Powerless feat. kakichoco - Vanity · forum

UniqueBlock11

Joined August 2014

UniqueBlock11 2017-08-10T22:38:49+00:00

Hello, from my queue. This was being edited while - Matha - posted their mod, so my mod may conflict with theirs.

note: everything marked with a * is just a comment.

general
Change CS on Kyunada's Insane to 4 for conventional purposes.
Change OD on Kyunada's Insane to 8 for same reason.

Add 'cereal', 'Kyunada', 'Nao', 'Psiovoui', and 'Wormi' to tags.

psiovoui's easy
Looks clean.

normal
00:01:857 - Add a circle here, since you're mapping to the vocals near the start it doesn't make sense to just skip some.
00:04:524 - ^
00:09:357 (3) - Perhaps change this to a single 1/2 repeat slider to emphasize the vocals and make a neat rhythm at the same time.
00:12:524 - Add a circle here, you've skipped a vocal line.
00:15:190 - ^
00:26:190 (4,5) - This rhythm just sounds awkward, especially (4), since there is a drum that sounds at 00:26:024 which you ignored. Following this rhythm would feel better:

00:28:857 (4,5) - Same as above, but only change (4) and not (5), since there's no extra note after the slider end.
00:31:357 (4,5) - Same as above, change both (4) and (5) here.
00:36:857 (4,5) - *Don't change this rhythm or anything else ahead of it since now it sounds correct the way it is.
00:46:024 (1) - Using a rhythm like the below would allow you to emphasize the vocals and still leave room to add in drum hitsounds.

00:48:691 (1) - Consider doing something similar with this rhythm and other similar rhythms forward like the above so the vocals get emphasized.

wormi's hard
To avoid having to use rhythms that contain sliders and overlap each other repeatedly, try to use abnormal distance snapping to remove the overlap, increase the difficulty, and perhaps make the map more fun to play.

00:00:691 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why does this combo not emphasize the vocals but the next couple of combos do? Use this rhythm to emphasize the vocals while retaining the difficulty of your map:

00:35:357 (1,2) - Blanket these for appeal, then move 00:36:024 (3) somewhere to retain the difficulty.
00:51:357 (1) - Some players may not expect this slider so early since 00:50:857 (4,5), the two evenly spaced notes right behind, emphasize the vocals, and this slider unexpectedly starts on the drums instead of the vocals. Try this rhythm instead:

This will surprise fewer players and make the map more intuitive.
00:54:690 (3) - This slider is inconsistent, the vocals are on each 1/2 tick but this slider is 1/1, unlike the other sliders near it. Change it to a single 1/2 repeat slider for consistency.

kyunada's insane
00:02:774 - Unused inherited timing point.
00:10:774 - ^
00:13:440 - ^
00:22:690 - The long drawn sound starts here, so start the spinner here, not 00:22:690 (1).
00:28:190 - Add a circle or add a repeat on 00:27:857 (2), as it seems as if you're missing a sound here. You did something similar at 00:25:524 (3).
00:38:857 - ^, or add repeat on 00:38:524 (2) for the same reason.
00:46:024 (1,2) - This part with only circles is so neat, but even though I can usually do well on 4* maps, it kind of feels unreadable. I had to play this section twice to get the rhythm down. Maybe add in the occasional slider whenever the singer switches verses in the lyrics, just to improve readability.
01:36:690 (1) - *love you sir

nao's insane
00:02:774 - Unused inherited timing point.
00:10:774 - ^
00:13:440 - ^
00:09:357 (3,4) - Reverse this rhythm since the repeating slider belongs with the vocals, and the circle can support itself. (why did that sound like a food bank advertisment)
00:29:024 (3,5) - *you are so mean!
01:17:191 (1,2,3,4,5) - Some of these have whistle hitsounds, is that intentional? Doesn't sound correct with them on.
01:36:691 (1) - Be careful with this slider, as it's not that obvious that it overlaps itself.

cereal's arrogance
00:50:024 (1) - This rhythm should work better:

In the scrnshot above, (1) starts on the vocals and ends on the drum, which I want to be emphasized (you didn't emphasize this with your 1/8 slider). (2) also starts on the vocals and ends on the drum. With this rhythm you can emphasize almost everything important at once without sacrificing the rhythm.
01:08:024 (2) - Add NC for consistency.

Kyuukai

1,511 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Kyuukai 2017-08-10T22:50:48+00:00

- Matha - wrote:
SPOILER
Insane

00:02:857 (3) - This could be extended to the red tick follows the piano

00:08:191 (4) - just like how you did here ^

00:10:024 (1) - no need NC NC'd every 1/1 measure xd

Good map xd

UniqueBlock11 wrote:
Hello, from my queue. This was being edited while - Matha - posted their mod, so my mod may conflict with theirs.

note: everything marked with a * is just a comment.

general
Change CS on Kyunada's Insane to 4 for conventional purposes. ?
Change OD on Kyunada's Insane to 8 for same reason. ?

Add 'cereal', 'Kyunada', 'Nao', 'Psiovoui', and 'Wormi' to tags. No need to, all usernames are already added

normal
00:01:857 - Add a circle here, since you're mapping to the vocals near the start it doesn't make sense to just skip some.
00:04:524 - ^
00:09:357 (3) - Perhaps change this to a single 1/2 repeat slider to emphasize the vocals and make a neat rhythm at the same time.
00:12:524 - Add a circle here, you've skipped a vocal line.
00:15:190 - ^
00:26:190 (4,5) - This rhythm just sounds awkward, especially (4), since there is a drum that sounds at 00:26:024 which you ignored. Following this rhythm would feel better:

00:28:857 (4,5) - Same as above, but only change (4) and not (5), since there's no extra note after the slider end.
00:31:357 (4,5) - Same as above, change both (4) and (5) here.
00:36:857 (4,5) - *Don't change this rhythm or anything else ahead of it since now it sounds correct the way it is.
00:46:024 (1) - Using a rhythm like the below would allow you to emphasize the vocals and still leave room to add in drum hitsounds.

00:48:691 (1) - Consider doing something similar with this rhythm and other similar rhythms forward like the above so the vocals get emphasized.
no changes, I have to simplify the map since it's a Normal diff

kyunada's insane
00:02:774 - Unused inherited timing point.
00:10:774 - ^
00:13:440 - ^ no need to delete them, they come from hitsound copying
00:22:690 - The long drawn sound starts here, so start the spinner here, not 00:22:690 (1). actually, it follows the guitar
00:28:190 - Add a circle or add a repeat on 00:27:857 (2), as it seems as if you're missing a sound here. You did something similar at 00:25:524 (3).
00:38:857 - ^, or add repeat on 00:38:524 (2) for the same reason.
00:46:024 (1,2) - This part with only circles is so neat, but even though I can usually do well on 4* maps, it kind of feels unreadable. I had to play this section twice to get the rhythm down. Maybe add in the occasional slider whenever the singer switches verses in the lyrics, just to improve readability. I don't get what's unreadable right here lol, it's just plain hexgrid mapping
01:36:690 (1) - *love you sir love u too

nao's insane
00:02:774 - Unused inherited timing point.
00:10:774 - ^
00:13:440 - ^ no need to delete them, they come from hitsound copying
00:09:357 (3,4) - Reverse this rhythm since the repeating slider belongs with the vocals, and the circle can support itself. (why did that sound like a food bank advertisment) no, the circle maps the most intense sound (piano right here), slider follows the vocals with the next one
00:29:024 (3,5) - *you are so mean!
01:17:191 (1,2,3,4,5) - Some of these have whistle hitsounds, is that intentional? Doesn't sound correct with them on. fixed
01:36:691 (1) - Be careful with this slider, as it's not that obvious that it overlaps itself. I don't think it's THAT hard to read lol

Thanks for modding !

UniqueBlock11

195 posts

Joined August 2014

UniqueBlock11 2017-08-10T23:15:30+00:00

Kyuukai wrote:
no need to delete them, they come from hitsound copying

Removing inherited points will increase download speed.

Kyuukai

1,511 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Kyuukai 2017-08-10T23:17:50+00:00

UniqueBlock11 wrote:
Kyuukai wrote:
no need to delete them, they come from hitsound copying
Removing inherited points will increase download speed.

Well, ok if u insist xd

Wormi

200 posts

Joined November 2014

Wormi 2017-08-10T23:21:18+00:00

UniqueBlock11 wrote:
wormi's hard
To avoid having to use rhythms that contain sliders and overlap each other repeatedly, try to use abnormal distance snapping to remove the overlap, increase the difficulty, and perhaps make the map more fun to play. tg??

00:00:691 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why does this combo not emphasize the vocals but the next couple of combos do? Use this rhythm to emphasize the vocals while retaining the difficulty of your map: keeping like this to make a progressive difficulty since this is the very beginning of the map

00:35:357 (1,2) - Blanket these for appeal, then move 00:36:024 (3) somewhere to retain the difficulty. not worth, would kill flow a bit
00:51:357 (1) - Some players may not expect this slider so early since 00:50:857 (4,5), the two evenly spaced notes right behind, emphasize the vocals, and this slider unexpectedly starts on the drums instead of the vocals. Try this rhythm instead: not changing rythm but stack instead

This will surprise fewer players and make the map more intuitive.
00:54:690 (3) - This slider is inconsistent, the vocals are on each 1/2 tick but this slider is 1/1, unlike the other sliders near it. Change it to a single 1/2 repeat slider for consistency.. fixed

updaet

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Egotrip

92 posts

Joined May 2015

Egotrip 2017-08-10T23:23:59+00:00

General: Rien a dire de particulier, juste quelques suggestions

Kyunada's Insane

00:22:690 (1) - Je suggère que tu stoppes ton spinner ici 00:24:024 -
(Si tu décides d'appliquer ça, stream de 4 notes ici 00:24:357 - )

00:28:190 (3) - Pourquoi ne pas rajouter un circle pour dynamiser le rythme ? comme tu as pu le faire ici 00:29:857 -

00:29:357 (4) - Stack a 00:29:524 (5) - ?????

00:29:857 (6) - Stack a 00:30:024 (1) - ?????

00:38:857 - Circle ?

00:41:524 - ^

01:26:524 - Mettre un 1/2 slider ici semble une meilleure idée, du fait que ça soit le kiai time, je pense qu'il vaut éviter ce genre de vide.

Nao's Insane:

00:02:857 (3) - Essaie de l'aggrandir jusqu'ici: 00:02:857 (3) - pour mapper les vocalismes dans leur intégralitée.

00:10:857 (3) - ^

00:13:524 (3) - ^

01:12:191 (4) - CTRL + G ?

Ranked incoming =)

Kyuukai

1,511 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Kyuukai 2017-08-10T23:29:09+00:00

Jager-kun wrote:
General: Rien a dire de particulier, juste quelques suggestions

Kyunada's Insane
00:22:690 (1) - Je suggère que tu stoppes ton spinner ici 00:24:024 -
(Si tu décides d'appliquer ça, stream de 4 notes ici 00:24:357 - ) ok pour le changement au dessus, non pour le stream xd

[box=Nao's Insane:][notice]00:02:857 (3) - Essaie de l'aggrandir jusqu'ici: 00:02:857 (3) - pour mapper les vocalismes dans leur intégralitée. mappé sur le piano

00:10:857 (3) - ^ ^

00:13:524 (3) - ^ ^

01:12:191 (4) - CTRL + G ? no, la distance entre 01:12:191 (4,1) - serait vraiment trop haute

Ranked incoming =)

mrci pour le mod mek

lazygirl

506 posts

Joined February 2016

lazygirl 2017-08-12T19:00:03+00:00

Hola!

[Psiovoui's Easy]

the map needs a bit of visual cleanup. F.ex. 00:11:357 (1) - pretty ugly imo doesn't fit with the smooth shape of the first slider either. 00:11:357 (1,2,3) - the alignment with 3 is somewhat clunky looking. 00:20:024 (2,3) - Alignment as well. Well you get the deal. Many sliders are badly aligned and a few blankets are somewhat off. Map's fine otherwise

[Normal]

01:36:690 (7) - maybe NC, nothing else to say, nice and clean diff.

[Wormi's Hard]

00:00:691 (1) - and 00:03:690 (1,2) - are inconsistent. I read your answer to UniqueBlock11, but your argument doesn't really make sense to me. Replacing 00:00:691 (1) - with a single circle and adding a slider where it ends right now is perfectly fine and easy for the beginning of the map.
00:21:190 (5) - shouldn't end on a strong sound like that, even if the vocal continues through all the way.
01:36:690 (1) - make the spacint more like 00:25:190 (2,3) - . This is more intense yet lower spacing (generally your kiai is low spacing compared to what the rest looks like)

[Kyunada's Insane]

00:21:190 (1) - not too fond of this ending on a strong sound like on the Hard diff, same with 01:36:690 (1) -
00:48:524 (1,2,3) - don't see why 3 stacks here but not here 00:50:524 (1,2,3) -

Cool diff with the perfect stacks I like it a lot

[Nao's Insane]

00:02:857 (3) - why does this end so early
00:21:357 (4) - why do you all do this lel same with 01:36:691 (1) -
00:56:691 (6) - maybe worth an NC

Good stuff :3

[cereal's Arrogance]

Why are you using a miniscule c on the diff name? Maybe capitalize it

That's all for me *away I go*

Realazy

Elite Mapper

1,004 posts

Joined June 2011

Realazy 2017-08-13T16:19:31+00:00

ShiiTsuin wrote:
00:01:690 (4) - Very specific here, but i'd move 00:01:690 (4) just a little bit to around 286,222. This just plays nicer coming from the previous slider, as you don't actually have to change your motion that much, just the direction of motion. but it literally doesn't change anything except the spacing, and even then it doesn't change anything because most people aren't going to move further to hit that
00:03:357 (1) - I would have separated this from 00:03:690 (2) to give more emphasis to it, as it is the only somewhat important note at this part of the track. i've done this for the entirety of my part in the intro, all 1/1 gaps are stacked like these and they pretty much always sound the same

- Matha - wrote:
00:50:024 (1) - I think this is better if the reverse slider gets on the white tick here 00:50:357 - the rhythm of the vocals is different here, they sound more like 3/4 (though it's not technically correct) than 1/1, so this slider follows them as closely as possible

UniqueBlock11 wrote:
00:50:024 (1) - This rhythm should work better:

In the scrnshot above, (1) starts on the vocals and ends on the drum, which I want to be emphasized (you didn't emphasize this with your 1/8 slider). (2) also starts on the vocals and ends on the drum. With this rhythm you can emphasize almost everything important at once without sacrificing the rhythm. but 2 doesn't start on the vocals actually, if i had to follow them as precisely as possible i'd have to place an object at 00:50:315 - then at 00:50:524 - which would make for some weird 7/8 + 5/8 rhythm, so the simplest alternative there is is to use 3/4, which is what i did. i don't pay nearly as much attention to the kicks as i would with the snares, so it's fine to leave them unmapped
01:08:024 (2) - Add NC for consistency. consistency with..? most of the NCs are on downbeats

lazyboy007 wrote:
Why are you using a miniscule c on the diff name? Maybe capitalize it

celerih parts

ShiiTsuin wrote:
00:22:024 (1,1) - Surprised these weren't mapped into one long slider with a low slider velocity. Is it to match up with all the other difficulties?
00:36:357 (4) - Not a fan at how far to the right this is.
00:37:857 (5) - How far do you want to go off the field? This might be rankable, but i find it a bit uncomfortable to play at that height. I would have moved it down a bit and further to the right.
00:38:524 (2) - Fine with this one since I can't see any real alternative bar moving it down to the left a bit.

- Matha - wrote:
00:21:191 (3) - NC (SV change)

Last edited by Realazy 2017-08-13T22:44:39+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Ovoui

995 posts

Joined January 2013

Ovoui 2017-08-13T22:19:16+00:00

euh balec lazyboy, personne ne la jouera cette diff, et le slider suit la musique

Wormi

200 posts

Joined November 2014

Wormi 2017-08-15T14:51:37+00:00

lazyboy007 wrote:
[Wormi's Hard]

00:00:691 (1) - and 00:03:690 (1,2) - are inconsistent. I read your answer to UniqueBlock11, but your argument doesn't really make sense to me. Replacing 00:00:691 (1) - with a single circle and adding a slider where it ends right now is perfectly fine and easy for the beginning of the map. fine, changed
00:21:190 (5) - shouldn't end on a strong sound like that, even if the vocal continues through all the way. idk it fits imo
01:36:690 (1) - make the spacint more like 00:25:190 (2,3) - . This is more intense yet lower spacing (generally your kiai is low spacing compared to what the rest looks like) fixed

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Ovoui

995 posts

Joined January 2013

Ovoui 2017-08-15T20:43:49+00:00

@lazyboy

More seriously, i think the issue you pointed out is very minor and do not change the gameplay of the diff, that's why i didn't change anything.

Kyuukai

1,511 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Kyuukai 2017-08-16T14:21:32+00:00

no reply = fixed

lazyboy007 wrote:
Hola! hi

[Normal]

01:36:690 (7) - maybe NC, nothing else to say, nice and clean diff.
[Kyunada's Insane]

00:21:190 (1) - not too fond of this ending on a strong sound like on the Hard diff, same with 01:36:690 (1) - marks the end of a section
00:48:524 (1,2,3) - don't see why 3 stacks here but not here 00:50:524 (1,2,3) - rhythm is different on both, one features a big white tick, the other doesn't
Cool diff with the perfect stacks I like it a lot

[Nao's Insane]

00:02:857 (3) - why does this end so early piano
00:21:357 (4) - why do you all do this lel same with 01:36:691 (1) - marks the end of a section
00:56:691 (6) - maybe worth an NC NC'd all "full patterns" this one is a jump series, so no xd
Good stuff :3

[cereal's Arrogance]

Why are you using a miniscule c on the diff name? Maybe capitalize it
That's all for me *away I go*

Ty for modding

Nao Tomori

Nomination Assessment Team

3,089 posts

Joined December 2014

Nao Tomori 2017-08-16T16:44:23+00:00

some self modding stuff

osu file format v14

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please update to this thanks!

thanks for modding, thanks for replying for me

Kurai

osu! Alumni

7,734 posts

Joined March 2009

Kurai 2017-08-18T14:55:52+00:00

J'en ai marre de rien faire à cause de ma fièvre donc je me suis dit pourquoi pas essayer de modder ce magnifique mapset ?

[Psiovoui's Easy]

00:00:691 (1) - it looks extremely weird to have a 6-second long slider that is ignoring both the vocals and the piano, and right after it you start having patterns following what you previously ignored. Try being consistent.
00:10:191 (3) - Following your previous hitsounding logic with 00:06:691 (3,4) - , both the head and the tail of this slider should have a whistle in order to accentuate the piano notes.
00:11:357 (1) - Same as before. I understand you tried following the piano with those angles, but as the vocals are louder than the instrumental, it's really hard to guess what those angles are here for. And to be honest, it does not really look great.
00:20:857 (3) - Why do you suddenly start following the vocals when all you've been doing before was following the instrumental. It's really important to stay consistent with what you are following when mapping an Easy. → extend this slider by 1/2.
00:25:691 (2) - Not such a good idea to end this slider on 00:26:857 - as it would suggest 00:27:190 - should be mapped as well (they go in pair rhythmically speaking). I would rather end this slider at 00:26:690 - .
00:28:357 (2) - And for the sake of consistency, I would do the same with this one.
00:31:024 (2) - ^ also, reducing those slider would let the player breath a bit more inbetween patterns.
00:34:690 (3) - I would rather you just had a circle here. Having nothing between 00:34:690 - and 00:35:357 - would result in a better emphasis of 00:35:357 (1) - 's upbeat.
00:41:691 (2) - Instead of going downward, it would be much better to have this slider go upward as it would reflect the change of pitch of the piano and would therefore transition better with 00:43:357 (1) - .
00:50:191 (4) - Since you decided to map the piano with 00:46:691 (3,4) - despite the foreground instrument being the vocals, this slider should start on 00:50:357 - as there is no piano note being played at 00:50:190 - .
01:12:691 (1,2,3,4,1) - Maybe you could try making a better pattern here as there is absolutelyzero ephasis on 01:15:357 (1) - . It's just stuck in a corner of the screen when it should be at the center!
01:23:024 (4) - Delete this note? It would let the player have a small break and it would better emphasize 01:23:357 - .
01:28:024 (3) - Make it a circle for the same reasons as above?
01:33:691 (4) - ^

[Normal]

00:30:024 (1,2,3) - In order to better reflect the piano (higher at the beginning and lower at the end), I believe you should vertically flip this pattern in order that when the low piano note is played, the cursor in going downward.
00:30:024 (1) - It is pretty disrupting not to have a circle here as you are ignoring a strong drum beat. It is much more intuitive to have one more circle here than just having nothing as it will confuse the player who may end up misclicking 00:34:857 (6) - : http://up.kuraip.net/0818H1Q447r2562.png
00:44:357 (3) - Since you are actively following the drums here, it would make more sense to end this slider at 00:44:690 - (i.e. shorten it by 1/2).
01:27:357 - Mapping this is not a good idea because there is nothing actually intelligible here. You should rather focus on the drums. This means you should map this section like this:
SPOILER
01:27:857 - However you could definitely map this as it would emphasize the drums 01:28:024 (5) - is following.

[Wormi's Hard]

00:04:690 - I believe having a whistle here would significantly improve how your pattern sound!
00:12:690 - ^
00:15:357 - ^
00:25:190 (2,3) - I don't think having a jump here makes much sense as you are usually using jumps to emphasize the piano (which does deserve emphasis as they are placed on upbeats) like for 00:26:857 (4,1) - and 00:30:024 (1) - . If you want to emphasize those strong drum beats, I would suggest you use a lower spacing than for the piano jumps (something inbetween 1,50x and 2,00x). This also goes for all the other similar jumps.
00:41:690 (4,1,2,3,4) - Not really fan of how those brown sliders overlap the blue ones. It hinders readability and it is not good-looking either.
00:42:357 (2,3,4) - I don't like how you are putting zero emphasis on 00:42:690 - when it actually is a dominant piano note. I would rather you stopped following the logic behind 00:39:524 (1,2,3,4) - and other patterns and started focusing on the piano here.
00:48:024 - You should have a circle here, ignoring a such a strong drum beat is rather disrupting here.
00:50:357 (2) - I would delete this circle in order to accentuate the drums.
00:58:524 (3) - I understand that you are silmuteanously following the vocals and the drums, but I still believe have more impact than the vocals. Therefore I would rather you mapped both 00:58:524 - and 00:58:690 - or just 00:58:690 - (but not only 00:58:524 - has it has less power than 00:58:690 - ).

[Kyunada's Insane]

00:04:690 - I believe having a whistle here would significantly improve how your pattern sound!
00:12:690 - ^
00:15:357 - ^
00:15:857 - ^
00:26:857 (5) - This slider should go in the same direction as 00:26:357 (3) - and not in the opposite one otherwise you lose all the rhythmical similarity between those drum beats.
00:27:857 (2,1) - I don't know if it's my eyes playing tricks on me again, but they are not perfectly aligned, right? xp
00:29:524 (5) - Same comment as before
00:34:690 (4,5) - You should not have a jump between those circles as if you have the spacing as for 00:34:857 (5,6,7) - , you lose all the emphasis you have on the intensity of the drums with 00:34:857 (5,6,7) - .
00:42:690 (3,4) - You should not have such a large spacing between those circles here as you are putting more emphasis on (4) that is not put on anything in particular whereas (3) has absolutely no emphasis while it is supposed to reflect this unusual high-pitched piano note.
00:46:190 (2,1) - Not really a good idea to have an anti-jump here as you have a 3,60x 1/4 jump just before. It's extremely disrupting and uncalled for.
00:46:524 (1,2) - Why the high spacing here and not between 00:47:857 (1,2,3) - which have more intensity? (especially since 00:49:190 (1,2) - doesn't have a jump either while it is rhythmically similar to this pattern).
01:00:690 (2,3,4) - Badly aligned
from 00:59:024 - to 01:07:357 - Just like in the other Insane, I don't really like how the NC are used only for aesthetical purposes.
from 00:46:024 - to 01:07:357 - I believe you should rework this section a bit. The jumps lack consistency as sometimes you've got large jumps and and sometimes at similar places you've got nothing. Sometimes the spacing is high for no reason as there is nothing to emphasize, and when there actually is something to emphasize, you just ignore it. I believe you are focusing to much on the aesthetics of your patterns which unfortunately affects the flow. I have mentioned some of those issues above so I'll assume you understand what I'm talking about, if you don't, don't hesitate to ask me on Discord.
01:36:690 (1) - It would make much more sense to start this slider on the right side of the screen so that you have a V with 01:36:024 (1,2,3,4,1) - .

[Nao's Insane]

00:24:691 (1) - It's not perfectly aligned
Why is the spacing between 00:34:691 (1,2) - higher than between 00:34:857 (2,3) - when the drum intensity is actually lower? Spacing between 00:34:857 (2,3) - should be the same as between 00:35:024 (3,4) - in my opinion.
00:56:524 (5) - I think the spacing after this circle should be higher than before it in order to emphasize the cymbals better on (6).
01:06:941 (4,1) - Why is the spacing higher here but not with 01:07:274 (4,1) - ?
from 00:59:024 - to 01:07:357 - Just like in the other Insane, I don't really like how the NC are used only for aesthetical purposes.
01:07:357 - this section is not hitsounded
01:36:690 (1) - I would rather you had a spinner here as it is the only difficulty without any.

[cereal's Arrogance]

01:07:357 - this section is not hitsounded
C'est quoi cette diff mdr

Didn't spend much time on the two last difficulties because tired. I'll develop more if I ever recheck this, but as for now, I believe you should get more mods before trying to rank this set.

Nao Tomori

Nomination Assessment Team

3,089 posts

Joined December 2014

Nao Tomori 2017-08-18T15:07:39+00:00

I will respond and apply when i get home. Possibly today or tomorrow.

Kurai wrote:
J'en ai marre de rien faire à cause de ma fièvre donc je me suis dit pourquoi pas essayer de modder ce magnifique mapset ?

[Nao's Insane]
00:24:691 (1) - It's not perfectly aligned recreated the pattern properly
Why is the spacing between 00:34:691 (1,2) - higher than between 00:34:857 (2,3) - when the drum intensity is actually lower? Spacing between 00:34:857 (2,3) - should be the same as between 00:35:024 (3,4) - in my opinion. adjusted
00:56:524 (5) - I think the spacing after this circle should be higher than before it in order to emphasize the cymbals better on (6). adjusted
01:06:941 (4,1) - Why is the spacing higher here but not with 01:07:274 (4,1) - ? created a visual separation
from 00:59:024 - to 01:07:357 - Just like in the other Insane, I don't really like how the NC are used only for aesthetical purposes. the NCs are used here to denote 1/1 gaps vs 1/2 gaps. since the rhythm changes between 1/2 and 1/1 very often, and i used spacing emphasis for the patterns (meaning that spacing cannot be used to determine 1/1 vs 1/2 snapping), denoting each 1/1 gap with an NC is my way of making it simpler for the player to figure out which is 1/1 and which is 1/2 gap.
01:07:357 - this section is not hitsounded added some default soft whistles to highlight vocals and offbeat rhythms. using the drum hitsounding seems a bit too loud for this part for me, hopefully this will suffice.
01:36:690 (1) - I would rather you had a spinner here as it is the only difficulty without any. i don't like spinners much. i prefer a slider,
but a spinner would fit here. if you insist, a spinner can be placed.
also i remapped the intro cuz it was way too dense lmao

[cereal's Arrogance]
01:07:357 - this section is not hitsounded
C'est quoi cette diff mdr
Didn't spend much time on the two last difficulties because tired. I'll develop more if I ever recheck this, but as for now, I believe you should get more mods before trying to rank this set.

thanks!
https://pastebin.com/raw/wLdrshhJ

additionally, a mod for celerih and real (i didnt distinguish between parts cuz lazy, sorry)

[arrogance]
00:06:024 (1,4) - these kinds of things suck for rhythm imo. your rhythm elsewhere is purely vocal based; you have no business switching off of vocals to map piano notes, no matter how loud they are (in the case on 1) and on 4 you end up ignoring a vocal hold to switch to some fairly minor pianos as well. you'd be betteer off making a 1/1 slider at 00:06:690 - anyway

this intro part is way too dense. compare it to the kiai, it has very similar rhythm density... (i noticed this on my diff too, so i reduced the density a lot. you may want to do something similar.)

00:21:357 - imo a click here would make sense since there's another "syllable" enunciated

00:31:524 (1,2) - plz ctrl g, there's nothing on this red tick at 00:31:857 - ...

00:32:357 (4) - same here, nothing noticable so having a stack there seems weird; a slider on 00:32:190 (3) - makes more sense

00:34:857 (1,2,3) - these 3 notes are much more prominent in the song, but due to your absurdly high base spacing the only emphasis they have is the nc and direction change; you should space them out more.

00:36:857 (1,2) - ctrl g
all these need to be ctrl g'd, it makes no sense to have this loud drum hit on a slider end and then a click on nothing.

00:46:024 - this section is very messy rhythm wise.
00:46:024 (1,2,3,4) - this stuff sets up the idea that you'll be following vocals (which is fine, if a bit damaging to contrast imo)
but then you get 00:48:524 (6,1,2) - which switches entirely to drums and skips the vocal hold. similarly 00:49:024 (3) - should therefore be 2 circles and 00:51:190 (4,1) - should be a slider.

00:50:024 (1) - dude the vocal's on the white tick looool

00:56:690 (1) - this section is much better about it, good job!
however some of your visual spacing looks a bit weird:
00:58:357 (3,4,5) - could be more evenly spaced

01:00:024 (3,4,3) - same

01:03:690 (2,4,1) - same

01:07:023 (5) - a was to distinguish these 4 as different could be cool (maybe im biased cuz i did something there tho)

01:09:190 (3,4) - 1/1 slider fits a bit better with the vocal hold, or 3/4

01:11:190 (1,2) - same

01:17:690 (3,2) - overlap... plz...

01:21:524 (2,3) - wtf is this fullscreen jump following? you have a 1/1 repeat on the two important vocals, i suggest you break that up and put jumps on those instead of on random filler things that are not in the song >.>

01:22:357 (2,3,4) - wouldn't ctrl g on this rhythm fit the vocals much better?

the 2nd half of the kiai is significantly easier than the first. without the first half, the SR is 4.92. to be honest, personally, i think the 2nd kiai's spacing is a bit better; there was more spacing contrast, due to overall lower base spacing. i suggest nerfing the first half to be less of a diff spike, and bring the sr down to around 5, then it would be possible to diversify the spacing more.

Last edited by Nao Tomori 2017-08-18T23:50:50+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Kyuukai

1,511 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Kyuukai 2017-08-18T18:01:27+00:00

Kurai wrote:
J'en ai marre de rien faire à cause de ma fièvre donc je me suis dit pourquoi pas essayer de modder ce magnifique mapset ?
[Normal]
00:30:024 (1,2,3) - In order to better reflect the piano (higher at the beginning and lower at the end), I believe you should vertically flip this pattern in order that when the low piano note is played, the cursor in going downward.
00:30:024 (1) - It is pretty disrupting not to have a circle here as you are ignoring a strong drum beat. It is much more intuitive to have one more circle here than just having nothing as it will confuse the player who may end up misclicking 00:34:857 (6) - : http://up.kuraip.net/0818H1Q447r2562.png
00:44:357 (3) - Since you are actively following the drums here, it would make more sense to end this slider at 00:44:690 - (i.e. shorten it by 1/2).
01:27:357 - Mapping this is not a good idea because there is nothing actually intelligible here. You should rather focus on the drums. This means you should map this section like this:
SPOILER
01:27:857 - However you could definitely map this as it would emphasize the drums 01:28:024 (5) - is following.
[Kyunada's Insane]
00:04:690 - I believe having a whistle here would significantly improve how your pattern sound!
00:12:690 - ^
00:15:357 - ^
00:15:857 - ^
01:00:690 (2,3,4) - Badly aligned
from 00:59:024 - to 01:07:357 - Just like in the other Insane, I don't really like how the NC are used only for aesthetical purposes.
from 00:46:024 - to 01:07:357 - I believe you should rework this section a bit. The jumps lack consistency as sometimes you've got large jumps and and sometimes at similar places you've got nothing. Sometimes the spacing is high for no reason as there is nothing to emphasize, and when there actually is something to emphasize, you just ignore it. I believe you are focusing to much on the aesthetics of your patterns which unfortunately affects the flow. I have mentioned some of those issues above so I'll assume you understand what I'm talking about, if you don't, don't hesitate to ask me on Discord.
01:36:690 (1) - It would make much more sense to start this slider on the right side of the screen so that you have a V with 01:36:024 (1,2,3,4,1) - .
Didn't spend much time on the two last difficulties because tired. I'll develop more if I ever recheck this, but as for now, I believe you should get more mods before trying to rank this set.

all fixed
Fixed hitsounding for all diffs

Realazy

Elite Mapper

1,004 posts

Joined June 2011

Realazy 2017-08-19T23:04:14+00:00

Naotoshi wrote:
[arrogance]

01:00:024 (3,4,3) - same this one bugs me because i think it looks fine as is? fixed the other visual distance things though

01:07:023 (5) - a was to distinguish these 4 as different could be cool (maybe im biased cuz i did something there tho) yea i guess it's fine as it is rn, none of the streams of this length in the map are based on 4 note patterns so it should be okay

the 2nd half of the kiai is significantly easier than the first. without the first half, the SR is 4.92. to be honest, personally, i think the 2nd kiai's spacing is a bit better; there was more spacing contrast, due to overall lower base spacing. i suggest nerfing the first half to be less of a diff spike, and bring the sr down to around 5, then it would be possible to diversify the spacing more. so i reworked some rhythms in the first part of the kiai to make it more dense as it's the climax of the song so i don't think 1/1 repeats would fit that well, and ended up buffing the second part instead because it makes it stand out more from the verse which is still pretty spaced also yolo

finally a mod where i can fix stuff!!

applied things for celerih as he is unable to reply rn

Linada

993 posts

Joined November 2014

Linada 2017-08-20T17:35:33+00:00

Kurai wrote:
[Kyunada's Insane]
00:26:857 (5) - This slider should go in the same direction as 00:26:357 (3) - and not in the opposite one otherwise you lose all the rhythmical similarity between those drum beats. tho i think it's already really similar, since it's the same movement and spacing between 2-3 and 4-5
00:27:857 (2,1) - I don't know if it's my eyes playing tricks on me again, but they are not perfectly aligned, right? xp it was pixel off, fixed
00:29:524 (5) - Same comment as before kinda changed it
00:34:690 (4,5) - You should not have a jump between those circles as if you have the spacing as for 00:34:857 (5,6,7) - , you lose all the emphasis you have on the intensity of the drums with 00:34:857 (5,6,7) - .i believe that have spacing between 4 and 5 is nice because if there is no jump between them, i'll lose all the intensity of the first snare
00:42:690 (3,4) - You should not have such a large spacing between those circles here as you are putting more emphasis on (4) that is not put on anything in particular whereas (3) has absolutely no emphasis while it is supposed to reflect this unusual high-pitched piano note. fixed

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Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2017-08-21T15:49:36+00:00

mon ami lumy

Wormi

200 posts

Joined November 2014

Wormi 2017-08-22T17:50:03+00:00

Kurai wrote:
[Wormi's Hard]
00:04:690 - I believe having a whistle here would significantly improve how your pattern sound! sure, blame hitsound copy
00:12:690 - ^
00:15:357 - ^
00:25:190 (2,3) - I don't think having a jump here makes much sense as you are usually using jumps to emphasize the piano (which does deserve emphasis as they are placed on upbeats) like for 00:26:857 (4,1) - and 00:30:024 (1) - . If you want to emphasize those strong drum beats, I would suggest you use a lower spacing than for the piano jumps (something inbetween 1,50x and 2,00x). This also goes for all the other similar jumps. okay, changed
00:41:690 (4,1,2,3,4) - Not really fan of how those brown sliders overlap the blue ones. It hinders readability and it is not good-looking either.changed the whole pattern
00:42:357 (2,3,4) - I don't like how you are putting zero emphasis on 00:42:690 - when it actually is a dominant piano note. I would rather you stopped following the logic behind 00:39:524 (1,2,3,4) - and other patterns and started focusing on the piano here. hum, added spacing emphasis here, it also doesn't anymore overlap with the sliderhead
00:48:024 - You should have a circle here, ignoring a such a strong drum beat is rather disrupting here. fixed
00:50:357 (2) - I would delete this circle in order to accentuate the drums. don't think so, keeping like it is
00:58:524 (3) - I understand that you are silmuteanously following the vocals and the drums, but I still believe have more impact than the vocals. Therefore I would rather you mapped both 00:58:524 - and 00:58:690 - or just 00:58:690 - (but not only 00:58:524 - has it has less power than 00:58:690 - ). changed

Arutsuki

630 posts

Joined December 2015

Arutsuki 2017-08-23T20:29:48+00:00

Lumy's set was better tbhbh

thank Lazy

WingSilent

2,982 posts

Joined August 2012

WingSilent 2017-08-25T19:42:59+00:00

Arutsuki wrote:
Lumy's set was better

Thanks.

But i am sorry to say that i deleted my set for an undefined time.
Also,

Kyuukai wrote:
I'm trying to rank this map for a friend named Lumy, he's out of the game atm so...

I am not here to inflate the mess but to clear it up, so..
First of all, you are wasting your time trying to rank something i do not want anymore.
I have never asked you to rank something for me.

Also, i am not, as you thought, out of osu! until i'm loosing the pleasure to enjoy the game.

And sorry, i am not your friend, along with the fact we've never been friends and obviously we won't ever be friends.

I am just a mapper/storyboarder that enjoy mapping great songs at their true value, wich includes, for example, their full lenght without cuts, or even a full mapset only by my sole hands, even storyboarding, and i don't give a shit about if they're going to be ranked or not. That's my decisions.

Now keep enjoying mapping as you wanted, and leave me, i won't be responding.

Nozhomi

Global Moderator

4,568 posts

Joined May 2013

Nozhomi 2017-08-25T20:29:10+00:00

Thx to not kd post who don't need~

Kyuukai

1,511 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Kyuukai 2017-08-25T20:30:27+00:00

Arutsuki wrote:
Lumy's set was better tbhbh

thank Lazy

Yea I know, I wish I could map like him

Lumy wrote:
Arutsuki wrote:
Lumy's set was better
Thanks.

But i am sorry to say that i deleted my set for an undefined time.
Also,
Kyuukai wrote:
I'm trying to rank this map for a friend named Lumy, he's out of the game atm so...
I am not here to inflate the mess but to clear it up, so..
First of all, you are wasting your time trying to rank something i do not want anymore.

Also, i am not, as you thought, out of osu! until i'm loosing the pleasure to enjoy the game.

And sorry, i am not your friend, along with the fact we've never been friends and obviously we won't ever be friends.

I am just a mapper/storyboarder that enjoy mapping great songs at their true value, wich includes, for example, their full lenght without cuts, or even a full mapset only by my sole hands, even storyboarding, and i don't give a shit about if they're going to be ranked or not. That's my decisions.

Now keep enjoying mapping as you wanted, and leave me, i won't be responding.

I thought we were friends... I really loved your mapset, why you deleted it

Yes you are a great mapper, and I respect that, but you can't judge me for cutting your song, I thought you would rank your set before mine but most people just prefers playing short length maps instead of long maps

Please don't bother me or trashtalk if I'm trying to rank it, It's none of your business now

Nozhomi wrote:
Thx to not kd post who don't need~

I'm sorry, missclicked

Testo

603 posts

Joined November 2014

Testo 2017-08-26T16:46:01+00:00

hi
[Sotarks' Arrogance]

00:07:024 - 00:17:690 - why you ignore piano here? imo its strong enough
00:45:190 (3,1) - bad overlap
00:47:357 (5) - 00:50:024 (5) -

[cereal's Extra]

00:06:190 (5,6) - stack?
01:22:357 (2) - imo 2 notes will be better

[Nao's Insane]

00:28:024 (3,3) - stack
01:17:191 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think its too hard for vocal only

gl

DeletedUser_423548

DeletedUser_423548 2017-08-27T09:19:34+00:00

m4m

General

Kakiless is the name of a circle. The artist is Kakichoco
https://diverse.direct/kakiless/odyssey/
Please align the Tag of Sotarks' Arrogance

Psionic & Kin's Easy

00:15:524 (3) - There is no piano sound at the beginning of the slider
00:22:024 - It might be better to add circle as it is very loud
00:44:357 - This sound should pick up

Normal

00:59:024 - I think that it is good to pick up this sound
01:20:357 - You should pick it up here as well to vocal
01:25:690 - 01:31:024 - 01:36:357 - ^

Wormi's Hard

00:01:357 (3) - This slider does not pick up lyrics
00:04:024 (2,3,4) - I think the same rhythm is the best
00:34:190 (1,2) - Can not stack?
00:41:357 (3,4) - 00:42:357 (2,3) - Why are the distances different?
00:38:690 (3,4,2,3) - You should keep this distance

Kyunada's Insane

Good map

Good song!
Best luck!

Kyuukai

1,511 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Kyuukai 2017-08-27T13:13:58+00:00

Yasaija 714 wrote:
m4m

General
Kakiless is the name of a circle. The artist is Kakichoco
https://diverse.direct/kakiless/odyssey/ "Tracks created by composers belonging to doujin circles should list the circle's name as the main composer." from ranking criteria
Please align the Tag of Sotarks' Arrogance fixed
Normal
00:59:024 - I think that it is good to pick up this sound
01:20:357 - You should pick it up here as well to vocal
01:25:690 - 01:31:024 - 01:36:357 - ^
Mainly mapped drums, so I don't feel like adding notes where you linked me, sorry !

Kyunada's Insane

Good map Thank you xd
Good song!
Best luck!

Thanks for modding !

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2017-08-27T13:35:05+00:00

thx

osu file format v14

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Lumy's map was better

Wormi

200 posts

Joined November 2014

Wormi 2017-08-27T16:35:41+00:00

Yasaija 714 wrote:
Wormi's Hard
00:01:357 (3) - This slider does not pick up lyrics Simplified rythm here since it's the beginning of the map, I want it to be progressive
00:04:024 (2,3,4) - I think the same rhythm is the best
00:34:190 (1,2) - Can not stack? ??? being consistant with 00:33:190 (2,3,4) - which has basically the same sounds
00:41:357 (3,4) - 00:42:357 (2,3) - Why are the distances different? emphasing the high pitched "ding" as Kurai suggested
00:38:690 (3,4,2,3) - You should keep this distance

well, no changes

Nao Tomori

Nomination Assessment Team

3,089 posts

Joined December 2014

Nao Tomori 2017-08-28T19:08:17+00:00

yes

@kyuukai you could fix that pixel stack for me that testo pointed out. i can't exactly make a low ds'd pentagon any easier to play, so no change here

Lama Poluna

796 posts

Joined June 2014

Lama Poluna 2017-09-01T13:05:37+00:00

yaaaaaaaaas Kakiless on artist!

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2017-10-05T14:04:52+00:00

rank vanity

Kyuukai

1,511 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Kyuukai 2017-10-05T19:01:30+00:00

Sotarks wrote:
rank vanity

BN wher

Nao Tomori

Nomination Assessment Team

3,089 posts

Joined December 2014

Nao Tomori 2017-10-08T22:16:12+00:00

It can't be that hard to find xc

Aurele

osu! Alumni

7,408 posts

Joined January 2011

Aurele 2017-10-08T22:18:29+00:00

you guys are weak

Kyuukai

1,511 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Kyuukai 2017-10-09T00:03:02+00:00

Nao pls bubble ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Nevo

Global Moderator

1,176 posts

Joined November 2015

Nevo 2018-01-30T22:54:42+00:00

normal
01:27:524 (4,5) - ds between these isnt consistent with the rest of the map

Kyunada's Insane
00:12:690 (5) - you could make this a repeat and just have a circle at 00:13:190 (6) - i dont know why but how you currently have it where 00:13:024 is a 1/2 slider makes me feel like there should be something afterword if that makes sense or just do it to be consistent with 00:10:024 (5,6) - xd
01:07:357 (1) - this note is less spaced than rest of stream maybe fix
01:21:024 (2) - stack is off
01:32:024 (3) - stack is off
01:36:690 (1) - <3

Nao's Insane
00:13:191 (5) - stack is off
00:26:357 (5,7) - these are not perfect overlaps if you stack the tail of 00:26:857 (7) - to the head of 00:26:357 (5) -
ok yeah nao i tried.

cereal's Extra
maybe use hp6 so its not less than nao's diff
00:26:190 (5) - nc this and unnc 00:26:357 (1) - to keep consistency with 00:28:857 (1,2) - and 00:31:524 (1,2) -
00:34:357 (3,4) - maybe dont stack these as it kinda deemphasizes 00:34:524 (4) - imo you could stack 00:34:357 (3) - to 00:34:190 (2) - to be consistent with your previous stacks like 00:31:524 (1,2) - and 00:28:857 (1,2) - and 00:26:190 (5,1) -
00:43:524 (1) - you could make this a 1/2 slider and then place a circle at 00:43:857 - so the kick is clickable also because like 00:43:690 - isn't as intense of a beat
01:04:690 (1) - blanket on tail could be better xd

Sotarks' Arrogance
maybe make od just 9
00:12:690 (1) - maybe make this 2 circles to be rhythmically consistent with 00:02:024 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
00:10:857 (10) - maybe blanket
01:01:357 (9) - spacing her could probably be lower since imo this beat isn't as intense as things like 00:45:357 (4,5) -
01:06:524 (9) - i get its the end of the section but the jump here shouldn't be larger spacing as kiai jumps like 01:22:690 (1,2,1,2) - or 01:31:190 (11,1) - maybe stack 01:06:524 (9) - with the head of 01:04:190 (8) - or something xd
00:31:690 (6) - pretty subjective but maybe move this a little to the left so the visual spacing of 00:31:024 (4,6) - and 00:30:024 (1,3) - are the same
00:45:690 (6) - nc here since its kinda the same thing you did at 00:24:357 (1) -
00:54:357 (2) - you could prob make this two circles kinda how you did 01:05:024 (2,3) - for consistency and also to reflect the vocal

Kyuukai

1,511 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Kyuukai 2018-01-30T23:08:15+00:00

no reply = fixed

Nevo wrote:
normal
01:27:524 (4,5) - ds between these isnt consistent with the rest of the map

Kyunada's Insane
00:12:690 (5) - you could make this a repeat and just have a circle at 00:13:190 (6) - i dont know why but how you currently have it where 00:13:024 is a 1/2 slider makes me feel like there should be something afterword if that makes sense or just do it to be consistent with 00:10:024 (5,6) - xd I think it follows the vocals pretty well there tho, I made 00:12:690 - clickable because vocals are stronger here compared to 00:12:524 -
01:07:357 (1) - this note is less spaced than rest of stream maybe fix
01:21:024 (2) - stack is off
01:32:024 (3) - stack is off
01:36:690 (1) - <3 gay <3l

aaaaa

celerih

617 posts

Joined July 2014

celerih 2018-01-31T00:58:35+00:00

Replying for myself and Real per his request

Nevo wrote:
cereal's Extra
maybe use hp6 so its not less than nao's diff Would be better of the Insane nerfed the HP a bit too, but sure I'll up it a bit
00:26:190 (5) - nc this and unnc 00:26:357 (1) - to keep consistency with 00:28:857 (1,2) - and 00:31:524 (1,2) - done
00:34:357 (3,4) - maybe dont stack these as it kinda deemphasizes 00:34:524 (4) - imo you could stack 00:34:357 (3) - to 00:34:190 (2) - to be consistent with your previous stacks like 00:31:524 (1,2) - and 00:28:857 (1,2) - and 00:26:190 (5,1) - good catch, fixed
00:43:524 (1) - you could make this a 1/2 slider and then place a circle at 00:43:857 - so the kick is clickable also because like 00:43:690 - isn't as intense of a beat ya that was a dumb rhythm choice, fixed
01:04:690 (1) - blanket on tail could be better xd done

New diff

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239,255,93024,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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