Helblinde - DEAD END [OsuMania]

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error_exe777
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Oscyy
yo
NM req from queue

this will not have much thing to point out i think
100 bpm opening - im bit confused what sound are you following, i guess i'll skip this
00:33:124 - make triple for piano weird thing sound that appears only in 4th beat?
00:53:569 - this should be double isn't it?
00:57:091 (57091|2) - delete i think, this must be emphasized as single since you put double on kicks already
00:57:352 - idk what are those ln for tbh
01:08:178 - 1/4 note as usual 01:08:439 - this weird sound is better with ln i think
01:19:526 - i already point out this thing and 01:19:395 - should be double
01:35:960 - i'll skip this, i'm bad at this part
02:09:873 - jumpstream and 02:10:917 - jumptrill for fading in sound
02:13:786 - 02:14:047 - 02:14:308 - double?
02:20:830 - why this kick sometimes double sometimes triple? i would make it all triple since its kiai here
02:37:917 - single would be good?
02:54:221 - feels like anti-climax for these triple on early part, i think make this triple would be good
03:02:569 - cymbal crash, triple?
03:07:656 - double
03:10:917 - you mis-emphasized alot of kicks and snare here, probably you should recheck this part
03:14:047 - jumptrill :(
04:57:352 - ^
05:01:395 - ?

that is all i can catch i think...
good luck
Topic Starter
error_exe777

OscarRickyH02 wrote:

yo
NM req from queue

this will not have much thing to point out i think
100 bpm opening - im bit confused what sound are you following, i guess i'll skip this eh it's fine i think. cba to explain
00:33:124 - make triple for piano weird thing sound that appears only in 4th beat? sure
00:53:569 - this should be double isn't it? oh yeah
00:57:091 (57091|2) - delete i think, this must be emphasized as single since you put double on kicks already kay
00:57:352 - idk what are those ln for tbh kya this part was p a i n f u l to map as i had no idea what to do. i just charted it with doubles now
01:08:178 - 1/4 note as usual 01:08:439 - this weird sound is better with ln i think mm okay
01:19:526 - i already point out this thing and 01:19:395 - should be double okay
01:35:960 - i'll skip this, i'm bad at this part
02:09:873 - jumpstream and 02:10:917 - jumptrill for fading in sound what. it;s not a trill lol. unless i'm getting my phrases mixed
02:13:786 - 02:14:047 - 02:14:308 - double? all changed
02:20:830 - why this kick sometimes double sometimes triple? i would make it all triple since its kiai here nah bc one of them is stronger than the other, and i don't want them all to jack
02:37:917 - single would be good? okay
02:54:221 - feels like anti-climax for these triple on early part, i think make this triple would be good sure
03:02:569 - cymbal crash, triple? oh yeah okay
03:07:656 - double kay
03:10:917 - you mis-emphasized alot of kicks and snare here, probably you should recheck this part eh this part was the hardest to map,
i just did it my strength of the sound

03:14:047 - jumptrill :(i've probably got my names for things mixed up but no thats snapped to 1/4
04:57:352 - ^
05:01:395 - ? it's the same as 04:48:873 - so yaknow. it's fine dw

that is all i can catch i think...
good luck
thanks a lot :):)
Oscyy
Trill : alternating note pattern (ex: 1-2-1-2)
Jump : also known as double
Jumptrill : trill that made of doubles (ex: 12-34-12-34)
Blastix riotz's kiai is one of jumptrill pattern
Topic Starter
error_exe777

OscarRickyH02 wrote:

Trill : alternating note pattern (ex: 1-2-1-2)
Jump : also known as double
Jumptrill : trill that made of doubles (ex: 12-34-12-34)
Blastix riotz's kiai is one of jumptrill pattern
OHHH THANKS OMG i knew what a jump was but it makes sense now thank youuuuuuuuuuuu
Civilization
yo
00:14:414 (14414|0) - this note is early
00:42:743 (42743|0,42743|2) - make hand
00:43:786 (43786|1,43786|0) - ^
00:44:830 (44830|3,44830|2) - ^
00:45:091 (45091|3,45091|2) - ^ and etc
00:48:873 (48873|1,49004|1,49134|1) - Dont let there be 3 in a row
00:53:960 (53960|1,53960|2) - No jacks here please
00:58:004 (58004|2,58004|1,58134|0,58134|3,58265|0,58265|3,58395|3,58395|0) - This is uncomfortable
01:07:069 - you miss a note here
02:03:613 (123613|2,123613|3) - make this a hand
02:04:656 (124656|3) - make this a jump
02:37:786 (157786|2,157917|2,158047|2,158178|2,158308|2) - you have an anchor at the speed of the jumptrills previously, you need to remove
03:14:047 (194047|2,194047|3,194113|3,194113|2,194178|2,194178|3,194243|3,194243|2) - this is too fast, make it a jumptrill
03:14:569 (194569|0,194569|1,194634|1,194634|0,194699|1,194699|0,194765|0,194765|1) - ^
03:14:830 (194830|3,194846|2,194863|1,194879|0,194895|3,194911|2,194928|1,194944|0,194960|3,194977|2,194993|1,195009|0,195026|3,195042|2,195058|1,195074|0) - this is too fast
03:18:743 (198743|1,198743|3,198743|0) - this sound isnt any different to 03:18:482 (198482|3,198482|1) - this
03:39:352 (219352|1,219482|1,219613|1,219743|1) - this jack is bad
03:47:699 (227699|2,227830|2,227960|2,228091|2) - ^
03:52:134 (232134|2,232265|2,232395|2,232526|2) - ^
03:54:613 (234613|1,234743|1,234873|1) - ^
04:00:221 (240221|2,240352|2,240482|2,240613|2) - ^
04:01:004 (241004|2,241004|0,241004|1,241134|3,241265|1,241395|3,241395|0,241526|2,241656|1,241786|0,241917|3,241917|1,242047|2,242178|3,242178|0,242308|1,242439|3,242439|2,242569|1,242699|2,242699|0,242830|1,242960|3,242960|0) - This part is wrong. The jumps should be on the white lines and the single notes should be on the red lines.
04:04:395 (244395|1,244526|1,244656|1,244786|1) - Fix this jack
04:08:830 (248830|3,248960|3,249091|3,249221|3) - ^
04:12:743 (252743|2,252873|2,253004|2,253134|2) - ^
04:13:004 (253004|0,253134|0,253265|0,253395|0) - ^
04:15:221 (255221|3,255352|3,255482|3,255613|3) - ^
04:28:134 (268134|0,268134|2) - Make this a hand
04:28:656 (268656|1,268656|3) - ^
04:29:178 (269178|1,269178|0) - ^ etc
04:57:352 (297352|1,297352|0,297417|0,297417|1,297482|0,297482|1,297547|1,297547|0) - Again, this is too fast
04:57:873 (297873|3,297873|2,297939|3,297939|2,298004|3,298004|2,298069|2,298069|3) - ^
04:58:134 (298134|0,298151|1,298167|2,298183|3,298199|0,298216|1,298232|2,298248|3,298265|0,298281|1,298297|2,298314|3,298330|0,298346|1,298363|2,298379|3) - ^
05:07:786 - Release this LN here

good lu ck :D
Topic Starter
error_exe777

Civilization wrote:

yo
00:14:414 (14414|0) - this note is early
00:42:743 (42743|0,42743|2) - make hand
00:43:786 (43786|1,43786|0) - ^
00:44:830 (44830|3,44830|2) - ^
00:45:091 (45091|3,45091|2) - ^ and etc
00:48:873 (48873|1,49004|1,49134|1) - Dont let there be 3 in a row
00:53:960 (53960|1,53960|2) - No jacks here please
00:58:004 (58004|2,58004|1,58134|0,58134|3,58265|0,58265|3,58395|3,58395|0) - This is uncomfortable
01:07:069 - you miss a note here
02:03:613 (123613|2,123613|3) - make this a hand nah
02:04:656 (124656|3) - make this a jump nah it's fine
02:37:786 (157786|2,157917|2,158047|2,158178|2,158308|2) - you have an anchor at the speed of the jumptrills previously, you need to remove
03:14:047 (194047|2,194047|3,194113|3,194113|2,194178|2,194178|3,194243|3,194243|2) - this is too fast, make it a jumptrill
03:14:569 (194569|0,194569|1,194634|1,194634|0,194699|1,194699|0,194765|0,194765|1) - ^
03:14:830 (194830|3,194846|2,194863|1,194879|0,194895|3,194911|2,194928|1,194944|0,194960|3,194977|2,194993|1,195009|0,195026|3,195042|2,195058|1,195074|0) - this is too fast
03:18:743 (198743|1,198743|3,198743|0) - this sound isnt any different to 03:18:482 (198482|3,198482|1) - this
03:39:352 (219352|1,219482|1,219613|1,219743|1) - this jack is bad
03:47:699 (227699|2,227830|2,227960|2,228091|2) - ^
03:52:134 (232134|2,232265|2,232395|2,232526|2) - ^
03:54:613 (234613|1,234743|1,234873|1) - ^
04:00:221 (240221|2,240352|2,240482|2,240613|2) - ^
04:01:004 (241004|2,241004|0,241004|1,241134|3,241265|1,241395|3,241395|0,241526|2,241656|1,241786|0,241917|3,241917|1,242047|2,242178|3,242178|0,242308|1,242439|3,242439|2,242569|1,242699|2,242699|0,242830|1,242960|3,242960|0) - This part is wrong. The jumps should be on the white lines and the single notes should be on the red lines.
04:04:395 (244395|1,244526|1,244656|1,244786|1) - Fix this jack
04:08:830 (248830|3,248960|3,249091|3,249221|3) - ^
04:12:743 (252743|2,252873|2,253004|2,253134|2) - ^
04:13:004 (253004|0,253134|0,253265|0,253395|0) - ^
04:15:221 (255221|3,255352|3,255482|3,255613|3) - ^
04:28:134 (268134|0,268134|2) - Make this a hand
04:28:656 (268656|1,268656|3) - ^
04:29:178 (269178|1,269178|0) - ^ etc
04:57:352 (297352|1,297352|0,297417|0,297417|1,297482|0,297482|1,297547|1,297547|0) - Again, this is too fast
04:57:873 (297873|3,297873|2,297939|3,297939|2,298004|3,298004|2,298069|2,298069|3) - ^
04:58:134 (298134|0,298151|1,298167|2,298183|3,298199|0,298216|1,298232|2,298248|3,298265|0,298281|1,298297|2,298314|3,298330|0,298346|1,298363|2,298379|3) - ^
05:07:786 - Release this LN here

good lu ck :D
no reply means i applied it because there is alot there

thank you!
Adiopulse
Adiopulse's Mod


i think your map should start here 00:14:564 also fix this unsnaped ln 00:14:514 (14514|0) -

Also your timing is off in the beggining from those wierd untuned piano notes

00:51:091 note for piano note
00:52:134 ^
00:53:178 ^
so on^

00:58:004 (58004|2) ln sound starts at 00:57:873 -

01:35:960 (95960|0,96091|3,96156|2,96352|0,96547|2,96613|1,96808|3,97004|0) delete these

01:37:199 - should be like this https://puu.sh/xkc3P/cb9e53312f.png with that ln extended to 01:37:917 -

02:15:613 change pattern https://puu.sh/xkcdb/aa17e18b35.png

02:43:265 another note for piano
02:43:786 ^
02:44:308 ^
02:44:830 ^

03:29:699 i think these triples should just be doubles
03:38:047 you can add triples at this point^^^^

04:02:047 add ln
Topic Starter
error_exe777

Adiopulse wrote:

Adiopulse's Mod


i think your map should start here 00:14:564 nO because drain time would be below 5 minutes and i aint mapping a whole spread also fix this unsnaped ln 00:14:514 (14514|0) - ??????? it's 1/6

Also your timing is off in the beggining from those wierd untuned piano notes theyre snapped to the 1/16 above actually, fixed

00:51:091 note for piano note
00:52:134 ^
00:53:178 ^
so on^ all done

00:58:004 (58004|2) ln sound starts at 00:57:873 - fixed

01:35:960 (95960|0,96091|3,96156|2,96352|0,96547|2,96613|1,96808|3,97004|0) delete these nah drain time

01:37:199 - should be like this https://puu.sh/xkc3P/cb9e53312f.png with that ln extended to 01:37:917 - what even? 1/4? ill pass

02:15:613 change pattern https://puu.sh/xkcdb/aa17e18b35.png mm okay

02:43:265 another note for piano
02:43:786 ^
02:44:308 ^
02:44:830 ^ all fixed

03:29:699 i think these triples should just be doubles
03:38:047 you can add triples at this point^^^^ nah its fine

04:02:047 add ln okay
thank you!

edit: where did this mod come from....?? lmaoo
Kyousukee
00:44:830 - have a same sound with 00:45:091 - should be stacked right ? like this 00:45:352 (45352|1,45352|2,45482|1,45482|2) -
double note at here 02:30:743 - not being consistent with 02:28:656 -

other's seem fine to me ~
gl and that background actually a bit off scary to me lol xD
Topic Starter
error_exe777

Kyousukee wrote:

00:44:830 - have a same sound with 00:45:091 - should be stacked right ? like this 00:45:352 (45352|1,45352|2,45482|1,45482|2) - oops fixed
double note at here 02:30:743 - not being consistent with 02:28:656 - no bc the quad, which is now a triple, is representing a new section of the music

other's seem fine to me ~
gl and that background actually a bit off scary to me lol xD
thanks!
atian540
hitsound complete
DOWNLOAD HERE for file
use magic copy for copy all hitsound p/5392330 requires java 8
if you have question,pls PM me or chat in-game
http://upaste.me/532e490764a087e6d
the GD is soon
Topic Starter
error_exe777

atian540 wrote:

hitsound complete
DOWNLOAD HERE for file
use magic copy for copy all hitsound p/5392330 requires java 8
if you have question,pls PM me or chat in-game
http://upaste.me/532e490764a087e6d
the GD is soon
all done, thank you loads!
Arzenvald
hey
gotta notify you guys, my pc broken last night, can't mod this until it repaired.. im sorry >,<
atian540

Arzenvald wrote:

hey
gotta notify you guys, my pc broken last night, can't mod this until it repaired.. im sorry >,<
GWS for your PC OwO)b
Topic Starter
error_exe777

Arzenvald wrote:

hey
gotta notify you guys, my pc broken last night, can't mod this until it repaired.. im sorry >,<
dont worryyyyy. hope you fix your PC o/
Arzenvald
a little faster than i thought but here's the mod you requested in forum

[General]
*-* not sure if that opening part safe for minors (and the lyrics etc etc), its wise to mark the map description with Parental Advisory? http://www.imdb.com/title/tt2069441/parentalguide

rename 4K Diff into 'Survival Game (4K)' & 7K Diff into '540's Death Game (7K)' to make difficulty name looks neater

[7K]
00:15:327 (15327|4) - stronger beat, can add 1 note
00:36:515 (36515|2,36515|4,36776|1,36776|5,37037|4,37037|2) - make the pattern similar with previous beat, such as https://puu.sh/xwftg.png.
00:37:428 (37428|2,37428|6) - this part would looks & plays better with mini jacks than stairy pattern, as it will resemble the static snare beats, such as https://puu.sh/xwfxd.png
00:39:384 (39384|6,39384|5,39450|3,39450|4,39515|2,39515|1,39580|4,39580|5,39645|3,39645|2,39710|0,39710|1,39776|6,39776|5,39841|4,39841|3,39906|1,39906|2,39971|4,39971|5,40037|3,40037|2,40102|0,40102|1,40167|5,40167|6,40232|3,40232|4,40297|1,40297|2,40363|5,40363|4,40428|2,40428|3) - and i'd ctrl+H this to make an escalating Pitch arrangement, left-to-right

00:44:830 (44830|0,45091|3) - try this, https://puu.sh/xwfCh.png
cant see why 00:45:613 (45613|2,45613|5,45613|1,45613|4,45743|2,45743|4) - has different amount of note too

00:46:917 (46917|0) - up to 00:47:960 (47960|0) - you can make the pattern arrangement a little more stiff because the 2/4 hi-hats doesn't plays as loud as the other part, such as https://puu.sh/xwfFU.png

00:53:439 (53439|0,53439|2,53439|1,53569|6,53569|4,53569|5) - you can make it similar / filpped with 00:53:830 (53830|2,53830|4,53830|0,53960|3,53960|1,53960|5) - to variate the pattern

00:57:221 (57221|3) - add more note, while 00:57:091 (57091|4,57091|6,57091|0) - remove some, the beat are bigger in 00:57:221

00:57:352 (57352|1) - good place for SV, since you don't really layer the 1/2 tom / bass alike

01:08:047 (68047|2) - intentionally skipping those 1/4 notes? they sounds clear enough to be layered

01:13:395 (73395|4,73656|4) - 01:14:699 (74699|1,74960|1) - a little bit uncomfortable to play, you might want to move them somewhere

01:20:047 (80047|2,80047|4) - bigger beat, add note, and
01:20:178 (80178|1,80178|5,80178|3) - remove some, its weaker than 01:20:047 (80047|2) - & 01:20:308 (80308|0) -

01:29:308 (89308|4,89439|2,89569|1) - just a suggestion, you can add some notes between these LN to emphasize layer the synth

missing some beat : 01:38:960 - 01:41:308 - 01:43:134 - 01:45:482 - 01:47:308 - 01:49:656 - 01:51:482 -

01:59:047 (119047|6,119080|5,119113|4,119145|0,119178|1,119210|2,119243|4,119276|5,119308|6) - i reckon this as ghost notes / dump because there's no clear 1/8 cue sounds, i suggest to use different simple pattern than 1/8 stream like this

02:02:569 (122569|2,122699|1,122830|0,122960|2,123091|4,123221|6,123352|5,123482|1) - 1/3 like in 4K?

02:11:960 (131960|4,131960|2) - add in 2 & 6, bigger beat tbh

02:55:265 (175265|1) - in this part, the 3 1 3 1 chain is very long (10 sec) while you can utilize the vocal beats to make more variation, maybe either LN or doubles to layer the vocal?

03:35:569 (215569|2) - move to 5, then 03:35:830 (215830|4,215960|1) - move to 3, the anchor will layers the synth better

04:04:395 (244395|0,244395|1) - try this? https://puu.sh/xwgO5.png same like previous suggestion, you can apply similar idea in 04:08:569 (248569|2) - https://puu.sh/xwgQB.png
04:12:743 (252743|6) - 04:16:917 (256917|3,256917|4,256917|2) - ^

04:07:265 (247265|2,247265|4) - 04:15:613 (255613|2,255613|4) - avoid this anchor

04:28:134 (268134|6) - i suppose you can turn some notes into LNs, to layer the piano will variate the 3-1-2-1 chain

it plays quiet good, the nature of the song itself is quiet repetitive and sync quiet well with the current 7K chart imo

mod ends, hope it helps and good luck! :D
atian540
NO REPLY = ACC

Arzenvald wrote:

a little faster than i thought but here's the mod you requested in forum

[General]
*-* not sure if that opening part safe for minors (and the lyrics etc etc), its wise to mark the map description with Parental Advisory? http://www.imdb.com/title/tt2069441/parentalguide

rename 4K Diff into 'Survival Game (4K)' & 7K Diff into '540's Death Game (7K)' to make difficulty name looks neater

[7K]
00:15:327 (15327|4) - stronger beat, can add 1 note
00:36:515 (36515|2,36515|4,36776|1,36776|5,37037|4,37037|2) - make the pattern similar with previous beat, such as https://puu.sh/xwftg.png. nais
00:37:428 (37428|2,37428|6) - this part would looks & plays better with mini jacks than stairy pattern, as it will resemble the static snare beats, such as https://puu.sh/xwfxd.png
00:39:384 (39384|6,39384|5,39450|3,39450|4,39515|2,39515|1,39580|4,39580|5,39645|3,39645|2,39710|0,39710|1,39776|6,39776|5,39841|4,39841|3,39906|1,39906|2,39971|4,39971|5,40037|3,40037|2,40102|0,40102|1,40167|5,40167|6,40232|3,40232|4,40297|1,40297|2,40363|5,40363|4,40428|2,40428|3) - and i'd ctrl+H this to make an escalating Pitch arrangement, left-to-right

00:44:830 (44830|0,45091|3) - try this, https://puu.sh/xwfCh.png
cant see why 00:45:613 (45613|2,45613|5,45613|1,45613|4,45743|2,45743|4) - has different amount of note too

00:46:917 (46917|0) - up to 00:47:960 (47960|0) - you can make the pattern arrangement a little more stiff because the 2/4 hi-hats doesn't plays as loud as the other part, such as https://puu.sh/xwfFU.png

00:53:439 (53439|0,53439|2,53439|1,53569|6,53569|4,53569|5) - you can make it similar / filpped with 00:53:830 (53830|2,53830|4,53830|0,53960|3,53960|1,53960|5) - to variate the pattern

00:57:221 (57221|3) - add more note, while 00:57:091 (57091|4,57091|6,57091|0) - remove some, the beat are bigger in 00:57:221

00:57:352 (57352|1) - good place for SV, since you don't really layer the 1/2 tom / bass alike

01:08:047 (68047|2) - intentionally skipping those 1/4 notes? they sounds clear enough to be layered

01:13:395 (73395|4,73656|4) - 01:14:699 (74699|1,74960|1) - a little bit uncomfortable to play, you might want to move them somewhere

01:20:047 (80047|2,80047|4) - bigger beat, add note, and
01:20:178 (80178|1,80178|5,80178|3) - remove some, its weaker than 01:20:047 (80047|2) - & 01:20:308 (80308|0) -

01:29:308 (89308|4,89439|2,89569|1) - just a suggestion, you can add some notes between these LN to emphasize layer the synth nope

missing some beat : 01:38:960 - 01:41:308 - 01:43:134 - 01:45:482 - 01:47:308 - 01:49:656 - 01:51:482 -

01:59:047 (119047|6,119080|5,119113|4,119145|0,119178|1,119210|2,119243|4,119276|5,119308|6) - i reckon this as ghost notes / dump because there's no clear 1/8 cue sounds, i suggest to use different simple pattern than 1/8 stream like this this ?? where ?

02:02:569 (122569|2,122699|1,122830|0,122960|2,123091|4,123221|6,123352|5,123482|1) - 1/3 like in 4K? nope,

02:11:960 (131960|4,131960|2) - add in 2 & 6, bigger beat tbh

02:55:265 (175265|1) - in this part, the 3 1 3 1 chain is very long (10 sec) while you can utilize the vocal beats to make more variation, maybe either LN or doubles to layer the vocal?

03:35:569 (215569|2) - move to 5, then 03:35:830 (215830|4,215960|1) - move to 3, the anchor will layers the synth better

04:04:395 (244395|0,244395|1) - try this? https://puu.sh/xwgO5.png same like previous suggestion, you can apply similar idea in 04:08:569 (248569|2) - https://puu.sh/xwgQB.png
04:12:743 (252743|6) - 04:16:917 (256917|3,256917|4,256917|2) - ^

04:07:265 (247265|2,247265|4) - 04:15:613 (255613|2,255613|4) - avoid this anchor

04:28:134 (268134|6) - i suppose you can turn some notes into LNs, to layer the piano will variate the 3-1-2-1 chain

it plays quiet good, the nature of the song itself is quiet repetitive and sync quiet well with the current 7K chart imo

mod ends, hope it helps and good luck! :D
its very helpful sup,lain kali pake b. indo pls biar cepet paham :3

pls rename Survival Game into ==> 4K Survival Game
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[quote="Arzenvald"]a little faster than i thought but here's the mod you requested in forum

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*-* not sure if that opening part safe for minors (and the lyrics etc etc), its wise to mark the map description with Parental Advisory? http://www.imdb.com/title/tt2069441/parentalguide

rename 4K Diff into 'Survival Game (4K)' & 7K Diff into '540's Death Game (7K)' to make difficulty name looks neater

i changed the diff names and the PA thing i can understand so yeah okay

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