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240 Star priority. This map needs attention!
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Thank you very much for your time, Faputa ;)

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2018. 06. 23 (UTC+9)
  1. Change all patterns which have similar melody as 01:16:631 for consistency.
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I'm here to give the map attention, so here's a few things that could better the map in my opinion

03:26:745 - You can make the a kkkkd pattern to follow the snares here.
03:37:716 - The same thing as above occurs in multiple random section of the map, so I will link each section I think should be changed to a 5 note pattern for these snares:
03:48:688 -
03:59:659 -
04:43:545 - this one could stay the same since the end of the song is decreasing in density and stuff.
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03:49:374 - You could make this a 7 note pattern possibly, right now the absence of a note 03:49:716 - on this vocal threw me off the first time playing through it.
04:15:431 - It is unclear what this 1/6 is following, so I suggest removing it. The only thing I think it could follow is this fall effect, but I believe that can be mapped appropriately without the 1/6, a 1/4 dkd would have the same effect without the unnecessary difficulty.
04:37:716 - 1/8 pp doubles when lol.
04:59:145 - feels like this 1/6 counteracts the decrease in density you started in this ending section, the sudden spike in difficulty is kind of confusing and doesn't fit very well, so consider changing this to just 1/4 kkd. If you are worried about similarity, you could make 04:59:916 (1115) - just k d so that the density continues to fall until the end.

Other than that, looks pretty good. Inbox me when you've responded to this and let's get it ranked owo
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Nifty wrote:

I'm here to give the map attention, so here's a few things that could better the map in my opinion

03:26:745 - You can make the a kkkkd pattern to follow the snares here.
03:37:716 - The same thing as above occurs in multiple random section of the map, so I will link each section I think should be changed to a 5 note pattern for these snares:
03:48:688 -
03:59:659 - Fixed all.
04:43:545 - this one could stay the same since the end of the song is decreasing in density and stuff. Removed 04:40:545 and 04:43:288.
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03:49:374 - You could make this a 7 note pattern possibly, right now the absence of a note 03:49:716 - on this vocal threw me off the first time playing through it. Changed to k ddkdk.
04:15:431 - It is unclear what this 1/6 is following, so I suggest removing it. The only thing I think it could follow is this fall effect, but I believe that can be mapped appropriately without the 1/6, a 1/4 dkd would have the same effect without the unnecessary difficulty. Changed.
04:37:716 - 1/8 pp doubles when lol. lol
04:59:145 - feels like this 1/6 counteracts the decrease in density you started in this ending section, the sudden spike in difficulty is kind of confusing and doesn't fit very well, so consider changing this to just 1/4 kkd. If you are worried about similarity, you could make 04:59:916 (1115) - just k d so that the density continues to fall until the end. Since there was the patterns increasing density higher once in the previous part (04:32:916 -), It's no problem in overall, probably.

Other than that, looks pretty good. Inbox me when you've responded to this and let's get it ranked owo
Thanks for modding XD
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(via modding v3)
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A new version! Thanks, Nifty xD
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we're living in the future, far ahead of our time
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Stefan wrote:

we're living in the future, far ahead of our time
No more time travelers.
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(via Modding v3)
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Faputa wrote:

(via Modding v3)
Time traveler again.

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Thanks all who gave me opinions for this beatmap (especially Skylish, Faputa and Nifty).
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congratz~ :P
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yu lyk da
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