TicClick wrote:

You know what, this is pretty good!

Andrea wrote:

[Easy]

AR is kinda too high for an Easy right now, reduce it by 1 tick at least.

[Hard]

AR is kinda too high for a Hard right now, reduce it by 1 tick at least.

00:01:275 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:06:328 (1) - ^
00:51:328 (2,1) - Weird anti-jump.
01:15:012 (3,4) - ^
02:06:959 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:14:854 (1) - ^
02:46:907 (3,1) - Weird anti-jump, again.
02:57:328 (4,1) - ^
02:57:959 (2,3) - ^
02:59:223 (2,3) - ^
03:12:959 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:23:065 (1) - ^
03:30:959 (1) - ^
03:34:117 (4,5) - This spacing is totally wrong.

[Lunatic]

01:53:854 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:54:012 (2) - New combo.
01:59:144 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:16:591 (3) - New combo.
02:17:223 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:39:959 (1,2) - Sounds bad and doesn't follow anything.
03:02:696 (1) - This slider can be made much better.
03:17:223 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:26:696 (5) - New combo due to the jump.
03:30:486 (1,2,3,4) - This is confusing as hell.
03:43:117 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

This map still need lots of work, sorry to say that but it's true. okay...

Also, the timing is pretty weird, you might ask someone to double check that as well, please.

pimpG wrote:

irc timing help request

518 bpm 190
2056 bpm 190

good luck

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii again ~
Requested in-game ~


[Easy]
02:55:424 (1) - Line with 02:54:161 (2)
02:56:687 (2) - Line with 02:52:898 (1)
I can't understand QAQ

[Normal]
- Approrach Rate -1 fix~
00:58:266 (3) - Move to 00:58:582 and remove the reverse arrow ?no~ i think okay?!
01:44:371 (1) - Rotate it by 15 and move some points to make it around 01:43:108 (5) changed~
02:06:477 (3) - Move to 02:06:792 and remove the reverse arrow? neither
03:18:161 (1) - Make the end of the slider meet with 03:16:266 (2) okay~


[Hard]
00:02:529 (1) - Place where 00:01:307 (2) was.[/color]
00:12:003 (3) - Make the end of the slider meet 00:10:266 (1).fixed~
01:59:134 (7) - Make this a straight slider.no~QAQ
02:48:003 (2) - Placement ~okay!

Well mapped as always ~
Good luck ~ >w<

pimpG wrote:

hi

no kudos lol! i no see this

general

sorry i was a bit sleepy when i timed this map

offset 515 (-3)
offset 2048 (-8)
I think your first timing much precise

easy

00:06:477 (1) - remove finish ?
00:07:424 (2) - ^
00:09:003 (1) - ^
00:09:950 (2) - ^
00:25:424 (2) - remove whistle?
00:31:108 (1) - add finish at start?add~
00:31:108 - i think you should stop the taiko custom hisounds here
00:31:108 (1,2,1) - remove whiltle from slider body?
00:35:529 (3) - remove whistle?
00:36:161 (1,2,1) - remove whiltle from slider body?
01:09:003 (1,2) - remove whistle at the slider end?
01:31:108 (2) - remove whistle?
01:33:634 (2) - ^
01:38:687 (2) - remove finish at the end?
01:43:740 (3) - remove whistle?
03:40:582 (1) - remove finish from repeat?

normal

00:04:907 (3) - remove finish?
00:06:486 (1) - ^
00:07:433 (2,3) - ^
00:09:959 (4) - ^
00:31:108 - i think you should stop the taiko custom hisounds here
01:09:950 (2) - remove whistle?
01:11:213 (3) - ^
01:47:213 (2) - remove whistles?
01:48:477 (1) - ^
02:09:634 (1) - remove finish at repeat
02:47:529 (1) - remove finish
02:53:687 (2,3) - remove whistles
03:21:634 (3,4,5) - this overlap is a bit confusing maybe?fix~

hard

00:05:845 (1234561234) - too many finishes
01:29:845 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - strange whistle pattern imo
01:46:898 (1,2,3,4) - remove whistles?
02:02:371 (1) - remove finish?
02:05:687 (3,4,5) - too many finishes


lunatic

00:31:108 - i think you should stop the taiko custom hisounds here

• • HP Drain Rate: 3
  • Approach Rate: 4
  • 02:05:529 (2) - Move this circle to the right.
  
  SPOILER

  

• • HP Drain Rate: 4
  • Approach Rate: 5
  • 01:44:371 (1) - Make this slider more symmetrical.
  
  SPOILER

  

• • 01:46:582 (3) - Move this circle a bit up.
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 03:13:424 (x) - Add a circle.

• • 03:37:582 (x) - Add a circle.

1. 00:21:003 - 00:29:845 - Hmm... it would be better if you apply Whistles in a 2/1 rhythm (if you don't understand, add Whistles on the sliders' repeat too).
2. 00:41:529 (2,3) - I can't understand what are you trying to follow here. I suggest you to place this 1/1 beat later (to put it simply, move these two together at once, to the point where (2) is on 00:41:845). If you're doing this, don't forget to move 00:44:056 (1) somewhere so the spacing will be consistent. If you don't, add a circle on 00:42:477 and 00:43:740.
3. 00:46:582 (2,3) - ^ (Similar case.)
4. 01:38:687 (2) - Move it to (400,144), and then drag the last anchor point to (328,108)? The end of this slider will point 01:39:319 (1), which looks better than the current state, which looks pretty random. A picture if you want.
5. 01:47:529 (2) - Make it a 2/1 slider that doesn't repeat and a circle 1/1 beat after?
6. 01:49:740 (2,3) - Similar to 00:41:529 (2,3).
7. 01:54:477 (1,2) - What's with this overlap? Try to avoid things like this.
8. 01:54:792 (2,3) - Similar to 00:41:529 (2,3).
9. 03:45:003 (2) - Begin this 1/1 beat earlier (03:44:687)? The end should be the same, so it will repeat four times if you're doing it according to this mod. Sounds far more fitting to me.

1. 00:42:477 (3) - I guess using a 1/1 slider that repeats once and a circle 1/1 beat after (just like00:41:213 (1,2)) wouldn't hurt, and I think it's better than a 1/1 slider that repeats twice, but... I guess you have no need to change that.
2. 00:50:371 (2,3,1) - Don't really like how these objects overlap...
3. 00:53:845 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:55:740 (4) - Replace this into a 1/1 circle triplet (3 circles, you know), NC the last one, and remove the NC on 00:57:003 (1). The NC placement seems to be more natural that way.
5. 00:57:950 - Add a circle? Feels weird to keep a 2/1 rhythm here.
6. 01:29:213 - What's with the sudden '1/1-slider-that-repeats-twice' spam (well, not really; you're not using it all the time, there's just a bit too many) from here? It's fine, I know, but you can just split them into a slider and a circle right?
7. 01:48:477 (2) - Using a 1/1 slider that repeats once and then a circle 1/1 beat after feels... better. I can't find a better word for this, dang it.
8. 02:00:161 - Add a circle?
9. 02:00:477 (2) - Make this a 1/2 slider that repeats once?
10. 02:01:424 - Add a circle?
11. 02:01:740 (4) - Make this repeat once more?
12. 02:02:371 (1) - Remove Finish?
13. 02:02:687 - Make a 1/2 slider?
14. 02:03:003 (2) - ^ (+ Repeat it once.)
15. 02:03:950 - Add a circle? (Blue = You're supposed to do all of them at once, but if you don't want one or two, as long as it still flows well, have it your way. Sorry for being somewhat arrogant and made you basically remapped this part with my suggestions (if you're doing them, anyway), but... the rhythm is just THAT weird here, IMO)
16. 02:58:582 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why are you following the claps on the first and third white tick anyway... They sound weird, you know.

1. 00:02:213 - You should really add a circle here, since the song clearly 'demands' it.
2. 00:58:582 (1,2) - Would be better if you remove the circle and make the slider repeat once more, right?
3. 01:59:845 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Huh? What's with all the copy-pasted stuff here? It would be fine if the parts are actually similar-sounding, but this... Dunno.
4. 02:35:845 (1,2) - Huh? They're perfectly following the music, but these sliders play weird... Must be because they repeat twice, which most players won't expect. Might be just me, though...
5. 02:45:003 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Tapping the circles after the repeating sliders is just not right for me. Not sure why, but you might want to take a shot on this. Or maybe it's just me that suck...
6. 03:04:740 (1,2,3,4) - What about if you convert them into two 1/2 sliders? They flow better, really.

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
• You must fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[Easy]

• • HP Drain Rate: 3
  • Approach Rate: 4
  • 02:05:529 (2) - Move this circle to the right.
  
  SPOILER

  

[Normal]

• • HP Drain Rate: 4
  • Approach Rate: 5
  • 01:44:371 (1) - Make this slider more symmetrical. i change , but no change like this picture
  
  SPOILER

  

[Hard]

• • 01:46:582 (3) - Move this circle a bit up.
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 03:13:424 (x) - Add a circle.

[Lunatic]

• • 03:37:582 (x) - Add a circle.

Nice beatmap, good job!

Hinsvar wrote:

...The bubble got popped?

Okay, let's get into this.

*Bolded = Unrankable/strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested/questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants.

>Easy

1. 00:21:003 - 00:29:845 - Hmm... it would be better if you apply Whistles in a 2/1 rhythm (if you don't understand, add Whistles on the sliders' repeat too).
2. 00:41:529 (2,3) - I can't understand what are you trying to follow here. I suggest you to place this 1/1 beat later (to put it simply, move these two together at once, to the point where (2) is on 00:41:845). If you're doing this, don't forget to move 00:44:056 (1) somewhere so the spacing will be consistent. If you don't, add a circle on 00:42:477 and 00:43:740.i follow drum~
3. 00:46:582 (2,3) - ^ (Similar case.)
4. 01:38:687 (2) - Move it to (400,144), and then drag the last anchor point to (328,108)? The end of this slider will point 01:39:319 (1), which looks better than the current state, which looks pretty random. A picture if you want.
5. 01:47:529 (2) - Make it a 2/1 slider that doesn't repeat and a circle 1/1 beat after?
6. 01:49:740 (2,3) - Similar to 00:41:529 (2,3).
7. 01:54:477 (1,2) - What's with this overlap? Try to avoid things like this.
8. 01:54:792 (2,3) - Similar to 00:41:529 (2,3).
9. 03:45:003 (2) - Begin this 1/1 beat earlier (03:44:687)? The end should be the same, so it will repeat four times if you're doing it according to this mod. Sounds far more fitting to me.

>Normal

1. 00:42:477 (3) - I guess using a 1/1 slider that repeats once and a circle 1/1 beat after (just like00:41:213 (1,2)) wouldn't hurt, and I think it's better than a 1/1 slider that repeats twice, but... I guess you have no need to change that.
2. 00:50:371 (2,3,1) - Don't really like how these objects overlap...
3. 00:53:845 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:55:740 (4) - Replace this into a 1/1 circle triplet (3 circles, you know), NC the last one, and remove the NC on 00:57:003 (1). The NC placement seems to be more natural that way.
5. 00:57:950 - Add a circle? Feels weird to keep a 2/1 rhythm here.
6. 01:29:213 - What's with the sudden '1/1-slider-that-repeats-twice' spam (well, not really; you're not using it all the time, there's just a bit too many) from here? It's fine, I know, but you can just split them into a slider and a circle right?
7. 01:48:477 (2) - Using a 1/1 slider that repeats once and then a circle 1/1 beat after feels... better. I can't find a better word for this, dang it.
8. 02:00:161 - Add a circle?
9. 02:00:477 (2) - Make this a 1/2 slider that repeats once?
10. 02:01:424 - Add a circle?
11. 02:01:740 (4) - Make this repeat once more?
12. 02:02:371 (1) - Remove Finish?
13. 02:02:687 - Make a 1/2 slider?
14. 02:03:003 (2) - ^ (+ Repeat it once.)
15. 02:03:950 - Add a circle? (Blue = You're supposed to do all of them at once, but if you don't want one or two, as long as it still flows well, have it your way. Sorry for being somewhat arrogant and made you basically remapped this part with my suggestions (if you're doing them, anyway), but... the rhythm is just THAT weird here, IMO)
16. 02:58:582 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why are you following the claps on the first and third white tick anyway... They sound weird, you know.

>Hard

1. 00:02:213 - You should really add a circle here, since the song clearly 'demands' it.
2. 00:58:582 (1,2) - Would be better if you remove the circle and make the slider repeat once more, right?
3. 01:59:845 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Huh? What's with all the copy-pasted stuff here? It would be fine if the parts are actually similar-sounding, but this... Dunno.
4. 02:35:845 (1,2) - Huh? They're perfectly following the music, but these sliders play weird... Must be because they repeat twice, which most players won't expect. Might be just me, though...
5. 02:45:003 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Tapping the circles after the repeating sliders is just not right for me. Not sure why, but you might want to take a shot on this. Or maybe it's just me that suck...
6. 03:04:740 (1,2,3,4) - What about if you convert them into two 1/2 sliders? They flow better, really.

About Lunatic... I suppose it's fine as is.

Okay, okay. Let's roll again, I guess?

Good luck on the way... again

all fix!~thank you modding again Hinsvar

- t e n n y a - wrote:

nyahoo from n y a -'s queue
Black means suggestion

[General]
add ZUN on the tags?

[Easy]
- 02:15:319 : maybe move this into 02:15:634 and remove the reverse? since nonstop hit is kinda hard for an easy player

[Normal]
AR -1?
- 00:36:161 : finish?

[Hard]
- 00:10:266 1,2 : make them reverse once? since its too hard for hard player and the bpm is fast too o v o i think okay~

[Lunatic]
- 00:57:003 : make this behind combo 4 at 00:56:213 ?
- 01:33:634 : nc?
- 01:43:740 : nc?

thats all I can find, rank good luck ^ o ^

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

herp

[Easy]
00:00:833 (1) - Add Finish at the Start Point. fix~
00:02:056 (2,3,4) - Flow is very disturbed, it looks like a Jump, even it is not one. fix~
01:03:950 (1) - Please hold here 1/1 beat. Because nothing of the Music or the voice fits with the Slider. I follow the drum
01:14:056 (1) - ^ ^
01:33:634 (2) - IMO the Whistle sounds weird and should be removed. remove~
02:12:161 (1) - Same like 01:03:950 (1). follow drum~
02:22:266 (1) - ^ ^
02:39:634 (3) - Place it at x:192 y:60, looks better with the curve. ok~
02:50:056 (1) - Remove Clap from the Middle Point, it does not fit there. ok~
03:04:898 (2) - Form it to a 1/2 Slider. Fits better with the Voice. But it's up to you, because the current slider is also fine. i not change
03:10:266 (1) - Same like 01:03:950 (1).follow drum
03:20:371 (1) - ^^

[Normal]
00:01:465 (2,3) - The (3) is not readable, so move the (3) somewhere, but do not stack it. fix~
00:48:477 (4) - This buckling could irritate beginners. So do something here. k~
00:50:371 (2,3) - This could be too fast. fix~
01:13:424 (3,4,1) - Feels too fast to play. Please remove (4). remove~
01:31:424 (4) - You should remove Whistle because it sounds off from the rhythm. remove~
01:49:424 (3) - NC k
01:49:740 (1) - Remove NC k
01:53:213 - I suggest to add a Circle here to fill this empty part. k
01:54:477 (1,2) - Remove the Reverse Arrow at (1), delete (2) and set from 01:55:108 to 01:55:740 a Slider, the singer hold her voice so you could also do this with a Slider. Anyway, it should look like this: http://puu.sh/HFej k
03:36:792 (1) - NC isn't neccessary. fix~

[Hard]
The whole seems like an easy Insane, obviously. The AR should be AR7 and not 8, the SV is IMO a bit high and they are parts like 00:44:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) it let looks like Insane-related. fix~
01:31:740 (1) - Remove Whistle from the Slider, but please hold the Whistle at the Start. k
01:32:371 (3) - ^ but remove only from the Start Point the Whistle. k~

[Lunatic]
Looks fine.

I strongly suggest to make Hard easier. Because to make a new Diff for it would be not so good and you would need to get some more mods again for the diff. i will recheck ~

HelloSCV wrote:

Hi~ From my Queue
Almost Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this

SPOILER

Easy
Nice for me

Normal
01:40:582 (3,4) - ctrl + r k
03:22:740 (1) - change slider's shape? no :3 i think okay~

Hard
01:01:108 (1,2) - change to slider? no~
01:39:319 (1) - add whistle like 01:39:950 (3) - this slider no
01:40:582 (5) - add whistle start of slider k
02:09:319 (1,2) - change to slider? k
02:46:898 (3) - ctrl + r and check distacne no,because the distance 1/1
03:07:424 (1,2) - change to slider? no~

Lunatic
01:33:003 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i think square pattern is so difficult on this part k~change
i think on this part song looks down so how about pentagon pattern or star pattern?
01:43:108 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - like this
01:59:134 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - check distance fix~
02:03:319 (3) - add finish k
02:16:898 (3,4) - I think there are no reason to change distacne suddenly, both parts have similar song sound
how about trying other pattern? I follow the singer with jump :3

good luck

Andrea wrote:

Yeah, it's much better now!

Re-Bubbled~

Flask wrote:

恭喜終於要rank啦~~~

abalee wrote:

I will rank it.

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

恭喜06188神mapper wwwwwwww

L_P wrote:

这图好长历史，真恭喜呵呵

阿爸人好，顺便rank我的

Flask wrote:

不公平 太快了!

R e d wrote:

Ar 7 on Hard? 190 bpm's with "high" slider speed Confuse all people!! I really hope this get fixed to Ar 8
but ok Yeah ~ I know ..., thank you

Edit: gratz for the ranking