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MrWeebl - Narwhals

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bite you death
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on den 28 september 2017 at 20:53:11

Artist: MrWeebl
Title: Narwhals
Tags: ohwow hydrocannon13 hc youtube weebls weebl stuff
BPM: 151
Filesize: 8278kb
Play Time: 00:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (2,53 stars, 82 notes)
  2. Easy (1,57 stars, 42 notes)
  3. HC's Hard (3,21 stars, 103 notes)
  4. Monodon monoceros (4,11 stars, 127 notes)
  5. Ohwow's Normal (1,8 stars, 60 notes)


Download: MrWeebl - Narwhals
Download: MrWeebl - Narwhals (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Status: Ranked!

Easy by me

Normal by Ohwow

Advanced by me (rip collab)

Hard by HydroCannon13

Monodon monoceros by me

baburu: voli
big red shiny thing: bakari
half big red shiny thing: jbhyperion (on request)
new baburu: voli
new big red shiny thing: bakari

i hate this song lol

the legendary quote

KorwiN wrote:

This level I do not like... He is'nt bad, but Also not good.
awesomemacD
f a s t
Moge-ko's Hard:
00:13:997 (4,5) - If this was a 1/2 slider instead of 2 circles it would emphasize the downbeat on 00:14:394 (1) - better.
00:19:957 (1,2,3,4) - This would be better off as 2 1/4 repeat sliders like this:
The rhythm is just too complex for a hard diff, especially the 1/8 slider.
00:25:520 - Maybe end the slider on the red tick and put a circle on the downbeat for emphasis?
hope this helps
Yonaka-

awesomemacD wrote:

f a s t
Moge-ko's Hard:
00:13:997 (4,5) - If this was a 1/2 slider instead of 2 circles it would emphasize the downbeat on 00:14:394 (1) - better. changed that lel
00:19:957 (1,2,3,4) - This would be better off as 2 1/4 repeat sliders like this: dont like that change cuz 1/4 Slider Repeating Slider
are cancer to read cuz u literly cant really read them and cuz its only part where it would be used i would prefer not using them at all

The rhythm is just too complex for a hard diff, especially the 1/8 slider. well i dont really agree cuz it LITERLY plays like a 1/4 slider and is placed like i placed the 1/4 slider but i changed it cuz people will complain lol
00:25:520 - Maybe end the slider on the red tick and put a circle on the downbeat for emphasis?
well all other sliderends end on white ticks too would be inconsistent
hope this helps
osu file format v14

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Tags:ohwow
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ts8zs
[Insane]
00:00:487 (2) - 64,288 to keep distance like 00:00:885 (4,5) - or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8882898 is also better
00:06:249 (7) - Ctrl+G fits music better
00:33:268 (4) - ^
00:13:600 (5,6) - should have bigger distance,how about move 00:13:600 (5) - to 224,224
Good map
[Moge-ko]
00:11:216 (3) - I think you need NC here to divide from 00:10:421 (1,2) -
00:13:997 (1) - and you don't need this NC or swap with 00:13:600 (3) -
00:15:189 (4) - If you choose swap prev one you should NC this one
00:19:957 (1,2,3,4) - I think you can try reverse slider
00:29:692 (3) - remove NC
[Ohwow]
00:19:162 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure about this one
00:25:520 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:31:679 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:29:295 (5,6) - change to a 1/1 reverse maybe better
[Easy]
00:12:805 (1) - I moved 5th and 6th points to make this looks better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8882977
good one too :D
Topic Starter
bite you death

ts8zs wrote:

[Insane]
00:00:487 (2) - 64,288 to keep distance like 00:00:885 (4,5) - or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8882898 is also better changed to 53,273 to fit structure of map
00:06:249 (7) - Ctrl+G fits music better ill think about it
00:33:268 (4) - ^ ^
00:13:600 (5,6) - should have bigger distance,how about move 00:13:600 (5) - to 224,224 I think this is fine, (but mostly i dont wanna change this :v)
Good map ty

[Easy]
00:12:805 (1) - I moved 5th and 6th points to make this looks better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8882977 made something similar to this
good one too :Dty again xd
thanks for mod!!
QazseWsxdr
Hi, thought I'd try my hand at modding

Easy
00:24:725 Make it a little bit more interesting with something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8883532
00:32:672 Reverse slider at the end too maybe.

Ohwow's Normal
I don't know much about hitsounds but they don't seem to be working as intended. Have a check.
00:02:275 (4,5) and 00:03:864 (2,3) If you space these out like this it will look better, be easier to read and not be significantly more difficult, but I understand it would be hard to make this consistent throughout the map: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8883631 || https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8883635
00:08:633 (4,5) Same as above, I won't bother listing all of them
00:11:017 You can do this for more variation, up to you : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8883671
00:19:162 Someone already mentioned this one.
00:20:752 It'd be nice if the klai times match with the other diffs. If not, maybe just remove it completely.

Moge-ko's Hard
00:03:268 (1) Curve this slider to match the previous combo?
00:14:791 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8883776 This feels like a better rhythm

Insane
00:01:977 (1,2) Angle like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8883830
I would probably put 2 sliders to emphasise on the "Nar-whals" sound after 00:20:752 but you'd have to rework a lot of the map so don't worry about it


I've never modded before but I hope you find it useful. Tell me how I can improve :)
Topic Starter
bite you death

QazseWsxdr wrote:

Hi, thought I'd try my hand at modding

Easy
00:24:725 Make it a little bit more interesting with something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8883532 this is supposed to be an easy diff, so very simple patterns and rhythms belong here, this pattern would belong in normal or hard
00:32:672 Reverse slider at the end too maybe. as i said before, i'd like to keep the rhythm simple.

Insane
00:01:977 (1,2) Angle like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8883830 doesn't fit the rest of the map
I would probably put 2 sliders to emphasise on the "Nar-whals" sound after 00:20:752 but you'd have to rework a lot of the map so don't worry about it ?

I've never modded before but I hope you find it useful. Tell me how I can improve :)mod more i guess, also try to learn the ranking criterias for the difficulties you want to mod
ty for mod
QazseWsxdr
I would probably put 2 sliders to emphasise on the "Nar-whals" sound after 00:20:752 but you'd have to rework a lot of the map so don't worry about it ?
00:23:136 This is what I meant : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8884354
Topic Starter
bite you death

QazseWsxdr wrote:

I would probably put 2 sliders to emphasise on the "Nar-whals" sound after 00:20:752 but you'd have to rework a lot of the map so don't worry about it ?
00:23:136 This is what I meant : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8884354
still makes no sense to me
Yonaka-

ts8zs wrote:

[Insane]
00:00:487 (2) - 64,288 to keep distance like 00:00:885 (4,5) - or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8882898 is also better
00:06:249 (7) - Ctrl+G fits music better
00:33:268 (4) - ^
00:13:600 (5,6) - should have bigger distance,how about move 00:13:600 (5) - to 224,224
Good map
[Moge-ko]
00:11:216 (3) - I think you need NC here to divide from 00:10:421 (1,2) - changed lul
00:13:997 (1) - and you don't need this NC or swap with 00:13:600 (3) - changed too
00:15:189 (4) - If you choose swap prev one you should NC this one k
00:19:957 (1,2,3,4) - I think you can try reverse slider dont like that change cuz 1/4 Slider Repeating Slider
are cancer to read cuz u literly cant really read them and cuz its only part where it would be used i would prefer not using them at all

00:29:692 (3) - remove NC k
[Ohwow]
00:19:162 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure about this one
00:25:520 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:31:679 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:29:295 (5,6) - change to a 1/1 reverse maybe better
[Easy]
00:12:805 (1) - I moved 5th and 6th points to make this looks better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8882977
good one too :D
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244,48,21149,1,10,0:2:0:0:
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142,299,22938,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,268,23335,2,0,P|360:252|324:336,1,210,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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20,212,25918,5,10,0:0:0:0:
113,245,26116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,348,26315,5,2,3:0:0:0:
182,333,26514,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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388,140,29295,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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