Thanks for your mod
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00:21:401 (4) - Move this to x:388 y:184 so the slider end makes a nice triangle shape like so:
00:24:469 (6) - X:228 Y:340 for a more circular flow.
01:05:719 (1,3) - Don't think these work too well together due to the angle at which each slider is positioned at, I would make them go in a single direction so it looks more aesthetically pleasing and consistent.
01:13:730 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Could be a little difficult considering for the most part you've been doing 1/1 with only isolated parts being 1/2. I would maybe tone this part down a little bit by adding more 1/1 sliders.
I basically applied everything you said and also made some overall changes