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posted

L i d a N wrote:

Hey :)

[General]
  1. Why does the video start later than the song? :S Feels a bit strange when playing Kiiwa's Hard (Only diff where the part without the video is mapped)
i'm trying to dealing with this problem. T.T

[Insane]
  1. 00:35:795 (4,5) - Add whistle on starti add a whistle on end of 5
  2. 00:56:940 (4) - Spacing
fixed

[Kiiwa's Hard]Waiting for Kiiwa's anwser...
  1. 00:15:378 (2) - End on 00:16:107 (You'll have to change the beat snap divisor to 1/4) or 00:16:211. (First one sounds better imo)
  2. I don't like those stange sliders, but I guess they're okay.
:(

[Easy]
  1. Nice Diff, didn't find anything.


Nice map :3 if you give a star i will be so happy :)
Thanks a lot ~
posted

L i d a N wrote:

I don't like those stange sliders, but I guess they're okay.

L i d a N wrote:

I don't like those stange sliders, but I guess they're okay.

L i d a N wrote:

I don't like those stange sliders, but I guess they're okay.
..OTZ
posted
hi ~ S h i o n~ :)

我的一些建议~
做为慢歌节奏下的很不错了~继续努力~


[Insane]

00:27:253 (6) - 删除这个,空着的比较好听。
00:48:711 (6) - 建议这个改1/2。
01:16:628 (1,2,3) - 保持一致的距离。
01:24:128 (1) - 建议多加几条绿线,渐渐降低声音效果会很好。


[Kiiwa's Hard]

AR+1
00:15:378 (2) - 拉到白线节奏会更好些。
00:24:128 (4) - 建议加个折返。
00:32:045 - 这里加个slider怎么样?跟着VOCAL。
00:58:295 (2) - 这个形状改改吧,不建议这么画slider。
01:02:045 (1,2,3,4) - 这个间距改改。
01:24:128 (1) - 删除whistle,跟上面一样,多加几条绿线,渐渐降低声音效果会很好。


[Easy]

00:48:503 (5) - 建议加个折返。
00:59:961 (4) - 这里加NC 把后面1的COMBO删掉。
01:24:544 (1) - 建议多加几条绿线,渐渐降低声音效果会很好。


不错的歌~
good luck~ ;)
posted

Kawayi Rika wrote:

hi ~ S h i o n~ :)

我的一些建议~
做为慢歌节奏下的很不错了~继续努力~


[Insane]

00:27:253 (6) - 删除这个,空着的比较好听。 ok
00:48:711 (6) - 建议这个改1/2。 ok
01:16:628 (1,2,3) - 保持一致的距离。 ok
01:24:128 (1) - 建议多加几条绿线,渐渐降低声音效果会很好。 这里时间很短 于是就降了最后一个finish~


[Kiiwa's Hard] i wil tell Kiiwa =.=

AR+1
00:15:378 (2) - 拉到白线节奏会更好些。
00:24:128 (4) - 建议加个折返。
00:32:045 - 这里加个slider怎么样?跟着VOCAL。
00:58:295 (2) - 这个形状改改吧,不建议这么画slider。
01:02:045 (1,2,3,4) - 这个间距改改。
01:24:128 (1) - 删除whistle,跟上面一样,多加几条绿线,渐渐降低声音效果会很好。


[Easy]

00:48:503 (5) - 建议加个折返。no
00:59:961 (4) - 这里加NC 把后面1的COMBO删掉。 ok
01:24:544 (1) - 建议多加几条绿线,渐渐降低声音效果会很好。


不错的歌~
good luck~ ;)
谢谢~~
posted
Oh hai

Green=Bobo's post

General

The video is bugged. Try fixing this by redownloading the vid or get a different vid instead.

Normal

00:22:045 (5) - Ugly slider
00:28:294 (3) - should curve out more, new combo
00:54:128 (1) - This combo travels under the previous one
01:15:378 (5) - another ugly slider

Hard


00:02:045 (3) - ugly slider
00:03:711 (1) - Should be moved so it doesn't start to go off the screen
00:06:420 (5) - ugly slider
00:15:378 (2) - ^
00:29:961 (1) - Remove new combo
00:49:545 (1) - Ugly slider
00:55:795 (1,1,1) - This part is just bunched up. Move it somewhere
00:59:545 (2) - These jumps are too hard for the song since the pace of this slow song.
01:01:211 (3) - another ugly slider
01:02:878 (1) - ugly combo
01:12:878 (2) - Slider going offscreen. Move it

Insane

00:19:128 (3,4,5) - Ugly sliders
00:22:045 (2) - New combo should start here
00:33:086 (4) - Another ugly slider
00:34:545 (2) - New combo should start here
00:39:128 (3,4) - ugly slider
00:44:753 (7) - ^
01:10:378 (3) - Changing this to a 1/3 snap divisor would sound better
01:23:295 (3) - Ugly slider
01:20:795 (4) - Sudden weird jump

This is about it.
posted

Copter-kun wrote:

Oh hai

Green=Bobo's post

General

The video is bugged. Try fixing this by redownloading the vid or get a different vid instead. ok

Normal

00:22:045 (5) - Ugly slider :x
00:28:294 (3) - should curve out more, new combo ok
00:54:128 (1) - This combo travels under the previous onei think it is ok
01:15:378 (5) - another ugly slider :x

Hard Let's wait Kiiwa's answer


00:02:045 (3) - ugly slider
00:03:711 (1) - Should be moved so it doesn't start to go off the screen
00:06:420 (5) - ugly slider
00:15:378 (2) - ^
00:29:961 (1) - Remove new combo
00:49:545 (1) - Ugly slider
00:55:795 (1,1,1) - This part is just bunched up. Move it somewhere
00:59:545 (2) - These jumps are too hard for the song since the pace of this slow song.
01:01:211 (3) - another ugly slider
01:02:878 (1) - ugly combo
01:12:878 (2) - Slider going offscreen. Move it

Insane

00:19:128 (3,4,5) - Ugly sliders
00:22:045 (2) - New combo should start here ok
00:33:086 (4) - Another ugly slider
00:34:545 (2) - New combo should start here ok
00:39:128 (3,4) - ugly slider
00:44:753 (7) - ^
01:10:378 (3) - Changing this to a 1/3 snap divisor would sound betterit is a 1/3 snap
01:23:295 (3) - Ugly slider
01:20:795 (4) - Sudden weird jump

This is about it.
some new combos fixed in my diff.
Thanks ~
posted
[Normal]
00:22:045 (5) - 可以试着花点心思搞一个这样的slider.... 另外最好不要有和上一个slider重叠的部分


[Kiiwa's Hard]
00:42:878 (1) - 这样放会比较好听...



[Insane]
00:43:086 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 不应该1-5对称 用1-6对称
00:52:461 (8) - 左移1格 上移2格
01:10:378 (3) - 这种很短的slider尽量直 中间一个点可以试着稍微偏移下 别这样偏移太过..
-------------------------------------------------
就这点了..
加油@.@
posted

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Normal]
00:22:045 (5) - 可以试着花点心思搞一个这样的slider.... 另外最好不要有和上一个slider重叠的部分 fixed


[Kiiwa's Hard]
00:42:878 (1) - 这样放会比较好听... 这样和2个slider其实是一样的= = 都好听哈:)



[Insane]
00:43:086 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 不应该1-5对称 用1-6对称 no
00:52:461 (8) - 左移1格 上移2格 ye, fixed
01:10:378 (3) - 这种很短的slider尽量直 中间一个点可以试着稍微偏移下 别这样偏移太过.. ok , fixed
-------------------------------------------------
就这点了..
加油@.@
谢谢~~ :)
posted
Hey there :3 Here's just a bunch of suggestions on hitsounds, hope you'll find some of them useful.
HF = hitfinish, B = beginning, E = End
  1. [Normal]:
    00:17:045 (5) - whistle B, hitfinish E (volumed reduced to 20% only for this note)
    00:22:045 (5) - whistle, E
    00:26:628 (1) - whistle, B
    00:27:461 (2) - clap
    00:34:128 (5) - ^
    00:37:461 (4) - ^
    00:38:295 (5) - whistle
    00:40:795 (1) - clap
    00:44:128 (3) - ^
    00:47:461 (3) - ^
    01:03:711 (3) - HF, E
    01:07:045 (3) - clap B, HF E
    01:10:378 (2) - whistle
  2. [Kiiwa's Hard]:
    So many overlooping sliders, this diff gonna be unbearable being played with hidden =\

    00:26:628 (3) - what about making this bit S:C1 and put clap B
    00:27:461 (1) - HF, B
    00:28:711 (2) - whistle
    00:34:128 (1) - HF, B
    00:40:795 (2) - ^
    00:43:503 (2) - ^
    00:47:461 (2) - ^
    00:49:545 (1) - HF, E
    00:54:128 (1) - I'd swap it to soft-finish
  3. [Insane]:
    01:22:045 (1,2,3,4,5) - doesn't look nice, what if place it like this?


Aaaand there goes the staww.
posted
Hello!

General:
I understand that Kiiwa's Hard is a guest difficulty,but since it's mapped from the beginning of the song,I HIGHLY suggest to you to map your other 2 diffs from the beginning too,because different map starts look bad :/

Normal:
00:44:128 - put this circle a bit lower for symmetry
01:24:545 - better to finish this spinner in : - 01:27:253

Kiiwa's Hard:
Put Audio Lead-in for 1,5 seconds..3 is too much.
00:02:045 - I really think that you can make this slider look MUCH better
00:06:420 - ^
00:15:378 - ^
00:49:545 - ^
00:52:045 - ^
01:01:211 - ^
01:24:545 - maybe you should end this spinner in : - 01:27:253

Insane:
HP Drain 7 is pretty high for such a calm song..6 is better
Better to put Circle Size between Large and Normal

That is all!
posted
Hi! It's me ... hope I can help you somewhat lol :P

General
The video offset is way off ... I suggest putting it at 7900, it works well for me :D (PS. Are these Hatsuyuki's fansubs? The karaoke looks familiar haha XD)
Might as well add "BL" into the tags if you have "boys love" :P
Maybe add "ED" into tags since you have "ending"?
Are you sure your video is full? It seems like it starts really randomly IMO
Consider starting each difficulty in the same place

Normal
Why are the hitsounds so quiet? :( Pump 'em up to 50% at least? D:
Maybe do AR-1?
00:14:545 (end of 1) - Add whistle?
00:27:461 (2) - Add finish here maybe 40% volume
00:28:294 (1) - Whistle
00:31:211 - Consider mapping like this? I think it flows better (Look at timeline)

00:34:128 (4,5,1) - Whistle
00:40:795 (1,2) - Whistle on (1) and beginning of (2), finish at 30% on end of (2)
00:44:128 (3,4) - Maybe do the same as above?
00:56:628 (5) - Think this would play better as a half beat repeating slider starting at 00:56:420 (repeats 2 or 3 times)
01:00:795 (end of 3) - Don't really think finish fits here
01:03:711 (end of 3) - This, on the other hand, is practically BEGGING for a finish

Kiiwa's hard
00:11:420 (end of 2) - Consider changing to finish
00:15:378 (2) - Extend until 00:16:211?
00:19:961 (3,4) - I would delete (3), put (4) to where (3) was and extend for half beat until it ends at 00:20:795 (same as before). I think this flows much better
00:22:461 (2) - Move this, it looks ugly with the overlap and the spacing is kind of weird. Consider this placement of (2 - 4):


00:27:461 (1) - Change whistle to finish
00:55:795 (1,1,1) - I found this really confusing. The first slider has its tracks covered by the previous note so I thought it was just a circle. Also the spacing going from the second to third is really confusing AND the third slows down. Even if you don't remap this entirely that's fine but I would really recommend removing the random slowdown on the third slider >_<
00:57:461 - I don't really think fast slider speed fits here, but meh
00:58:295 (2) - Clap?
01:24:128 (1) - End at 01:27:461 like in Normal diff?

Insane
00:27:461 (1) - Finish
00:28:920 (3) - Move 2 grid left and 1 grid down (level 3) so it's consistent with earlier spacing
00:40:794 (1,2,3) - Add finish on beginning of (1, 2) and 3? Maybe a bit quieter though (like 35% ish)
00:43:295 (2) - Whistle
00:56:906 (4,5) - I would lessen the volume here or else it sounds kind of strange, since the music basically stops at this part. Maybe lower to 30% ish?

Interesting song. I meant to start watching the anime but somehow never did lol. Good luck :)
posted
[Normal]
00:47:878 (4) - This would look better straight, looking to the right.

But good job!
[Kiiwa's Hard]
00:01:836 (2) - Make this not overlap
00:02:045 (3) - Doesn't look nice. At all.
00:06:420 (5) - WHAT IS THIS
00:08:711 (2) - Try to not overlap
00:15:378 (2) - Try not to loop. at this SV it's bad.
00:22:461 (2) - You can make this not overlap.

00:55:795 (1) - Unrankable here, as the hitbursts don't let you see if it's a slider or a circle. I saw it as a circle, which is WRONG.
And the combos you do at these parts seem unnecessary.

This diff needs the most work, but it's still fine.
[Insane]
01:02:461 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hard to read that it's 1/2
01:09:128 (1) - lol remove NC

But it's good! I thought some of the jumps were strange, but they play nice.
posted
Mod request via our queue

Hi S h i o n ~
Miya assigned me to mod this map

[General]
-> Remove the extra space between "ending" and "Kiiwa" in tags
-> Also in tags, the osu! searcher doesn't support searching 2 letters word, so idk if "bl" is needed. But if you want to add it just go ahead~
-> Try using silver sliderborder? Your combocolors remind me of Almagest's combocolors, and that map looks awesome with silver sliderborder :3
-> Offset sounds late for me (not too sure though), 791 plays better for me ><
-> I suggest to end the last spinner on 01:26:940 as in Kiiwa's Hard

[Normal]
00:17:045 (5) - Add whistle at the start?
00:15:378 (2) - Change into a repeating 1/2 slider?
00:31:628 (1) - This isn't distance snapped? o.o - Plays well, but I don't like how it touches 00:29:961 (2). Maybe place like this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156393 ?
00:34:961 (6) - Add whistle for hitsound consistency?
00:39:128 (1) - You can form a triangle between (5,6,1) like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156394
00:53:295 (3) - The curve is forced imo, if you want flow you can map like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156395
00:56:211 (x) - Add note here?
01:07:878 (4) - Try this slider code :
288,152,67878,2,0,B|336:172|356:220|336:276|288:292,1,180,0|4


[Kiiwa's Hard]
00:01:836 (2) - I feel placing this beneath (1)'s path is weird, this plays better imo : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156401
00:15:378 (2) - I'd prefer adding a repeat here and adjust (3), but current one is fine too
00:20:170 (4) - Uh... Weird slider curving technique >< , btw the second-to-last waypoint should be few grids up and right
00:22:461 (2) - I'd rather place it perfectly beneath (1)'s path rather than in an awkward position like this ><
00:24:753 (x) - Add note? Maybe a silent note here
00:32:461 (1) - Will be tricky for flashlight players orz, people will think this note is placed far away from the previous note orz
00:35:794 (2) - I'm sure this could be curved neater ><
00:48:711 (3) - I don't like the path overlap personally, change (3)'s direction like this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156404 will play better imo
00:58:295 (2) - Clap in the slider's start?
01:12:461 (1,2) - This jump is weird imo, maybe try use this jump : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156407

[Insane]
-> Try AR8?
00:23:920 (4) - Try to place few grids left for flow
00:33:086 (4,5,6) - This stack looks weird in play mode imo
00:43:294 (2) - Move the whistle here instead of (4) ?
00:59:128 (5) - Clap on slider's end?
00:59:544 (6) - If you added clap, remove whistle here?
01:10:794 (4) - Unexpected jump ><

..That's it :3
Good luck with this map ~
posted
Love this song~x3
But there're some part that bothering me.

[Normal]

01:01:211 (3) - Remove Finish

[Kiiwa's Hard]

00:15:378 (2) - Make it longer to 00:16:211
00:52:045 (2) - Make it longer to 00:52:461
00:56:628 (1) - Bad spacing

[Insane]

I think it's good enough :D

This is my first mod. Sorry if it's ugly >.<
Hope useful :D
posted
Mod Request :P
General:
In your difficulties I see some inherited time wnsnapped please check this

Normal:
Beat Snap Divisor 1/2
Circle Size -1
HP Drain +1
Overall difficulty +1
00:41:420 (2): Move this slider to 00:41:211.This slider finish in 00:42:045
00:55:795 (4): The slider finish in 00:56:211
00:56:628 (5): Delete this kick slider and add 2 circles
First circle Start here
Second circle in 00:57:045

Kiiwa's Hard:
Be careful with the overlapping
Looks fine but some sliders could be better

Insane:
Approach Rate+1
Circle Size -1
01:09:128 (1): Remove New Combo

Well, That's all.
Good Luck with your beatmap ;)
posted

Route 99 wrote:

Hey there :3 Here's just a bunch of suggestions on hitsounds, hope you'll find some of them useful.
HF = hitfinish, B = beginning, E = End
  1. [Normal]:
    00:17:045 (5) - whistle B, hitfinish E (volumed reduced to 20% only for this note)
    00:22:045 (5) - whistle, E
    00:26:628 (1) - whistle, B
    00:27:461 (2) - clap
    00:34:128 (5) - ^
    00:37:461 (4) - ^
    00:38:295 (5) - whistle
    00:40:795 (1) - clap
    00:44:128 (3) - ^
    00:47:461 (3) - ^
    01:03:711 (3) - HF, E
    01:07:045 (3) - clap B, HF E
    01:10:378 (2) - whistle
    I changed some hitsounds~
  2. [Kiiwa's Hard]:
    So many overlooping sliders, this diff gonna be unbearable being played with hidden =\

    00:26:628 (3) - what about making this bit S:C1 and put clap B
    00:27:461 (1) - HF, B
    00:28:711 (2) - whistle
    00:34:128 (1) - HF, B
    00:40:795 (2) - ^
    00:43:503 (2) - ^
    00:47:461 (2) - ^
    00:49:545 (1) - HF, E
    00:54:128 (1) - I'd swap it to soft-finish
  3. [Insane]:
    01:22:045 (1,2,3,4,5) - doesn't look nice, what if place it like this?
pretty good

Aaaand there goes the staww. :)
Thanks~

Giorgos wrote:

Hello!

General:
I understand that Kiiwa's Hard is a guest difficulty,but since it's mapped from the beginning of the song,I HIGHLY suggest to you to map your other 2 diffs from the beginning too,because different map starts look bad :/ I won't

Normal:
00:44:128 - put this circle a bit lower for symmetry no
01:24:545 - better to finish this spinner in : - 01:27:253 01:27:461 is fine to me

Kiiwa's Hard:
Put Audio Lead-in for 1,5 seconds..3 is too much.
00:02:045 - I really think that you can make this slider look MUCH better
00:06:420 - ^
00:15:378 - ^
00:49:545 - ^
00:52:045 - ^
01:01:211 - ^
01:24:545 - maybe you should end this spinner in : - 01:27:253

Insane:
HP Drain 7 is pretty high for such a calm song..6 is better yes,fixed
Better to put Circle Size between Large and Normal no

That is all!
Thanks~
posted

EvianBubble wrote:

Hi! It's me ... hope I can help you somewhat lol :P

General
The video offset is way off ... I suggest putting it at 7900, it works well for me :D (PS. Are these Hatsuyuki's fansubs? The karaoke looks familiar haha XD)The video offset is ok imo
Might as well add "BL" into the tags if you have "boys love" :PAs Nivalis says,only 2-letter words can be searched as a tag.
Maybe add "ED" into tags since you have "ending"? ^
Are you sure your video is full? It seems like it starts really randomly IMO be about to change it
Consider starting each difficulty in the same place ok

Normal
Why are the hitsounds so quiet? :( Pump 'em up to 50% at least? D: Nah
Maybe do AR-1? ok
00:14:545 (end of 1) - Add whistle? ok
00:27:461 (2) - Add finish here maybe 40% volumeno
00:28:294 (1) - Whistleno
00:31:211 - Consider mapping like this? I think it flows better (Look at timeline)sorry ,no
00:34:128 (4,5,1) - Whistle ok
00:40:795 (1,2) - Whistle on (1) and beginning of (2), finish at 30% on end of (2) ok with the finish
00:44:128 (3,4) - Maybe do the same as above? no, here vocal is quite
00:56:628 (5) - Think this would play better as a half beat repeating slider starting at 00:56:420 (repeats 2 or 3 times)no
01:00:795 (end of 3) - Don't really think finish fits here yes
01:03:711 (end of 3) - This, on the other hand, is practically BEGGING for a finish yes!

Kiiwa's hard
00:11:420 (end of 2) - Consider changing to finish
00:15:378 (2) - Extend until 00:16:211?
00:19:961 (3,4) - I would delete (3), put (4) to where (3) was and extend for half beat until it ends at 00:20:795 (same as before). I think this flows much better
00:22:461 (2) - Move this, it looks ugly with the overlap and the spacing is kind of weird. Consider this placement of (2 - 4):
00:27:461 (1) - Change whistle to finish
00:55:795 (1,1,1) - I found this really confusing. The first slider has its tracks covered by the previous note so I thought it was just a circle. Also the spacing going from the second to third is really confusing AND the third slows down. Even if you don't remap this entirely that's fine but I would really recommend removing the random slowdown on the third slider >_<
00:57:461 - I don't really think fast slider speed fits here, but meh
00:58:295 (2) - Clap?
01:24:128 (1) - End at 01:27:461 like in Normal diff?

Insane
00:27:461 (1) - Finishok
00:28:920 (3) - Move 2 grid left and 1 grid down (level 3) so it's consistent with earlier spacingok
00:40:794 (1,2,3) - Add finish on beginning of (1, 2) and 3? Maybe a bit quieter though (like 35% ish)no
00:43:295 (2) - Whistleok
00:56:906 (4,5) - I would lessen the volume here or else it sounds kind of strange, since the music basically stops at this part. Maybe lower to 30% ish? yes , gradually

Interesting song. I meant to start watching the anime but somehow never did lol. Good luck :)
Thank you~

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Normal]
00:47:878 (4) - This would look better straight, looking to the right.Nah

But good job!
[Kiiwa's Hard]
00:01:836 (2) - Make this not overlap
00:02:045 (3) - Doesn't look nice. At all.
00:06:420 (5) - WHAT IS THIS
00:08:711 (2) - Try to not overlap
00:15:378 (2) - Try not to loop. at this SV it's bad.
00:22:461 (2) - You can make this not overlap.

00:55:795 (1) - Unrankable here, as the hitbursts don't let you see if it's a slider or a circle. I saw it as a circle, which is WRONG.
And the combos you do at these parts seem unnecessary.

This diff needs the most work, but it's still fine.
[Insane]
01:02:461 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hard to read that it's 1/2 dont think so :(
01:09:128 (1) - lol remove NC sure

But it's good! I thought some of the jumps were strange, but they play nice. ;)
Thanks ~
posted

Nivalis wrote:

Mod request via our queue

Hi S h i o n ~
Miya assigned me to mod this map

[General]
-> Remove the extra space between "ending" and "Kiiwa" in tags sure
-> Also in tags, the osu! searcher doesn't support searching 2 letters word, so idk if "bl" is needed. But if you want to add it just go ahead~ yes
-> Try using silver sliderborder? Your combocolors remind me of Almagest's combocolors, and that map looks awesome with silver sliderborder :3 Good idea.I will try ?
-> Offset sounds late for me (not too sure though), 791 plays better for me >< but fine to me ;)
-> I suggest to end the last spinner on 01:26:940 as in Kiiwa's Hard yes,i think so

[Normal]
00:17:045 (5) - Add whistle at the start?Nah
00:15:378 (2) - Change into a repeating 1/2 slider?Nah
00:31:628 (1) - This isn't distance snapped? o.o - Plays well, but I don't like how it touches 00:29:961 (2). Maybe place like this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156393 ?i snap it =.=
00:34:961 (6) - Add whistle for hitsound consistency?ok
00:39:128 (1) - You can form a triangle between (5,6,1) like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156394Nah
00:53:295 (3) - The curve is forced imo, if you want flow you can map like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156395you're right
00:56:211 (x) - Add note here?no
01:07:878 (4) - Try this slider code :How to use this ...?


[Kiiwa's Hard]
00:01:836 (2) - I feel placing this beneath (1)'s path is weird, this plays better imo : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156401
00:15:378 (2) - I'd prefer adding a repeat here and adjust (3), but current one is fine too
00:20:170 (4) - Uh... Weird slider curving technique >< , btw the second-to-last waypoint should be few grids up and right
00:22:461 (2) - I'd rather place it perfectly beneath (1)'s path rather than in an awkward position like this ><
00:24:753 (x) - Add note? Maybe a silent note here
00:32:461 (1) - Will be tricky for flashlight players orz, people will think this note is placed far away from the previous note orz
00:35:794 (2) - I'm sure this could be curved neater ><
00:48:711 (3) - I don't like the path overlap personally, change (3)'s direction like this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156404 will play better imo
00:58:295 (2) - Clap in the slider's start?
01:12:461 (1,2) - This jump is weird imo, maybe try use this jump : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156407

[Insane]
-> Try AR8?Hesitating for that
00:23:920 (4) - Try to place few grids left for flowok
00:33:086 (4,5,6) - This stack looks weird in play mode imoyes,but i can't find other way...
00:43:294 (2) - Move the whistle here instead of (4) ?fixed
00:59:128 (5) - Clap on slider's end?yes,sounds great and vol.60%
00:59:544 (6) - If you added clap, remove whistle here?sure
01:10:794 (4) - Unexpected jump >< :)

..That's it :3
Good luck with this map ~

Thanks~

M a n a wrote:

Love this song~x3
But there're some part that bothering me.

[Normal]

01:01:211 (3) - Remove Finishfixed

[Kiiwa's Hard]

00:15:378 (2) - Make it longer to 00:16:211
00:52:045 (2) - Make it longer to 00:52:461
00:56:628 (1) - Bad spacing

[Insane]

I think it's good enough :D

This is my first mod. Sorry if it's ugly >.<
Hope useful :D
Thanks~~

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Mod Request :P
General:
In your difficulties I see some inherited time wnsnapped please check this

Normal:
Beat Snap Divisor 1/2
Circle Size -1
HP Drain +1
Overall difficulty +1 If someone else thinks so,I will do that
00:41:420 (2): Move this slider to 00:41:211.This slider finish in 00:42:045 Nah
00:55:795 (4): The slider finish in 00:56:211Nah
00:56:628 (5): Delete this kick slider and add 2 circles Nah
First circle Start here
Second circle in 00:57:045Nah

Kiiwa's Hard:
Be careful with the overlapping
Looks fine but some sliders could be better

Insane:
Approach Rate+1
Circle Size -1
01:09:128 (1): Remove New Combosure...

Well, That's all.
Good Luck with your beatmap ;)[/color]
Thanks!~
posted
hi- :)

All suggestions

[General]

  1. Tags: "eme" add


[Normal]

  1. AR+1
  2. 00:49:128 (x) - circle add
  3. 01:16:628 (1) - Confuses the novice :( ( Use slider 2 pieces)
  4. 01:18:295 (3) - slider remove. 01:18:295 (x) AND 01:18:711 (x) - circle add


[Kiiwa's Hard]

  1. Song Setup > Audio > Music Track > Lead-in
  2. AR+1. OD+1
  3. 00:15:378 (2) - 00:16:211 prolong(end)
  4. 00:32:045 (x) - circle add
  5. 00:35:378 (x) - ^
  6. 01:13:711 (x) - ^


[Insane]

  1. fine~


Good map!!!!!!
posted

-Gamu- wrote:

hi- :)

All suggestions

[General]

  1. Tags: "eme" add
what's that ? a music company ?

[Normal]

  1. AR+1no...i've just added 1 T.T
  2. 00:49:128 (x) - circle addno
  3. 01:16:628 (1) - Confuses the novice :( ( Use slider 2 pieces)no
  4. 01:18:295 (3) - slider remove. 01:18:295 (x) AND 01:18:711 (x) - circle add
no
i don't wanna add or remove notes/sliders in this diff .sorry

[Kiiwa's Hard]

  1. Song Setup > Audio > Music Track > Lead-in
  2. AR+1. OD+1
  3. 00:15:378 (2) - 00:16:211 prolong(end)
  4. 00:32:045 (x) - circle add
  5. 00:35:378 (x) - ^
  6. 01:13:711 (x) - ^


[Insane]

  1. fine~


Good map!!!!!!
Thanks~~
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