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Kaori Oda - Make it Real (Short Ver.)

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Akitoshi's Hard
  1. missing hitsounding copied from top diff :^)
  2. 00:23:764 (1,2,3) - This motion here feels quite forced/uncomfortable due to the cursor movement snapping in awkward angles. I highly suggest either repositioning the objects here to accomodate a much smoother flow as the snappiness here seems rather out of place. i hope it flows better now
  3. 00:29:326 (2,3) - and 00:32:865 (5,1) - I these seem rather out of place imo as you only "break the DS" in this way at only these two timestamps. If they were more prevalent in the difficulty, it would of been fine but since it only happens at these two places, it kinda messes up with the cohesion of the map design. I suggest equalizing DS at these points or using more of these DS breaks. increased the number of DS breaks
  4. 00:48:034 (1) - just a minor suggestion, but perhaps you can make this a wavy slider too like 00:58:820 (1) - ? as you wish
  5. 00:53:932 (3,4,5) - ctrl+g the rhythm here? I feel as though the two circles here would work better with the drum roll and also pairing up the vocals with triplet sliders seems more fitting. Along with that, also for consistency with 01:04:719 (3,4,5) - . ye
  6. 01:06:067 (3) - perhaps a V slider would be better to pseudo map the instrument at 01:06:236 - it's not that noticeable so i think i can keep this w
thank you!

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joker's insane
  1. missing hitsounding oh my
  2. joker's Insane? Need to keep with the mapset difficulty name stylization asdf
  3. 00:08:090 (3,4) - Perhaps circle then slider would fit better here? The white tick at 00:08:258 - has the much stronger guitar and percussion beat compared to the red tick so I think it will be beneficial to make the white tick clickable here.indeed, i'd prefer to click strong drum sound on red tick and i hear those guitar sound are same degree on the red & white ticks imo
  4. 00:39:607 (3,1) - is it possible to reuse the "flow stopping" idea you had at 00:36:910 (3,1) - here? Feels more appropriate imo for this slow part. great
  5. 01:06:910 (1) - I think ending this slider on a white tick would be better as there is a clear vocal and percussion beat here. Although there is a percussion beat also on the blue tick, ending on the white tick would avoid undermapping it. Or if you want, you can end the slider on the white tick then add a circle to the blue tick to fully map the percussion triplet. Hmm... in my intention, i wanna express the "speeding" percussion gradually to use variable slider velocity and simplify rhythm pattern. would make more sense that i keep them in not order to lose the "speeding"
  6. 01:18:202 (3,4) - same thing I as the first point applies here too.^
glgl
thanks!

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Milan-
easy
-00:08:932 (1,2,3) - guitar is different from the beginning but you keep using the same rhythm, try to vary it a bit like http://puu.sh/xClhM/b3214fae64.jpg ?
-00:33:539 - 00:34:213 - missing clap

normal
-00:08:090 - should be whistle instead. altho i think something like http://puu.sh/xClZJ/96c56081b4.jpg will fit better the intensity, like there's a pause on (5) but on (7) it becomes more intense. same later at the copypaste 01:18:034 -

hard
-01:05:225 (5,1) - more or less like 00:54:438 (5,1) - would be cooler i think, like you do so few variations on spacing that these become even more noticeable
-for the same reason would be nice to add some variation to the intro and ending like here 00:11:460 (5,1) -

insane
-01:10:618 (4,5) - these dont fit well with 01:10:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . the snare spam doesnt start yet but you use the same 1/2 stacked circles, as a slider would be better i think
-01:12:303 (1,1,1) - spacing should be the other way around, like http://puu.sh/xCmMt/9affa36ffd.jpg the first two are way stronger, similar to what you did here 00:45:000 (5,1) -

make it
-00:14:326 - dont really get the idea of the so variant spacing you do during this section. like 00:15:000 (3,4,5,6) - is kinda consistent, then 00:16:348 (3,4,5,6) - are changing all the time, then 00:17:696 (3,4,5,6) - are even more consistent, and the weirdest being 00:21:404 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - which is just messy imo. the whole section is quite steady in the music, and spacing should reflect that. things like 00:17:696 (3,4,5,6) - 00:19:045 (3,4,5,6) - are ok with themselves but not with the rest of the section.
-00:28:062 - whistle on this tail sound so off. there's nothing in the music for it

why 2 mp3 in the folder tho xd
Akitoshi
@Milan- fixed both, thank you!

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Topic Starter
Shunao

Milan- wrote:

normal
-00:08:090 - should be whistle instead. altho i think something like http://puu.sh/xClZJ/96c56081b4.jpg will fit better the intensity, like there's a pause on (5) but on (7) it becomes more intense. same later at the copypaste 01:18:034 - i don't like when there are 3 notes stacked for a normal diff tbh

make it
-00:14:326 - dont really get the idea of the so variant spacing you do during this section. like 00:15:000 (3,4,5,6) - is kinda consistent, then 00:16:348 (3,4,5,6) - are changing all the time, then 00:17:696 (3,4,5,6) - are even more consistent, and the weirdest being 00:21:404 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - which is just messy imo. the whole section is quite steady in the music, and spacing should reflect that. things like 00:17:696 (3,4,5,6) - 00:19:045 (3,4,5,6) - are ok with themselves but not with the rest of the section.
-00:28:062 - whistle on this tail sound so off. there's nothing in the music for it

why 2 mp3 in the folder tho xd a
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Venix
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[General]
  1. I don't get the logic behaind why "o.mp3" file exists in folder, it's another song file so you should delete it hence.
  2. I think adding kiais like ones on other diffs to Hikan's diff is fine option just because it looks better and works better for consistency across difficulties.
  3. What are you think about adding SliderBorder and SliderTrackOverride colours to joker's insane diff?
  4. It doesn't matter at all but you can turn off widescreen mode on Hikan's and on Akitoshi's diffs.
  5. Also, this isn't an issue but if Easy, Normal and Extra diffs have capsed first letter in name, why insane haven't?
I won't do metadata check here because you have good resources in description.

[Hikan's Easy]
  1. 00:26:460 (3) - 00:29:157 (1) - If you have emphasised these vocal lines by repeats like these ones, why you haven't put slider like this 00:31:854 (4,5) - here, when kind of rhythm is the same? It feels like it brokes consistency a bit so I prefer to change these 2 sliders into one like on places highlighted by me before.
  2. 00:35:562 (3) - 00:37:247 (2) - I think this stack can cause some reading problems for beginners. It makes repeat which is placed under this circle hardly noticable. It's not that level it makes this stack unrankable I guess but for beginners it can be very hard so I prefer to avoid it. If you will swap 2 with 4 you'll get good looking patter without this issue without too much effort.
  3. 00:42:640 (3,4) - On these sliders rhythm is a bit other with one on 00:41:292 (1,2) - these ones so I think it should be somehow emphasised. Changing shape for 00:42:640 (3,4) - these ones would work nice here. What are you think about changing them to straight ones?
  4. 00:51:404 (3,4,5) - I think this spacing is too different for easy diff. I prefer change it to 1 during entire of pattern to keep consistency.
[Normal]
  1. I really don't think so you should put circle 00:33:876 (2) - here, because rhythm on next red tick feels like it shouldn't be clickable. I think rhythmical ctrl+g 00:33:876 (2,3) - here would works nice here.
  2. 00:43:989 (1,2) - What are you think about using 1.0DS here like you did on rest of the map just to keep consistency?
[Akitoshi's Hard]
  1. 00:08:595 (5,6) - Don't you think you should unstack these two circles? It doesn't fit here because you have used these 1/2 doubles to emphasise kind of sound which exists 00:07:584 (1,2) - here or 00:08:258 (3,4) - here. // 00:10:955 (3,4,5) - Similar issue here, you should apply ctrl+g for rythm.
  2. 00:51:573 (4,1) - If you are changing spacing here because of music emphasising you should do this on similar sounds too. (00:49:382 (1) - 01:00:168 - etc.).
  3. 01:02:359 (4,5,6,1) - I think this jump is a bit too much for hard diff. It feels very hard in comparsion to rest of map prefer nerf it to ~1.4 and stack 01:02:022 (3,6) - them to less messy look.
[joker's insane]
  1. 00:12:135 (2) - This slider feels like it doesn't follow anything. You have important beat 00:12:303 - here, consider reworking structure of rythm on this moment.
will continue later i guess.
Akitoshi

Venix wrote:

[Akitoshi's Hard]
  1. 00:08:595 (5,6) - Don't you think you should unstack these two circles? It doesn't fit here because you have used these 1/2 doubles to emphasise kind of sound which exists 00:07:584 (1,2) - here or 00:08:258 (3,4) - here. // 00:10:955 (3,4,5) - Similar issue here, you should apply ctrl+g for rythm. i'm stacking them for the guitar's melody
  2. 00:51:573 (4,1) - If you are changing spacing here because of music emphasising you should do this on similar sounds too. (00:49:382 (1) - 01:00:168 - etc.).
  3. 01:02:359 (4,5,6,1) - I think this jump is a bit too much for hard diff. It feels very hard in comparsion to rest of map prefer nerf it to ~1.4 and stack 01:02:022 (3,6) - them to less messy look.
no reply = fixed ,thanks!

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Venix wrote:

Hello~ From queue!

Red means this point is about unrankable thing/thing can cause disqualification.
[joker's insane]
  1. 00:12:135 (2) - This slider feels like it doesn't follow anything. You have important beat 00:12:303 - here, consider reworking structure of rythm on this moment. im following guitar sound obviously like 01:22:247 (2) - , should be fine imo
will continue later i guess.
@Milan-: fixed all!

thanks both!

coxo
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Hikan

Milan- wrote:

easy
-00:08:932 (1,2,3) - guitar is different from the beginning but you keep using the same rhythm, try to vary it a bit like http://puu.sh/xClhM/b3214fae64.jpg ? seems a bit dangerous but I will try
-00:33:539 - 00:34:213 - missing clap added back

Venix wrote:

[Hikan's Easy]
  1. 00:26:460 (3) - 00:29:157 (1) - If you have emphasised these vocal lines by repeats like these ones, why you haven't put slider like this 00:31:854 (4,5) - here, when kind of rhythm is the same? It feels like it brokes consistency a bit so I prefer to change these 2 sliders into one like on places highlighted by me before.3/2 reverse slider before another 1/1 reverse is not a good choice imo, they would be easily confused. I want more white tick here so ppl can get that, the 1/1 reverse, better
  2. 00:35:562 (3) - 00:37:247 (2) - I think this stack can cause some reading problems for beginners. It makes repeat which is placed under this circle hardly noticable. It's not that level it makes this stack unrankable I guess but for beginners it can be very hard so I prefer to avoid it. If you will swap 2 with 4 you'll get good looking patter without this issue without too much effort. this is fine imo, one measure is already too long to have the circle fully disappeared, and as it is a pattern, I think they will know that clear enough. By swapping 2 and 4, it just messs everything up
  3. 00:42:640 (3,4) - On these sliders rhythm is a bit other with one on 00:41:292 (1,2) - these ones so I think it should be somehow emphasised. Changing shape for 00:42:640 (3,4) - these ones would work nice here. What are you think about changing them to straight ones? sounds reasonable but maybe no sorry, the lyrics is a sentence itself after all, I should make a clean pattern here.
  4. 00:51:404 (3,4,5) - I think this spacing is too different for easy diff. I prefer change it to 1 during entire of pattern to keep consistency. o shit
Thanks!

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Topic Starter
Shunao

Venix wrote:

Hello~ From queue!

Red means this point is about unrankable thing/thing can cause disqualification.

[General]
  1. I don't get the logic behaind why "o.mp3" file exists in folder, it's another song file so you should delete it hence.
  2. I think adding kiais like ones on other diffs to Hikan's diff is fine option just because it looks better and works better for consistency across difficulties.
  3. What are you think about adding SliderBorder and SliderTrackOverride colours to joker's insane diff?
  4. It doesn't matter at all but you can turn off widescreen mode on Hikan's and on Akitoshi's diffs.
  5. Also, this isn't an issue but if Easy, Normal and Extra diffs have capsed first letter in name, why insane haven't?
I won't do metadata check here because you have good resources in description.

[Normal]
  1. I really don't think so you should put circle 00:33:876 (2) - here, because rhythm on next red tick feels like it shouldn't be clickable. I think rhythmical ctrl+g 00:33:876 (2,3) - here would works nice here. ctrl+g it's not very a good idea because 00:34:045 - need to clickable there is a piano sound
  2. 00:43:989 (1,2) - What are you think about using 1.0DS here like you did on rest of the map just to keep consistency?
will continue later i guess. waiting mod for last diff :p
No reply mean fixed~

Thanks for modding!~
Battle


[Normal]
  1. 00:03:539 (2,3,4,5,6) - idk the rhythm that you're choosing to follow here is kinda obscure, like on an immediate playthough, I don't think people will be focusing on the guitar in the background
  2. 00:35:730 (7) - it kinda seems really dense here so you could just delete this note tbh, the slider for 6 make an abrupt stop to go along w/ the vocals so it works fine enough if you remove it (plus there's not anything too remarkable on 7 rn and it goes much better since it's transitioning to a slower part)
  3. 00:55:449 (2,3,4) - better rhythm below tbh
  4. 01:10:786 - ur going over a strong vocal here when u've mainly been focused on vocals z

easy hard insane were fine tho

I guess this mostly ended up just being a mod for the normal lol, but the extra is kinda meh in comparison to some of the other stuff, a lot of like straight-hard cut stuff like 00:48:034 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - with equal spacing kinda doesn't develop a whole bunch of emphasis on any specific note. Circle sequences such as 00:51:067 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - really don't have a whole lot of focus to them, which kinda just end up making them seem like circles to raise the difficulty imo. Because of all the sharp movement n stuff, things like 00:10:618 (2,3,4,5,6) - end up looking like it'd be pretty awk in gameplay just cuz of the angles also im kinda shook that 00:14:326 - the supposedly calm section has a lot more circle compared to after the next green at 00:24:944 - clickable

idk the extra kinda just ended up not having enough contrast between certain points

gl thoooo
Topic Starter
Shunao

Battle wrote:



[Normal]
  1. 00:03:539 (2,3,4,5,6) - idk the rhythm that you're choosing to follow here is kinda obscure, like on an immediate playthough, I don't think people will be focusing on the guitar in the background
  2. 00:35:730 (7) - it kinda seems really dense here so you could just delete this note tbh, the slider for 6 make an abrupt stop to go along w/ the vocals so it works fine enough if you remove it (plus there's not anything too remarkable on 7 rn and it goes much better since it's transitioning to a slower part)
  3. 00:55:449 (2,3,4) - better rhythm below tbh
  4. 01:10:786 - ur going over a strong vocal here when u've mainly been focused on vocals z

    Fixed all!~

easy hard insane were fine tho

I guess this mostly ended up just being a mod for the normal lol, but the extra is kinda meh in comparison to some of the other stuff, a lot of like straight-hard cut stuff like 00:48:034 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - with equal spacing kinda doesn't develop a whole bunch of emphasis on any specific note. Circle sequences such as 00:51:067 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - really don't have a whole lot of focus to them, which kinda just end up making them seem like circles to raise the difficulty imo. Because of all the sharp movement n stuff, things like 00:10:618 (2,3,4,5,6) - end up looking like it'd be pretty awk in gameplay just cuz of the angles also im kinda shook that 00:14:326 - the supposedly calm section has a lot more circle compared to after the next green at 00:24:944 - clickable

idk the extra kinda just ended up not having enough contrast between certain points

aaa first extra for rank is not very easy to map.. rip c':

gonna remap some parts ~


gl thoooo
Thanks for modding!~
Asuka_-
from my q (joker's reqest)
im not good at english and modding.


joker's Insane

Battleさんがok出してるけど....xd  まあ一応書きますw
(なのでめんどくさかったら無視してくださいww)

00:40:449 (2,3) - 少しDS飛ばしすぎな感じがしました。
00:38:595 (1,2,3,1,2) - の配置のパターンを考えても少し違和感があるような気がするし、一応00:41:292 - から曲調ががらりと変わるようになってるので、それに合わせて00:41:292 (1) - からDS飛ばすようにして00:40:449 (2,3) - はもう少し狭めたほうが曲に合ってるような気がします。。
https://i.gyazo.com/39487193814f1be551d ... d755a9.png
これくらいでいいかも??

01:18:371 - プレイしててちょっとだけ違和感ありました。 clickable?
ギターの性質的に01:15:674 - や01:21:067 - と同じだと思うんで、直後jumpだけどここはclickさせたいような気がします。。。

top
00:12:219 - sound here xd

00:37:753 (2) - bit nazi, curve?

00:49:887 (2,3,4,1) -
looks a bit too cramped compared to other patterns xd
please try to yuse more distance here.
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/91cb4c1c8f24f57d783 ... 606f71.png

00:56:123 (1) -
if you curve a bit, it will be easy for the player to read the next stream.
https://i.gyazo.com/f899cc654b510fb8d8c ... 05bda8.png

00:56:966 (8) -
if you widen the distance a little more, you can emphasize the next 1/1break imo.
please try to move this to 167:324.

01:06:067 (3,4) -
pls more disatance lol
I think that it is fun to make the distance of 01:06:067 (3,4) - wider than the distance of 01:05:899 (2,3) - .
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/e9b04ca8108e8830993 ... 96a9d6.png

01:23:342 - 01:23:511 - ex diff xd (there were mapped in joker's i)

good luck!! (^^♪
Topic Starter
Shunao

Asuka_- wrote:

from my q (joker's reqest)
im not good at english and modding.

top
00:12:219 - sound here xd

00:37:753 (2) - bit nazi, curve? i wanted a straight transition for change the flow

00:49:887 (2,3,4,1) -
looks a bit too cramped compared to other patterns xd
please try to yuse more distance here.
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/91cb4c1c8f24f57d783 ... 606f71.png

00:56:123 (1) -
if you curve a bit, it will be easy for the player to read the next stream.
https://i.gyazo.com/f899cc654b510fb8d8c ... 05bda8.png

00:56:966 (8) -
if you widen the distance a little more, you can emphasize the next 1/1break imo.
please try to move this to 167:324.

01:06:067 (3,4) -
pls more disatance lol
I think that it is fun to make the distance of 01:06:067 (3,4) - wider than the distance of 01:05:899 (2,3) - .
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/e9b04ca8108e8830993 ... 96a9d6.png

01:23:342 - 01:23:511 - ex diff xd (there were mapped in joker's i) but the most importants sounds are on red and white ticks

good luck!! (^^♪
No reply mean fixed!~

Thanks for modding!~ ^^
Eir_DELETED
oops i forget to post the reply in here... wtf 400 posts

@Asuka_-
01:18:371 - これなんですけど、たしかにwhite tickのところにあるギターを拾ってもいいと思ったんですが、 この譜面見たときに単発が5つつづくのはなんか個人的にしっくりこなかったのと、00:08:090 (3) - との一貫性を考えてとりあえずキープしときます。。。残りはなおしました。感謝です!ありがとう!

gg
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Topic Starter
Shunao
no problem~ d
Pulse
hi, m4m from your q!

[General]
  1. joker's Insane mapsetID is on -1
[Hikan's Easy]
I don't like to mention stuffs like this but some blankets are a little bit off while others are perfect. You probably could improve some shapes in order to standardize blanket "quality":
  1. 00:39:944 (4) - now | maybe
  2. 00:43:989 (1)
  3. 00:58:146 (2)
  4. 01:17:022 (2)
[Normal]
  1. 00:15:674 (4) - Something like this flows and looks better than a straight slider imo. I don't think that straight sliders are good choices on movements like this on low diffs because newer players sometimes are either REALLY focused on follow slider shapes or keeping previous movement direction (diagonal down), and this probably could make them miss (5) sometimes, so a curved slider would help to avoid both cases
[joker's Insane]
  1. 01:18:202 (3) - Not big deal but movement from (2) to (3) is kinda "could be better" to me. Maybe Ctrl+G?
[Just make it!!]
  1. 00:10:281 (1) - I think that this slider could be kinda curved like 00:10:955 (4)
  2. 00:14:326 (1) - Maybe you should Ctrl+G this since you're making every single upcoming sliders reversed between themselves
  3. 01:12:977 (1,2,1) - oh god y e s loved it
Sorry for pointing few things. The whole set seems already really great to me, such a great song btw

Good luck!!
Saltssaumure
Really late reply from my modqueue. Sorry about the delay.

[Just make it!]
00:13:483 (6,7,8) - little bit hard to tell these are 1/4 jumps as the spacing is similar to 00:12:303 (3,4) which is 1/2. 01:12:303 (1,2,3) - here it's the same pattern but much more readable bc the previous jumps are much larger.
00:37:247 (1,2,3) - 2 would look better as a curved slider, as other patterns have symmetrical sliders.

[joker's Insane]
OD7 feels a little too lenient for the streams, consider raising to OD8.
00:42:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the pattern doesn't show the strong vocals on red ticks - consider changing so that the jumps go to circles on red ticks.
01:05:899 (1,1,1) - the player already can tell SV is increasing as the same slider shape makes it easy to notice. NC not needed.

[Akitoshi's Hard]
Not sure if SV 0.8 to 1.3 suddenly is suitable for a mid-level Hard, consider nerfing a little.
00:12:977 (1,2,3,4) - strange flow through this section.
01:00:168 (1) - special slider shape clashes with the rest of the slider shapes.

[Normal]
00:15:674 (4,5) - end of 4 and end of 5 sound stronger than start of 5.

[Hikan's Easy]
There's slight blanket issues throughout the map, but not worth individually mentioning.
00:14:326 - break isn't necessary in such a short map, it's more interesting to map all of the song.

Good luck with your map!
Topic Starter
Shunao

Pulse wrote:

hi, m4m from your q!

[General]
  1. joker's Insane mapsetID is on -1
[Normal]
  1. 00:15:674 (4) - Something like this flows and looks better than a straight slider imo. I don't think that straight sliders are good choices on movements like this on low diffs because newer players sometimes are either REALLY focused on follow slider shapes or keeping previous movement direction (diagonal down), and this probably could make them miss (5) sometimes, so a curved slider would help to avoid both cases
[Just make it!!]
  1. 00:10:281 (1) - I think that this slider could be kinda curved like 00:10:955 (4) it's fine here, i like it straight
  2. 00:14:326 (1) - Maybe you should Ctrl+G this since you're making every single upcoming sliders reversed between themselves
  3. 01:12:977 (1,2,1) - oh god y e s loved it c:
Sorry for pointing few things. The whole set seems already really great to me, such a great song btw

Good luck!!

Saltssaumure wrote:

Really late reply from my modqueue. Sorry about the delay.

[Just make it!]
00:13:483 (6,7,8) - little bit hard to tell these are 1/4 jumps as the spacing is similar to 00:12:303 (3,4) which is 1/2. 01:12:303 (1,2,3) - here it's the same pattern but much more readable bc the previous jumps are much larger. i spoke with some bn about these sliders, i make a spacing like that for a better playability and movement
00:37:247 (1,2,3) - 2 would look better as a curved slider, as other patterns have symmetrical sliders. i wanted to change transition of flow so this is why i make it straight

[Normal]
00:15:674 (4,5) - end of 4 and end of 5 sound stronger than start of 5. i don't think so :v

Good luck with your map!
No reply mean fixed ~

Thanks for modding guys!!
Akitoshi

Saltssaumure wrote:

[Akitoshi's Hard]
Not sure if SV 0.8 to 1.3 suddenly is suitable for a mid-level Hard, consider nerfing a little. its ok i guess
00:12:977 (1,2,3,4) - strange flow through this section. how it became strange when it's just circular flow? :3
01:00:168 (1) - special slider shape clashes with the rest of the slider shapes. ok
thanks!

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Hikan

Pulse wrote:

hi, m4m from your q!
[Hikan's Easy]
I don't like to mention stuffs like this but some blankets are a little bit off while others are perfect. You probably could improve some shapes in order to standardize blanket "quality":
  1. 00:39:944 (4) - now | maybe
  2. 00:43:989 (1)
  3. 00:58:146 (2)
  4. 01:17:022 (2)
    yea.

Saltssaumure wrote:

[Hikan's Easy]
There's slight blanket issues throughout the map, but not worth individually mentioning.
00:14:326 - break isn't necessary in such a short map, it's more interesting to map all of the song. the point is I could find a true rhythm for this section instead of 1/1 spam or 3/2 reverse sliders spam, 3/2 are just same with the later part and it even makes the diff more boring
Thanks!

changed shapes and simplified the kiai
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newton-
from q

[akitoshi's hard]
  1. im hard too daddy
  2. 00:24:438 (2,1) - people might think this is a similar gap to 00:23:764 (1,2) - due to the sudden break in ds
  3. 01:05:393 (1,2,3,4) - i think you should map the synth in the bg instead, it's much more prominent than before so that should be reflected in the map
  4. 01:24:269 (1) - could still space this further to sth like 1.3x ds, this doesnt really get the emphasis it deserves

[joker's insane]
  1. 00:09:775 (3,5,1,2) - equidistance here would make this look much nicer, moving 00:09:775 (3) - to 166|198 could work
  2. 00:40:955 (3,4,5,6,1) - overlapping instead of stacking might reflect the whoosh better since it's a movement in object placement mimicking a movement in pitch
[just make it!!]
  1. 00:05:393 (3) - probably could move it somewhere like 288|275 to keep flow while not making it cramped with 1
  2. 00:14:663 (2,3,4,5) - space these out from each other a bit? they seem too cramped imo
  3. 00:53:258 (4,1) - would fit better as a 1/1 imo, would fit the held vocal a lot more. you used a redtick 1/1 on the held vocal on 00:54:607 (1) - so it should be fine
  4. 00:56:123 (1,2) - one of the only 1/4 jumps in the map, make this more readable by ncing 2 or removing the jump or otherwise
  5. 00:56:966 (8,1) - might look like 1/2
  6. 00:58:651 (6,1,4) - equidistance here maybe
  7. 01:07:416 (2,3,1) - nc spam to indicate 1/1? these are close enough to look like 1/2 taking the map into context imo
  8. 01:12:640 (3,1) - maybe misread here too idk
good luck!
Akitoshi

newton- wrote:

from q

[akitoshi's hard]
  1. im hard too daddy gago >:(
  2. 00:24:438 (2,1) - people might think this is a similar gap to 00:23:764 (1,2) - due to the sudden break in ds it's safe i guess? gonna change it when someone else pointed
  3. 01:05:393 (1,2,3,4) - i think you should map the synth in the bg instead, it's much more prominent than before so that should be reflected in the map
  4. 01:24:269 (1) - could still space this further to sth like 1.3x ds, this doesnt really get the emphasis it deserves
no reply = fixed, thank you uwu

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Title:Make it Real (Short Ver.)
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Artist:Kaori Oda
ArtistUnicode:織田かおり
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Version:Akitoshi's Hard
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Tags:Make it 津波幸平 Tsunami Kohei Sound Jewel Designers hikan akitoshi joker-
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Topic Starter
Shunao

newton- wrote:

from q

[just make it!!]
  1. 00:05:393 (3) - probably could move it somewhere like 288|275 to keep flow while not making it cramped with 1
  2. 00:14:663 (2,3,4,5) - space these out from each other a bit? they seem too cramped imo
  3. 00:53:258 (4,1) - would fit better as a 1/1 imo, would fit the held vocal a lot more. you used a redtick 1/1 on the held vocal on 00:54:607 (1) - so it should be fine
  4. 00:56:123 (1,2) - one of the only 1/4 jumps in the map, make this more readable by ncing 2 or removing the jump or otherwise
  5. 00:56:966 (8,1) - might look like 1/2 it's fine imo
  6. 00:58:651 (6,1,4) - equidistance here maybe
  7. 01:07:416 (2,3,1) - nc spam to indicate 1/1? these are close enough to look like 1/2 taking the map into context imo
  8. 01:12:640 (3,1) - maybe misread here too idk
good luck!
No reply mean fixed ~

Thanks for modding!!
Nevo
uh imma just do some stuf :^)

Just Make It!!

00:48:876 (5) - maybe raise the spacing a tad bit so it matches up with 00:48:371 (2,3) -
00:55:281 (3) - blanket of the strum could be little bit better 00:56:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe make this the same spacing as 00:54:101 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - since like they are roughly the same intensity
00:56:798 (6) - you could make this a kick sldier to give more impact to the next note but meh just a random idea
01:01:348 (1,2,3) - nothing wrong i just dislike wide angles ;-; (its completely fine tho like dont worry xd)
01:02:191 (4) - should have more spacing than 01:02:022 (3) - since its a more "intense" beat idk the right word the beat is louder ¯\_(´・◡・`)_/¯
01:07:416 (1) - maybe move this like a little over so the 01:07:416 (1,1,1) - makes a perfect triangle
01:11:292 (3,4) - maybe rotate these 2 degrees so its more parallel with 01:10:955 (1,2) - i may be nitpicking :^)
01:19:550 (3,4,5,6) - maybe adjust things so it makes a perfect square

at least i tried
(´・◡・`)
Eir_DELETED

Pulse wrote:

[General]
  1. joker's Insane mapsetID is on -1 what happen
[joker's Insane]
  1. 01:18:202 (3) - Not big deal but movement from (2) to (3) is kinda "could be better" to me. Maybe Ctrl+G? nope, i think it's unnecessary to gain distance on here

Saltssaumure wrote:

[joker's Insane]
OD7 feels a little too lenient for the streams, consider raising to OD8. nah, OD spread is fine now
00:42:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the pattern doesn't show the strong vocals on red ticks - consider changing so that the jumps go to circles on red ticks. those circles are clearly following drum, and also dont follow vocals. there is no issues
01:05:899 (1,1,1) - the player already can tell SV is increasing as the same slider shape makes it easy to notice. NC not needed. it's just my preference. but if it feels kinda NC spamming for some modders, i will remove it

newton- wrote:

[joker's insane]
  1. 00:09:775 (3,5,1,2) - equidistance here would make this look much nicer, moving 00:09:775 (3) - to 166|198 could work nice
  2. 00:40:955 (3,4,5,6,1) - overlapping instead of stacking might reflect the whoosh better since it's a movement in object placement mimicking a movement in pitch well... should be fine right now imo.
thanks everybody :3

k
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Shunao
going in grave for sometimes (need a little work on last diff and try to rank my pending maps)
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