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also otome ryouran when kappa
[ divine]
- 00:13:593 to 00:18:393 - this section seems a lot more empty than the one from 00:18:393 - onward despite them being virtually the same thing, maybe refrain from the 1/1 gaps
- 00:27:243 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - holy fucj this is p uncomfy to play
- 00:29:043 (2,3) - this is like the only thing u stacked in the section pls space out instead ,,,,,
- 00:37:893 onward - 1/1 and 1/2 are spaced exactly the same here, might cause reading problems
- 00:52:293 to 00:56:793 - might b cool to gradually increase volume for the clap hs
- 01:23:193 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - wot bugs me about these sort of things r tht the drums go 1 2 1 2 but ur jumps go 1 2 3 1 2 3 ya get what im sayin
- 01:25:593 (1) // 03:21:393 (1) etc - sharp decrease in hs volume might catch players way off guard and make them think there no feedback on this
- 01:53:343 (2,3,4) // 01:54:543 (2,3,4) // same stuff in the last kiai too - i dont c any reason 4 uncomfy flow
- 01:56:943 (9,10,1) - i feel like the sharp bend thing you did earlier on emphasized 1 better
- 02:21:843 (1,2) - readability kudasai
- 03:02:793 (3,4) - i might b deaf but i dont think claps fit on the tails here
- 03:11:793 (1,2) etc - toshino kyoko starter pack
- 03:37:903 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - i came
- 03:43:753 (1,1) - i think these should be spaced like 03:44:803 (1) - was for emphasis also nice mini hexgrid
- 04:56:053 (1,3) // 04:56:053 (1,3) etc - unrankable direct slider overlap since 1 isnt almost fully faded out by the time 3 comes in :c (a rule of thumb is if theyre 2 beats apart its fine to overlap them thank mr monstrata)
also otome ryouran when kappa