MrWeebl - Narwhals

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Bakari wrote:

Ohwow's Normal
  1. 00:04:858 (4,5) - I'd really prefer two 1/1 sliders to better represent the vocals. It'd look like this. I really don't want to make a chain full of 1/1 sliders, so I used a different rhythm here so it doesn't get dull with 1/1 sliders. The vocals get a bit weaker there so a repeat slider should fit imo.
  2. 00:22:143 (4) - doesn't really sound like something that needs a circle, especially when compared with 00:22:739 - which is much stronger yet doesn't have a circle. k
    Note: 00:28:500 (3) - same here. Removing these circles would be a good idea, I'd say. k

    Looks cool. No, you are cool.
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Topic Starter
bite you death
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/641784

Bakari wrote:

General
  1. drum-hitnormal, but without the 2ms delay. Not that it changes much, but a bit more accurate feedback always helps. spasiba


Easy
  1. 00:12:805 (1,1) - try to replce the second (1) slider with a single circle for 00:14:791 - as that's where the word "they" and a strong sound are. As for 00:14:394 - I'd just finish the previous slider there, sort of like 00:19:162 (1) - Just give it a try changed

    Neat. :D


Advanced
  1. Approach Rate 6 would be more than enough, it's a pretty slow paced difficulty with consistent spacing that doesn't require anything really fast. changed to 6.5 to fit spread better than 6
  2. 00:21:149 - this beat was clickable in both Easy and Normal, and it has some important vocals. let's try something like this? changed
    Note: 00:24:328 - 00:27:507 - 00:30:686 - same here. ^
  3. 00:22:937 (2,3) - I would probably Ctrl+G these as well to match the vocals as they seem to be the leading part here. changed
    Note: 00:29:295 (2,3) - and here. ^

    I don't know, I'd really want to have these two rhythm things changed to match the vocals. changed


Monodon monoceros
Had to google the difficulty name to get the idea, pretty cool and sort of educational. I give you a credit for that. woo
  1. Could use slider tick rate 2, so that the synth beats on red ticks do not feel weird in those 3/4 sliders like 00:00:288 - 00:01:083 - and so on. sure
  2. 00:30:289 (1,2,3) - shouldn't (3) be spaced further to match the stronger pitch of the drum and the vocals? Stronger beat = stronger jump or so, oops i totally screwed this one up

    From 00:14:394 -till 00:19:162 - that part actually sounds kind of like the part 00:12:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - here. So, I expected lower spacing or maybe slower sliders, or something to tone down the tempo of the gameplay and represent the lack of the background instrument or the fact that it is fenerally weaker. i disagree. 00:12:805 - to 00:14:394 - is noticably quieter (is that a word?) than after 00:14:394 -, and i dont think that the following part is that different from the rest of the song, instruments are the same imo.


Can't quite agree with that one part of the hardest difficulty, apart from that everything seems okay to me. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
ty for mod :D
Vespirit

Bakari wrote:

HC's Hard
  1. 00:11:017 (4,1) - I'd give the (1) a slight jump just to keep consistent patterning and for the sake of emphasis to the lyrics. okay
  2. 00:17:573 (1) - any way for this to have a bigger jump? Feels weak when compared with 00:16:779 (3) - theres always a way ;)
  3. 00:19:957 (1) - I'd probably just stuck with (2), since the synth solo isn't the main part of the difficulty and the 1/4 part is hard enough on its own, placing a massive jump before it is an overkill. i nerfed the jump a little, but couldnt find a way to get it to a smaller distance without breaking structure, so i decided to also nerf the spacing between 1/4s. hopefully that fixes it well enough
    Note: 00:26:315 (5,6) - then you'd probalby need to tone down this one for consistency made same changes as the other one above

    A bit of an overkill with the spacings before the 1/4s, the rest is quite cool. thanks :)
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425,277,33070,2,0,L|463:281,2,37.5,8|0|0,0:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
YelloJello
From my Queue :D

Monodon Monoceros


•00:25:520 (1,2,1,2) - Flip these around on their X axis.

HC's Hard


• 00:06:248 - Players of this level would probably expect another half beat here.
• This is also pretty streamy for a low 3 star map, short repeating sliders are much safer, with doubles stacked on them beforehand if you want to retain difficulty

Sorry for the short mod, nothing blantantly wrong with the map. Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
bite you death

YelloJello wrote:

From my Queue :D

Monodon Monoceros


•00:25:520 (1,2,1,2) - Flip these around on their X axis. i think its fine

Sorry for the short mod, nothing blantantly wrong with the map. Good luck! :)ty for trying atleast xd
Vespirit

YelloJello wrote:

From my Queue :D

HC's Hard


• 00:06:248 - Players of this level would probably expect another half beat here. i think its better without in order to emphasis the following vocals
• This is also pretty streamy for a low 3 star map, short repeating sliders are much safer, with doubles stacked on them beforehand if you want to retain difficulty imo these fit the song much better, plus the song isnt that fast relatively so i think they are pretty manageable

Sorry for the short mod, nothing blantantly wrong with the map. Good luck! :)
Ty anyways :)
riffy
Qualified!
N0thingSpecial
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Topic Starter
bite you death
delete this mapper
Blan_C

bite you death wrote:

delete this mapper
+1
N0thingSpecial
Delete osu
vipto
glad this is a thing, too bad the map looks all the same throughout and is basically a lower bpm copy of most maps we see today to a different song...
Topic Starter
bite you death

vipto wrote:

glad this is a thing, too bad the map looks all the same throughout and is basically a lower bpm copy of most maps we see today to a different song...
but this one is different

this one is 33 seconds
Trust
nevertheless grats
Pachiru
The ending cut
Ohwow
Topic Starter
bite you death

Trust wrote:

nevertheless grats
ty :D

Pachiru wrote:

The ending cut
had a better audio file, was corrupted, the end
DTM9 Nowa
Grats on ranking... this

xd
Myxo
i didn't even know this song had a verse
Sinnoh
oh no
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