Kaori Oda - Make it Real (Short Ver.)

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Kisses wrote:

Easy
  1. 00:03:202 (1) - because there's a big drum hit at 00:03:034 the timing of this object is a bit ambiguous imo (it can be easily confused with 00:03:034 )). Because of this I would recommend to delete this circle and have 00:03:539 (2) as your first object okay
  2. 00:31:854 (4,5) - I think it's better to use a 3/2 reverse slider like 00:26:460 (3,1) to map the vocals like you have done for the rest of the section 3/2 reverse slider before another 1/1 reverse is not a choice imo, they would be easily confused. I want more white tick here so ppl can get that better
  3. 00:52:753 (5,6) - These are quite close. It would be fine to increase the spacing between the slider bodies so that they are similar to the DS spacing adjusted
  4. 01:12:303 (3,4) - To me it's really bland to map to 2 different sounds with the same rhythm ( 1/1 slider) . I think deleting 01:12:977 (4) would help to reflect the song better by emphasising the quiet part. nice
Thanks

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timemon wrote:

[joker's insane]
why doesn't your diff use the border skin my bad. however i dont know how to consist with others about that... sorry for noob

00:44:326 (2) - just center this, no need to avoid overlap, it looks off i dont place only for avoiding overlap, but also to make better flow than straight flow imo

Kujinn wrote:

m4m ~ Sorry its late D:
[joker's]
  1. 00:01:180 (1) - omg, no, pls, bring it back to white tick, this was actually so annoying during gameplay. i assume the white tick doesnt audible anything,but i changed the spinner as you said considering playability
  2. 00:25:786 (3,4) - maybe ctrl g and change it to something like this? http://prntscr.com/giqwlc not bad idea, but i'd to keep current pattern since too much distance on 00:25:955 (4,5) - as your suggested pattern in my view
  3. 00:47:191 (3) - would improve gameplay if ctrl g imo what the great idea. fixed together with around object
  4. 01:10:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - consider mapping some jumps, this feels way too subtle for the most intense part of the song. Hmm... i know but i dont get an good idea right now. i will reconsider well again when i get same mention from different person
thanks guys!

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Topic Starter
Shunao

Kisses wrote:

Normal
  1. 00:30:168 (6) - Put in the center of the slider end like you did with 00:32:359 (5,6) ?
  2. 00:45:674 (3) - imho I think it would be better to not follow the vocals at all and stick to the drums. It makes it more clearer and easier to follow especially since you've only mapped the drums in the entire build up https://snag.gy/H1sd3B.jpg . If you do this then you can remove the timing point at 00:45:337 which lowers the volume as it won't be needed
    If you don't do this then do the below
  3. 00:45:337 (2) - This object is still part of the loud drum beats so move the timing point to 00:45:674 (3) so it doesn't affect the volume
[] I'll finish this mod later in the week ~

Kujinn wrote:

m4m ~ Sorry its late D:

[just make it!!]
  1. 00:06:236 (1,2) - I think this would work better as a repeat or 3 circles, as each sound are too similar for one to be placed on slider end http://prntscr.com/giqja2 i keep this because it's sound fine with 1/2 sliders imo
  2. 00:11:629 (1) - I would say ctrl g to follow previous pattern more 00:10:955 (4,5,6) -
    00:14:663 (2) - ctrl g? no c:
  3. 00:16:348 (3,4,5,6,3,4,5,6,3,4,5,6,3,4,5,6,3,4,5,6) - consider using a fixed distance snap for these. It is what I made but between 00:15:168 (4,5) - 00:17:865 (4,5) - ... vocals or a little more higher than before
  4. 00:37:753 (2,3) - maybe remove 00:38:258 (3) - and push previous slider towers next white tick i like this i don't want to change it :/ and there is no sound on the white tick
  5. 00:46:180 (2,1) - Because there's already a large spacing between 00:46:011 (1,2) - why not stack 00:46:180 (2,1) - for increase emphasis?
  6. 00:47:191 (3,4) - I feel like this is too much too early, consider using a slider. http://prntscr.com/giqpcp
  7. 00:55:112 (2,3,4,5,6) - It doesn't make sense that this is less spacious than 00:51:067 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
  8. 01:12:303 (1,2,3) - Seriously decreases the intensity of these jumps, maybe space them out more instead of staking to 01:11:629 (5) -
  9. 01:23:933 (6) - place around x369 y 148, just feels better imo.

Good Luck!

timemon wrote:

[Just make it!!]
00:13:146 (2,3,4,5,6) - not even following the music here lol i don't think so
01:23:258 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^

00:38:258 (3) - no support from the music just make the slider before a 3/2 it's good like this tbh

00:57:135 (1,2) - overmapped, the song stops but the map doesn't no there are sounds on the white and blue ticks (electronic sound)

01:11:966 (7,8) - streams

[Normal]
The kiai spins in circle..... keeping the same direction for so long can make your map bland but too late now I guess I would have been able to change it but seen that here I don't really find that he turns on himself, is not even noticed (I don't even have it to notice) I try to do my best so that that cannot go round in circles and to be honest I hate going round in circles so like this is fine

[Easy]

Good luck
No reply mean fixed!

Thanks all for modding!~
negusver
NM as requested

I can't find anything on Easy/Normal

[Akitoshi's Hard]

00:04:213 - should be emphasized imo, I'd use https://drive.google.com/uc?id=0BzAUOW6 ... 3JWOF9xYzg and stack 2 with 3
In case you decide to do that I'd rather not stack 00:04:887 (1,2) - and 00:10:281 (1,2) -
I'd like to see 00:05:225 - be clickable; its different from 00:07:584 (1,2) - where the long slider serves as buildup
00:09:438 - is emphasized movement-wise but shouldn't be imo, I think making 00:09:269 - clickable instead of repeat would solve this
00:47:528 (4,5) - I'd use circle slider for drum on 00:47:696 -
same for 00:48:876 (3,4) -
01:14:494 (3,4) - I think stacking these and move 01:15:168 (2) - to 01:15:000 - for better emphasis of distorted string noise, would also be consistent with 01:16:348 (1) -

I can't really judge emphasis on higher diffs as I can't play them, rhythm seems to be consistent.

Yeah not much to say, sorry.
Akitoshi

negusver wrote:

[Akitoshi's Hard]

00:04:213 - should be emphasized imo, I'd use https://drive.google.com/uc?id=0BzAUOW6 ... 3JWOF9xYzg and stack 2 with 3
In case you decide to do that I'd rather not stack 00:04:887 (1,2) - and 00:10:281 (1,2) - guitar rhythm
I'd like to see 00:05:225 - be clickable; its different from 00:07:584 (1,2) - where the long slider serves as buildup ^ its kinda obvious enuf
00:09:438 - is emphasized movement-wise but shouldn't be imo, I think making 00:09:269 - clickable instead of repeat would solve this variation from guitar rhythm, also it emphasized well already imo
00:47:528 (4,5) - I'd use circle slider for drum on 00:47:696 - 3 circles are way too much here, also im following vocals here :/
same for 00:48:876 (3,4) - ^
01:14:494 (3,4) - I think stacking these and move 01:15:168 (2) - to 01:15:000 - for better emphasis of distorted string noise, would also be consistent with 01:16:348 (1) - that will ruin my structure ;; also it's new section from kiai so i dont need to be consistent anymore

I can't really judge emphasis on higher diffs as I can't play them, rhythm seems to be consistent.

Yeah not much to say, sorry.
thanks for looking!

i fixed sth
osu file format v14

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Creator:ShogunMoon
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Hishiro Chizuru
Hikan's Easy

00:12:977 (2) - control-j this so that the curves go into each other (u did the same for 00:08:932 (1,2) - so I thought for consistency sake and aesthetics, u should do this)
00:52:753 (5,6) - I would reconsider rhythm here as you usually but clicks on strong notes but 00:53:595 (6) - doesnt feel strong at all
01:04:382 (6) - ^

Normal

00:08:595 (7) - make this into circle because you did the same here 00:05:899 (8,1) - and 00:11:292 (7,1) -
00:35:899 (1,2,3,4) - felt a bit ugly when playing

Akitoshi's Hard

00:12:135 (2,2) - reading diff spike uwu I would maybe overlap (just mentioning because two of my friends I used this in a multi with who are low ranked both missed the stack)
00:28:820 (4,3) - not much reason for an overlap
00:51:573 (4) - i would control-j to keep flow, since u already did the same linear flow break for 00:50:562 (1) - which is a nc but this one isn't
01:02:022 (3,6) - same deal as before
01:03:202 (2,3) - no need for overlap as you didn't here: 00:52:078 (1,2,3) -
01:12:977 (3) - maybe turn this into a slider with slow sv that ends on the red tick?
01:16:854 (2,2) - uwu overlap that I dont find pretty

Joker's Insane

00:04:887 (1,2) - maybe turn this into one slider (since it's a new beat) and 00:05:562 (4) - add more clicks into this area (and then reapply to the rest of the rhythm pattern afterwards)
00:21:236 (2) - straight slider imo since u had a straight slider before the 00:21:236 (2) - curved pattern
01:06:910 (1) - shorten slider and make a double? just an idea, felt like it goes better
01:06:910 (1,2) - if you ignore above, stack these tho (this too 01:09:607 (1) - )

JUST MAKE IT!!1!!11111

00:03:539 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i noticed this repeating, so I guess it's justified buuuutttt . . . 00:03:539 (1,2,3) - going clockwise and 00:04:382 (4,5,6) - going counterclockwise was weird for me to play. Just felt like strain for no reason
00:08:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I just noticed this doesn't follow the break of flow in each beat I mentioned above.
** Fix one of the issues I mentioned above pls **
00:15:000 (3,4,5,6) - and 00:16:348 (3,4,5,6) - different spacing but same sounds and rhythm :thonk:
00:20:393 (3,4,5,6) - How come you went to obtuse linear jumps? (here as well 00:21:741 (3,4,5,6) - ) those are uncomfortable to hit (and there's not much reason for a bit of a spike) uwu
00:22:416 (1,2) - how come these ones are curved and facing out in opposite directions unlike: 00:18:371 (1,2) - and 00:21:067 (1,2) - )
00:27:809 (1,2) - feels out of place in the song
00:32:359 (4) - why stack? you've been overlapping these patterns (ex: 00:26:460 (1,2,3,4) - , etc)
00:37:247 (1,2) - curve both for aesthetics sake? or keep both straight?
00:57:135 (1,2,3) - triple seems a bit too overmapped especially with the circle density right before this
** final note of this diff, I was confused with you use of stacks and overlaps, some times u overlapped and in the same rhythm at another time you stacked, etc **


Good luck, keep pushing this, this song needs to be ranked! >w<
_handholding

Hard
  1. 00:24:101 (2) - This object feels really unnecessary and forced. If you added this note fo the sake of polarity then it's not really needed as the drum beats are so predominant it's easy to follow with your ears. The object takes a lot of emphasis way from the drums themselves so imho it would play better alongside the song to delete it
  2. 00:46:180 (2) - suggestion ~ Because the spacing before the kiai is similar to the kiai itself it takes away quite a bit of emphasis from the explosiveness of the chorus. I think a good idea would be to have a small jump between 00:46:011 (1,2) whilst turning 00:46:180 (2) - into a circle and stacking it on top 00:46:517 (1) - . The 1/1 stack helps create a calm before the storm feeling. example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9060649
  3. 00:56:966 (4) - same suggestion as above

    add hitsounds ~

Insane
  1. 00:13:651 (1,2) - such a big jump after a stream is really, really hard. Couldn't you make it smaller? A size like this perhaps https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9060693 ?
  2. 01:23:932 (2) - ^
    add hitsounds ~

top diff
  1. 00:20:393 (3,4,5,6) - use the same DS for each object? It would make it look more structured and neater
  2. 00:21:741 (3,4,5,6) - ^
  3. 01:12:472 (2,3) - I honestly find the spacing of these objects a bit lack luster in comparison with the rest of the map. same with 01:23:764 (5,6) - and 00:13:651 (5,6) . Most people at this difficulty will play these kick sliders as circles, so yeah.
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Topic Starter
Shunao
aa my bad I would have to give your kudosu on your post above xd

anyway gonna reply when i have time ~
Akitoshi

[ amb1d3x ] wrote:

Akitoshi's Hard

00:12:135 (2,2) - reading diff spike uwu I would maybe overlap (just mentioning because two of my friends I used this in a multi with who are low ranked both missed the stack) they have enuf time for fading
00:28:820 (4,3) - not much reason for an overlap and this one is for easier reading for what ur saying for reading issue, perfect stack is really hard for this time gap
00:51:573 (4) - i would control-j to keep flow, since u already did the same linear flow break for 00:50:562 (1) - which is a nc but this one isn't i prefer current flow
01:02:022 (3,6) - same deal as before did overlap for easier reading
01:03:202 (2,3) - no need for overlap as you didn't here: 00:52:078 (1,2,3) - variations are good thing
01:12:977 (3) - maybe turn this into a slider with slow sv that ends on the red tick? not my fetish...
01:16:854 (2,2) - uwu overlap that I dont find pretty i tried

Kisses wrote:

Hard
  1. 00:24:101 (2) - This object feels really unnecessary and forced. If you added this note fo the sake of polarity then it's not really needed as the drum beats are so predominant it's easy to follow with your ears. The object takes a lot of emphasis way from the drums themselves so imho it would play better alongside the song to delete it ok
  2. 00:46:180 (2) - suggestion ~ Because the spacing before the kiai is similar to the kiai itself it takes away quite a bit of emphasis from the explosiveness of the chorus. I think a good idea would be to have a small jump between 00:46:011 (1,2) whilst turning 00:46:180 (2) - into a circle and stacking it on top 00:46:517 (1) - . The 1/1 stack helps create a calm before the storm feeling. example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9060649 tried similar things,
    thanks for that
  3. 00:56:966 (4) - same suggestion as above

    add hitsounds ~ soon, or i'll copy the hs from top diff cuz im loaded on reqs atm ;;
thanks!

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[ amb1d3x ] wrote:

Hikan's Easy
Joker's Insane

00:04:887 (1,2) - maybe turn this into one slider (since it's a new beat) and 00:05:562 (4) - add more clicks into this area (and then reapply to the rest of the rhythm pattern afterwards) im following guitar obviously. keep it
00:21:236 (2) - straight slider imo since u had a straight slider before the 00:21:236 (2) - curved pattern hmm... ok
01:06:910 (1) - shorten slider and make a double? just an idea, felt like it goes better it's not my preference
01:06:910 (1,2) - if you ignore above, stack these tho (this too 01:09:607 (1) - ) well... idk the reason. i'd prefer to keep the distances for emphasis of those sounds

Kisses wrote:

Insane
  1. 00:13:651 (1,2) - such a big jump after a stream is really, really hard. Couldn't you make it smaller? A size like this perhaps https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9060693 ? those objects are nerfed a bit
  2. 01:23:932 (2) - ^ ^
    add hitsounds ~ oh, i forget it
thanks!
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Aro
Hey! My mod from chat logs~
21:45 Aro: Hey Shogun! I saw you asked for mod in modreq for your map and i wanted to mention some things in it if you have time now 
21:49 ShogunMoon: umm okay
21:50 ShogunMoon: ready!
21:51 Aro: yeah only some small things ^.^ so first is this one: 00:19:719 (1,2) - i don't know why you patterned it so different from the others in this part :v
21:52 Aro: they are all these 1 2 sliders somewhat symmetrical to each other, but this one stands out and i don't know why
21:53 ShogunMoon: i wanted normal flow with a slider curved and a slider straight
21:54 Aro: but why?
21:55 ShogunMoon: just like this, and if i curved it, i think i'm not going to appreciate it :/
21:55 Aro: this pattering implies that these sliders are special and i don't really get the difference between the others
21:56 Aro: 00:14:326 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - there are in a complete contrast to all these
21:58 ShogunMoon: ye kk fixed~
21:59 Aro: :p ok i mean you don't have to fix it if you can explain your reasoning behind it, but these 2 looked kind of random
22:00 Aro: 00:29:663 (4,5,1) - here you go with the vocal and here 00:32:696 (5,6,7,1) - you choosed a completely different rhythm and i also wondered why
22:00 ShogunMoon: but you're right so i fixed them c:
22:01 Aro: ok ^_^
22:04 ShogunMoon: aah a mistake going to fix that xd
22:07 Aro: ah ok :d 00:13:146 (2,3,4) - also i didn't quit get why you undermapped here :p
22:09 ShogunMoon: i don't undermapped :o
22:09 ShogunMoon: there are sounds on these notes :/
22:09 Aro: yes
22:09 Aro: and sounds on the blue ticks too :o
22:09 Aro: not overmapped. i ment undermapped
22:10 ShogunMoon: my bad xd
22:10 Aro: dont worry ^_^
22:15 ShogunMoon: okay fixed!
22:16 Aro: also.. (but i am not sure about this one) you always used this kind of pattern (00:21:067 (1,2) - two sliders somewhat symmetrical to eachother) , right? Parts of music are different from each other and you can show this by pattering. Using everytime the same pattern kind of blurrs the lines between parts, if you get what i mean ^^'
22:17 Aro: in every part you got these things 00:38:595 (1,2) -
22:17 Aro: but like i said i am not sure about it
22:18 Aro: but sergio told me that contrast in different section of the song is important, and this repeating pattern kind of reminded me about what he said
22:23 ShogunMoon: yes i know but sometimes there is no reason to emphasize pattern i make contrast but just on the important sounds
22:23 Aro: ah ok! got it ^_^
22:25 ShogunMoon: :D
22:25 ShogunMoon: it's finish?
22:27 Aro: 00:49:382 (1,2) - is this blanket perfect? it seems like the 2 has to be a bit more right top, or what do you think?
22:27 Aro: yeah i am finished, only saw this one right now :D
22:28 Aro: 00:57:135 (1,2) - overmapped :o
22:37 ShogunMoon: no there are sound on the white and blue tick :o
22:37 ShogunMoon: 00:57:135 (1,2)
22:37 Aro: oh lol
22:37 ShogunMoon: fixed blanket xd
22:38 ShogunMoon: it's fine i think xd
22:38 Aro: sorry I was so fixed on drum sounds, completely screwed over :o
22:38 ShogunMoon: :c
22:39 Aro: but yeah that's it with my mod ^_^
22:39 ShogunMoon: okayy, thanks!!


Good luck with your Set!!
Topic Starter
Shunao

[ amb1d3x ] wrote:

Normal

00:08:595 (7) - make this into circle because you did the same here 00:05:899 (8,1) - and 00:11:292 (7,1) -
00:35:899 (1,2,3,4) - felt a bit ugly when playing but me i like it it's doesn't look so bad :/

JUST MAKE IT!!1!!11111

00:03:539 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i noticed this repeating, so I guess it's justified buuuutttt . . . 00:03:539 (1,2,3) - going clockwise and 00:04:382 (4,5,6) - going counterclockwise was weird for me to play. Just felt like strain for no reason some players plays it and there are no problem
00:08:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I just noticed this doesn't follow the break of flow in each beat I mentioned above. sorry but it's sound good imo
** Fix one of the issues I mentioned above pls ** :c
00:15:000 (3,4,5,6) - and 00:16:348 (3,4,5,6) - different spacing but same sounds and rhythm :thonk:
00:20:393 (3,4,5,6) - How come you went to obtuse linear jumps? (here as well 00:21:741 (3,4,5,6) - ) those are uncomfortable to hit (and there's not much reason for a bit of a spike) uwu i wanted to make some jumps differents for contrast so i make this lol
00:22:416 (1,2) - how come these ones are curved and facing out in opposite directions unlike: 00:18:371 (1,2) - and 00:21:067 (1,2) - )
00:27:809 (1,2) - feels out of place in the song on the red tick the sound is not very important :/
00:32:359 (4) - why stack? you've been overlapping these patterns (ex: 00:26:460 (1,2,3,4) - , etc) because it's doesn't look bad imo
00:37:247 (1,2) - curve both for aesthetics sake? or keep both straight? no i wanted to make a different flow so i put a curved slider and a straight and plus for a better transition
00:57:135 (1,2,3) - triple seems a bit too overmapped especially with the circle density right before this but on the white and blue ticks there are sounds
** final note of this diff, I was confused with you use of stacks and overlaps, some times u overlapped and in the same rhythm at another time you stacked, etc **

Good luck, keep pushing this, this song needs to be ranked! >w< owo

Kisses wrote:

top diff
  1. 00:20:393 (3,4,5,6) - use the same DS for each object? It would make it look more structured and neater but between 4 and 5 there are vocals who increase so i keep this but if someone tell me this again maybe i'm gonna chance this
  2. 00:21:741 (3,4,5,6) - ^
  3. 01:12:472 (2,3) - I honestly find the spacing of these objects a bit lack luster in comparison with the rest of the map. same with 01:23:764 (5,6) - and 00:13:651 (5,6) . Most people at this difficulty will play these kick sliders as circles, so yeah.
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Rizen
Hikan's Easy
  1. This difficulty seems fine except for one thing. Your NC'ing patterning deviates from the standard "NC per 1 or 2 measures" at certain points. 00:27:809 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - should be NC'd only at 00:27:809 - and 00:30:505 - . Can add one at 00:38:595 (3) - unless you want to keep the 4 measure combo due to that part being the 'slow' part. 00:49:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is a bit long and it's due to you mapping a large white tick with a slider end. You can break this up at 00:52:416 (4) - . Same reasoning applies to 01:03:202 (4) - . Meanwhile, the combo lengths at 01:05:393 (1,2,1,2) - are too short. I recommend removing the combo at 01:06:910 (1) - to fix this.


Normal
  1. 00:33:708 (2) - I don't think this circle fits well here. The white tick after this has a much stronger percussion beat compared to the soft piano on the current red tick. Consider moving the circle to the white tick over.
  2. 00:46:011 (3) - missing clap for the strong drum beat
  3. rest seems good


Akitoshi's Hard
  1. missing hitsounding
  2. 00:23:764 (1,2,3) - This motion here feels quite forced/uncomfortable due to the cursor movement snapping in awkward angles. I highly suggest either repositioning the objects here to accomodate a much smoother flow as the snappiness here seems rather out of place.
  3. 00:29:326 (2,3) - and 00:32:865 (5,1) - I these seem rather out of place imo as you only "break the DS" in this way at only these two timestamps. If they were more prevalent in the difficulty, it would of been fine but since it only happens at these two places, it kinda messes up with the cohesion of the map design. I suggest equalizing DS at these points or using more of these DS breaks.
  4. 00:48:034 (1) - just a minor suggestion, but perhaps you can make this a wavy slider too like 00:58:820 (1) - ?
  5. 00:53:932 (3,4,5) - ctrl+g the rhythm here? I feel as though the two circles here would work better with the drum roll and also pairing up the vocals with triplet sliders seems more fitting. Along with that, also for consistency with 01:04:719 (3,4,5) - .
  6. 01:06:067 (3) - perhaps a V slider would be better to pseudo map the instrument at 01:06:236 -


joker's insane
  1. missing hitsounding
  2. joker's Insane? Need to keep with the mapset difficulty name stylization
  3. 00:08:090 (3,4) - Perhaps circle then slider would fit better here? The white tick at 00:08:258 - has the much stronger guitar and percussion beat compared to the red tick so I think it will be beneficial to make the white tick clickable here.
  4. 00:39:607 (3,1) - is it possible to reuse the "flow stopping" idea you had at 00:36:910 (3,1) - here? Feels more appropriate imo for this slow part.
  5. 01:06:910 (1) - I think ending this slider on a white tick would be better as there is a clear vocal and percussion beat here. Although there is a percussion beat also on the blue tick, ending on the white tick would avoid undermapping it. Or if you want, you can end the slider on the white tick then add a circle to the blue tick to fully map the percussion triplet.
  6. 01:18:202 (3,4) - same thing I as the first point applies here too.


Just make it!!
  1. 00:16:348 (3,4,5,6) - using the same spacing idea as 00:15:000 (3,4,5,6) - doesn't seem very appropriate imo as the vocal pattern for both parts are different. I suggest either making both instances a single DS or changing the second instance's spacing a little bit to accomodate for the variation in vocal patterning.
  2. 00:21:741 (3,4,5,6) - ^
  3. 00:23:090 (3,4) - This increase in spacing doesn't seem very fitting imo as the sound on circle 4 is pretty much the same in tone and intensity as the one on circle 2. I suggest equalizing the DS here and perhaps increase spacing at 00:23:427 (5) - due to the prominent drum beat.
  4. 00:30:505 - I understand you are mapping to the held vocal at this part, but the cymbal crash here is very notable and imo should be prioritised over the vocal (i.e. made clickable)
  5. 00:32:696 (5) - ctrl+g this slider? Right now, the flow at 00:32:359 (4,5,6) - seems rather... caged/oblong, that is that it's kinda uncomfortable. It can be made more comfortable imo by ctrl+g'ing that slider to introduce some diagonal angle flow. It would also give some angle emphasis to 00:33:202 (1) - which is a rather strong beat in the music.
  6. 00:35:899 (1,2,3) - spacing here seems kinda too small compared to the next upcoming patterns of relatively similar intensity. Not to mention that the spacing between these three objects (bigger for object 3) diffs from the other patterns which have a more uniform spacing.
  7. 00:50:562 (1) - accidental whistle on slider head? same at 01:01:348 (1) -
  8. 00:52:753 (3,3) - misstack perhaps?
  9. 00:56:713 - add a circle here? The drum roll at this part extends to 00:56:798 (6) - so leaving a 1/2 gap here seems a bit underwhelming.
  10. 00:57:135 (1,2) - although there are piano sounds on these 1/4 ticks, they are very soft/too quiet and so I think it's not worth mapping circles to. Removing the circles would also leave a 1/1 gap here which I think would be fitting to connect the two kiai halves.
  11. 00:57:303 (3,4,5) - spacing at 3-4 seems too short compared to 4-5. I suggest moving it to somewhere like x:355 y:345 to fix this.
  12. 01:05:899 (2,3,4,5) - I think it would be beneficial to add a jump section here as there is a very clear build up in the music. Also because the spacing/rhythm here seems rather lacking compared to the jump section at 01:01:854 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - which is agruably less intense.
  13. 01:12:977 (1,2) - silence these two extender slider slider ends? There is no beat where these two sliders end so reduced volume would make this part less noisy.

glgl
Hikan

[ amb1d3x ] wrote:

00:12:977 (2) - control-j this so that the curves go into each other (u did the same for 00:08:932 (1,2) - so I thought for consistency sake and aesthetics, u should do this) fixed
00:52:753 (5,6) - I would reconsider rhythm here as you usually but clicks on strong notes but 00:53:595 (6) - doesnt feel strong at all that is the only way I can do to make 00:54:607 (1) - be clickable
01:04:382 (6) - ^
thank

a q p w wrote:

  1. This difficulty seems fine except for one thing. Your NC'ing patterning deviates from the standard "NC per 1 or 2 measures" at certain points. 00:27:809 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - should be NC'd only at 00:27:809 - and 00:30:505 - . Can add one at 00:38:595 (3) - unless you want to keep the 4 measure combo due to that part being the 'slow' part. 00:49:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is a bit long and it's due to you mapping a large white tick with a slider end. You can break this up at 00:52:416 (4) - . Same reasoning applies to 01:03:202 (4) - . Meanwhile, the combo lengths at 01:05:393 (1,2,1,2) - are too short. I recommend removing the combo at 01:06:910 (1) - to fix this. I am bad at nc


glgl
thx

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Topic Starter
Shunao

a q p w wrote:

Normal
  1. 00:33:708 (2) - I don't think this circle fits well here. The white tick after this has a much stronger percussion beat compared to the soft piano on the current red tick. Consider moving the circle to the white tick over.
  2. 00:46:011 (3) - missing clap for the strong drum beat
  3. rest seems good


Just make it!!
  1. 00:16:348 (3,4,5,6) - using the same spacing idea as 00:15:000 (3,4,5,6) - doesn't seem very appropriate imo as the vocal pattern for both parts are different. I suggest either making both instances a single DS or changing the second instance's spacing a little bit to accomodate for the variation in vocal patterning.
  2. 00:21:741 (3,4,5,6) - ^
  3. 00:23:090 (3,4) - This increase in spacing doesn't seem very fitting imo as the sound on circle 4 is pretty much the same in tone and intensity as the one on circle 2. I suggest equalizing the DS here and perhaps increase spacing at 00:23:427 (5) - due to the prominent drum beat.
  4. 00:30:505 - I understand you are mapping to the held vocal at this part, but the cymbal crash here is very notable and imo should be prioritised over the vocal (i.e. made clickable)
  5. 00:32:696 (5) - ctrl+g this slider? Right now, the flow at 00:32:359 (4,5,6) - seems rather... caged/oblong, that is that it's kinda uncomfortable. It can be made more comfortable imo by ctrl+g'ing that slider to introduce some diagonal angle flow. It would also give some angle emphasis to 00:33:202 (1) - which is a rather strong beat in the music.
  6. 00:35:899 (1,2,3) - spacing here seems kinda too small compared to the next upcoming patterns of relatively similar intensity. Not to mention that the spacing between these three objects (bigger for object 3) diffs from the other patterns which have a more uniform spacing.
  7. 00:50:562 (1) - accidental whistle on slider head? same at 01:01:348 (1) -
  8. 00:52:753 (3,3) - misstack perhaps?
  9. 00:56:713 - add a circle here? The drum roll at this part extends to 00:56:798 (6) - so leaving a 1/2 gap here seems a bit underwhelming.
  10. 00:57:135 (1,2) - although there are piano sounds on these 1/4 ticks, they are very soft/too quiet and so I think it's not worth mapping circles to. Removing the circles would also leave a 1/1 gap here which I think would be fitting to connect the two kiai halves.
  11. 00:57:303 (3,4,5) - spacing at 3-4 seems too short compared to 4-5. I suggest moving it to somewhere like x:355 y:345 to fix this. it's doesn't work :/
  12. 01:05:899 (2,3,4,5) - I think it would be beneficial to add a jump section here as there is a very clear build up in the music. Also because the spacing/rhythm here seems rather lacking compared to the jump section at 01:01:854 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - which is agruably less intense. i increase jumps idk if its better lo
  13. 01:12:977 (1,2) - silence these two extender slider slider ends? There is no beat where these two sliders end so reduced volume would make this part less noisy.
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glgl
No reply mean fixed!

Thanks for modding!!~
Akitoshi

a q p w wrote:

Akitoshi's Hard
  1. missing hitsounding copied from top diff :^)
  2. 00:23:764 (1,2,3) - This motion here feels quite forced/uncomfortable due to the cursor movement snapping in awkward angles. I highly suggest either repositioning the objects here to accomodate a much smoother flow as the snappiness here seems rather out of place. i hope it flows better now
  3. 00:29:326 (2,3) - and 00:32:865 (5,1) - I these seem rather out of place imo as you only "break the DS" in this way at only these two timestamps. If they were more prevalent in the difficulty, it would of been fine but since it only happens at these two places, it kinda messes up with the cohesion of the map design. I suggest equalizing DS at these points or using more of these DS breaks. increased the number of DS breaks
  4. 00:48:034 (1) - just a minor suggestion, but perhaps you can make this a wavy slider too like 00:58:820 (1) - ? as you wish
  5. 00:53:932 (3,4,5) - ctrl+g the rhythm here? I feel as though the two circles here would work better with the drum roll and also pairing up the vocals with triplet sliders seems more fitting. Along with that, also for consistency with 01:04:719 (3,4,5) - . ye
  6. 01:06:067 (3) - perhaps a V slider would be better to pseudo map the instrument at 01:06:236 - it's not that noticeable so i think i can keep this w
thank you!

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joker's insane
  1. missing hitsounding oh my
  2. joker's Insane? Need to keep with the mapset difficulty name stylization asdf
  3. 00:08:090 (3,4) - Perhaps circle then slider would fit better here? The white tick at 00:08:258 - has the much stronger guitar and percussion beat compared to the red tick so I think it will be beneficial to make the white tick clickable here.indeed, i'd prefer to click strong drum sound on red tick and i hear those guitar sound are same degree on the red & white ticks imo
  4. 00:39:607 (3,1) - is it possible to reuse the "flow stopping" idea you had at 00:36:910 (3,1) - here? Feels more appropriate imo for this slow part. great
  5. 01:06:910 (1) - I think ending this slider on a white tick would be better as there is a clear vocal and percussion beat here. Although there is a percussion beat also on the blue tick, ending on the white tick would avoid undermapping it. Or if you want, you can end the slider on the white tick then add a circle to the blue tick to fully map the percussion triplet. Hmm... in my intention, i wanna express the "speeding" percussion gradually to use variable slider velocity and simplify rhythm pattern. would make more sense that i keep them in not order to lose the "speeding"
  6. 01:18:202 (3,4) - same thing I as the first point applies here too.^

glgl
thanks!

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Milan-
easy
-00:08:932 (1,2,3) - guitar is different from the beginning but you keep using the same rhythm, try to vary it a bit like http://puu.sh/xClhM/b3214fae64.jpg ?
-00:33:539 - 00:34:213 - missing clap

normal
-00:08:090 - should be whistle instead. altho i think something like http://puu.sh/xClZJ/96c56081b4.jpg will fit better the intensity, like there's a pause on (5) but on (7) it becomes more intense. same later at the copypaste 01:18:034 -

hard
-01:05:225 (5,1) - more or less like 00:54:438 (5,1) - would be cooler i think, like you do so few variations on spacing that these become even more noticeable
-for the same reason would be nice to add some variation to the intro and ending like here 00:11:460 (5,1) -

insane
-01:10:618 (4,5) - these dont fit well with 01:10:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . the snare spam doesnt start yet but you use the same 1/2 stacked circles, as a slider would be better i think
-01:12:303 (1,1,1) - spacing should be the other way around, like http://puu.sh/xCmMt/9affa36ffd.jpg the first two are way stronger, similar to what you did here 00:45:000 (5,1) -

make it
-00:14:326 - dont really get the idea of the so variant spacing you do during this section. like 00:15:000 (3,4,5,6) - is kinda consistent, then 00:16:348 (3,4,5,6) - are changing all the time, then 00:17:696 (3,4,5,6) - are even more consistent, and the weirdest being 00:21:404 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - which is just messy imo. the whole section is quite steady in the music, and spacing should reflect that. things like 00:17:696 (3,4,5,6) - 00:19:045 (3,4,5,6) - are ok with themselves but not with the rest of the section.
-00:28:062 - whistle on this tail sound so off. there's nothing in the music for it

why 2 mp3 in the folder tho xd
Akitoshi
@Milan- fixed both, thank you!

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Topic Starter
Shunao

Milan- wrote:

normal
-00:08:090 - should be whistle instead. altho i think something like http://puu.sh/xClZJ/96c56081b4.jpg will fit better the intensity, like there's a pause on (5) but on (7) it becomes more intense. same later at the copypaste 01:18:034 - i don't like when there are 3 notes stacked for a normal diff tbh

make it
-00:14:326 - dont really get the idea of the so variant spacing you do during this section. like 00:15:000 (3,4,5,6) - is kinda consistent, then 00:16:348 (3,4,5,6) - are changing all the time, then 00:17:696 (3,4,5,6) - are even more consistent, and the weirdest being 00:21:404 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - which is just messy imo. the whole section is quite steady in the music, and spacing should reflect that. things like 00:17:696 (3,4,5,6) - 00:19:045 (3,4,5,6) - are ok with themselves but not with the rest of the section.
-00:28:062 - whistle on this tail sound so off. there's nothing in the music for it

why 2 mp3 in the folder tho xd a
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