ClariS - SHIORI - TV size mix -

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[sote]
  1. Creativity 8/10 lol I really love your creativity.
  2. 00:05:378 (4) - Hmm, is there any sounds to put 1/4 repeat slider? if u just want to emphasize 00:05:719 (1) - this, you can change it to 3/4 slider
  3. 00:10:833 (5) - 3/4 will more fun. cuz 00:11:003 - here is no sounds so u can put 3/4 for emphasize 00:11:174 (1) - this like 00:05:378 (4,1) - here
  4. 00:28:219 (1) - del NC will better cuz keep nc cycle will better imo.
  5. 01:12:537 (1,2) - seems overmapping. there is no sound to put 1/4 repeat slider.
  6. 01:13:219 (3) - Look, 01:13:390 - here and 01:13:475 - here have same sounds as 01:13:560 (4) - here and 01:13:730 (5) - here. you should put 1/4 slider to 01:13:390 - here
  7. 01:16:969 (3,4,5,6) - Stack make cursor stop. is there any reason to stop the flow? i think you should put jump for keep this tension
  8. 01:22:594 (4,1) - ^
  9. 01:23:276 (2,3) - ^
  10. 01:23:958 (4,5) - ^
  11. 01:26:174 (1) - kool


[hard]
  1. 00:00:265 (1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - I really don't know what sounds this patterns following. u skipped too many piano sounds. and 00:06:571 (2,3) - like here u following piano, not drum. in my opinion. you should follow only drum or piano.
  2. 00:06:571 (2,3) - is there any reason to put different space between 00:16:628 (1,2) - here and 00:17:140 (2,3) - here?
  3. 00:31:287 (4,5) - ^


GL :)
Kirylln

-Faded- wrote:

Hey, m4m from my queue!


[kiry's Insane]
  1. This difficulty doesn't have a spinner. Not only is it inconsistent with every other diff, but it is also bad because there will be nothing to vary the scores when the map gets ranked - SS's with the same mods will always have the same score, which reduces the replaybiility of this diff by a lot. this is probably where i should say sth along the lines of "this is my style" because it is lol. I rarely ever use spinners, they just dont fit my mapping style in many ways and it is especially true in this map's case in which i find no where suitable enough to put a spinner in
  2. 00:57:537 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - They way you've chosen to express the order of these kicksliders are inconsistent. One would assume that a zig-zag motion would be done throughout the whole pattern, but this expectation is broken on 00:57:708 (2,1) - where the player goes straight up. I would just reverse the positions of these two notes so that the player expectation isn't broken. It'll play better that way too. oops that was a mistake.Nice catch


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edit: forgot about the hs thingy. will look at it again when i have access to a comp
Topic Starter
Stormiverse

Kawashiro wrote:

[sote]
Creativity 8/10 lol I really love your creativity. THANKS I LOVE IT TOO *me being nervous*
00:05:378 (4) - Hmm, is there any sounds to put 1/4 repeat slider? if u just want to emphasize 00:05:719 (1) - this, you can change it to 3/4 slider 3/4 slider would still require the player to move across the screen, while stream would be overmapping, so 1/4 repeat slider I have chosen.
00:10:833 (5) - 3/4 will more fun. cuz 00:11:003 - here is no sounds so u can put 3/4 for emphasize 00:11:174 (1) - this like 00:05:378 (4,1) - here I want these two to be the same :/ 00:10:492 (4,5) - . There're no sound on the 3/4 blue tick, too, so both of them work fine
00:28:219 (1) - del NC will better cuz keep nc cycle will better imo. misplaced NC, fixed
01:12:537 (1,2) - seems overmapping. there is no sound to put 1/4 repeat slider. held sound + kiai time
01:13:219 (3) - Look, 01:13:390 - here and 01:13:475 - here have same sounds as 01:13:560 (4) - here and 01:13:730 (5) - here. you should put 1/4 slider to 01:13:390 - here 01:12:537 (1,2,3,4) - These follow the piano (i guess), while 01:13:730 (5) - follow the vocals. There're drums on 01:13:560 (4,5) - 's tail, so I used 1/4 slider.
01:16:969 (3,4,5,6) - Stack make cursor stop. is there any reason to stop the flow? i think you should put jump for keep this tension Could have put 2 1/2 sliders there, but doing so would decrease note density, and inconsistent with 01:13:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
01:22:594 (4,1) - ^ force cursor movement to halt to emphasize the next sliderhead. Triplets or 1/4 slider wouldn't work here. Also this particular section within the kiai is less intense than the others, but still more intense than the rest of the map, so I put stack.
01:23:276 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:23:958 (4,5) - ^ ^
01:26:174 (1) - kool <3
P/S: What does 'sote' mean?
Kawashiro

Stormiverse wrote:

P/S: What does 'sote' mean?
"S"tory "O"f "T"he "E"nd
Topic Starter
Stormiverse

Kawashiro wrote:

Stormiverse wrote:

P/S: What does 'sote' mean?
"S"tory "O"f "T"he "E"nd
OMFG! HOLY SH! MIND = BLOWN!!!
Mcen314

UniqueBlock11 wrote:

mcen314's hard

I like how you used note hitsounds
<×> 00:35:719 (1) - Why not convert this slider to a fancy shape? This slider doesn't fit

in the short fancy sliders all around it. Try a sliderwave or something like that. I like straight

slider

<-> 00:50:378 (3,4) - Blanket for appeal.
<-> 00:41:685 (3,4) - ^
<-> 01:11:855 (3,4) - ^
<√> 01:15:265 (1,2,3,4) - Space this combo properly, some notes have distance snapping of

1.3x and some have 1.2x.
<√> 01:16:969 (3,4,5,6) - ^
About blanket: Fixing blanket is a very small change, you may not can see if I fixed it. And if I

fix some blanket, maybe another modder will think the blanket should be fixed

-Faded- wrote:

[Mcen314's Hard]
  1. <√> Like I metnioned in the normal difficulty, I would definitely add some custom combo colours.
  2. <×> 00:28:219 (2,4) - The reverse arrow on this slider is being overlapped by (2), which is unrankable. The rankiing criteria states that

    Ranking Criteria wrote:

    Reverse arrows on sliders must not be completely visually obstructed by other hit objects with the default or beatmap-specific skin. Covering up reverse arrows on sliders can result in sliders being ambiguous to read.[/Quote]
    This set of notes can be very hard to read if someone is using the default skin, or a skin with large 300's.
    First, Slider's end will cover 300 in New Deafult Skin. Second, I think 99% of player will invisble 300 in skin, Large 300 skin nobody can stand. Third, you must pay attention to object(3) after you hit object(2), And you won't pay attention to object(4) until you complete the object(3), But when you complete the object(3), you can see slider(4)'s reverse clearly.
  3. <√> 00:42:537 (1,3) - The structure here can be improved a bit. Make it so that the end of (1), and both ends of (3) are equidistant from one another. Right now, it can easily be noticed that two of them overlap, whilst the other one doesn't.
  4. <×> 00:53:105 (3,1) - I would ramp up the curve on (1) to create a nicer blanket, enhancing the visuals on the map. I don't make blanketwith them
  5. <√> 01:00:605 (2,3,4,5,6) - Likewise, the visuals on the map would also be increased by making this triangle perfect. It looks sloppy right now, and it can easily be noticed in gameplay.
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Creator:Stormiverse
Version:Mcen314's Hard
Source:終物語
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You can delete hitsound "Soft-hitwhistle11.wav" and "Soft-hitsliderslider11.wav"
Serizawa Haruki

UniqueBlock11 wrote:

jack's normal

00:11:174 (1,1) - Recovery time here breaks the Ranking Criteria, spinner recovery time should be at least 2 beats unless if the BPM is low enough, which isn't in this case.
00:57:963 (1,1) - ^
There is no Ranking Criteria about spinner recovery time but I removed the first spinner anyways because it was indeed kind of difficult. The second spinner is fine though.
TheBlackMirage
Hi Mirage here from NM request

There isn't much I feel that can be improved on for Easy and Normal as requested so I took a look at the rest of the difficulties as well

Easy
First of all, the Colours for Combo 2 and 3 are too similar. I would recommend either changing Combo 3 to another colour to for more contrast
  1. 01:26:855 - Not necessary but consider adding a 2/4 Slider here and a Hit Circle here 01:27:367 (2) to follow the Vocals otherwise there's just an empty gap there


J a c k's Normal

Nothing :)

Hard
  1. 00:12:537 (5) - Not sure if its a bug for me or intentional but the sound from this is from the default normal sample set (I hear a whistle and the normal finish instead of the cymbal) If this is not intended then try deleting and adding back the same Hit Circle and the sound should be from S:C1
  2. 01:17:992 (1,2,3,4) - Bell sound is too loud - Try changing to 55%
  3. 01:26:855 - Not necessary but consider adding a 2/4 Slider here to follow the vocals


Insane
  1. 00:05:378 (4) - Since this is Insane I think a Stream would be more suitable, like This (Rearranged Sliders a little)

[*]00:57:708 (2,3,2,3,2,3) - I would space out the Hit Circles wider or do something like this instead. (Not very clear and too wide apart but I split each Combo in an arc with increasing Distance Snap)

kiry's Insane
Nothing :)

Story of the End

  • Can't really find fault with this difficulty, but I do have a suggestion
  1. 01:01:628 (1) - Instead of just this Slider matching the backtrack, I suggest adding a Slider which match the Vocals at 01:02:140 at 0.5 Speed, something like This - This will emphasise on the Vocals at this part and create suspense right before the Chorus with the slow Slider speed compared to the faster speed during the chorus


Sorry if this mod is pretty useless since I really can't find anything wrong :P
Shortthu

J a c k wrote:

There is no Ranking Criteria about spinner recovery time
there is, scroll down for normal
Topic Starter
Stormiverse

TheBlackMirage wrote:

Hi Mirage here from NM request

There isn't much I feel that can be improved on for Easy and Normal as requested so I took a look at the rest of the difficulties as well

Easy
First of all, the Colours for Combo 2 and 3 are too similar. I would recommend either changing Combo 3 to another colour to for more contrast err...?

  1. 01:26:855 - Not necessary but consider adding a 2/4 Slider here and a Hit Circle here 01:27:367 (2) to follow the Vocals otherwise there's just an empty gap there neglecting vocals to fit Ranking Criteria :(


Insane
  1. 00:05:378 (4) - Since this is Insane I think a Stream would be more suitable, like This (Rearranged Sliders a little) I'm aiming to make this diff some what easier than usual Insane diffs, but not as easy as Light Insane. Also making it a stream would be overmapping as there're no 'real' sounds on the blue + red ticks.
  2. 00:57:708 (2,3,2,3,2,3) - I would space out the Hit Circles wider or do something like this instead. (Not very clear and too wide apart but I split each Combo in an arc with increasing Distance Snap) I want to make the DS between hitcircles as small as possible, while still represent the music and not increasing the SR. Also, wide angles like this are really hard to play, and doesn't represent the music pretty well imo.
    Did some self mod to make it no longer overlap anw.


Story of the End

  • Can't really find fault with this difficulty, but I do have a suggestion
  1. 01:01:628 (1) - Instead of just this Slider matching the backtrack, I suggest adding a Slider which match the Vocals at 01:02:140 at 0.5 Speed, something like This - This will emphasise on the Vocals at this part and create suspense right before the Chorus with the slow Slider speed compared to the faster speed during the chorus I like the way it looks. Fixed! Also did some self mod to better representing the music as what -Faded- has said.


Sorry if this mod is pretty useless since I really can't find anything wrong :P
Serizawa Haruki

Shortthu wrote:

J a c k wrote:

There is no Ranking Criteria about spinner recovery time
there is, scroll down for normal
No, that's a guideline and it doesn't have to be respected if there is a reason to do so. In this case it's because I would have to omit the vocals in order to have "enough" spinner recovery time. Also, changing the spinner into a long slider would result in a weird gap and a spinner fits best there.
Botan

Easy

00:11:259 (1) - Spinner might be too short. Players only have 1.3 seconds to complete it.
00:44:583 (1,2) - Fix blanket?
01:24:895 (1) - Spinner might be too short.
01:27:537 (1) - This spinner is even shorter!
Not much to say, I think it's okay. OD 1 though?

Jack's Normal

00:33:503 (2,3) - I personally wouldn't give up the structure you've established in your map just to faithfully map one part to the vocals. Put the circle on the white tick. Nothing wrong with where it's placed now, I just think consistent patterning is more important than faithfully representing each vocal.
Not much else to say either, nice map.
Shortthu
ok i'll mod
no kds cuz already have in this thread
Easy
  1. Cái gap OD với HP so với normal lớn quá, cho cả 2 lên 2 thì hợp hơn
  2. 00:09:810 (4,1) - hmm spinner cách object trước 1/4 trong easy :thinking:, và cái spinner đó cũng không đủ 4 beats
  3. 01:24:810 (5,1) - ^
  4. 00:22:083 (6,2) - 01:18:844 (5,2) - overlap lul
  5. 01:04:696 (4,5) - không nên dùng 1/2 slider trong easy :)))
  6. 01:27:537 (1) - spinner less than 4 beats
J a c k
  1. i'd use OD 3 and CS around 3.5, CS gap between normal and hard is kinda big
  2. same SV with easy? i'd bump it to 1.3 or something
  3. how about making 00:11:174 (1) - as a spinner and remove 00:12:878 (2,3,4) - ? the 00:11:174 (1) - following music, the 00:12:878 (2,3,4) - following vocal and back to music at 00:13:901 (1) - is kinda strange.
    o and other diffs doesn't mapped the 00:12:537 - to 00:13:901 - part (except last diff)
  4. 00:56:174 (3) - convert this to a circle, would fit better in this section have no (or calm, or something) background music
  5. 01:12:196 (4,5) - 404 blanket not found
  6. 01:13:901 (1,2,3,4) - :thinking:
  7. 01:16:628 (1,2,3,4) - :tHinKIng:
  8. 01:15:265 (5,6) - 01:17:992 (5,6,7) - the rhythm is similar-ish why you change it
  9. look kinda okay-ish, but you need to care more about aesthetics xd some blanket are off, some flow are... idk what to say lol
Mcen314
  1. i personally don't like CS 4 on hard, but that's your choice
  2. lower the OD to 6?
  3. 00:12:537 (5) - fix hitsound l0l
  4. 00:13:901 (1,2,3,4) - hello blanket? do you use blanket here btw
  5. 00:17:140 (2) - why not make DS constant here, it doesn't make sense here
  6. 00:21:060 (2,3,4) - blanket where
  7. 00:24:469 (8,1) - b-blanket!!
  8. 00:36:912 (2,3,4) - umm... blanket?
  9. 00:58:901 - is it me or the DS goes bigger this section?
  10. 01:13:134 (4) - OwO what is this note? i hear no sound here
  11. 01:13:560 (6) - move this to 01:13:475 - for better rhythm
Insane
  1. CS vui nhỉ =)) hard thì 4, còn insane là 3.7?? LUL
  2. 00:16:628 (1,2) - what is this kind of overlap owo
  3. 00:26:855 (3) - undermap thế :thinking: cái slider này có drum trong red tick rõ ràng mà
  4. 00:30:265 (1,2) - ewww, sao không blanket
  5. 00:35:719 (1,2) - ^
  6. 00:47:992 (1,2,3,4) - sao không tách nó ra, đừng overlap
  7. 01:12:537 (1,2,3) - overmapped?
  8. 01:11:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 01:13:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - hai đoạn jump này giãn ra một chút nhé, nhìn unclear quá ): nó lên SR một chút cũng không sao
  9. 01:17:992 (1) - cái reverse slider này cộng thêm cái hitsound *ding ding* kia dễ bị ấn nhầm lắm, không nên làm reverse slider chỗ này. tốt nhất chỗ này cứ map theo nhạc đi, nhạc nghe rõ hơn vocal mà
Kirylln
  1. fck u kiry
Last diff
  1. 00:00:094 (1) - note này không cần map đâu xd
  2. 00:02:821 (4) - ^ nếu xóa luôn note ở trên
  3. 00:05:378 (4) - ehh overmapped?
  4. 00:12:878 (2) - mấy diff khác không map chỗ này (trừ normal, nhưng mà cũng nói là xóa ở trên rồi :eyes:) cho nên có thể xóa cái slider này :>
  5. 00:09:810 (3,5) - diff cuối sao còn overlap kiểu này nữa lul
  6. 00:09:128 (2,3,4) - 00:42:537 (1,2,3) - 01:01:628 (1,2) - tiny blanket owo, diff cuối nên kéo ra một chút không sao đâu, nhưng mà để thế này cũng chả ảnh hưởng gì nên làm sao cũng được :3
  7. 01:12:537 (1,2,3) - overmapped?
  8. 01:26:174 (1) - cái slider này slider head với slider tail bị stacked cmnr, hai bên giống nhau nên có thể bị lộn kéo sang trái -> choke, kéo thế nào cho cái slider tail / head đừng thế này là ổn

    Ranking Criteria wrote:

    Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end. Sliders which overlap themselves in a way that makes any section unreadable or ambiguous cannot be used, such as burai sliders and hold sliders without straightforward slider borders. When perfectly overlapping two slider bodies, the first slider must be fully faded out before the second slider is fully faded in.
I'M DONE OWO
thật ra là chỉ cảm thấy muốn mod thôi lul
0109-
nói qua 1 chút về 2 diff cuối

[Dne eht fo yrots]
Rhythm:
* Nhìn chung thực sự thấy rhythm choice không phù hợp khi nó skip hầu hết tiếng drum ở mấy đoạn bình thường rồi emphasize instruments ở mấy đoạn jumps, build-up etc.. Biết là theo vocal chủ yếu nhưng cảm giác map bỏ qua hết drum snare các thứ khá không ổn tại đây cũng là map 5*, ông có thể xem những map khác dù theo vocal nhưng họ vẫn cần nhấn drum khi cần như bình thường. Một số ví dụ:
  1. 00:10:321 – có thể bắt đầu ½ slider ở đây rồi nhét circle ở đuôi cái số (4) cạnh đó một phần để đẩy density lên tại đoạn này nó hơi loãng quá so với cái jump đằng sau. Nhưng thế thì lại phải ấy lại cái 00:07:765 (3,4) – cho nó giống cái này vì consistency.
  2. 00:17:821 – Đoạn này có thể thay cái ½ slider đó thành 2 nốt như 2 cái đằng sau 00:19:015 (4,5) – cũng hay. Hơn nữa đoạn 00:20:549 (4) – có nhấn mà đoạn này skip cũng hơi ko ổn. Tương tự với 00:23:105 (4) - 00:28:730 -
  3. 00:26:855 (3) – Không hiểu ý đồ ở đây lắm nhưng sao ko làm giống như 00:21:401 (3,4,5,6) - . Nhạc đoạn này chả có gì trầm xuống hơn so với đoạn kia lắm.
    * Những thứ khác
  4. 00:13:560 – có thể ¼ reverse như ông đã làm ở đâu đó để build-up
  5. 00:46:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – Không hiểu ý nghĩa của việc tạo sự đa dạng ở đây lắm. Hoàn toàn có thể map như những cái xung quanh
  6. 01:00:605 (3) – Đổi thành circle? Để cho 01:00:776 (4) – được nhấn mạnh hơn, cái (3) cũng chả mạnh đến mức ông dùng kick slider như thế. Tương tự với 01:25:492 (1) -
  7. 01:02:992 (1,2,3) – Sao ở đây loãng mà mấy đoạn sau kiểu 01:05:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – thì intense khiếp :|. Nên thống nhất 1 kiểu thôi. Theo t thì không nên thoáng quá hay dày quá kiểu này mà kết hợp cả 2 vào một chút. Kiểu ở 01:03:674 (3) – cái đầu với cái cuối có tiếng bộp bộp thì có thể nhét 2 note vào đó, từ đó map consistent với những đoạn đằng sau. Ông có thể nghĩ một cái rhythm khác.
  8. 01:09:810 (1,2,3,4) – Cách map ở đây với ở 01:11:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – thực sự rất khó hiểu.. Chỉ vì vocal đoạn đầu của cái jumps đằng sau pitch tăng lên chút mà ông biến nó thành jumps còn lại về instruments của 2 đoạn không khác gì nhau mấy. Nếu muốn nhấn vocal chỗ đó thì ông chỉ cần tăng spacing nó thôi chứ nên giữ pattern tại overmap quá tbh.
  9. 01:12:537 (1,2,3) – T hiểu về concept overmap của cái map này qua mấy cái triple hơi khó hiểu (ko biết có phải chủ ý của ông không :|) nhưng cái này thì free combo hơi quá rồi =)). Cùng lắm để jump bình thường thôi rồi bắt đầu ¼ rhythm ở 01:13:390 - sau
  10. Ngoài ra cũng nên cân nhắc về cái 01:19:355 (1,2) - 01:20:719 (1,2) – Thực sự nó không thích hợp lắm… Ông có thể thử hỏi thêm ý kiến của những người khác.
  11. 01:22:765 (1,2,3,4,5) – Sao lại ½ reverse là thế nào thế này =))) trong khi đây là đoạn cần build-up chuẩn bị cho jump to kia. Ông có thể cân nhắc nhấn những đoạn như 01:23:105 - 01:23:787 - 01:24:299 - 01:24:469 – tiếng drum snare khá là to..


Emphasis, spacing, note placement etc
Một số đoạn thấy đặt nốt hơi tùy hứng chút.

  1. 00:17:310 (3) – Khá là chủ quan nhưng vẫn không thích blanket kiểu này lắm .. blanket đuôi trông vẫn đẹp hơn..
  2. 00:21:571 (4,5,6) – Mấy đoạn này có thể map sạch sẽ hơn một chút chứ để lởm chởm quá trông hơi khó coi. Thử http://puu.sh/xrY23/46f96c4474.jpg , tức là cho (4) stack với đuôi slider (1), stack (5) với đuôi (2) ấy. Cái này t nghĩ cũng ko đến mức quan trọng lắm nhưng để kiểu thế trông dễ chịu hơn
  3. 00:28:901 (1) – Spacing của cymbal đây bé hơn 00:29:071 (2) – hơi dị. Lẽ ra nên nhấn (1) rồi nhỏ cái (2) lại chứ. Tương tự 00:34:355 (1) –
  4. 00:37:083 (1,2,3,4) – Tiếng violin nhỏ dần nên thử tạo contrast cho jumps một chút bằng cách giảm dần spacing?
  5. 00:42:537 (1) – Biết là nó sẽ phá pattern nhưng mấy chỗ kiểu này cần thêm spacing chút như kiểu 00:39:810 (1) –
  6. 01:13:560 (4,5) – Chỉ là sở thích cá nhân thôi nhưng t muốn cho 2 cái kick này hướng về nhau thì trông đẹp hơn, chắc vậy
  7. 01:14:924 (7) – theo logic của các jumps ông đã làm thì mấy đoạn drum snare đc nhấn khá rõ trừ đoạn này ..
  8. 01:15:265 (1) – Spacing ở đây hơi quá so với những cái khác thì phải :|, thực ra nó cũng ko đến mức dễ nhận nhưng cũng nên chỉnh 1 chút


Trước hết cứ cân nhắc qua một số chỗ đó đi đã, một số cái t viết hơi chủ quan chút nếu ông thấy ko hợp thì cứ deny nhưng đưa ra chút lý do ạ.

[Yrik]
Một cái hơi lo ở đây là transition từ nửa đầu là theo vocal với nửa sau chủ yếu theo instruments nhưng chắc ko sao vì khá thú vị :3
  1. 00:00:094 – Theo theo vocal luôn đoạn đầu thì map luôn ở đây đi =))
  2. 00:10:833 (2) – ½ slider như 00:08:105 (4) - ? Một phần vì consistency với một phần cũng để emphasize 00:11:174 (3) – tốt hơn
  3. 00:15:775 (1,2) – swap nc rồi remove nc của 00:16:117 (2) - ?
  4. 00:25:321 (3,4) – Ctrl G rhythm cho nhau? Tức là cái (3) là slider còn cái (4) thành nốt ở tick đỏ ấy. Vừa nhấn được cái tiếng ở 00:25:321 – vừa theo được vocal ở 00:25:662 –
  5. 00:52:651 (1) – Nên thay bằng 1 nốt rồi 1 cái 1/3 slider để nhấn được tick trắng, để kiểu này cảm giác hơi bựa bựa
  6. 00:54:128 (1) – Tưởng cái này nên cho giảm dần sv? Với cả gợi ý rhythm ở đây một chút là thử thêm một cái slider ở 00:54:810 - nữa thì thế nào? Để cover nốt vocal. Rồi tiếp tục theo vocal 1 chút đoạn sau nữa tại cái pattern ¼ đằng sau bất ngờ quá tự nhiên bùm cái players spam phím mà ko phải ấn gì đằng trước…

Map hay ạ <3. Cần polished linh tinh thêm mấy thứ nữa là ổn, hs vài chỗ thấy ko phù hợp nhưng chắc tính sau


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Topic Starter
Stormiverse
3 mods in a row and I'm having extra classes. Great.
Placeholder until I have my laptop beside me.

Mod rep is here!

Botan wrote:

Easy

00:11:259 (1) - Spinner might be too short. Players only have 1.3 seconds to complete it. Replaced with Slider.
00:44:583 (1,2) - Fix blanket? What're you talking about? That blancc is purfecc.
01:24:895 (1) - Spinner might be too short. Replaced with Slider.
01:27:537 (1) - This spinner is even shorter! Lengthened.
Not much to say, I think it's okay. OD 1 though? Boosted to 2.

Shortthu wrote:

ok i'll mod
no kds cuz already have in this thread
Easy
  1. Cái gap OD với HP so với normal lớn quá, cho cả 2 lên 2 thì hợp hơn. Dạ
  2. 00:09:810 (4,1) - hmm spinner cách object trước 1/4 trong easy :thinking:, và cái spinner đó cũng không đủ 4 beats Dạ
  3. 01:24:810 (5,1) - ^ Sửa rồi ạ, xem mod rep phía trên ạ
  4. 00:22:083 (6,2) - 01:18:844 (5,2) - overlap lul AR lên 4 rồi ạ, cái đầu thì auto fix, còn cái sau manual thì cũng fix rồi ạ
  5. 01:04:696 (4,5) - không nên dùng 1/2 slider trong easy :))) Để hỏi ý kiến đã ạ, nếu phần lớn bảo bỏ thì sẽ fix ạ. (cảm giác nếu k để 1/2 thì ND k đủ)
  6. 01:27:537 (1) - spinner less than 4 beats Dạ
Insane
  1. CS vui nhỉ =)) hard thì 4, còn insane là 3.7?? LUL Vui lắm ạ
  2. 00:16:628 (1,2) - what is this kind of overlap owo Giống cái này ạ 00:06:401 (2,3) - , 00:08:446 (1,2) - .
  3. 00:26:855 (3) - undermap thế :thinking: cái slider này có drum trong red tick rõ ràng mà Dạ
  4. 00:30:265 (1,2) - ewww, sao không blanket Sửa rồi ạ
  5. 00:35:719 (1,2) - ^ Sửa rồi ạ
  6. 00:47:992 (1,2,3,4) - sao không tách nó ra, đừng overlap Dạ
  7. 01:12:537 (1,2,3) - overmapped? Chắc thế ạ
  8. 01:11:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 01:13:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - hai đoạn jump này giãn ra một chút nhé, nhìn unclear quá ): nó lên SR một chút cũng không sao Sửa xong lên 4.22 rồi ạ
  9. 01:17:992 (1) - cái reverse slider này cộng thêm cái hitsound *ding ding* kia dễ bị ấn nhầm lắm, không nên làm reverse slider chỗ này. tốt nhất chỗ này cứ map theo nhạc đi, nhạc nghe rõ hơn vocal mà Dạ
Last diff
  1. 00:00:094 (1) - note này không cần map đâu xd có vocal ạ xD
  2. 00:02:821 (4) - ^ nếu xóa luôn note ở trên k xóa ạ
  3. 00:05:378 (4) - ehh overmapped? sao bên Insane thì k sao mà sang đây lại thành overmap vậy :/
  4. 00:12:878 (2) - mấy diff khác không map chỗ này (trừ normal, nhưng mà cũng nói là xóa ở trên rồi :eyes:) cho nên có thể xóa cái slider này :> dạ, cứ có vocal là e map ạ
  5. 00:09:810 (3,5) - diff cuối sao còn overlap kiểu này nữa lul à, cái này e sửa thành blancc rồi nhưng quên chưa up ạ :D
  6. 00:09:128 (2,3,4) - 00:42:537 (1,2,3) - 01:01:628 (1,2) - tiny blanket owo, diff cuối nên kéo ra một chút không sao đâu, nhưng mà để thế này cũng chả ảnh hưởng gì nên làm sao cũng được :3 đẹp là đc ạ :3
  7. 01:12:537 (1,2,3) - overmapped? sửa kiểu j ạ?
  8. 01:26:174 (1) - cái slider này slider head với slider tail bị stacked cmnr, hai bên giống nhau nên có thể bị lộn kéo sang trái -> choke, kéo thế nào cho cái slider tail / head đừng thế này là ổn

    Ranking Criteria wrote:

    Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end. Sliders which overlap themselves in a way that makes any section unreadable or ambiguous cannot be used, such as burai sliders and hold sliders without straightforward slider borders. When perfectly overlapping two slider bodies, the first slider must be fully faded out before the second slider is fully faded in.
    dạ, tại bé -Faded- bảo làm thế nhìn đẹp hơn ạ, sửa rồi ạ
I'M DONE OWO
thật ra là chỉ cảm thấy muốn mod thôi lul
OwO no kds, thx

0109- wrote:

nói qua 1 chút về 2 diff cuối

[Dne eht fo yrots]
Rhythm:
* Nhìn chung thực sự thấy rhythm choice không phù hợp khi nó skip hầu hết tiếng drum ở mấy đoạn bình thường rồi emphasize instruments ở mấy đoạn jumps, build-up etc.. Biết là theo vocal chủ yếu nhưng cảm giác map bỏ qua hết drum snare các thứ khá không ổn tại đây cũng là map 5*, ông có thể xem những map khác dù theo vocal nhưng họ vẫn cần nhấn drum khi cần như bình thường. Một số ví dụ:
  1. 00:10:321 – có thể bắt đầu ½ slider ở đây rồi nhét circle ở đuôi cái số (4) cạnh đó một phần để đẩy density lên tại đoạn này nó hơi loãng quá so với cái jump đằng sau. Nhưng thế thì lại phải ấy lại cái 00:07:765 (3,4) – cho nó giống cái này vì consistency.
  2. 00:17:821 – Đoạn này có thể thay cái ½ slider đó thành 2 nốt như 2 cái đằng sau 00:19:015 (4,5) – cũng hay. Hơn nữa đoạn 00:20:549 (4) – có nhấn mà đoạn này skip cũng hơi ko ổn. Tương tự với 00:23:105 (4) - 00:28:730 -
  3. 00:26:855 (3) – Không hiểu ý đồ ở đây lắm nhưng sao ko làm giống như 00:21:401 (3,4,5,6) - . Nhạc đoạn này chả có gì trầm xuống hơn so với đoạn kia lắm.
    * Những thứ khác
  4. 00:13:560 – có thể ¼ reverse như ông đã làm ở đâu đó để build-up stream đc k ạ?
  5. 00:46:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – Không hiểu ý nghĩa của việc tạo sự đa dạng ở đây lắm. Hoàn toàn có thể map như những cái xung quanh
  6. 01:00:605 (3) – Đổi thành circle? Để cho 01:00:776 (4) – được nhấn mạnh hơn, cái (3) cũng chả mạnh đến mức ông dùng kick slider như thế. Tương tự với 01:25:492 (1) -
  7. 01:02:992 (1,2,3) – Sao ở đây loãng mà mấy đoạn sau kiểu 01:05:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – thì intense khiếp :|. Nên thống nhất 1 kiểu thôi. Theo t thì không nên thoáng quá hay dày quá kiểu này mà kết hợp cả 2 vào một chút. Kiểu ở 01:03:674 (3) – cái đầu với cái cuối có tiếng bộp bộp thì có thể nhét 2 note vào đó, từ đó map consistent với những đoạn đằng sau. Ông có thể nghĩ một cái rhythm khác.
  8. 01:09:810 (1,2,3,4) – Cách map ở đây với ở 01:11:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – thực sự rất khó hiểu.. Chỉ vì vocal đoạn đầu của cái jumps đằng sau pitch tăng lên chút mà ông biến nó thành jumps còn lại về instruments của 2 đoạn không khác gì nhau mấy. Nếu muốn nhấn vocal chỗ đó thì ông chỉ cần tăng spacing nó thôi chứ nên giữ pattern tại overmap quá tbh.
  9. 01:12:537 (1,2,3) – T hiểu về concept overmap của cái map này qua mấy cái triple hơi khó hiểu (ko biết có phải chủ ý của ông không :|) nhưng cái này thì free combo hơi quá rồi =)). Cùng lắm để jump bình thường thôi rồi bắt đầu ¼ rhythm ở 01:13:390 - sau
  10. Ngoài ra cũng nên cân nhắc về cái 01:19:355 (1,2) - 01:20:719 (1,2) – Thực sự nó không thích hợp lắm… Ông có thể thử hỏi thêm ý kiến của những người khác. sẽ hỏi ạ
  11. 01:22:765 (1,2,3,4,5) – Sao lại ½ reverse là thế nào thế này =))) trong khi đây là đoạn cần build-up chuẩn bị cho jump to kia. Ông có thể cân nhắc nhấn những đoạn như 01:23:105 - 01:23:787 - 01:24:299 - 01:24:469 – tiếng drum snare khá là to..


Emphasis, spacing, note placement etc
Một số đoạn thấy đặt nốt hơi tùy hứng chút.

  1. 00:17:310 (3) – Khá là chủ quan nhưng vẫn không thích blanket kiểu này lắm .. blanket đuôi trông vẫn đẹp hơn..
  2. 00:21:571 (4,5,6) – Mấy đoạn này có thể map sạch sẽ hơn một chút chứ để lởm chởm quá trông hơi khó coi. Thử http://puu.sh/xrY23/46f96c4474.jpg , tức là cho (4) stack với đuôi slider (1), stack (5) với đuôi (2) ấy. Cái này t nghĩ cũng ko đến mức quan trọng lắm nhưng để kiểu thế trông dễ chịu hơn
  3. 00:28:901 (1) – Spacing của cymbal đây bé hơn 00:29:071 (2) – hơi dị. Lẽ ra nên nhấn (1) rồi nhỏ cái (2) lại chứ. Tương tự 00:34:355 (1) –
  4. 00:37:083 (1,2,3,4) – Tiếng violin nhỏ dần nên thử tạo contrast cho jumps một chút bằng cách giảm dần spacing?
  5. 00:42:537 (1) – Biết là nó sẽ phá pattern nhưng mấy chỗ kiểu này cần thêm spacing chút như kiểu 00:39:810 (1) –
  6. 01:13:560 (4,5) – Chỉ là sở thích cá nhân thôi nhưng t muốn cho 2 cái kick này hướng về nhau thì trông đẹp hơn, chắc vậy
  7. 01:14:924 (7) – theo logic của các jumps ông đã làm thì mấy đoạn drum snare đc nhấn khá rõ trừ đoạn này ..
  8. 01:15:265 (1) – Spacing ở đây hơi quá so với những cái khác thì phải :|, thực ra nó cũng ko đến mức dễ nhận nhưng cũng nên chỉnh 1 chút


Trước hết cứ cân nhắc qua một số chỗ đó đi đã, một số cái t viết hơi chủ quan chút nếu ông thấy ko hợp thì cứ deny nhưng đưa ra chút lý do ạ.

fix gần hết lul (k rep = fixed)

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Kirylln

0109- wrote:

[Yrik]
Một cái hơi lo ở đây là transition từ nửa đầu là theo vocal với nửa sau chủ yếu theo instruments nhưng chắc ko sao vì khá thú vị :3
  1. 00:00:094 – Theo theo vocal luôn đoạn đầu thì map luôn ở đây đi =)) cũng ko phải bị nói lần đầu nên thôi map luôn :3
  2. 00:10:833 (2) – ½ slider như 00:08:105 (4) - ? Một phần vì consistency với một phần cũng để emphasize 00:11:174 (3) – tốt hơn f
  3. 00:15:775 (1,2) – swap nc rồi remove nc của 00:16:117 (2) - ? 00:16:117 (1) - removed nc cái này vì cái pattern nc kia là theo nhạc, tiếng chuông reset ở đâu thì nc ở đó thôi
  4. 00:25:321 (3,4) – Ctrl G rhythm cho nhau? Tức là cái (3) là slider còn cái (4) thành nốt ở tick đỏ ấy. Vừa nhấn được cái tiếng ở 00:25:321 – vừa theo được vocal ở 00:25:662 – ok
  5. 00:52:651 (1) – Nên thay bằng 1 nốt rồi 1 cái 1/3 slider để nhấn được tick trắng, để kiểu này cảm giác hơi bựa bựa f
  6. 00:54:128 (1) – Tưởng cái này nên cho giảm dần sv? Với cả gợi ý rhythm ở đây một chút là thử thêm một cái slider ở 00:54:810 - nữa thì thế nào? Để cover nốt vocal. Rồi tiếp tục theo vocal 1 chút đoạn sau nữa tại cái pattern ¼ đằng sau bất ngờ quá tự nhiên bùm cái players spam phím mà ko phải ấn gì đằng trước… sv tăng là vì vocal nó lên giọng chõ đó, còn uhm thêm 1 cái slider nữa cũng ỗn, chỗ vocal đằng sau thì ko map vì cái instrument nó xuất hiện bất ngờ thì pattern cũng nên thế luôn

Map hay ạ <3. Cần polished linh tinh thêm mấy thứ nữa là ổn, hs vài chỗ thấy ko phù hợp nhưng chắc tính sau[/box]

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<3
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Creator:Stormiverse
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Serizawa Haruki

Botan wrote:

Jack's Normal

00:33:503 (2,3) - I personally wouldn't give up the structure you've established in your map just to faithfully map one part to the vocals. Put the circle on the white tick. Nothing wrong with where it's placed now, I just think consistent patterning is more important than faithfully representing each vocal.
Not much else to say either, nice map.
Thanks! You're right, I fixed it
Serizawa Haruki

Shortthu wrote:

J a c k
  1. i'd use OD 3 and CS around 3.5, CS gap between normal and hard is kinda big OD 4 is used on most normal maps and the fact that there's a CS gap is not really my fault since i didn't map hard, CS 3 is fine
  2. same SV with easy? i'd bump it to 1.3 or something Why tho? Most people use DT anyways and I'm not gonna remap everything
  3. how about making 00:11:174 (1) - as a spinner and remove 00:12:878 (2,3,4) - ? the 00:11:174 (1) - following music, the 00:12:878 (2,3,4) - following vocal and back to music at 00:13:901 (1) - is kinda strange.
    o and other diffs doesn't mapped the 00:12:537 - to 00:13:901 - part (except last diff) Good idea, fixed it
  4. 00:56:174 (3) - convert this to a circle, would fit better in this section have no (or calm, or something) background music Fixed
  5. 01:12:196 (4,5) - 404 blanket not found Fixed
  6. 01:13:901 (1,2,3,4) - :thinking: What's wrong with it?
  7. 01:16:628 (1,2,3,4) - :tHinKIng: ^
  8. 01:15:265 (5,6) - 01:17:992 (5,6,7) - the rhythm is similar-ish why you change it Fixed
  9. look kinda okay-ish, but you need to care more about aesthetics xd some blanket are off, some flow are... idk what to say lol
Serizawa Haruki

-Faded- wrote:

[Jack's Normal]
  1. This difficulty doesn't have any hitsounds. The ranking criteria says that:

    Ranking Criteria wrote:

    You must use hitsounds. Without these, things get way too monotonous as you are throwing away one of the main elements of variation present in mapping. You don't need to place them on every note (and are discouraged from doing so), but they must at least be frequently heard when playing.
    Added hitsounds
  2. Where are the custom combo colours? This is done in every other difficulty except for Mcen's Hard, so I would add some to be consistent. It also enforces a good theme to your map, making it less boring. Added this too
  3. 00:11:174 (1,1) - I wouldn't do this. Firstly, this is a normal so players still need adequate recovery time. Having to hit another note just 1 beat after the spinner is just too much to expect of them. Secondly, the note appears right in the middle of the screen before the player is even half way through the spinner, which can be very disorientating to them, especially if you consider the approach circles of the spinner and the hit circle. Fixed
  4. 00:46:287 (5,3) - Hm, you could stack these so that the structure and overall presentation is nicer. Yup
  5. 01:12:196 (4,5) - This blanket is off by a large margin and it can be noticed easily during gameplay. I would heighten the first curve on (5) so that it's parallel to the parameter of (4) Fixed
Kirylln
@J a c k: hi, just a little advice but you should put all of your mod reply into 1 post, to avoid flooding the thread and stuff
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