DJ TOTTO feat. Yoshikawa Sunao - Arousing · forum

Underforest

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2018-01-11T00:28:46+00:00

did I forgot to return mod for this? ah, i'm so sorry
anyway, here's the m4m return after a long time

modding 3 diffs to be fair with drain time

[normal]
00:34:253 (1,3,4) - avoid stacking in normals, this is not visible too much and may confuse new players
01:27:047 (2) - ^
01:54:030 (6) - again, try to not stack it

[advanced]
00:26:712 (2,5,1,4,2,4,1,2) - why you do overlaps like this? :c

[hard]
00:13:639 (2) - you can make a 1/4 slider instead
00:53:192 (1) - ctrl+h? it improves the flow a bit and also blanks the previous circle
01:54:030 (2) - move to x:197 y:285 maybe

sorry for not modding higher diffs, but i hope this mod helps

gl~

Petal

Nomination Assessment Team

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Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Petal 2018-01-11T16:56:57+00:00

ok I gave up so I remapped normal diff kek

Seolv

847 posts

Joined March 2016

Seolv 2018-01-14T20:12:03+00:00

owob from queue

[- -

Normal - -]

00:32:745 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - This chain of objects is too big for a calm part, try to split it down and divide it into a few separate bits
00:44:979 (6) - NC here
00:43:471 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Same as the first point
01:35:259 (2) - You might wanna make this into a different slidershape to make it consistent since you never used this slidershape before
What I noticed in the map is that the kiai isn't really much more dense than the rest, try to delete some objects in the calm parts to make them less dense, also put NCs consistently since I saw throughout the map there were some places where the NCs didn't really make sense

[- -

Insane - -]

00:06:097 (2,3,1) - Make spacing equal
00:06:265 (1,2,3) - Same here
00:08:779 (5,6,1) - Quiet sound, make the spacing smaller
00:16:991 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't think these should have same spacing since the first four have more audible sounds on them unlike the last four, try to make the first four a little bit more spaced
00:19:505 (1) - Space more so that it isn't confused for a 1/2 gap
00:20:678 (1) - Try center the part that goes up in the middle to make it look better
00:34:086 (7,7) - Why did you make these into kicksliders?
00:47:494 (9) - Make this slider similar to 00:24:700 (1) - for consistency, or make a special and different slider that you didn't put anywhere else
01:02:577 (1,2,3) - These aren't supposed to go there but on 1/6 (01:02:857 - )
01:03:080 (1) - This slider ends on a pretty strong kick that you might want to emphasize, put a circle there

ok done

Petal

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Topic Starter

Petal 2018-01-16T18:56:18+00:00

[ L u k a s ] wrote:
owob from queue

[- - Normal - -]
00:32:745 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - This chain of objects is too big for a calm part, try to split it down and divide it into a few separate bits done
00:44:979 (6) - NC here ok
00:43:471 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Same as the first point yea
01:35:259 (2) - You might wanna make this into a different slidershape to make it consistent since you never used this slidershape before fixed
What I noticed in the map is that the kiai isn't really much more dense than the rest, try to delete some objects in the calm parts to make them less dense, also put NCs consistently since I saw throughout the map there were some places where the NCs didn't really make sense oik fixed all

[- - Insane - -]
00:06:097 (2,3,1) - Make spacing equal just wanted to emphasize the NC
00:06:265 (1,2,3) - Same here fixed
00:08:779 (5,6,1) - Quiet sound, make the spacing smaller I think its fine since this is a small build up climax ish thing
00:16:991 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't think these should have same spacing since the first four have more audible sounds on them unlike the last four, try to make the first four a little bit more spaced well this is following the drum and the wave sound at the same time , and the wave sound is not gone , just fading away but the drum isnt
00:19:505 (1) - Space more so that it isn't confused for a 1/2 gap 00:19:337 - in this part is complete silence so I think that cancels out large movements needed from players , thats why I put them so close to each other , also I've been doing this consistently as well 01:44:645 (1,1,1) -
00:20:678 (1) - Try center the part that goes up in the middle to make it look better Fixed
00:34:086 (7,7) - Why did you make these into kicksliders? because the clap sound is different from the jumps and also to emphasize 00:34:253 (1) - 's release
00:47:494 (9) - Make this slider similar to 00:24:700 (1) - for consistency, or make a special and different slider that you didn't put anywhere else holy how did you spot this lol ok fixed
01:02:577 (1,2,3) - These aren't supposed to go there but on 1/6 (01:02:857 - ) yeah I noticed but I wanted to map the drums as well
01:03:080 (1) - This slider ends on a pretty strong kick that you might want to emphasize, put a circle there yeah ur right

ok done

thanks for mod

Kawashiro

1,522 posts

Joined April 2012

Kawashiro 2018-01-17T07:55:51+00:00

from my q

[Insane]

00:03:583 (1,2,3) - Don't you think this combo is too short? I think you can swap nc at 00:04:253 (1,3) - here. And then delete 00:05:594 (1) - this NC. Same as 00:06:265 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - here, just follow 4 beat nc owo
00:08:946 (1) - just delete nc?
00:11:293 (1) - this sv changing seems unnecessary. it seems not special and I think 00:09:617 (1,2,3,4,1) - whole this part sounds similar imo.
00:51:684 (1,2) - stack? owo
01:11:293 (1,1) - why overlapped this?

Done

GL

Petal

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Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Petal 2018-01-20T15:19:39+00:00

Kawashiro wrote:
from my q

[Insane]
00:03:583 (1,2,3) - Don't you think this combo is too short? I think you can swap nc at 00:04:253 (1,3) - here. And then delete 00:05:594 (1) - this NC. Same as 00:06:265 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - here, just follow 4 beat nc owo I'll take your first suggestion but I think the rest after that is fine since I wanted to emphasize on the vocals as well
00:08:946 (1) - just delete nc? I don't agree because this is a downbeat , but instead I removed NC on this 00:09:617 (3) - instead , seems resonable
00:11:293 (1) - this sv changing seems unnecessary. it seems not special and I think 00:09:617 (1,2,3,4,1) - whole this part sounds similar imo. I changed the SV on that because I wanted to emphasize 00:11:628 (1) - , well sometimes I just wanted to do something to express the vocals
00:51:684 (1,2) - stack? owo I don't get what you mean ;w; I assume ur telling me to stack 2 on 1's tail but I didn't introduce doing that at eariler stages of the map so maybe not ;w;
01:11:293 (1,1) - why overlapped this? because I think the hit window on 01:11:293 (1,1) - is too small so I don't want it to be spaced out so much
Done

GL

thank you for mod!~!!@

Deppyforce

1,961 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2018-01-21T09:57:45+00:00

Sinnoh wrote:
Advanced
There are missing hitsounds everywhere fix
00:30:231 (4,5,6,7,8) - Don't like that there's only circles here, there are plenty of held vocals so would make more sense to me to use sliders. i prefer this way because the next slider 00:32:075 (1) - have better impact
00:33:751 (4,1,2) - These overlaps are really messy without any reason for them they look fine lol
01:03:918 (2,1,2,3) - This is only going to cause confusion and really hurts my head to look at. Can you use an alternative structure here. placed 2nd circle other side. should be more readable now
yeah not a fan of this too bad but no one like my maps anyway

Underforest wrote:
[advanced]
00:26:712 (2,5,1,4,2,4,1,2) - why you do overlaps like this? :c theyre readable tho lol

th a nk

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fieryrage

osu! Champion / Elite Nominator II

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fieryrage 2018-01-31T04:58:24+00:00

o/

priti Avena stop name changing

od 9.5 is like really overkill especially considering the insane is only od 7 lol, would make this od 9 personally

00:55:538 (8) - shouldn't this have drum hitnormals on it as well?
01:03:415 (2) - this is not straight and it makes me Angry
01:10:456 (2,1) - spacing here is like really tiny considering you're coming from a jump lol, would buff this spacing
01:46:153 (1,1) - unrankable due to the hit lighting covering the slider repeat

insane

od 8 would fit the spread better here imo considering the od of the top diff

00:08:108 (3) - clap shouldn't be here (if it was going to be on something it'd be on 00:08:276 - but that isn't mapped so)
00:19:170 (1,1) - space this out a bit more, it contrasts heavily with spacing like 00:18:834 (3,4) - this despite being different rhythm gaps
00:31:739 (1) - remove nc, it isn't really needed here, same goes for 00:42:298 (1) - this one
01:02:577 (1,2,3) - this is really needlessly complex, why not just do 1/2 since that seems to be what you're following here? adding the guitar vibros (or whatever it is) here as well makes this really weird rhythmically
01:03:918 (1) - missing clap on sliderend
01:37:270 (6) - better off as a single note on the red tick and something else on the downbeat, feels really underwhelming not mapping the downbeat here since you mapped it everywhere else

gl!

Petal

Nomination Assessment Team

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Topic Starter

Petal 2018-02-08T01:46:29+00:00

Redownload for New SB , btw I'm taking over arena's diff since he's gone for over 2 months without sign of returning lol

Last edited by Petal 2018-02-09T08:00:51+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Petal

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Petal 2018-02-09T08:00:38+00:00

fieryrage wrote:
o/

priti Avena stop name changing
od 9.5 is like really overkill especially considering the insane is only od 7 lol, would make this od 9 personally ok
00:55:538 (8) - shouldn't this have drum hitnormals on it as well? yes
01:03:415 (2) - this is not straight and it makes me Angry aw come on this is barely noticeable fixed
01:10:456 (2,1) - spacing here is like really tiny considering you're coming from a jump lol, would buff this spacing agreed
01:46:153 (1,1) - unrankable due to the hit lighting covering the slider repeat need to look into this
insane
od 8 would fit the spread better here imo considering the od of the top diff yea
00:08:108 (3) - clap shouldn't be here (if it was going to be on something it'd be on 00:08:276 - but that isn't mapped so) fix
00:19:170 (1,1) - space this out a bit more, it contrasts heavily with spacing like 00:18:834 (3,4) - this despite being different rhythm gaps same reason when I replied to Lukas' mod
00:31:739 (1) - remove nc, it isn't really needed here, same goes for 00:42:298 (1) - this one ok
01:02:577 (1,2,3) - this is really needlessly complex, why not just do 1/2 since that seems to be what you're following here? adding the guitar vibros (or whatever it is) here as well makes this really weird rhythmically but its cool :/
01:03:918 (1) - missing clap on sliderend fixed
01:37:270 (6) - better off as a single note on the red tick and something else on the downbeat, feels really underwhelming not mapping the downbeat here since you mapped it everywhere else yeah fixed
gl!

thank you

mancuso_JM_

osu! Alumni

4,615 posts

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mancuso_JM_ 2018-02-16T01:32:48+00:00

Hi there! Modding from my queue!

[byd's Easy]

00:10:287 (2) - Try adding some whistles in basically all this slider (except the sliderbody) to follow vocals. I can understand if you don't want to add hitsounds in 00:01:572 (1) - because everything sounds really quite, but I think they are necessary here, they sounds really good.
00:29:728 (2) - I personally think you can move this slider some grids down, doing that it won't touch the HP Bar. I know this is a bit nitpicky but it'll help you in term of aesthetically. Try moving this slider some grids down by using Grid Size: 4 (tiny).
01:02:577 (1) - Similar as 00:10:287 (2) - . In this case, it'll help you to follow the new sound in the instrumental, if you know what I mean.
01:20:008 (3) - This is a bit nitpicky as well, but this slider head is touching a bit the HP Bar with the default skin. You can fix it easily by moving this object some grids down, I recommend you to select all these notes 01:20:008 (3,4,1,2,3) - - so you don't have fix anything in this nice pattern and adapt 01:23:695 (4) - to the spacing afterwards, it is really easy to fix that, so you should give it a try. Same as before about using Grid Size: 4 (tiny).
01:44:980 (4,1) - This is the only pattern in 1/2 in the whole map, there is no need to make this map more difficult, in addition this pattern becomes inconsistent due this reason. If you replace the slider (4) for a single note in 01:44:980 - you'll make this pattern more consistent with the rest of the map.

- Nice difficulty! Great job!

[Normal]

00:11:628 (1,1) - The recovery time after the spinner is not high enough for this difficulty because the BPM is not that slow. There aren't that much ways to fix that, I don't know if you want to use a slider instead of this spinner, anyway I tried something different that I'd like to show you. If you try to move the objects closer to the middle of the screen, I think the recovery time will be enough because the cursor movement won't be really abrupt. Take this as an example
01:21:851 (x) - I think you can add a note here to follow vocals closer, it won't be difficult after all and breaks a bit the 1/1 pattern that it doesn't sound really good.
01:23:360 (3,4) - I think 4 notes don't work really good here, you can take advantage of vocals here and try to use a slider instead of these.
01:32:075 (1) - This note as a single combo is not following really good your combo'ing. I'd try to remove it and just emphasize the next one with a new combo, where the music becomes stronger.
01:42:131 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - vs. 01:46:823 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Try to make the combo'ing between these patterns consistent please, the music is basically the same but you used a different way to add them. I'd try something 01:42:131 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - vs. 01:46:823 (3,1,1,2,3,4) - , I personally think you can have a single combo when the music sounds like 01:42:131 (1) - & 01:47:494 (1) - . Give it a try please.
01:44:645 (1,1,1) - This combo spam is not really necessary in that kind of difficulties, I see your idea but still these notes are following the same thing in the music. I'd use a simple (1,2,3) here.
01:52:857 (3) - Add a New Combo to emphasize the end of the map?

- I didn't find major problems in this difficulty but the comboing becomes weird at the end of the map. Would be better to fix that.

[Deppy's Advanced]

00:33:751 (4,1,2) - 00:44:477 (4,1,2) - I know, these overlaps are intentional but are they really necessary? I think you're trying something different in your map but sincerely it doesn't look really neat. You can maybe find other way to don't have these overlaps, I'm sure you can do that much better.
00:40:287 (2,3) - 01:47:326 (5,6) - Minor stuff, stack them properly. You used quite a lot stacks in this difficulty and all of them are well stacked except for these.
01:19:840 (x) - I really missed a beat here, it sounds really empty without it. Would be better to add an object (or at least a slider end) here, you can leave without objects 01:20:510 - , in my personal point of view this is less important.
01:36:600 (5,6,7) - This pattern sounds a bit weird, I think you can represent much better the music here. I tried this rhythmical patterns, I think it'll cover better vocals and instrumentals.
01:55:036 (T) - Can you reduce the volume in this inherited timing point? Actually, it sounds loud to the end of the song, try using around 20% instead and you'll find a better effect.

- Not bad. Maybe not the best difficulty in terms of aesthetic but it flows well in general. Good job!

[GIDZ'S Hard]

01:19:002 (2) - 01:29:728 (2) - 01:32:410 (2) - I'd add New Combos in all these objects, to emphasize the music pitch and those flash kiai that you decided to use.
01:44:645 (3,4,5) - Try reducing a bit the volume in those slider ends mainly, they don't fit really well to the song. In addition, I didn't like to see this pattern stacked, it doesn't flow really well comparing with the whole difficulty, I think you can unstack them as well.

- Good rhythm + Constant spacing = There isn't much more things to mod here

[Starfy's Hyper]

00:31:739 (1,2) - 00:42:466 (1,2) - I prefer to see them unstacked, or at least a bit more separated so players can notice this 1/8 slider. When you play the map, the repetition is not really simple to notice it and it looks like a simple note. Try to make those repetitions more noticeable, so players can expect this pattern much better.
01:20:343 (3,4,1) - 01:21:013 (3,4,1) - 01:31:069 (3,4,1) - 01:31:739 (3,4,1) - Can you rearrange a bit the combo'ing here and transform those antijumps into (1,2,3) - (1,2,1) - (1,2,3) - (1,2,1) respectively? You generally used compressed streams in this kiai section but the usage of those antijumps are understandable here as well, but if you don't make something to make these pattern easier to read, player will probably think this is a simple 1/4. Yeah, you can probably say "players who play this difficulty are not noob to read that" but sometimes they need something like that for a better playability. I'm telling you that because I had a experience in one of my maps in the past, with a similar pattern and some pro players told me to represent better that kind of things and I personally think that makes sense.
01:54:198 (1) - What do you think about ending this slider 1/4 or 1/2 earlier? If you listen the music in 25% playback rate, I think the music stop there.

- Cool. I liked the structure of this difficulty

[Insane]

00:01:572 (1,2,3) - I don't really agree with the rhythm usage here, I prefer to see the idea of Starfy and Avena instead, 3/4 sliders doesn't have anything to do/represent here and the last 1/1 sounds quite off. Just in case, I'd like to see that instead.
00:11:628 (1) - Use a spinner instead of a slider? You did that in Normal and I have to say a Spinner is more difficult than a simple slider. In addition, you can take advantage of this looking that you don't have any spinner here.
00:17:829 (2,3) - I'd like to see a higher spacing between these objects because appear a new sound in the music, if you listen to it properly, you'll notice it. You can maybe do something like that, take this as an easy example, you can maybe have a better idea than me xD.
00:23:024 (1,1) - The spacing between them can be a bit higher too. Try moving 00:23:192 (1) - around x:384 y:336, you'll emphasize the new sound in the instrumental.
00:24:700 (1) - This 3/4 doesn't sound that bad but in this difficulty you can innovate a bit more in my opinion. I think there is enough sound in 00:24:868 - and especially in 00:24:952 where I think that passive mapping doesn't cover the song enough in this difficulty in particular. If I were you, I'd reduce this slider in 1/4 and add a single note in 00:24:952 - to provide the music a better rhythm, you should give it a try. If you do agree with me, do that in 00:47:494 (1) - too.
00:31:739 (6) - Increase this slider length in 1/4? Long vocal section that can be good represented with that technique. You can reduce the volume at this slider end for a better sound effect.
00:38:443 (1,2) - A bit minor, but for a weird reason this is the only manual stack in the whole difficulty. Would be better to stack them properly for consistency.
00:41:963 (4,5) - In this case, the downbeat at 00:42:466 - isn't well emphasized due the passive mapping, I think a slider start should be placed there. Following my suggestion at 00:31:739 (6) - as well, you can use this rhythm instead.
01:20:678 (6) - A constant 1/2 doesn't benefit the song at all in the kiai, you have a lot of things to follow instead of the simple instrumental that always goes in 1/2. I think you can follow vocals here, by doing a pattern like this
01:43:639 (2,3) - You can use a jump here as I mentioned in 00:17:829 (2,3) - . Take this as an example.

- Some things can be emphasized better, despite that, this is a good difficulty.

[Avena's Extreme]

00:31:739 (1) - vs. 00:42:467 (1) - This sections are basically the same rhythmically but you're leaving a rest time in 00:31:907 - that isn't really necessary. Use a 1/2 slider as you did in 00:42:467 (1) - .
01:01:153 (x) - It's an extra, you can fill this blank with a note in my opinion. The sound is higher enough to have an object.
01:11:963 (T) - Reduce the volume in this green line, the slider is following that background sound but actually it sounds pretty loud. Try using 15% instead.
01:15:902 (x) - 01:26:628 (x) - If you can do some tweaks in these patterns to have notes in these points would be excellent because there is a good sound to follow there, but well, if you can't find a good solution I'm not going to bother you that much.
01:21:348 (1) - Can be extended in 1/4 to cover better both instrumental/vocals.
01:46:153 (1,1) - The reverse arrow isn't complete hidden by the note, but in some way it can cause confuse due the fast slider. I think (1) can be moved some grids to don't have any problem in the future.
01:54:030 (1) - I'm a bit sad because this slider doesn't end in 01:55:036 - where the music stops completely. Can you do that for me? :3

- "Priti" nice difficulty in general xD. Still, it can receive some more mods because I only see one in all this thread.

That's all!
I have to say this set is pretty well done in general, I'd like to see some more mods in Insane/Extra mainly.
I'll probably come back in the near future. I hope this mod can help you!
Till then, Good Luck! c:

PD: If you have a metadata source, I'd like to see it somewhere.

bite you death

Beatmap Nominator

654 posts

Joined May 2015

bite you death 2018-02-17T15:13:39+00:00

mancuso_JM_ wrote:
Hi there! Modding from my queue! hey hey

[byd's Easy]

00:10:287 (2) - Try adding some whistles in basically all this slider (except the sliderbody) to follow vocals. I can understand if you don't want to add hitsounds in 00:01:572 (1) - because everything sounds really quite, but I think they are necessary here, they sounds really good. ye i just copied hs from my old shitty diff and it had a different rhyhm, will fix hs things
00:29:728 (2) - I personally think you can move this slider some grids down, doing that it won't touch the HP Bar. I know this is a bit nitpicky but it'll help you in term of aesthetically. Try moving this slider some grids down by using Grid Size: 4 (tiny). eh, doesnt touch hp bar or score bar for me so i think its fine, but if you provide a screenshot or something where it touches it on a different resolution i can change it
01:02:577 (1) - Similar as 00:10:287 (2) - . In this case, it'll help you to follow the new sound in the instrumental, if you know what I mean. ye
01:20:008 (3) - This is a bit nitpicky as well, but this slider head is touching a bit the HP Bar with the default skin. You can fix it easily by moving this object some grids down, I recommend you to select all these notes 01:20:008 (3,4,1,2,3) - - so you don't have fix anything in this nice pattern and adapt 01:23:695 (4) - to the spacing afterwards, it is really easy to fix that, so you should give it a try. Same as before about using Grid Size: 4 (tiny). ye moved it down a bit
01:44:980 (4,1) - This is the only pattern in 1/2 in the whole map, there is no need to make this map more difficult, in addition this pattern becomes inconsistent due this reason. If you replace the slider (4) for a single note in 01:44:980 - you'll make this pattern more consistent with the rest of the map. tough one, as it follows the song. but i guess keeping it consistent would be better, so changed
- Nice difficulty! Great job! ty :d

PD: If you have a metadata source, I'd like to see it somewhere. i believe the metadata is taken from a ranked set, but there was some arguing about surname first, here's the metadata links and you can decide which is better xd
http://sooopiyo.pw/
https://p.eagate.573.jp/game/bemani/p/a ... totto.html
Lanturn wrote:
Lots of Japanese artists use Given / Family order on their websites when writing in Romanization.
http://nbcuni-music.com/maon/
http://www.tomatsuharuka.com/
http://www.mizukinana.jp/
http://minori-smiledays.jugem.jp/

even CDs do this
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-wj5Sd3aZFus/U ... IGNITE.jpg
http://www.generasia.com/w/images/thumb ... N_2003.jpg
http://blog-imgs-45.fc2.com/a/r/t/artw0 ... _q90v2.jpg

add these hs for me @matha https://puu.sh/zpKdU.wav (soft-sliderslide4) https://puu.sh/zpKei.wav (normal-sliderslide5)

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Petal

Nomination Assessment Team

1,170 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Petal 2018-02-22T16:59:25+00:00

mancuso_JM_ wrote:
Hi there! Modding from my queue!

Normal

00:11:628 (1,1) - The recovery time after the spinner is not high enough for this difficulty because the BPM is not that slow. There aren't that much ways to fix that, I don't know if you want to use a slider instead of this spinner, anyway I tried something different that I'd like to show you. If you try to move the objects closer to the middle of the screen, I think the recovery time will be enough because the cursor movement won't be really abrupt. Take this as an example omg fixed thank you~
01:21:851 (x) - I think you can add a note here to follow vocals closer, it won't be difficult after all and breaks a bit the 1/1 pattern that it doesn't sound really good. agreed
01:23:360 (3,4) - I think 4 notes don't work really good here, you can take advantage of vocals here and try to use a slider instead of these. okay
01:32:075 (1) - This note as a single combo is not following really good your combo'ing. I'd try to remove it and just emphasize the next one with a new combo, where the music becomes stronger. ok
01:42:131 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - vs. 01:46:823 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Try to make the combo'ing between these patterns consistent please, the music is basically the same but you used a different way to add them. I'd try something 01:42:131 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - vs. 01:46:823 (3,1,1,2,3,4) - , I personally think you can have a single combo when the music sounds like 01:42:131 (1) - & 01:47:494 (1) - . Give it a try please. I think I fixed the problem
01:44:645 (1,1,1) - This combo spam is not really necessary in that kind of difficulties, I see your idea but still these notes are following the same thing in the music. I'd use a simple (1,2,3) here. ok
01:52:857 (3) - Add a New Combo to emphasize the end of the map?ok
- I didn't find major problems in this difficulty but the comboing becomes weird at the end of the map. Would be better to fix that. Fixed

[Insane]

00:01:572 (1,2,3) - I don't really agree with the rhythm usage here, I prefer to see the idea of Starfy and Avena instead, 3/4 sliders doesn't have anything to do/represent here and the last 1/1 sounds quite off. Just in case, I'd like to see that instead.okay I didn't relise how bad this was until now
00:11:628 (1) - Use a spinner instead of a slider? You did that in Normal and I have to say a Spinner is more difficult than a simple slider. In addition, you can take advantage of this looking that you don't have any spinner here. having this to be a slider just feels nicer , I feel like if it was a spinner it would be too short to bring out any emphasis to the song
00:17:829 (2,3) - I'd like to see a higher spacing between these objects because appear a new sound in the music, if you listen to it properly, you'll notice it. You can maybe do something like that, take this as an easy example, you can maybe have a better idea than me xD.00:16:991 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - here I was trying to emphasize the sound behind the drums , it would be weird if I were to space these out imo because the noise in the background is fading away , that takes away a reason for a sudden jump/DS increase in the map even though there is a drum sound there
00:23:024 (1,1) - The spacing between them can be a bit higher too. Try moving 00:23:192 (1) - around x:384 y:336, you'll emphasize the new sound in the instrumental. ok
00:24:700 (1) - This 3/4 doesn't sound that bad but in this difficulty you can innovate a bit more in my opinion. I think there is enough sound in 00:24:868 - and especially in 00:24:952 where I think that passive mapping doesn't cover the song enough in this difficulty in particular. If I were you, I'd reduce this slider in 1/4 and add a single note in 00:24:952 - to provide the music a better rhythm, you should give it a try. If you do agree with me, do that in 00:47:494 (1) - too.one of the reasons that I increased the SV on this slider is because I wanted to bring out 00:25:036 (1) - 's hard downbeat , but currently with your method replacing it with a 1/4 slider and circles won't bring the same effect that I wanted it to
00:31:739 (6) - Increase this slider length in 1/4? Long vocal section that can be good represented with that technique. You can reduce the volume at this slider end for a better sound effect.good idea
00:38:443 (1,2) - A bit minor, but for a weird reason this is the only manual stack in the whole difficulty. Would be better to stack them properly for consistency.fixed , I misclicked here
00:41:963 (4,5) - In this case, the downbeat at 00:42:466 - isn't well emphasized due the passive mapping, I think a slider start should be placed there. Following my suggestion at 00:31:739 (6) - as well, you can use this rhythm instead.fixed
01:20:678 (6) - A constant 1/2 doesn't benefit the song at all in the kiai, you have a lot of things to follow instead of the simple instrumental that always goes in 1/2. I think you can follow vocals here, by doing a pattern like this don't really like sliders ending on blue tick because it will ignore the drum sound on the red , but I do agree that this need to change so I did a few adjustments
01:43:639 (2,3) - You can use a jump here as I mentioned in 00:17:829 (2,3) - . Take this as an example.
same reason as above ><
- Some things can be emphasized better, despite that, this is a good difficulty.

[Avena's Extreme]

00:31:739 (1) - vs. 00:42:467 (1) - This sections are basically the same rhythmically but you're leaving a rest time in 00:31:907 - that isn't really necessary. Use a 1/2 slider as you did in 00:42:467 (1) - . fixed
01:01:153 (x) - It's an extra, you can fill this blank with a note in my opinion. The sound is higher enough to have an object. it kinda feels weird to have a triple in the calm part , I understand that placing a note there is reasonable but I just personally don't like it
01:11:963 (T) - Reduce the volume in this green line, the slider is following that background sound but actually it sounds pretty loud. Try using 15% instead.ok
01:15:902 (x) - 01:26:628 (x) - If you can do some tweaks in these patterns to have notes in these points would be excellent because there is a good sound to follow there, but well, if you can't find a good solution I'm not going to bother you that much.
01:21:348 (1) - Can be extended in 1/4 to cover better both instrumental/vocals.ok
01:46:153 (1,1) - The reverse arrow isn't complete hidden by the note, but in some way it can cause confuse due the fast slider. I think (1) can be moved some grids to don't have any problem in the future. fixed
01:54:030 (1) - I'm a bit sad because this slider doesn't end in 01:55:036 - where the music stops completely. Can you do that for me? :3
I didn't get this either but I mean he must have his own reason right?
- "Priti" nice difficulty in general xD. Still, it can receive some more mods because I only see one in all this thread.

That's all!
I have to say this set is pretty well done in general, I'd like to see some more mods in Insane/Extra mainly.
I'll probably come back in the near future. I hope this mod can help you!
Till then, Good Luck! c:

PD: If you have a metadata source, I'd like to see it somewhere.

Deppyforce

1,961 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2018-03-01T12:32:35+00:00

mancuso_JM_ wrote:
[Deppy's Advanced]

00:33:751 (4,1,2) - 00:44:477 (4,1,2) - I know, these overlaps are intentional but are they really necessary? I think you're trying something different in your map but sincerely it doesn't look really neat. You can maybe find other way to don't have these overlaps, I'm sure you can do that much better. they are intentional though, you even said it yourself!!
00:40:287 (2,3) - 01:47:326 (5,6) - Minor stuff, stack them properly. You used quite a lot stacks in this difficulty and all of them are well stacked except for these. ok
01:19:840 (x) - I really missed a beat here, it sounds really empty without it. Would be better to add an object (or at least a slider end) here, you can leave without objects 01:20:510 - , in my personal point of view this is less important. but that one has drums, so i think it should be prioritized more imo
01:36:600 (5,6,7) - This pattern sounds a bit weird, I think you can represent much better the music here. I tried this rhythmical patterns, I think it'll cover better vocals and instrumentals. again, im mapping drums!
01:55:036 (T) - Can you reduce the volume in this inherited timing point? Actually, it sounds loud to the end of the song, try using around 20% instead and you'll find a better effect. yes ok
- Not bad. Maybe not the best difficulty in terms of aesthetic but it flows well in general. Good job! thanks

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GIDZ

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Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2018-03-02T19:32:29+00:00

Sinnoh wrote:
Hard
00:16:991 (1) - 01:42:801 (1) - 01:48:164 (1) - These can be spaced a little further apart from each other so it's easier to read what is going on. 1.2x DSed them properly

Underforest wrote:
[hard]
00:13:639 (2) - you can make a 1/4 slider instead why, the music here suggests 1/2 as the strong sounds are at white and red tick
00:53:192 (1) - ctrl+h? it improves the flow a bit and also blanks the previous circle nop, Im following DS consistency for my Hard diffs
01:54:030 (2) - move to x:197 y:285 maybe 01:53:192 (6) - Is on that side so I wanna make my pattern go the other way lol

mancuso_JM_ wrote:
[GIDZ'S Hard]

01:19:002 (2) - 01:29:728 (2) - 01:32:410 (2) - I'd add New Combos in all these objects, to emphasize the music pitch and those flash kiai that you decided to use. Agreed, applied~
01:44:645 (3,4,5) - Try reducing a bit the volume in those slider ends mainly, they don't fit really well to the song. In addition, I didn't like to see this pattern stacked, it doesn't flow really well comparing with the whole difficulty, I think you can unstack them as well.Lowered the volume for this part. The reason why I stacked them is cuz the music pauses every 1/2 rhythm here which in turn I have emphasized visually, therefore flow isn't of my concern here but rather music to visual emphasis
- Good rhythm + Constant spacing = There isn't much more things to mod here Thanks!

UPDATE

osu file format v14

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420,99,75985,6,0,P|384:93|347:93,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,129,76320,1,8,0:0:0:0:
247,77,76488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
187,35,76656,2,0,P|124:27|67:37,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,95,77158,6,0,L|33:178,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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112,278,78164,2,0,L|117:361,1,60,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
49,367,78499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
49,367,78583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
49,367,78667,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,356,79002,6,0,P|198:294|183:222,1,120,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,193,79505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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271,86,80008,6,0,L|140:89,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,130,80510,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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282,212,81851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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142,375,82689,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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82,341,82941,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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74,208,83360,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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325,135,84533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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385,369,85203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
457,366,85371,6,0,P|471:331|476:284,1,60,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,240,85706,1,8,0:0:0:0:
487,177,85874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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322,73,86376,1,8,0:0:0:0:
259,109,86544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,109,86628,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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221,230,87047,1,8,0:0:0:0:
291,240,87214,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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61,298,87885,6,0,P|51:264|49:226,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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353,315,90734,5,2,0:0:0:0:
353,315,90902,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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370,149,91572,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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372,16,92075,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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184,32,92913,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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202,263,93583,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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100,277,93918,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,277,94086,2,0,B|51:268|51:268|0:288,2,90,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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212,185,97773,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,253,97941,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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130,346,98443,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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102,82,99114,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,110,99281,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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244,230,100622,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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372,326,101125,2,0,P|394:299|400:265,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,202,101460,5,8,0:0:0:0:
447,151,101628,1,2,0:0:0:0:
447,151,101712,1,2,0:0:0:0:
447,151,101795,1,8,0:0:0:0:
397,88,101963,1,2,0:0:0:0:
350,143,102131,2,0,B|278:147|278:147|261:135|261:135|244:148|244:148|176:146,1,180
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220,287,104477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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361,243,105315,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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138,212,105985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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92,56,106488,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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278,94,107326,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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483,239,109505,6,2,L|533:235,7,30
503,271,110175,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,253,110510,1,2,0:0:0:0:
247,343,110846,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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238,353,113192,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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141,252,114030,1,6,0:0:0:0:

Yugu

Elite Mapper

1,006 posts

Joined August 2013

Yugu 2018-03-07T16:47:27+00:00

m4m from your q

Avena's Extreme

01:02:577 (1) - i think it s not good to suddenly increase three times SV in quiet part , although have special sound here and you want to show it . i still think it s easy slider break when player play it first time . nerf some SV maybe better :3
00:23:527 (2) - seems overlap so much to hard to read this slider very well . also it s 2.00x SV so maybe easy get 100 . how about adjusting the angle and stack 00:23:527 (2) - on 00:23:192 (3) - 's slider end ?
01:17:662 (1,2,3) - the drum is not strong enough to support this huge ds imo . this part of the durm 01:23:360 (1,2,3,4,5) - is stronger than 01:17:662 (1,2,3) - , but its ds not bigger than 01:17:662 (1,2,3) - . i think it should nerf some ds .
01:17:662 (1,2) - can make same overlap pattern like 01:17:326 (1,2) -
01:54:030 (1) - maybe increase some SV or spacing to make player perceive it will be better ? you used high speed sliders in the end part especially here 01:53:527 (1,2,3) - , it also have huge ds . decrease SV suddenly maybe not good .

Insane

01:22:941 (7,8,9,1) - try to make them like this ? some player (newplayer) maybe can t play four notes streams . make them looks like triple can help them to distinguish rhythm .
01:23:527 (3) - change become 1/4 slider ? cuz 01:23:611 - have drum sound

i tried my best

hope it's helpful
gl!

Kyle Y

1,204 posts

Joined November 2013

Kyle Y 2018-03-07T19:18:45+00:00

hi, Starfy.

#in-game M4M request

Top 2 diff ... molamola

Insane

前面intro (~00:12:633 - ) 對ranking 黎講問題不太, 不過我覺得可以再好少少
00:04:253 (4) - 00:06:935 - strong beat 希望加反少少jump. 如果講rhythm 既話...個人喜好鐘意咁處理 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10418503|
00:08:276 - missing strong beat, inconsistent with strong beat sound 00:04:253 - 00:05:594 - 00:06:935 - 00:09:617 - etc. Please use clickable object here.
00:20:678 (1) - reverse 位冇1/8 sound, 我聽到既係1/2 同1/4 sound
張圖太多nc... 好colorful, please remove unnecessary nc:
00:13:974 (1) - 因為前面combo chain 00:13:639 (1,2,3,4) - 冇slider ... 咁唔需要加nc 去顯示SV change.
00:19:170 (1) - 依條slider snapping 同前面一樣,都唔需要加nc , 00:19:505 (1) - 先要
00:23:192 (1) - 唔洗加... 但係00:23:527 (2) - 要加因為 00:23:527 - 每小節既strong beat.
00:26:041 (1) - 冇SV change
仲有好多slider nc 問題
00:19:505 (1) - suggest ctrl+g, separate more from 00:19:170 (5) - because 00:19:170 (5,1) - is quite misleading. ctrl+g to meet flowing to 00:19:672 (1) -
00:28:555 (4,5) - and 00:31:237 (4,5) - consistence?
no sound at 01:02:689 - but 01:02:633 -
01:44:645 (1,1,1) - 其實要用slider map beat sound 既話唔係用1/8 snapped 咩 ...一黎分開1/4 slider 二黎1/8 仲有beat 既感覺
01:51:013 (2,1) - 建議 overlap or stacking. 因為player 未必可以馬上從1/2 rhtyhm 轉到1/1. (視覺距離相近)
00:25:036 (1) - 個SB effect 好正
張圖入面既flowing 有待改善... 各部份之間flow 不太連貫可理解為emphasize.. 但各部份入面flowing 唔好就好奇怪.. 有冇咁多野比你強調
再講啦, emphasize 其實都係一個對比所形成, 你全部break flow 只會比人覺得flowing 唔好(00:26:879 (3,1) - 00:29:561 (3,1) - 00:31:237 (4,5) - 01:16:488 (3,1) - )
01:20:008 (4,5,6) - 依種flowing 可接受
about looking:
我估你都懶得改.. 同埋又真係好主觀..不過都講左先
直接比圖算:
00:15:985 (2,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10418570
00:04:756 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10418735 (fit vocal)
01:05:929 (1) - https://i.imgur.com/N352HYl.png
etc. (我都懶)

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Avana's Extreme

00:03:583 - strong beat here, why should be emphasized by a jump or whatever?
00:19:170 (1) - This is mapped for that beat sound, and Insane diff use 1/4 slider
00:13:639 - This SV change is too sudden.
00:20:678 (1) - I cannot hear any sound at 00:20:804 - but 00:20:846 - and 00:20:929 -
00:23:527 (2) - could you ake it more visible?
00:33:080 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This is not a good pattern here, because jumping (00:33:415 (3,1) - ) in not based on anything. Following beat, it should be 00:33:415 - , 00:33:751 - and 00:34:086 - . Following vocal, it should be 00:33:751 - and 00:34:253 - . 00:33:583 (1) - This beat is not that strong to have a jump here.
01:09:281 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This part is getting stronger and stronger, so I suggest you can use this pattern :https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10423078
01:51:013 (2) - missing strong beat 01:51:181 - . I think it is not suitable to use extented slider here, it is be what you did at 01:52:354 (1,2) - , because 01:51:013 - this beat is really strong, if slider is too long, the feel seems become weaker. (01:51:348 (1,2,1,2) - as well) 01:50:175 (1) - 01:52:857 (1) - this two slider should be extented.
I am not that familiar with SV-change mapping, but I think you can draw more beautiful slider if the slider is such long, and it can give the feel like "you are well-organizing those slider", rather than just using straight sliders. But.... aesthetics is quite objective.

Petal

Nomination Assessment Team

1,170 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Petal 2018-03-08T17:49:20+00:00

Yugu wrote:
m4m from your q

Avena's Extreme

01:02:577 (1) - i think it s not good to suddenly increase three times SV in quiet part , although have special sound here and you want to show it . i still think it s easy slider break when player play it first time . nerf some SV maybe better :3 I actually agree here for using 3x SV because no only there is a special sound there but also to emphasize the slider after wards 01:03:415 (2) - I hope you get what I mean
00:23:527 (2) - seems overlap so much to hard to read this slider very well . also it s 2.00x SV so maybe easy get 100 . how about adjusting the angle and stack 00:23:527 (2) - on 00:23:192 (3) - 's slider end ?fixed it another way
01:17:662 (1,2,3) - the drum is not strong enough to support this huge ds imo . this part of the durm 01:23:360 (1,2,3,4,5) - is stronger than 01:17:662 (1,2,3) - , but its ds not bigger than 01:17:662 (1,2,3) - . i think it should nerf some ds . imo hes just trying to make this special by having large DS because unlike other streams , this has only 4 notes so I think that hes trying to emphasize that
01:17:662 (1,2) - can make same overlap pattern like 01:17:326 (1,2) - too hard to read x.x
01:54:030 (1) - maybe increase some SV or spacing to make player perceive it will be better ? you used high speed sliders in the end part especially here 01:53:527 (1,2,3) - , it also have huge ds . decrease SV suddenly maybe not good .its fine since theres an NC there

Insane

01:22:941 (7,8,9,1) - try to make them like this ? some player (newplayer) maybe can t play four notes streams . make them looks like triple can help them to distinguish rhythm .I don't really want to do this because I haven't implemented nor introduce this yet into the map , so I don't want to mess it up here xd
01:23:527 (3) - change become 1/4 slider ? cuz 01:23:611 - have drum sound good catch

i tried my best
hope it's helpful
gl!

Starfy

1,046 posts

Joined November 2012

Starfy 2018-03-18T10:47:01+00:00

Sorry for being extremely late due to the computer issue :<

Pentori

Pentori wrote:
[Starfy's Hyper]
00:18:080 (7) - dont think this needs to be mapped, as using a triplet here gives the emphasis to 00:18:164 (8) - while it should be on 00:17:996 (6) - for the strong snare. something similar to 00:23:360 (6,1) - plays a lot nicer It sounds smoother if the sounds is mapped. Also in terms of playability, it plays a lot more comfortable!
00:32:075 (2) - 00:42:801 (2) - unrankable cos you cover the repeat slider with the previous circle Fixed
01:06:600 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - idk about this, the pattern just feels so forced and doesnt work with the music cos its constantly changing I guess the pattern would work since the pattern can bring up and emphasise the sounds well imo

mancuso_JM_

mancuso_JM_ wrote:
[Starfy's Hyper]

00:31:739 (1,2) - 00:42:466 (1,2) - I prefer to see them unstacked, or at least a bit more separated so players can notice this 1/8 slider. When you play the map, the repetition is not really simple to notice it and it looks like a simple note. Try to make those repetitions more noticeable, so players can expect this pattern much better. Fixed
01:20:343 (3,4,1) - 01:21:013 (3,4,1) - 01:31:069 (3,4,1) - 01:31:739 (3,4,1) - Can you rearrange a bit the combo'ing here and transform those antijumps into (1,2,3) - (1,2,1) - (1,2,3) - (1,2,1) respectively? You generally used compressed streams in this kiai section but the usage of those antijumps are understandable here as well, but if you don't make something to make these pattern easier to read, player will probably think this is a simple 1/4. Yeah, you can probably say "players who play this difficulty are not noob to read that" but sometimes they need something like that for a better playability. I'm telling you that because I had a experience in one of my maps in the past, with a similar pattern and some pro players told me to represent better that kind of things and I personally think that makes sense. Rearrange the combo pattern to increase readability
01:54:198 (1) - What do you think about ending this slider 1/4 or 1/2 earlier? If you listen the music in 25% playback rate, I think the music stop there. Placing spinner would be appropriate since the sound is not really noticeable to be emphasised separately.
- Cool. I liked the structure of this difficulty Thanks! It's glad to hear that

Thanks for mod!

http://puu.sh/zKbLE/43cd91cd47.rar

Petal

Nomination Assessment Team

1,170 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Petal 2018-03-20T15:35:20+00:00

Kyle Y wrote:
hi, Starfy.

#in-game M4M request

Top 2 diff ... molamola

Insane
前面intro (~00:12:633 - ) 對ranking 黎講問題不太, 不過我覺得可以再好少少
00:04:253 (4) - 00:06:935 - strong beat 希望加反少少jump. 如果講rhythm 既話...個人喜好鐘意咁處理 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10418503|
00:08:276 - missing strong beat, inconsistent with strong beat sound 00:04:253 - 00:05:594 - 00:06:935 - 00:09:617 - etc. Please use clickable object here.
00:20:678 (1) - reverse 位冇1/8 sound, 我聽到既係1/2 同1/4 sound
張圖太多nc... 好colorful, please remove unnecessary nc:
00:13:974 (1) - 因為前面combo chain 00:13:639 (1,2,3,4) - 冇slider ... 咁唔需要加nc 去顯示SV change.
00:19:170 (1) - 依條slider snapping 同前面一樣,都唔需要加nc , 00:19:505 (1) - 先要
00:23:192 (1) - 唔洗加... 但係00:23:527 (2) - 要加因為 00:23:527 - 每小節既strong beat.
00:26:041 (1) - 冇SV change
仲有好多slider nc 問題
00:19:505 (1) - suggest ctrl+g, separate more from 00:19:170 (5) - because 00:19:170 (5,1) - is quite misleading. ctrl+g to meet flowing to 00:19:672 (1) -
00:28:555 (4,5) - and 00:31:237 (4,5) - consistence?
no sound at 01:02:689 - but 01:02:633 -
01:44:645 (1,1,1) - 其實要用slider map beat sound 既話唔係用1/8 snapped 咩 ...一黎分開1/4 slider 二黎1/8 仲有beat 既感覺
01:51:013 (2,1) - 建議 overlap or stacking. 因為player 未必可以馬上從1/2 rhtyhm 轉到1/1. (視覺距離相近)
00:25:036 (1) - 個SB effect 好正
張圖入面既flowing 有待改善... 各部份之間flow 不太連貫可理解為emphasize.. 但各部份入面flowing 唔好就好奇怪.. 有冇咁多野比你強調
再講啦, emphasize 其實都係一個對比所形成, 你全部break flow 只會比人覺得flowing 唔好(00:26:879 (3,1) - 00:29:561 (3,1) - 00:31:237 (4,5) - 01:16:488 (3,1) - )
01:20:008 (4,5,6) - 依種flowing 可接受
about looking:
我估你都懶得改.. 同埋又真係好主觀..不過都講左先
直接比圖算:
00:15:985 (2,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10418570
00:04:756 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10418735 (fit vocal)
01:05:929 (1) - https://i.imgur.com/N352HYl.png
etc. (我都懶)

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Avana's Extreme
00:03:583 - strong beat here, why should be emphasized by a jump or whatever?
00:19:170 (1) - This is mapped for that beat sound, and Insane diff use 1/4 slider
00:13:639 - This SV change is too sudden.
00:20:678 (1) - I cannot hear any sound at 00:20:804 - but 00:20:846 - and 00:20:929 -
00:23:527 (2) - could you ake it more visible?
00:33:080 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This is not a good pattern here, because jumping (00:33:415 (3,1) - ) in not based on anything. Following beat, it should be 00:33:415 - , 00:33:751 - and 00:34:086 - . Following vocal, it should be 00:33:751 - and 00:34:253 - . 00:33:583 (1) - This beat is not that strong to have a jump here.
01:09:281 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This part is getting stronger and stronger, so I suggest you can use this pattern :https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10423078
01:51:013 (2) - missing strong beat 01:51:181 - . I think it is not suitable to use extented slider here, it is be what you did at 01:52:354 (1,2) - , because 01:51:013 - this beat is really strong, if slider is too long, the feel seems become weaker. (01:51:348 (1,2,1,2) - as well) 01:50:175 (1) - 01:52:857 (1) - this two slider should be extented.
I am not that familiar with SV-change mapping, but I think you can draw more beautiful slider if the slider is such long, and it can give the feel like "you are well-organizing those slider", rather than just using straight sliders. But.... aesthetics is quite objective.

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