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The Super Mario Players feat.Kate Davis - Jump Up, Super Sta

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Gero
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on viernes, 05 de enero de 2018 at 02:56:38 p.m.

Artist: The Super Mario Players feat.Kate Davis
Title: Jump Up, Super Star! (Short ver.)
Source: スーパーマリオ オデッセイ
Tags: ODYSSEY Jazz Broadway Mahito Yokota 1-UP Girl E3 Nintendo Cappy Pauline TV Size Version
BPM: 204
Filesize: 30667kb
Play Time: 01:51
Difficulties Available:
  1. First Kingdom (1.67 stars, 130 notes)
  2. Odyssey, Ya see! (4.63 stars, 430 notes)
  3. Second Kingdom (2.26 stars, 204 notes)
  4. Third Kingdom (3.48 stars, 339 notes)
Download: The Super Mario Players feat.Kate Davis - Jump Up, Super Star! (Short ver.)
Download: The Super Mario Players feat.Kate Davis - Jump Up, Super Star! (Short ver.) (no video)
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Gero
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Metadata: (Official Release)

Links: Pauline information / Jump Up, Super Star! (Short ver.)





Alright.

Artist: The Super Mario Players feat.Kate Davis
Title: Jump Up, Super Star! (Short ver.)
Source: スーパーマリオ オデッセイ
Last edited by Gero , edited 4 times in total.
A r M i N
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A r M i N
me make gd yes? :3 Just got back from vacation ay love this song tried to map it earlier but got demotivated cause of the rhythm at the start since i dint know what rhythm to use lmao
Hollow Delta
793 posts
Joined March 2015
Hollow Delta
Finished
https://puu.sh/xjvMm/e452686aa0.osu
Nwolf
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Joined September 2012
Nwolf
https://www.nintendo.co.jp/switch/aaaca ... bru5hn.mp3 official short version
Gero
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Gero
Thanks a lot Nwolf. I'll change it soon.
Hollow Delta
793 posts
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Hollow Delta
https://puu.sh/y7ejU/a8b0fa7f90.osu

Sorry for late. No excuse besides being a lazy bum


Tweaked some parts to fix the rhythm.

I tried toning down the sv usage but there were not a lot of parts where it felt unnecessary.

*Also how do you want to handle the bit after the Kiai?
Izzywing
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Izzywing
this is actually the best song ever
strickluke
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strickluke
OH MY GOD IM GOING TO NUT
Gordon123
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Joined June 2013
Gordon123
s t a r

[general]
  1. 01:49:408 (1) - the slider's tal put to 01:51:834 - really better rhythm here o. o
  2. AiMod tell me what : filesize of the mapset exceeds 24MB with video < u can try to use this video,this will reduce the size of your video
  3. This map may need an epilepsy warning? idk, i think u need it
[Relaxing Kingdom]

  • 00:55:290 (3,1) - not a very good transition, since there is a little overlap of the other slider,try 00:56:467 (1) - ctrl+h
oh....its not completed ;w; (tell me when u finished this, i bubble it xD)

Good Luck ;)
Gero
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Gero
Gordon123
s t a r j u m p

[general]
  1. 01:49:408 (1) - the slider's tal put to 01:51:834 - really better rhythm here o. o Listen carefully, you'll notice that there's a trumpet sound.
  2. AiMod tell me what : filesize of the mapset exceeds 24MB with video < u can try to use this video,this will reduce the size of your video I'd rather to keep my own video, otherwise the video quality will be worse than before.
  3. This map may need an epilepsy warning? idk, i think u need it Not really, but added.
[Relaxing Kingdom]

  • 00:55:290 (3,1) - not a very good transition, since there is a little overlap of the other slider,try 00:56:467 (1) - ctrl+h Changed.
oh....its not completed ;w; (tell me when u finished this, i bubble it xD)

Good Luck ;)

You're so kind, thanks.
ZekeyHache
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ZekeyHache
quick glance at low diffs cuz ye

a, okei

[General]
  1. lol, de verdad que te gusta pasar limites ?) si no se puede reducir, pues ya que, igual es guideline xp
  2. quita super mario y el mario que esta antes del E3 de los tags por que ya viene eso en el artista
[Relaxing Kingdom]
  1. 00:12:937 (2) - ah, estas usando spacing 1.1x y de repente aqui usas 1.23 xp
  2. 00:36:467 (2) - aquí la redujiste
  3. 01:28:231 (1) - aquí se nota a primera vista el spacing también
bueno, hay muchas de esas inconsistencias en toda la diff, pero solo mencione las mas notables, me veria tonto repitiendo lo mismo, quizas no sean la gran cosa, pero con lo perfeccionista que eres y lo solido que es tu estilo, deberías ajustar esas cosas

[Averge Kingdom]
  1. 00:26:981 (4,5) - podrias hacer la blanket perfecta de una vez
  2. 01:48:378 - que tal terminar el slider aquí y añadir un circulo en 01:48:525 - ? no es una densidad sobrecargadora para esta diff
chayito

edit: removed the stuff for bubblun since it's getting a remap lul
Hollow Delta
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Hollow Delta
sorry about that lol

edit: forgot i drew this in your thing last year

ZekeyHache
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ZekeyHache

Bubblun wrote:

sorry about that lol

edit: forgot i drew this in your thing last year

finally I know who is the artist of this masterpiece
Gero
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Gero
ezek
quick glance at low diffs cuz ye

a, okei xD.

[General]
  1. lol, de verdad que te gusta pasar limites ?) si no se puede reducir, pues ya que, igual es guideline xp
  2. quita super mario y el mario que esta antes del E3 de los tags por que ya viene eso en el artista Cierto.
[Relaxing Kingdom]
  1. 00:12:937 (2) - ah, estas usando spacing 1.1x y de repente aqui usas 1.23 xp Listo.
  2. 00:36:467 (2) - aquí la redujiste Igual.
  3. 01:28:231 (1) - aquí se nota a primera vista el spacing también Eres muy nazi, este lo dejare así.
bueno, hay muchas de esas inconsistencias en toda la diff, pero solo mencione las mas notables, me veria tonto repitiendo lo mismo, quizas no sean la gran cosa, pero con lo perfeccionista que eres y lo solido que es tu estilo, deberías ajustar esas cosas Me chocas (?

[Averge Kingdom]
  1. 00:26:981 (4,5) - podrias hacer la blanket perfecta de una vez Cierto, arreglado.
  2. 01:48:378 - que tal terminar el slider aquí y añadir un circulo en 01:48:525 - ? no es una densidad sobrecargadora para esta diff Prefiero usar mi ritmo,
    encaja mejor con la canción y es menos confuso.
chayito
Gero
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Gero
Updated~
YoWuzUp
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YoWuzUp
Love this song.

Have a small mod.
Lower Diffs, because I don't know what's going on with "Odyssey, Ya see!"
I assume it's an unfinished collab.

Really Nice Storyboard. :)
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Relaxing Kingdom

01:01:025 (1,2) - Slider shapes are bit weird here. This is essentially an Easy Difficulty, and you need to still make sure slider shapes are easily understandable.
01:28:525 (2,4) - I think these sliders would look better like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9836700

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Average Kingdom

00:21:761 - Pause here a bit awkward, could use another object imo.

00:26:467 (3,4) - These sliders are on blue ticks, please fix.
01:44:702 (1,2) - Ends on blue ticks.
01:47:864 (2,3) - Blue Ticks again.
I just kinda noticed these. Make sure it's not happening anywhere else.

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Okay, have a nice life, goodbye.
Gero
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Gero
YO_WUZ_UP
Love this song.

Have a small mod.
Lower Diffs, because I don't know what's going on with "Odyssey, Ya see!" All difficulties are finished.
I assume it's an unfinished collab.

Really Nice Storyboard. :) Thanks a lot.
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Relaxing Kingdom

01:01:025 (1,2) - Slider shapes are bit weird here. This is essentially an Easy Difficulty, and you need to still make sure slider shapes are easily understandable. Changed both of them.
01:28:525 (2,4) - I think these sliders would look better like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9836700 I'd rather to keep linear sliders.

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Average Kingdom

00:21:761 - Pause here a bit awkward, could use another object imo. I wanted to keep it as simple as posible, that's why.

00:26:467 (3,4) - These sliders are on blue ticks, please fix.
01:44:702 (1,2) - Ends on blue ticks.
01:47:864 (2,3) - Blue Ticks again.
I just kinda noticed these. Make sure it's not happening anywhere else. I've decided to use 1/4 instead 1/6 to avoid the confusing rhythms that the song itself have.

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Okay, have a nice life, goodbye.
Gero
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Gero
Updated~
Irreversible
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Yooo as per req

[Diff names]

Hmm, idk, i don't really like them XD "average kingdom" sounds so weird.. Maybe there's a progression of "Odyssee" or the levels of mario itself?
ACtually, why is "average" higher than "relaxing" tbh

[SB]
gj<3

00:34:114 - Wanna add a "world" sticker too here? Would fit imo.

[Odyssey]

00:08:378 (1,1) - Gerooo I think some cutie symmetry would fit so well here, up to you completely though, haha!
00:13:820 (1) - I'd stack that with the end of this slider, I've tried it and it plays way more intuitive.
00:23:378 (3,1) - The flow here is really interrupted, but I don't really know how to avoid it without breaking the pattern before.. maybe you could investigate and see if you can fix something? It's just a bit off to play (i clicked through cuz i thought it's a jump), because 00:23:084 (2,3,1) - are in one line (end of 2, 3 and 1), so hope you can change it (avoid having a line-flow here, itll be funner to play!)
00:34:114 (2,3) - I still think this symmetry jump is a bit too high. Doesn't fit the song that much, better keep it a bit lower :3

Voli will mod some rhythms, rest is really fun to play

[Tough]
00:56:957 (2,1) - Blanket maybe?
01:05:290 (3,1) - Move abit up to avoid overlap
01:44:702 (2) - New pattern starts here, not 01:44:310 (1) - , imo this is a lil concept flaw please don't make them 1 pattern!

Maybe he also has concerns for rhythm here, stick to him in that matter :3
really good patterns holy moly

[Average]

pattern wise etc. fine!

[Relaxing]

love

call me back after voli modded 2
Voli
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General
Tick rate is 0,5. It's unrankable D:

Odyssey, Ya See
  1. 01:14:114 (1,2,3,4) - Try following the vocals here instead of the same pattern as 01:12:937 (1,2,3,4) - ? It makes sense there because there are 4 vocals, but here there are only 2 so expressing them with a different pattern would be cooler imo to maintain its uniqueness.
  2. 01:24:702 (1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - I think it's better here to start nc pairing on 01:24:849 (2) - instead simply because the ''strong clap'' pattern starts there
  3. 01:26:467 (3,4) - I'm not so sure about the rhythms here, I'm more inclined to think that they should be extended one tick just as you did here 01:40:584 (4,5) - too.. but if you disagree i'd make all of these the same then to at least be consistent with it, because in the music they're somewhere just in between. Simplification works though, but it should be consistent at least. Imo the 1/6 works way better though because you maintain the flow like that that you've had going for the entire map, instead of making the sliders shorter.. Maybe we should discuss with the other nominating party about this?
Tough
  1. 01:14:555 (3) - move up a bit so they don't overlap? looks cleaner to me
  2. 01:14:555 (3) - same for this
  3. 01:28:231 (1,2,3,4) - i don't really understand the rhythm difference? Shouldnt they just be the same length too?
The other diffs are fine. Very solid and well mapped set, definitely call me back!
Gero
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Yooo as per req

[Diff names]

Hmm, idk, i don't really like them XD "average kingdom" sounds so weird.. Maybe there's a progression of "Odyssee" or the levels of mario itself?
ACtually, why is "average" higher than "relaxing" tbh Changed them.

[SB]
gj<3

00:34:114 - Wanna add a "world" sticker too here? Would fit imo. Added.

[Odyssey]

00:08:378 (1,1) - Gerooo I think some cutie symmetry would fit so well here, up to you completely though, haha! I like it as it is tbh xD.
00:13:820 (1) - I'd stack that with the end of this slider, I've tried it and it plays way more intuitive. For most parts I went with not stacked patterns, so I'd like to keep this not stacked if is possible.
00:23:378 (3,1) - The flow here is really interrupted, but I don't really know how to avoid it without breaking the pattern before.. maybe you could investigate and see if you can fix something? It's just a bit off to play (i clicked through cuz i thought it's a jump), because 00:23:084 (2,3,1) - are in one line (end of 2, 3 and 1), so hope you can change it (avoid having a line-flow here, itll be funner to play!) Changed.
00:34:114 (2,3) - I still think this symmetry jump is a bit too high. Doesn't fit the song that much, better keep it a bit lower :3 Changed.

Voli will mod some rhythms, rest is really fun to play

[Tough]
00:56:957 (2,1) - Blanket maybe? I didn't want to do a blanket here.
01:05:290 (3,1) - Move abit up to avoid overlap Changed the previous slider.
01:44:702 (2) - New pattern starts here, not 01:44:310 (1) - , imo this is a lil concept flaw please don't make them 1 pattern! Fixed.

Maybe he also has concerns for rhythm here, stick to him in that matter :3
really good patterns holy moly

[Average]

pattern wise etc. fine!

[Relaxing]

love

call me back after voli modded 2

Voli
General
Tick rate is 0,5. It's unrankable D: My bad, Fixed.

Odyssey, Ya See
  1. 01:14:114 (1,2,3,4) - Try following the vocals here instead of the same pattern as 01:12:937 (1,2,3,4) - ? It makes sense there because there are 4 vocals, but here there are only 2 so expressing them with a different pattern would be cooler imo to maintain its uniqueness. Agreed, changed.
  2. 01:24:702 (1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - I think it's better here to start nc pairing on 01:24:849 (2) - instead simply because the ''strong clap'' pattern starts there Sure thing.
  3. 01:26:467 (3,4) - I'm not so sure about the rhythms here, I'm more inclined to think that they should be extended one tick just as you did here 01:40:584 (4,5) - too.. but if you disagree i'd make all of these the same then to at least be consistent with it, because in the music they're somewhere just in between. Simplification works though, but it should be consistent at least. Imo the 1/6 works way better though because you maintain the flow like that that you've had going for the entire map, instead of making the sliders shorter.. Maybe we should discuss with the other nominating party about this? I've worked on them all, swapped to 1/3 while some of them are going to be 1/2 due that the trumpet sounds are stronger in those parts.
    Tough
    1. 01:14:555 (3) - move up a bit so they don't overlap? looks cleaner to me Moved a bit.
    2. 01:14:555 (3) - same for this Same as above.
    3. 01:28:231 (1,2,3,4) - i don't really understand the rhythm difference? Shouldnt they just be the same length too? Changed them, I'll used the same rhythm as Insane to be consistent.
The other diffs are fine. Very solid and well mapped set, definitely call me back!
Hollow Delta
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The SUPER LATE GD

For real tho. Talked to Gero about it. If Voli's up for nominating the set with the diff included please add.
Gero
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I've talked with you already via in game. so everything has been clarified.

Updated~
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bubble bubble bubble pop
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