m4m. Don't need to mod much for my map.
[Fly Away]
00:03:995 (2,3) - why the finished hitsounds
00:04:685 (3) - What is this mapped to? the tick? Why isn't there one here 00:07:443 - 00:12:961 -
00:07:788 (4,5,6) - make into perfect triangle?
00:08:478 (6,1) - spacing emphasis not found
00:08:823 (1) - Remove the finish hitsound, there's nothing there to support it. Finish HS should be at places like 00:25:374 - 00:36:409 - 00:47:443 - 00:58:478 - etc etc.
00:53:306 (2,3) - spacing looks the same as 00:53:650 (3,4) - but the they are rhythmically different in the timeline.
01:00:547 (5) - should jsut be two circles on the white ticks, no reason to make a repeating slider. 01:03:306 (5) - this one is okay since there's actually a sound on the red tick.
01:03:306 (5,6,7,1) - why is the spacing here so close all of the sudden. the whole pattern is really clustered in this one spot.
01:08:823 (1,2,3,4,1) - the whole stream looks nice and smooth except this part. the curvature of the stream including the slider is weird.
01:15:030 - downbeats like this should be emphasized with larger spacing. 01:14:857 (8,1) - is not as spaced as this pattern before 01:13:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
01:21:581 (7) - the way this slider is curved creates a really bad flow with 01:21:064 (5,6,7) -
01:35:029 (5,6) - Why don'y you make them symmetrical? it will look a lot better than what it is currently.
01:43:995 (1,2,3,4) - small spacing all of the sudden
Spacing is weird in many parts, try to use spacing as a way to emphasize sounds; Louder it is, bigger the spacing. Also try to create more symmetrical patterns so the whole map structure looks cleaner. sliders like 01:52:788 (4,5) - looks randomly placed. Blankets are also a good way to make the map look cleaner and more structured.
I recommend NCing every measure, like 00:37:788 - 00:40:547 - it just becomes a long chain without any NCs like you did 00:43:306 - 00:44:685 - 00:46:064 - etc etc. NC should be consistent.
[Easy]
Why not make 00:02:616 (1) - a 1/1 slider?
00:03:305 (1,2) - make this a 2/1 slider, mapping a circle every half a measure is kinda dull. Try to create some variance and follow the electric melody
00:05:374 (4) - Can make into a 1/1 slider
00:16:064 (1,1) - blankeeett
00:24:685 (4,1) - ^
00:48:823 (3) - I know you're trying to be creative with these sliders and trying to follow the melody at the same time, these sliders are really tricky for beginners and should avoid these types of wonky sliders.
01:00:547 (5) - It's touching the healthbar
01:08:133 (1,2,3,4) - I would just put a 3/1 slider here, there isn't any loud or distinguishable sound on the white ticks to be worthy for circles.
01:09:512 - Should keep SV the same throughout the whole song, SV changes are not recommended for Easy and Normals
01:09:512 (1,3) - Slightly overlapping.
01:12:6 16 - I would stay with the 1/1 beat, you're missing out on the loud clap here.
01:21:926 (3,4) - why only 3 circles here? It feels undermapped since you're missing out on the white ticks. not consistent with 01:16:409 (2,3) -
01:24:685 (3,4) - 01:27:443 (3,4) - 01:30:202 (3,4) - ^
01:50:892 (1,2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing. Easy and Normals need to have consistent spacing to be rankable.
Gonan stop there, hope you find this useful. Don't give up! Gl
[Fly Away]
00:03:995 (2,3) - why the finished hitsounds
00:04:685 (3) - What is this mapped to? the tick? Why isn't there one here 00:07:443 - 00:12:961 -
00:07:788 (4,5,6) - make into perfect triangle?
00:08:478 (6,1) - spacing emphasis not found
00:08:823 (1) - Remove the finish hitsound, there's nothing there to support it. Finish HS should be at places like 00:25:374 - 00:36:409 - 00:47:443 - 00:58:478 - etc etc.
00:53:306 (2,3) - spacing looks the same as 00:53:650 (3,4) - but the they are rhythmically different in the timeline.
01:00:547 (5) - should jsut be two circles on the white ticks, no reason to make a repeating slider. 01:03:306 (5) - this one is okay since there's actually a sound on the red tick.
01:03:306 (5,6,7,1) - why is the spacing here so close all of the sudden. the whole pattern is really clustered in this one spot.
01:08:823 (1,2,3,4,1) - the whole stream looks nice and smooth except this part. the curvature of the stream including the slider is weird.
01:15:030 - downbeats like this should be emphasized with larger spacing. 01:14:857 (8,1) - is not as spaced as this pattern before 01:13:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
01:21:581 (7) - the way this slider is curved creates a really bad flow with 01:21:064 (5,6,7) -
01:35:029 (5,6) - Why don'y you make them symmetrical? it will look a lot better than what it is currently.
01:43:995 (1,2,3,4) - small spacing all of the sudden
Spacing is weird in many parts, try to use spacing as a way to emphasize sounds; Louder it is, bigger the spacing. Also try to create more symmetrical patterns so the whole map structure looks cleaner. sliders like 01:52:788 (4,5) - looks randomly placed. Blankets are also a good way to make the map look cleaner and more structured.
I recommend NCing every measure, like 00:37:788 - 00:40:547 - it just becomes a long chain without any NCs like you did 00:43:306 - 00:44:685 - 00:46:064 - etc etc. NC should be consistent.
[Easy]
Why not make 00:02:616 (1) - a 1/1 slider?
00:03:305 (1,2) - make this a 2/1 slider, mapping a circle every half a measure is kinda dull. Try to create some variance and follow the electric melody
00:05:374 (4) - Can make into a 1/1 slider
00:16:064 (1,1) - blankeeett
00:24:685 (4,1) - ^
00:48:823 (3) - I know you're trying to be creative with these sliders and trying to follow the melody at the same time, these sliders are really tricky for beginners and should avoid these types of wonky sliders.
01:00:547 (5) - It's touching the healthbar
01:08:133 (1,2,3,4) - I would just put a 3/1 slider here, there isn't any loud or distinguishable sound on the white ticks to be worthy for circles.
01:09:512 - Should keep SV the same throughout the whole song, SV changes are not recommended for Easy and Normals
01:09:512 (1,3) - Slightly overlapping.
01:12:6 16 - I would stay with the 1/1 beat, you're missing out on the loud clap here.
01:21:926 (3,4) - why only 3 circles here? It feels undermapped since you're missing out on the white ticks. not consistent with 01:16:409 (2,3) -
01:24:685 (3,4) - 01:27:443 (3,4) - 01:30:202 (3,4) - ^
01:50:892 (1,2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing. Easy and Normals need to have consistent spacing to be rankable.
Gonan stop there, hope you find this useful. Don't give up! Gl