301 (1,3) - . be a consistent okay ! :)
nc should at 01:51:763 (2) - . not here 01:50:840 (1) - 'cause of gap at there

Normal
Rhythm is okay ! . pattern too . seems fine too me ~

good luck :D
modding is a good way to get better at mapping ><
Topic Starter
TmuraYukarin

Kyousukee wrote:

Insane
00:50:147 (2) - rhythm with this slider is unsuitable at here, u can make it like 00:48:993 (1,2,3) - is good enough with different pattern :)
:arrow: Changed slider to single taps.
would be nice this circle 00:47:147 (3) - stacked properly on 00:47:609 (5) - . here too 01:02:840 (1) - 01:03:763 (4) -
:arrow: I Stacked them.
please reduce a overlap in this diff . also this stream 03:16:686 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - is too much . make it more easier imo .
also consider your rhythm too .
:arrow: made more easier this zone. Other overlap zones let it stand.

Hard
this diff too , have a bad pattern and flow . consider to fix it , okay ! xP
:arrow: Fixed some flows,some patterns.
make it clean , stacked properly , like this 01:02:840 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , it's so messy imo .
:arrow: Stacked. And changed slider to straight.
sometime u make this 00:48:070 (1,3) - , sometime this 00:51:301 (1,3) - . be a consistent okay ! :)
:arrow: changed stack a consistent.
nc should at 01:51:763 (2) - . not here 01:50:840 (1) - 'cause of gap at there
:arrow: changed. this makes good

Normal
Rhythm is okay ! . pattern too . seems fine too me ~

good luck :D
modding is a good way to get better at mapping ><
Thx for modding~
Chihara Minori
I like the hitsound
its my fetish ww
Topic Starter
TmuraYukarin

Time Capsule wrote:

I like the hitsound
its my fetish ww
thx. I made an effort :)
FunnyA
Hello! From FunnyA's Q

General

* Turn Off Widescreen support is available in Song Setup settings, as this is only enabled if your beatmap has Storyboard.
* Flow / arrangement of objects that you have less good, IMO. Better try to see some of the beatmap examples that are ranked from professional mapper, so your mapping skills will increase. Not only that, plus you read in OSU! wiki and see the beatmap tutorial video on youtube (search = pishifat) so your knowledge will increase.
* For a new beatmaper, I suggest you make a beatmap of 1 minute / 2 minutes to learn and know where the error lies also easy to fix it. But it's up to you how you want it :)
* You must have a creation to create another pattern from it, so players are interested in playing beatmap that you create :) But it's up to you to approve my suggestion or not.
* In terms of the music and the snaps, I think that's right. And I know you're great in music, good job ~

Normal

The object in this section 01:26:840 to 02:22:109 looks the same as this one 00:01:917 - 01:12:070. I know you copy-paste this object (Both hitcircles and sliders) ><

00:02:840 (2,4) - The shape in this section is a bit strange because there is overlap
00:24:070 (1,2) - The location of these two sliders is a bit skewed. Fix the slider position to make it look neater and may also be blanked
00:26:840 (5,1) - Fixed blanked plz
00:35:147 (1,3) - Try to note more clearly about these two objects at 00: 35: 724 - 00: 35: 840 minutes, should not be like that because it confuses the player. You should give the distance between the objects to avoid the "overlap".
00:37:455 (4,5,6) - Flow in this section less good, tidied up a bit.
00:46:224 (1,2) - These two sliders touch a bit. Try to keep it a little between (1) and (2)
00:48:993 (6) - Try fixing the Blanked :)
01:00:993 (1,3) - Try to see more clearly about these two objects, you should not be like that because it confuses the player. You'd better give the distance between objects to avoid overlapping.
01:04:686 (1,2) - We recommend Blanked ~
01:07:455 (6,2) - Same as this one 01: 00: 993 (1,3)
01:12:186 (1) - this does not match added with the spinner, you need to delete it and just get here 01: 12: 070 (8), IMO

Hehehehe, I'm so sorry if I give you some advice. because this beatmap has the same faults that are above it. And I hope this beatmap will soon be ranked. Do not forget to keep your spirit ya! ;)
Topic Starter
TmuraYukarin
quote with reply

ulfanirahmi wrote:

Hello! From FunnyA's Q

General

* Turn Off Widescreen support is available in Song Setup settings, as this is only enabled if your beatmap has Storyboard.
:arrow: Fixed
* Flow / arrangement of objects that you have less good, IMO. Better try to see some of the beatmap examples that are ranked from professional mapper, so your mapping skills will increase. Not only that, plus you read in OSU! wiki and see the beatmap tutorial video on youtube (search = pishifat) so your knowledge will increase.
:arrow: I used flow brake pattern too much lol
* For a new beatmaper, I suggest you make a beatmap of 1 minute / 2 minutes to learn and know where the error lies also easy to fix it. But it's up to you how you want it :)
* You must have a creation to create another pattern from it, so players are interested in playing beatmap that you create :) But it's up to you to approve my suggestion or not.
* In terms of the music and the snaps, I think that's right. And I know you're great in music, good job ~

Normal

The object in this section 01:26:840 to 02:22:109 looks the same as this one 00:01:917 - 01:12:070. I know you copy-paste this object (Both hitcircles and sliders) ><

00:02:840 (2,4) - The shape in this section is a bit strange because there is overlap
:arrow: fix
00:24:070 (1,2) - The location of these two sliders is a bit skewed. Fix the slider position to make it look neater and may also be blanked
:arrow: fix
00:26:840 (5,1) - Fixed blanked plz
:arrow: fix
00:35:147 (1,3) - Try to note more clearly about these two objects at 00: 35: 724 - 00: 35: 840 minutes, should not be like that because it confuses the player. You should give the distance between the objects to avoid the "overlap".
:arrow: fix
00:37:455 (4,5,6) - Flow in this section less good, tidied up a bit.
fix
00:46:224 (1,2) - These two sliders touch a bit. Try to keep it a little between (1) and (2)
:arrow: fix
00:48:993 (6) - Try fixing the Blanked :)
:arrow: fix
01:00:993 (1,3) - Try to see more clearly about these two objects, you should not be like that because it confuses the player. You'd better give the distance between objects to avoid overlapping.
:arrow: If I accept this suggestion, I have to change same pattern. So I wanna hold on this suggestion.
01:04:686 (1,2) - We recommend Blanked ~
:arrow: fix
01:07:455 (6,2) - Same as this one 01: 00: 993 (1,3)
:arrow: Hold. I will change if this section get pointing out any other.
01:12:186 (1) - this does not match added with the spinner, you need to delete it and just get here 01: 12: 070 (8), IMO
:arrow: hmm... I don't wanna delete hitsound note. If any other will point out this section, I will delete this spinner.

Hehehehe, I'm so sorry if I give you some advice. because this beatmap has the same faults that are above it. And I hope this beatmap will soon be ranked. Do not forget to keep your spirit ya! ;)

thanks for modding :D
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