1. Expert (5.69 stars, 604 notes)
2. Insane (4.84 stars, 460 notes)
3. Uberzolik's Insane (4.78 stars, 496 notes)

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  Expert
  00:01:891 (3) - Nc should be here, because it ends on blue tick so it may be easier to read if the NC was there
  00:03:826 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:10:116 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - both of them have similar spacing, but the song build up and this 00:10:116 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - it's more powerful than when it begins, so maybe add more spacing everytime you make that pattern.. or just add more spacing from here 00:08:665 -
  00:17:697 (1,2,3) - this came out of nowhere (haha you were expectating this right?) I will not complain about the spacing here, I like it, but.. It would play better if you use some similar spacing before, maybe add a little bit more spacing on 00:12:052 (3,4,5,6,1) - , maybe not the same as the triplet, but something more similar, or maybe try to move this whole thing 00:16:729 (6,7,1) - further away from the triplet, like this for example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8813201 so it plays better
  00:22:698 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 10/10
  00:31:407 (4,5,6,7) - I think this stream should have more spacing
  00:52:374 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - more spacing? like srsly.. MORE spacing pls :<
  00:54:471 (1,2,3,4) - this should have more spacing too, the next slider makes you move way faster than this stream does, so more spacing on this will make the next slider to play better
  01:15:600 (1,2,3) - this is the thing that annoys me the most, because it's spacing, with the sliders ending on blue ticks, reallllyy unexpected, and it's spacing don't help
  01:16:245 (4,1,2,1,2,3) - I feel like you should do smth like 01:15:600 (1,2,3,4) - instead of that triplet and jumps.. feel like.. they don't belong there
  01:23:826 (3,1,2,3) - maybe move this whole thing to the left, like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8813248 and start 01:24:632 (1) - in the middle of these kicksliders (I would love this pattern owo)
  01:35:277 (2,1,2) - should have way more spacing than 01:34:310 (1,2,3,1) - ..etc, ofc song build up its intensity but the map kinda feels the same all the way in the kiai

Itasha_S13 wrote:

o/ o/

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  Expert
  00:01:891 (3) - Nc should be here, because it ends on blue tick so it may be easier to read if the NC was there done
  00:03:826 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:10:116 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - both of them have similar spacing, but the song build up and this 00:10:116 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - it's more powerful than when it begins, so maybe add more spacing everytime you make that pattern.. or just add more spacing from here 00:08:665 - i think the spacing here is fine but i might change it in the future
  00:17:697 (1,2,3) - this came out of nowhere (haha you were expectating this right?) I will not complain about the spacing here, I like it, but.. It would play better if you use some similar spacing before, maybe add a little bit more spacing on 00:12:052 (3,4,5,6,1) - , maybe not the same as the triplet, but something more similar, or maybe try to move this whole thing 00:16:729 (6,7,1) - further away from the triplet, like this for example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8813201 so it plays better yeah i was absolutely expecting some complaints about the sudden spacing here however there isnt really anything else i could map a triple like that to or i would have done it. I made the spacing a bit smaller and moved the sliders before it to make it a bit more readable, something similar to what you suggested.
  00:22:698 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 10/10 uwu
  00:31:407 (4,5,6,7) - I think this stream should have more spacing done (a little bit more spaced)
  00:52:374 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - more spacing? like srsly.. MORE spacing pls :< i dont think making this more spaced out is necessary
  00:54:471 (1,2,3,4) - this should have more spacing too, the next slider makes you move way faster than this stream does, so more spacing on this will make the next slider to play better again, i feel like the spacing here is fine
  01:15:600 (1,2,3) - this is the thing that annoys me the most, because it's spacing, with the sliders ending on blue ticks, reallllyy unexpected, and it's spacing don't help i actually really like this pattern but i see where you're coming from and will consider changing it
  01:16:245 (4,1,2,1,2,3) - I feel like you should do smth like 01:15:600 (1,2,3,4) - instead of that triplet and jumps.. feel like.. they don't belong there i think this pattern is fine the way it is now but i might change the angle of the jumps instead of having them be in a straight line. denief for now
  01:23:826 (3,1,2,3) - maybe move this whole thing to the left, like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8813248 and start 01:24:632 (1) - in the middle of these kicksliders (I would love this pattern owo)i rotated 01:24:632 (1,2) - to get rid of the ugly overlap (which i didnt even notice) and moved the kicksliders to the left a bit more. it's still pretty much the same pattern but looks a bit cleaner
  01:35:277 (2,1,2) - should have way more spacing than 01:34:310 (1,2,3,1) - ..etc, ofc song build up its intensity but the map kinda feels the same all the way in the kiaidone, i hope 01:35:922 (2) - isnt too uncomfortable to reach all the way in the corner (it's fine for me but others might find aiming there uncoomfortable idk)

you know what?
owo
I liked this map, I found it more fun thaN flight dreamer (compared to that one because song's r similar xd) i know what you mean,
this and dark flight dreamer sound very similar. both songs are by the same artist but this one is made under a different name.
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