M4M~
Okay that's all~!
Good Luck
General
- Maybeeee crop the bg into 1366 x 768?
Well, 1920 x 1080 is also fine though xd - Just a pure suggestion, but how about adding another kiai time at 01:04:705 ? It would give a nice flashy effect over there xd
- Other than that, very good owob.
Nice bg btw. I'm drooling :v
Normal
- 01:06:780 (5) - Probably change this 1/4 slider into a circle at 01:06:939 instead? Since this is the Normal diff and up to this point, the only reversed sliders that you used were 1/2 reversed sliders, which is why the sudden placement of 1/4 reversed slider on the red tick would be a kind of surprise for the beginner players
- 00:59:599 (1) - Add finish at the head of this slider please~ Since the main music suggests it
- 01:10:450 (2) - This slider's reversed part touched the hp bar above for a little bit
Maybe consider moving it few grids downward? - 01:17:471 (7) - Add NC to this circle please~!
- 01:17:631 (1) - Lower down the volume of this spinner into 30% ~ 40% would be nice, since having a 85% spinner at the end of the song is pretty loud in my opinion
- I found nothing more. Neat diff
Lasse's Hard
- 00:02:950 (1) - This NC is kinda unnecessary in my opinion. Would be best to remove it
- 00:12:844 (3,4) - This overlap doesn't look very nice in my opinion. It kinds of covering almost 85% part of 00:13:163 (4), and the gap required to make 00:12:844 (3) completely disappear after being hit so that the player wouldn't get confused about the placement of the next object isn't enough (and I also missed it during the test play even if I used the transparent hit circle skin, because the approach circle of 00:12:844 (3) kind of blending in with the approach circle of 00:13:163 (4) , which gave me the 'Eh? Where's the next object's kind of feeling ) . Would be best to remove it somewhere else to make 00:13:163 (4) more visible during the play, like somewhere around x:404 y:280
Because it would make the jump from 00:12:844 (3) to 00:13:163 (4) and 00:13:163 (4) to 00:13:322 (5) have an equal distance - 00:23:535 (2,3,4,5) - Probably isn't a very good idea to add streams at the Hard diff right after the 2.09 stars Normal diff even if the distance snap used for this stream is small, since not only it would make the difficulty gap between these two diffs a bit too far, but so is the playability. Would be better to settle with the 1/4 repeated slider instead since it is easier to follow because the density of the objects from 00:14:599 (2) ~ 00:23:376 (1) is kinda low
Or, stacking this streams instead of spacing it with the low distance snap would be better as well since the distance snap you were using for this stream is almost the same as these 1/2 notes -> 00:33:429 (3,4,5) which might make the players mistaking them as the triple clicks instead of 1/2 notes
But using a 1/4 repeated slider still a better option in my opinion owob - 00:41:727 (1) - Add finish at the head of this slider please~!
- 00:43:961 (5,6,7,8) - Same as 00:23:535 (2,3,4,5)
- 00:54:971 (2) - The reversed part of this slider doesn't get stacked properly with the head of 00:56:088 (3)
- 00:59:599 (1) - Add finish at the head of this slider please~!
- 00:59:599 (1) - Their spacing is slightly different
Please fix it - 01:01:195 (4) - Add whistle at the head of this slider please, to make it consistent with 01:02:471 (3)
- 01:04:705 (1) - Add finish at the head of this slider please~!
- 01:17:631 (1) - Lower down the volume of this spinner into 30% ~ 40% would be nice, since having a 85% spinner at the end of the song is pretty loud in my opinion
Insane
- 00:13:641 (10) - Add NC here and remove the one at 00:13:961 (1)
- 00:23:535 (2) - Might be best not to stack it with 00:23:376 (1)
- 00:25:769 (3,4) - Adjust the placement like this?
Because its placement right now makes the distance of 00:25:929 (4) to 00:26:088 (5) is slightly closer than the distance between 00:25:769 (3) to 00:25:929 (4) - 00:35:184 (4) - Adjust the placement of this circle for a little bit by disabling the grid snap to make it properly stacked with the tail of 00:34:227 (2). Or just input this -> x:332 y:289
- 00:38:056 (4) - Missing clap
- 00:40:290 (5) - Add NC here to keep the consistency of 1~5 NC at the previous sections
- 00:40:610 (6) - Missing clap
- 00:41:727 (1) - Add finish at the head of this slider please~!
- 00:45:556 (7) - Add NC here as well~!
- 00:59:599 (1) - Add finish at the head of this slider please~!
- 01:04:705 (1) - ^
- 01:17:551 (1) - Lower down the volume of this spinner into 30% ~ 40% please~!
Kibb's Extra
- 00:02:790 (3,1,2,3) - Their placements are too crowded. Even some pro players might not be able to recognize that there were triple clicks going on at 00:02:950 (1,2,3) since 00:03:030 (2) and 00:03:110 (3) were completely hidden by 00:02:790 (3) . Would be best to adjust their placement instead of leaving them as they were now. How about moving 00:02:790 (3) into x:192 y:281 ?
- 00:05:024 (2) - This note doesn't get stacked properly with the tail of 00:04:227 (3)
Move it to x:258 y:120 in order to fix it - 00:35:503 (2) - Maybe move this slider a bit further away from 00:35:024 (1) ? Since its placement now makes the distance between 00:35:024 (1) and 00:35:503 (2) with 1/1 gap is the same as the distance between 00:34:705 (2) and 00:35:024 (1) with 1/4 gap, which would make the rhythm at this section a little bit confusing. How about moving 00:35:503 (2) to x:264 y:128?
- 00:38:056 (2) - Same ^ How about moving this slider to x:241 y:267 ?
Or make 00:38:056 (2) into a straight slider along the way to give some aesthetical values in it - 00:40:610 (2) - ^ x:163 y:169
- 00:46:514 (1) - In my opinion, this SV change is quite unnecessary, because it kinds of breaking the rhythm excitement at the kiai time. Moreover, you don't even change the SV of 00:51:939 (1) and 01:04:705 (1) with the same rhythm as 00:46:514 (1) . Just saying :p
- 00:56:727 (1) - ^
- 01:17:471 (1) - Move this to x:179 y:146 to make it get stacked properly with 01:16:354 (2) . Cute slider btw <3
Okay that's all~!
Good Luck