liuzicheng4732 wrote:

Здравствыйте. NM from my queue hehe you try russian it`s fine

[Sakura Blossom]
I see that your map is mainly based on the background beat but not the melody. Although I personally don't prefer this, I don't have reason to ask you to change as well. But be aware that this may decreace the variety of beatmap streams, and affect its interest as well.

Since the main beat of this song is 1/2 beat, I suggest you to change the slider tick rate to 2. - done, it`s really better

00:06:232 (4) - I suggest you push this slider back by 1/2 beat, like the pattern of 00:10:827 (6) - okay
00:07:854 - I think it's better to add a fruit here, like 00:08:935 (3) - okay
00:20:286 - I suggest you cancel the beat here - okay
00:37:584 (4,5) - This gap is too big. Either you decrease the distance (preferred) or make it a hyper - okay
00:41:908 (1,2,3) - It's okay to make a hyper between 2&3, but I think their gap is too big and it's hard and tiring to read them. You can decrease 1/3 the distance and still keep it a hyper. Since this part of song is not stressd, I think it's reasonable not to make them too harsh - okay
00:43:529 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
00:44:070 (4,5,6) - ^ ^
00:45:692 (3,4,5) - ^, but since it's a strong beat so you can keep it ^
00:47:313 (3,4,1) - I think it's better to hyper 4&1 instead of 3&4 - okay
00:54:881 (3,4) - Please arrange a move between them - okay
01:17:854 (5,1) - Maybe make a hyper? - okay
01:24:340 (5,1) - ^ ^
01:47:313 (1,2) - This is anti-stream and personally I think it's not smooth. I'd prefer to ctrl+g on 2 - okay
01:51:638 (3,4) - This gap might be a edge dash. I think it's better to avoid them in this gentle song, so please decrease their gap -okay
01:55:962 (1,2) - same as 01:47:313 (1,2) - okay
01:58:124 (1,2) - ^ ^
02:01:367 (1,2) - ^ ^
02:03:529 - Maybe add a fruit here? idk - Added
02:07:043 (3) - I'd prefer to ctrl+g - okay
02:09:205 (5,1) - Edge dash so please decrease their gap - okay
02:11:367 (1,2) - To work well with the weak beat of the song, I suggest you replace each of them by a circle - okay
02:25:151 (2,1) - A hyper here would be better than the hyper at 02:25:421 (1,1) - okay
02:27:313 (1,2) - Maybe ctrl+g? - Good, okay
02:29:475 (4,5) - Maybe hyper. - okay
02:34:881 (4,5,6) - There should be more movements here. I made the following change: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8913115 (Make it move consecutively between left and right) - okay
02:40:286 (5,1) - Hyper? - okay
02:42:178 (3,4) - Hyper? or not - I think here not need hyper
02:46:773 (4,1) - Hyper. - okay
03:06:232 (6) - I think it's better to split the slider and make a hyper in between - I not understand what are you mean
03:08:935 (2,3,4) - If you want to keep the hyper behind 4, then probably it's better to cancel the hyper between 3&4 - okay
03:09:475 (1,2) - ctrl+g - okay
03:10:286 (3) - I think it's better to place it at x:224 - okay
03:10:827 (1,2) - Please make the gap be the same as between 03:10:962 (2,3,4) - okay
03:11:908 (3,1,2,3) - This stream is not smooth! I don't think it's good to move left between 3&1 and then suddenly change to right between 1&2. How about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8913173 - okay
03:17:178 (4,5) - Hyper? - okay
03:18:124 (1) - Enlong this slider by 1/2 beat - okay
03:19:205 - How about cancelling the fruit here? - okay
03:21:097 (3,1) - Hyper? - okay
03:29:746 (6,1) - Hyper? - okay
03:31:232 (2) - Maybe better to place it at x:140 - okay
03:32:313 - Please add a fruit - okay
03:32:448 (3) - Please shorten this slider by 1/4 beat to match the lyrics - okay
03:33:529 (1,2) - Maybe hyper because you hypered 03:34:070 (2,1) - okay
03:45:421 (3,4,1) - The pattern at 03:42:719 (1,2,3) - is great, so maybe you should copy here also - okay
04:00:286 (3,1,2,3) - ^ - slider end at white tick
04:04:611 (1) - Hyper the two fruits please - okay
04:08:665 (2,3) - Hyper. - okay
04:15:421 (5,6) - Hyper. - okay
04:26:232 (1) - Hyper the two fruits. - okay
04:34:881 (1) - ^ ^
04:41:367 (6,7) - Hyper! - okay

I really love this song! GL with your map!
[ClariS最高！]

liuzicheng4732 wrote:

I see you've split the slider into two circles at 03:06:232 (6,7), and that is indeed what I meant. And I was just saying that it might be better to further make a hyperdash between them.

I'm really looking forward to seeing this map gaining more progress. Keep it on!

Yasaija 714 wrote:

I do not know anything about CTB but do good luck

RoseusJaeger wrote:

M4M from queue

General

Flow wise, the map's low slider velocity make sliders seems really slow and probably makes hypers harder to trigger. I'd advise using SV 2.00 at least so the flow will fix itself. This will require readjusting your patterns though. - I think it`s needn`t, and it`s hard for fix, but thanks for idea, maybe I use it in future.

Rhythmically, you missed a lot of beats and sounds that would have made more sense:

00:01:097 (3) - Why didn't you follow the ½ sounds in the middle of this slider? - Fix

00:06:773 – Missed vocal line you could have mapped. - Fix

00:07:854 - ^ Same here - Fix

00:21:097 to 00:23:259 – There's ½ rhythms all through here until 00:23:259 – because then a 1/8th streams is in the background. -
Fix

00:25:692 – There's a ¼ rhythm here. - Fix

00:34:340 – Rhythm missed here. - Fix

00:34:340 - ^ - Fix

00:40:016 – Heavy rhythm missed here. - Fix


Once this gets fixed, you can call me back for a recheck on your patterns. Good luck

Nelly wrote:

• Sakura Blossom

1. 00:08:124 (4) - Из-за (5) ноты, то ты должен сделать кончик слайдера покороче чем твой текущий. Подвинь этот кончик, что красным выделено на x:432. - Исправил
2. 00:11:367 (6) - Не уж то тебе кажется, что этот слайдер во время геймплея выглядит странным? Так как ты его не перевернул на -90 градусов. Вообщем, поверни это на -90 градусов, положи его на x:100 и сделай этот слайдер вот таким. - Исправил
3. 00:25:151 (4,5) - Не кажется тебе этот паттерн трудным для новичкам? Вот эти углы, которые ты сделал мне не понравились. Сделай их вот таким. Самый козырь в том, что ты также их сделал на протяжении всей карты, что приносит неудобства при спейсинге. Пожалуйста обрати внимания на: 00:28:394 (5,6,7) - 00:33:800 (1,2) - 00:41:908 (1,2,3) - 00:43:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:45:692 (3,4,5) - 01:14:340 (2,3,4) - 01:48:394 (1,2,3) - 01:50:557 (1,2,3) ... Вообщем ты понял. Те паттерны, которые упомянул ты должен хотя бы укоротить спейсинг. Это реально приносит дискомфорт новичкам. - Но это и не карта для новичков, карта была сделана как рейн, а рейны новички играть не будут, как по мне это не такой уж и сложный паттерн тем более для рейна.
4. 01:10:827 (1,2) - Спейсинг большой. Подвинь это на x:448 - Ок
5. 01:32:178 (2) - Спейсинг. x:80 - Ок
6. 01:57:584 (1,2) - Пиксель джамп. Чистый анранк. Не паникуй, вот как ты это можешь исправить. (2) ноту на x:336, потом выдели и (1), и (2), и подвинь их на x:272 - Исправил
7. 02:25:421 (1,1) - 02:25:421 (1) - x:96, a 02:26:232 (1) - x:416. Спейсинг, ага. - Исправил
8. 02:30:827 (7) - Плохо сказывается этот слайдер. Практически нету движения, да и сам слайдер не совпадает с музыкой. Сделай его вот таким. - - Исправил
9. 02:35:692 (7) - Спейсинг. x:112 - - Исправил
10. 03:08:665 до 03:16:232 - Кривой стрим и нужно подправить. Я сделал этот стрим ради тебя, чтобы ты не мучился в процессе ранкинге:
    Код

    77,264,188665,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    180,260,188935,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,272,189070,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    336,256,189205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    128,160,189475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    208,176,189610,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    288,160,189745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    395,270,190016,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    426,237,190151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    224,206,190286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    183,205,190421,2,0,L|235:142,1,66.4999982242585
    444,130,190827,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    416,128,190962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    352,112,191097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    288,112,191232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    74,129,191367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    261,256,191638,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    309,258,191773,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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    412,228,192043,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    393,182,192178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    350,155,192313,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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    384,352,193259,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    333,354,193394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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    433,263,194475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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    288,208,194746,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    352,144,194881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    384,64,195016,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    142,267,195151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    77,266,195286,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    113,267,195421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    154,267,195557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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    380,269,195827,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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    463,269,196097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    247,271,196232,1,0,0:0:0:0:

    - Исправил
11. 03:21:638 (1) - x:112 - Исправил
12. 03:23:529 (5) - x:128 - Исправил
13. 03:52:448 (2,3) - Пиксель джамп. Чистый анранк. Подвинь это на x:16 - Исправил

На этом всё. Дальше мне всё устраивает. В целом, неплохая карта, она, разумеется может попасть в ранк, если не одно но, кривой спейсинг и комбо отталкивает от этого процесса. Если честно, то я рад твоим процессом в маппинге. А отказывался моддить afraid... лишь потому, что на ранк вы, gaaraati и OneLoveOneLife не прорвётесь в ранк из-за этим причин, что я сказал на этом моде. Ладно, не буду дальше писать. Надеюсь ты понял меня. Мапай больше для отличных результатов, а играть больше даст какие-то новые паттерны для тебя и ты их можешь реализовать в процессе стиля маппинга. Желаю удачи!

Sanyi wrote:

Feel free to deny kudosu when you are unsatisfied with this mod.

Mod requested via ingame pm a few days ago. I don't really understand your mapping concept (dash/hyperdash usage), so i will try to point out with some examples the inconsistencies of your map (you can go through your map then and search for similar stuff). I think it would be also helpful to have a ingame chat about the map so feel free to catch me ingame.

General

1. Your beatmap file is pretty big (>10MB, which means more than the guideline suggests) and you've got 2 unused background images in the beatmap file.
   If you don't wanna delete the 2 unused background images entirely I would suggest you two put an additional download link in the map description instead of putting them in the beatmap file. Then you've got no unused files in your beatmap file and the size of the beatmap file will be decreased. - Delete
2. Your soft-hitnormal.wav hitsound has a delay of over 5ms whih is unrankable (unless there is a special purpose for it). You need to change the hitsound. Unfortunately I don't know much about hitsounding so I won't provide you here with a good replacement. Maybe you can take a look into (recently) ranked mapsets to find a good alternative for you. - I will try it but I was take it sound from ranked map
3. Combo colours: As it is right now, Combo colours 1-2-3 and 4-5 are so similar to each other that they are hard to separate from each other. i suggest you make it pink-green-pink-green to avoid that problem (and please use an even number of colours, that means four or six) - Okay

The examples I promised

1. 00:05:421 (2,3) - you made this one a jump but 00:07:854 (3,4) - , 00:10:016 (2,3) - and 00:12:178 (7,1) - not, even though it would fit these one as well. - Okay
2. 00:10:827 (5,6) - Why did you make a hyperdash here? I can't hear anything in the music that deserves a hyperdash. - start of lyrics and strong sound
3. 00:25:151 (4,5) - , 00:27:314 (1,2,3) - you used that pretty often but pretty inconsistent too. In the first example you mapped the jump from the first fruit to the second. In the second example you mapped the jump from the second fruit to the third. The jump distance itself is also inconsistent: In the first example it is 1,51x and in the second one 1,90x. I suggest you to make it more consistent. - Different types of patterns and the different distances
4. In the part from 00:41:638 (6) - to 01:11:638 (2) - : How did you decide when to put a walkable pattern, when a dash and when a hyperdash? I can't find a concept here. - Lyrics and sounds

Sorry that the mod ends here for now, but I've got terrible neck pain at the moment. I will gladly talk with you ingame about your map when I am feeling better and expanding this mod to a proper mod once this map has a clear concept for me.

JBHyperion wrote:

Requested in my Interesting Queue

General

1. A lot of your inherited (green) timing points are unsnapped. I don't think it causes an issue here since they are quite minor (and early, rather than late), but something to be aware of for future maps to avoid unintended hitsounding conflicts - Okay
2. soft-sliderslide.wav can be deleted to save file space as sliderslide hitsounds have no function in osu!catch - Oh, thanks
3. Hitsounding is extremely basic and does not emphasise the subtle changes in the song well. Even in the first section you can hear clap sounds on 00:05:962 - 00:08:124 -00:10:286 - 00:12:448 - etc. which were ignored. Notes like 00:22:178 - 00:24:340 - 00:32:989 - etc. don't have any kind of finish hitsound to emphasise the cymbal, and even the main melody has no drum, cymbal, vocal or any kind of emphasis besides the hitnormal, which is really bland and uninteresting. Please add some hitsounds, at the very least starting with whistles on the first and third beats and claps on the second and fourth - if you'd like more guidance, there's a helpful guide here - t/306177 - Yet I not did hitsounds, but soon i make him
4. Your slidershapes are very repetitive, almost all being either near-vertical or U-shaped, which gets very repetitive and makes different sections look and play very similarly. This gets really boring after 5 minutes, so for added variety, try using some C- or L-shaped sliders as well which will make the map much more interesting to play. - I try
5. Having played the map I will treat the [Sakura Blossom] difficulty as being at a [Rain] level. - Yes, it`s rain

Sakura Blossom

1. 00:01:908 (5) - I don't hear any sound on the repeat here, this should be a 1/2 slider instead - Oh yes, my fault
2. 00:04:340 (3,1) - Really strong vocal sound, not sure why you didn't put a jump here. This applies throughout the section since your patterning is very inconsistent. Why no emphasis on 00:07:043 (2) - (which should have the NC instead of 00:06:773 (1) - btw) - 00:09:205 (1) - either? Notes like 00:08:935 (5) - have a dash despite being noticeably weaker than those mentioned before, so this feels very strange to play - Okay
3. 00:10:827 (5,6) - Vocal here isn't strong enough to support a hyper when stronger sounds prior to this didn't even have a dash - Done
4. 00:23:800 (1) - Really could do with splitting this into 1/2 slider and circle, the downbeat sound is so strong (could easily support a hyper) and you gave it no emphasis at all ): - Done
5. 00:25:962 (1,2) - I don't understand your NC usage in this section at all... What are you trying to emphasise? They just seem randomly and inconsistently placed to me. One NC each downbeat (long white tick) would fit much better - Done
6. 00:35:962 (1,2,3) - Awkward antiflow pattern involving dash into small movement in the opposite direction. Either place (3) on the right hand side of (2), or tilt (2) to the left to improve flow - Done
7. 00:41:367 (5,6) - Hyperdash and NC would better emphasise the downbeat cymbal sound and the introduction of the vocal rhythm - Done
8. 00:42:448 (4,5) - Objects are too close together, creates a strange break in flow. Try separating them - Done
9. 00:43:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The music is so calm here, strong antiflowing 1/4 dashes are really excessive imo. They're bigger than the ones you used previously at 00:32:719 (1,2,3) - etc. despite the music being much calmer. Walking or small dash patterns would fit better here - Done
10. 00:49:205 (5,1) - Unexpected hyper given the low strength of the sound here and the fact you didn't use any prior to this in the calm vocal section - fix
11. 00:59:475 (3) - Same as 00:23:800 (1) - this tail sound deserves some dash emphasis for the strong vocal - Done
12. 01:00:286 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Great chance to use some rhythm variation for the 1/4+3/4 vocals and make the map more interesting. Example: https://puu.sh/xnXOE/4de83fe3e5.jpg - Thanks for good pattern!
13. 01:04:205 - Adding a note here for the vocal triplet would add more variety also - Done
14. 01:07:584 (1,2,3,4,5) - Some variation in direction would make this flow better, currently you just tap your way from one side to the other which is weird to play and look at - Done
15. 01:14:070 (1,2,3,4) - Try and avoid such a strong antiflow pattern after the previous hypers, especially considering the song is so calm. Ctrl+H 01:14:340 (2,3,4) - and move to the right would play more smoothly leading into the kiai - Done
16. 01:17:854 (5,6) - Missing hyper going by your patterning later on in the kiai - Done
17. 01:20:016 (1,2) - 01:22:719 (7,1) - more misplaced NCs for vocal emphasis - Done
18. 01:26:773 (4) - Poor emphasis for this strong vocal sound by leaving it as a sliderend, try splitting into two circles and making a jump - Done
19. 01:27:854 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:07:584 (1,2,3,4,5) - Done
20. 01:55:016 (2,3) - Really strong jump compared to the previous 01:48:529 (2,3) - 01:50:692 (2,3) - is easy to miss here - Done
21. 02:03:529 (4,1) - Could add a jump here for cymbal emphasis at the start of the new section - Done
22. 02:30:827 (7,1) - Misplaced hyper and NC, the strong sound you want to be emphasising is 02:31:908 (2) - instead so put the NC and jump there - Done
23. 02:39:340 - 02:41:502 - 02:47:989 - 02:51:232 - etc. - Notes could be added here for the vocal triplets to add more variety, the constant 1/2 usage gets very boring - Done
24. 02:42:448 (4,1) - Lacking jump emphasis for the strong sound, could add a jump - Done
25. 02:52:989 (4,1) - ^ As above, could use a hyper here for emphasis of the kiai midpoint - Done
26. 03:15:692 (4,1,2,3) - Compact stream can easily cause flowbreaks, try a curved pattern instead - Done
27. 03:11:908 (3,1) - 03:12:854 (3,4) - 03:13:394 (2,3) - 03:13:935 (3,4) - 03:15:016 (3,4) - 03:15:557 (3,4) - Poor NC placement emphasises the weak notes after the jump rather than the strong ones, these would each be better if the NC was swapped - Done
28. 03:30:286 (1,2) - Uncomfortable flowstop into hyper, but you also didn't map the more important red tick vocal sound, and ended the slider 03:31:367 (3) - 1/2 a beat earlier than the vocal finishes - Done
29. 03:41:908 (2) - 03:44:205 (4) - etc. - More places where you could add 1/4 vocal notes, so much 1/2 is just far too plain for a song of this length
30. 03:55:962 (1) - Separate into two circles to give the vocal sound on the tail jump emphasis, hopefully you get the idea by now - Done

I won't go any further because the last kiai sections are more of the same and now that you (hopefully) know what to do you can improve them yourself. This is not a bad map - I like how you used U-shaped sliders to give more movement on the low-BPM, and the 1/4 section after the first kiai is cool. Unfortunately, the rest of the map is rather uninteresting to play and the lack of hitsounds, inconsistent jump and NC placement sadly reduce the quality of the final product.

It's great to see more people working on easier marathons and the map has potential if you're willing to put in some work to try and realise it. I hope my suggestions helped you and you don't give up! (:

Celektus wrote:

don't give this kds

here's the Code for the hitsounded diff use this tool to copy the hitsounds to your diff and keep the diff somewhere in case you change something: t/131540

also I would suggest not muting this since I hitsounded that hat 03:22:179 (2) -
and I would change the dark green you have to the color I used in my HS diff since that seems more fitting imo

Code

osu file format v14

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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
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Title:Hirahira Hirara
TitleUnicode:ひらひら ひらら
Artist:ClariS
ArtistUnicode:ClariS
Creator:Goddess Aqua
Version:HS
Source:
Tags:fairy castle clara alice
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Sorcerer wrote:

Mod request from PM

[ Sakura Blossom]

1. 00:08:124 (3) - There's a clear vocal and a slight piano sound on 00:08:394 - so I'd suggest to make this slider repeat there instead - Done
   
2. 00:11:367 (6) - Same as above, make this repeat on 00:11:638 - ^
   
3. 00:15:692 (4,5,6) - There's some very strong vocals here that the current timeline misses a bit. I'd start with deleting 00:15:962 (5) - as I don't really hear anything at 00:15:962 - Then make 00:15:692 (4) - a 1/1 slider ending at 00:16:232 - Then move 00:16:773 (5) - back half a beat to 00:16:502 - and then add a note at 00:17:313 (6) - It would be quite straightforward to make 00:15:692 (4) - a C shaped slider and then have a dash to 00:16:502 (5) - at around x:352 and then maybe put 00:17:313 (6) - at around x:336. I think that should fit with the style of your map - Really nice advice! Thanks!
   
4. The comboing here seems a little off around here. I'd NC on 00:11:367 (6) - 00:13:529 (4) - 00:15:692 (4) - and then remove the NCs on 00:12:448 (1) - 00:14:611 (1) - Ok
   
5. 00:23:800 (4) - Distance to this feels just a bit too low, try moving it to a bit more left to around x:192 - Ok
   
6. 00:43:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - There's quite a few direction changes in this short bit and it feels a little complicated compared to the rest of the difficulty. I'd recommend moving 00:44:070 (4,5,6) - to x:432 so it flows on from 00:43:800 (3) - Then select the head of 00:44:611 (1) - and move it to x:224 so the distance from 00:44:340 (6) - is still the same - It`s really better, thanks
   
7. 00:46:773 - Vocal and piano sound here, I'd rework this part to include a note here - Ok
   
8. 00:47:313 (4,5,6,1) - Emphasis seems to be in the wrong place here. The distance is greatest to 00:47:854 (6) - yet 00:47:584 (5) - is a stronger beat and 00:48:124 (1) - an even stronger beat. I'd rework this part to have a lower distance to 00:47:854 (6) - and a dash to 00:48:124 (1) - Ok
   
9. 00:50:286 - This is a fairly strong downbeat so I would recommend not ending a slider here. I'd shorten 00:49:746 (1) - to end at 00:50:016 - and add a new note on 00:50:286 - with a dash to it - Ok
   
10. 00:52:448 (1) - This hyper is quite strong, I'd nerf it just a little to about x:96 to make the movement afterwards a little easier - Ok
    
11. 00:54:340 (2) - This also ends on a noticeable downbeat worthy of a dash to it, I'd make this in to individual notes - Ok
    
12. 01:00:557 - Quite a strong sound missed here, I'd start 01:00:421 (5) - here and add a note back in at 01:00:421 - to replace the old slider head - Ok
    
13. 01:01:638 - Same as above - Ok
    
14. 01:05:421 (1) - I'd make this a repeater for the vocal and piano on 01:05:692 - Ok
    
15. 01:10:827 (1) - Remove the NC here and NC at 01:11:908 (3) - instead - Ok
    
16. 01:24:340 (6) - This vertical slider feels a little out of place to me, I'd try curving it a bit - Ok
    
17. 01:29:205 (1) - I'd make this repeat too - Ok
    
18. 01:42:178 (1) - I'd rework this to include a note on 01:42:448 - Ok
    
19. 01:57:584 (2) - Distance feels just a little high to this, I'd recommend nerfing it by a grid space or so - It`s needn`t
    
20. 02:16:232 (1) - Remove the NC here and add one at 02:16:773 (3) - Ok
    
21. 02:17:313 (5) - Again I think this would be worth reworking to include a note at 02:17:584 - Ok
    
22. 02:18:665 (1) - Remove this NC - Ok
    
23. 02:22:719 (1) - I'd end this at 02:22:989 - and add a new slider starting on 02:23:259 - ending at 02:23:529 (2) - Ok
    
24. 02:44:881 (1) - Make a repeater? - It`s needn`t
    
25. 02:45:962 (3) - Note at 02:46:232 - It`s needn`t
    
26. 03:42:178 - I think a note here would be a good fit - Not a note but fix
    
27. 04:12:448 (1,2,3,4) - I'd space these out a little more just to make the movement a bit more comfortable - I not think so
    
28. 04:17:854 (1) - Get this repeating on that sweet red tick - Ok
    
29. 04:22:178 (1) - Maybe hyper to this? It feels like 04:20:016 (1,2,3,4) - is building up to it - Ok
    
30. 04:41:638 (1) - Repeat on the red tick - Ok

Hope this is helpful!

1. 00:00:421 - I recommend 1/8 stream starting from here to 00:00:557 (1) - to fit with the music.
2. 00:12:178 (2) - Remove this note. It sounds better, ain't it?
3. 00:14:881 (6) - ^
4. 00:16:502 (2) - slider seems too long. why not make it 1/2 repeat slider instead?
5. 00:23:665 - oops! a missing note.
6. 00:25:151 (4,5) - patterns like this are hard to catch. I suggest to change the pattern like this 00:27:314 (3,4,5) -
7. 00:35:962 (4,5) - same problem
8. 00:00:557 (1) - up to 00:19:475 (5) - finish and clap hitsounds doesn't fit on this part. consider using whistle only.
9. 00:44:340 (6) - missing clap sound
10. 01:00:557 (6) - convert to 1/2 slider
11. 01:01:638 (3) - same with this one
12. Make hitsounds at kiai louder.
13. 01:33:394 - Missing note.
14. 01:47:313 (4,5) - Same problem with 00:25:151 (4,5)
15. 01:49:475 (2,3) - ^
16. 01:53:800 (2,3) - ^
17. 01:55:962 (6,7) - ^
18. 01:58:124 (4,5) - ^
19. 02:01:367 (4,5) - ^
20. 02:31:773 - missing note
21. 02:44:881 (1) - Convert to 1/2 slider
22. 03:41:908 (2) - It is better if you use triple note here
23. 04:22:178 (1,2) - Awkward distance

Hi_Hello wrote:

M4M
as you requested

Sakura Blossom

1. 00:00:421 - I recommend 1/8 stream starting from here to 00:00:557 (1) - to fit with the music. - It`s really better
2. 00:12:178 (2) - Remove this note. It sounds better, ain't it? - Okay
3. 00:14:881 (6) - ^ - Okay
4. 00:16:502 (2) - slider seems too long. why not make it 1/2 repeat slider instead? - For what?
5. 00:23:665 - oops! a missing note. - Okay
6. 00:25:151 (4,5) - patterns like this are hard to catch. I suggest to change the pattern like this 00:27:314 (3,4,5) - Not hard
7. 00:35:962 (4,5) - same problem - ^
8. 00:00:557 (1) - up to 00:19:475 (5) - finish and clap hitsounds doesn't fit on this part. consider using whistle only. - ok
9. 00:44:340 (6) - missing clap sound - ok
10. 01:00:557 (6) - convert to 1/2 slider - No
11. 01:01:638 (3) - same with this one - No
12. Make hitsounds at kiai louder. - ok
13. 01:33:394 - Missing note. - No
14. 01:47:313 (4,5) - Same problem with 00:25:151 (4,5) - Not hard
15. 01:49:475 (2,3) - ^ - ^
16. 01:53:800 (2,3) - ^ - ^
17. 01:55:962 (6,7) - ^ - ^
18. 01:58:124 (4,5) - ^ - ^
19. 02:01:367 (4,5) - ^ - ^
20. 02:31:773 - missing note - added
21. 02:44:881 (1) - Convert to 1/2 slider - No
22. 03:41:908 (2) - It is better if you use triple note here - Ok
23. 04:22:178 (1,2) - Awkward distance - Ok

Nice map

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1. 00:01:097 (5) - Rhythm choice is a bit odd. The slider on 00:01:097 (5) - maps two string sounds here, but the exact same two sounds are at 00:01:638 (6,7) - and use a circle/slider pattern instead. Use the same rhythm for the same sounds like this https://puu.sh/xzlBe/1c8bd16bc7.png
2. 00:04:881 (1) - This goes offscreen, which results in the droplets being forced in a vertical straight line. Move it over so it's curved and doesn't touch the wall
3. 00:10:827 (5,1) - Not exactly the best place for a hyperdash. There are stronger sounds that only have a dash. That said, the opening really shouldn't have any hyper dashes to have better contrast with harder sections. Remove all hypers until 00:23:800 (5) -
4. 00:13:800 (2,3,4) - The stack used here feels pretty random. Try stacking 3 on 2, and 4 on 1 like this example, it's a commonly used pattern that gives better structure.
5. 00:15:151 (7) - When using a 3/4 slider, the sound on the slider's head should be a held sound, and there shouldn't be any clear sound to follow on the 1/2 beat after. However, there is no sound on the slider head + there is a strong vocal on the 1/2 beat.
   + Never use slider ticks to actively map anything, very few exceptions but should really avoid.
6. 00:17:313 (3,4) - This pattern is identical to 00:17:854 (1,2) - which is has a much higher pitch. Change the pattern on the second pair to have a better contrast between the two.
7. 00:22:719 (2,3,4) - The spacing used on these three objects is quite awkward to play. While 2,3 is a dash, 3,4 should have at least a bit more spacing. The gap between 2,3 is 1/2, but 3,4 is a 3/4 gap and is spaced much smaller. Use at least a bit more space to make these smoother to play
8. 00:23:800 (5) - + The way this slider is angled makes droplets unreasonably difficult. The player has to dash to the slider head, stop, dash to the slider end, and then hyper to 1. Make this straight so that the process is simplified to just dash to 5 + follow flow.
9. 00:25:151 (4,5) - How triples are mapped is quite inconsistent. The way this is mapped, it emphasises blue tick. However 00:27:314 (3,4) - emphasises the downbeat. 00:35:962 (4,5) - Is identical to the previous and is also mapped differently to that. Change your patterns around so that you emphasis the same sound each time. Imo this doesn't really need a dash, that way there is more contrast with 00:26:367 (9,1) - + there are a lot more pattern variations with 3 notes no dash. Some examples: https://puu.sh/xzn9R/72da5b6bab.png
10. 00:31:908 (5) - In this section, there's too many circles being used. Sliders are better at managin flow than circles, as droplets guide the player from A to B. With circles, the player needs to constantly read where the next circle is. Add some sliders to make it easier to follow
11. 00:37:584 (2,3) - This dash can probably be bigger to emphasise the sound, as it doesn't really feel like a dash currently.
12. 00:39:205 (6) - Don't put strong sounds on slider ends, it reduces the emphasis on them. I'd suggest to move this slider back by 1/2, remove the repeat on the previous, and add a circle at 00:39:475 (7) - .
13. 00:40:286 (8,1) - This hyperdash is too sudden, as there was very few in the previous section. Reduce distance
14. 00:40:827 (2,3,4) - Decrease the distance between these. In old maps, spec often used a pattern like this, but lower spacing on the 1/4s.
15. 00:42:043 (3,4,5) - The spacing change between these is too much, similar to 00:22:719 (2,3,4) - . Decrease spacing at 3,4 and increase 4,5 to improve flow
    + 00:42:448 (5) - should be a straight/horizontal slider, easy to miss the tail. (heck 90% of sliders should be like that but it would be very repetitive to say)
16. 00:42:989 (6,1) - Spacing is unexpectedly large, easy to miss and is too far when paired with 00:43:665 (2,3) - , reduce.
17. 00:44:070 (4,5) - Stacking 1/4s here wouldn't be a bad idea, better flow + best to avoid complicated patterns with 1/4 usually
18. 00:44:611 (1) - Using a 100% 1/2 straight slider at this bpm is not fun, as you need to stand totally still. Try using horizontal sliders or changing flow.
19. 00:44:611 (1,2) - Try to leave a minimum distance between objects, using spacing this small is almost never used. I'd solve by doing ctrl-> on 2, and move a bit left.
20. 00:47:043 (4,5,6,7) - What is being prioritised in the music here? 5 has no sound, but has a dash. 6 has a stronger sound but no spacing, there's unmapped vocal at 00:47:989 (8) - , and the distance to 00:48:124 (1) - is smaller than all objects in the next stanza.
21. 00:50:557 (3,4) - Using the same slider shape would imply there's similarity in the music, but there's none here. Ctrl-h + move to ~x180
22. 01:00:557 (6) - Avoid the 3/4 slider here, and I can't hear any sound on 01:00:421 (5) - so consider removing that
23. 01:01:502 (2,3) - Don't use droplets like this, it creates difficult flow to follow. Change the shape so it flows more circular. You need to also change it from 3/4 slider, so apply that while changing.
24. 01:03:259 (1) - This slider shape needs to change, it has no clear path or curve to follow, do ctrl-> to fix
25. 01:04:340 (4) - Same issue, use this shape, much clearer what the player needs to do https://puu.sh/xzoaf/02ad39002d.png
26. 01:07:584 (1) - Same thing about avoiding the edge so droplets aren't a vertical line
27. 01:08:665 (3,4,5) - Same mentioned before about odd spacing, 4,5 is too small and 3,4 is too big.
28. 01:09:611 (6) - Inconsistent with not mapping vocal here
29. 01:12:989 (3,4,5,6) - This pattern is way too much of a diff spike. Reduce spacing significantly
30. 01:12:854 (3) - Unmapped sound, currently lead in is odd due to this
31. 01:25:692 (2,3,4,1,2) - Spacing is far too small relative to the rest of kiai, increase to be consistent
32. 01:30:016 (2,3,4) - ^, more so since there's a hyperdash after
33. 01:31:367 (1) - Another example of why this slider shape does not work. Try try replacing it with one of the sliders shapes I suggested before. The droplets are randomly placed due to how the slider goes
34. 01:42:178 (6) - NC, too many objects in the combo
35. 03:42:719 (6) - Don't use 10% volume on 1/2, especially when there is a clear sound on it

Sinnoh wrote:

Hi, M4M here


General
Some of your hitsounds are inconsistent and could have chosen better ones often. Eg. using default finishes in the opening is really overdoing the song. I'd suggest using a hitsound copier to copy from the std set. It's better to have a version from someone who's more experienced with hitsounds as the base, it will improve the player's first impressions of a set just by how it's hitsounded.

A lot of your sliders have weird droplet spacing due to how you place sliders in the editor. Compare these images, the left slider has droplets that are in a straight line that is easier to read, play, and looks cleaner. The right one is harder to play and is difficult to follow. You really need to replace most/all of your sliders which are curved like that to straight ones. Have a reference by looking at some of the ranked maps in the editor, none of them ever use the slider shape you use.

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+ In addition to that, a lot of sliders feel like they should have more movement. The catcher moves too fast to reasonably catch the slider head + tail. Try using more straight + horizontal sliders, more movement will improve flow a lot.
00:20:016 (1) - One of the sliders that could really use more movement. Because there's a bit of antiflow, the player has to move back, but can't because the slider middle is too close, which creates awkward movement. Make this straight and horizontal as an example

It is often unclear what part of the music you are trying to follow. Take for example the simple part at the start.
You aren't following vocal much because there are often 1/4 patterns that are ignored. Eg. 00:03:529 (2) - 00:05:692 (2) - 00:07:854 (2) -
However, you aren't following the piano either. There are many 1/1 sliders that follow vocal and ignore piano, or it's just unmapped entirely eg. 00:12:178 (2) - 00:14:881 (6) - . Ignoring the piano in some sections would be fine in order to follow vocal, but vocal is not always followed! Try to make it clear that you are following one instrument in the song. I'd suggest mapping vocal, as there is more variety and unique rhythms to follow compared to other instruments.

Sakura

1. 00:01:097 (5) - Rhythm choice is a bit odd. The slider on 00:01:097 (5) - maps two string sounds here, but the exact same two sounds are at 00:01:638 (6,7) - and use a circle/slider pattern instead. Use the same rhythm for the same sounds like this https://puu.sh/xzlBe/1c8bd16bc7.png
2. 00:04:881 (1) - This goes offscreen, which results in the droplets being forced in a vertical straight line. Move it over so it's curved and doesn't touch the wall
3. 00:10:827 (5,1) - Not exactly the best place for a hyperdash. There are stronger sounds that only have a dash. That said, the opening really shouldn't have any hyper dashes to have better contrast with harder sections. Remove all hypers until 00:23:800 (5) - No, I think Hdash need this
4. 00:13:800 (2,3,4) - The stack used here feels pretty random. Try stacking 3 on 2, and 4 on 1 like this example, it's a commonly used pattern that gives better structure.
5. 00:15:151 (7) - When using a 3/4 slider, the sound on the slider's head should be a held sound, and there shouldn't be any clear sound to follow on the 1/2 beat after. However, there is no sound on the slider head + there is a strong vocal on the 1/2 beat.
   + Never use slider ticks to actively map anything, very few exceptions but should really avoid.
6. 00:17:313 (3,4) - This pattern is identical to 00:17:854 (1,2) - which is has a much higher pitch. Change the pattern on the second pair to have a better contrast between the two.
7. 00:22:719 (2,3,4) - The spacing used on these three objects is quite awkward to play. While 2,3 is a dash, 3,4 should have at least a bit more spacing. The gap between 2,3 is 1/2, but 3,4 is a 3/4 gap and is spaced much smaller. Use at least a bit more space to make these smoother to play
8. 00:23:800 (5) - + The way this slider is angled makes droplets unreasonably difficult. The player has to dash to the slider head, stop, dash to the slider end, and then hyper to 1. Make this straight so that the process is simplified to just dash to 5 + follow flow.
9. 00:25:151 (4,5) - How triples are mapped is quite inconsistent. The way this is mapped, it emphasises blue tick. However 00:27:314 (3,4) - emphasises the downbeat. 00:35:962 (4,5) - Is identical to the previous and is also mapped differently to that. Change your patterns around so that you emphasis the same sound each time. Imo this doesn't really need a dash, that way there is more contrast with 00:26:367 (9,1) - + there are a lot more pattern variations with 3 notes no dash. Some examples: https://puu.sh/xzn9R/72da5b6bab.png - Thanks for idea, but me liked my variant
10. 00:31:908 (5) - In this section, there's too many circles being used. Sliders are better at managin flow than circles, as droplets guide the player from A to B. With circles, the player needs to constantly read where the next circle is. Add some sliders to make it easier to follow - I`m not will reworked this pattern
11. 00:37:584 (2,3) - This dash can probably be bigger to emphasise the sound, as it doesn't really feel like a dash currently.
12. 00:39:205 (6) - Don't put strong sounds on slider ends, it reduces the emphasis on them. I'd suggest to move this slider back by 1/2, remove the repeat on the previous, and add a circle at 00:39:475 (7) - .
13. 00:40:286 (8,1) - This hyperdash is too sudden, as there was very few in the previous section. Reduce distance
14. 00:40:827 (2,3,4) - Decrease the distance between these. In old maps, spec often used a pattern like this, but lower spacing on the 1/4s. - Here all good
15. 00:42:043 (3,4,5) - The spacing change between these is too much, similar to 00:22:719 (2,3,4) - . Decrease spacing at 3,4 and increase 4,5 to improve flow
    + 00:42:448 (5) - should be a straight/horizontal slider, easy to miss the tail. (heck 90% of sliders should be like that but it would be very repetitive to say)
16. 00:42:989 (6,1) - Spacing is unexpectedly large, easy to miss and is too far when paired with 00:43:665 (2,3) - , reduce.
17. 00:44:070 (4,5) - Stacking 1/4s here wouldn't be a bad idea, better flow + best to avoid complicated patterns with 1/4 usually
18. 00:44:611 (1) - Using a 100% 1/2 straight slider at this bpm is not fun, as you need to stand totally still. Try using horizontal sliders or changing flow. - Thanks, but no
19. 00:44:611 (1,2) - Try to leave a minimum distance between objects, using spacing this small is almost never used. I'd solve by doing ctrl-> on 2, and move a bit left.
20. 00:47:043 (4,5,6,7) - What is being prioritised in the music here? 5 has no sound, but has a dash. 6 has a stronger sound but no spacing, there's unmapped vocal at 00:47:989 (8) - , and the distance to 00:48:124 (1) - is smaller than all objects in the next stanza.
21. 00:50:557 (3,4) - Using the same slider shape would imply there's similarity in the music, but there's none here. Ctrl-h + move to ~x180
22. 01:00:557 (6) - Avoid the 3/4 slider here, and I can't hear any sound on 01:00:421 (5) - so consider removing that - I like it pattern
23. 01:01:502 (2,3) - Don't use droplets like this, it creates difficult flow to follow. Change the shape so it flows more circular. You need to also change it from 3/4 slider, so apply that while changing. - ^
24. 01:03:259 (1) - This slider shape needs to change, it has no clear path or curve to follow, do ctrl-> to fix
25. 01:04:340 (4) - Same issue, use this shape, much clearer what the player needs to do https://puu.sh/xzoaf/02ad39002d.png
26. 01:07:584 (1) - Same thing about avoiding the edge so droplets aren't a vertical line
27. 01:08:665 (3,4,5) - Same mentioned before about odd spacing, 4,5 is too small and 3,4 is too big.
28. 01:09:611 (6) - Inconsistent with not mapping vocal here
29. 01:12:989 (3,4,5,6) - This pattern is way too much of a diff spike. Reduce spacing significantly - No
30. 01:12:854 (3) - Unmapped sound, currently lead in is odd due to this
31. 01:25:692 (2,3,4,1,2) - Spacing is far too small relative to the rest of kiai, increase to be consistent
32. 01:30:016 (2,3,4) - ^, more so since there's a hyperdash after
33. 01:31:367 (1) - Another example of why this slider shape does not work. Try try replacing it with one of the sliders shapes I suggested before. The droplets are randomly placed due to how the slider goes
34. 01:42:178 (6) - NC, too many objects in the combo
35. 03:42:719 (6) - Don't use 10% volume on 1/2, especially when there is a clear sound on it

Ok that's enough for me, don't want to make this longer than it already is. Good luck!

JeirYagtama wrote:

Claris :weary:

Senbozakura

00:22:719 (6) - hmmm i think it would play better if you copy paste 00:22:178 (5) - then move it to x:100 for a more fun sidedash here
00:31:097 (2) - seems kinda awkward to play when antiflow perfectly fits here thus i ask of you to ctrl h the slider
00:39:746 (8) - same stuff about what i said on antiflow earlier but this time move it to x:185 cos ctrl-h-ing this isnt enuf to give a sidedash reee
00:40:827 (2,3,4) - kinda feels awkward to play when you try to catch this triple maybe space them out a bit more?
00:55:421 (5) - feels a bit too close maybe move it x:496 for this pley a bit better
01:00:557 (12) - welp if ur mapping vocals for this one then the slider should end overrrrrrrr here 01:00:827 -
01:14:881 (1,2) - didnt mapped this as a triple but mapped 01:17:043 (2,3,4) - this with one and its the same sounds nonetheless reeeeeee
01:23:800 (4,5,6) - i think a back and forth pattern would work better here and playing it as it is rn kinda feels clumped af
maybe a pattern like this woud work out but it may remove the h-dash you were going for with 01:24:881 (1) -

01:25:692 (2) - undermapped just make this into a chain will ya?
01:38:935 (8) - then move this to x:28 if you took the route i suggested earlier
01:40:557 (3) - loud vocal sound and yet it was not given a side dash :thinking:
01:46:502 (1) - side dashhhhhhhhhh since this is the end of the chorus/kiai and it ends with a loud vocal sound here yet you just placed it on top of the slider
01:52:448 (5) - it really feels awkward to play when the previous slider and this one is so close together yet both of them have loud sounds that deserves to have a sidedashhh move this to x:151
01:53:259 (1,2,3,4) - select them then move these to x:324 if ur going with the route im goin for earlier
02:51:367 (1) - tbh the vocals are the most prominent sounds that you should map in the kiai make this into a reverse slider boi
03:59:475 (4,5,6,7) - a bit too hard to pley in a difficulty like this consider reducing the distance for this jump secion
04:37:313 (6) - this chain deserves more emphasis by just adjusting the slider a bit there u go
somewhat like this will do

Hmm this map really feels like a convert cos of the awkward dashes i mentioned earlier overalll thats the stuff u need to improve on ur future mapsss

gl