1. Itami (7,5 stars, 1979 notes)

Carol wrote:

Spotted this in #modreqs.

Itami

1. 00:37:802 (1) - . delete NC √
2. 00:43:655 (1) - . ^ √
3. 00:44:241 (1) - ., 00:44:533 (1) - . ^
4. 00:48:339 (1) - ., 00:48:631 (1) - ., 00:48:924 (1) - ., 00:49:217 (1) - . ^ √
5. 00:52:436 (2) - . NC please. √
6. 00:57:705 (9) - . NC √
7. 00:58:876 (9) - .^ √
8. 01:00:046 (1) - ., 01:00:631 (1) - ., 01:01:217 (1) - ., 01:01:217 (1) - . ^ √
9. 01:01:949 (1) - . delete NC. √
10. 01:02:826 (8) - . delete NC. and, 01:02:973 (1) - add NC. √
11. 01:03:558 (1) - ., 01:03:851 (1) - . delete NC. √
12. 01:04:144 (1) - . NC √
13. 01:04:583 (1) - ., 01:04:875 (1) - . delete NC. √
14. 01:07:070 (9) - ., 01:07:655 (9) - ., 01:08:240 (9) - . NC √
15. 01:08:240 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - . https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8890299 -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8890312 . How about fixing this? hmm i think its ok this direction with the rhythm
16. 01:08:826 (9) - . add circle . and, spinner in 01:08:900 (1) - . √ DONE!
17. 01:16:436 (9) - ., 01:17:022 (1) - ., 01:17:607 (9) - . NC √
18. 01:18:777 (9) - ., 01:19:363 (9) - ., 01:19:948 (9) - . ^ √
19. 01:21:119 (9) - ., 01:21:705 (9) - ., 01:22:290 (9) - . ^ √
20. 01:23:460 (9) - ., 01:24:046 (9) - ., 01:24:631 (9) - . ^ √
21. change - 01:27:265 (2) - . slider and 01:27:558 (3) - . circle. follow the rhythm
22. 01:27:558 (1) - . NC √
23. 01:32:241 (6) - . NC and, 01:32:680 (1) - . delete NC. √
24. 01:33:265 (7) - ., 01:33:119 (6) - . change ( before : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8890368 -> after : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8890374 ) and, 01:33:412 (7) - . NC please √
25. 01:36:924 (7) - . NC √
26. 01:37:802 (5) - . delete NC √
27. 01:38:095 (1) - . NC √
28. 01:38:826 (6) - . delete NC. and, 01:39:265 (11) - . NC √
29. 01:39:412 (1) - . delete NC √
30. 01:40:436 (7) - . NC √
31. 01:40:729 (3) - . delete NC √
32. 01:42:778 (8) - . NC √
33. 01:43:656 (1) - . delete NC. and, 01:43:948 (3) - . NC √
34. 01:59:168 (9) - . ^ √
35. 01:59:461 (3) - . delete NC √
36. 02:04:875 (1) - . NC √
37. 02:07:363 (6) - . ^ √
38. 02:08:826 (1) - . NC √
39. 02:09:265 (1) - . delete NC. and, 02:09:558 (1) - . NC. √
40. 02:14:680 (1) - . delete NC √
41. 02:19:363 (1) - . ^ √
42. 02:40:144 (2) - ., 02:40:729 (9) - . NC

√

Good luck!

Morroni wrote:

Hi from modreqs!
Just an attempt to help you xd

[General]

1. For several parts I think you need bigger AR
2. Holy... Hitsounds... What... Please, re-HS the map normally :3
3. Please, recheck many places where is difficulty discrepancy. For example... You have 7+ star map, but you have this 03:10:583 (3) and this 03:31:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) and just other strange 1/2 or 1/1 sliders and low-spacing circles which are not so good for really 7+ star map... Try to fix it ^_^
4. Please don't make strange and ugly sliders like this 03:29:168 (4) xd (you have many of them)

i agree!

[Separately]

1. 00:35:753 (1) - don't let to have this form of slider when others are more linear idk what you mean with this
2. 00:41:095 (6) - why edge in stream here but NC here 00:41:314 (1) ✔
3. 00:41:826 (8,1) - wrong flow at the end of stream ✔
4. 00:41:900 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - you don't need NCs here i think this nc follow the flow and looks nice.
5. 00:43:363 (1) - ^
6. 00:48:046 (1) - ^ ✔
7. 00:48:046 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - recheck beginnings and ends of sliders, here is sth strange only you find something strange, if someother people say the same thing ill change it.
8. 00:51:851 (1,1) - maybe delete NC? Sorry but its okay
9. 00:54:046 (1,2,3) - here and many places next, why such unstable 1/4 rhythm? c: ✔
10. 01:02:826 (5,1) - too big spacing, I think its fine.
11. 01:06:997 (8,3) - the same with edge and NC as higher ✔
12. 01:08:240 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - change the start of increasing of spacing to 1st circle, because the moment is starting right there on white tick, not on red or even blue, lol ✔
13. 01:08:826 (9) - btw, you can add NC here and even replace it a bit more far xd ✔
14. 01:15:265 (1) - the slider has to be ended at white tick, not on red ✔ NOICE!
15. 01:20:241 (5,1) - change the spacing, that seems like aa hard place on an empty space -_- ✔
16. 01:22:583 (5,1) - ^ ✔
17. 01:31:656 (1,1) - strange overlap i see its fine.
18. 01:35:461 (2,3) - destructed flow ✔
19. 01:36:339 (1,2) - ^ ✔
20. 01:38:826 (6,7) - ^ ✔
21. 01:45:119 (9,1) - strange pause although I think it seems good ✔
22. 01:45:265 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - why so many NCs? ✔ CTRL V DUDE
23. 01:59:168 (1,2,3) - too strange spacing ✔
24. 02:04:802 (8,1) - choke place... we can see 1/4 by eyes still, but here is 1/2 in your map ✔
25. 02:04:949 (1,2) - WHAT?! the word spacing isn't mean that you have to push circles into space with such big cursor speed XD ✔
26. 02:35:168 (1) - here is not NC ✔
27. 02:35:607 (2) - and here is NC ✔
28. 03:00:631 (1,1) - here is not NC ✔
29. 03:01:217 (2) - and here is NC ✔
30. 03:01:509 (1) - and here is not NC again lol ✔
31. 03:04:070 (8,1) - check flow ✔
32. 03:05:973 (8,1,8,1) - ^ ✔
33. 03:05:973 (8,1,8,1) - fix slider direction to circle ✔
34. 03:08:241 (1,1,1,1) - warning, strange NCs are coming ~ ✔
35. 03:08:241 (1,1,1,1) - hmm spacing trouble, I think, or flow direction ✔
36. 03:12:778 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'm not sure, but check this place, I think it is too hard 7 stars Imperial Circus Dead Decadence, this map need this.
37. 03:14:607 (1,1,1) - delete NCs here and put NC here 03:15:265 (2) ✔
38. 03:24:631 (1,3) - overlap ✔
39. 03:28:729 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ✔
40. 03:29:168 (4) - but honestly I think you have to map this part, not by one slider ✔
41. 03:31:070 (1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - too big troubles with spacing ✔
42. 04:05:461 (5,1,1,2) - flow? ✔
43. 04:14:899 (8,1) - ^ ✔
44. 04:15:119 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - remove NCs

✔

[Something good xd]00:57:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - wow this is masterpiece!

Thanks! m.m

P.S. I can miss some things, but I hope you understand my idea in whole mod...

Interesting map, good luck to you, I've seen some interesting patterns here ^_^

Sluggo1000 wrote:

#modreqs

Hello :3
Let's just dive into it xD

For starters, the map should have AR 10. It's a 7* map gdi

00:37:802 (8,1,2) - A sudden cross-screen jump followed by a really slow slider is breaking the flow. Maybe put 1 closer to 8 or make the slider faster? c:
00:41:900 (9) - I think the sliders should start here, so you have an even amount of them. It fits better rhythm-wise as well.
vvv Long text on what is wrong vvv

SPOILER

03:01:217 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I see the stream-slider pattern you went for here, but it doesn't fit into the song due to one thing - the reverse sliders. They are triples, but since you're following a repeating 1/4 pattern here, it breaks the whole pattern after the first repeat. 03:01:217 (1) - it starts on this white tick, good. But, 03:02:241 (1) - the next repeat starts on this red tick, when according to the music it should start here 03:02:387 (3) - on another white tick. How do you fix this? - Keep the 8-circle stream and the two sliders BUT give each slider two reverse points. That way every slider (and therefore important click) land on a white tick, following the music perfectly! This is how it should look like http://prntscr.com/gbyxys

03:06:484 (9) - Again, the sliders begin a beat too late
03:16:509 (6,7,8) - Space these out so they match the rest of the stream
05:50:270 (1) - In this section, wouldn't slow sliders and low spacing fit better?

Welp I think I've said enough. Things you should keep in mind though are following the music better, and have more reason behind your spacing. Nice custom hitsounds btw
Oh, and since you're new to mapping, here's another tip. Getting good at mapping is just like getting good at the game itself; it won't work out if you throw yourself into the harder difficulties instantly. The best way is to work your way up from the easier ones. Maybe attempt a 4* map next time?
Trust me, I know it will be boring but it will grant you some really good knowledge in mapping.