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ave;new feat. Shirasawa Rie - MAYBE ROSY KISS (Short Ver.)

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grvyd
183 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
grvyd
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年12月7日 at 18:24:32

Artist: ave;new feat. Shirasawa Rie
Title: MAYBE ROSY KISS (Short Ver.)
Source: Trouble Vampire
Tags: Tactics Luxury cRyo[iceeicee]
BPM: 133
Filesize: 14690kb
Play Time: 01:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. cRyo (4.94 stars, 311 notes)
  2. Hard (4.64 stars, 262 notes)
  3. Normal (2.43 stars, 103 notes)
Download: ave;new feat. Shirasawa Rie - MAYBE ROSY KISS (Short Ver.)
Download: ave;new feat. Shirasawa Rie - MAYBE ROSY KISS (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#7
Shirasawa Rie!

If you previously downloaded from 2011/11/18, please re-download.

cRyo is cRyo[iceeicee]'s diff
thx cRyo!

2011/11/18 Changed video.(sizedown)
2011/11/16 Changed mp3
Last edited by grvyd , edited 8 times in total.
rui
1,388 posts
Joined February 2009
rui
#mod reqs　から来ました
私のmodです　気に入らないところは無視してください(In my mod. You can ignore me)

[Normal]
  1. 00:17:139 (3) - グリッドを一つ上, remove newcombo
  2. 00:21:200 (1) - remove newcombo
  3. 00:32:252 (3) - remove newcombo
  4. 00:34:733 (3) - グリッドを一つ下
  5. 00:37:440 (1) - ここをremove newcomboして次のnoteにadd newcombo
  6. 00:39:470 (3) - remove newcombo
  7. 00:41:951 (3) - add newcombo
  8. 00:43:079 (4) - ここから00:44:207までスライダーに変える
    └00:44:658 (X)　上を直したならadd note
  9. 00:53:681 (1) - remove newcombo
  10. 01:40:598 (1) - remove newcombo
  11. 01:41:951 (1) - add newcombo
  12. 01:42:403 (1) - remove newcombo
  13. 01:44:207 (1) - remove newcombo
  14. 01:10:824 (3) - グリッドを右に一つ
  15. 01:11:726 (4) - 一番下の難易度でSVを変えるのはよくないと思います, もしSVを変えるままの場合は add newcombo
  16. 01:14:890 (4) - グリッドを一つ下に
  17. 01:22:553 (4) - whistleの追加
  18. 01:25:260 (3) - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:591 (3) - newcomboの追加（スペーシングが変わるため）
  2. 00:16:463 (4) - グリッドを左に１か上に１
  3. 00:20:072 (4,5) - いきなり1.2に変わるのはミスを誘発するので(4)を前と同じ1.8のdistanceでおいて，(5)から1.2に切り替える。そのさい(5)にnewcomboの追加
  4. 00:24:809 (3) - newcomboの追加
  5. 00:29:294 (X) - ここのブレイクは短すぎるので削除したほうがいいです
  6. 00:44:658 (2) 00:46:012～00:50:974までがリズムに合ってない気がします。このようにしてみるのはどうでしょう？前半 http://puu.sh/8KXS　後半　http://puu.sh/8KY1
  7. 01:15:335 (3) - newcomboの追加
  8. 01:17:816 (5) - 00:20:072を直したならば同じように
  9. 01:22:553 (3) - newcomboの追加
  10. 01:29:771 (3) - 同上
  11. 01:36:989 (3) - ^
  12. 01:51:425 (3) - ^
[cRyo]
  1. Why not kiai time?
  2. 00:17:137 (6) - slider end 00:16:912, add note 00:17:363
  3. 00:23:904 (6) - same with the above
  4. 00:26:160 (6) - add newcombo, next note remove newcombo
  5. 00:34:280 (1) - remove newcombo, next note add newcombo
  6. 00:39:017 (3) - slider end 00:39:243
  7. 01:11:724 (2) - add reverse so slider end 01:11:949
  8. 01:23:453 (4) - remove reverse, add note 01:23:904
    └01:23:904 (5) if fixed the abovead, add newcombo, next note remove newcombo
  9. 01:41:949 (7) - add newcombo, next note remove newcombo
  10. 01:45:558 (7) - same with the above
  11. 01:48:716 (5) - remove reverse, add note 01:49:167
    └01:49:167 (6)- if fixed the abovead, add newcombo, next note remove newcombo
  12. 01:55:032 (5) - add finish
マッタリできるいい譜面でした。
nice song nice map :D
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010
Ertyukjh010's modding ><"

☆ .mp3是128kbps；請轉用192kbps
☆ .fly除去聲音

Normal

很好。

Hard

00:19:169 (2) - 用正常距離
00:24:809 (3) - ^
00:36:538 (7) - ^
00:51:651 (x) - 要不要放個circle?
01:02:703 (2) - 太近了0.0 會誤讀
01:11:275 (1,2) - 不要重疊??
01:16:463 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/182607
01:38:568 (2) - 要不要用正常距離?

cRyo

沒Kiai？與另外2個難度同步吧

Nice Map and Star
Good Luck :)
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
queのほうでリクいただきましたが、(cRyo[iceeicee]さんから)まだみてないと思われるmodが残っているようなのでそれが終わり次第modさせてもらいます。
Last edited by Laurier , edited 1 time in total.
grvyd
183 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
grvyd
rui's MODDING

rui wrote:

#mod reqs　から来ました
私のmodです　気に入らないところは無視してください(In my mod. You can ignore me)

[Normal]
  1. 00:17:139 (3) - グリッドを一つ上, remove newcombo newcombo fixed!
  2. 00:21:200 (1) - remove newcombo fixed!
  3. 00:32:252 (3) - remove newcombo fixed!
  4. 00:34:733 (3) - グリッドを一つ下
  5. 00:37:440 (1) - ここをremove newcomboして次のnoteにadd newcombo fixed!
  6. 00:39:470 (3) - remove newcombo fixed!
  7. 00:41:951 (3) - add newcombo fixed!
  8. 00:43:079 (4) - ここから00:44:207までスライダーに変える
    └00:44:658 (X)　上を直したならadd note fixed!
  9. 00:53:681 (1) - remove newcombo fixed!
  10. 01:40:598 (1) - remove newcombo fixed!
  11. 01:41:951 (1) - add newcombo fixed!
  12. 01:42:403 (1) - remove newcombo fixed!
  13. 01:44:207 (1) - remove newcombo fixed!
  14. 01:10:824 (3) - グリッドを右に一つ remap
  15. 01:11:726 (4) - 一番下の難易度でSVを変えるのはよくないと思います, もしSVを変えるままの場合は add newcombo add newcombo
  16. 01:14:890 (4) - グリッドを一つ下に
  17. 01:22:553 (4) - whistleの追加
  18. 01:25:260 (3) - ^ fixed!
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:591 (3) - newcomboの追加（スペーシングが変わるため） fixed!
  2. 00:16:463 (4) - グリッドを左に１か上に１
  3. 00:20:072 (4,5) - いきなり1.2に変わるのはミスを誘発するので(4)を前と同じ1.8のdistanceでおいて，(5)から1.2に切り替える。そのさい(5)にnewcomboの追加
  4. 00:24:809 (3) - newcomboの追加 fixed!
  5. 00:29:294 (X) - ここのブレイクは短すぎるので削除したほうがいいです
  6. 00:44:658 (2) 00:46:012～00:50:974までがリズムに合ってない気がします。このようにしてみるのはどうでしょう？前半 http://puu.sh/8KXS　後半　http://puu.sh/8KY1 remap
  7. 01:15:335 (3) - newcomboの追加 fixed!
  8. 01:17:816 (5) - 00:20:072を直したならば同じように
  9. 01:22:553 (3) - newcomboの追加 fixed!
  10. 01:29:771 (3) - 同上 fixed!
  11. 01:36:989 (3) - ^ fixed!
  12. 01:51:425 (3) - ^ fixed!
[cRyo]
  1. Why not kiai time? fixed!
  2. 00:17:137 (6) - slider end 00:16:912, add note 00:17:363
  3. 00:23:904 (6) - same with the above
  4. 00:26:160 (6) - add newcombo, next note remove newcombo
  5. 00:34:280 (1) - remove newcombo, next note add newcombo
  6. 00:39:017 (3) - slider end 00:39:243
  7. 01:11:724 (2) - add reverse so slider end 01:11:949
  8. 01:23:453 (4) - remove reverse, add note 01:23:904
    └01:23:904 (5) if fixed the abovead, add newcombo, next note remove newcombo
  9. 01:41:949 (7) - add newcombo, next note remove newcombo
  10. 01:45:558 (7) - same with the above
  11. 01:48:716 (5) - remove reverse, add note 01:49:167
    └01:49:167 (6)- if fixed the abovead, add newcombo, next note remove newcombo
  12. 01:55:032 (5) - add finish
マッタリできるいい譜面でした。
nice song nice map :D


ertyukjh010's MODDING

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Ertyukjh010's modding ><"

☆ .mp3是128kbps；請轉用192kbps fixed!
☆ .fly除去聲音 fixed!

Normal

很好。

Hard

00:19:169 (2) - 用正常距離 fixed!
00:24:809 (3) - ^
00:36:538 (7) - ^
00:51:651 (x) - 要不要放個circle?
01:02:703 (2) - 太近了0.0 會誤讀 fixed!
01:11:275 (1,2) - 不要重疊?? fixed!
01:16:463 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/182607 fixed!
01:38:568 (2) - 要不要用正常距離? fixed!

cRyo

沒Kiai？與另外2個難度同步吧 fixed!

Nice Map and Star
Good Luck :)

thx modding~

add:cRyo diff is fixed too.
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
hi
from my mod queue

General
ムービーの容量が少し大きいかもしれません。自分は同じぐらいのサイズのムービーを使用していてBATの方から注意を受けました。
cRyo diffだけコンボカラーが1つ少ないので統一してください

Normal
HP-1?
00:53:731 (1,2,3,4) - 綺麗な四角形にしてみてはどうでしょうか
01:06:362 (2) - 1grid up?
01:06:362 (2) - 頭にfinish
01:11:776 (1) - ^
01:15:385 (3) - 曲げる方向逆のほうがいいのでは？
01:20:798 (2) - 頭にfinish
01:33:430 - この辺緑線いっぱいありますけど必要ですか？
01:36:588 (3) - 1grid up?
01:42:001 (1) - 1grid down?
01:42:453 (2) - 頭にfinish
01:46:062 (1) - finish
01:49:219 (1) - 曲げる方向逆にしてみては？&最後にfinish
01:49:219 (1,2,3) -こんな形はどうでしょうか? http://puu.sh/8M0I
finishもしいれるところがあるなら、Hardでも同じ時間の場所を確認してください。音付けはcRyoを参考にするのもいいと思います

Hard
00:21:250 (1,1,1) - こういうコンボ色変えるパターン面白いですけど、色の組み合わせの関係であまり綺麗に見えないように思います。あと後半では曲の同じようなパターンの場所で色統一されてたので、どちらかにあわせるといいと思います。個人的には色変えないでいいかと。
00:41:776 (1,2,3,4,5) - 単発5つなので五角形などの形を作るのはどうですか？http://puu.sh/8M5i
00:46:062 (2,3) - 1grid 左
00:51:475 (3) - ^
00:54:182 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - こんな形のほうが綺麗かも？http://puu.sh/8M62
01:42:904 (4,5,6) - spacing　急に広くなってるので不自然な感じがします
01:47:641 (9) - x56y96に移動


cRyo
Normal hit sound volume+5~10%
00:15:159 (1) - remove note?
00:22:603 (1) - move x165
00:33:204 (5,6) - spacing?
01:55:761 (1) - try silent
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
request from my queue by cRyo[iceeicee]

Normal
00:15:385 (1) - finish instead of whistle in the end
00:19:445 (2) - finish instead of whistle at the begining
00:21:250 (4) - all finish sounds well
01:40:648 (5) - this?
304,240,100648,2,2,B|352:240|400:160|352:88|304:88,1,210,2|0

Hard
00:15:836 (3) - same as normal
00:17:641 (1) - remove NC
00:18:994 (1) - whistle instead of clap
00:19:445 (3) - finish instead of clap at the begining
00:41:776 (1,2,3,4,5) - this?
280,312,41776,5,0
360,328,42001,1,8
440,352,42227,1,0
416,272,42453,1,8
432,200,42678,1,4
01:55:761 (1) - why not use a spinner as normal?

Cryo
01:05:911 (1) - remove NC?
01:55:761 (x) - this?


grvyd
183 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
grvyd
Laurier's MODDING

Laurier wrote:

hi
from my mod queue

General
ムービーの容量が少し大きいかもしれません。自分は同じぐらいのサイズのムービーを使用していてBATの方から注意を受けました。
cRyo diffだけコンボカラーが1つ少ないので統一してください fixed!

Normal
HP-1?
00:53:731 (1,2,3,4) - 綺麗な四角形にしてみてはどうでしょうか fixed!
01:06:362 (2) - 1grid up? fixed!
01:06:362 (2) - 頭にfinish fixed!
01:11:776 (1) - ^
01:15:385 (3) - 曲げる方向逆のほうがいいのでは？ fixed!
01:20:798 (2) - 頭にfinish
01:33:430 - この辺緑線いっぱいありますけど必要ですか？ fixed!
01:36:588 (3) - 1grid up? fixed!
01:42:001 (1) - 1grid down?
01:42:453 (2) - 頭にfinish fixed!
01:46:062 (1) - finish fixed!
01:49:219 (1) - 曲げる方向逆にしてみては？&最後にfinish hitsound fixed!
01:49:219 (1,2,3) -こんな形はどうでしょうか? http://puu.sh/8M0I fixed!
finishもしいれるところがあるなら、Hardでも同じ時間の場所を確認してください。音付けはcRyoを参考にするのもいいと思います

Hard
00:21:250 (1,1,1) - こういうコンボ色変えるパターン面白いですけど、色の組み合わせの関係であまり綺麗に見えないように思います。あと後半では曲の同じようなパターンの場所で色統一されてたので、どちらかにあわせるといいと思います。個人的には色変えないでいいかと。 fixed!
00:41:776 (1,2,3,4,5) - 単発5つなので五角形などの形を作るのはどうですか？http://puu.sh/8M5i remap
00:46:062 (2,3) - 1grid 左 ^
00:51:475 (3) - ^ fixed!
00:54:182 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - こんな形のほうが綺麗かも？http://puu.sh/8M62 remap
01:42:904 (4,5,6) - spacing　急に広くなってるので不自然な感じがします fixed!
01:47:641 (9) - x56y96に移動 fixed!


cRyo
Normal hit sound volume+5~10%
00:15:159 (1) - remove note?
00:22:603 (1) - move x165
00:33:204 (5,6) - spacing?
01:55:761 (1) - try silent

No_Gu's MODDING

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue by cRyo[iceeicee]

Normal
00:15:385 (1) - finish instead of whistle in the end fixed!
00:19:445 (2) - finish instead of whistle at the begining fixed!
00:21:250 (4) - all finish sounds well fixed!
01:40:648 (5) - this?[attachment=2:b057d]1.png[/attachment:b057d]01:44:257 (5) - 
304,240,100648,2,2,B|352:240|400:160|352:88|304:88,1,210,2|0

Hard
00:15:836 (3) - same as normall fixed!
00:17:641 (1) - remove NC
00:18:994 (1) - whistle instead of clap
00:19:445 (3) - finish instead of clap at the begining
00:41:776 (1,2,3,4,5) - this?l remap[attachment=1:b057d]2.png[/attachment:b057d]
280,312,41776,5,0
360,328,42001,1,8
440,352,42227,1,0
416,272,42453,1,8
432,200,42678,1,4
01:55:761 (1) - why not use a spinner as normal?l because it is to be a shortly spinner.

Cryo
01:05:911 (1) - remove NC?
01:55:761 (x) - this?[attachment=0:b057d]3.png[/attachment:b057d]

thx modding~
add:cRyo diff fixed
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
Joined December 2010
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ flatps ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~

[General]

Delete the OSB file plz.


[cRyo]

00:15:159 (1) - I think this note is redundant,Remove will be better.
00:32:753 (4,5,6,7) - using the same distance.
00:43:242 (2,3) - not perfect overlap.
01:10:648 - add note.
01:25:310 (8) - not perfect overlap.
01:52:828 (1,2) - using the same distance.


[Hard]

00:18:994 (1,3) - Remove clap.
00:28:806 (1,1) - Remove NC.
00:38:844 (3) - 1 grid down.
00:44:031 - add note.
00:44:708 (1) - start point Remove whistle and add finish.
00:59:144 (2) - start point add finish.
01:06:362 (2,3,4) - add soft finish.
01:13:580 (3) - add finish.
01:20:798 (3) - start point add finish.
01:31:625 (2) - ^
01:49:671 (3) - ^


[Normal]

00:15:385 (1) - end point add finish.
00:44:708 (4) - add finish.


That's all ~ nice map ~

good luck ~ ;)
grvyd
183 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
grvyd
Kawayi Rika's MODDING

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ flatps ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~

[General]

Delete the OSB file plz. fixed


[cRyo]

00:15:159 (1) - I think this note is redundant,Remove will be better.
00:32:753 (4,5,6,7) - using the same distance.
00:43:242 (2,3) - not perfect overlap.
01:10:648 - add note.
01:25:310 (8) - not perfect overlap.
01:52:828 (1,2) - using the same distance.


[Hard]

00:18:994 (1,3) - Remove clap. fixed
00:28:806 (1,1) - Remove NC. fixed
00:38:844 (3) - 1 grid down.
00:44:031 - add note.
00:44:708 (1) - start point Remove whistle and add finish. fixed
00:59:144 (2) - start point add finish. fixed
01:06:362 (2,3,4) - add soft finish.
01:13:580 (3) - add finish. fixed
01:20:798 (3) - start point add finish.
01:31:625 (2) - ^
01:49:671 (3) - ^


[Normal]

00:15:385 (1) - end point add finish. fixed
00:44:708 (4) - add finish. fixed


That's all ~ nice map ~

good luck ~ ;)

sorry I'm late.
thx modding!

add:cRyo diff fixed!
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec
sorry, so late

little things...

[cRyo]
1.04.783(2) - why use redwaypoint(delete redwaypoint)

nice~
grvyd
183 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
grvyd

frost-b-spec wrote:

sorry, so late

little things...

[cRyo]
1.04.783(2) - why use redwaypoint(delete redwaypoint) no change

nice~
thx~
hoLysoup
1,846 posts
Joined September 2009
hoLysoup
hi~
These are all just suggestions only~
NC = New Combo

[General]
質問です～Just a question... why not start the map here??: 00:08:618

[CyRo]
00:44:765 - useless timing section?
01:02:753 (1,2) - spacing.. D: please fix
01:03:656 (1,2) - ^ quite confusing
01:35:235 - I suggest use 1.25x here? because it's final kiai? but it's your choice

[Hard]
00:30:723 (1) - remove clap, add finish?
00:35:911 (4) - NC
00:56:663 (1,2) - Very sudden jump... make the distance shorter?
00:56:663 - useless timing section
00:58:693 - useless timing section
01:04:558 (4) - NC for jump
01:26:550 (2) - stack on (4)?
01:35:235 (3) - more curved? http://puu.sh/9UxT
01:42:001 (1) - remove clap
01:42:453 (3) - remove clap, add finish at slider start only
01:49:671 (3) - curve this better? http://puu.sh/9Uy9

[Normal]
00:43:580 (3,4) - fix spacing~
01:11:776 - I suggest don't use SV change here... doesn't really fit the kiai
01:42:453 (2) - remove clap from slider head, and add finish


Very good mapset :D
grvyd
183 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
grvyd
hoLysoup's MODDING

hoLysoup wrote:

hi~
These are all just suggestions only~
NC = New Combo

[General]
質問です～Just a question... why not start the map here??: 00:08:618 because I like the part of 01:27:565~

[CyRo]
00:44:765 - useless timing section?
01:02:753 (1,2) - spacing.. D: please fix
01:03:656 (1,2) - ^ quite confusing
01:35:235 - I suggest use 1.25x here? because it's final kiai? but it's your choice

[Hard]
00:30:723 (1) - remove clap, add finish?
00:35:911 (4) - NC fixed.
00:56:663 (1,2) - Very sudden jump... make the distance shorter? fixed.
00:56:663 - useless timing section fixed.
00:58:693 - useless timing section fixed.
01:04:558 (4) - NC for jump fixed.
01:26:550 (2) - stack on (4)? fixed.
01:35:235 (3) - more curved? http://puu.sh/9UxT fixed.
01:42:001 (1) - remove clap fixed.
01:42:453 (3) - remove clap, add finish at slider start only fixed.But not remove clap.
01:49:671 (3) - curve this better? http://puu.sh/9Uy9 fixed.

[Normal]
00:43:580 (3,4) - fix spacing~
01:11:776 - I suggest don't use SV change here... doesn't really fit the kiai fixed.
01:42:453 (2) - remove clap from slider head, and add finish


Very good mapset :D

thx modding~
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