Specific Points:- 00:13:316 (2,3,4) - This rhythm isn't the best given the song--a better one would be something like this. Sliders should connect stronger sounds (sliderhead) to weaker sounds (tail) or sounds of equal strength. If you wanted to use 1/4 filler, this (distinguishing the triple and 1/4 slider) would be the best way to do it.
- 00:33:519 (3) - Sliderbodies should not go through notes: each note should be represented by an action (clicking a note, sliderends, repeat slider, etc.)
- I like what you did at 00:31:682 (1,1,1,1,1) with the increasing SV, overlapping sliders, and interesting sliderbody when the harmony comes in on the voice sample. The same should be done at 00:33:825 (1,1,1). (SV and overlapping sliders) for consistency between concepts.
- 00:39:029 (9,10,11,12) - Objects 11 and 12 are different, and should be emphasized in some way.
- 00:43:927 (1,1,1,1) - Nice!
- 01:25:558 (2,3,4) - The sound on object 4 is very different, and should be emphasized
Overall Notes- Sliders should be at a consistent angle, but this can be varied between sections. In this map, different angles can be used to designate between different time signatures.
- Some of the slider rhythms are off.
Overall, it's a fun map. I wouldn't remap it just yet, I would finish and put on finishing touches.
I recommend you look at
pishifat's YouTube for further mapping advice
