1. Aquamarin (3.76 stars, 189 notes)
2. Easy (1.27 stars, 69 notes)
3. Hard (2.42 stars, 144 notes)
4. Insane (2.75 stars, 160 notes)
5. Normal (2.13 stars, 114 notes)

Enon wrote:

Awesome Song!

Do you mind if I wanna make a GD for this mapset?

1. 00:47:559 (3,4) - Probably make these parallel ,looks better
2. 00:54:746 - I think its much better to have a circle here since the vocal is really strong, even though its an easy difficulty, you do have 1/2 circles earlier such as 00:51:309 (3,4) - so it should be fine to add one here since it goes really well with the song
3. 01:03:184 (4,5) - Ctrl+g the rhythm to emphasize vocal at 01:04:434 - because right now you are emphasizing 01:03:809 - which has much weaker vocal
   Hint: same for 01:13:184 (4,5) -

1. 00:03:184 (4,5) - How about changing rhythm to http://puu.sh/xgvYO/986bca76d0.jpg Because a circle for piano at 00:04:121 - is gonna be better

1. 00:28:496 (3,4) - Why do you have so much extra spacing for 4 here? theres no sound that needs extra movement or something
2. 01:04:434 (6,7,1) - This might a bit too hard for a hard difficulty? You don't have a pattern like this anywhere else so this could confuse players
3. 01:19:434 (5) - Change to two circles for stronger snares maybe

1. 00:03:809 (4,5) - Try unstacking these because stacking louder sound on weaker one is meh
   Hint: same for 00:06:309 (3,4) - 00:15:996 (2,3) - 00:10:996 (2,3) -
2. 00:24:121 (4) - Its not a really good idea to suddenly switch to kicks here since all the previous circles are following vocals, This could really be unexpected during gameplay. Just a suggestion, if you feel like doing it, do it for the rest of patterns like this
3. 01:01:934 (5,6,1) - Really low spacing compared to 01:09:434 (7,8,1) - 01:11:934 (6,7,1) - so yeah maybe buff it up a bit

1. 00:55:059 - you can make the start of the break consist (now there are 1/2-1/4 error)

1. 00:36:934 (3) - touch the hp bar

1. 00:25:059 (1,2) - maybe you can increase ds a bit

1. 00:53:809 (5,6) - this stack didn't emphasis 00:54:121 - imo... I think ctrl+G 00:54:121 (6) - is interesting.
   
2. 01:03:809 - there is no obvious sound, maybe change 01:03:652 (3,4) - to a slider to follow the vocal

1. Your background image weights 1MB which is quite a lot. You could lower the size of your .osz file by 800kB if you were to reencode it, just like this: http://up.kuraip.net/0826M1Xw2596.jpg
2. 00:55:371 - Maybe you could start the break at 00:55:371 - instead of 00:55:059 - to fit the vocals? (btw why does the break stop at 00:57:559 - only in the Insane difficulty?).

1. 01:07:090 (5,6) - This jump is too wide, you literally have to cross the whole screen to click it. It rather inappropriate for this difficulty in my opinion since it is the only huge jump there is. In fact, you don't even have such a large jump in the Aquamarin difficulty.

Komore wrote:

from q

maybe add a spinner in the end　 last sound is not good for spinner

normal
00:08:809 (5,6) - idk, but a circle + 1/2 slider work better here not make much difference

hard
01:01:152 (3) - maybe try smth like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8902796 ? just straight works too.. just a suggestion tho
too good This is my favorite pattern

insane
01:19:434 (6,7) - make a jump here? sounds are really strong + its the end of the map, would look cool imo no need to use a jump on here

god map, sorry for a bad mod
my map is still wip so ill poke when ill need the mod (if you still will want to do it)

good luck

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

m4m
[Hard]

1. 01:04:434 (6,7,1) - This might a bit too hard for a hard difficulty? You don't have a pattern like this anywhere else so this could confuse players It's fine to me since the spacing isn't big.
2. 01:19:434 (5) - Change to two circles for stronger snares maybe better to use a slider for this difficulty level

[Insane]

1. 00:03:809 (4,5) - Try unstacking these because stacking louder sound on weaker one is meh not make much difference
   Hint: same for 00:06:309 (3,4) - 00:15:996 (2,3) - 00:10:996 (2,3) -
2. 00:24:121 (4) - Its not a really good idea to suddenly switch to kicks here since all the previous circles are following vocals, This could really be unexpected during gameplay. Just a suggestion, if you feel like doing it, do it for the rest of patterns like this didn't follow only vocal around here

gl!

Pata-Mon wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:53:809 (5,6) - this stack didn't emphasis 00:54:121 - imo... I think ctrl+G 00:54:121 (6) - is interesting. I feel it's unnatural flow for playing

There aren't too much to say, you can take this as a nm.
GL

Delis wrote:

offsetは +8がno modでちょうどよかったです ありがとう

譜面の半分は大分簡単で、更にサビもサークルの数を考慮してもそこまで難しくはないと思うので、ARは8.5かそれ以下ぐらいがちょうどいいかも！ 8.4にした！
00:00:059 - 少しボリュームが大きいかも・・・？ピアノだけのパートで、音取りは他のパートより密度が濃いので10 - 15%ぐらい下げるとちょうどいいかも。 Insaneも合わせて30%にしました
00:11:309 (3,4) - 00:13:809 (3) - 00:16:309 (3) - 00:18:809 (3,4) - whistleが全部逆な気がします！ギターの音よりかは以前と変わらずに音を付けた方が違和感は少ないので。 変えました！
00:36:309 (2) - 個人的にはスライダーの下にスタックさせた方が分かりやすいのです ちょっとうまぶりました・・・
01:01:309 (6) - サビから1/4メインの、かつ1/4ジャンプが多様されているので、bpmは変わりませんがnew comboを半分に別けた方がncのコンセプト的には合うのかな？と思いました。01:03:809 (5) - とか。 カラフルになってなおよくなった！！
01:09:590 (7,8) - どうやら音取りは基本的にメロディー/ドラム依存みたいなので、ここだけドラムを無視してボーカルに対して音取りされているので、リズムだけctrl+gしたら合うかもしれません。 ここ何回聞いても歌詞のあいまいが主張してきちゃうからこの音取りでいきましゅ
01:16:934 (7) - 01:16:621 (6) - から1/2で斜め左下の所謂通常の流れを用いた配置をしてしまうと、少しだけ1/4のリズムと分別するのが難しくなると思うのでリズムの変化に合わせて流れを少し変え、より分かり易い配置にしてみてはいかがでしょう。https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8947876 こんな感じで。 修正にあわせてこの辺作り直した
01:18:965 - 01:19:277 - 01:19:590 (6) - ボリュームがkiaiから更に低いのもあって、すべてにdrum finishをつけてもさほどうるさくならず、かつ曲にマッチするのでアリかと。 ありありのあり

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appleeaterx wrote:

gratz!