00:10:705 (2) - Maybe better to have the hit circle not partially on top of the next slider, maybe a little further away or stacked better
00:15:089 (2,3) to 00:27:089 (2,3) - Since the slider is fast (sort of like a hit circle) have the 3rd note right infront of the slider to make it flow better, also if you stack the end of the slider on a hit circle, have the hit circle poking out a little bit, otherwise it's more difficult to see it coming
00:43:936 (8) - To signal the 'drop' in the music, you could make this slider a little faster, which indicates the increase in slider velocity that you do after the 'drop'
00:45:320 (3) - ^^ See above (feels unnatural that it speeds up without a big warning [other than the activation of the kiai])
00:46:243 (1,2) - Make the spacing from the slider to the hit circle closer, as later the same spacing is used, but there is a greater rhythmic spacing for those notes, primarily at 00:48:089 (1,2,3)
00:48:551 (2,3,4,5) - The spacing for the rhythm between hit circles 2 and 3 are appropriate, but the same spacing is used for notes 3 to 4 to 5, which should be fixed because notes 4 and 5 are rhythmically closer to each other, to fix this, I would halve the distance between hit circles 4 and 5
00:51:320 (8,1) - Since the notes come quickly together, put the hit circle touching the slider
00:51:320 (8,1) - the spacing here is done well, the hit circle could be a little closer, but this is better, try experimenting the others like this one
00:54:551 (3,4) - Same spacing problem
00:56:858 (4,5) - Same spacing problem
00:58:704 (7,8) - Since the sliders act like a shotgun effect, I would make both sliders horizontal and have the 8 slider go in the opposite direction of the 7th slider and place it on top of the 7th slider
00:59:628 (2,1) - Since the next slider isn't played immediately, I would avoid placing it directly on top of the end of the previous slider
01:06:320 (7,8,1,2) - I would place these all next to each other, as the rhythm is the same from note to note, then place all 4 of these hit circles next to the previous slider, since there is little pause in between the previous slider and these 4 hit circles
01:25:950 (5,6,7) - Since the pause is the same between note 5 and note 6 and note 7, but note 7 leads onto a quadruplet, I would increase the spacing of note 6 and 7 to be the same as note 5 and 6
01:32:411 (1,2) - Place the hit circle not underneath, as the next slider to hit circle you do, is visually the same, but with different timings, so it's difficult for the player to read, so place it a little away from it (not next to it, since there is a slight pause)
01:33:795 (3,4) - Place the hit circle next to the end of the slider (not underneath OR have it more obviously underneath the end of the slider, like don't hide it underneath)
01:38:642 (6,1) - Place the hit circle a little further away, as there is a bigger pause than seen just before
01:41:180 (3,4,5) - Spacing isn't consistent, but this is better, as it is more readable to the player
01:49:026 (6) - I think the slider is off screen, unsure
01:54:564 (1) - Hard to read where to follow the slider because it overlaps on top of itself
01:57:334 (5,6,7,8) - This is when you want to put a hit circle underneath a slider, when there is virtually no pause to the next note, also good spacing for the rhythm
02:02:872 (2,3) - Smaller spacing since it's faster
02:04:257 (4) - Mostly readable slider, slightly ambiguous
02:05:180 (5,6) - Have smaller spacing, since it's a faster note to note
02:07:949 (5,1) - Greater spacing from the hit circle to the slider, because there is a bigger rhythmic spacing, which should be represented visually as well, to make it flow better
02:12:103 (3,4) - Closer spacing
02:12:911 (5,6) - Closer spacing, to signal the the faster rhythm