Soaprman wrote:

I said I'd mod this in #modreqs yesterday so let's do this.

Folder

Good!

General

Normal-Insane-Insane is a bit of a bad spread, even though they are slightly easy insanes. Also, seems weird that the difficulty named Tiro Finale! isn't the hardest in the set. The most thorough way to fix this would be to add a Hard difficulty, make Insane easier, and make Tiro Finale! harder. I'm not sure you want to do all that, though, and it's not really a big deal.

yuca

00:07:680 (5) - Make this a longer slider instead of a shorter slider with a repeat. →fixed

00:35:916 (1,2) - Center these a little better by moving 1 to the right. You'll probably need grid 3. →fixed

Tiro Finale!

No suggestions!

Insane

00:30:842 (2,3) - Nothing wrong here, just want to point out that I thought the circle in the background picture was a hitcircle while playing. I'm probably the only one who had this problem though!→ehhmm.____.

01:18:269 (1) - Fantastic.(・∀・)

Taiko DS

I'm not skilled enough with Taiko to mod Taiko maps but it sounds nice!

Overall

A great mapset. I'm glad you posted it in #modreqs so I could get the pleasure of playing it! Let me know if you ever go with that crazy suggestion to add another difficulty.

wmfchris wrote:

taiko modding as requested

- N 100% might be too loud which covered the song. try 80%? ok~

00:03:269 - there's a vocal sound here so I prefer k ? it is a kat @w@
00:07:239 - d? ok!
01:00:180 - some suggestions here: try kkddd d kdd k kkd d k? hmm... change to 'kkkkd d kdd k kkd k d' =w=..
01:07:239 - d? no fix ;w;
01:13:857 - sound ncie to put sth varied before finish: try d ddkdk? change to 'd kkddk'! :3
01:17:607 - start 5-plet here, then finish no fix

that all, nice work and you're improving :3

8.5/10

00:03:269 - there's a vocal sound here so I prefer k ? it is a kat @w@

wmfchris wrote:

yesssss


(kd for the mod post please -w-)

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

[baca]
00:16:063 (3) - x244 y 216
00:16:504 (4) - x184 y112
00:17:827 (5) - x244 y 216
00:22:680 (2) - x296 y 120 if you fix this.then fix spacing
00:52:239 (4) - y 318
之后让yuca来check ww

[ξ(✿ ＞◡❛)ξ▄︻▇▇〓〓　ティロ・フィナーレ ]
00:03:269 (5) - 最后那白点移到中间→fixed
00:23:563 (5) - 后面finish换到前面来→fixed

[insane]
00:38:563 (1) - 好像有点急,auto才勉强2000→fixed
00:48:269 (6) - NC→fixed

もう何も恐くない　═┻┳︻▄ξ（✿ ❛‿❛）ξ▄︻┻┳═
皮肤的数字和hitcircle上面的花根本就不齐
不清楚是数字的问题还是花的问题0 0→fixed 0 0大概...

• yuca

1. 大丈夫，萌大奶

• 太鼓

1. 不mod

• Tiro Finale

1. 00:32:386 (1,2,3,4) - 这里试试摆有一点jump的感觉，这样后面的jump应该会更好读，打起来会舒服一点（个人想法）
2. 00:58:857 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 囧……保留意见

• Insane

1. 00:48:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 这里的跳后的节奏可能有点不好读图
2. 01:00:401 (5) - NC
3. 01:00:621 (1) - NC

Shinkuu wrote:

整体完整度相当高，基本mod不出什么了
给个星

• yuca

1. 大丈夫，萌大奶

• 太鼓

1. 不mod

• Tiro Finale

1. 00:32:386 (1,2,3,4) - 这里试试摆有一点jump的感觉，这样后面的jump应该会更好读，打起来会舒服一点（个人想法）
2. 00:58:857 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 囧……保留意见

→等meichan看看w

• Insane

1. 00:48:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 这里的跳后的节奏可能有点不好读图→个人感觉还可以._.先保留><
2. 01:00:401 (5) - NC→fixed
3. 01:00:621 (1) - NC→fixed

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

[baca]
00:16:063 (3) - x244 y 216
00:16:504 (4) - x184 y112
00:17:827 (5) - x244 y 216
00:22:680 (2) - x296 y 120 if you fix this.then fix spacing
00:52:239 (4) - y 318

Weezy wrote:

yuca
- Should rename this to yuca's Easy since people WILL get confused if its a normal or easy.i dont think so.its hard as easy
00:25:327 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is too hard for an easy diff. Having constant triples like that doesn't belong on easy.no
00:35:916 (1,2) - Not a nice overlap, plus you shouldn't be doing this for an easy diff. Sliders track path should be visible completelyfix
01:14:739 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Again way too hard for an easy. its normal so fine imo

Weezy wrote:

Saw this in modreqs so thought I should mod it

General
- Silent slider ticks are unrankable!
- I'm not sure about the diff spread here but it might slider. I have no problem with it but it might cause a problem.
- Remove "kalafina" from the tags, they didn't do this songs...→no...they did this song..
- Add "mahou shoujo" to the tags since its also called mahou shoujo madoka magica→people use madoka to search for things of this anime more than mahou shoujo imo

yuca
- Should rename this to yuca's Easy since people WILL get confused if its a normal or easy.
00:25:327 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is too hard for an easy diff. Having constant triples like that doesn't belong on easy.
00:35:916 (1,2) - Not a nice overlap, plus you shouldn't be doing this for an easy diff. Sliders track path should be visible completely
01:14:739 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Again way too hard for an easy.

Trio Finale
- Use the silent slider custom hitsounds here, works great imo.
- Emmm where's kiai time?? Put that in here, you can't have it for 2 diffs and leave it out here.
00:19:592 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - for the love of god keep the spacing the same here. This is ruining a nice diff ;_;
00:34:151 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^same
00:58:857 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^same

Insane
00:03:269 (5) - A better spiral can be made here. One where its not overlapping itself. Use this as a guide: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/171014→eehh...its like Mami's fair imo._.so...
00:28:416 (9) - really needs improvement. http://puu.sh/bvFw→fixed
00:40:327 (3) - Same as the first one.↑
01:00:621 (1) - remove the new combo here→fixed
01:06:357 (5) - Same thing as the first one↑

Thats all well good luck with this map

y u c a wrote:

Weezy wrote:

yuca
- Should rename this to yuca's Easy since people WILL get confused if its a normal or easy.i dont think so.its hard as easy
00:25:327 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is too hard for an easy diff. Having constant triples like that doesn't belong on easy.no
00:35:916 (1,2) - Not a nice overlap, plus you shouldn't be doing this for an easy diff. Sliders track path should be visible completelyfix
01:14:739 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Again way too hard for an easy. its normal so fine imo

[attachment=0:845a5]Kajiura Yuki - Credens justitiam (kyuten) [yuca].osu[/attachment:845a5]

@⑨姐
今slider tick音なしだめみたいTv Tだからsoft-slidertick.wavを削除してfull subしてー！
てかskinかわいいいいいいいい

Dusty wrote:

random #modreqs check

[yuca]
nit-picky things here that you don't really need to fix, but at least try it next time...
00:25:327 (1) - make this slider straight (resnap the left sliderpoint to the grid)
00:27:092 (5,6,7) - you can make straight lines by pressing the Ctrl button with grid snap off and distance snap on. just a hint

[Insane]
01:18:269 (1) - If you want to do this, the storyboard warning needs to be bigger and appear earlier, because I really couldn't see it→etto...its big enough i think ww even player didn't see this and missed the first PC, the 2nd PC they will fix ww

nice mapset here, have a star

SliderBorder : 255,255,255

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 236,236,0
Combo3 : 46,0,91
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue

[General]
diff spread is bad , 2 Insane diffs and 1 Normal diff.. you need to add a Hard diff or remap an Insane diff to Hard diff→I'll make a hard diff :3
offset=618(-4) is better to me , feel free to change it or not→keep 622 0.0
kiai is too long in yuca , Taiko DS and Insane diffs imo. make kiai reasonable and all the same in all diffs is better(start and end at the same time)→I'll do this :3
add sliderborder in .osu files , use this code

SliderBorder : 255,255,255

like this

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 236,236,0
Combo3 : 46,0,91
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

→fixed
lead-in=1000~1500 is enough , 3000 is too large→fixed

[skin]
you should add approachcircle.png , reversearrow.png , score-comma.png , score-dot.png. they are integral to the skins→I'll try this
comboburst.png has too many useless transparent pixels , you should cut off all the useless transparent pixels and make its dimensions under 500x767→fixed

[yuca]
01:02:386 (3,1,2,3) - don jump here , triple click after 1.5x jump is too hard to play imo
01:25:989 - I don't know why you silence the slider end , it sound really like missed combo here.. volume up a bit plz
01:28:857 - ^
01:32:386 (1,1) - I think you should turn the volume down a bit , music here is really quiet
diff's totally rankble , but as a Normal diff it is kinda hard to play imo.. too many triple click..

[Tiro Finale!!]
what is this diff name mean 0.0?→Tomoe Mami: Tiro Finale!!ξ( ＞◡❛)ξ▄︻▇▇〓〓
OD - 1/2 plz , it is now too high with this diff imo→its ok
HD+1 ? it is kinda too low imo→fixed
00:59:519 (4,1) - this jump it too huge to play , and it is totally unreasonable , music here is smooth , I don't know why you add jump here. reduce the spacing plz→its ok
01:10:989 - add a circle stack on 01:10:548 (2) - ? sound and play better→fixed
01:24:445 (9) - add new combo , or this combo is too long , it is hard to read the stream's rhyme when play→fixed

[Insane]
00:10:327 (1,2,3,4) - spacing larger a bit plz , it is easier to read as they are 1/4 beats..→its ok imo..
01:05:474 (4) - this slider end sound kinda odd , end at 01:05:916 - and remove 01:05:916 (1) - , sound better. cuz music at 01:05:805 - is empty→tried this but feel that its so strange to play....
01:17:607 - the sb warning should come out earlier imo , at 01:17:386 - is better→fixed
01:23:342 (3) - it is totally hidden by the slider.. move it down a bit , looks like this 2 circles 01:22:901 (1,2) - is better→fixed
01:30:622 (1,2,3) - this objects are too quiet , stay at 30% volume plz→fixed

[Taiko DS]
you need a Taiko BG→I'll do this :3

map's diff spread is bad imo
I suggest add a Hard diff→going to make a HARD diff in winter holiday ww

y u c a wrote:

fixed almost~ty mod Dusty and 神mapper~

spboxer3 wrote:

[general]

1. 你這個skin少了配套的東西:
   approachcircle.png
   reversearrow.png
   score-comma.png
   score-dot.png→寒假回到家就会开始做ww

[yuca]

1. none~

[Hard]

1. kiai必須統一→[/color]
2. 沒有用到的綠線:
   00:39:655 - →[/color]
   
3. 00:07:460 (5) - 這個位置加節奏有些奇怪→fixed
4. 00:12:533 (4,5) - 這個圖型排好些 讓(4)對上(5)的中心吧!!→fixed
5. 00:27:092 (1,2) - 這節奏有些怪 因為感覺00:27:754 (x) - 感覺是有東西的 這只是各人感覺 所以跳過吧~→pass
6. 01:20:033 (4) - 1/4連音感覺太長了些→pass
7. 01:27:974 (1) - 不建議用spinner 太過於短了→pass

[Tiro Finale!!]

1. 00:22:680 (3,4,5) - 不均勻的間距→fixed
   
   用了太多的finish有些過於吵~

[Insane]

1. 01:27:974 (1) - 同樣不建議spinner在這

[Taiko DS]

1. HP+1 OD+1?→no change
2. 00:10:327 (45,46,47,48) - k kkd?→no change

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議

map做的很好阿~:P

ok~that's all
good lucky

1. 00:11:210 (1) - place its beginning in center because there's spinner before it, and it looks better when circle lies exactly in center
2. 00:54:224 (2,3) - use SHIFT to make straight line here: turn spacing on and move note while holding SHIFT. First, do it for (2), then for (3)
3. ...no breaks?

1. 00:25:548 (3,6) - remove whistles?
2. 00:43:416 (1) - it overlaps next slider a little. Move 00:43:857 (2) down
3. 00:50:033 (1,3) - don't look well for me, maybe because they are too fat
4. 00:50:916 (3) - and yes, I thought it has 3 repeats (as the previous slider), not 4
5. 01:00:621 (3) - looks like it touches HP bar, move it down a little or rotate its end
6. 01:04:372 (3,6) - remove whistles?
7. 01:17:386 (4) - shouldn't it have 3 repeats? It's too sudden, in my opinion

1. 00:03:269 (5) - it sounds off because vocals start a little bit earlier than the beat. You better re-do that part (for example, start slider from 00:02:827 (1/1 earlier))
2. 00:22:680 (3) - use whistle here instead of finish, three finishes in a row sound too noisy
3. 00:30:180 (5) - use whistle here, better place finish on 00:30:622 (1)
4. 01:12:092 (3) - too close to slider?
5. 01:17:386 (1,2,3,4) - if you rotate these notes by -15 degrees, they will look better, as I see them

1. 00:56:761 (6,7) - looks bad, maybe you should "continue" slider with these notes
2. 01:18:269 (1) - I love you. But please, make warning on SB more noticeable (make arrow curvy), so people could know in which direction should they move. Now it looks as an usual arrow saying "Hey guys, look! I have a flower!"
3. 01:23:563 (1,1,1,1) - do you really need these 1/8 repeat sliders?

1. I feel like you should add -10 to your offset. Do it on every diff, then select all the inherited (green) lines in Timing panel and move 'em by -10: http://puu.sh/df3v. To make it easier, select the first green line, then hold SHIFT, scroll down to the last line and click on it

TicClick wrote:

I found your map in my collection. It means I wanted to mod it some day, so here we go.

yuca

1. 00:11:210 (1) - place its beginning in center because there's spinner before it, and it looks better when circle lies exactly in center
2. 00:54:224 (2,3) - use SHIFT to make straight line here: turn spacing on and move note while holding SHIFT. First, do it for (2), then for (3)
3. ...no breaks?

Hard

1. 00:25:548 (3,6) - remove whistles?→no
2. 00:43:416 (1) - it overlaps next slider a little. Move 00:43:857 (2) down→fixed
3. 00:50:033 (1,3) - don't look well for me, maybe because they are too fat →fixed
4. 00:50:916 (3) - and yes, I thought it has 3 repeats (as the previous slider), not 4→no
5. 01:00:621 (3) - looks like it touches HP bar, move it down a little or rotate its end→fixed
6. 01:04:372 (3,6) - remove whistles?→no
7. 01:17:386 (4) - shouldn't it have 3 repeats? It's too sudden, in my opinion→no

Tiro Finale!!

1. 00:03:269 (5) - it sounds off because vocals start a little bit earlier than the beat. You better re-do that part (for example, start slider from 00:02:827 (1/1 earlier))
2. 00:22:680 (3) - use whistle here instead of finish, three finishes in a row sound too noisy
3. 00:30:180 (5) - use whistle here, better place finish on 00:30:622 (1)
4. 01:12:092 (3) - too close to slider?
5. 01:17:386 (1,2,3,4) - if you rotate these notes by -15 degrees, they will look better, as I see them

Insane

1. 00:56:761 (6,7) - looks bad, maybe you should "continue" slider with these notes→no
2. 01:18:269 (1) - I love you. But please, make warning on SB more noticeable (make arrow curvy), so people could know in which direction should they move. Now it looks as an usual arrow saying "Hey guys, look! I have a flower!"→ah....i've no idea..but people can try another time...
3. 01:23:563 (1,1,1,1) - do you really need these 1/8 repeat sliders?→I need these for they matches the music here imo...

General

1. I feel like you should add -10 to your offset. Do it on every diff, then select all the inherited (green) lines in Timing panel and move 'em by -10: http://puu.sh/df3v. To make it easier, select the first green line, then hold SHIFT, scroll down to the last line and click on it→no...the timing is OK imo.

Good enough

Byakugan249 wrote:

sorry for the delay i was too lazy to mod

yuca:
00:01:504(2) - Ctrl+H for an easier path for beginners?
00:50:916(2) - ^
01:26:210(2) - ^

Hard:
00:27:533(2) - can u move it below the bottom of (1) because i dont like how its overlapping? in other words the co-ordinates is x:416 y:168→fixed
01:06:357(3) - remove the whistle→no
01:10:769(1) - remove the clap at the end→no
01:27:794(1) - replace this for a slider?→fixed

Trio Finale:
00:15:180(1) - add a whistle?
00:24:886(1) - ^

Insane:
00:02:827(4) - move it down because its touching the hp bar→fixed
01:05:916(1) - ^→cannot do this because of the ❤ shape ww
01:18:269(1) - no need to change this but wow this slider mustve taken u a while to do→ww actually its not such difficult ww
01:23:563(1,2,1,2) - woah hidden repeat sliders. these r unrankable. space them out instead?→UNRANKABLE! Really..?...maybe i'll ask MAT for this TAT

this is the best i can do. GL

Enuma Elish wrote:

irc(qq) mod~⑨姐加油

1. The kiai time in all diff is inconsistency. make same?

1. Unsnapped green timing points in 01:25:305

1. Unsnapped green timing points in 00:20:100

Enuma Elish wrote:

irc(qq) mod~⑨姐加油

Yasora-chan wrote:

mod by request via mod queue

General

1. The kiai time in all diff is inconsistency. make same?→fixed...fixed many times Orz

yuca

1. Unsnapped green timing points in 01:25:305→fixed

00:29:739 (2) (nazi) 6 grid left to make this slider linear with (1) and (3), and in the last a way point: x:231 y: 215?
00:52:680 (5) mirror this slider? (ctrl + h) will be prettier if the curve is different direction with (2)

Hard
00:10:769 (x) add circle in here? because I heard vocal like "ye" in here→no~they dont know there is a "ye" here the first time

Tiro Finale!!
00:07:680 (1) I don't think in there is need to new combo since I think this circle is same vocal with before. I suggest to remove NC?
01:02:386 (5) I think add finish in slider's beginning is too fit and connect with (1) and (3)?
01:27:974 (1) remove NC? I think this is still same rhythm with before notes?

Insane

1. Unsnapped green timing points in 00:20:100→fixed

00:36:798 (3) (nazi) 2 grid left for linear with (1)?→0.0 its already ok~
01:18:269 - awesome -w-d→ヾ(*´∀｀*)ﾉ゛

Nice map~
Good luck~ :3

1. Add mahou shoujo to the tags.
2. Consider adding [Easy] diff, because you have 2 insanes. You need balance in diff spread, so you need Easy.
3. There are some unused files: default-comma.png, default-dot.png, default-percent.png, default-x.png. They are used only for score counting. Delete them.
4. Remove white combo color. It's not recommended because players cannot see ticks.
5. Suggestion: you can use default slidertick.png, because if someone uses other skin, they can look ugly ><
6. 01:11:210 - strange place for kiai time..

1. 00:00:622 ~ 00:08:563 - I suggest you to decrease the volume in normal sections, they are too loud.
2. 00:51:798 (3,4) - align
3. 01:21:798 (1) - why silence in the end?
4. 01:25:327 (1) - ^
5. 01:27:974 (5) - ^ silence is unrankable D: (except spinners)
6. 01:30:621 (2) - end slider here 01:31:063 -

1. 00:00:622 (1) - finish?
2. 00:00:622 ~ 00:08:563 - I suggest you to decrease the volume in normal sections, they are too loud.
3. 00:07:680 (1) - end spinner here 00:10:769 -
4. 00:11:210 (1) - finish
5. 00:24:886 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - unexpected big jumps in Hard ><
6. 00:27:533 (2) - reduce slider to 00:27:974 -
7. 00:28:195 (x) - add a note
8. 00:32:386 (2) - finish
9. 00:35:916 (1) - ^
10. 01:03:710 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ><
11. 01:05:916 (1,2,3,4) - ^
12. 01:20:916 (5) - remove note and add a repeat to (4)
13. 01:30:621 (1,2,3) - watch your spacing D: (2) is too close to (1)

1. 00:11:210 (1) - finish
2. 00:39:445 (1) - ^
3. 00:49:592 (5,6) - I suggest not to stack
4. 01:02:386 (5) - finish
5. 01:11:651 (2,3) - ugly overlap
6. 01:13:416 (2,3) - ^
7. 01:25:327 (1,2,3) - slowdown jumps in that kind of music.. Just no.
8. 01:29:298 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - no no no no. Just no. Change these jumps.

1. 00:00:622 ~ 00:08:563 - I suggest you to decrease the volume in normal sections, they are too loud.
2. 00:00:622 (1) - finish
3. 00:01:504 (2,3) - double normal hits sound awkward here D:
4. 00:05:916 (3,4) - because of osu! bag, stacking doesn't occur here,so you have to make a manual stack by moving one of the objects for some pixels or 1 grid (lvl4) off or you may change them in another way
5. 00:11:210 (1,2,3,4) - ^ you have al lot of such objects through all the map, I'm not sure if you're willing to change them all,so you might want to ask some BATs about it
6. 00:40:327 (3) - ugly slider, make slider till 00:40:769 - and add a note to a red tick
7. 00:43:416 (1,2) - ugly overlap
8. 01:06:357 (5) - meh
9. 01:18:269 (1) - JUST WOW
10. 01:29:739 (2,1,2,3) - fix spacing