Skycreeper's Kantan
Some of the prioritization of the notes seem odd, some of the main beats missing and some seemingly added on. The difficulty seems really incoherent and the pattern/rhythm choice seems inconsistent.
00:02:656 - shouldn't be left out I must observe, the 2 beat 00:03:301 (3,4) seems out of place
00:05:237 (5,6,7,8) - rather than a 4 beat pattern here, remove 00:05:882 (6,8) and add a beat at 00:07:817 to be more concise and a more evenly spread out rhythm in regards to the song
00:13:624 (14) - would be better at 00:12:979
00:18:785 (19) - would be better at 00:18:140 where it is closer to the peak of that portion of that song
00:23:624 (24,25,26) - please try not to use such snapping in Kantan, having them placed on the white lines would do fine, starting from 00:23:301
00:30:398 (31) - change to k? Diversify the beat, and it's also a higher pitch to 00:31:043 (32)
00:32:334 (33,34,35,36) - very odd gaps, firstly the change to k at 00:32:979 (34) seems off already. If it was placed at 00:33:624 it would seem better, but then you would need something at 00:34:914 - the object at 00:35:559 (36) would then have to be moved to 00:36:205
00:38:785 (39,40,41,42) - this 4 object pattern is again not really coinciding with the song, also the beat at 00:41:366 is really strong but now there is nothing there
00:46:527 (47) - notes like this change it to k? Highest tone/pitch
00:49:108 (49) - also higher tone than 00:47:817 (48) but they are d and k respectively
00:54:592 (54,55) - please do not use such off-beat rhythms when the song also has strong rhythm lines on the white lines like 00:54:914
00:59:766 (59,60) - ^
I really think a lot needs to be overhauled for the difficulty to be more proper at the moment
FDJv's Muzukashii
00:02:979 (8) - change to d? Same pitch as 00:03:624 (10)
00:10:398 (26,27,28,29) - why the sudden alternatiuon of the colour to pitch with the kats on lower pitch and dons on higher pitch though?
00:11:850 (30,31) - the sudden change to off beats breaks the structure of the patterns and is out of place, just keep what you did before or stick to red/white lines
00:23:140 (61) - change to k? Pitch increase here
00:31:043 (76,77,78,79) - likewise here the higher pitch again goes towards dons and vice versa when it was usually the other way around for the other parts. 00:32:334 (80,81) - would also seem more like 00:31:688 (78) - rather than following the rest in terms of colour (k/d) use
00:37:495 (94) - d would be better, with differentiation to 00:38:140 (95) which is a higher tone, also how 00:37:173 (93) pitch decreases downwards to 00:37:495 (94)
00:44:269 (110,111,112,113) - comparing to 00:33:946 (84,85,86,87) - 00:13:301 (33,34,35,36) - 00:02:979 (8,9,10,11) - they are all different, and there isn't really any reason as to why, it is really inconsistent in that aspect, it looks very random right now
00:53:463 (136,137,138) - k k k doesn't seem really fitting to the song here with the ascending pitch of the song, even 00:58:613 (150,151,152) - has a change in the pattern
Good Luck
Some of the prioritization of the notes seem odd, some of the main beats missing and some seemingly added on. The difficulty seems really incoherent and the pattern/rhythm choice seems inconsistent.
00:02:656 - shouldn't be left out I must observe, the 2 beat 00:03:301 (3,4) seems out of place
00:05:237 (5,6,7,8) - rather than a 4 beat pattern here, remove 00:05:882 (6,8) and add a beat at 00:07:817 to be more concise and a more evenly spread out rhythm in regards to the song
00:13:624 (14) - would be better at 00:12:979
00:18:785 (19) - would be better at 00:18:140 where it is closer to the peak of that portion of that song
00:23:624 (24,25,26) - please try not to use such snapping in Kantan, having them placed on the white lines would do fine, starting from 00:23:301
00:30:398 (31) - change to k? Diversify the beat, and it's also a higher pitch to 00:31:043 (32)
00:32:334 (33,34,35,36) - very odd gaps, firstly the change to k at 00:32:979 (34) seems off already. If it was placed at 00:33:624 it would seem better, but then you would need something at 00:34:914 - the object at 00:35:559 (36) would then have to be moved to 00:36:205
00:38:785 (39,40,41,42) - this 4 object pattern is again not really coinciding with the song, also the beat at 00:41:366 is really strong but now there is nothing there
00:46:527 (47) - notes like this change it to k? Highest tone/pitch
00:49:108 (49) - also higher tone than 00:47:817 (48) but they are d and k respectively
00:54:592 (54,55) - please do not use such off-beat rhythms when the song also has strong rhythm lines on the white lines like 00:54:914
00:59:766 (59,60) - ^
I really think a lot needs to be overhauled for the difficulty to be more proper at the moment
FDJv's Muzukashii
00:02:979 (8) - change to d? Same pitch as 00:03:624 (10)
00:10:398 (26,27,28,29) - why the sudden alternatiuon of the colour to pitch with the kats on lower pitch and dons on higher pitch though?
00:11:850 (30,31) - the sudden change to off beats breaks the structure of the patterns and is out of place, just keep what you did before or stick to red/white lines
00:23:140 (61) - change to k? Pitch increase here
00:31:043 (76,77,78,79) - likewise here the higher pitch again goes towards dons and vice versa when it was usually the other way around for the other parts. 00:32:334 (80,81) - would also seem more like 00:31:688 (78) - rather than following the rest in terms of colour (k/d) use
00:37:495 (94) - d would be better, with differentiation to 00:38:140 (95) which is a higher tone, also how 00:37:173 (93) pitch decreases downwards to 00:37:495 (94)
00:44:269 (110,111,112,113) - comparing to 00:33:946 (84,85,86,87) - 00:13:301 (33,34,35,36) - 00:02:979 (8,9,10,11) - they are all different, and there isn't really any reason as to why, it is really inconsistent in that aspect, it looks very random right now
00:53:463 (136,137,138) - k k k doesn't seem really fitting to the song here with the ascending pitch of the song, even 00:58:613 (150,151,152) - has a change in the pattern
Good Luck