Talked with bezbashn in-game and map needs more work in general. Couldn't play the map so I can't be 100% sure, but some emphasizing issues due to sections being very similar spacing-wise yet entirely different music-wise. Patterns are really random too, aside from few individuals.
Good luck!
Good luck!
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19:12 bezbashn: Hi! This is me and I'm back
19:16 Asphyxia: o hi
19:16 Asphyxia: I looked at one of your maps earlier
19:16 Asphyxia: the yooh map
19:16 Asphyxia: idk if what was the right map
19:17 bezbashn: that's it
19:17 bezbashn: cos it only one pending. lol
19:17 Asphyxia: I can't really test maps because I don't have my tablet so I'm just speaking from my experience here
19:18 Asphyxia: you can get someone else to confirm / disagree with my statement but
19:18 Asphyxia: I think the map suffers a bit from emphasizing, the map starts out already with quite a big spacing and it felt the same till the very last kiai
19:19 Asphyxia: I expected more drastic spacing changes between sections that deserve it
19:19 Asphyxia: 00:26:125 - vs 00:50:995 -
19:19 bezbashn: like kiai > more spacing, other parts > less ?
19:19 Asphyxia: like said, can't play the map right now, but the first section I linked (26sec)
19:20 Asphyxia: feels really similar to the 50 one, yet they're very different in terms of music
19:20 Asphyxia: 50 is way more intense
19:20 Asphyxia: and deserves more spacing
19:20 Asphyxia: or 26 would use nerfing
19:20 Asphyxia: my opinion though
19:20 bezbashn: maybe you are correct
19:20 bezbashn: I deffinetley need to rethink some parts because of spacing
19:22 Asphyxia: I think the map as a whole needs also a bit more work, there are some individual patterns that are neat, but majority of the patterns feel really, really random
19:22 Asphyxia: lots of unnecessary overlaps (imo)
19:22 Asphyxia: and sometimes the spacing seems to cut off and not be that consistent either
19:23 bezbashn: it's mostly built up on overlaps
19:23 bezbashn: before was more tho
19:23 Asphyxia: 01:35:767 (5,6) - 01:37:010 (5,6) - 01:38:254 (1,2) -
19:23 Asphyxia: those are fine with spacing, I think the music allows it
19:23 Asphyxia: but then you do stuff like 01:39:497 (5,6) -
19:23 Asphyxia: it just looks weird and it isn't consistent
19:25 Asphyxia: 01:42:606 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this pattern is cool, it's visually consistent in terms of design and spacing and you can see the idea behind it immediately
19:25 Asphyxia: but then
19:25 Asphyxia: 01:46:337 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
19:25 Asphyxia: that feels like a random mess of nothing
19:26 bezbashn: see
19:27 Asphyxia: also uh some small things like
19:27 Asphyxia: 01:58:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -
19:27 Asphyxia: if you do a stream like this, maybe consider making it fully symmetrical or that
19:27 Asphyxia: the sides of the streams are the same?
19:27 Asphyxia: 01:59:393 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - curved nicelty
19:27 Asphyxia: 01:58:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - kinda straight
19:27 bezbashn: it was a strange stream
19:27 bezbashn: i know
19:27 bezbashn: kinda random
19:27 Asphyxia: maybe if you had your own idea and logic behind it, it's fine
19:28 Asphyxia: but just making sure
19:28 bezbashn: actually was going to replace it with nicer one
19:29 Asphyxia: 03:25:507 (1,2) - these minisliders were cute though, they remind me of... fanzhen? maybe
19:30 Asphyxia: 04:44:314 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) -
19:30 Asphyxia: this also could be organized in a much cleaner way or in a sense that it'd make more sense
19:30 Asphyxia: you get me?
19:30 Asphyxia: but atm it feels like a mess to me again at least
19:31 Asphyxia: I think that's all I can say about the map, really
19:31 Asphyxia: there's no specific errors, it's just general
19:31 bezbashn: hmm
19:31 Asphyxia: and it's mainly because you're still not that experienced which is completely understandable
19:31 bezbashn: btw can you post this to map thread ?
19:31 bezbashn: would be really helpful for me
19:32 Asphyxia: yea
19:16 Asphyxia: o hi
19:16 Asphyxia: I looked at one of your maps earlier
19:16 Asphyxia: the yooh map
19:16 Asphyxia: idk if what was the right map
19:17 bezbashn: that's it
19:17 bezbashn: cos it only one pending. lol
19:17 Asphyxia: I can't really test maps because I don't have my tablet so I'm just speaking from my experience here
19:18 Asphyxia: you can get someone else to confirm / disagree with my statement but
19:18 Asphyxia: I think the map suffers a bit from emphasizing, the map starts out already with quite a big spacing and it felt the same till the very last kiai
19:19 Asphyxia: I expected more drastic spacing changes between sections that deserve it
19:19 Asphyxia: 00:26:125 - vs 00:50:995 -
19:19 bezbashn: like kiai > more spacing, other parts > less ?
19:19 Asphyxia: like said, can't play the map right now, but the first section I linked (26sec)
19:20 Asphyxia: feels really similar to the 50 one, yet they're very different in terms of music
19:20 Asphyxia: 50 is way more intense
19:20 Asphyxia: and deserves more spacing
19:20 Asphyxia: or 26 would use nerfing
19:20 Asphyxia: my opinion though
19:20 bezbashn: maybe you are correct
19:20 bezbashn: I deffinetley need to rethink some parts because of spacing
19:22 Asphyxia: I think the map as a whole needs also a bit more work, there are some individual patterns that are neat, but majority of the patterns feel really, really random
19:22 Asphyxia: lots of unnecessary overlaps (imo)
19:22 Asphyxia: and sometimes the spacing seems to cut off and not be that consistent either
19:23 bezbashn: it's mostly built up on overlaps
19:23 bezbashn: before was more tho
19:23 Asphyxia: 01:35:767 (5,6) - 01:37:010 (5,6) - 01:38:254 (1,2) -
19:23 Asphyxia: those are fine with spacing, I think the music allows it
19:23 Asphyxia: but then you do stuff like 01:39:497 (5,6) -
19:23 Asphyxia: it just looks weird and it isn't consistent
19:25 Asphyxia: 01:42:606 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this pattern is cool, it's visually consistent in terms of design and spacing and you can see the idea behind it immediately
19:25 Asphyxia: but then
19:25 Asphyxia: 01:46:337 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
19:25 Asphyxia: that feels like a random mess of nothing
19:26 bezbashn: see
19:27 Asphyxia: also uh some small things like
19:27 Asphyxia: 01:58:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -
19:27 Asphyxia: if you do a stream like this, maybe consider making it fully symmetrical or that
19:27 Asphyxia: the sides of the streams are the same?
19:27 Asphyxia: 01:59:393 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - curved nicelty
19:27 Asphyxia: 01:58:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - kinda straight
19:27 bezbashn: it was a strange stream
19:27 bezbashn: i know
19:27 bezbashn: kinda random
19:27 Asphyxia: maybe if you had your own idea and logic behind it, it's fine
19:28 Asphyxia: but just making sure
19:28 bezbashn: actually was going to replace it with nicer one
19:29 Asphyxia: 03:25:507 (1,2) - these minisliders were cute though, they remind me of... fanzhen? maybe
19:30 Asphyxia: 04:44:314 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) -
19:30 Asphyxia: this also could be organized in a much cleaner way or in a sense that it'd make more sense
19:30 Asphyxia: you get me?
19:30 Asphyxia: but atm it feels like a mess to me again at least
19:31 Asphyxia: I think that's all I can say about the map, really
19:31 Asphyxia: there's no specific errors, it's just general
19:31 bezbashn: hmm
19:31 Asphyxia: and it's mainly because you're still not that experienced which is completely understandable
19:31 bezbashn: btw can you post this to map thread ?
19:31 bezbashn: would be really helpful for me
19:32 Asphyxia: yea