DAOKO x Kenshi Yonezu - Uchiage Hanabi [CatchTheBeat]

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ur offset is 2 years early use 70

[cup]
00:59:445 (1) - ctrl g
01:05:070 (1,2) - fix blanket
01:12:570 (1) - move up to avoid overlap
Topic Starter
Ascendance

Fser wrote:

ur offset is 2 years early use 70

[cup]
00:59:445 (1) - ctrl g
01:05:070 (1,2) - fix blanket
01:12:570 (1) - move up to avoid overlap
fixed the offset and the non-meme comment lul

thanks!
Jemzuu
General
  1. 00:17:570 - why not add spinner here until 00:19:132 - for all diffs
  2. add custom combo colours perhaps, i would suggest
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 255,155,255
    Combo2 : 128,255,128
    Combo3 : 255,172,89
    Combo4 : 122,145,250
Fireworks
  1. 00:24:445 (3,4,5) - face them to the left insted
  2. 00:36:007 - why not add here note here since u placed this 00:38:507 (2) -
  3. 00:36:320 (3) - then maybe ctrl g this after
  4. 00:36:945 (4) - this too
  5. 00:37:570 (1) - give mur spacing to this pls
  6. 00:41:320 (5) - personal prefernce but i would suggest this to be a hdash. ctrl g pls ;w;
  7. 00:41:788 (6) - ^
  8. 00:43:820 (6) - ^
  9. 00:45:070 (1) - ^
  10. 00:46:320 (1) - maybe make this hdash as well? move it to 64|352
  11. 00:48:820 (1) - ctrl g?
  12. 00:50:538 (2,3) - ^
  13. 01:06:945 (6) - ^pls
  14. 01:18:820 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - pls make this to jumps instead ;d like 01:14:445 (7,8,9,10) - but with hier spacing maybe
Topic Starter
Ascendance

AJamez wrote:

General
  1. 00:17:570 - why not add spinner here until 00:19:132 - for all diffs I find the silence to be a better fit at the beginning
  2. add custom combo colours perhaps, i would suggest
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 255,155,255
    Combo2 : 128,255,128
    Combo3 : 255,172,89
    Combo4 : 122,145,250
    Nice
Fireworks
  1. 00:24:445 (3,4,5) - face them to the left insted I think it's okay vertically
  2. 00:36:007 - why not add here note here since u placed this 00:38:507 (2) - Ok
  3. 00:36:320 (3) - then maybe ctrl g this after
  4. 00:36:945 (4) - this too
  5. 00:37:570 (1) - give mur spacing to this pls
  6. 00:41:320 (5) - personal prefernce but i would suggest this to be a hdash. ctrl g pls ;w;
  7. 00:41:788 (6) - ^
  8. 00:43:820 (6) - ^
  9. 00:45:070 (1) - ^
  10. 00:46:320 (1) - maybe make this hdash as well? move it to 64|352
  11. 00:48:820 (1) - ctrl g?
  12. 00:50:538 (2,3) - ^
  13. 01:06:945 (6) - ^pls
  14. 01:18:820 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - pls make this to jumps instead ;d like 01:14:445 (7,8,9,10) - but with hier spacing maybe
The rest I declined mostly because I don't want the jumps to be too high / too many hdashes. Just a stylistic thing. Thanks for modding!
Electoz
[Cup]

  1. 00:35:070 (3) - NC?


[Salad]

  1. 00:34:132 (3,1) - Is the only spot where you spaced things big which you didn't do this anywhere else in this calm section (before 00:40:070 - )
  2. 01:17:570 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - No dash at all? Plays very anti-climatic tbh


[Platter]

  1. 00:29:445 (4) - 2 circles instead? Would differentiate this better from 00:27:570 (1,2,3) . Considering that in the highest diff you did 00:29:445 (4,5,6) different from 3 previous sliders, then the similar rhythm idea can be applied here too.
  2. 00:55:070 (1) - ok so why the spinner starts here unlike other diffs helloooooo
  3. 01:19:757 (6) - This beat is nothing and then you added a hyperdash on it?


And like you used a lower volume on the spinner 00:57:257 (1) in the highest diff but then it didn't happen in other diffs also

[Fireworks]

  1. 00:39:601 - Could add a circle here like 00:29:601 (5) .
  2. 00:42:570 (1) - 00:45:070 (1) - 00:47:570 (1) - Was expecting these downbeat stuff to have a dash like what you did in Platter tho
  3. 00:51:320 (1,2) - 00:51:945 (3,4) - Hyperdashes here kinda devalues the emphasis on the build-up 00:53:741 (6,1,2) and it's not like the rhythm here is much different from the rest of the section 00:40:070 - anyways.
  4. 00:53:741 (6,1,2) - Actually isn't this unrankable to begin with cuz the beat snap thing with consecutive hyperdashes
  5. 00:54:601 (4,5) - mmm was expecting a hyperdash here but whatever I guess
  6. 01:14:445 (7,8,9,10) - Spacings should be decreased a bit tho (like 0.1-0.2) cuz the way they are atm is ambiguous on whether it is walkable.
  7. 01:19:757 (9) - Why finishhhhhhhhhhhh


Disagreeing stuff I pointed out above is fine as long as your reason is conceptual enough
mmm if you can get a few more mods then I'll see what I want to do with the set
Topic Starter
Ascendance

Electoz wrote:

[Cup]

  1. 00:35:070 (3) - NC? Oops, nice catch


[Salad]

  1. 00:34:132 (3,1) - Is the only spot where you spaced things big which you didn't do this anywhere else in this calm section (before 00:40:070 - ) Well, 00:34:132 (3,1) - has a higher pitched noise on it that gives it a leadin to the next section
  2. 01:17:570 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - No dash at all? Plays very anti-climatic tbh added distances


[Platter]

  1. 00:29:445 (4) - 2 circles instead? Would differentiate this better from 00:27:570 (1,2,3) . Considering that in the highest diff you did 00:29:445 (4,5,6) different from 3 previous sliders, then the similar rhythm idea can be applied here too. okay!
  2. 00:55:070 (1) - ok so why the spinner starts here unlike other diffs helloooooo o wtf fixed
  3. 01:19:757 (6) - This beat is nothing and then you added a hyperdash on it? im idiot


And like you used a lower volume on the spinner 00:57:257 (1) in the highest diff but then it didn't happen in other diffs also

[Fireworks]

  1. 00:39:601 - Could add a circle here like 00:29:601 (5) . Want to accentuate vocals here more rather than instrumental
  2. 00:42:570 (1) - 00:45:070 (1) - 00:47:570 (1) - Was expecting these downbeat stuff to have a dash like what you did in Platter tho not huge dashes but i increased them
  3. 00:51:320 (1,2) - 00:51:945 (3,4) - Hyperdashes here kinda devalues the emphasis on the build-up 00:53:741 (6,1,2) and it's not like the rhythm here is much different from the rest of the section 00:40:070 - anyways. Imo they have important sounds but I reduced their distance a bit
  4. 00:53:741 (6,1,2) - Actually isn't this unrankable to begin with cuz the beat snap thing with consecutive hyperdashes Nope, cause they aren't consecutive. The head of 00:53:820 - counts as an object, meaning that the hypersnaps are not consecutive.
  5. 00:54:601 (4,5) - mmm was expecting a hyperdash here but whatever I guess I don't think it's strong enough for an hdash ;;
  6. 01:14:445 (7,8,9,10) - Spacings should be decreased a bit tho (like 0.1-0.2) cuz the way they are atm is ambiguous on whether it is walkable. okay~
  7. 01:19:757 (9) - Why finishhhhhhhhhhhh blame alacat ;;


Disagreeing stuff I pointed out above is fine as long as your reason is conceptual enough
mmm if you can get a few more mods then I'll see what I want to do with the set
Thank you~
Monstrata
General

Combo colors?

Fireworks

00:26:632 (3,4) - You don't use this structure in any other diff, just change it to 1/1 for consistency?
00:44:757 (8,9,10) - I think turning this into a repeat slider shape would be much better for the flow between 00:44:445 (7,8,9,10,1) -
00:57:257 (1) - Silence?
01:13:038 (2,3,4) - Reduce this cuz its kinda distant from each other
01:19:757 (9,1) - No need for hyper imo, the note has no sound to be emphasized by the hyper. A normal dash or a walk would be more acceptable.

Platter

00:33:115 (3,4) - If this is intended to be a dash, it isn't D:
00:55:070 (1) - inconsistent spinner start tho
00:57:257 (1) - Silence?
01:19:208 (4,5) - Even the top diff doesn't have an hdash between here. I'd suggest making them consistent

Salad

00:27:490 (1) - A curve would be nice here, even though it's kind of a calmer section
00:49:990 (1) - Kind of hard to catch at this angle, either angle it more or curve the slider to make it an easier dash
00:57:490 (1) - Silence the spinner?
01:02:490 (1,2,3) - Distance is kind of high... better to reduce here
01:13:115 (2,3) - A bit cramped here xdd

Cup

00:28:740 (2,3) - Seems a bit close together, moving them both to x:366 and then 00:29:365 (3) - more to the left would be nicer
00:32:490 (1) - Curve is a bit weird, you could probably make this more circular
00:35:070 (3) - forgot an NC here
00:53:115 (2,3) - More distance between here for the downbeat?
00:57:490 (1) - Silence this one?
00:59:365 (1,1) - Again, more distance for the downbeat

[]

Good song. Someone should map this for standard!
Topic Starter
Ascendance

Monstrata wrote:

General

Combo colors? Oops I forgot to add them to a diff, fixed it

Fireworks

00:26:632 (3,4) - You don't use this structure in any other diff, just change it to 1/1 for consistency? sure
00:44:757 (8,9,10) - I think turning this into a repeat slider shape would be much better for the flow between 00:44:445 (7,8,9,10,1) - Oh nice, changed
00:57:257 (1) - Silence? did
01:13:038 (2,3,4) - Reduce this cuz its kinda distant from each other err I don't think it's that bad
01:19:757 (9,1) - No need for hyper imo, the note has no sound to be emphasized by the hyper. A normal dash or a walk would be more acceptable. you right

Platter

00:33:115 (3,4) - If this is intended to be a dash, it isn't D: unintended anyways, no other sounds had it like this :D
00:55:070 (1) - inconsistent spinner start tho fix
00:57:257 (1) - Silence? yep
01:19:208 (4,5) - Even the top diff doesn't have an hdash between here. I'd suggest making them consistent The top diff has an hdash here now B)

Salad

00:27:490 (1) - A curve would be nice here, even though it's kind of a calmer section okok
00:49:990 (1) - Kind of hard to catch at this angle, either angle it more or curve the slider to make it an easier dash agreed
00:57:490 (1) - Silence the spinner? yeaaaaaaa
01:02:490 (1,2,3) - Distance is kind of high... better to reduce here oh wtf fixed
01:13:115 (2,3) - A bit cramped here xdd consistent with my other structure so imo it's ok

Cup

00:28:740 (2,3) - Seems a bit close together, moving them both to x:366 and then 00:29:365 (3) - more to the left would be nicer sure
00:32:490 (1) - Curve is a bit weird, you could probably make this more circular aes
00:35:070 (3) - forgot an NC here applied with electoz' mod
00:53:115 (2,3) - More distance between here for the downbeat? sure
00:57:490 (1) - Silence this one? yes
00:59:365 (1,1) - Again, more distance for the downbeat agree

[]

Good song. Someone should map this for standard!
Thank you!
Sc4v4ng3r
Monstrata
Btw have you watched the movie yet Ascendance? It's really good from what I heard!
Topic Starter
Ascendance

Monstrata wrote:

Btw have you watched the movie yet Ascendance? It's really good from what I heard!
I have not, is there somewhere I can watch it in HD
Electoz
Metadata is on the map description.
In addition from my mod, we also went through a recheck and fixed combo colours in Cup + a few NCs in Platter and Fireworks
Bubbled!
Topic Starter
Ascendance
Thanks a lot!
Monstrata
No more tiers! I can finally qualify maps again?!.... ^__^
Topic Starter
Ascendance
Purple name! Thanks elite mapper
semaphore
kill me lol
BoberOfDarkness
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