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DragonForce - The Last Journey Home [Taiko]

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Zing
Mod from my queue.

For my mods, green text represents suggestions, yellow are concerns, and red are immediate action points.

TATSUJIN
SPOILER
Here, when I show you note selections, every character represents a quarter beat. In brackets, each character represents an eighth of a beat.

Recommended HP: 4. This is a long map with long streams, some of which are real killers. There is no way this should be any higher than HP4.

00:13:418 (18,19) - Unjustified 1/8 couplet right away. Just use k- instead of [dk-] like you have.

00:41:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - To help improve on these bland d-k-d-k- sections in the first verse, try following the lyrical cues. Use the pitch of the voice to determine d or k.

02:26:284 (144) - You might want to place a timing section on this note to affix the white bar on it in gameplay.

02:49:421 (29,87) - Somewhere in this section, the hits become a tad late.

04:19:021 (32,71) - SR inflation note: By removing all the 1/6 from this part alone and replacing them with best-practice 1/4 portions, the song becomes .67* lower. This is an alarming change. You must add more 1/6 to your other deathstreams or remove some from this one to even out the strain.

04:48:355 (35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - Immediately after this, there is only one note representing the guitar hits. Might I recommend doing the same here? Try k--d--ddk instead of dk-kd-ddk like you have.

05:06:771 (180,181,182) - This is an extremely punishing deathstream. May I recommend you break it up by removing these notes?

05:11:021 (231,232,233,234,235,236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247) - A couple of missed 1/6 opportunities lie here.

05:16:188 (294,295,296,297,298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307,308,309) - I would recommend finishing off the deathstream instead of going into the 1/8 couplet nonsense here.

05:58:188 (7) - This slider is not justified by the guitar note it's attached to, for that is not a hold. In gameplay, it looks awkward. Just replace it with a d.

06:37:155 (59,60,61) - This burst feels out of place, and it's a stretch to consider (60-61) justified by the vocal. The second syllable of "blackened" actually falls on the yellow tick right after this burst. So, for (59-63) try [d--k-]---k instead of dkd-d-k like you have.

07:50:755 (1) - I would recommend ending the last kiai here, for it extends through the entire coda of the song, not a good place for a kiai.
Topic Starter
Glaceon-

Zing wrote:

Mod from my queue.

For my mods, green text represents suggestions, yellow are concerns, and red are immediate action points.

TATSUJIN
SPOILER
Here, when I show you note selections, every character represents a quarter beat. In brackets, each character represents an eighth of a beat.

Recommended HP: 4. This is a long map with long streams, some of which are real killers. There is no way this should be any higher than HP4. - changed

00:13:418 (18,19) - Unjustified 1/8 couplet right away. Just use k- instead of [dk-] like you have. - yea i had it a normal k b4 then changed to dk but i switch it back awhile ago but never updated

00:41:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - To help improve on these bland d-k-d-k- sections in the first verse, try following the lyrical cues. Use the pitch of the voice to determine d or k. - thanks made the changes

02:26:284 (144) - You might want to place a timing section on this note to affix the white bar on it in gameplay.

02:49:421 (29,87) - Somewhere in this section, the hits become a tad late. - still figuring out this one

04:19:021 (32,71) - SR inflation note: By removing all the 1/6 from this part alone and replacing them with best-practice 1/4 portions, the song becomes .67* lower. This is an alarming change. You must add more 1/6 to your other deathstreams or remove some from this one to even out the strain.

04:48:355 (35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - Immediately after this, there is only one note representing the guitar hits. Might I recommend doing the same here? Try k--d--ddk instead of dk-kd-ddk like you have. - changed

05:06:771 (180,181,182) - This is an extremely punishing deathstream. May I recommend you break it up by removing these notes? - xD made the break

05:11:021 (231,232,233,234,235,236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247) - A couple of missed 1/6 opportunities lie here. - added some and searching for other parts

05:16:188 (294,295,296,297,298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307,308,309) - I would recommend finishing off the deathstream instead of going into the 1/8 couplet nonsense here. - well the 1/8 do match with the guitar but i guess i will changes this so i dont get scalded by others xD

05:58:188 (7) - This slider is not justified by the guitar note it's attached to, for that is not a hold. In gameplay, it looks awkward. Just replace it with a d.changed - changed

06:37:155 (59,60,61) - This burst feels out of place, and it's a stretch to consider (60-61) justified by the vocal. The second syllable of "blackened" actually falls on the yellow tick right after this burst. So, for (59-63) try [d--k-]---k instead of dkd-d-k like you have.
- changed but k k d k sounded better to me

07:50:755 (1) - I would recommend ending the last kiai here, for it extends through the entire coda of the song, not a good place for a kiai.
- changed
Thanks for the mod :3
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