M4M

原来改了个名，差点没认出来...(那个摸自己后脑勺的表情)

00:12:643 (2) - 好像节奏不太对？仅供参考： https://puu.sh/zgmZk/de766a9962.png （总之感觉图里的3应该能点）

00:20:785 (5,6,7,8) - 第一感觉是这一段连打多了点（相对后面一段和kiai而言），这一段音乐是比较安静的，放那么多连打不是特别合适..可以试试多用点1/4折返滑条

01:32:214 - 诶？kiai是不是放错地方了？为什么到副歌反而降低SV了...虽然这样也是另外一种的带感，不过感觉这样的话应该把小跳的DS拉的稍微夸张一点

02:50:785 (3) - 好像塞太满了，用圈怎么样

03:08:928 - 感觉少了个圈？


感觉不错，跟那些bmp*2的比起来清新多了

Lily Bread wrote:

M4M

原来改了个名，差点没认出来...(那个摸自己后脑勺的表情) 对！.jpg

00:12:643 (2) - 好像节奏不太对？仅供参考： https://puu.sh/zgmZk/de766a9962.png （总之感觉图里的3应该能点） 感觉还好啦

00:20:785 (5,6,7,8) - 第一感觉是这一段连打多了点（相对后面一段和kiai而言），这一段音乐是比较安静的，放那么多连打不是特别合适..可以试试多用点1/4折返滑条 全曲的连打都蛮多的，不如说105的连打其实没有什么连打的感觉（

01:32:214 - 诶？kiai是不是放错地方了？为什么到副歌反而降低SV了...虽然这样也是另外一种的带感，不过感觉这样的话应该把小跳的DS拉的稍微夸张一点 kiai放到了前面轻快的地方，这里不太适合kiai，然后其实这段是有意加大了很多重音的ds

02:50:785 (3) - 好像塞太满了，用圈怎么样 vocal音还是挺明显的

03:08:928 - 感觉少了个圈？这里音不明显啦


感觉不错，跟那些bmp*2的比起来清新多了

哎嘿，感谢!

Hello~from quin(我丢人了)
[Gensou]

1. 00:33:643 (8) -最好1/2折 返比两次折返要好
2. 00:46:500 (1,2) -blanket
3. 01:05:643 (4,5,6) -同样1/4离得这么近最好一样间距吧
4. 01:17:643 (6) -遮挡不ok 像这个01:19:928 (6) -放在滑条尾就海星
   像这个 滑条头接单点 就很难读
5. 01:29:928 (1,1,1) -不是正三角形！@锋鸽
   其实很好移 你第二个又没和谁重叠 所以直接移第二个就行了
6. 01:54:928 (7) -这个ds过分了 而且这样也不好打啊
   这样也许ok
   
7. 03:28:785 (1,1,1) -请正三角
8. 03:34:071 (2) -真的没音呀…放个折返似乎意义不大
9. 04:04:071 (3,4) -不好读也不好打
10. 04:19:785 (4,5,6,7,8) -不是正五边形差评（划掉）

emmmmmm...就这么多了 我先溜了qwq（逃）

NM

good luck

AngelSnow wrote:

Hello~from quin(我丢人了)
[Gensou]

1. 00:33:643 (8) -最好1/2折 返比两次折返要好 我觉得海星
2. 00:46:500 (1,2) -blanket ？没问题啊
3. 01:05:643 (4,5,6) -同样1/4离得这么近最好一样间距吧 好
4. 01:17:643 (6) -遮挡不ok 像这个01:19:928 (6) -放在滑条尾就海星 我觉得ok
   像这个 滑条头接单点 就很难读
5. 01:29:928 (1,1,1) -不是正三角形！@锋鸽 ok
   其实很好移 你第二个又没和谁重叠 所以直接移第二个就行了
6. 01:54:928 (7) -这个ds过分了 而且这样也不好打啊 改啦
   这样也许ok
   
7. 03:28:785 (1,1,1) -请正三角 ok
8. 03:34:071 (2) -真的没音呀…放个折返似乎意义不大 ok
9. 04:04:071 (3,4) -不好读也不好打 我觉得还行
10. 04:19:785 (4,5,6,7,8) -不是正五边形差评（划掉）04:19:785 (4,5) - 这里不是1/2

emmmmmm...就这么多了 我先溜了qwq（逃）

thx!

Suzuki_1112 wrote:

NM

General

一些1/8的旋律却用了1/4跟了鼓，说实话我个人感觉有点不是很爽，没了可以表现旋律的地方，像00:11:500 (7,8) - 00:36:071 (4,5) - 这些。嘛这些都是我的主观，只是说一下而已。不太想用1/8

Gensou

1. 00:32:785 (6) - NC，很明显这里是个新段落 好
   
2. 01:07:928 (3) - 这个滑条建议跟之前01:07:071 (1,2) - 这两个都是长滑条，统一一下比较好，而且不影响接后面的note vocal结束是在现在这个位置，所以不改了
   
3. 01:29:928 (1) - 从这个note开始节奏已经没这么强烈了，所以kiai应该在这里结束。好
   
4. 01:32:214 (1,2) - 太远了，我看了一下你后面的排列大多数都是ds比较近的，像 01:41:357 (1,2) - 01:50:500 (1,2) - etc. 所以这里最好也放近一点 fixed
   
5. 01:53:357 (2,3,4) - 只是提一下，顺便也是一个建议让你看看。这三个物件： 2->3 (1/2节奏) 和 01:54:500 (6,7,1) - 6->7 (1/4节奏) ，而且6 7 1的间距还更大，节奏间隙几乎一样，视觉上看可能会被误解。改了
   
6. 02:17:643 (5) - 其实这个滑条混在里面很容易跟圈搞混。。建议换个pattern吧 我感觉还是挺明显的
   
7. 02:21:357 (7) - 看了一下后面这样的节奏，折返全部只有三次，建议这个也只有三次，最好都统一一样的。不知道为什么觉得这里放四次折返特别合适，先保留一下
   
8. 02:37:357 (4) - 箭头遮挡，unrankable。改了
   
9. 03:02:785 (7) - 这折返四次的滑条太违和了，前面 01:03:643 (6,7,8,9,10) - 明明是一堆note这里却用了个滑条，还是那个问题，统一一下吧。这里改了
   
10. 03:19:643 (1) - 前面节奏是这样的 01:20:785 (1,2,3) - same above，统一一下吧。 vocal是不一样的，先保留
    
11. 03:21:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 感觉这里的节奏下得太频繁了，最好03:23:071 (5) - 这个换成1/2滑条 我觉得还行

基本没什么问题了，最大的问题就是有些节奏没有统一好，玩起来就会很奇怪。

good luck

thx！

Good stuff. thanks for getting a bit more feedback on this. With all the work that's been put on it, I feel confident we can push this forward after I do another check.

Will check when I can

soft-hitfinish.wav has a 10ms delay so this needs to be fixed. You can copy over soft-hitclap2.wav

Everything else seems fine from my end, so good to go when this is fixed.

Lanturn wrote:

soft-hitfinish.wav has a 10ms delay so this needs to be fixed. You can copy over soft-hitclap2.wav

Everything else seems fine from my end, so good to go when this is fixed.

fixed

Alright. I think it should be good to go now.

For the next BN. Check out the slow parts of the song since they might be the most confusing, though I personally didn't have any issues with it after the distances were changed to be a little more consistent. For the most part, they carry the player well.

osu! needs more Shimotsuki Haruka!

Bubbled

thank you lanturn <3

cute map for a cute mapper

- 02:19:071 (7) - deleting this might make this more interesting (blue tick triples are :weary:)
- 02:21:357 (7) - 02:21:928 - is pretty strong so i'd probably suggest splitting this into 2 1/2 sliders
- 02:42:643 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe try to follow the whole vocal phrase here since switching to drums on 5,6 makes this play a little awkwardly. try this: https://i.imgur.com/09tRG1x.png ?
- 03:05:785 (5,1) - compared to your other streamjumps this one is way too big. this spacing is much more appropriate: https://i.imgur.com/WVdtQDG.png
- 03:19:643 (1) - im not sure what this is really following, maybe try to split this into https://i.imgur.com/y7zEKrK.png ?
- 03:22:785 (4,5) - making 4 a 1/1 slider would break up the monotonous 1/4 sliderspam here and make for more interesting gameplay i think. it also follows the more elongated vocal
- 03:27:643 (6) - could make 2 1/4 sliders since 03:27:928 - is also pretty strong?
- 04:04:071 (3,4) - i get that you're trying to emphasize the white tick but this seems a little unnecessary, simply doing something like https://i.imgur.com/ZyhiJCT.png would be a lot better imo (less sudden of a jump on a weaker sound)
- 04:05:785 (2,3,4,5) - there's a really strong 3/4 rhythm here that gets ignored by the stream, maybe try to map that out? https://i.imgur.com/1hdvw6U.png
- 04:16:214 - definitely deserves to be clickable imo, remove the reverse from 04:15:928 (6) - and put a circle there maybe?
- 04:24:785 (5,6) - could make 2 1/4 sliders for 5 or extend 5 with one more reverse, since 04:25:357 - should have more contrast imo, and right now 04:25:214 - has all the contrast
- 04:38:500 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - there's some nice blue tick snares here you could probably emphasize with this stream? also 04:39:500 (12) - is overmapped
- 04:46:785 - 04:47:214 - have notes on them, and you weren't really against using doubles before so maybe add circles here? 05:41:642 - etc
- 04:48:214 (1) - this note is way late. 04:48:250 - should be a red line with 112 bpm and it should snap to 04:48:785 - nicely. put another red line there
- 05:03:500 (2,3) - space this further away since 05:02:500 (1,2) - was a 1/4 gap and it might be confused with that
- 05:05:928 (4,5,6) - maybe stack these since the drums have a stop at the end of them which the next stream carries into the next section
- 05:11:500 (7,1) - too big again 05:16:214 (1) - asdfasdf
- 05:31:357 (4,5) - same, remove reverse and add circle on white perhaps
- 05:40:500 (3) - should be 1/6

get these fixed and call lanturn back to rebubble (or if you want me to check first before that call me back)!

gust is cute, yes

Shurelia wrote:

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Mir wrote:

cute map for a cute mapper

- 02:19:071 (7) - deleting this might make this more interesting (blue tick triples are :weary:) 02:19:071 (7) - hmmm, I think here's voice is heavy, so I want to keep this
- 02:21:357 (7) - 02:21:928 - is pretty strong so i'd probably suggest splitting this into 2 1/2 sliders okay ;;
- 02:42:643 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe try to follow the whole vocal phrase here since switching to drums on 5,6 makes this play a little awkwardly. try this: https://i.imgur.com/09tRG1x.png ? okay~
- 03:05:785 (5,1) - compared to your other streamjumps this one is way too big. this spacing is much more appropriate: https://i.imgur.com/WVdtQDG.png okay~
- 03:19:643 (1) - im not sure what this is really following, maybe try to split this into https://i.imgur.com/y7zEKrK.png ? fixed
- 03:22:785 (4,5) - making 4 a 1/1 slider would break up the monotonous 1/4 sliderspam here and make for more interesting gameplay i think. it also follows the more elongated vocal hmmm, okay
- 03:27:643 (6) - could make 2 1/4 sliders since 03:27:928 - is also pretty strong? hmmm..I think strong sound is 03:28:214 (7,8,9,10,1) - here, very strong drum sound, so I want to keep this
- 04:04:071 (3,4) - i get that you're trying to emphasize the white tick but this seems a little unnecessary, simply doing something like https://i.imgur.com/ZyhiJCT.png would be a lot better imo (less sudden of a jump on a weaker sound) okay~
- 04:05:785 (2,3,4,5) - there's a really strong 3/4 rhythm here that gets ignored by the stream, maybe try to map that out? https://i.imgur.com/1hdvw6U.png I have changed 2&3 to slider but i want to keep 04:06:357 - nothing, here is no sound i think~
- 04:16:214 - definitely deserves to be clickable imo, remove the reverse from 04:15:928 (6) - and put a circle there maybe? yes!
- 04:24:785 (5,6) - could make 2 1/4 sliders for 5 or extend 5 with one more reverse, since 04:25:357 - should have more contrast imo, and right now 04:25:214 - has all the contrast right! fixed~
- 04:38:500 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - there's some nice blue tick snares here you could probably emphasize with this stream? also 04:39:500 (12) - is overmapped changed 5,6 to slider and delete 12~
- 04:46:785 - 04:47:214 - have notes on them, and you weren't really against using doubles before so maybe add circles here? 05:41:642 - etc right!
- 04:48:214 (1) - this note is way late. 04:48:250 - should be a red line with 112 bpm and it should snap to 04:48:785 - nicely. put another red line there !! fixed!
- 05:03:500 (2,3) - space this further away since 05:02:500 (1,2) - was a 1/4 gap and it might be confused with that fixed~
- 05:05:928 (4,5,6) - maybe stack these since the drums have a stop at the end of them which the next stream carries into the next section fixed~
- 05:11:500 (7,1) - too big again 05:16:214 (1) - asdfasdf fixed~
- 05:31:357 (4,5) - same, remove reverse and add circle on white perhaps fixed~
- 05:40:500 (3) - should be 1/6 fixed~

get these fixed and call lanturn back to rebubble (or if you want me to check first before that call me back)!

Mir<3333

Fixed a snapping point.

After the new timing point some notes were unsnapped, timing points were fixed as well since it involved kiai.

Rebubbled

Alright, looks good to me!

love you guys

cute