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MAZARE - Mazare Party [OsuMania]

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RoroTheDeer
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 12 July 2018 at 18:19:14

Artist: MAZARE
Title: Mazare Party
Tags: Oriental EDM MAZARE Camellia かめりあ Nanahira kradness yukacco Chilly Cokiiplay booty Asherz007 jakads dudehacker MIND HACK
BPM: 200
Filesize: 8943kb
Play Time: 03:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. 4K Easy - 4Key (1.48 stars, 763 notes)
  2. 4K Insane - 4Key (4.7 stars, 2502 notes)
  3. 6K Easy - 6Key (1.4 stars, 751 notes)
  4. 6K Hard - 6Key (3.25 stars, 2150 notes)
  5. 6K Normal - 6Key (2.22 stars, 1316 notes)
  6. Ash's 4K Extra - 4Key (5.15 stars, 3488 notes)
  7. Ash's 6K Extra - 6Key (6.23 stars, 4078 notes)
  8. booty's 6K Insane - 6Key (4.8 stars, 3205 notes)
  9. Chilly's 4K Normal - 4Key (2.16 stars, 1361 notes)
  10. Cokii's 4K Hard - 4Key (3.34 stars, 1986 notes)
  11. JAKARE's 6K Extra - 6Key (7.04 stars, 3894 notes)
Download: MAZARE - Mazare Party
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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AHHH THANK YOU SO MUCH EVERYONE!!!

4K:
Easy by me
Normal by Chilly-
Hard by Cokiiplay
Insane by me
Extra by Asherz007

6K:
Easy by me
Normal by me
Hard by me
Insane by booty
Extra by Asherz007
Extra by Jakads

A huge thanks to dudehacker for the hitsounding!


Source

Please re-download after 07/07/18!


Modders!
My Acc Sucks
tatatat
OscarRickyH02
DDMythical
chouyaa (x2)
error_exe777
Ridho 2307
francioszek
Mage
CrumpetFiddler
Curiossity
Couil
CommandoBlack
CHARGE
FadillSan
Chilly-
Alternater
Fresh Chicken
booty
Chexu daddy jakads
Pope Gadget
Minseo2000
CoffeeLatte-
YaHao
Jesuren
DoNotMess
Percyqaz
Evening
eyes
Kawawa
Special Thanks!
anti- for the 7K difficulty, however it had to be removed in order to make the map rankable
Domblade gay
CoffeeLatte- for +3
Jesuren for +1
Chilly- for +1
booty for +2
FruityEnLoops for +25
Nanashi- for +1
salchow for +5
Unpredictable for +4
shionelove for +11
Alternater for +40
Civilization for +135
tailsdk for +350

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Rank more 6K maps please thanks
rc fox
irc mod
2017-08-09 13:43 Insp1r3: i got something for you to mod
2017-08-09 13:43 RC Fox: what I'm not a modder
2017-08-09 13:44 RC Fox: I've never even modded mania
2017-08-09 13:44 Insp1r3: oh i thought you were asking for mods
2017-08-09 13:44 RC Fox: No but I could look at your map anyways.
2017-08-09 13:45 Insp1r3: i'll np it in a sec
2017-08-09 13:45 Insp1r3: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1378248 Camellia - Mazare Party (feat. kradness, Nanahira and yukacco)]
2017-08-09 13:46 RC Fox: These kicks don't need to be LN
2017-08-09 13:46 RC Fox: You should just keep them as notes.
2017-08-09 13:47 Insp1r3: the first ones?
2017-08-09 13:47 RC Fox: Any of them
2017-08-09 13:47 RC Fox: 00:13:476 (13476|0,13476|2,13626|0,13626|2,13776|0,13776|2,13926|2,13926|0) -
2017-08-09 13:47 RC Fox: You should move these around a bit
2017-08-09 13:47 RC Fox: Kinda boring as they are atm.
2017-08-09 13:48 Insp1r3: done
2017-08-09 13:48 RC Fox: 00:29:676 (29676|3,29676|1,29676|2,29676|0,29976|0,29976|3,29976|2,29976|1) -
2017-08-09 13:48 RC Fox: Speech like this doesn't need to be a quad
2017-08-09 13:49 Insp1r3: it's the name of the diff
2017-08-09 13:49 RC Fox: Yes I know but they don't need to be quads
2017-08-09 13:49 RC Fox: It's just speech
2017-08-09 13:49 RC Fox: I used to do the same but I stopped
2017-08-09 13:49 RC Fox: It's just not very good.
2017-08-09 13:50 Insp1r3: fixed
2017-08-09 13:51 RC Fox: 01:03:088 (63088|2) -
2017-08-09 13:51 RC Fox: Why is this in a weird spot?
2017-08-09 13:51 Insp1r3: 25% listen to the sitar
2017-08-09 13:51 RC Fox: If you're trying to map the chinese instrument thing in the background I think it's on 1/3
2017-08-09 13:52 RC Fox: Yeah it's on 1/3
2017-08-09 13:52 Insp1r3: i tried that and it didn't work
2017-08-09 13:52 RC Fox: uhh it sounds right to me.
2017-08-09 13:52 RC Fox: It's really clear that it works on the second part of it
2017-08-09 13:53 Insp1r3: i might have been mapping it to 1/8 instead...
2017-08-09 13:53 Insp1r3: whoops
2017-08-09 13:53 RC Fox: Yeah you wer
2017-08-09 13:53 RC Fox: 01:11:076 (71076|1,71076|3,71076|2,71076|0) -
2017-08-09 13:53 RC Fox: I would change this to a hand instead of a quad but that's just me.
2017-08-09 13:54 RC Fox: Especially since the next ones are hands
2017-08-09 13:54 RC Fox: 01:20:076 (80076|1,80376|1) -
2017-08-09 13:55 RC Fox: You should map the kicks here
2017-08-09 13:55 RC Fox: 01:30:276 (90276|3,90276|2,90576|1,90576|3,90876|2,90876|1) -
2017-08-09 13:56 RC Fox: Again these really don't need to be LNs
2017-08-09 13:56 RC Fox: 01:50:076 (110076|0,110076|2,110076|1,110076|3,110376|0,110376|3,110376|2,110376|1) -
2017-08-09 13:56 RC Fox: speech again
2017-08-09 13:57 RC Fox: 01:59:226 (119226|3,119226|2,119301|3,119301|2,119376|2,119376|3) -
2017-08-09 13:57 RC Fox: These are like the only jacks in the section, which are really out of place.
2017-08-09 13:57 RC Fox: I would just have double trill
2017-08-09 13:58 RC Fox: 02:41:076 (161076|0,161076|2,161076|3,161076|1) -
2017-08-09 13:58 RC Fox: This again
2017-08-09 13:59 RC Fox: 03:09:013 (189013|3,189088|2,189163|1,189313|0,189388|1,189463|2,189576|0,189613|3,189688|2,189726|0,189763|1) -
2017-08-09 13:59 RC Fox: Snap all of these to 1/3
2017-08-09 14:00 RC Fox: and 1/6 on the faster part
2017-08-09 14:00 Insp1r3: done
2017-08-09 14:00 RC Fox: 03:13:794 (193794|2,193869|1,193944|0,194019|1,194094|0,194169|1,194244|2,194319|0,194394|1,194469|2,194544|0,194619|2,194676|1) -
2017-08-09 14:00 RC Fox: Same of all of these
2017-08-09 14:01 RC Fox: On the break right after 03:17:076 (197076|2,197076|3) - you should map something, since pretty much no mania maps ever have breaks.
2017-08-09 14:01 RC Fox: Just map like single notes on each vocal and jumps when the music in the background is therew.
2017-08-09 14:02 RC Fox: 03:20:676 (200676|0,200676|2,200676|1,200676|3,200976|1,200976|2,200976|0,200976|3) -
2017-08-09 14:02 RC Fox: These don't need to be quads again
2017-08-09 14:02 RC Fox: 03:21:876 (201876|0,201876|3,201876|2,202176|3,202476|0,202476|2,202476|1) -
2017-08-09 14:02 RC Fox: again with LN
2017-08-09 14:02 RC Fox: for the whole section
2017-08-09 14:03 RC Fox: 03:41:076 (221076|3,221076|1,221076|2,221376|1,221376|3,221676|1,221676|2) -
2017-08-09 14:03 RC Fox: LN again lol
2017-08-09 14:03 RC Fox: Since LN requires the user to let go on time, it's usually best to just map things with normal notes, since the player's acc may go down for no reason.
2017-08-09 14:03 RC Fox: Anyways that's everything that I saw
2017-08-09 14:04 Insp1r3: thanks for all that!
2017-08-09 14:04 RC Fox: oh wait
2017-08-09 14:04 RC Fox: 00:10:026 (10026|3,10101|3) - also change this jack, it doesn't fit in either.
2017-08-09 14:05 RC Fox: I'll post this IRC on the on the forum topic now so you can get your priority up from the mod.

Goodluck with your map! :)
Topic Starter
RoroTheDeer

RC Fox wrote:

irc mod
2017-08-09 13:43 Insp1r3: i got something for you to mod
2017-08-09 13:43 RC Fox: what I'm not a modder
2017-08-09 13:44 RC Fox: I've never even modded mania
2017-08-09 13:44 Insp1r3: oh i thought you were asking for mods
2017-08-09 13:44 RC Fox: No but I could look at your map anyways.
2017-08-09 13:45 Insp1r3: i'll np it in a sec
2017-08-09 13:45 Insp1r3: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1378248 Camellia - Mazare Party (feat. kradness, Nanahira and yukacco)]
2017-08-09 13:46 RC Fox: These kicks don't need to be LN
2017-08-09 13:46 RC Fox: You should just keep them as notes.
2017-08-09 13:47 Insp1r3: the first ones?
2017-08-09 13:47 RC Fox: Any of them
2017-08-09 13:47 RC Fox: 00:13:476 (13476|0,13476|2,13626|0,13626|2,13776|0,13776|2,13926|2,13926|0) -
2017-08-09 13:47 RC Fox: You should move these around a bit
2017-08-09 13:47 RC Fox: Kinda boring as they are atm.
2017-08-09 13:48 Insp1r3: done
2017-08-09 13:48 RC Fox: 00:29:676 (29676|3,29676|1,29676|2,29676|0,29976|0,29976|3,29976|2,29976|1) -
2017-08-09 13:48 RC Fox: Speech like this doesn't need to be a quad
2017-08-09 13:49 Insp1r3: it's the name of the diff
2017-08-09 13:49 RC Fox: Yes I know but they don't need to be quads
2017-08-09 13:49 RC Fox: It's just speech
2017-08-09 13:49 RC Fox: I used to do the same but I stopped
2017-08-09 13:49 RC Fox: It's just not very good.
2017-08-09 13:50 Insp1r3: fixed
2017-08-09 13:51 RC Fox: 01:03:088 (63088|2) -
2017-08-09 13:51 RC Fox: Why is this in a weird spot?
2017-08-09 13:51 Insp1r3: 25% listen to the sitar
2017-08-09 13:51 RC Fox: If you're trying to map the chinese instrument thing in the background I think it's on 1/3
2017-08-09 13:52 RC Fox: Yeah it's on 1/3
2017-08-09 13:52 Insp1r3: i tried that and it didn't work
2017-08-09 13:52 RC Fox: uhh it sounds right to me.
2017-08-09 13:52 RC Fox: It's really clear that it works on the second part of it
2017-08-09 13:53 Insp1r3: i might have been mapping it to 1/8 instead...
2017-08-09 13:53 Insp1r3: whoops
2017-08-09 13:53 RC Fox: Yeah you wer
2017-08-09 13:53 RC Fox: 01:11:076 (71076|1,71076|3,71076|2,71076|0) -
2017-08-09 13:53 RC Fox: I would change this to a hand instead of a quad but that's just me.
2017-08-09 13:54 RC Fox: Especially since the next ones are hands
2017-08-09 13:54 RC Fox: 01:20:076 (80076|1,80376|1) -
2017-08-09 13:55 RC Fox: You should map the kicks here
2017-08-09 13:55 RC Fox: 01:30:276 (90276|3,90276|2,90576|1,90576|3,90876|2,90876|1) -
2017-08-09 13:56 RC Fox: Again these really don't need to be LNs
2017-08-09 13:56 RC Fox: 01:50:076 (110076|0,110076|2,110076|1,110076|3,110376|0,110376|3,110376|2,110376|1) -
2017-08-09 13:56 RC Fox: speech again
2017-08-09 13:57 RC Fox: 01:59:226 (119226|3,119226|2,119301|3,119301|2,119376|2,119376|3) -
2017-08-09 13:57 RC Fox: These are like the only jacks in the section, which are really out of place.
2017-08-09 13:57 RC Fox: I would just have double trill
2017-08-09 13:58 RC Fox: 02:41:076 (161076|0,161076|2,161076|3,161076|1) -
2017-08-09 13:58 RC Fox: This again
2017-08-09 13:59 RC Fox: 03:09:013 (189013|3,189088|2,189163|1,189313|0,189388|1,189463|2,189576|0,189613|3,189688|2,189726|0,189763|1) -
2017-08-09 13:59 RC Fox: Snap all of these to 1/3
2017-08-09 14:00 RC Fox: and 1/6 on the faster part
2017-08-09 14:00 Insp1r3: done
2017-08-09 14:00 RC Fox: 03:13:794 (193794|2,193869|1,193944|0,194019|1,194094|0,194169|1,194244|2,194319|0,194394|1,194469|2,194544|0,194619|2,194676|1) -
2017-08-09 14:00 RC Fox: Same of all of these
2017-08-09 14:01 RC Fox: On the break right after 03:17:076 (197076|2,197076|3) - you should map something, since pretty much no mania maps ever have breaks.
2017-08-09 14:01 RC Fox: Just map like single notes on each vocal and jumps when the music in the background is therew.
2017-08-09 14:02 RC Fox: 03:20:676 (200676|0,200676|2,200676|1,200676|3,200976|1,200976|2,200976|0,200976|3) -
2017-08-09 14:02 RC Fox: These don't need to be quads again
2017-08-09 14:02 RC Fox: 03:21:876 (201876|0,201876|3,201876|2,202176|3,202476|0,202476|2,202476|1) -
2017-08-09 14:02 RC Fox: again with LN
2017-08-09 14:02 RC Fox: for the whole section
2017-08-09 14:03 RC Fox: 03:41:076 (221076|3,221076|1,221076|2,221376|1,221376|3,221676|1,221676|2) -
2017-08-09 14:03 RC Fox: LN again lol
2017-08-09 14:03 RC Fox: Since LN requires the user to let go on time, it's usually best to just map things with normal notes, since the player's acc may go down for no reason.
2017-08-09 14:03 RC Fox: Anyways that's everything that I saw
2017-08-09 14:04 Insp1r3: thanks for all that!
2017-08-09 14:04 RC Fox: oh wait
2017-08-09 14:04 RC Fox: 00:10:026 (10026|3,10101|3) - also change this jack, it doesn't fit in either.
2017-08-09 14:05 RC Fox: I'll post this IRC on the on the forum topic now so you can get your priority up from the mod.

Goodluck with your map! :)
Fixed everything you pointed out. Thanks for modding!
tatatat
IRC thingy
18:17 Insp1r3: dude do you want to try a 4.5* 4k map?
18:17 tatatat: hi c:
18:17 tatatat: sure?
18:18 Insp1r3: ty c:
18:18 *Insp1r3 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1378248 Camellia - Mazare Party (feat. kradness, Nanahira and yukacco)]
18:19 *tatatat is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1378248 Camellia - Mazare Party (feat. kradness, Nanahira and yukacco) [Put your hands up!]] <osu!mania> |4K|
18:23 tatatat: neato.
18:23 Insp1r3: thoughts?
18:23 tatatat: You should use SVs or there is a different bpm at the slow softer section near the end
18:24 Insp1r3: i'm a bit reluctant about using SVs
18:24 Insp1r3: i've never really used them
18:28 tatatat: I can give example SVs for the section
18:30 tatatat: https://pastebin.com/p3MfXx0B here, use paste these timing points into your .osu file
18:30 Insp1r3: ty, i'll try them out
18:31 tatatat: The SVs get progressively slower at 03:15:876 - until 03:17:076 - , to transition into the slower scroll speed.
18:35 Insp1r3: i really liked that slow transition, but i think the SVs after that were a little to sudden
18:35 Insp1r3: after the .75x i just kept it to 1x
18:35 tatatat: oh at 03:20:676 - ?
18:35 Insp1r3: yeah
18:36 tatatat: yeah those were just because they were fun and it represented the suddenly faster tempo. you don't have to use them :P
18:36 Insp1r3: they were really nice though, thanks for letting me use them :p
18:37 tatatat: yeah, no problem c:
18:38 Insp1r3: i'll try to add some more svs
18:38 Insp1r3: seems like it could use some
18:39 tatatat: oh yeah umm, you forgot to credit your guest difficulty mapper in the tags, and your two diffs don't have the same metadata and timing points.
18:39 tatatat: like the map though c:
18:40 Insp1r3: the metadata should be the same
18:41 tatatat: dunno, AIMod says differently
18:41 tatatat: o, the taiko diff's unicode is all garbled
18:42 Insp1r3: oh
18:42 Insp1r3: that'll be why
18:42 Insp1r3: i'll edit that
18:42 tatatat: but neither of the diffs credit nifty in the tags I think
18:43 Insp1r3: i'll change that
18:43 Insp1r3: it's my first time having a gd so i have no idea what to do xd
18:43 tatatat: ahh, always include the guest difficulty mapper's full username in all difficulties
18:44 tatatat: and ask the guest diff mapper to review changes/mods concerning their diff unless they explicitly tell you not to.
18:45 Insp1r3: does that mean i have to apply for mods on their behalf?
18:45 tatatat: nah, you have to ask them to apply mods
18:45 tatatat: o
18:46 tatatat: I think thats what you said?? Anyways, for the most part they edit their diffs, just remind them when someone mods their diff, because not everyone can check every guest diff they ever make for mods.
18:47 Insp1r3: so just send them a quick message when someone mods?
18:47 tatatat: mhm
18:48 Insp1r3: well i figured out SVs
18:48 Insp1r3: damn these turned out well
18:49 tatatat: My bread and butter SV is just 3 SVs. one at the start of a gap at a speed lower than 1.0x, one in the middle of the gap at a speed greater than 1.0x, and one at the end of the gap at 1.0x unless another SV also starts there.
18:50 tatatat: works out pretty well.
18:50 Insp1r3: i'm using them to emphasise sounds
18:50 tatatat: nice c:
Oscyy
yo
NM req from queue, sorry im late x.x

this map is pretty good already actually holysieth
i heard you still learning to use sv, i'll put some notes here, if you dont understand you can pm me ingame

Put your hands up!
00:15:876 - put some bump sv would be good with 1.5x-0.5x sv, and apply that to all similar part since this song is repeated like 3 times
00:21:351 - you missed sound here
00:22:476 - ugh, not mapping that 1/4 snare until white line?
00:28:776 - not sure, i heard like 1/4 strong snare sound here, maybe you can put doubles on them to make jumptrill
00:34:101 (34101|1) - ghost?
00:46:101 - missed sound?
00:56:151 - this one sounds different with the other, you skipped a sound here
00:58:476 (58476|0) - isn't it must be 00:58:551 - instead?
01:07:926 - don sound, add 2 note on 1 and 4 if you prefer
01:36:876 - 1/4 snare
01:47:976 - double?
01:50:676 - tbh, i dont understand what are these ln for, if its for synth, you skipped many sound like 01:51:726 - 01:52:026 - 01:52:476 - 01:53:376 - etc
but 02:05:076 - you can skip ln there
02:17:076 - i dont get this ln as well
02:23:826 - double for clap?
02:46:101 - i believe you missed sound here too
03:25:476 - <3 love this
03:49:326 - ln on 4 will do

fun map, so far you nailed layering and emphasizing for this map, but one more thing you haven't set kiai time so fix it
good luck
Topic Starter
RoroTheDeer

OscarRickyH02 wrote:

yo
NM req from queue, sorry im late x.x

this map is pretty good already actually holysieth
i heard you still learning to use sv, i'll put some notes here, if you dont understand you can pm me ingame

Put your hands up!
00:15:876 - put some bump sv would be good with 1.5x-0.5x sv, and apply that to all similar part since this song is repeated like 3 times Added!
00:21:351 - you missed sound here Fixed!
00:22:476 - ugh, not mapping that 1/4 snare until white line? Fixed!
00:28:776 - not sure, i heard like 1/4 strong snare sound here, maybe you can put doubles on them to make jumptrill Fixed and added to the other sections of the song as well!
00:34:101 (34101|1) - ghost? Fixed!
00:46:101 - missed sound? Fixed!
00:56:151 - this one sounds different with the other, you skipped a sound here Fixed!
00:58:476 (58476|0) - isn't it must be 00:58:551 - instead? Fixed!
01:07:926 - don sound, add 2 note on 1 and 4 if you prefer Fixed!
01:36:876 - 1/4 snare Fixed!
01:47:976 - double? Fixed!
01:50:676 - tbh, i dont understand what are these ln for, if its for synth, you skipped many sound like 01:51:726 - 01:52:026 - 01:52:476 - 01:53:376 - etc
but 02:05:076 - you can skip ln there I was going for a style so that when you lift your finger to finish that LN, the pitch of the synth increases and then when you press the same note again it descends to the original pitch. It's just some artsy thing that I wanted to try and people have said it works quite well.
02:17:076 - i dont get this ln as well ^
02:23:826 - double for clap? Fixed!
02:46:101 - i believe you missed sound here too Fixed!
03:25:476 - <3 love this <3
03:49:326 - ln on 4 will do I've been contemplating this change for a while, but I think it's fine the way it is.


fun map, so far you nailed layering and emphasizing for this map, but one more thing you haven't set kiai time so fix it Kiai time added as well!
good luck Thank you <3
Thank you so much for modding!
DDMythical
irc mod

i havent slept in like 20 hours
eyes
Song should be 5 mins+ or you should to map Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane and so on for every mode.
Mirea
NM request from Modding Qu'eue'
1|2|3|4


  • [Put your hands up!]00:14:076 - to 00:14:601 - i think it should be double notes for those drum sound,
    would be inconsistent if only 1 note, similar with 00:28:476 - 00:29:076 -

    00:22:626 (22626|3,22776|2) - ghost notes

    00:23:151 (23151|3,23451|3,23601|3) - feels ghost notes, i think

    00:22:926 - suggestion > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8945481
    check > 00:18:876 - for consistency

    00:38:826 - suggestion > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8945475

    00:29:226 - to 00:29:676 - 1 note is enough, no need to put 2 notes there cause there's no drum

    00:47:226 (47226|2,47226|3,47826|3,47826|2) - this double LN should be on white thick, kick sound
    00:46:626 - suggesstion > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8945513

    00:46:926 (46926|3) - delete, no loud sound, inconsistent with 00:47:526 -

    01:29:451 - 01:29:526 - 01:30:051 - 01:30:126 - im sure u missed a note for that sounds

    01:33:426 - 01:33:726 - 2 notes? inconsistent with 00:18:876 -

    01:49:626 - 01:49:776 - 01:49:926 - 01:50:076 - 1 note, same reason as above

    02:05:076 (125076|0,125226|1,125526|0,125676|1,125826|0,125976|1,126276|1,126426|0) - please arrange the LNs more balance

    02:19:476 - until 02:22:476 - pls check for consistency, especially that drum sounds

    02:21:126 (141126|0) - move to col 2, avoid stacks

    02:22:326 (142326|3) - move to col 2, ^ same reason

    02:39:876 - 3 notes? but 02:40:176 - only 2 notes, same sound

    02:45:876 - until 02:50:976 - check for consistency again, there are some inconsistent notes i found

    03:22:476 - 03:22:776 - 03:23:076 - thats not even a loud sound or istrument, dont need to put 3 notes
    check > 03:23:676 - 03:23:976 - 03:24:276 - 03:24:876 -
sorry for being late, cause there are so many request in queue and only me who active in team
Goodluck <3
Topic Starter
RoroTheDeer

chouyaa wrote:

NM request from Modding Qu'eue'
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  • [Put your hands up!]00:14:076 - to 00:14:601 - i think it should be double notes for those drum sound,
    would be inconsistent if only 1 note, similar with 00:28:476 - 00:29:076 - Agreed, fixed

    00:22:626 (22626|3,22776|2) - ghost notes Fixed

    00:23:151 (23151|3,23451|3,23601|3) - feels ghost notes, i think I don't think they are, keeping it as is

    00:22:926 - suggestion > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8945481
    check > 00:18:876 - for consistency I'd rather keep it the way it is

    00:38:826 - suggestion > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8945475 Changed it but in a different style

    00:29:226 - to 00:29:676 - 1 note is enough, no need to put 2 notes there cause there's no drum Agreed, changed

    00:47:226 (47226|2,47226|3,47826|3,47826|2) - this double LN should be on white thick, kick sound
    00:46:626 - suggesstion > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8945513 They're emphasising vocals, keeping it as is

    00:46:926 (46926|3) - delete, no loud sound, inconsistent with 00:47:526 - Agreed, fixed

    01:29:451 - 01:29:526 - 01:30:051 - 01:30:126 - im sure u missed a note for that sounds I would rather have the emphasis be on the vocals as the same sounds are more prominent later in the song so it would feel more inconsistent

    01:33:426 - 01:33:726 - 2 notes? inconsistent with 00:18:876 - Agreed, fixed

    01:49:626 - 01:49:776 - 01:49:926 - 01:50:076 - 1 note, same reason as above Fixed

    02:05:076 (125076|0,125226|1,125526|0,125676|1,125826|0,125976|1,126276|1,126426|0) - please arrange the LNs more balance Fixed

    02:19:476 - until 02:22:476 - pls check for consistency, especially that drum sounds Double checked it, fixed

    02:21:126 (141126|0) - move to col 2, avoid stacks Fixed

    02:22:326 (142326|3) - move to col 2, ^ same reason ^

    02:39:876 - 3 notes? but 02:40:176 - only 2 notes, same sound Fixed

    02:45:876 - until 02:50:976 - check for consistency again, there are some inconsistent notes i found Checked through, changed to be made more consistent

    03:22:476 - 03:22:776 - 03:23:076 - thats not even a loud sound or istrument, dont need to put 3 notes
    check > 03:23:676 - 03:23:976 - 03:24:276 - 03:24:876 - Changed to make the vocals doubles and triples when the synth bass plays simultaneously
sorry for being late, cause there are so many request in queue and only me who active in team
Goodluck <3
Thank you so much for the mod!
(sorry for the late reply as well, i've been really busy lately :P)
error_exe777
heyyyyyyyy

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Put your hands up!
00:01:326 (1326|0,1326|3,1326|1,1326|2,1476|0,1476|3,1476|1,1476|2) - ooooo, these seem very out of place. especially at the start of a map. i think triples are enough to represent that well

00:47:076 (47076|2,47376|0,47676|2) - these notes don't play well tbh. maybe shift them in a bit so they don't anchor the LN's

00:51:651 (51651|3,51726|2,51801|1) - these would be great as LN's

01:07:926 (67926|3,67976|2) - i can hear this, i think, but it's so weird placed near everything else. my recommendation is to just get rid of the 1/6 note.

in addition to the said above, 01:07:926 (67926|3) - this should be a double because it is the same sound and intensity as 01:08:076 (68076|1,68076|0) -

01:29:076 (89076|1,89601|0,89676|1) - i don't really like how this is hugging the edge so much. maybe move the single note to column 3

01:36:951 - i believe you missed a note

02:59:601 (179601|0) - again, with the edge hugging, lmao

03:00:576 (180576|0) - i feel like this is snapped to the 1/6 or 1/8 above

03:41:076 (221076|3,221076|0,221076|2,221076|1) - i feel like a quad is a bit too much honestly. maybe delete the note in column 2 to both bump it down to a triple and avoid that anchor

i love camellia so much thank you for mapping this

great map, good luck o/
Topic Starter
RoroTheDeer

error_exe777 wrote:

heyyyyyyyy

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Put your hands up!
00:01:326 (1326|0,1326|3,1326|1,1326|2,1476|0,1476|3,1476|1,1476|2) - ooooo, these seem very out of place. especially at the start of a map. i think triples are enough to represent that well Changed to triples

00:47:076 (47076|2,47376|0,47676|2) - these notes don't play well tbh. maybe shift them in a bit so they don't anchor the LN's Agreed,
changed


00:51:651 (51651|3,51726|2,51801|1) - these would be great as LN's Had a listen, they do actually work quite well

01:07:926 (67926|3,67976|2) - i can hear this, i think, but it's so weird placed near everything else. my recommendation is to just get rid of the 1/6 note. Agreed, the note on the 1/6 wasn't loud enough for it to be emphasised

in addition to the said above, 01:07:926 (67926|3) - this should be a double because it is the same sound and intensity as 01:08:076 (68076|1,68076|0) - Agreed, changed

01:29:076 (89076|1,89601|0,89676|1) - i don't really like how this is hugging the edge so much. maybe move the single note to column 3 Agreed, changed in a way that suites the style of the map more

01:36:951 - i believe you missed a note Agreed, added

02:59:601 (179601|0) - again, with the edge hugging, lmao Changed to suite map style

03:00:576 (180576|0) - i feel like this is snapped to the 1/6 or 1/8 above Agreed, moved to yellow line on 1/8

03:41:076 (221076|3,221076|0,221076|2,221076|1) - i feel like a quad is a bit too much honestly. maybe delete the note in column 2 to both bump it down to a triple and avoid that anchor Agreed, changed to suite map style


i love camellia so much thank you for mapping this

great map, good luck o/

Thanks for modding!
_VianK_
mods come to you from this queue p/6222952

easy

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i think you should change diff name to normal but anywway is up to you

00:18:876 (18876|2,19176|3,19476|3,19776|0,20076|3) - make it 2 note for concistency

00:29:076 (29076|0,29226|3,29376|0,29526|3) - delete this and make a LN to cover the vocal

02:19:476 - change it into 1/2 stream

00:49:476 - ^
good luck
Topic Starter
RoroTheDeer

Ridho 2307 wrote:

mods come to you from this queue p/6222952

easy

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i think you should change diff name to normal but anywway is up to you

00:18:876 (18876|2,19176|3,19476|3,19776|0,20076|3) - make it 2 note for concistency Agreed to a point, changed 00:19:476 (19476|3,19476|0,19776|0,19776|1,20076|2,20076|3) - to doubles rather than the first two you pointed out.

00:29:076 (29076|0,29226|3,29376|0,29526|3) - delete this and make a LN to cover the vocal Agreed, did this for both points

02:19:476 - change it into 1/2 stream I can't agree on this one, this would make the map overstarred.

00:49:476 - ^^
good luck
Thanks for the mod!
Umo-
Hello,
Heres my GD
Topic Starter
RoroTheDeer

Umo- wrote:

Hello,
Heres my GD
Thanks for the GD!
Topic Starter
RoroTheDeer
@GDers: All GDs have been added, so please re-dl if you haven't already!
Caoutchouc
Uhm, hi.
Umo's Extra
00:37:101 (37101|2,37101|3) - I don't think this should be double, just single.
00:54:576 (54576|1,54576|0,55176|0,55176|1) - idk if these shoukd be doubles either, just single.
01:36:576 (96576|0,96576|3) - this should be a triple since the same sound as earlier and leater.
01:50:376 - WOAH, um no. Teleport with 10x is like too much imo, that shouldn't be a teleport at all .-.
02:31:101 (151101|2,151101|3) - ghost notes?
02:33:426 (153426|0,153426|3) - ^ ?
02:37:851 (157851|3) - ghost note?
03:08:076 (188076|2,188076|0,188376|3,188376|1) - if these can be mapped with a double then 03:08:676 (188676|0) - can be as well
03:10:926 (190926|1,190926|0) - idk if this should be a double, it's pretty much only vocals.
03:22:176 (202176|2,203376|0) - this sound was mapped only with 1/2 ln earlier, why is it a 1/1 now?
Put your hands up or smth
00:10:026 (10026|3,10101|3) - is this really necessairy?
00:11:376 (11376|0,11376|1,11526|3,11676|1,11676|2) - why some are doubles and some are singles :x
00:22:176 (22176|0,22176|1,22476|2,22476|1,22476|0) - why some are doubles and some triples ;-;
00:32:301 - i'd map this sound but w/e
01:41:676 (101676|2) - why is this a single when couple notes forward the same sound is mapped with a single note .-.
01:49:476 (109476|3) - uh... no? just double not a triple.
02:33:201 (153201|1) - ??? blue line i think.
02:33:276 - why isn't this sound mapped
cokiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
00:07:176 - no object? there's like this cymbal thing i think .-.
00:08:826 - ^
Nice map, have fun and good luck on ranking :)
Topic Starter
RoroTheDeer

francioszek wrote:

Uhm, hi.
Umo's Extra
00:37:101 (37101|2,37101|3) - I don't think this should be double, just single.
00:54:576 (54576|1,54576|0,55176|0,55176|1) - idk if these shoukd be doubles either, just single.
01:36:576 (96576|0,96576|3) - this should be a triple since the same sound as earlier and leater.
01:50:376 - WOAH, um no. Teleport with 10x is like too much imo, that shouldn't be a teleport at all .-.
02:31:101 (151101|2,151101|3) - ghost notes?
02:33:426 (153426|0,153426|3) - ^ ?
02:37:851 (157851|3) - ghost note?
03:08:076 (188076|2,188076|0,188376|3,188376|1) - if these can be mapped with a double then 03:08:676 (188676|0) - can be as well
03:10:926 (190926|1,190926|0) - idk if this should be a double, it's pretty much only vocals.
03:22:176 (202176|2,203376|0) - this sound was mapped only with 1/2 ln earlier, why is it a 1/1 now?
Put your hands up or smth
00:10:026 (10026|3,10101|3) - is this really necessairy?
00:11:376 (11376|0,11376|1,11526|3,11676|1,11676|2) - why some are doubles and some are singles :x
00:22:176 (22176|0,22176|1,22476|2,22476|1,22476|0) - why some are doubles and some triples ;-;
00:32:301 - i'd map this sound but w/e
01:41:676 (101676|2) - why is this a single when couple notes forward the same sound is mapped with a single note .-.
01:49:476 (109476|3) - uh... no? just double not a triple.
02:33:201 (153201|1) - ??? blue line i think.
02:33:276 - why isn't this sound mapped
cokiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
00:07:176 - no object? there's like this cymbal thing i think .-.
00:08:826 - ^
Nice map, have fun and good luck on ranking :)
Reply posted in here;

Put your hands up or smth
00:10:026 (10026|3,10101|3) - is this really necessairy? Fixed
00:11:376 (11376|0,11376|1,11526|3,11676|1,11676|2) - why some are doubles and some are singles :x Fixed
00:22:176 (22176|0,22176|1,22476|2,22476|1,22476|0) - why some are doubles and some triples ;-; ^
00:32:301 - i'd map this sound but w/e Fixed
01:41:676 (101676|2) - why is this a single when couple notes forward the same sound is mapped with a single note .-. I think you meant that the second note further ahead was a double. Either way, fixed for consistency's sake
01:49:476 (109476|3) - uh... no? just double not a triple. Rejecting this one, the sounds is more intense and contrasts the vibro
02:33:201 (153201|1) - ??? blue line i think. Fixed
02:33:276 - why isn't this sound mapped Fixed


Thanks for the mod!
Cokii-

francioszek wrote:

Uhm, hi.

cokiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
00:07:176 - no object? there's like this cymbal thing i think .-. hm i can only hear the vocal
00:08:826 - ^ ^
Nice map, have fun and good luck on ranking :)
thx for the mod :D
Umo-

Insp1r3 wrote:

francioszek wrote:

Uhm, hi.
Umo's Extra
00:37:101 (37101|2,37101|3) - I don't think this should be double, just single. double is fine imo
00:54:576 (54576|1,54576|0,55176|0,55176|1) - idk if these shoukd be doubles either, just single. first one shouldn't be a double, you can hear a drum sound on 2nd oen
01:36:576 (96576|0,96576|3) - this should be a triple since the same sound as earlier and leater. no idea how I missed that
01:50:376 - WOAH, um no. Teleport with 10x is like too much imo, that shouldn't be a teleport at all .-. changed it to 9.00x so it should be easier to read
02:31:101 (151101|2,151101|3) - ghost notes? um no
02:33:426 (153426|0,153426|3) - ^ ? I hear a sound there
02:37:851 (157851|3) - ghost note? yup
03:08:076 (188076|2,188076|0,188376|3,188376|1) - if these can be mapped with a double then 03:08:676 (188676|0) - can be as well what no
03:10:926 (190926|1,190926|0) - idk if this should be a double, it's pretty much only vocals. can hear loud bell sound + vocals
03:22:176 (202176|2,203376|0) - this sound was mapped only with 1/2 ln earlier, why is it a 1/1 now? fixed
thanks for mod
update
https://pastebin.com/iZupTxZS
Meiju
Yo

[General]
Increase Hard diff's sr to at least 3.5*, because there is too big gap between "Hard" diff and "Put Your.." diff
Only the hardest difficulty may use an appropriate custom difficulty name, so rename "Put.." to Insane or Maximum or idk

[Put your hands up!]
00:05:976 - there is not the same sound as 00:05:676 - , so repattern this. For example 00:05:976 - https://puu.sh/xroxC/a655ead8aa.png
00:09:876 - should be double 00:09:576 (9576|0) - finish this LN 00:09:801 - here to make double
00:11:076 - make triple
00:20:676 - 00:20:976 - 00:21:276 - 00:21:876 - why here are not triples, but 00:22:176 - 00:22:476 - here are triples :?
00:28:476 - https://puu.sh/xroNy/8241c3ef8d.png more appropriate to music
00:29:676 - no, make singe, i see no reason for double
00:30:576 - 00:31:176 - 00:31:776 - and etc. - etter to make triples for these sounds and doubles for 00:30:876 - 00:31:476 - 00:32:076 - and etc.
00:31:326 - 00:31:626 - 00:32:226 - 00:32:526 - why you put here doubles? i don't understand, e x p l a i n
00:41:076 (41076|2,41076|3,41376|2,41376|3,41676|3,41676|2,41976|3,41976|2,42276|2,42276|3,42576|2,42576|3,42876|3,42876|2) - OwO What's this? repattern please
00:47:076 - 00:47:376 - 00:47:676 - 00:47:976 - make doubles, will be not so hard (trust me)
00:51:576 - make here miniLN too - https://puu.sh/xrpoX/c66a378939.png
00:59:676 - 01:00:276 - 01:00:876 - 01:01:476 - 01:02:076 - 01:03:276 - 01:03:876 - 01:04:476 - 01:05:076 - 01:05:676 - 01:06:276 - 01:06:876 - 01:08:676 - should be doubles and 00:59:976 - 01:01:176 - 01:02:376 - 01:04:776 - 01:05:976 - 01:07:176 - 100% triples
01:10:476 - make smth like https://puu.sh/xrq28/bac6dff090.png more appropriate to music
01:27:876 - should be double
01:29:076 (89076|1) - finish this LN 01:29:526 - here and 01:29:601 (89601|3) - moe to 01:29:526
01:29:976 (89976|1) - extend this LN to 01:30:276 -
01:32:676 - make triple
01:48:276 - why not just make 12 34 chord trill
01:50:076 - 01:50:376 - singles pls
02:07:476 - make smth like https://puu.sh/xrpTB/9d87f0d501.png - or without LNs
02:36:126 - 02:36:576 - doubles for vocal? :thinking:
02:36:876 - make double please
02:40:476 - again, make smth like https://puu.sh/xrq28/bac6dff090.png more appropriate to music
03:22:476 - 03:22:776 - 03:23:676 - and etc. - why do you make doubles for vocal D:
Crumpey
As requested in crumpeys mod queue

Easy IRC
01:18 CrumpetFiddler: Hi
01:21 *CrumpetFiddler poke
01:21 Insp1r3: O-O
01:21 CrumpetFiddler: keep me waiting why dont you :P
01:24 Insp1r3: urm... who are you again?
01:24 CrumpetFiddler: Geez
01:24 CrumpetFiddler: dont even remember who you post to
01:24 Insp1r3: yeah i don't, sorry
01:24 CrumpetFiddler: modding queue
01:24 Insp1r3: i am quite busy so names just sort of fly over lol
01:24 Insp1r3: ah yes
01:25 CrumpetFiddler: i was gunna ask if you want a quick irc
01:26 Insp1r3: for which diff, might i ask?
01:26 CrumpetFiddler: Probably one youve mapped
01:27 CrumpetFiddler: cause i know 3 are gds
01:27 Insp1r3: yeah sure, give me a few minutes, i'm getting more gds in right now actually lol
01:29 CrumpetFiddler: well do be quick XD
01:29 CrumpetFiddler: its 1:30
01:30 Insp1r3: aight, let's start
01:30 CrumpetFiddler: what one is yours
01:30 CrumpetFiddler: ones
01:30 Insp1r3: put your hands up and easy
01:30 CrumpetFiddler: easy aaaand
01:30 CrumpetFiddler: okay
01:30 Insp1r3: i'll have to change the names of the diffs soon since i'm getting 7k gds
01:30 CrumpetFiddler: geez 4.6 *
01:30 CrumpetFiddler: Im gunna do ez to start with
01:30 Insp1r3: aight
01:30 CrumpetFiddler: i normally mod things around 3*
01:31 CrumpetFiddler: i dont like modding what i cant smash out myself
01:31 Insp1r3: well you can mod whatever you like
01:31 CrumpetFiddler: so anyway
01:31 Insp1r3: i really don't mind, just as long as it helps out the map
01:31 CrumpetFiddler: i think ill have enough from easy anyway
01:31 CrumpetFiddler: i can see some things off the bat
01:31 *CrumpetFiddler is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1399365 Camellia - Mazare Party (feat. kradness, Nanahira and yukacco) [Easy]]
01:31 CrumpetFiddler: 00:01:326 (1326|0,1476|2) -
01:32 CrumpetFiddler: to fit the pitch invert the 2 notes
01:32 CrumpetFiddler: and make the first note an ln
01:32 Insp1r3: where should the LN end?
01:32 CrumpetFiddler: when the first note is hit
01:33 CrumpetFiddler: your only representing the stream
01:33 Insp1r3: the first note?
01:33 CrumpetFiddler: in fact, the ln could start here
01:33 CrumpetFiddler: 00:01:176 -
01:33 CrumpetFiddler: and yeah up until the first single note
01:33 Insp1r3: 00:01:476 (1476|0) - this one?
01:34 CrumpetFiddler: yeah
01:34 Insp1r3: aight, ive added that
01:34 CrumpetFiddler: id say make these lns
01:34 CrumpetFiddler: 00:05:676 (5676|0,5976|3) -
01:34 CrumpetFiddler: for the clear drum roll-like sound you can hear
01:34 Insp1r3: added
01:35 CrumpetFiddler: here 00:09:876 - to 00:14:676 -
01:35 Insp1r3: also can you open my put your hands up diff for reference?
01:35 Insp1r3: i've used that as a basis for the styling of this map
01:35 CrumpetFiddler: youve 1. swapped between vocal and beat. and 2 the pattern is super repetitive
01:35 CrumpetFiddler: sure. my current arguements as they stand still apply
01:36 CrumpetFiddler: these note inparticular
01:36 CrumpetFiddler: 00:10:476 (10476|1,10626|3,10776|2) -
01:37 CrumpetFiddler: youve disregarded the beat and just mapped voice
01:37 CrumpetFiddler: and that feels really bad to play imo
01:37 Insp1r3: changed them to match the drums
01:37 CrumpetFiddler: for the best
01:37 Insp1r3: yea
01:37 CrumpetFiddler: zooming out a little bit
01:37 CrumpetFiddler: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9015697
01:38 CrumpetFiddler: you can see how the pattern is repeated an awful lot
01:38 Insp1r3: i've changed this section a bit
01:38 CrumpetFiddler: as long as its not the same 2 variations, itll be fine
01:38 Insp1r3: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9015701
01:38 CrumpetFiddler: easy is typically 1.5 stars or lower
01:39 CrumpetFiddler: so this map is technicly classified as a normal diff (according to the website
01:39 CrumpetFiddler: )
01:39 Insp1r3: hrmmm
01:39 CrumpetFiddler: 00:23:076 -
01:39 CrumpetFiddler: this onwards
01:39 CrumpetFiddler: what a boring pattern, again its just the same deal as earlier
01:39 CrumpetFiddler: mix it a little
01:40 CrumpetFiddler: 00:29:076 (29076|0,29376|3) - what are the purpose of these lns?
01:40 CrumpetFiddler: theres just no beat there
01:40 Insp1r3: it was suggested in a previous mod to map the vocals to LNs
01:40 CrumpetFiddler: personally
01:41 CrumpetFiddler: dont map it :/
01:41 Insp1r3: aight
01:41 CrumpetFiddler: lemme just look at ur other diff
01:41 Insp1r3: i've changed it in the other part as well
01:41 CrumpetFiddler: ill be sure what im saying is what i thinks best
01:42 CrumpetFiddler: okay
01:42 CrumpetFiddler: that part i told you not to map
01:42 CrumpetFiddler: i dont think it should really ever be mapped
01:42 CrumpetFiddler: like, in any diff
01:43 Insp1r3: i'm keeping it there, i like it personally
01:43 CrumpetFiddler: i suggest asking one of your gds their personal opinion first
01:43 CrumpetFiddler: i just think it interupts the flowe
01:43 CrumpetFiddler: this beat
01:43 CrumpetFiddler: again represents nothing
01:43 CrumpetFiddler: 00:29:976 (29976|2) -
01:43 CrumpetFiddler: sadly with mapping, whether you like parts or not stuffs gotta conform to standards
01:44 CrumpetFiddler: but my opinions my opinion, i could be wrong
01:44 Insp1r3: brb, i gotta do something real quick
01:44 CrumpetFiddler: you used this col an awful lot
01:44 CrumpetFiddler: 00:34:776 (34776|0,35376|0,35976|0,36576|0) -
01:45 CrumpetFiddler: move this to the left one 00:44:376 (44376|3) -
01:45 CrumpetFiddler: control+j 00:44:976 (44976|2,45276|3) -
01:45 CrumpetFiddler: simply put
01:45 CrumpetFiddler: this is not easy
01:45 CrumpetFiddler: 00:54:276 (54276|1,54426|2,54576|1,54726|2,54876|0,55026|3,55176|0,55326|3,55476|1,55626|2,55776|1,55926|2,56076|0,56226|1,56376|2,56526|3) -
01:48 CrumpetFiddler: here 00:56:676 - to 01:07:776 -
01:48 CrumpetFiddler: this part
01:48 CrumpetFiddler: oh god
01:48 CrumpetFiddler: youve disregarded beats
01:49 CrumpetFiddler: to be more specific
01:49 CrumpetFiddler: you map these and only these 2, except it can be heard alot
01:50 CrumpetFiddler: 00:59:076 (59076|1,59676|3,60276|1,60876|2,61476|2,62076|0,62676|3,63276|1,63876|1,64476|3,65076|0,65676|3) - instead of continuing to map to the beat, youve mapped the (oooooh) sound
01:50 CrumpetFiddler: it feels so out of place
01:59 Insp1r3: aight, sorry about that
01:59 CrumpetFiddler: All good
01:59 Insp1r3: i've fixed what you pointed out
01:59 CrumpetFiddler: i distracted myself
02:00 CrumpetFiddler: this notes not needed 01:27:576 (87576|2) -
02:01 Insp1r3: deleted
02:01 CrumpetFiddler: i feel
02:01 CrumpetFiddler: this
02:01 CrumpetFiddler: 01:27:576 (87576|2,101076|0,101676|2,102276|0,102876|2,103476|3,104076|1,104676|0,105276|3,105876|2,106476|0,107076|2,107676|0) -
02:01 CrumpetFiddler: would play so much better
02:01 CrumpetFiddler: with singles and doubles
02:01 CrumpetFiddler: instead of lns
02:01 CrumpetFiddler: all they seem to be following is the drum anyway
02:02 CrumpetFiddler: same deal as earlier, id say dont map this at all 01:49:476 (109476|0,109776|3) -
02:02 CrumpetFiddler: i get this point in the song should be harder than the rest
02:02 CrumpetFiddler: 01:50:676 -
02:02 CrumpetFiddler: but geez
02:02 CrumpetFiddler: its easy
02:03 CrumpetFiddler: up until here
02:03 CrumpetFiddler: 02:09:876 -
02:03 CrumpetFiddler: i think you might need to find a way to tone down the difficulty a little
02:04 CrumpetFiddler: same deal as earlier
02:04 CrumpetFiddler: 02:24:276 -
02:04 CrumpetFiddler: just mix them up a little
02:04 CrumpetFiddler: you handled this section alot better this time around
02:04 CrumpetFiddler: i think its almost choice what you do with this part
02:04 CrumpetFiddler: 02:29:001 -
02:05 CrumpetFiddler: i feel its probably fine as it is
02:05 CrumpetFiddler: but i still think mapping to the primary beats would be a safer bet
02:05 CrumpetFiddler: 02:49:776 (169776|0,170076|1,170376|0,170676|1,170976|0) - avoid the cheeky trill here
02:06 CrumpetFiddler: the fact this looks similar to your hardest diff scares me 02:49:776 (169776|0,170076|1,170376|0,170676|1,170976|0) -
02:06 CrumpetFiddler: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9015903
02:07 CrumpetFiddler: you need to tone down the difficulty here, mapping everybeat is fun, but its no place for an easy map
02:07 CrumpetFiddler: 03:15:876 (195876|3,196026|2,196176|1,196326|0,196476|3,196626|2,196776|1,196926|0) -
02:07 CrumpetFiddler: replace that with an ln?
02:08 CrumpetFiddler: change this patterning up aswell 03:15:876 (195876|3,196026|2,196176|1,196326|0,196476|3,196626|2,196776|1,196926|0) -
02:08 CrumpetFiddler: woops wrong paste
02:08 CrumpetFiddler: 03:48:276 - this one
02:09 CrumpetFiddler: by all means the map is pretty good, the main problem is that the map is suppose to be "easy"

Enjoy the non-interactive IRC mod ;)
Curiossity
aloha, here with a short mod requested by cokii

1|2|3|4

Cokii's Hard
00:05:976 (5976|3,6051|0,6126|2) - these three sounds imo are louder than the ones before, maybe make these into jumptrill and just have a stream before or something

00:08:226 (8226|1) - for this empty part right here i would /almost/ recommend mapping the vocals, just because of empty but i suppose it's not that bad in a hard diff like this one...

00:11:676 (11676|0) - why wouldn't this be on the fourth column with the other notes for this sound

00:14:076 (14076|2,14151|3,14226|1,14301|2,14376|0,14451|3,14526|2,14601|1,14676|2) - this burst feels kinda one handed, maybe move some notes over to the left hand

00:18:876 (18876|1,19176|0) - not sure if jacks like this are fun or too hard in a diff like this one

00:36:951 (36951|3,37026|0) - ghosts?

00:44:376 (44376|1) - ik that this follows the layering pattern of snare=hand but in a stream like this it might be a bit too dense of a burst for hard? dunno really, so last time i'll mention it

01:02:976 (62976|1) - starting here there's a 1/3 pattern that you should probably map, what's there now feels awks

01:51:876 (111876|2,112176|3,112476|2) - probably want to watch out for jacks like these during this part

02:18:876 (138876|1,139476|0) - plenty more you could map within this space

03:00:276 (180276|1) - maybe make one of these an ln or something just cause the pause is kinda weird

03:09:726 (189726|0,189801|1) - 1/3 snapping?

03:13:826 (193826|1,193926|2,194026|3,194126|0,194226|1,194326|2,194426|1,194526|0,194626|3) - um, these snaps might be off a bit, idk

03:44:451 (224451|2) - why is this note here, i don't really hear a sound... plus you don't often map 1/4 rhythms inside this pattern during this map so why start now?

good luck!
Couil
sup, M4M req from my q

0|1|2|3

Chilly's Normal
First of all, in RC it states that Normal diffs are between 1.5 and 2.25, and yours is over 2.5*.This is usually a guideline but you might want to consider lowering the SR a bit.

Okey lets get in to the mod;

00:08:976 (8976|3,8976|1) - LN here? Since you placed one at 00:06:276 (6276|1,6276|3)
00:09:576 (9576|0,9576|1) - Here as well, but this might become a bit too awkward if you place on here.
00:14:076 (14076|3,14226|2,14376|1,14526|3) - Maybe put LNs here to indicate a change from 1/4ths to 1/8ths?
00:20:826 (20826|2,21126|2) - Since it's the normal diff, you might want to consider removing these notes, since you don't map the same sound while they're 1/8ths (00:21:276)
00:22:026 (22026|2,22326|2) - Same as above + you should probably mix up the jump-stream a bit, since it's the exact same as the previous one while not being the same sound.
00:23:001 (23001|2) - This note is probably a bit excessive for a NM diff.
00:23:226 (23226|3,23526|1,24426|1,24726|1) - Remove these, since you're not mapping them as 1/8ths i don't really see the point in having them here. + you remove the emphasis from the synth notes at 00:23:826 (23826|0,24126|2)
00:25:476 - Again, in this section you're generalizing the 1/8th sounds which sounds and look really weird while playing. I would suggest only mapping 1/2s here as they are a consistent and prominent sound.
00:28:926 (28926|3,29001|2) - If you're going to map it like this you should also add a note here, 00:28:851 for consistency, since you're only mapping 3 out of 4 "loud" drum hits.
00:29:226 (29226|3,29376|2,29526|0,29676|1,29826|3,29976|2,30126|1) - Is this really necessary for a nm diff?
00:38:826 (38826|1,38976|3,39126|2,39276|0,39426|1,39576|3,39726|2) - ^
00:54:276 (54276|3,54276|2,54426|0,54576|3,54576|1,54726|2,54876|0,54876|1,55026|2,55176|1,55176|3,55326|0,55476|2,55476|1,55626|3,55776|0,55776|2,55926|1,56076|3,56076|2,56226|1,56376|0,56376|2,56526|1,56676|3,56676|2) - What? Why is this still a jump-stream? It sounds nothing like a jump-stream. I suggest only mapping the loud hits, since it's a NM diff.
00:30:276 - 00:56:676 This whole section is way too fast for a NM diff. This looks more like a HD diff than a NM diff imo.
00:59:076 (59076|3,59076|0,59376|1,59676|2,59976|3,60276|2,60276|0,60426|1,60576|3,60726|2,60876|0,61026|1,61176|3,61326|2,61476|1,61476|0,61776|3,61926|2,62076|1,62226|0,62376|3,62526|2,62676|0,62976|1,63126|2,63276|3,63426|0,63576|1,63726|2,63876|3,63876|0,64176|1,64476|3,64776|2,65076|0,65076|3,65226|2,65376|0,65526|1,65676|2,65826|0,65976|1,66126|2,66276|0,66276|3,66426|1,66576|3,66726|2,66876|0,66876|1,67026|3,67176|0,67326|1,67476|2,67476|3,67626|0,67776|1,67926|2,68076|0,68226|1,68376|2,68526|0,68676|2,68676|1) - I have no idea what you're following here. You should probably stick to one or two sounds to not confuse people when playing it. + Generalizing beats are usually a bad idea since it'll easily become too dumpy, especially for a ranked chart. You should try to find a less dense instrument and follow that instead of generalizing a sound.
01:11:076 (71076|0,71076|1,71676|2,71976|1,72276|3,72276|2,72276|0,72576|1,72876|2,73176|1,73476|0,73776|3,73776|1,74076|2,74376|0,74376|1) - Imo you should only map the loud sounds here as well, since the other notes seems off place.
01:14:676 - 01:27:876 As previously stated, think these sections are a bit too hard for a NM diff, suggest lowering them a bit.
01:40:926 (100926|1,101076|1) - This is a very awkward jack.
01:50:676 - 02:07:476 Too hard for NM (sorry for repeating myself)
02:07:476 - This part sounds even more intense than the previous, though its mapped like it's less intense, would suggest mapping it more intense or the same intensity.
02:08:676 (128676|3,128826|2,128976|0,129126|1,129276|3,129426|2,129576|1,129726|0) - Should follow the drums better here.
02:09:876 - Why is this section a js? Too much generalization imo.
02:23:376 (143376|0,143376|1,143526|1) - wat, why is this a jack?
02:24:276 (144276|0,144276|3,144426|2,144576|1,144576|0,144726|2,144876|0,144876|3,145026|2,145176|3,145176|1,145326|0,145476|2,145476|3,145626|1,145776|2,145776|0,145926|1,146076|3,146076|2,146226|1,146376|0,146526|2,146676|3,146676|1) - Why is this a js?
02:29:076 - Think only following the drums in this section is a better way to map this imo, especially for a NM diff.
02:40:626 (160626|3,160776|2,160926|1) - Should map these as 1/8ths.
02:41:076 - 02:44:676 Imo, only mapping the loud sounds in this section is better for a NM diff.
02:44:676 - 02:57:876 too hard for NM diff.
03:00:651 (180651|1) - Should be on the other hand, for better flow.
03:03:576 (183576|3,183876|2,184626|1) - Remove these, too quiet.
03:05:076 - 03:13:476 Why is the calm section so intense? It's almost as high density as the chorus, should be more simply mapped.
03:15:126 (195126|1) - Remove this, too quiet.
03:25:476 - 03:38:676 Too hard, NM diff.

I didn't bring up everything, but you should be able to find most of the things i wanted to comment on from these points.

Cokii's Hard
First of all, the HD and NM diff is a bit too close to eachother, would suggest lowering NM/increasing HD, for a more balanced spread.

00:06:276 - Triple? Loud sound.
00:07:476 - ^
00:09:576 (9576|1,9576|3,9876|2,9876|0,10176|0,10176|3,10476|3,10476|1,10776|1,10776|0,11076|2,11076|3) - ^ I guess it might work better with LNs if you use doubles /shrug.
00:13:476 - Should be double.
00:25:476 (25476|0,25476|2,25476|1) - Why is this a triple?
00:32:526 - Should add a note here.
00:32:751 (32751|3) - Remove this to keep it consistent on one sound.
00:36:951 (36951|3,37026|0) - ^
00:37:401 (37401|1) - ^
00:39:876 - Could map the snare(?) hit that's in between the notes to make it harder than the NM diff, but i like this patterning so i wouldn't suggest it (since it removes emphasis from the unique parts).
00:55:626 (55626|2,55701|1,55776|0,55926|1) - Repeating pattern, should mix it up a bit.
01:01:176 - Should be a triple here to keep it consistent with 00:59:976 (or at least a double).
01:03:201 (63201|1,63276|3,63426|1,63501|2) - If you're mapping the "string" sound here, they're supposed to be 1/3s and not 1/4s + you missed a note here 01:03:076 if that's the case.
01:05:976 - Should be triple.
01:58:026 (118026|2) - Why is this a mini LN?
01:58:626 (118626|3) - ^
01:59:226 (119226|2,119301|3,119376|2,119526|3) - Should be on two hards to better represent a drum.
02:05:526 (125526|0,125826|0,126126|3,126426|1,126726|2,127026|2,127326|1,127926|1,128226|2,128526|0) - Why are these mini LNs?
02:09:876 - This section is a bit too under-mapped imo. This would work in a NM diff.
02:35:976 - Should be triple.
02:38:376 - ^
03:00:276 - Maybe triple to emphasize the break?

Umo's Extra
00:06:201 (6201|2,6201|3) - Ghost notes.
00:11:226 (11226|2) - Ghost note.
00:17:976 (17976|1) - ^
00:21:126 (21126|3,21276|3) - Why is this a jack?
00:22:776 (22776|2) - Ghost note?
00:25:401 (25401|3,25476|3) - This is a really dense jack, would suggest moving 00:25:401 (25401|3,25476|3) to 2
00:25:776 - Double here?
00:26:676 - Triple?
00:27:876 - ^
00:28:176 - ^
00:28:476 - Shouldn't this be mapped like the previous section? With a hand-stream. Because i think the jump-trill should start here 00:28:776
00:33:426 (33426|1) - Ghost note.
00:36:351 (36351|2) - ^
00:37:026 (37026|0) - ^
00:41:001 (41001|2) - ^ Should be one the previous pattern 00:40:626
00:47:526 (47526|3,47526|2,47676|0,47676|1) - You mapped this as singles perviously, should stay consistent. 00:46:926 (46926|1,47076|3)
00:54:501 - Missed a note here.
00:55:101 - ^
01:03:726 (63726|2) - Should be two 1/3s not just one 1/2.
01:16:101 - Missed a note.
01:19:701 - ^
01:21:126 (81126|0,81276|0,81426|3,81576|3,81726|0,81876|0,82026|3,82176|3,82326|0,82476|0) - Does these jacks really fit here? Felt weird when i played them tbh.
01:25:926 (85926|3,86226|3,86526|3,86826|3,87126|3,87426|3,87726|3) - ^
01:36:951 - Missed note
02:10:176 (130176|0,130776|0,131376|2,131976|3,132576|0,133176|0,133776|3) - Pretty sure you need to move these back by 1/4th of a note.
02:14:976 (134976|3,135576|3,136176|0,136776|0) - ^
02:17:076 (137076|2,137076|3,137676|0,137676|1) - Why are these LNs?
02:26:676 - Think you should follow the drums better in this section.
02:59:451 - Should add a LN here.
03:08:976 (188976|3,189051|2,189126|1,189201|3,189276|2,189351|1,189426|3,189501|2,189576|1,189651|3,189726|2,189801|1) - These are 1/3s.
03:29:301 - Missed note?
03:39:126 - Pretty sure this isn't a stream of note, but rather bursts. Should listen closely to the song.

Cool song, really like the bg as well, fits really well! GL ranking it!
Umo-

Couil wrote:

Umo's Extra
00:06:201 (6201|2,6201|3) - Ghost notes. fixed is selfmod
00:11:226 (11226|2) - Ghost note. removed
00:17:976 (17976|1) - ^ nope
00:21:126 (21126|3,21276|3) - Why is this a jack? fixed
00:22:776 (22776|2) - Ghost note? background noise
00:25:401 (25401|3,25476|3) - This is a really dense jack, would suggest moving 00:25:401 (25401|3,25476|3) to 2 fixed
00:25:776 - Double here? sound is not really that strong imo
00:26:676 - Triple? yup
00:27:876 - ^
00:28:176 - ^ done
00:28:476 - Shouldn't this be mapped like the previous section? With a hand-stream. Because i think the jump-trill should start here 00:28:776 I would like to leave it like this
00:33:426 (33426|1) - Ghost note. yup
00:36:351 (36351|2) - ^ yup
00:37:026 (37026|0) - ^ yup
00:41:001 (41001|2) - ^ Should be one the previous pattern 00:40:626 fixed
00:47:526 (47526|3,47526|2,47676|0,47676|1) - You mapped this as singles perviously, should stay consistent. 00:46:926 (46926|1,47076|3) fixed
00:54:501 - Missed a note here. fixed
00:55:101 - ^ yup
01:03:726 (63726|2) - Should be two 1/3s not just one 1/2. wut
01:16:101 - Missed a note. added
01:19:701 - ^ fixed
01:21:126 (81126|0,81276|0,81426|3,81576|3,81726|0,81876|0,82026|3,82176|3,82326|0,82476|0) - Does these jacks really fit here? Felt weird when i played them tbh. they are fine for me, but I will change them if more people will complain
01:25:926 (85926|3,86226|3,86526|3,86826|3,87126|3,87426|3,87726|3) - ^ ^
01:36:951 - Missed note I dont hear anything there
02:10:176 (130176|0,130776|0,131376|2,131976|3,132576|0,133176|0,133776|3) - Pretty sure you need to move these back by 1/4th of a note. I think this is fine
02:14:976 (134976|3,135576|3,136176|0,136776|0) - ^
02:17:076 (137076|2,137076|3,137676|0,137676|1) - Why are these LNs? removed 1
02:26:676 - Think you should follow the drums better in this section. this is fine
02:59:451 - Should add a LN here. no
03:08:976 (188976|3,189051|2,189126|1,189201|3,189276|2,189351|1,189426|3,189501|2,189576|1,189651|3,189726|2,189801|1) - These are 1/3s. fixed
03:29:301 - Missed note? it's okay without it
03:39:126 - Pretty sure this isn't a stream of note, but rather bursts. Should listen closely to the song. I think this is fine
weeee
https://pastebin.com/qYH9JtHb
hitsounds wip for my diff
Cokii-

Couil wrote:

Cokii's Hard
First of all, the HD and NM diff is a bit too close to eachother, would suggest lowering NM/increasing HD, for a more balanced spread.
well since the insane is 4.6* and my HD only 3.2* i'll try to increase it to about 3.4-3.6*

00:06:276 - Triple? Loud sound. i'll keep this as a double since 00:08:976 (8976|0,8976|2) - is the same sound and i want to keep this simple
00:07:476 - ^ ^
00:09:576 (9576|1,9576|3,9876|2,9876|0,10176|0,10176|3,10476|3,10476|1,10776|1,10776|0,11076|2,11076|3) - ^ I guess it might work better with LNs if you use doubles /shrug.
00:13:476 - Should be double. done
00:25:476 (25476|0,25476|2,25476|1) - Why is this a triple? i'm not really sure tbh changed
00:32:526 - Should add a note here. done
00:32:751 (32751|3) - Remove this to keep it consistent on one sound. done
00:36:951 (36951|3,37026|0) - ^ i think this sound is fine
00:37:401 (37401|1) - ^ done
00:39:876 - Could map the snare(?) hit that's in between the notes to make it harder than the NM diff, but i like this patterning so i wouldn't suggest it (since it removes emphasis from the unique parts). i'll add that if someone points it out again
00:55:626 (55626|2,55701|1,55776|0,55926|1) - Repeating pattern, should mix it up a bit. flipped 00:08:976 (8976|0,8976|2) - tho i won't really mix it up since this is mapped to the pitch
01:01:176 - Should be a triple here to keep it consistent with 00:59:976 (or at least a double). done
01:03:201 (63201|1,63276|3,63426|1,63501|2) - If you're mapping the "string" sound here, they're supposed to be 1/3s and not 1/4s + you missed a note here 01:03:076 if that's the case. i mapped it like 01:01:026 (61026|2,61101|1,61176|2) - and added a note
01:05:976 - Should be triple.
01:58:026 (118026|2) - Why is this a mini LN? to emphasize the sound
01:58:626 (118626|3) - ^ ^
01:59:226 (119226|2,119301|3,119376|2,119526|3) - Should be on two hards to better represent a drum. i'll keep it for now but i'll probably change it if someone points it out again
02:05:526 (125526|0,125826|0,126126|3,126426|1,126726|2,127026|2,127326|1,127926|1,128226|2,128526|0) - Why are these mini LNs? changed most of them
02:09:876 - This section is a bit too under-mapped imo. This would work in a NM diff. added some notes
02:35:976 - Should be triple. done
02:38:376 - ^ ^
03:00:276 - Maybe triple to emphasize the break?changed one note into an LN

Curiossity wrote:

Cokii's Hard
00:05:976 (5976|3,6051|0,6126|2) - these three sounds imo are louder than the ones before, maybe make these into jumptrill and just have a stream before or something done move the third sound to c 1 and 2 since it has the lowest pitch

00:08:226 (8226|1) - for this empty part right here i would /almost/ recommend mapping the vocals, just because of empty but i suppose it's not that bad in a hard diff like this one... well i have to make this map harder anyway so i guess i could add notes there

00:11:676 (11676|0) - why wouldn't this be on the fourth column with the other notes for this sound agreed

00:14:076 (14076|2,14151|3,14226|1,14301|2,14376|0,14451|3,14526|2,14601|1,14676|2) - this burst feels kinda one handed, maybe move some notes over to the left hand oh yeah that's really right handed changed

00:18:876 (18876|1,19176|0) - not sure if jacks like this are fun or too hard in a diff like this one hm... i'm not sure i'll change it if someone points this out again

00:36:951 (36951|3,37026|0) - ghosts? removed

00:44:376 (44376|1) - ik that this follows the layering pattern of snare=hand but in a stream like this it might be a bit too dense of a burst for hard? dunno really, so last time i'll mention it ok i'll see if someone else points out the samething

01:02:976 (62976|1) - starting here there's a 1/3 pattern that you should probably map, what's there now feels awks done

01:51:876 (111876|2,112176|3,112476|2) - probably want to watch out for jacks like these during this part re-patterned

02:18:876 (138876|1,139476|0) - plenty more you could map within this space done

03:00:276 (180276|1) - maybe make one of these an ln or something just cause the pause is kinda weird changed one of the notes into an LN till 03:01:476 -

03:09:726 (189726|0,189801|1) - 1/3 snapping? hm i'm no sure since it's faster than 03:09:376 (189376|2,189476|1,189576|2) -

03:13:826 (193826|1,193926|2,194026|3,194126|0,194226|1,194326|2,194426|1,194526|0,194626|3) - um, these snaps might be off a bit, idk yeah i think it was off changed the snap

03:44:451 (224451|2) - why is this note here, i don't really hear a sound... plus you don't often map 1/4 rhythms inside this pattern during this map so why start now? i mapped it like that because the LN had a pitch change tho you are probably right and i should just not use a 1/4 note here
thanks a lot for the mods :D

Topic Starter
RoroTheDeer

Mage wrote:

Yo

[General]
Increase Hard diff's sr to at least 3.5*, because there is too big gap between "Hard" diff and "Put Your.." diff
Only the hardest difficulty may use an appropriate custom difficulty name, so rename "Put.." to Insane or Maximum or idk

[Put your hands up!]
00:05:976 - there is not the same sound as 00:05:676 - , so repattern this. For example 00:05:976 - https://puu.sh/xroxC/a655ead8aa.png Changed
00:09:876 - should be double 00:09:576 (9576|0) - finish this LN 00:09:801 - here to make double Changed
00:11:076 - make triple Changed
00:20:676 - 00:20:976 - 00:21:276 - 00:21:876 - why here are not triples, but 00:22:176 - 00:22:476 - here are triples :? Changed the triples to doubles
00:28:476 - https://puu.sh/xroNy/8241c3ef8d.png more appropriate to music Changed to suit map style
00:29:676 - no, make singe, i see no reason for double This was done to increase the tension for the song, keeping it
00:30:576 - 00:31:176 - 00:31:776 - and etc. - etter to make triples for these sounds and doubles for 00:30:876 - 00:31:476 - 00:32:076 - and etc. Repatterned
00:31:326 - 00:31:626 - 00:32:226 - 00:32:526 - why you put here doubles? i don't understand, e x p l a i n Changed to singles (also calm down with the Dalek impression ;)
00:41:076 (41076|2,41076|3,41376|2,41376|3,41676|3,41676|2,41976|3,41976|2,42276|2,42276|3,42576|2,42576|3,42876|3,42876|2) - OwO What's this? repattern please Repatterned, I didn't even notice lol
00:47:076 - 00:47:376 - 00:47:676 - 00:47:976 - make doubles, will be not so hard (trust me) Changed the second and third ones to doubles, the others i'm keeping as singles
00:51:576 - make here miniLN too - https://puu.sh/xrpoX/c66a378939.png Changed
00:59:676 - 01:00:276 - 01:00:876 - 01:01:476 - 01:02:076 - 01:03:276 - 01:03:876 - 01:04:476 - 01:05:076 - 01:05:676 - 01:06:276 - 01:06:876 - 01:08:676 - should be doubles and 00:59:976 - 01:01:176 - 01:02:376 - 01:04:776 - 01:05:976 - 01:07:176 - 100% triples Repatterned
01:10:476 - make smth like https://puu.sh/xrq28/bac6dff090.png more appropriate to music Changed to suit map style
01:27:876 - should be double Fixed
01:29:076 (89076|1) - finish this LN 01:29:526 - here and 01:29:601 (89601|3) - moe to 01:29:526
01:29:976 (89976|1) - extend this LN to 01:30:276 - Changed
01:32:676 - make triple Changed
01:48:276 - why not just make 12 34 chord trill Changed
01:50:076 - 01:50:376 - singles pls Keeping it, same reason as before
02:07:476 - make smth like https://puu.sh/xrpTB/9d87f0d501.png - or without LNs Changed to a jumpstream
02:36:126 - 02:36:576 - doubles for vocal? :thinking: Changed to singles
02:36:876 - make double please Changed
02:40:476 - again, make smth like https://puu.sh/xrq28/bac6dff090.png more appropriate to music Yep
03:22:476 - 03:22:776 - 03:23:676 - and etc. - why do you make doubles for vocal D: Changed to singles for when only vocals are audible
Thanks for the mod and sorry for the late reply, life's been busy atm! :D
Chilly-

Couil wrote:

Chilly's Normal
First of all, in RC it states that Normal diffs are between 1.5 and 2.25, and yours is over 2.5*.This is usually a guideline but you might want to consider lowering the SR a bit.

Okey lets get in to the mod;

00:08:976 (8976|3,8976|1) - LN here? Since you placed one at 00:06:276 (6276|1,6276|3)
00:09:576 (9576|0,9576|1) - Here as well, but this might become a bit too awkward if you place on here.
00:14:076 (14076|3,14226|2,14376|1,14526|3) - Maybe put LNs here to indicate a change from 1/4ths to 1/8ths?
00:20:826 (20826|2,21126|2) - Since it's the normal diff, you might want to consider removing these notes, since you don't map the same sound while they're 1/8ths (00:21:276)
00:22:026 (22026|2,22326|2) - Same as above + you should probably mix up the jump-stream a bit, since it's the exact same as the previous one while not being the same sound.
00:23:001 (23001|2) - This note is probably a bit excessive for a NM diff.
00:23:226 (23226|3,23526|1,24426|1,24726|1) - Remove these, since you're not mapping them as 1/8ths i don't really see the point in having them here. + you remove the emphasis from the synth notes at 00:23:826 (23826|0,24126|2)
00:25:476 - Again, in this section you're generalizing the 1/8th sounds which sounds and look really weird while playing. I would suggest only mapping 1/2s here as they are a consistent and prominent sound.
00:28:926 (28926|3,29001|2) - If you're going to map it like this you should also add a note here, 00:28:851 for consistency, since you're only mapping 3 out of 4 "loud" drum hits.
00:29:226 (29226|3,29376|2,29526|0,29676|1,29826|3,29976|2,30126|1) - Is this really necessary for a nm diff?
00:38:826 (38826|1,38976|3,39126|2,39276|0,39426|1,39576|3,39726|2) - ^
00:54:276 (54276|3,54276|2,54426|0,54576|3,54576|1,54726|2,54876|0,54876|1,55026|2,55176|1,55176|3,55326|0,55476|2,55476|1,55626|3,55776|0,55776|2,55926|1,56076|3,56076|2,56226|1,56376|0,56376|2,56526|1,56676|3,56676|2) - What? Why is this still a jump-stream? It sounds nothing like a jump-stream. I suggest only mapping the loud hits, since it's a NM diff.
00:30:276 - 00:56:676 This whole section is way too fast for a NM diff. This looks more like a HD diff than a NM diff imo.
00:59:076 (59076|3,59076|0,59376|1,59676|2,59976|3,60276|2,60276|0,60426|1,60576|3,60726|2,60876|0,61026|1,61176|3,61326|2,61476|1,61476|0,61776|3,61926|2,62076|1,62226|0,62376|3,62526|2,62676|0,62976|1,63126|2,63276|3,63426|0,63576|1,63726|2,63876|3,63876|0,64176|1,64476|3,64776|2,65076|0,65076|3,65226|2,65376|0,65526|1,65676|2,65826|0,65976|1,66126|2,66276|0,66276|3,66426|1,66576|3,66726|2,66876|0,66876|1,67026|3,67176|0,67326|1,67476|2,67476|3,67626|0,67776|1,67926|2,68076|0,68226|1,68376|2,68526|0,68676|2,68676|1) - I have no idea what you're following here. You should probably stick to one or two sounds to not confuse people when playing it. + Generalizing beats are usually a bad idea since it'll easily become too dumpy, especially for a ranked chart. You should try to find a less dense instrument and follow that instead of generalizing a sound.
01:11:076 (71076|0,71076|1,71676|2,71976|1,72276|3,72276|2,72276|0,72576|1,72876|2,73176|1,73476|0,73776|3,73776|1,74076|2,74376|0,74376|1) - Imo you should only map the loud sounds here as well, since the other notes seems off place.
01:14:676 - 01:27:876 As previously stated, think these sections are a bit too hard for a NM diff, suggest lowering them a bit.
01:40:926 (100926|1,101076|1) - This is a very awkward jack.
01:50:676 - 02:07:476 Too hard for NM (sorry for repeating myself)
02:07:476 - This part sounds even more intense than the previous, though its mapped like it's less intense, would suggest mapping it more intense or the same intensity.
02:08:676 (128676|3,128826|2,128976|0,129126|1,129276|3,129426|2,129576|1,129726|0) - Should follow the drums better here.
02:09:876 - Why is this section a js? Too much generalization imo.
02:23:376 (143376|0,143376|1,143526|1) - wat, why is this a jack?
02:24:276 (144276|0,144276|3,144426|2,144576|1,144576|0,144726|2,144876|0,144876|3,145026|2,145176|3,145176|1,145326|0,145476|2,145476|3,145626|1,145776|2,145776|0,145926|1,146076|3,146076|2,146226|1,146376|0,146526|2,146676|3,146676|1) - Why is this a js?
02:29:076 - Think only following the drums in this section is a better way to map this imo, especially for a NM diff.
02:40:626 (160626|3,160776|2,160926|1) - Should map these as 1/8ths.
02:41:076 - 02:44:676 Imo, only mapping the loud sounds in this section is better for a NM diff.
02:44:676 - 02:57:876 too hard for NM diff.
03:00:651 (180651|1) - Should be on the other hand, for better flow.
03:03:576 (183576|3,183876|2,184626|1) - Remove these, too quiet.
03:05:076 - 03:13:476 Why is the calm section so intense? It's almost as high density as the chorus, should be more simply mapped.
03:15:126 (195126|1) - Remove this, too quiet.
03:25:476 - 03:38:676 Too hard, NM diff.

I didn't bring up everything, but you should be able to find most of the things i wanted to comment on from these points.
Thanks for the mod!
CommandoBlack
irc

SPOILER
16:21 Cokiiplay: hey do you have time to mod a map?
16:21 CommandoBlack: Sure. It'll be irc mod tho
16:21 Cokiiplay: ok :D
16:21 *Cokiiplay is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1404727 Camellia - Mazare Party (feat. kradness, Nanahira and yukacco)]
16:22 *CommandoBlack is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1404727 Camellia - Mazare Party (feat. kradness, Nanahira and yukacco) [Cokii's Hard]]
16:22 CommandoBlack: This one?
16:22 Cokiiplay: yes
16:27 CommandoBlack: I only have 1 spot
16:27 Cokiiplay: :o
16:27 Cokiiplay: where?
16:28 CommandoBlack: 01:41:076 - This build up needs some work
16:28 CommandoBlack: 01:45:876 - Should be different than the patterns before it
16:28 CommandoBlack: Maybe add noted on the red lines
16:29 CommandoBlack: & make the notes on the blue ones a single note
16:29 CommandoBlack: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9061837
16:29 CommandoBlack: Something like that
16:29 Cokiiplay: hm ok i could do that tho i think i should make this 01:45:876 (105876|0,105876|1,105876|0) - a triple
16:31 CommandoBlack: 01:43:476 (103476|3,103476|2,103776|0,103776|3) - There is also missing notes on the blue lines after these
16:31 Cokiiplay: yeah ture changed
16:32 CommandoBlack: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9061876
16:33 CommandoBlack: yo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9061880
16:33 CommandoBlack: Instead of triples?
16:34 Cokiiplay: hm idk if thats too hard or not it looks like this rn https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9061892
16:34 CommandoBlack: 02:19:026 - can use a note
16:34 Cokiiplay: added
16:36 CommandoBlack: 02:45:726 - maybe add a note here
16:36 CommandoBlack: 02:50:901 (170901|0) - You can remove this one
16:37 Cokiiplay: hm i've only added notes there for drums so i'm not sure if i should add this
16:37 CommandoBlack: I was going by the voice for that one
16:38 Cokiiplay: 02:50:901 (170901|0) - removed
16:38 Cokiiplay: well i guess i'll add it for now
16:38 CommandoBlack: ok
16:39 CommandoBlack: 03:26:526 - dont forget this one either then
16:39 Cokiiplay: yeah added
16:39 Cokiiplay: i should add a note here as well 03:25:926 (205926|2) -
16:39 CommandoBlack: The triple double triple double pattern gets a little repetitive as well... Imma see if there is places where we could minimize those
16:41 CommandoBlack: 00:39:876 - There is some places where you can map the voice... I don't know if you wanted to avoid them
16:41 Cokiiplay: yeah i wanted to keep it quite simple
16:41 CommandoBlack: ok
16:42 CommandoBlack: 01:03:576 - is not is where the 1/3 should end
16:42 CommandoBlack: it continues 2 notes on
16:42 Cokiiplay: ok
16:43 CommandoBlack: Or you can put 1 note on the red line. Both work
16:43 Cokiiplay: 01:08:376 (68376|2) - i'll do the same thing here as well
16:45 Cokiiplay: i think i should ctrl + H this 00:09:576 (9576|1,9576|3,9876|2,9876|0,10026|3,10176|0,10176|1,10326|3,10476|1,10476|2,10626|3,10776|1,10776|0,11076|2,11076|3,11376|3) -
16:45 CommandoBlack: 02:55:476 - this section could use notes on the red lines & you can remove the triples
16:46 Cokiiplay: ok
16:46 CommandoBlack: 03:36:276 - here as well
16:47 Cokiiplay: done
16:47 CommandoBlack: 01:25:467 - actually is the same as those sections...
16:48 CommandoBlack: Maybe do whats there instead...
16:48 Cokiiplay: yeah true
16:50 CommandoBlack: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9062026
16:50 CommandoBlack: This instead. Go by the voice here
16:51 CommandoBlack: Once the next section uses some voice mapping
16:51 Cokiiplay: ok
16:52 CommandoBlack: I think thats all i got
16:52 Cokiiplay: :o thx for the mod
Cokii-

thanks for the mod :D
Umo-
lil update
https://pastebin.com/YKg9UsyF
Wadu
Umo's Extra
I suggest removing almost all SVs, they are not comfortable to play, and I think more proper SVs are needed.
Log:
15:30 Insp1r3: heyo
15:30 Insp1r3: quick q
15:30 CHARGE: ye
15:30 Insp1r3: do you mod?
15:31 CHARGE: maybe
15:31 Insp1r3: depending on map i suppose?
15:31 CHARGE: true
15:31 CHARGE: and length etc
15:31 CHARGE: send
15:31 CHARGE: ill take a look
15:31 Insp1r3: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/650415
15:32 CHARGE: diff
15:32 Insp1r3: any
15:32 CHARGE: \/np[
15:32 *CHARGE is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1404728 Camellia - Mazare Party (feat. kradness, Nanahira and yukacco) [Umo's Extra]] <osu!mania> |4K|
15:36 CHARGE: ok so
15:36 CHARGE: first
15:36 CHARGE: SVs are cancer
15:36 CHARGE: no offense
15:36 Insp1r3: nice run
15:36 CHARGE: really not comfy to play
15:37 CHARGE: and
15:37 Insp1r3: this is umo's diff, so it would be better to talk to him
15:37 CHARGE: uhh
15:37 CHARGE: ill write to you
15:37 CHARGE: cuz i mainly map hard diffs
15:37 CHARGE: 00:13:476 - triples imo
15:37 Insp1r3: maybe on forums?
15:37 Insp1r3: forums or irc with him would be better
15:37 CHARGE: uhh maybe yes ill post after ill save log
15:37 CHARGE: ok so
15:37 CHARGE: 00:16:026 - missing note imo
15:37 CHARGE: 00:16:326 - etc
15:37 CHARGE: 00:19:326 - 3
15:38 CHARGE: 00:19:476 (19476|2) - to 2
15:38 CHARGE: cuz 00:19:176 - and 00:19:476 - are different sounds
15:38 CHARGE: 00:20:826 - doubles
15:38 CHARGE: 00:21:126 - same..
15:38 CHARGE: 00:29:826 - missing note
15:38 CHARGE: 00:30:126 - same
15:38 CHARGE: 00:30:576 - why is this a double
15:38 CHARGE: 00:31:476 - and this a triple
15:39 CHARGE: seems a bit random
15:39 CHARGE: i would go for
15:39 CHARGE: 00:30:576 - triple
15:39 CHARGE: 00:30:876 - double
15:39 CHARGE: 00:31:176 - triple
15:39 CHARGE: etc...
15:39 CHARGE: 00:32:301 - single
15:39 CHARGE: 00:32:376 - triple
15:39 CHARGE: 00:35:226 (35226|1,35301|3) - maybe jack em
15:39 CHARGE: 00:35:526 (35526|1,35601|3) - same
15:39 CHARGE: 00:38:826 - where is the SV here??
15:40 CHARGE: 00:39:276 (39276|0,39426|1,39576|2) - should be on same col imo
15:40 CHARGE: 02:47:976 - triple
15:40 CHARGE: 02:48:276 - double
15:40 CHARGE: etc... he confused
15:40 CHARGE: he did it the other way around
15:41 CHARGE: 01:25:476 - triple for finish
15:41 CHARGE: 01:18:426 - 01:18:726 - doubles for the sound
15:41 CHARGE: 01:19:326 - too
15:41 CHARGE: 01:25:026 (85026|1,85326|1) - same
15:42 CHARGE: 01:26:901 - missing note
15:42 CHARGE: 01:27:501 - same
15:42 CHARGE: 01:35:676 (95676|1,95751|0,95826|3,95901|1) - trill em
15:42 CHARGE: 01:36:951 - missing note & plz trill
15:43 CHARGE: 01:54:501 - missing note
15:43 CHARGE: 01:54:951 - same
15:43 CHARGE: 01:55:101 - same
15:44 CHARGE: 02:09:276 (129276|0,129426|3,129576|0,129726|3) - maybe same col and SV
15:44 CHARGE: 02:19:476 - maybe long note for the sound
15:44 CHARGE: 02:21:876 - here too
15:45 CHARGE: 02:25:626 - double
15:45 CHARGE: 02:25:776 -
15:45 CHARGE: 02:26:226 - ..
15:45 CHARGE: also double
15:45 CHARGE: 02:31:101 - single
15:45 CHARGE: 03:05:076 - why triple in such a calm part
15:45 CHARGE: applies to all this part
15:46 CHARGE: 03:13:776 - why does it trill? sounds are different
15:46 CHARGE: 03:36:276 - triple
15:46 CHARGE: 03:45:876 - why nothing here, bcz here u did add notes: 00:20:676 -
15:47 CHARGE: 03:50:976 - perhaps add the 1/3 notes
15:47 CHARGE: thats it i think, song is pretty generic and repetitive so some notes may apply to more parts of the map
Umo-
i Did NoT aPpRovE tHesE cHanGes DddddDDDDDddddDD;

edit: nvm they are not applied
error_exe777
okay here with fixed SVs in umo's diff

sv
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no kudosu since ive modded this map already

call me back if umo's diff has any mods on SVs
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