Great map man, thanks for mapping!
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Kanon Wakeshima - Tsukinami (Speed Up Ver.)
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Topic Starter
big thanks for cheering! i love you-Slasher wrote:
Great map man, thanks for mapping!
Bottom three difficulties have a lot of unneeded inherit points which clutter them up, and especially unneeded ones in the break at 01:06:630 -
It's fine to keep them in, but easier to look at the map and mod in the future if you get rid of unneeded ones.
[Serendipity]
00:07:745 (3,4,5) - Distance on this is a bit different than the parts before it. Any reason for that? Seeming as the starting section is fairly consistent I'd neaten the spacing here.
00:43:555 (6,7,8) - If you're gonna emphasise these with those hitsounds, better make them not stacked/spaced also. Strong sounds which are notable being stacked is kinda weird
01:00:627 - There is no sound here to map a note to. It's like, actually just silent.
[Extra by FN TPS']
00:12:741 (2,3,4) - This slider->double not at the slider end is only done once in the entire map. Consider adding more of these or removing this one, seems to stick out unnecessarily.
02:41:915 - Only part with normal hitnormals?
03:50:933 (2,3,1) - This is also unlike anything else in the map. Personally, I don't mind it, but I think it'll be misread as a 1/2 jump to the note, then a small waiting gap, then the slider, since you've had distances like that in the map previously be small waits (tl;dr stack it or dont stick the note on the upper side of the slider)
[Normal]
00:20:792 (2,1) - Smol overlap
That's all, good skills to ya
It's fine to keep them in, but easier to look at the map and mod in the future if you get rid of unneeded ones.
[Serendipity]
00:07:745 (3,4,5) - Distance on this is a bit different than the parts before it. Any reason for that? Seeming as the starting section is fairly consistent I'd neaten the spacing here.
00:43:555 (6,7,8) - If you're gonna emphasise these with those hitsounds, better make them not stacked/spaced also. Strong sounds which are notable being stacked is kinda weird
01:00:627 - There is no sound here to map a note to. It's like, actually just silent.
[Extra by FN TPS']
00:12:741 (2,3,4) - This slider->double not at the slider end is only done once in the entire map. Consider adding more of these or removing this one, seems to stick out unnecessarily.
02:41:915 - Only part with normal hitnormals?
03:50:933 (2,3,1) - This is also unlike anything else in the map. Personally, I don't mind it, but I think it'll be misread as a 1/2 jump to the note, then a small waiting gap, then the slider, since you've had distances like that in the map previously be small waits (tl;dr stack it or dont stick the note on the upper side of the slider)
[Normal]
00:20:792 (2,1) - Smol overlap
That's all, good skills to ya
Topic Starter
thanks for mod!Arphimigon wrote:
Bottom three difficulties have a lot of unneeded inherit points which clutter them up, and especially unneeded ones in the break at 01:06:630 -
It's fine to keep them in, but easier to look at the map and mod in the future if you get rid of unneeded ones. - you are right. I tried keysounding and removed so unnecessary green lines exist now. I will remove them someday.
[Serendipity]
00:07:745 (3,4,5) - Distance on this is a bit different than the parts before it. Any reason for that? Seeming as the starting section is fairly consistent I'd neaten the spacing here. -Fixed
00:43:555 (6,7,8) - If you're gonna emphasise these with those hitsounds, better make them not stacked/spaced also. Strong sounds which are notable being stacked is kinda weird -Fixed to none-triple.
01:00:627 - There is no sound here to map a note to. It's like, actually just silent. -here exists very small drum sound and missing it would curse player to confuse I guess. so I would keep this.
[Normal]
00:20:792 (2,1) - Smol overlap - Fixed
That's all, good skills to ya
you should be know i noob english
[Extra by FN TPS']
00:12:741 (2,3,4) - This slider->double not at the slider end is only done once in the entire map. Consider adding more of these or removing this one, seems to stick out unnecessarily.
check please
02:41:915 - Only part with normal hitnormals?
maybe? idk yet
03:50:933 (2,3,1) - This is also unlike anything else in the map. Personally, I don't mind it, but I think it'll be misread as a 1/2 jump to the note, then a small waiting gap, then the slider, since you've had distances like that in the map previously be small waits (tl;dr stack it or dont stick the note on the upper side of the slider)
check-
thx modddd
[Extra by FN TPS']
00:12:741 (2,3,4) - This slider->double not at the slider end is only done once in the entire map. Consider adding more of these or removing this one, seems to stick out unnecessarily.
check please
02:41:915 - Only part with normal hitnormals?
maybe? idk yet
03:50:933 (2,3,1) - This is also unlike anything else in the map. Personally, I don't mind it, but I think it'll be misread as a 1/2 jump to the note, then a small waiting gap, then the slider, since you've had distances like that in the map previously be small waits (tl;dr stack it or dont stick the note on the upper side of the slider)
check-
thx modddd
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157,135,206644,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,154,206713,1,0,0:0:0:0:
179,173,206782,6,0,L|68:183,1,90
9,259,207060,1,0,0:0:0:0:
166,84,207199,2,0,P|179:138|174:198,1,90
68,340,207476,2,0,P|127:327|180:332,1,90
425,244,207754,6,0,B|365:252|365:252|219:249,1,180
218,63,208170,2,0,P|281:62|320:70,1,90
473,344,208448,6,0,L|327:351,1,135
308,328,208725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,372,208864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
47,238,209003,6,0,L|41:130,1,90
247,66,209281,2,0,P|192:94|148:72,1,90
44,226,209558,6,0,L|44:118,1,90
324,93,209836,2,0,P|262:84|239:41,1,90
43,215,210113,6,0,L|48:107,1,90
372,166,210391,2,0,P|326:123|332:75,1,90
109,278,210669,5,0,0:0:0:0:
136,100,210807,1,0,0:0:0:0:
421,278,210946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
394,100,211085,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,337,211188,5,0,0:0:0:0:
181,307,211327,2,0,P|209:260|249:243,1,90
313,343,211604,5,0,0:0:0:0:
181,307,211743,2,0,P|209:260|289:248,1,99.0000030212403
356,349,212021,5,0,0:0:0:0:
181,307,212160,2,0,P|209:260|301:256,1,107.999996704102
393,354,212437,5,0,0:0:0:0:
181,307,212576,2,0,P|209:260|296:252,1,116.999994644165
403,69,212854,6,0,P|416:148|405:209,1,116.999994644165
100,184,213132,2,0,P|96:125|109:69,1,116.999994644165
310,57,213409,5,0,0:0:0:0:
264,139,213548,2,0,P|219:76|225:12,1,116.999994644165
362,82,213825,5,0,0:0:0:0:
264,148,213964,2,0,L|207:23,1,125.999996154785
414,108,214242,5,0,0:0:0:0:
264,157,214381,2,0,P|227:70|182:23,1,135.000005149842
466,134,214658,5,0,0:0:0:0:
221,215,214797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
138,64,214936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
30,313,215075,6,0,L|181:326,1,135.000005149842
191,78,215352,2,0,L|343:67,1,135.000005149842
356,321,215629,6,0,B|494:303|494:303|441:278,1,180
256,96,216046,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,216185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,321,216463,6,0,B|18:303|18:303|71:278,1,180
263,362,216879,5,0,0:0:0:0:
263,362,216948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
263,362,217017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
263,362,217087,1,0,0:0:0:0:
263,362,217156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
263,362,217226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
263,362,217295,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,217573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,32,217886,6,0,P|167:34|136:52,1,90
62,207,218164,2,0,L|152:168,1,90
238,358,218441,2,0,P|178:321|163:285,1,90
31,332,218719,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,136,218858,6,0,B|235:159|228:182|228:182|292:214|320:294,1,180
80,144,219274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
169,305,219413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,145,219552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
207,283,219691,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,85,219829,2,0,B|148:112|148:112|165:184,1,90
387,288,220107,6,0,P|444:292|490:281,1,90
367,46,220385,2,0,L|376:135,1,90
172,200,220662,2,0,B|217:192|217:192|273:218,1,90
356,358,220940,1,0,0:0:0:0:
75,308,221079,6,0,P|142:281|263:295,1,180
377,210,221495,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,200,221634,2,0,P|110:190|72:161,1,90
223,27,221911,2,0,P|216:79|196:119,1,90
351,57,222189,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,42,222258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
390,36,222328,5,0,0:0:0:0:
453,181,222467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,79,222605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,229,222744,2,0,P|324:242|271:243,1,90
81,314,223022,2,0,P|82:254|93:209,1,90
209,29,223299,6,0,B|198:142|198:142|217:210,1,180
396,364,223716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,344,223993,5,0,0:0:0:0:
364,332,224063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
343,323,224132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
321,316,224202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,313,224271,1,0,0:0:0:0:
129,325,224410,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,106,224549,5,0,0:0:0:0:
267,143,224687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,290,224826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
83,253,224965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
242,105,225104,6,0,L|274:153,1,45
327,67,225243,2,0,L|359:19,1,45
399,122,225381,2,0,L|431:170,1,45
479,87,225520,2,0,L|511:39,1,45
317,149,225658,6,0,L|287:252,1,90
497,298,225936,2,0,L|478:195,1,90
239,133,226214,6,0,L|252:197,1,45
264,249,226353,2,0,L|277:313,1,45
291,369,226492,2,0,L|232:364,1,45
172,358,226631,2,0,L|113:353,1,45
19,300,226769,5,0,0:0:0:0:
4,138,226908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
66,40,227047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
234,241,227186,2,0,P|155:253|72:183,1,180
184,25,227602,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,203,227741,6,0,L|331:381,1,180
152,327,228157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
471,371,228296,2,0,B|441:326|441:326|419:185,1,180
462,37,228713,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,69,228851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,63,228921,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,58,228990,6,0,L|209:170,1,90
378,304,229268,2,0,L|274:259,1,90
74,332,229545,6,0,L|164:264,1,90
417,136,229823,2,0,L|328:154,1,90
67,67,230101,6,0,L|103:163,1,90
211,317,230378,2,0,L|190:222,1,90
261,16,230656,2,0,P|252:60|250:105,1,90
403,342,230933,2,0,P|400:297|391:253,1,90
422,136,231142,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,123,231211,6,0,L|342:132,1,90
153,34,231489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
63,201,231627,2,0,B|76:332|76:332|61:377,2,180
144,76,232321,2,0,P|159:132|156:177,1,90
247,176,232599,2,0,B|270:305|270:305|297:344,2,180
453,19,233432,6,0,P|440:78|413:111,1,90
273,25,233709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
490,197,233848,2,0,P|482:270|384:339,2,180
240,143,234542,5,0,0:0:0:0:
405,244,234681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,178,234820,1,0,0:0:0:0:
102,298,234958,1,0,0:0:0:0:
98,275,235028,1,0,0:0:0:0:
94,252,235097,5,0,0:0:0:0:
18,365,235236,1,0,0:0:0:0:
125,155,235375,2,0,B|200:159|200:159|175:175,1,90
0,4,235652,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,235722,12,0,240510,0:0:0:0:
first time mod (sorry if something wrong ;w;)
[Serendipity]
01:03:403 - maybe put any object here (and on another section like this)? like 01:02:848 (2) -
[Insane]
00:26:621 - here is empty space, but beat is still hearable, maybe put circle/make a slider from 00:26:344 -
and thanks for mapping this speedup version, it's really cool!
[Serendipity]
01:03:403 - maybe put any object here (and on another section like this)? like 01:02:848 (2) -
[Insane]
00:26:621 - here is empty space, but beat is still hearable, maybe put circle/make a slider from 00:26:344 -
and thanks for mapping this speedup version, it's really cool!
Topic Starter
Aesthesys wrote:
first time mod (sorry if something wrong ;w;)
[Serendipity]
01:03:403 - maybe put any object here (and on another section like this)? like 01:02:848 (2) - I'm following drum sounds here and these sections you mentioned dont have drum sound so I would keep this.
[Insane]
00:26:621 - here is empty space, but beat is still hearable, maybe put circle/make a slider from 00:26:344 - circle here is on purpose to express the end of instrument. I think I dont need to change but I will get more opinions about this.
and thanks for mapping this speedup version, it's really cool!
Thanks for mod and cheering!
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Topic Starter
감사합니다 :3Beomsan wrote:
재밌는 패턴이 꽤 많네요
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hello, sorry for the late mod
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa 2fastassonic
seems a really decent mapset, not really polished but it have potentialGeneral
Pure white color is unrankable in kiai, change it to a light gray or something
i don't really like the SliderTrackOverride color, it feel too bright. try this one, it fit wayy better the sea bg :
check out for overlaps, they are everywhere
Easy
some of your patterns like this one 00:51:323 (1,2,3,1) - lacks solid structure, the circles make that they seems randomly placed, 00:51:323 (1) - could be ctrl+j so 2 fit more the slider curve of 1 for example. 00:55:209 (2) - could be placed lower the slider so the flow angle isn't that sharp and would reflect more the song. 02:41:796 - have good structure because the sliders seems to be linked each other, 3 is blanketting 4 and 4 fit the curve of 1.
00:21:345 (4,1) - avoid overlaps
00:26:897 (1,2) - this kind of flow is harsh to play for beginners, placing 2 at x266 y309 would be more friendly to play
01:16:304 (1) - maybe start on 01:16:859 - and end it on 01:19:080 - so you don't skip the kiai sound and the spinner fit more the buildup^
02:18:480 (1) - ^ do the same thing, don't ignore the first kiai note
01:25:741 (2,1) - ds must be consistant and make them aligned or do something like that : https://i.imgur.com/J66mZMT.png
01:28:517 (1) - why not adding a red anchor, it ignore a kinda strong sound on 01:28:795 -
02:30:694 (1) - ^
02:46:237 (2) - place it at x218 y148 to blanket them
02:48:458 (3) - add a red anchor, there is a different instrument here
02:50:123 (2,1) - blanket them better
03:07:888 (2) - move it to 03:07:611 (2) - you ignore a vocal sound
03:09:831 (4) - ^
03:11:219 (1) - rotate it by 3° to be parallal with 03:09:831 (4) -
03:18:991 (4,1) - blanket them ?
03:31:204 (1,2) - ^
03:37:866 (1,2,3) - having a pattern like this fit more i think : https://i.imgur.com/XuBa1iA.png
there are some rhythms issues but i don't feel mentionning them
some of these can be applied through the whole diff
Hard
quick check because i don't have a lot of time
i just noticed that some parts have almost exactely the same pattern like these one 02:23:476 (1,2,3) - 03:15:660 (1,2,3) - make them less similar
01:36:845 (1,1) - overlap
01:42:119 (3,1) - flow is exactely the same but 1 is a really strong sound, try to differenciate strong sounds from the rest with a sharp flow or more spacing
Normal
same general thing as hard
02:29:861 (3,4,1) - this is really hard to read, this is too cramped
Serendipty
you can use inconsistant spacing to fix visual spacing but that's doesn't mean you have to use it everywhere
00:03:303 (3,4) - align them
00:04:691 (1,2) - overlap and fix the shape so the slidershape are parallal
00:12:185 (5,1) - overlap
00:21:761 (3) - NC, also the stream sound too loud compared to the rest
00:27:174 (3,4) - the overlap is really meh
00:28:562 (8,9) - vs 00:29:117 (1,2) - give them the same visual spacing please, there is a lot of issues like that
00:33:003 (7) - looks way better if you ctrl+j it
00:52:988 (3,4) - they seems too close
00:53:682 (2,5) - overlap
00:59:928 (4,1) - not aligned
01:12:696 (1) - not necessary to nc, 01:12:418 (1,2,1,2) - have a different pattern than the usual pattern here 01:11:308 (1,2,1,2) -
01:15:888 - add a note here, the jumps start here 01:15:749 (1) -
01:21:023 (4,5) - fix overlap
and these errors are repeating through the whole diff again, the majors problems here is overlapping and visual spacing
Pure white color is unrankable in kiai, change it to a light gray or something
i don't really like the SliderTrackOverride color, it feel too bright. try this one, it fit wayy better the sea bg :
SliderTrackOverride : 3,184,252spinners followed by a kiai should not end on the beginning of a kiai, consider spinner like a slider's end
check out for overlaps, they are everywhere
Easy
some of your patterns like this one 00:51:323 (1,2,3,1) - lacks solid structure, the circles make that they seems randomly placed, 00:51:323 (1) - could be ctrl+j so 2 fit more the slider curve of 1 for example. 00:55:209 (2) - could be placed lower the slider so the flow angle isn't that sharp and would reflect more the song. 02:41:796 - have good structure because the sliders seems to be linked each other, 3 is blanketting 4 and 4 fit the curve of 1.
00:21:345 (4,1) - avoid overlaps
00:26:897 (1,2) - this kind of flow is harsh to play for beginners, placing 2 at x266 y309 would be more friendly to play
01:16:304 (1) - maybe start on 01:16:859 - and end it on 01:19:080 - so you don't skip the kiai sound and the spinner fit more the buildup^
02:18:480 (1) - ^ do the same thing, don't ignore the first kiai note
01:25:741 (2,1) - ds must be consistant and make them aligned or do something like that : https://i.imgur.com/J66mZMT.png
01:28:517 (1) - why not adding a red anchor, it ignore a kinda strong sound on 01:28:795 -
02:30:694 (1) - ^
02:46:237 (2) - place it at x218 y148 to blanket them
02:48:458 (3) - add a red anchor, there is a different instrument here
02:50:123 (2,1) - blanket them better
03:07:888 (2) - move it to 03:07:611 (2) - you ignore a vocal sound
03:09:831 (4) - ^
03:11:219 (1) - rotate it by 3° to be parallal with 03:09:831 (4) -
03:18:991 (4,1) - blanket them ?
03:31:204 (1,2) - ^
03:37:866 (1,2,3) - having a pattern like this fit more i think : https://i.imgur.com/XuBa1iA.png
there are some rhythms issues but i don't feel mentionning them
some of these can be applied through the whole diff
Hard
quick check because i don't have a lot of time
i just noticed that some parts have almost exactely the same pattern like these one 02:23:476 (1,2,3) - 03:15:660 (1,2,3) - make them less similar
01:36:845 (1,1) - overlap
01:42:119 (3,1) - flow is exactely the same but 1 is a really strong sound, try to differenciate strong sounds from the rest with a sharp flow or more spacing
Normal
same general thing as hard
02:29:861 (3,4,1) - this is really hard to read, this is too cramped
Serendipty
you can use inconsistant spacing to fix visual spacing but that's doesn't mean you have to use it everywhere
00:03:303 (3,4) - align them
00:04:691 (1,2) - overlap and fix the shape so the slidershape are parallal
00:12:185 (5,1) - overlap
00:21:761 (3) - NC, also the stream sound too loud compared to the rest
00:27:174 (3,4) - the overlap is really meh
00:28:562 (8,9) - vs 00:29:117 (1,2) - give them the same visual spacing please, there is a lot of issues like that
00:33:003 (7) - looks way better if you ctrl+j it
00:52:988 (3,4) - they seems too close
00:53:682 (2,5) - overlap
00:59:928 (4,1) - not aligned
01:12:696 (1) - not necessary to nc, 01:12:418 (1,2,1,2) - have a different pattern than the usual pattern here 01:11:308 (1,2,1,2) -
01:15:888 - add a note here, the jumps start here 01:15:749 (1) -
01:21:023 (4,5) - fix overlap
and these errors are repeating through the whole diff again, the majors problems here is overlapping and visual spacing
Topic Starter
thanks for efficient mod!realy0_ wrote:
hello, sorry for the late modaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa 2fastassonicseems a really decent mapset, not really polished but it have potentialGeneral
Pure white color is unrankable in kiai, change it to a light gray or something -ok
i don't really like the SliderTrackOverride color, it feel too bright. try this one, it fit wayy better the sea bg :SliderTrackOverride : 3,184,252ok
spinners followed by a kiai should not end on the beginning of a kiai, consider spinner like a slider's end
check out for overlaps, they are everywhere
Easy
some of your patterns like this one 00:51:323 (1,2,3,1) - lacks solid structure, the circles make that they seems randomly placed, 00:51:323 (1) - could be ctrl+j so 2 fit more the slider curve of 1 for example. 00:55:209 (2) - could be placed lower the slider so the flow angle isn't that sharp and would reflect more the song. 02:41:796 - have good structure because the sliders seems to be linked each other, 3 is blanketting 4 and 4 fit the curve of 1.
00:21:345 (4,1) - avoid overlaps - fixed
00:26:897 (1,2) - this kind of flow is harsh to play for beginners, placing 2 at x266 y309 would be more friendly to play -fixed but not like this. changed slidershape so that they can get regular distance
01:16:304 (1) - maybe start on 01:16:859 - and end it on 01:19:080 - so you don't skip the kiai sound and the spinner fit more the buildup^ tried to make likes your suggestion but note on start of kiai gets appear while spinner. Im not going to change spinner's start time but I can reduce spinner length I think it works out either
02:18:480 (1) - ^ do the same thing, don't ignore the first kiai note ^
01:25:741 (2,1) - ds must be consistant and make them aligned or do something like that : https://i.imgur.com/J66mZMT.png - I have no idea why I did this. fixed
01:28:517 (1) - why not adding a red anchor, it ignore a kinda strong sound on 01:28:795 - I dont know anchor's meaning but Im pretty sure its fixed
02:30:694 (1) - ^ ^
02:46:237 (2) - place it at x218 y148 to blanket them -ok
02:48:458 (3) - add a red anchor, there is a different instrument here - that instrument are too crowded 02:48:458 (3) - here so that expressing all of them isnt that good for ez diff. this slider's sliderhead and sliderend has same another instrument so I will follow that.
02:50:123 (2,1) - blanket them better -done
03:07:888 (2) - move it to 03:07:611 (2) - you ignore a vocal sound yes
03:09:831 (4) - ^ ^
03:11:219 (1) - rotate it by 3° to be parallal with 03:09:831 (4) - - Im not sure its pararell but almost done I guess
03:18:991 (4,1) - blanket them ? ok
03:31:204 (1,2) - ^ dont
03:37:866 (1,2,3) - having a pattern like this fit more i think : https://i.imgur.com/XuBa1iA.png ok
there are some rhythms issues but i don't feel mentionning them
some of these can be applied through the whole diff
Hard
quick check because i don't have a lot of time
i just noticed that some parts have almost exactely the same pattern like these one 02:23:476 (1,2,3) - 03:15:660 (1,2,3) - make them less similar I guess its done
01:36:845 (1,1) - overlap fixed
01:42:119 (3,1) - flow is exactely the same but 1 is a really strong sound, try to differenciate strong sounds from the rest with a sharp flow or more spacing Im not goind to change distance since I used distance snap everywhere but I can specialize with the slidershape
Normal
same general thing as hard
02:29:861 (3,4,1) - this is really hard to read, this is too cramped 02:30:416 (1) - since here is strong sound I stack this to previous one.
I think its fine to read because I nced this one.
Serendipty
you can use inconsistant spacing to fix visual spacing but that's doesn't mean you have to use it everywhere
00:03:303 (3,4) - align them ok
00:04:691 (1,2) - overlap and fix the shape so the slidershape are parallal done
00:12:185 (5,1) - overlap fixed
00:21:761 (3) - NC, also the stream sound too loud compared to the rest not going to nc here since 00:21:345 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - they have same instrument but I can reduce volume
00:27:174 (3,4) - the overlap is really meh oh god
00:28:562 (8,9) - vs 00:29:117 (1,2) - give them the same visual spacing please, there is a lot of issues like that yep
00:33:003 (7) - looks way better if you ctrl+j it current one works out in my opinion
00:52:988 (3,4) - they seems too close i agree
00:53:682 (2,5) - overlap done
00:59:928 (4,1) - not aligned changed whole pattern of these 1/2 spam
01:12:696 (1) - not necessary to nc i think so
01:12:418 (1,2,1,2) - have a different pattern than the usual pattern here 01:11:308 (1,2,1,2) - I think current one is different enough.
i aint going to use slider since im following vocal here.
01:15:888 - add a note here, the jumps start here 01:15:749 (1) - I dont think so. I can barely hear tiny drum sound 01:16:166 (2) - here but 01:15:888 - here is just a slient.
01:21:023 (4,5) - fix overlap ok
and these errors are repeating through the whole diff again, the majors problems here is overlapping and visual spacing
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인세인이 OD 8.5이라니; 적당히 7로 내려요
02:23:893 (3,4) - 담요
03:24:682 (2,3) - ^
00:12:463 (1,2,3,4) - 앞 방향 흐름으로 잘 가다가 얘네들만 갑자기 급 꺾이네요 4슬라를 ctrl+g 할 필요가 있을 듯
01:31:709 (2,3) - DS가 너무 가까워요 마치 따로 노는 듯 한
01:43:229 (4) - 제대로 01:43:368 - 여기에 음이 있는데 차라리 1/2슬라가 낫지 않나요? 느낌 살리는 건 이미 01:43:506 (1) - 이것 만으로도 충분한 거 같은데
01:55:719 (1,2,3,4,5) - 거의 무음 수준인데 이곳에 연타를 넣으셨네요 혹시 진동을 표현하신 건가요? 제가 보기에는 아무 것도 느껴지지 않는 5서클이였어요
03:37:588 (1) - 제 생각에는 이게 없어야 할 것 같아요. 난이도가 인세인인데 후반부 가서 특별한 음이 시작되는 것도 그렇고 무엇보다 아주 헷갈립니다. 다른 곳에 두는 것도 하나의 방법이긴 하지만, 제가 생각하는 베스트는 없애버리는 것 같네요
03:42:307 (1,2) - 이 간격의 수준은 거의 리딩이 아주 애매한 부분입니다 겹치시던가 좀 더 거리를 둬주세요
02:23:893 (3,4) - 담요
03:24:682 (2,3) - ^
00:12:463 (1,2,3,4) - 앞 방향 흐름으로 잘 가다가 얘네들만 갑자기 급 꺾이네요 4슬라를 ctrl+g 할 필요가 있을 듯
01:31:709 (2,3) - DS가 너무 가까워요 마치 따로 노는 듯 한
01:43:229 (4) - 제대로 01:43:368 - 여기에 음이 있는데 차라리 1/2슬라가 낫지 않나요? 느낌 살리는 건 이미 01:43:506 (1) - 이것 만으로도 충분한 거 같은데
01:55:719 (1,2,3,4,5) - 거의 무음 수준인데 이곳에 연타를 넣으셨네요 혹시 진동을 표현하신 건가요? 제가 보기에는 아무 것도 느껴지지 않는 5서클이였어요
03:37:588 (1) - 제 생각에는 이게 없어야 할 것 같아요. 난이도가 인세인인데 후반부 가서 특별한 음이 시작되는 것도 그렇고 무엇보다 아주 헷갈립니다. 다른 곳에 두는 것도 하나의 방법이긴 하지만, 제가 생각하는 베스트는 없애버리는 것 같네요
03:42:307 (1,2) - 이 간격의 수준은 거의 리딩이 아주 애매한 부분입니다 겹치시던가 좀 더 거리를 둬주세요
FN TPS's Expert
헐 클릭당했다
Skyreus's Extra
CS3으로 하셨는데 저는 이 것에 불필요성을 느꼈습니다. 01:11:309 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 이와 같은 패턴이나 애매한 간격으로 나오는데 서클이 너무 커서 재미도 뭐도 아무 것도 느끼지 못 했습니다. 난이도 끼워 맞추시려고 하신 것이라면 현재로썬 CS3.5로 하셔도 문제가 없으니 바꾸셔도 될 것 같습니다.
00:52:988 (3) - 이거 엉뚱한 자리에 있는 거 같은데 다음 노트인 00:53:127 (4) - 를 제대로 살리지 못 하게 됬어요. 00:53:544 (1) - 이거랑 겹치시는 게 어떰
01:01:454 (2) - 01:02:009 (2) - 애매하게 겹쳐졌는데 간격을 더 띄우던가 살짝 더 겹쳐보시는 건 어떤가요
01:14:639 (1) - 너무 가까운 거 아닌가요? 01:13:528 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 이게 비슷한 패턴으로 계속 나오는데 01:14:639 (1) - 얘 혼자만 너무 가깝습니다.
01:43:784 (1) - 리버스 수를 파란틱 까지 하시는 게 어때요? 01:44:061 (1) - 이 슬라하고 거리간격이 굉장히 멀어요
03:16:145 (2,3) - 이런 거 같은 패턴으로 특별하게 넣으신 거 같은데 결과적으론 헷갈림이 찾아오고 신빙성을 잃을 뿐입니다. 차라리 3연타로 해두셨으면 더욱 재미도가 올라갈 거라 생각하네요
03:55:214 (1) - 이거 왜 있는 거임;; 3연타로 걍 바꿔요
00:52:988 (3) - 이거 엉뚱한 자리에 있는 거 같은데 다음 노트인 00:53:127 (4) - 를 제대로 살리지 못 하게 됬어요. 00:53:544 (1) - 이거랑 겹치시는 게 어떰
01:01:454 (2) - 01:02:009 (2) - 애매하게 겹쳐졌는데 간격을 더 띄우던가 살짝 더 겹쳐보시는 건 어떤가요
01:14:639 (1) - 너무 가까운 거 아닌가요? 01:13:528 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 이게 비슷한 패턴으로 계속 나오는데 01:14:639 (1) - 얘 혼자만 너무 가깝습니다.
01:43:784 (1) - 리버스 수를 파란틱 까지 하시는 게 어때요? 01:44:061 (1) - 이 슬라하고 거리간격이 굉장히 멀어요
03:16:145 (2,3) - 이런 거 같은 패턴으로 특별하게 넣으신 거 같은데 결과적으론 헷갈림이 찾아오고 신빙성을 잃을 뿐입니다. 차라리 3연타로 해두셨으면 더욱 재미도가 올라갈 거라 생각하네요
03:55:214 (1) - 이거 왜 있는 거임;; 3연타로 걍 바꿔요
Serendipity
00:21:067 (5,1) - 담요
00:06:911 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 없는 음에다가 흐름 그대로 옮기신 거 같은데 슬라이드 속도를 최소로 줄이거나 없애주는 게 더 효과 있네요
그 이후론 갓맵;
00:06:911 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 없는 음에다가 흐름 그대로 옮기신 거 같은데 슬라이드 속도를 최소로 줄이거나 없애주는 게 더 효과 있네요
그 이후론 갓맵;
제 난이도 OD를 7로 내려주세요 나 이제 봤어;
Topic Starter
몇개의 극소수에만 나타나는거긴한데 모딩할때 어조를 순화해주실 필요가 잇다고 생각합니다. 물론 명백한 오류사항이었으면 할말은 없지만 이거 왜잇는거임; 3연타로 걍 바꿔요나 인세인인데 od 8.5라니; 7로 걍 바꿔요는 모딩받는사람 입장에서 굉장히 화가납니다. 더군다나 3연타를 안쓴거는 그만한 사유가 잇을수도 잇고 랭킹 크리테리아에서는 인세인은 od 7~9로 권장해서 딱히 룰위반도 아닌데 그렇게 말씀하시면 모딩받는사람 입장에서는 화가나네요.FN TPS wrote:
이 맵 잘 되라고 하는 모딩
이거 전부 확인 안 해 보신 거 같은데 모든 난이도 02:22:436 - 부터 녹색틱 전부 확인해주세요
전부 밀려있거나 당겨져 있습니다 비피엠 오류가 잇어서 이렇게 된것같네요. 딱히 언랭사항은 아니니 이것때문에 힛사적으로 오류가 잇는부분만 처리하면 될거같습니다Easy와Normal존나Hard잘 만듬Insane인세인이 OD 8.5이라니; 적당히 7로 내려요 ㅇ
02:23:893 (3,4) - 담요
03:24:682 (2,3) - ^
00:12:463 (1,2,3,4) - 앞 방향 흐름으로 잘 가다가 얘네들만 갑자기 급 꺾이네요 4슬라를 ctrl+g 할 필요가 있을 듯 바꾸긴햇는데 컨g는 안했습니다
01:31:709 (2,3) - DS가 너무 가까워요 마치 따로 노는 듯 한
01:43:229 (4) - 제대로 01:43:368 - 여기에 음이 있는데 차라리 1/2슬라가 낫지 않나요? 느낌 살리는 건 이미 01:43:506 (1) - 이것 만으로도 충분한 거 같은데 피아노소리를 따라간게 아닙니다. 드럼사운드 따라간건데 힛사 옮겨주는 프로그램으로 작업햇는데 이부분은 힛사가 안옮겨졋네요 픽스완료
01:55:719 (1,2,3,4,5) - 거의 무음 수준인데 이곳에 연타를 넣으셨네요 혹시 진동을 표현하신 건가요? 제가 보기에는 아무 것도 느껴지지 않는 5서클이였어요 fixed
03:37:588 (1) - 제 생각에는 이게 없어야 할 것 같아요. 난이도가 인세인인데 후반부 가서 특별한 음이 시작되는 것도 그렇고 무엇보다 아주 헷갈립니다. 다른 곳에 두는 것도 하나의 방법이긴 하지만, 제가 생각하는 베스트는 없애버리는 것 같네요 앞에 나오는 연타들이 드럼소리를 따라갓기 때문에
뒤에 잇는 노트도 드럼소리가 나서 노트를 놓앗습니다. 없애버리는것은 노래 흐름을 깰수잇어서 지향하지는 않습니다만 다른모더들이 말해주면 노트 위치는
옮길수있을거같네요.
03:42:307 (1,2) - 이 간격의 수준은 거의 리딩이 아주 애매한 부분입니다 겹치시던가 좀 더 거리를 둬주세요 예압FN TPS's Expert헐 클릭당했다Skyreus's ExtraCS3으로 하셨는데 저는 이 것에 불필요성을 느꼈습니다. 01:11:309 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 이와 같은 패턴이나 애매한 간격으로 나오는데 서클이 너무 커서 재미도 뭐도 아무 것도 느끼지 못 했습니다. 난이도 끼워 맞추시려고 하신 것이라면 현재로썬 CS3.5로 하셔도 문제가 없으니 바꾸셔도 될 것 같습니다.
00:52:988 (3) - 이거 엉뚱한 자리에 있는 거 같은데 다음 노트인 00:53:127 (4) - 를 제대로 살리지 못 하게 됬어요. 00:53:544 (1) - 이거랑 겹치시는 게 어떰 3번을 4와 밀착시키는형식으로 변경함. 4번에서 딱히 디스턴스상으로 강조해줄만큼의 강한 소리도 없는데 1에다 스택시키면 흐름상으로
이상하다고 생각.
01:01:454 (2) - 01:02:009 (2) - 애매하게 겹쳐졌는데 간격을 더 띄우던가 살짝 더 겹쳐보시는 건 어떤가요 자세히보시면 안겹쳐져잇습니다.
그리고 거리를 규칙성잇게 맞춰가면서 만든건데 노트위치를 바꾼다는건 규칙성을 해칠수잇다고 생각합니다
01:14:639 (1) - 너무 가까운 거 아닌가요? 01:13:528 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 이게 비슷한 패턴으로 계속 나오는데 01:14:639 (1) - 얘 혼자만 너무 가깝습니다. 앞에 나오는 1번서클들과의 간격을 맞추려 한겁니다.
01:43:784 (1) - 리버스 수를 파란틱 까지 하시는 게 어때요? 01:44:061 (1) - 이 슬라하고 거리간격이 굉장히 멀어요
03:16:145 (2,3) - 이런 거 같은 패턴으로 특별하게 넣으신 거 같은데 결과적으론 헷갈림이 찾아오고 신빙성을 잃을 뿐입니다. 차라리 3연타로 해두셨으면 더욱 재미도가 올라갈 거라 생각하네요
03:55:214 (1) - 이거 왜 있는 거임;; 3연타로 걍 바꿔요Serendipity00:21:067 (5,1) - 담요 yep
00:06:911 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 없는 음에다가 흐름 그대로 옮기신 거 같은데 슬라이드 속도를 최소로 줄이거나 없애주는 게 더 효과 있네요 최소한의 요소만 따라갈수잇게 바꿧습니다
그 이후론 갓맵;
제 난이도 OD를 7로 내려주세요 나 이제 봤어; 랭킹크리테리아보시면 od랑 ar은 8이상으로 맞추라고 되어잇습니다. 참고하시고 다시말해주세요
Hi! sorry the m4m got late so here
Owo ModV1 ...It gotten on ModV2 nowadays so I'm pretty not good at editing here but let's get going xD
Also I'm that good at modding so don't kill me xD
I hope This Helps you well
Sorry for the rude words dud
GL
Owo ModV1 ...It gotten on ModV2 nowadays so I'm pretty not good at editing here but let's get going xD
Also I'm that good at modding so don't kill me xD
Easy
- 00:28:007 (2) -Ai mod saids its too far .. needs to fix
- 00:33:557 (1) - You can do better blanket here
- 01:37:400 (2) - Its better to put it here X:82 Y:262
- 01:49:058 (1) - Better Blanket
- 02:47:625 (2) - ^
- 03:42:307 (1) - ^
Normal
- 00:13:018 (2) - Ai mod saids its too far.. needs to fix
- 00:23:982 (1) - Remove NC .It's not appropriate to have any short combos from only 1 especially normal diffs
- 00:36:888 (4) - Better Blanket
- 00:42:163 (2) - It think its more better if this note is place under 00:41:330 (1) - By the Blanket
- 00:41:330 (1) - Adjust the note to be blanket perfectly at 00:42:440 (1)
- 00:59:095 (3) - More better if the endslider of this stacks with 00:57:707 (4)
- 01:00:483 (1) - I think its better to end the spinner here
- 01:26:852 (1) - Adjust more so it will not overlapped
- 01:39:065 (4) - its fits better if you make the slider blanket to 01:39:897 (5)
- 01:44:616 (1) - Blanket to 01:44:339 (4) - please?
- 01:55:442 (1) - Don't NC pls
- 01:55:719 (1) - Blanket also
- 01:59:883 (4) - Place it here for me its good. X:362 Y:152
- 02:39:576 (2) - Blanket to the endslider of 02:39:021 (1) .Adjust the distance of the next objects just to be the distance dosen't fixed that much
- 03:25:931 (4,5) - I'm pretty sure that Normal player will play this makes this part confusing though I didn't see other notes that you just place 2 straight circles. Just do what you did to almost all of the rhythms you have at this diff.just not like this dud
- 03:41:197 (3) - Blanket
- 03:47:859 (3) - ^
Hard
- 00:34:529 (1) - Place it here X:6 Y:169
- 01:13:111 (6) - It looks bad when it overlaps at 01:12:141 (4)
- 02:15:149 (7) - just like here ^
- 02:16:815 (5) - Why not stack instead of overlapping it at 02:15:705 (1)
- 03:02:337 - You should put notes here after.Its just like don't miss that part for me
- 03:11:219 (1) - More better here X:118 Y:77
- 03:19:824 (3) - Since its almost look like it .. why not blanket the end of slider at 03:20:101 (1)
Insane
- 00:25:786 (6,7,8,9,10) - Adjust this part a litter lower. so it will not overlapped
- 01:01:593 (1,1) - Its up to you or yes.. Remove NC
- 01:20:190 , 02:22:366 , 03:15:660 - The Change of Slider Velocity here its much Absurd dud.. I mean 1.2x seems Fine.. why 1.5x? Since almost all the rhythm are like 1.5 its still up to you.. well a high bpm map like this and adds sudden burst of Slide velocity are much mean to those players. they give a sh*t at the speed of 1.5..that's why mappers noticing things like this .. we must understand how the song works and how much we should limit the Impact of the map we have synchronizes with the song itself .. for me its not good Sorry dud
General And Conclusions
- First of all This is only I can mod .. Cuz I have those LIMITATION ..[spoiler]Lazyness and Lack of modding skills lol
- And lower diffs we should be aware of using NC .. Yea i get your point at NC'ing downbeat..but at normal and easy diffs sometimes they NC after 2 Downbeats so follow the NC like them xD
- Fix the Inherited timing points they seems that they are not In the proper lining at your BPM
- Remove
UnecessaryInherited Timing points just to be clean
I hope This Helps you well
GL
Topic Starter
thanks for the mod!ImAplayerMapper wrote:
Hi! sorry the m4m got late so here
Owo ModV1 ...It gotten on ModV2 nowadays so I'm pretty not good at editing here but let's get going xD
Also I'm that good at modding so don't kill me xDEasy
- 00:28:007 (2) -Ai mod saids its too far .. needs to fix ok
- 00:33:557 (1) - You can do better blanket here sure
- 01:37:400 (2) - Its better to put it here X:82 Y:262 yeayyy
- 01:49:058 (1) - Better Blanket fIxEd
- 02:47:625 (2) - ^ fixed slidershape because I dont wanna make blanket this
- 03:42:307 (1) - ^ fixed
Normal
- 00:13:018 (2) - Ai mod saids its too far.. needs to fix i agree
- 00:23:982 (1) - Remove NC .It's not appropriate to have any short combos from only 1 especially normal diffs yes
- 00:36:888 (4) - Better Blanket yep
- 00:42:163 (2) - It think its more better if this note is place under 00:41:330 (1) - By the Blanketfixed
- 00:41:330 (1) - Adjust the note to be blanket perfectly at 00:42:440 (1) yes
- 00:59:095 (3) - More better if the endslider of this stacks with 00:57:707 (4) nice catch
- 01:00:483 (1) - I think its better to end the spinner here if you meant start I agree
- 01:26:852 (1) - Adjust more so it will not overlapped fixed
- 01:39:065 (4) - its fits better if you make the slider blanket to 01:39:897 (5) not going to blanket since it would require player to curve their cursor rapidly that would be hard to normal diff players. but I can change route
- 01:44:616 (1) - Blanket to 01:44:339 (4) - please? changed slidershape because ^
- 01:55:442 (1) - Don't NC pls this was nced internationally on every diff and its on purpose to emphasize this sound. Im not going to fix this for now but if its mentioned by another modder then I will fix
- 01:55:719 (1) - Blanket also yes
- 01:59:883 (4) - Place it here for me its good. X:362 Y:152 love it
- 02:39:576 (2) - Blanket to the endslider of 02:39:021 (1) .Adjust the distance of the next objects just to be the distance dosen't fixed that much changing slidershape
- 03:25:931 (4,5) - I'm pretty sure that Normal player will play this makes this part confusing though I didn't see other notes that you just place 2 straight circles. Just do what you did to almost all of the rhythms you have at this diff.just not like this dud I agree. fixed to slider
- 03:41:197 (3) - Blanket changing slidershape
- 03:47:859 (3) - ^ fixed
Hard
- 00:34:529 (1) - Place it here X:6 Y:169 ok
- 01:13:111 (6) - It looks bad when it overlaps at 01:12:141 (4) Fixdesu
- 02:15:149 (7) - just like here ^ ^
- 02:16:815 (5) - Why not stack instead of overlapping it at 02:15:705 (1) using slidershape
- 03:02:337 - You should put notes here after.Its just like don't miss that part for me umm..idk i followed instrument sounds for this diff and section you mentioned has few of instruments. I dont like expressing that because I have to place notes by 1/1 to follow instrument. that wont be fun. I want give players to take a rest . btw Im open with another opinions about here
- 03:11:219 (1) - More better here X:118 Y:77 fixed
- 03:19:824 (3) - Since its almost look like it .. why not blanket the end of slider at 03:20:101 (1) yes
Insane
- 00:25:786 (6,7,8,9,10) - Adjust this part a litter lower. so it will not overlapped sure
- 01:01:593 (1,1) - Its up to you or yes.. Remove NC removing nc doesnt look that clean so I will keep this
- 01:20:190 , 02:22:366 , 03:15:660 - The Change of Slider Velocity here its much Absurd dud.. I mean 1.2x seems Fine.. why 1.5x? Since almost all the rhythm are like 1.5 its still up to you.. well a high bpm map like this and adds sudden burst of Slide velocity are much mean to those players. they give a sh*t at the speed of 1.5..that's why mappers noticing things like this .. we must understand how the song works and how much we should limit the Impact of the map we have synchronizes with the song itself .. this is pretty interesting way to express song I guess. theres 5 reasons that I used 1.5 multipler. 1 . because I used 1.5 sv in serendipity diff. this diff is start that uses sv change by greeen line, look at other diffs. they used rapidly fast sv when kiai comes. 2 . because I didnt use that many jump patterns. I think using jump pattern to increase star difficulty is bad idea because the song is high bpm as you said. so Im increasing it with using high sv and high distance with less jump pattern. I think its fun and interesting way. 3 . because this song gets so active and powerful when kiai comes. compare with other sections that I used 1 sv likes 01:11:308 (1). theres completely difference. so I used 1.5 sv to express the burst. using 1.2 sv doesnt look that good idea because it cant specify the kiai burst. 4 . because I should change the whole pattern. I mainly used 1 sv and as I said 1 sv and 1.2 sv arent that different in gameplay. If i use 1.2sv than I should change this diff's whole pattern. 5 . its not that fast. I testplayed this lots of times and I can follow all of them. and I set the diff's slider speed to 1.3 so I think its fine. but I will receive opinions about this for me its not good Sorry dud
General And Conclusions
- First of all This is only I can mod .. Cuz I have those LIMITATION ..[spoiler]Lazyness and Lack of modding skills lol
- And lower diffs we should be aware of using NC .. Yea i get your point at NC'ing downbeat..but at normal and easy diffs sometimes they NC after 2 Downbeats so follow the NC like them xD I can agree this but its different from case so.. idk :^
- Fix the Inherited timing points they seems that they are not In the proper lining at your BPM yes I should do but oh god... ;-;
- Remove
UnecessaryInherited Timing points just to be clean I think its fine since its not unrankable issue I think but I will do this either later
I hope This Helps you wellSorry for the rude words dud
GL
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몇개의 극소수에만 나타나는거긴한데 모딩할때 어조를 순화해주실 필요가 잇다고 생각합니다. 물론 명백한 오류사항이었으면 할말은 없지만 이거 왜잇는거임; 3연타로 걍 바꿔요나 인세인인데 od 8.5라니; 7로 걍 바꿔요는 모딩받는사람 입장에서 굉장히 화가납니다. 더군다나 3연타를 안쓴거는 그만한 사유가 잇을수도 잇고 랭킹 크리테리아에서는 인세인은 od 7~9로 권장해서 딱히 룰위반도 아닌데 그렇게 말씀하시면 모딩받는사람 입장에서는 화가나네요.
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몇개의 극소수에만 나타나는거긴한데 모딩할때 어조를 순화해주실 필요가 잇다고 생각합니다. 물론 명백한 오류사항이었으면 할말은 없지만 이거 왜잇는거임; 3연타로 걍 바꿔요나 인세인인데 od 8.5라니; 7로 걍 바꿔요는 모딩받는사람 입장에서 굉장히 화가납니다. 더군다나 3연타를 안쓴거는 그만한 사유가 잇을수도 잇고 랭킹 크리테리아에서는 인세인은 od 7~9로 권장해서 딱히 룰위반도 아닌데 그렇게 말씀하시면 모딩받는사람 입장에서는 화가나네요.
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Hello o/ You posted on my queue
Serendipity
00:34:530 (1,2) - bad overlap here, simply move 00:34:807 (2) - down a little, and you're good here
00:34:807 (2) - ctrl+h this and move it to the right like this -> https://hypercyte.s-ul.eu/fGNSYQq7 It makes for nice flow and doesn't feel awkward to play!
00:43:273 (5) - You can change the curve direction to improve flow here too. This time just ctrl+J and move back to where it used to be like this -> https://hypercyte.s-ul.eu/tJQ7PKtO
01:07:422 (3) - I'd stack this on the tail of 01:06:867 (1) - which makes it flow a lot better.
(if you do this it'll create an overlap with 01:07:977 (1) - , so i'd stack 01:07:977 (1) - with the tail of 01:07:422 (3) - and just move the circle afterward a bit closer)
Insane
00:33:003 (3) - I'd move this up a little and this 00:32:864 (2) - down a little to keep it neat like this ->https://hypercyte.s-ul.eu/h9yzuPBE
Try to keep a solid gap between objects, and it'll make it look 10x nicer
00:53:543 (1) - Make this just a normal curve. Having special shapes for short sliders doesn't look very good. I also don't see a reason to have this shape here anyway so I think it's best to just keep it a normal curve.
Alternatively, you could just have 1 red anchor here, to have a bent slider like this, which also works well -> https://hypercyte.s-ul.eu/ZOVZZysI
That's all I've got time for, good luck with the map, looks pretty solid!
Serendipity
00:34:530 (1,2) - bad overlap here, simply move 00:34:807 (2) - down a little, and you're good here
00:34:807 (2) - ctrl+h this and move it to the right like this -> https://hypercyte.s-ul.eu/fGNSYQq7 It makes for nice flow and doesn't feel awkward to play!
00:43:273 (5) - You can change the curve direction to improve flow here too. This time just ctrl+J and move back to where it used to be like this -> https://hypercyte.s-ul.eu/tJQ7PKtO
01:07:422 (3) - I'd stack this on the tail of 01:06:867 (1) - which makes it flow a lot better.
(if you do this it'll create an overlap with 01:07:977 (1) - , so i'd stack 01:07:977 (1) - with the tail of 01:07:422 (3) - and just move the circle afterward a bit closer)
Insane
00:33:003 (3) - I'd move this up a little and this 00:32:864 (2) - down a little to keep it neat like this ->https://hypercyte.s-ul.eu/h9yzuPBE
Try to keep a solid gap between objects, and it'll make it look 10x nicer
00:53:543 (1) - Make this just a normal curve. Having special shapes for short sliders doesn't look very good. I also don't see a reason to have this shape here anyway so I think it's best to just keep it a normal curve.
Alternatively, you could just have 1 red anchor here, to have a bent slider like this, which also works well -> https://hypercyte.s-ul.eu/ZOVZZysI
That's all I've got time for, good luck with the map, looks pretty solid!
Topic Starter
thanks for the mod!hypercyte wrote:
Hello o/ You posted on my queue
Serendipity
00:34:530 (1,2) - bad overlap here, simply move 00:34:807 (2) - down a little, and you're good here fixed
00:34:807 (2) - ctrl+h this and move it to the right like this -> https://hypercyte.s-ul.eu/fGNSYQq7 It makes for nice flow and doesn't feel awkward to play! I didnt get what are you meaning here
00:43:273 (5) - You can change the curve direction to improve flow here too. This time just ctrl+J and move back to where it used to be like this -> https://hypercyte.s-ul.eu/tJQ7PKtO I want to make blanket 00:43:273 (5,8) - here so no change I guess. (it wasnt blanket. fixed thanks)
01:07:422 (3) - I'd stack this on the tail of 01:06:867 (1) - which makes it flow a lot better.
(if you do this it'll create an overlap with 01:07:977 (1) - , so i'd stack 01:07:977 (1) - with the tail of 01:07:422 (3) - and just move the circle afterward a bit closer) I dont think it flows better and I want to keep here because I used same distance on patterns 01:02:426 (1) ~ 01:11:030 (4) -
Insane
00:33:003 (3) - I'd move this up a little and this 00:32:864 (2) - down a little to keep it neat like this ->https://hypercyte.s-ul.eu/h9yzuPBE
Try to keep a solid gap between objects, and it'll make it look 10x nicer changed pattern instead because of distance consistancy
00:53:543 (1) - Make this just a normal curve. Having special shapes for short sliders doesn't look very good. I also don't see a reason to have this shape here anyway so I think it's best to just keep it a normal curve.
Alternatively, you could just have 1 red anchor here, to have a bent slider like this, which also works well -> https://hypercyte.s-ul.eu/ZOVZZysI because vocal is pretty weird here. vocal is saying special stuff that I expressed this with 2 kicksliders on serendipity diff and I wanted to emphasize vocal here by using weird slider here. I think it works out well
That's all I've got time for, good luck with the map, looks pretty solid!
지극히 정당한 이의입니다 힘내세요_Epreus wrote:
몇개의 극소수에만 나타나는거긴한데 모딩할때 어조를 순화해주실 필요가 잇다고 생각합니다. 물론 명백한 오류사항이었으면 할말은 없지만 이거 왜잇는거임; 3연타로 걍 바꿔요나 인세인인데 od 8.5라니; 7로 걍 바꿔요는 모딩받는사람 입장에서 굉장히 화가납니다. 더군다나 3연타를 안쓴거는 그만한 사유가 잇을수도 잇고 랭킹 크리테리아에서는 인세인은 od 7~9로 권장해서 딱히 룰위반도 아닌데 그렇게 말씀하시면 모딩받는사람 입장에서는 화가나네요.
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