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ClariS - Hirahira Hirara [CatchTheBeat]

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Shirokane Rinko
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Dapulezatos
Hello, came from my Queue :D
[Sakura Blossom]
  1. 00:33:935 (2) - Move slighty to the right (I changed it to x : 228
  2. 00:41:908 (1,2) - CTRL + G. This one is better IMO. I find this pattern is more enjoyable
  3. 00:44:070 (4,5) - ^
  4. 01:50:827 (3) - Move to x : 448 . High pitch sound i think it's suitable for Hdash
  5. 01:51:097 (1) - If you agree with ^. Move to x : 264.
  6. 01:51:908 (4) - x : 80 maybe? Reduce spacing here
  7. 02:07:854 (1,2,3) - move to x : 104. Seems too far
  8. 02:16:232 (1,2,3) - x : 440? Reduce spacing. It's like a timing jump but with Hdash
  9. 03:08:935 (2,3) - CTRL + H. This Dash is a bit owo
  10. 03:09:475 (1,2) - CTRL + G
  11. 03:10:016 (4) - Click Here
  12. 03:10:421 (1,2,3,1) - Considering make this pattern same as 03:10:016 (4) - (If you agreed with reversed slider mods above)
  13. From 03:11:638 - to 03:16:232 - Consider remap it to easier pattern. It's confusing to be honest
  14. 03:23:800 (1) - Move it to the left x : 416 or more
  15. 03:43:259 (2) - x : 392. More enjoyable
Well I think that's all of my mods. Sry late response. I'm not at good condition before :o
Give kudosu if my mods help you :3. Good luck with ranking :D
Thanks for the mp3 and the beatmap. I love the song <3.
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

Skycreeper- wrote:

Hello, came from my Queue :D
[Sakura Blossom]
  1. 00:33:935 (2) - Move slighty to the right (I changed it to x : 228 - Okay
  2. 00:41:908 (1,2) - CTRL + G. This one is better IMO. I find this pattern is more enjoyable - Sorry no
  3. 00:44:070 (4,5) - ^ ^
  4. 01:50:827 (3) - Move to x : 448 . High pitch sound i think it's suitable for Hdash - It`s style of this map, sorry no
  5. 01:51:097 (1) - If you agree with ^. Move to x : 264. ^
  6. 01:51:908 (4) - x : 80 maybe? Reduce spacing here - Okay
  7. 02:07:854 (1,2,3) - move to x : 104. Seems too far - Not far
  8. 02:16:232 (1,2,3) - x : 440? Reduce spacing. It's like a timing jump but with Hdash - Okay
  9. 03:08:935 (2,3) - CTRL + H. This Dash is a bit owo - I think it`s better
  10. 03:09:475 (1,2) - CTRL + G - Sorry no
  11. 03:10:016 (4) - Click Here - denied
  12. 03:10:421 (1,2,3,1) - Considering make this pattern same as 03:10:016 (4) - (If you agreed with reversed slider mods above) - Here it`s better
  13. From 03:11:638 - to 03:16:232 - Consider remap it to easier pattern. It's confusing to be honest - if in future anyone write this too i would be think about it.
  14. 03:23:800 (1) - Move it to the left x : 416 or more - Strong beat, denide
  15. 03:43:259 (2) - x : 392. More enjoyable - denied

Well I think that's all of my mods. Sry late response. I'm not at good condition before :o
Give kudosu if my mods help you :3. Good luck with ranking :D - Thasnks!
Thanks for the mp3 and the beatmap. I love the song <3.
wonjae
turn off countdown.

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General: Capitalize the B in blossom in the title.

I dont know what or if those characters are from a specific anime, but if they are from an anime, i would add their names in the tags.

Preview point is not snapped to 1/4, while this isnt a big problem its still annoying to look at. put preview point at 01:44:611 (1) .

Map:

00:02:584 (5) - i would divide this into 2 notes and add a dash in the note at 00:02:719 - as the sound here is a bit louder/more emphasized.

00:08:124 (2) - i think that making this slider end at 00:08:665 - and putting a note at 00:08:935 - would map the vocals much better.

00:11:367 (7) - i dont think a hyper here is nessesary as its still calm beginning part of the song. i would ctrl+g the slider and make it curved so that the distance to 00:12:448 (1) - isnt as high.

00:14:611 (1) - hyper shouldnt be here imo either as the start of this slider 00:16:773 (5) - maps the exact same noise but dosent have a hyper.

00:39:205 (3) - distance here is pretty low to the point where it ruins the much spaced out flow you had earlier. i would this slider start at around x=270

01:17:043 - ur missing a note here.

01:33:529 (3) - i would add a hyper to here.

01:44:611 (1) - i really dont think a spinner fits here and i would rather you to just map the whole kiai out.

02:08:124 (2) - hyper should be in this note as its when the piano is emphasized the most instead of at 02:07:854 (1) -

02:39:205 - would add a note here also like last time.

03:06:773 (1) - would map this out also instead of a spinner.

03:10:421 (4) - sudden diffuculty spike and really hard to hit this repeat slider as it is a dash and an antiflow after a hyper.

03:40:827 (7) - hyper here.

03:43:192 - green line here isnt used for anything.

03:42:719 (1,2) - also whats with the sudden changeup from the previous kiais, i get that you want the last kiai to me more epmhasized but there are other ways of doing that instead of just adding hypers.

03:44:070 - note?

03:53:800 (1) - put a note at the start of this slider instead and make a 1/1 slider start at 03:54:070 (1) - to better capture rhythm.

final note, i would test play the map and note any inconsistencies with hypers throughout the kiais


Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

Paranoid Grapes wrote:

turn off countdown. - Done

General: Capitalize the B in blossom in the title. - Okay

I dont know what or if those characters are from a specific anime, but if they are from an anime, i would add their names in the tags. - It`s not anime song

Preview point is not snapped to 1/4, while this isnt a big problem its still annoying to look at. put preview point at 01:44:611 (1) . - Okay

Map:

00:02:584 (5) - i would divide this into 2 notes and add a dash in the note at 00:02:719 - as the sound here is a bit louder/more emphasized. - Done

00:08:124 (2) - i think that making this slider end at 00:08:665 - and putting a note at 00:08:935 - would map the vocals much better. - Done

00:11:367 (7) - i dont think a hyper here is nessesary as its still calm beginning part of the song. i would ctrl+g the slider and make it curved so that the distance to 00:12:448 (1) - isnt as high. - Done

00:14:611 (1) - hyper shouldnt be here imo either as the start of this slider 00:16:773 (5) - maps the exact same noise but dosent have a hyper. - Okay

00:39:205 (3) - distance here is pretty low to the point where it ruins the much spaced out flow you had earlier. i would this slider start at around x=270 - Okay

01:17:043 - ur missing a note here. - Done

01:33:529 (3) - i would add a hyper to here. - Okay

01:44:611 (1) - i really dont think a spinner fits here and i would rather you to just map the whole kiai out. - Done

02:08:124 (2) - hyper should be in this note as its when the piano is emphasized the most instead of at 02:07:854 (1) - Done

02:39:205 - would add a note here also like last time. - Done

03:06:773 (1) - would map this out also instead of a spinner. - Rework

03:10:421 (4) - sudden diffuculty spike and really hard to hit this repeat slider as it is a dash and an antiflow after a hyper. - Added slider

03:40:827 (7) - hyper here. - Added

03:43:192 - green line here isnt used for anything. - Deleted

03:42:719 (1,2) - also whats with the sudden changeup from the previous kiais, i get that you want the last kiai to me more epmhasized but there are other ways of doing that instead of just adding hypers. - I hear strong beat

03:44:070 - note? - Added

03:53:800 (1) - put a note at the start of this slider instead and make a 1/1 slider start at 03:54:070 (1) - to better capture rhythm.

final note, i would test play the map and note any inconsistencies with hypers throughout the kiais - Done

Thanks a lot for mod! It`s really helped me.

Lacrima
  1. 00:35:962 (1,2) - расстояние сделай поменьше, уж слишком этот пиксель сюда не вписывается
  2. 01:24:340 (5) - сделай вертикальным, чтобы был гипер к 01:24:881 (1) -
  3. 01:37:313 (4,1) - CTRL H + CTRL G, чтобы был гипер к 01:37:854 (2) -
  4. 02:40:557 (1) - x384, чтобы опят же был гипер к нему
  5. 03:06:232 (6) - это плохо, когда такой сильный звук лежит на конце слайдера. сделай вместо него 2 ноты
  6. 03:11:773 (2,3) - слишком сильно, уменьши дистанцию
  7. 03:49:205 (5) - CTRL G и на x292, для гипера к 03:49:746 (1) -
  8. 04:09:205 (3) - CTRL G и на x424, для гипера
  9. 04:26:232 (1) - опять, такой сильный звук на конце слайдера не есть хорошо, сделай 2 ноты
  10. 04:41:367 (6,7) - (6) на x344, (7) на x16 для гипера к (7)
у меня нет сил на нормальный мод, поэтому обычный чек, соответствующий текущему стилю карты
Time Series
Здравствыйте. NM from my queue

[Sakura Blossom]
I see that your map is mainly based on the background beat but not the melody. Although I personally don't prefer this, I don't have reason to ask you to change as well. But be aware that this may decreace the variety of beatmap streams, and affect its interest as well.

Since the main beat of this song is 1/2 beat, I suggest you to change the slider tick rate to 2.

00:06:232 (4) - I suggest you push this slider back by 1/2 beat, like the pattern of 00:10:827 (6) -
00:07:854 - I think it's better to add a fruit here, like 00:08:935 (3) -
00:20:286 - I suggest you cancel the beat here
00:37:584 (4,5) - This gap is too big. Either you decrease the distance (preferred) or make it a hyper
00:41:908 (1,2,3) - It's okay to make a hyper between 2&3, but I think their gap is too big and it's hard and tiring to read them. You can decrease 1/3 the distance and still keep it a hyper. Since this part of song is not stressd, I think it's reasonable not to make them too harsh
00:43:529 (1,2,3) - ^
00:44:070 (4,5,6) - ^
00:45:692 (3,4,5) - ^, but since it's a strong beat so you can keep it
00:47:313 (3,4,1) - I think it's better to hyper 4&1 instead of 3&4
00:54:881 (3,4) - Please arrange a move between them
01:17:854 (5,1) - Maybe make a hyper?
01:24:340 (5,1) - ^
01:47:313 (1,2) - This is anti-stream and personally I think it's not smooth. I'd prefer to ctrl+g on 2
01:51:638 (3,4) - This gap might be a edge dash. I think it's better to avoid them in this gentle song, so please decrease their gap
01:55:962 (1,2) - same as 01:47:313 (1,2) -
01:58:124 (1,2) - ^
02:01:367 (1,2) - ^
02:03:529 - Maybe add a fruit here? idk
02:07:043 (3) - I'd prefer to ctrl+g
02:09:205 (5,1) - Edge dash so please decrease their gap
02:11:367 (1,2) - To work well with the weak beat of the song, I suggest you replace each of them by a circle
02:25:151 (2,1) - A hyper here would be better than the hyper at 02:25:421 (1,1) -
02:27:313 (1,2) - Maybe ctrl+g?
02:29:475 (4,5) - Maybe hyper.
02:34:881 (4,5,6) - There should be more movements here. I made the following change: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8913115 (Make it move consecutively between left and right)
02:40:286 (5,1) - Hyper?
02:42:178 (3,4) - Hyper? or not
02:46:773 (4,1) - Hyper.
03:06:232 (6) - I think it's better to split the slider and make a hyper in between
03:08:935 (2,3,4) - If you want to keep the hyper behind 4, then probably it's better to cancel the hyper between 3&4
03:09:475 (1,2) - ctrl+g
03:10:286 (3) - I think it's better to place it at x:224
03:10:827 (1,2) - Please make the gap be the same as between 03:10:962 (2,3,4) -
03:11:908 (3,1,2,3) - This stream is not smooth! I don't think it's good to move left between 3&1 and then suddenly change to right between 1&2. How about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8913173
03:17:178 (4,5) - Hyper?
03:18:124 (1) - Enlong this slider by 1/2 beat
03:19:205 - How about cancelling the fruit here?
03:21:097 (3,1) - Hyper?
03:29:746 (6,1) - Hyper?
03:31:232 (2) - Maybe better to place it at x:140
03:32:313 - Please add a fruit
03:32:448 (3) - Please shorten this slider by 1/4 beat to match the lyrics
03:33:529 (1,2) - Maybe hyper because you hypered 03:34:070 (2,1) -
03:45:421 (3,4,1) - The pattern at 03:42:719 (1,2,3) - is great, so maybe you should copy here also
04:00:286 (3,1,2,3) - ^
04:04:611 (1) - Hyper the two fruits please
04:08:665 (2,3) - Hyper.
04:15:421 (5,6) - Hyper.
04:26:232 (1) - Hyper the two fruits.
04:34:881 (1) - ^
04:41:367 (6,7) - Hyper!

I really love this song! GL with your map!
[ClariS最高!]
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

Myle wrote:

  1. 00:35:962 (1,2) - расстояние сделай поменьше, уж слишком этот пиксель сюда не вписывается
  2. 01:24:340 (5) - сделай вертикальным, чтобы был гипер к 01:24:881 (1) -
  3. 01:37:313 (4,1) - CTRL H + CTRL G, чтобы был гипер к 01:37:854 (2) -
  4. 02:40:557 (1) - x384, чтобы опят же был гипер к нему
  5. 03:06:232 (6) - это плохо, когда такой сильный звук лежит на конце слайдера. сделай вместо него 2 ноты
  6. 03:11:773 (2,3) - слишком сильно, уменьши дистанцию
  7. 03:49:205 (5) - CTRL G и на x292, для гипера к 03:49:746 (1) -
  8. 04:09:205 (3) - CTRL G и на x424, для гипера
  9. 04:26:232 (1) - опять, такой сильный звук на конце слайдера не есть хорошо, сделай 2 ноты
  10. 04:41:367 (6,7) - (6) на x344, (7) на x16 для гипера к (7)
у меня нет сил на нормальный мод, поэтому обычный чек, соответствующий текущему стилю карты
Все исправил, спасибо за мод.
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

liuzicheng4732 wrote:

Здравствыйте. NM from my queue hehe you try russian it`s fine

[Sakura Blossom]
I see that your map is mainly based on the background beat but not the melody. Although I personally don't prefer this, I don't have reason to ask you to change as well. But be aware that this may decreace the variety of beatmap streams, and affect its interest as well.

Since the main beat of this song is 1/2 beat, I suggest you to change the slider tick rate to 2. - done, it`s really better

00:06:232 (4) - I suggest you push this slider back by 1/2 beat, like the pattern of 00:10:827 (6) - okay
00:07:854 - I think it's better to add a fruit here, like 00:08:935 (3) - okay
00:20:286 - I suggest you cancel the beat here - okay
00:37:584 (4,5) - This gap is too big. Either you decrease the distance (preferred) or make it a hyper - okay
00:41:908 (1,2,3) - It's okay to make a hyper between 2&3, but I think their gap is too big and it's hard and tiring to read them. You can decrease 1/3 the distance and still keep it a hyper. Since this part of song is not stressd, I think it's reasonable not to make them too harsh - okay
00:43:529 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
00:44:070 (4,5,6) - ^ ^
00:45:692 (3,4,5) - ^, but since it's a strong beat so you can keep it ^
00:47:313 (3,4,1) - I think it's better to hyper 4&1 instead of 3&4 - okay
00:54:881 (3,4) - Please arrange a move between them - okay
01:17:854 (5,1) - Maybe make a hyper? - okay
01:24:340 (5,1) - ^ ^
01:47:313 (1,2) - This is anti-stream and personally I think it's not smooth. I'd prefer to ctrl+g on 2 - okay
01:51:638 (3,4) - This gap might be a edge dash. I think it's better to avoid them in this gentle song, so please decrease their gap -okay
01:55:962 (1,2) - same as 01:47:313 (1,2) - okay
01:58:124 (1,2) - ^ ^
02:01:367 (1,2) - ^ ^
02:03:529 - Maybe add a fruit here? idk - Added
02:07:043 (3) - I'd prefer to ctrl+g - okay
02:09:205 (5,1) - Edge dash so please decrease their gap - okay
02:11:367 (1,2) - To work well with the weak beat of the song, I suggest you replace each of them by a circle - okay
02:25:151 (2,1) - A hyper here would be better than the hyper at 02:25:421 (1,1) - okay
02:27:313 (1,2) - Maybe ctrl+g? - Good, okay
02:29:475 (4,5) - Maybe hyper. - okay
02:34:881 (4,5,6) - There should be more movements here. I made the following change: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8913115 (Make it move consecutively between left and right) - okay
02:40:286 (5,1) - Hyper? - okay
02:42:178 (3,4) - Hyper? or not - I think here not need hyper
02:46:773 (4,1) - Hyper. - okay
03:06:232 (6) - I think it's better to split the slider and make a hyper in between - I not understand what are you mean
03:08:935 (2,3,4) - If you want to keep the hyper behind 4, then probably it's better to cancel the hyper between 3&4 - okay
03:09:475 (1,2) - ctrl+g - okay
03:10:286 (3) - I think it's better to place it at x:224 - okay
03:10:827 (1,2) - Please make the gap be the same as between 03:10:962 (2,3,4) - okay
03:11:908 (3,1,2,3) - This stream is not smooth! I don't think it's good to move left between 3&1 and then suddenly change to right between 1&2. How about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8913173 - okay
03:17:178 (4,5) - Hyper? - okay
03:18:124 (1) - Enlong this slider by 1/2 beat - okay
03:19:205 - How about cancelling the fruit here? - okay
03:21:097 (3,1) - Hyper? - okay
03:29:746 (6,1) - Hyper? - okay
03:31:232 (2) - Maybe better to place it at x:140 - okay
03:32:313 - Please add a fruit - okay
03:32:448 (3) - Please shorten this slider by 1/4 beat to match the lyrics - okay
03:33:529 (1,2) - Maybe hyper because you hypered 03:34:070 (2,1) - okay
03:45:421 (3,4,1) - The pattern at 03:42:719 (1,2,3) - is great, so maybe you should copy here also - okay
04:00:286 (3,1,2,3) - ^ - slider end at white tick
04:04:611 (1) - Hyper the two fruits please - okay
04:08:665 (2,3) - Hyper. - okay
04:15:421 (5,6) - Hyper. - okay
04:26:232 (1) - Hyper the two fruits. - okay
04:34:881 (1) - ^ ^
04:41:367 (6,7) - Hyper! - okay

I really love this song! GL with your map!
[ClariS最高!]
Thanks for great mod! He really helped me
Time Series
I see you've split the slider into two circles at 03:06:232 (6,7), and that is indeed what I meant. And I was just saying that it might be better to further make a hyperdash between them.

I'm really looking forward to seeing this map gaining more progress. Keep it on!
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

liuzicheng4732 wrote:

I see you've split the slider into two circles at 03:06:232 (6,7), and that is indeed what I meant. And I was just saying that it might be better to further make a hyperdash between them.

I'm really looking forward to seeing this map gaining more progress. Keep it on!
Thanks you very much! And thanks for star <3
DeletedUser_423548
I do not know anything about CTB but do good luck :)
DeletedUser_6709840
M4M from queue

General

Flow wise, the map's low slider velocity make sliders seems really slow and probably makes hypers harder to trigger. I'd advise using SV 2.00 at least so the flow will fix itself. This will require readjusting your patterns though.

Rhythmically, you missed a lot of beats and sounds that would have made more sense:

00:01:097 (3) - Why didn't you follow the ½ sounds in the middle of this slider?

00:06:773 – Missed vocal line you could have mapped.

00:07:854 - ^ Same here

00:21:097 to 00:23:259 – There's ½ rhythms all through here until 00:23:259 – because then a 1/8th streams is in the background.

00:25:692 – There's a ¼ rhythm here.

00:34:340 – Rhythm missed here.

00:34:340 - ^

00:40:016 – Heavy rhythm missed here.


Once this gets fixed, you can call me back for a recheck on your patterns. Good luck
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

Yasaija 714 wrote:

I do not know anything about CTB but do good luck :)
Thanks! I know what you ranking this song on STD! Congrats with that!
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

RoseusJaeger wrote:

M4M from queue

General

Flow wise, the map's low slider velocity make sliders seems really slow and probably makes hypers harder to trigger. I'd advise using SV 2.00 at least so the flow will fix itself. This will require readjusting your patterns though. - I think it`s needn`t, and it`s hard for fix, but thanks for idea, maybe I use it in future.

Rhythmically, you missed a lot of beats and sounds that would have made more sense:

00:01:097 (3) - Why didn't you follow the ½ sounds in the middle of this slider? - Fix

00:06:773 – Missed vocal line you could have mapped. - Fix

00:07:854 - ^ Same here - Fix

00:21:097 to 00:23:259 – There's ½ rhythms all through here until 00:23:259 – because then a 1/8th streams is in the background. -
Fix

00:25:692 – There's a ¼ rhythm here. - Fix

00:34:340 – Rhythm missed here. - Fix

00:34:340 - ^ - Fix

00:40:016 – Heavy rhythm missed here. - Fix


Once this gets fixed, you can call me back for a recheck on your patterns. Good luck

I`l try find missed rhytm - and after write you.

Thanks for mod!
Jemzuu
irc
19:34 Goddess Aqua: hello
19:34 AJamez: yes hai
19:34 AJamez: will mod later dont worry
19:34 Goddess Aqua: I understand c:
19:34 Goddess Aqua: How are you?
19:35 AJamez: umm im currently modding a map xd
19:35 AJamez: glad u asked
19:35 AJamez: hbu
19:41 Goddess Aqua: I`m fine and go practicing in mania
19:41 AJamez: oke have fun
19:42 Goddess Aqua: thanks
19:42 Goddess Aqua: good luck in moding
20:20 AJamez: ye hi
20:21 AJamez: are u really going to keep it in light rain?
20:21 AJamez: why not make it a rain insted
20:22 Goddess Aqua: I have problem with make rain in 90% when i make rain i make light rain
20:22 Goddess Aqua: :D
20:22 AJamez: 01:12:989 (5,6,7,8) -
20:22 AJamez: idk in this part
20:23 AJamez: i would make something like [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8939230 this]
20:23 AJamez: just a suggestion tho
20:23 AJamez: btw can we just irc insted
20:23 AJamez: feelin lazy for forum xd
20:25 Goddess Aqua: okay
20:25 Goddess Aqua: fixed
20:25 AJamez: and on this 01:15:151 (2,3) -
20:25 AJamez: i would ctrl g
20:25 AJamez: fix spacing after
20:25 AJamez: because 01:15:692 (3,1) - gives better emphasis in the song imo
20:26 AJamez: yea would appreciate if you would do that
20:26 AJamez: 01:16:232 (1) - maybe just moe this more to the right side
20:27 Goddess Aqua: move?
20:28 AJamez: like this 01:30:827 (4,1) -
20:28 AJamez: ya move*
20:29 AJamez: 01:34:611 (2) - mayb move this to the left
20:30 AJamez: 01:44:070 (3) - make this hyper ples
20:31 Goddess Aqua: fixed all
20:31 AJamez: did u hyper it already
20:32 AJamez: cus it should follow the same 01:41:638 (2,3) - u add hyper here
20:32 AJamez: added*
20:32 AJamez: so i think 01:44:070 (3,1) - this should be hyper as well
20:33 Goddess Aqua: 01:41:638 (2,3) - hyper on (2) or (3)?
20:33 AJamez: no there's already hyper
20:33 AJamez: lol
20:33 Goddess Aqua: oh
20:33 Goddess Aqua: okay
20:33 Goddess Aqua: :D
20:33 Goddess Aqua: I understand
20:33 AJamez: 01:49:475 (1,2) - ctrl h?
20:33 Goddess Aqua: what next?
20:34 AJamez: also adjust space a bit too
20:35 AJamez: 01:52:448 (5) - ctrl g pls
20:36 Goddess Aqua: fixed both moment
20:36 AJamez: 01:53:800 (2,3) - this has strong sound
20:36 AJamez: make this a hyper
20:37 Goddess Aqua: on (3)?
20:37 Goddess Aqua: or on (2)/
20:37 Goddess Aqua: ?*
20:39 AJamez: like [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8939365 this] perhaps
20:39 AJamez: 01:55:421 (1,2) - ctrl g here pls also move space more a bit
20:40 AJamez: 01:56:097 (2) - give more dash to this
20:40 AJamez: 01:56:502 (1,2) - ctrl g
20:41 AJamez: 01:57:043 (1,2) - ^
20:41 AJamez: 01:57:313 (3) - ctrl h
20:41 AJamez: ^ maybe make this hdash
20:42 AJamez: 01:58:124 (1,2) - ctrl h this too
20:42 AJamez: put it back to its position before after
20:42 Goddess Aqua: 01:56:502 (1,2) - needn`t ctrl+g
20:42 Goddess Aqua: um
20:43 AJamez: 01:58:259 (2) - give more space to this btw
20:43 Goddess Aqua: with next it`s good
20:43 Goddess Aqua: okay fix
20:43 AJamez: 01:58:665 (1,2) - ctrl h too
20:44 AJamez: 01:59:205 (1,2) - make this hdash
20:44 AJamez: moe it to right
20:45 AJamez: 02:01:367 (1,2) - ctrl h pls
20:46 AJamez: 02:07:854 (1,2) - i dont get this hdash
20:47 Goddess Aqua: 02:01:367 (1,2) - needn`t ctrl+h
20:48 Goddess Aqua: 02:07:854 (1,2) - vocal hdash
20:49 AJamez: 03:07:313 (3) - hdash
20:50 AJamez: needn't?
20:51 Goddess Aqua: 03:07:584 (4) - needn`t on it
20:51 Goddess Aqua: need*
20:52 Goddess Aqua: fix
20:52 AJamez: 03:54:070 (2) - ctrl h?
20:52 AJamez: strong sound imo
20:53 Goddess Aqua: fix
20:54 AJamez: 03:59:745 (3,4) - same here strong vocal sound here
20:54 AJamez: ctrl g ^
20:55 AJamez: 04:04:611 (1) - ^
20:55 AJamez: 04:05:962 (4) - ^
20:55 AJamez: 04:06:502 (5) - ^
20:56 AJamez: 04:07:854 (3) - ^
20:56 AJamez: 04:08:665 (2) - ^
20:56 AJamez: 04:10:016 (5) - ^
20:57 AJamez: 04:17:313 (3) - ^
20:59 AJamez: 04:43:259 (4) - make this hdash?
20:59 AJamez: or no
20:59 AJamez: just edge dash
20:59 AJamez: ctrl g it
20:59 Goddess Aqua: fixed all
21:00 AJamez: 05:02:719 (4,3) - overlap
21:01 AJamez: 05:03:529 (1) -
21:01 AJamez: fix ;ast green line
21:01 AJamez: last*
21:01 AJamez: i mean
21:01 AJamez: extend the slider
21:01 AJamez: to snap it
21:02 Goddess Aqua: 05:02:719 (4,3) - what?
21:03 AJamez: 05:03:259 (3) - stack it with05:02:719 (4) - xd
21:03 Goddess Aqua: ok
21:03 AJamez: ye das all
21:03 AJamez: will post this to forum now
21:04 Goddess Aqua: stop
21:04 Goddess Aqua: waht with green line
21:04 Goddess Aqua: i not understand waht are u mean
21:04 AJamez: no just enxted the spinner up to green line
21:04 AJamez: cus object isnt snapped
21:05 Goddess Aqua: oh
21:05 Goddess Aqua: my fault
21:06 Goddess Aqua: end spinner at 05:05:286 -
21:06 Goddess Aqua: you mean it>
21:06 Goddess Aqua: ?*
21:06 AJamez: no
21:06 AJamez: end it on white tick
21:06 AJamez: make sure it's on green line
21:06 Goddess Aqua: yes
21:06 Goddess Aqua: on white
21:07 Goddess Aqua: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8939581 so?
21:07 AJamez: yes like that
21:07 Goddess Aqua: good
21:07 Goddess Aqua: my fault
really good map!
goodluck for ranked!
Kimitakari

  • Sakura Blossom
  1. 00:08:124 (4) - Из-за (5) ноты, то ты должен сделать кончик слайдера покороче чем твой текущий. Подвинь этот кончик, что красным выделено на x:432.
  2. 00:11:367 (6) - Не уж то тебе кажется, что этот слайдер во время геймплея выглядит странным? Так как ты его не перевернул на -90 градусов. Вообщем, поверни это на -90 градусов, положи его на x:100 и сделай этот слайдер вот таким.
  3. 00:25:151 (4,5) - Не кажется тебе этот паттерн трудным для новичкам? Вот эти углы, которые ты сделал мне не понравились. Сделай их вот таким. Самый козырь в том, что ты также их сделал на протяжении всей карты, что приносит неудобства при спейсинге. Пожалуйста обрати внимания на: 00:28:394 (5,6,7) - 00:33:800 (1,2) - 00:41:908 (1,2,3) - 00:43:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:45:692 (3,4,5) - 01:14:340 (2,3,4) - 01:48:394 (1,2,3) - 01:50:557 (1,2,3) ... Вообщем ты понял. Те паттерны, которые упомянул ты должен хотя бы укоротить спейсинг. Это реально приносит дискомфорт новичкам.
  4. 01:10:827 (1,2) - Спейсинг большой. Подвинь это на x:448
  5. 01:32:178 (2) - Спейсинг. x:80
  6. 01:57:584 (1,2) - Пиксель джамп. Чистый анранк. Не паникуй, вот как ты это можешь исправить. (2) ноту на x:336, потом выдели и (1), и (2), и подвинь их на x:272
  7. 02:25:421 (1,1) - 02:25:421 (1) - x:96, a 02:26:232 (1) - x:416. Спейсинг, ага.
  8. 02:30:827 (7) - Плохо сказывается этот слайдер. Практически нету движения, да и сам слайдер не совпадает с музыкой. Сделай его вот таким.
  9. 02:35:692 (7) - Спейсинг. x:112
  10. 03:08:665 до 03:16:232 - Кривой стрим и нужно подправить. Я сделал этот стрим ради тебя, чтобы ты не мучился в процессе ранкинге:
    Код
    77,264,188665,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    180,260,188935,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,272,189070,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    336,256,189205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    128,160,189475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    208,176,189610,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    288,160,189745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    395,270,190016,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    426,237,190151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    224,206,190286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    183,205,190421,2,0,L|235:142,1,66.4999982242585
    444,130,190827,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    416,128,190962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    352,112,191097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    288,112,191232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    74,129,191367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    261,256,191638,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    309,258,191773,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    368,256,191908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    412,228,192043,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    393,182,192178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    350,155,192313,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    78,255,192448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    16,208,192584,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    48,144,192719,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    112,112,192854,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    473,256,192989,2,0,L|480:336,1,66.4999982242585
    384,352,193259,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    333,354,193394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    57,257,193529,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    32,176,193665,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    112,112,193800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    208,144,193935,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    409,263,194070,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    480,262,194340,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    433,263,194475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    320,272,194611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    288,208,194746,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    352,144,194881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    384,64,195016,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    142,267,195151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    77,266,195286,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    113,267,195421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    154,267,195557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    306,267,195692,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    380,269,195827,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    421,269,195962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    463,269,196097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    247,271,196232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  11. 03:21:638 (1) - x:112
  12. 03:23:529 (5) - x:128
  13. 03:52:448 (2,3) - Пиксель джамп. Чистый анранк. Подвинь это на x:16
На этом всё. Дальше мне всё устраивает. В целом, неплохая карта, она, разумеется может попасть в ранк, если не одно но, кривой спейсинг и комбо отталкивает от этого процесса. Если честно, то я рад твоим процессом в маппинге. А отказывался моддить afraid... лишь потому, что на ранк вы, gaaraati и OneLoveOneLife не прорвётесь в ранк из-за этим причин, что я сказал на этом моде. Ладно, не буду дальше писать. Надеюсь ты понял меня. Мапай больше для отличных результатов, а играть больше даст какие-то новые паттерны для тебя и ты их можешь реализовать в процессе стиля маппинга. Желаю удачи!
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

Nelly wrote:


  • Sakura Blossom
  1. 00:08:124 (4) - Из-за (5) ноты, то ты должен сделать кончик слайдера покороче чем твой текущий. Подвинь этот кончик, что красным выделено на x:432. - Исправил
  2. 00:11:367 (6) - Не уж то тебе кажется, что этот слайдер во время геймплея выглядит странным? Так как ты его не перевернул на -90 градусов. Вообщем, поверни это на -90 градусов, положи его на x:100 и сделай этот слайдер вот таким. - Исправил
  3. 00:25:151 (4,5) - Не кажется тебе этот паттерн трудным для новичкам? Вот эти углы, которые ты сделал мне не понравились. Сделай их вот таким. Самый козырь в том, что ты также их сделал на протяжении всей карты, что приносит неудобства при спейсинге. Пожалуйста обрати внимания на: 00:28:394 (5,6,7) - 00:33:800 (1,2) - 00:41:908 (1,2,3) - 00:43:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:45:692 (3,4,5) - 01:14:340 (2,3,4) - 01:48:394 (1,2,3) - 01:50:557 (1,2,3) ... Вообщем ты понял. Те паттерны, которые упомянул ты должен хотя бы укоротить спейсинг. Это реально приносит дискомфорт новичкам. - Но это и не карта для новичков, карта была сделана как рейн, а рейны новички играть не будут, как по мне это не такой уж и сложный паттерн тем более для рейна.
  4. 01:10:827 (1,2) - Спейсинг большой. Подвинь это на x:448 - Ок
  5. 01:32:178 (2) - Спейсинг. x:80 - Ок
  6. 01:57:584 (1,2) - Пиксель джамп. Чистый анранк. Не паникуй, вот как ты это можешь исправить. (2) ноту на x:336, потом выдели и (1), и (2), и подвинь их на x:272 - Исправил
  7. 02:25:421 (1,1) - 02:25:421 (1) - x:96, a 02:26:232 (1) - x:416. Спейсинг, ага. - Исправил
  8. 02:30:827 (7) - Плохо сказывается этот слайдер. Практически нету движения, да и сам слайдер не совпадает с музыкой. Сделай его вот таким. - - Исправил
  9. 02:35:692 (7) - Спейсинг. x:112 - - Исправил
  10. 03:08:665 до 03:16:232 - Кривой стрим и нужно подправить. Я сделал этот стрим ради тебя, чтобы ты не мучился в процессе ранкинге:
    Код
    77,264,188665,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    180,260,188935,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,272,189070,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    336,256,189205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    128,160,189475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    208,176,189610,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    288,160,189745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    395,270,190016,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    426,237,190151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    224,206,190286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    183,205,190421,2,0,L|235:142,1,66.4999982242585
    444,130,190827,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    416,128,190962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    352,112,191097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    288,112,191232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    74,129,191367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    261,256,191638,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    309,258,191773,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    368,256,191908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    412,228,192043,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    393,182,192178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    350,155,192313,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    78,255,192448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    16,208,192584,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    48,144,192719,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    112,112,192854,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    473,256,192989,2,0,L|480:336,1,66.4999982242585
    384,352,193259,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    333,354,193394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    57,257,193529,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    32,176,193665,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    112,112,193800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    208,144,193935,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    409,263,194070,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    480,262,194340,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    433,263,194475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    320,272,194611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    288,208,194746,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    352,144,194881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    384,64,195016,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    142,267,195151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    77,266,195286,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    113,267,195421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    154,267,195557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    306,267,195692,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    380,269,195827,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    421,269,195962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    463,269,196097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    247,271,196232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    - Исправил
  11. 03:21:638 (1) - x:112 - Исправил
  12. 03:23:529 (5) - x:128 - Исправил
  13. 03:52:448 (2,3) - Пиксель джамп. Чистый анранк. Подвинь это на x:16 - Исправил
На этом всё. Дальше мне всё устраивает. В целом, неплохая карта, она, разумеется может попасть в ранк, если не одно но, кривой спейсинг и комбо отталкивает от этого процесса. Если честно, то я рад твоим процессом в маппинге. А отказывался моддить afraid... лишь потому, что на ранк вы, gaaraati и OneLoveOneLife не прорвётесь в ранк из-за этим причин, что я сказал на этом моде. Ладно, не буду дальше писать. Надеюсь ты понял меня. Мапай больше для отличных результатов, а играть больше даст какие-то новые паттерны для тебя и ты их можешь реализовать в процессе стиля маппинга. Желаю удачи!

Спасибо за мод и помощь!
Sanyi
Feel free to deny kudosu when you are unsatisfied with this mod.

Mod requested via ingame pm a few days ago. I don't really understand your mapping concept (dash/hyperdash usage), so i will try to point out with some examples the inconsistencies of your map (you can go through your map then and search for similar stuff). I think it would be also helpful to have a ingame chat about the map so feel free to catch me ingame.

General
  1. Your beatmap file is pretty big (>10MB, which means more than the guideline suggests) and you've got 2 unused background images in the beatmap file.
    If you don't wanna delete the 2 unused background images entirely I would suggest you two put an additional download link in the map description instead of putting them in the beatmap file. Then you've got no unused files in your beatmap file and the size of the beatmap file will be decreased.
  2. Your soft-hitnormal.wav hitsound has a delay of over 5ms whih is unrankable (unless there is a special purpose for it). You need to change the hitsound. Unfortunately I don't know much about hitsounding so I won't provide you here with a good replacement. Maybe you can take a look into (recently) ranked mapsets to find a good alternative for you.
  3. Combo colours: As it is right now, Combo colours 1-2-3 and 4-5 are so similar to each other that they are hard to separate from each other. i suggest you make it pink-green-pink-green to avoid that problem (and please use an even number of colours, that means four or six)

The examples I promised
  1. 00:05:421 (2,3) - you made this one a jump but 00:07:854 (3,4) - , 00:10:016 (2,3) - and 00:12:178 (7,1) - not, even though it would fit these one as well.
  2. 00:10:827 (5,6) - Why did you make a hyperdash here? I can't hear anything in the music that deserves a hyperdash.
  3. 00:25:151 (4,5) - , 00:27:314 (1,2,3) - you used that pretty often but pretty inconsistent too. In the first example you mapped the jump from the first fruit to the second. In the second example you mapped the jump from the second fruit to the third. The jump distance itself is also inconsistent: In the first example it is 1,51x and in the second one 1,90x. I suggest you to make it more consistent.
  4. In the part from 00:41:638 (6) - to 01:11:638 (2) - : How did you decide when to put a walkable pattern, when a dash and when a hyperdash? I can't find a concept here.

Sorry that the mod ends here for now, but I've got terrible neck pain at the moment. I will gladly talk with you ingame about your map when I am feeling better and expanding this mod to a proper mod once this map has a clear concept for me.
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

Sanyi wrote:

Feel free to deny kudosu when you are unsatisfied with this mod.

Mod requested via ingame pm a few days ago. I don't really understand your mapping concept (dash/hyperdash usage), so i will try to point out with some examples the inconsistencies of your map (you can go through your map then and search for similar stuff). I think it would be also helpful to have a ingame chat about the map so feel free to catch me ingame.

General
  1. Your beatmap file is pretty big (>10MB, which means more than the guideline suggests) and you've got 2 unused background images in the beatmap file.
    If you don't wanna delete the 2 unused background images entirely I would suggest you two put an additional download link in the map description instead of putting them in the beatmap file. Then you've got no unused files in your beatmap file and the size of the beatmap file will be decreased. - Delete
  2. Your soft-hitnormal.wav hitsound has a delay of over 5ms whih is unrankable (unless there is a special purpose for it). You need to change the hitsound. Unfortunately I don't know much about hitsounding so I won't provide you here with a good replacement. Maybe you can take a look into (recently) ranked mapsets to find a good alternative for you. - I will try it but I was take it sound from ranked map
  3. Combo colours: As it is right now, Combo colours 1-2-3 and 4-5 are so similar to each other that they are hard to separate from each other. i suggest you make it pink-green-pink-green to avoid that problem (and please use an even number of colours, that means four or six) - Okay


The examples I promised
  1. 00:05:421 (2,3) - you made this one a jump but 00:07:854 (3,4) - , 00:10:016 (2,3) - and 00:12:178 (7,1) - not, even though it would fit these one as well. - Okay
  2. 00:10:827 (5,6) - Why did you make a hyperdash here? I can't hear anything in the music that deserves a hyperdash. - start of lyrics and strong sound
  3. 00:25:151 (4,5) - , 00:27:314 (1,2,3) - you used that pretty often but pretty inconsistent too. In the first example you mapped the jump from the first fruit to the second. In the second example you mapped the jump from the second fruit to the third. The jump distance itself is also inconsistent: In the first example it is 1,51x and in the second one 1,90x. I suggest you to make it more consistent. - Different types of patterns and the different distances
  4. In the part from 00:41:638 (6) - to 01:11:638 (2) - : How did you decide when to put a walkable pattern, when a dash and when a hyperdash? I can't find a concept here. - Lyrics and sounds

Sorry that the mod ends here for now, but I've got terrible neck pain at the moment. I will gladly talk with you ingame about your map when I am feeling better and expanding this mod to a proper mod once this map has a clear concept for me.
Thanks for mods
JBHyperion
Requested in my Interesting Queue

General
  1. A lot of your inherited (green) timing points are unsnapped. I don't think it causes an issue here since they are quite minor (and early, rather than late), but something to be aware of for future maps to avoid unintended hitsounding conflicts
  2. soft-sliderslide.wav can be deleted to save file space as sliderslide hitsounds have no function in osu!catch
  3. Hitsounding is extremely basic and does not emphasise the subtle changes in the song well. Even in the first section you can hear clap sounds on 00:05:962 - 00:08:124 -00:10:286 - 00:12:448 - etc. which were ignored. Notes like 00:22:178 - 00:24:340 - 00:32:989 - etc. don't have any kind of finish hitsound to emphasise the cymbal, and even the main melody has no drum, cymbal, vocal or any kind of emphasis besides the hitnormal, which is really bland and uninteresting. Please add some hitsounds, at the very least starting with whistles on the first and third beats and claps on the second and fourth - if you'd like more guidance, there's a helpful guide here - t/306177
  4. Your slidershapes are very repetitive, almost all being either near-vertical or U-shaped, which gets very repetitive and makes different sections look and play very similarly. This gets really boring after 5 minutes, so for added variety, try using some C- or L-shaped sliders as well which will make the map much more interesting to play.
  5. Having played the map I will treat the [Sakura Blossom] difficulty as being at a [Rain] level.

Sakura Blossom
  1. 00:01:908 (5) - I don't hear any sound on the repeat here, this should be a 1/2 slider instead
  2. 00:04:340 (3,1) - Really strong vocal sound, not sure why you didn't put a jump here. This applies throughout the section since your patterning is very inconsistent. Why no emphasis on 00:07:043 (2) - (which should have the NC instead of 00:06:773 (1) - btw) - 00:09:205 (1) - either? Notes like 00:08:935 (5) - have a dash despite being noticeably weaker than those mentioned before, so this feels very strange to play
  3. 00:10:827 (5,6) - Vocal here isn't strong enough to support a hyper when stronger sounds prior to this didn't even have a dash
  4. 00:23:800 (1) - Really could do with splitting this into 1/2 slider and circle, the downbeat sound is so strong (could easily support a hyper) and you gave it no emphasis at all ):
  5. 00:25:962 (1,2) - I don't understand your NC usage in this section at all... What are you trying to emphasise? They just seem randomly and inconsistently placed to me. One NC each downbeat (long white tick) would fit much better
  6. 00:35:962 (1,2,3) - Awkward antiflow pattern involving dash into small movement in the opposite direction. Either place (3) on the right hand side of (2), or tilt (2) to the left to improve flow
  7. 00:41:367 (5,6) - Hyperdash and NC would better emphasise the downbeat cymbal sound and the introduction of the vocal rhythm
  8. 00:42:448 (4,5) - Objects are too close together, creates a strange break in flow. Try separating them
  9. 00:43:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The music is so calm here, strong antiflowing 1/4 dashes are really excessive imo. They're bigger than the ones you used previously at 00:32:719 (1,2,3) - etc. despite the music being much calmer. Walking or small dash patterns would fit better here
  10. 00:49:205 (5,1) - Unexpected hyper given the low strength of the sound here and the fact you didn't use any prior to this in the calm vocal section
  11. 00:59:475 (3) - Same as 00:23:800 (1) - this tail sound deserves some dash emphasis for the strong vocal
  12. 01:00:286 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Great chance to use some rhythm variation for the 1/4+3/4 vocals and make the map more interesting. Example: https://puu.sh/xnXOE/4de83fe3e5.jpg
  13. 01:04:205 - Adding a note here for the vocal triplet would add more variety also
  14. 01:07:584 (1,2,3,4,5) - Some variation in direction would make this flow better, currently you just tap your way from one side to the other which is weird to play and look at
  15. 01:14:070 (1,2,3,4) - Try and avoid such a strong antiflow pattern after the previous hypers, especially considering the song is so calm. Ctrl+H 01:14:340 (2,3,4) - and move to the right would play more smoothly leading into the kiai
  16. 01:17:854 (5,6) - Missing hyper going by your patterning later on in the kiai
  17. 01:20:016 (1,2) - 01:22:719 (7,1) - more misplaced NCs for vocal emphasis
  18. 01:26:773 (4) - Poor emphasis for this strong vocal sound by leaving it as a sliderend, try splitting into two circles and making a jump
  19. 01:27:854 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:07:584 (1,2,3,4,5) -
  20. 01:55:016 (2,3) - Really strong jump compared to the previous 01:48:529 (2,3) - 01:50:692 (2,3) - is easy to miss here
  21. 02:03:529 (4,1) - Could add a jump here for cymbal emphasis at the start of the new section
  22. 02:30:827 (7,1) - Misplaced hyper and NC, the strong sound you want to be emphasising is 02:31:908 (2) - instead so put the NC and jump there
  23. 02:39:340 - 02:41:502 - 02:47:989 - 02:51:232 - etc. - Notes could be added here for the vocal triplets to add more variety, the constant 1/2 usage gets very boring
  24. 02:42:448 (4,1) - Lacking jump emphasis for the strong sound, could add a jump
  25. 02:52:989 (4,1) - ^ As above, could use a hyper here for emphasis of the kiai midpoint
  26. 03:15:692 (4,1,2,3) - Compact stream can easily cause flowbreaks, try a curved pattern instead
  27. 03:11:908 (3,1) - 03:12:854 (3,4) - 03:13:394 (2,3) - 03:13:935 (3,4) - 03:15:016 (3,4) - 03:15:557 (3,4) - Poor NC placement emphasises the weak notes after the jump rather than the strong ones, these would each be better if the NC was swapped
  28. 03:30:286 (1,2) - Uncomfortable flowstop into hyper, but you also didn't map the more important red tick vocal sound, and ended the slider 03:31:367 (3) - 1/2 a beat earlier than the vocal finishes
  29. 03:41:908 (2) - 03:44:205 (4) - etc. - More places where you could add 1/4 vocal notes, so much 1/2 is just far too plain for a song of this length
  30. 03:55:962 (1) - Separate into two circles to give the vocal sound on the tail jump emphasis, hopefully you get the idea by now
I won't go any further because the last kiai sections are more of the same and now that you (hopefully) know what to do you can improve them yourself. This is not a bad map - I like how you used U-shaped sliders to give more movement on the low-BPM, and the 1/4 section after the first kiai is cool. Unfortunately, the rest of the map is rather uninteresting to play and the lack of hitsounds, inconsistent jump and NC placement sadly reduce the quality of the final product.

It's great to see more people working on easier marathons and the map has potential if you're willing to put in some work to try and realise it. I hope my suggestions helped you and you don't give up! (:
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

JBHyperion wrote:

Requested in my Interesting Queue

General
  1. A lot of your inherited (green) timing points are unsnapped. I don't think it causes an issue here since they are quite minor (and early, rather than late), but something to be aware of for future maps to avoid unintended hitsounding conflicts - Okay
  2. soft-sliderslide.wav can be deleted to save file space as sliderslide hitsounds have no function in osu!catch - Oh, thanks
  3. Hitsounding is extremely basic and does not emphasise the subtle changes in the song well. Even in the first section you can hear clap sounds on 00:05:962 - 00:08:124 -00:10:286 - 00:12:448 - etc. which were ignored. Notes like 00:22:178 - 00:24:340 - 00:32:989 - etc. don't have any kind of finish hitsound to emphasise the cymbal, and even the main melody has no drum, cymbal, vocal or any kind of emphasis besides the hitnormal, which is really bland and uninteresting. Please add some hitsounds, at the very least starting with whistles on the first and third beats and claps on the second and fourth - if you'd like more guidance, there's a helpful guide here - t/306177 - Yet I not did hitsounds, but soon i make him
  4. Your slidershapes are very repetitive, almost all being either near-vertical or U-shaped, which gets very repetitive and makes different sections look and play very similarly. This gets really boring after 5 minutes, so for added variety, try using some C- or L-shaped sliders as well which will make the map much more interesting to play. - I try
  5. Having played the map I will treat the [Sakura Blossom] difficulty as being at a [Rain] level. - Yes, it`s rain

Sakura Blossom
  1. 00:01:908 (5) - I don't hear any sound on the repeat here, this should be a 1/2 slider instead - Oh yes, my fault
  2. 00:04:340 (3,1) - Really strong vocal sound, not sure why you didn't put a jump here. This applies throughout the section since your patterning is very inconsistent. Why no emphasis on 00:07:043 (2) - (which should have the NC instead of 00:06:773 (1) - btw) - 00:09:205 (1) - either? Notes like 00:08:935 (5) - have a dash despite being noticeably weaker than those mentioned before, so this feels very strange to play - Okay
  3. 00:10:827 (5,6) - Vocal here isn't strong enough to support a hyper when stronger sounds prior to this didn't even have a dash - Done
  4. 00:23:800 (1) - Really could do with splitting this into 1/2 slider and circle, the downbeat sound is so strong (could easily support a hyper) and you gave it no emphasis at all ): - Done
  5. 00:25:962 (1,2) - I don't understand your NC usage in this section at all... What are you trying to emphasise? They just seem randomly and inconsistently placed to me. One NC each downbeat (long white tick) would fit much better - Done
  6. 00:35:962 (1,2,3) - Awkward antiflow pattern involving dash into small movement in the opposite direction. Either place (3) on the right hand side of (2), or tilt (2) to the left to improve flow - Done
  7. 00:41:367 (5,6) - Hyperdash and NC would better emphasise the downbeat cymbal sound and the introduction of the vocal rhythm - Done
  8. 00:42:448 (4,5) - Objects are too close together, creates a strange break in flow. Try separating them - Done
  9. 00:43:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The music is so calm here, strong antiflowing 1/4 dashes are really excessive imo. They're bigger than the ones you used previously at 00:32:719 (1,2,3) - etc. despite the music being much calmer. Walking or small dash patterns would fit better here - Done
  10. 00:49:205 (5,1) - Unexpected hyper given the low strength of the sound here and the fact you didn't use any prior to this in the calm vocal section - fix
  11. 00:59:475 (3) - Same as 00:23:800 (1) - this tail sound deserves some dash emphasis for the strong vocal - Done
  12. 01:00:286 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Great chance to use some rhythm variation for the 1/4+3/4 vocals and make the map more interesting. Example: https://puu.sh/xnXOE/4de83fe3e5.jpg - Thanks for good pattern!
  13. 01:04:205 - Adding a note here for the vocal triplet would add more variety also - Done
  14. 01:07:584 (1,2,3,4,5) - Some variation in direction would make this flow better, currently you just tap your way from one side to the other which is weird to play and look at - Done
  15. 01:14:070 (1,2,3,4) - Try and avoid such a strong antiflow pattern after the previous hypers, especially considering the song is so calm. Ctrl+H 01:14:340 (2,3,4) - and move to the right would play more smoothly leading into the kiai - Done
  16. 01:17:854 (5,6) - Missing hyper going by your patterning later on in the kiai - Done
  17. 01:20:016 (1,2) - 01:22:719 (7,1) - more misplaced NCs for vocal emphasis - Done
  18. 01:26:773 (4) - Poor emphasis for this strong vocal sound by leaving it as a sliderend, try splitting into two circles and making a jump - Done
  19. 01:27:854 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:07:584 (1,2,3,4,5) - Done
  20. 01:55:016 (2,3) - Really strong jump compared to the previous 01:48:529 (2,3) - 01:50:692 (2,3) - is easy to miss here - Done
  21. 02:03:529 (4,1) - Could add a jump here for cymbal emphasis at the start of the new section - Done
  22. 02:30:827 (7,1) - Misplaced hyper and NC, the strong sound you want to be emphasising is 02:31:908 (2) - instead so put the NC and jump there - Done
  23. 02:39:340 - 02:41:502 - 02:47:989 - 02:51:232 - etc. - Notes could be added here for the vocal triplets to add more variety, the constant 1/2 usage gets very boring - Done
  24. 02:42:448 (4,1) - Lacking jump emphasis for the strong sound, could add a jump - Done
  25. 02:52:989 (4,1) - ^ As above, could use a hyper here for emphasis of the kiai midpoint - Done
  26. 03:15:692 (4,1,2,3) - Compact stream can easily cause flowbreaks, try a curved pattern instead - Done
  27. 03:11:908 (3,1) - 03:12:854 (3,4) - 03:13:394 (2,3) - 03:13:935 (3,4) - 03:15:016 (3,4) - 03:15:557 (3,4) - Poor NC placement emphasises the weak notes after the jump rather than the strong ones, these would each be better if the NC was swapped - Done
  28. 03:30:286 (1,2) - Uncomfortable flowstop into hyper, but you also didn't map the more important red tick vocal sound, and ended the slider 03:31:367 (3) - 1/2 a beat earlier than the vocal finishes - Done
  29. 03:41:908 (2) - 03:44:205 (4) - etc. - More places where you could add 1/4 vocal notes, so much 1/2 is just far too plain for a song of this length
  30. 03:55:962 (1) - Separate into two circles to give the vocal sound on the tail jump emphasis, hopefully you get the idea by now - Done
I won't go any further because the last kiai sections are more of the same and now that you (hopefully) know what to do you can improve them yourself. This is not a bad map - I like how you used U-shaped sliders to give more movement on the low-BPM, and the 1/4 section after the first kiai is cool. Unfortunately, the rest of the map is rather uninteresting to play and the lack of hitsounds, inconsistent jump and NC placement sadly reduce the quality of the final product.

It's great to see more people working on easier marathons and the map has potential if you're willing to put in some work to try and realise it. I hope my suggestions helped you and you don't give up! (:
Thanks for mod!
Celektus
don't give this kds

here's the Code for the hitsounded diff use this tool to copy the hitsounds to your diff and keep the diff somewhere in case you change something: t/131540

also I would suggest not muting this since I hitsounded that hat 03:22:179 (2) -
and I would change the dark green you have to the color I used in my HS diff since that seems more fitting imo

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Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

Celektus wrote:

don't give this kds

here's the Code for the hitsounded diff use this tool to copy the hitsounds to your diff and keep the diff somewhere in case you change something: t/131540

also I would suggest not muting this since I hitsounded that hat 03:22:179 (2) -
and I would change the dark green you have to the color I used in my HS diff since that seems more fitting imo

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195,265,265962,1,8,0:2:0:0:
195,265,266502,5,2,0:0:0:0:
195,265,267043,1,8,0:2:0:0:
195,265,268124,1,8,0:2:0:0:
195,265,268664,5,2,0:0:0:0:
158,104,268935,1,2,0:3:0:0:
195,265,269205,1,8,0:2:0:0:
132,145,269475,1,2,0:3:0:0:
195,265,269745,1,12,0:2:0:0:
195,265,270286,1,12,0:2:0:0:
195,265,270556,1,8,0:2:0:0:
195,265,270691,1,8,0:2:0:0:
195,265,270826,5,6,0:0:0:0:
195,265,271367,1,8,0:2:0:0:
195,265,272448,1,8,0:2:0:0:
195,265,272989,5,2,0:0:0:0:
195,265,273530,1,8,0:2:0:0:
195,265,274611,1,8,0:2:0:0:
195,265,275151,5,2,0:0:0:0:
195,265,275692,1,8,0:2:0:0:
195,265,276773,1,8,0:2:0:0:
195,265,277313,5,2,0:0:0:0:
195,265,277854,1,8,0:2:0:0:
195,265,278394,1,2,0:0:0:0:
195,265,278935,1,8,0:2:0:0:
195,265,279475,5,6,0:0:0:0:
195,265,280016,1,8,0:2:0:0:
195,265,281097,1,8,0:2:0:0:
70,109,283800,5,6,0:0:0:0:
260,170,284341,1,8,1:2:0:0:
260,170,285422,1,8,1:2:0:0:
105,140,285962,5,2,0:0:0:0:
260,170,286503,1,8,1:2:0:0:
131,188,287314,1,2,0:3:0:0:
260,170,287584,1,8,1:2:0:0:
105,140,288125,5,2,0:0:0:0:
260,170,288665,1,8,1:2:0:0:
260,170,289746,1,8,1:2:0:0:
105,140,290287,5,2,0:0:0:0:
260,170,290827,1,8,1:2:0:0:
181,95,291368,1,2,0:3:0:0:
260,170,291908,1,10,1:2:0:0:
260,170,292179,1,8,1:2:0:0:
260,170,292314,1,8,1:2:0:0:
105,140,292449,5,6,0:0:0:0:
260,170,292989,1,8,1:2:0:0:
260,170,294070,1,8,1:2:0:0:
105,140,294611,5,2,0:0:0:0:
260,170,295151,1,8,1:2:0:0:
157,167,295962,1,2,0:3:0:0:
260,170,296232,1,8,1:2:0:0:
157,167,296503,1,2,0:3:0:0:
105,140,296773,5,2,0:0:0:0:
260,170,297313,1,8,1:2:0:0:
260,170,298394,1,8,1:2:0:0:
105,140,298935,5,2,0:0:0:0:
260,170,299206,1,8,1:2:0:0:
260,170,299476,1,8,1:2:0:0:
260,170,300017,1,12,1:2:0:0:
260,170,300422,1,8,1:2:0:0:
260,170,300557,1,8,1:2:0:0:
260,170,300827,1,8,1:3:0:0:
137,131,301097,5,6,0:2:0:0:
137,131,303259,1,2,0:2:0:0:
Thanks a lot!
Ponchiwi
MOD
2017-09-02 15:15 Goddess Aqua: hello
2017-09-02 15:37 Goddess Aqua: hi
2017-09-02 15:38 Goddess Aqua: can we now doing NC mod?
2017-09-02 15:38 Ponchiwi: yep
2017-09-02 15:38 Goddess Aqua: nice c:
2017-09-02 15:38 Ponchiwi: send np
2017-09-02 15:38 Goddess Aqua: ok
2017-09-02 15:38 Goddess Aqua: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1377774 ClariS - Hirahira Hirara]
2017-09-02 15:38 Ponchiwi: is a kind of like platter or light rain?
2017-09-02 15:39 Goddess Aqua: light raib
2017-09-02 15:39 Goddess Aqua: rain*
2017-09-02 15:39 Ponchiwi: xD
2017-09-02 15:39 Ponchiwi: raib
2017-09-02 15:39 Ponchiwi: kk
2017-09-02 15:39 Goddess Aqua: :D
2017-09-02 15:39 Goddess Aqua: missclick
2017-09-02 15:39 Ponchiwi: let me test it
2017-09-02 15:40 Ponchiwi: and after do the mod
2017-09-02 15:40 Ponchiwi: at least the map is relax
2017-09-02 15:40 Goddess Aqua: you mod only NC?
2017-09-02 15:40 Ponchiwi: oh
2017-09-02 15:41 Ponchiwi: you want a mod of New combos?
2017-09-02 15:41 Goddess Aqua: if only nc - it`s good
2017-09-02 15:41 Goddess Aqua: yes
2017-09-02 15:41 Ponchiwi: ;-;
2017-09-02 15:41 Ponchiwi: why'
2017-09-02 15:41 Ponchiwi: ?
2017-09-02 15:41 Ponchiwi: okay :3
2017-09-02 15:44 Goddess Aqua: I saw your NC mod on a lot of map
2017-09-02 15:44 Goddess Aqua: new combo it`s my problem sometimes :D
2017-09-02 15:44 Ponchiwi: nice map :D
2017-09-02 15:45 Goddess Aqua: good plya owo
2017-09-02 15:45 Goddess Aqua: play*
2017-09-02 15:45 Goddess Aqua: you very good
2017-09-02 15:45 Ponchiwi: nah xD
2017-09-02 15:45 Goddess Aqua: imo yes :D
2017-09-02 15:45 Ponchiwi: i had a lot of misstakes
2017-09-02 15:45 Ponchiwi: ok, let's begin
2017-09-02 15:45 Goddess Aqua: okay
2017-09-02 15:46 Ponchiwi: 00:02:719 (7) - why you leave this note near ?
2017-09-02 15:46 Ponchiwi: is the finish of the first secction, and i guess you should move more far
2017-09-02 15:47 Goddess Aqua: okay, done
2017-09-02 15:48 Ponchiwi: and also i think you must put NC in this note
2017-09-02 15:49 Goddess Aqua: On (7)?
2017-09-02 15:49 Ponchiwi: yep
2017-09-02 15:49 Goddess Aqua: okay
2017-09-02 15:50 Ponchiwi: oh wait, before continuing
2017-09-02 15:50 Ponchiwi: you want to do this first part, relax , right?
2017-09-02 15:50 Ponchiwi: but, in my opinion is too relax ;-;
2017-09-02 15:51 Goddess Aqua: I not want doing this map very hard
2017-09-02 15:51 Ponchiwi: for example here 00:04:881 (1) - have to be a dash
2017-09-02 15:51 Goddess Aqua: light rain(maybe very light :D)
2017-09-02 15:51 Ponchiwi: yep, i know
2017-09-02 15:51 Ponchiwi: but at least not so realx xD
2017-09-02 15:51 Ponchiwi: you understand me,? uwu
2017-09-02 15:52 Goddess Aqua: yes
2017-09-02 15:52 Ponchiwi: but if you play it
2017-09-02 15:53 Ponchiwi: you can catch it without push the dash
2017-09-02 15:53 Goddess Aqua: i understand
2017-09-02 15:53 Goddess Aqua: okay i added dash
2017-09-02 15:53 Goddess Aqua: ctrl+g - good?
2017-09-02 15:53 Goddess Aqua: 00:04:881 (1) - ctrl+g
2017-09-02 15:53 Ponchiwi: so , you have to make evident strong sounds, new sections start, finish etc
2017-09-02 15:54 Ponchiwi: umm
2017-09-02 15:55 Ponchiwi: and if you do something like you did here 00:07:043 (1) -
2017-09-02 15:55 Ponchiwi: for the voice
2017-09-02 15:55 Ponchiwi: :3 would be great
2017-09-02 15:56 Goddess Aqua: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9001364 how this?
2017-09-02 15:57 Ponchiwi: nuu
2017-09-02 15:57 Ponchiwi: https://puu.sh/xpYyf/02b0d5e9da.jpg
2017-09-02 15:57 Ponchiwi: like this
2017-09-02 15:57 Goddess Aqua: big slider?
2017-09-02 15:57 Ponchiwi: and after, you add a note
2017-09-02 15:57 Ponchiwi: 00:05:692 (2) -
2017-09-02 15:57 Ponchiwi: yep
2017-09-02 15:58 Ponchiwi: 00:04:881 (1) - x:432
2017-09-02 15:59 Goddess Aqua: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9001393 um :D
2017-09-02 15:59 Ponchiwi: yeah :D
2017-09-02 16:00 Ponchiwi: 00:13:529 (4) - add dash here maybe?
2017-09-02 16:01 Goddess Aqua: but sounds not strong
2017-09-02 16:02 Ponchiwi: but is the beginning of a new stanza
2017-09-02 16:03 Goddess Aqua: it`s too true
2017-09-02 16:03 Goddess Aqua: can you say me x:###?
2017-09-02 16:03 Ponchiwi: well
2017-09-02 16:04 Ponchiwi: you could fixed it for yourself xD
2017-09-02 16:04 Ponchiwi: i'm just telling you the sugeration
2017-09-02 16:05 Ponchiwi: is your style mapping
2017-09-02 16:05 Goddess Aqua: okay
2017-09-02 16:05 Goddess Aqua: yes
2017-09-02 16:05 Goddess Aqua: what with new combo?
2017-09-02 16:05 Ponchiwi: i'm checking that
2017-09-02 16:06 Ponchiwi: well.. i start the NC mod
2017-09-02 16:06 Ponchiwi: x.x
2017-09-02 16:06 Goddess Aqua: thanks a lot
2017-09-02 16:06 Goddess Aqua: <3
2017-09-02 16:08 Ponchiwi: 00:28:665 (9) - NC
2017-09-02 16:09 Ponchiwi: 00:37:313 (9) - NC
2017-09-02 16:09 Goddess Aqua: added
2017-09-02 16:09 Ponchiwi: in some part you do it
2017-09-02 16:09 Ponchiwi: and in others part you don't do it
2017-09-02 16:09 Ponchiwi: why? xD
2017-09-02 16:09 Goddess Aqua: 00:38:124 (1) - this NC delete?
2017-09-02 16:09 Goddess Aqua: :D
2017-09-02 16:10 Goddess Aqua: NC my big problem
2017-09-02 16:10 Ponchiwi: yep
2017-09-02 16:10 Ponchiwi: do it
2017-09-02 16:10 Ponchiwi: 00:41:908 (1) - Delete NC
2017-09-02 16:11 Ponchiwi: 00:45:962 (5) - Add
2017-09-02 16:11 Ponchiwi: And delete the next note
2017-09-02 16:11 Ponchiwi: 00:47:854 (1) - Delete
2017-09-02 16:11 Goddess Aqua: done
2017-09-02 16:11 Ponchiwi: 00:48:124 (7) - Add
2017-09-02 16:12 Ponchiwi: 00:58:394 (1) - Delete
2017-09-02 16:12 Ponchiwi: 00:58:935 (7) - Add
2017-09-02 16:14 Ponchiwi: 01:00:286 (5) - Delete
2017-09-02 16:14 Ponchiwi: 01:01:097 (7) - Add
2017-09-02 16:14 Ponchiwi: 01:05:421 (6) - Add
2017-09-02 16:14 Ponchiwi: 01:06:232 (1) - Delte
2017-09-02 16:15 Ponchiwi: 01:18:394 (7) - Delete
2017-09-02 16:15 Ponchiwi: no no
2017-09-02 16:15 Ponchiwi: haha add*
2017-09-02 16:15 Goddess Aqua: and next delete
2017-09-02 16:15 Goddess Aqua: ?
2017-09-02 16:15 Ponchiwi: Yeah
2017-09-02 16:16 Goddess Aqua: done
2017-09-02 16:16 Ponchiwi: 01:20:016 (1) - delete
2017-09-02 16:16 Ponchiwi: 01:20:557 (7) - add
2017-09-02 16:16 Ponchiwi: 01:27:043 (5) - Add
2017-09-02 16:16 Ponchiwi: 01:27:854 (1) - Delete
2017-09-02 16:16 Ponchiwi: 01:31:367 (5) - Add
2017-09-02 16:17 Ponchiwi: 01:32:178 (1) - Delete
2017-09-02 16:17 Ponchiwi: 01:32:989 (3) - delete
2017-09-02 16:17 Ponchiwi: 01:33:529 (5) - Add
2017-09-02 16:17 Ponchiwi: 01:34:340 (1) - delte
2017-09-02 16:17 Ponchiwi: 01:37:584 (1) - delete
2017-09-02 16:18 Ponchiwi: 01:37:854 (6) - add
2017-09-02 16:18 Ponchiwi: 01:41:367 (1) - delete
2017-09-02 16:18 Ponchiwi: 01:42:178 (6) - Add
2017-09-02 16:18 Ponchiwi: 01:42:989 (1) - delete
2017-09-02 16:19 Ponchiwi: 01:48:394 (1) - delete
2017-09-02 16:19 Goddess Aqua: (You can write A-add and D-delete)
2017-09-02 16:19 Ponchiwi: i guess is better
2017-09-02 16:19 Ponchiwi: yeah xD
2017-09-02 16:19 Goddess Aqua: :D
2017-09-02 16:19 Ponchiwi: 01:48:935 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:20 Ponchiwi: 01:49:205 (7) - a
2017-09-02 16:20 Ponchiwi: 01:50:557 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:21 Ponchiwi: 01:50:827 (5) - d
2017-09-02 16:21 Ponchiwi: 01:51:097 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:21 Ponchiwi: 01:51:908 (5) - a
2017-09-02 16:21 Ponchiwi: 01:54:340 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:21 Ponchiwi: 01:55:421 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:22 Ponchiwi: 01:57:043 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:22 Ponchiwi: 01:57:313 (5) - a
2017-09-02 16:22 Ponchiwi: 01:57:584 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:22 Ponchiwi: 01:59:205 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:22 Ponchiwi: 01:59:475 (5) - a
2017-09-02 16:22 Ponchiwi: 01:59:746 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:23 Ponchiwi: 02:00:557 (5) - a
2017-09-02 16:23 Ponchiwi: 02:07:854 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:23 Ponchiwi: 02:08:124 (5) - a
2017-09-02 16:23 Ponchiwi: 02:10:016 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:23 Ponchiwi: 02:10:286 (6) - a
2017-09-02 16:23 Ponchiwi: 02:14:611 (5) - a
2017-09-02 16:24 Ponchiwi: 02:18:665 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:24 Ponchiwi: 02:18:935 (9) - a
2017-09-02 16:24 Ponchiwi: 02:19:746 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:24 Ponchiwi: 02:20:827 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:24 Ponchiwi: 02:21:097 (5) - a
2017-09-02 16:24 Ponchiwi: 02:21:908 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:25 Ponchiwi: 02:24:340 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:25 Ponchiwi: 02:26:232 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:25 Ponchiwi: 02:27:313 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:25 Ponchiwi: 02:27:584 (6) - a
2017-09-02 16:25 Ponchiwi: 02:27:854 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:25 Ponchiwi: 02:31:638 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:25 Ponchiwi: 02:31:908 (2) - a
2017-09-02 16:26 Ponchiwi: 02:32:989 (4) - d
2017-09-02 16:26 Ponchiwi: 02:34:070 (6) - a
2017-09-02 16:26 Ponchiwi: 02:37:043 (5) - d
2017-09-02 16:27 Ponchiwi: 02:48:935 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:27 Ponchiwi: 02:49:205 (9) - a
2017-09-02 16:27 Ponchiwi: 02:51:097 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:27 Ponchiwi: 03:03:529 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:27 Ponchiwi: 03:04:340 (6) - a
2017-09-02 16:27 Ponchiwi: 03:06:502 (5) - a
2017-09-02 16:27 Ponchiwi: 03:06:773 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:28 Ponchiwi: 03:09:746 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:28 Ponchiwi: 03:10:827 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:28 Ponchiwi: 03:11:908 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:28 Ponchiwi: 03:12:989 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:29 Ponchiwi: 03:15:151 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:29 Ponchiwi: 03:17:313 (6) - a
2017-09-02 16:29 Ponchiwi: 03:18:124 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:29 Ponchiwi: 03:19:475 (8) - a
2017-09-02 16:29 Ponchiwi: 03:22:448 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:30 Ponchiwi: 03:25:962 (5) - a
2017-09-02 16:30 Ponchiwi: 03:26:232 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:30 Ponchiwi: 03:28:124 (9) - a
2017-09-02 16:30 Ponchiwi: 03:28:394 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:30 Ponchiwi: 03:29:746 (7) - a
2017-09-02 16:30 Ponchiwi: 03:30:286 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:30 Ponchiwi: 03:32:178 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:30 Ponchiwi: 03:32:448 (8) - a
2017-09-02 16:30 Ponchiwi: 03:33:529 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:31 Ponchiwi: 03:36:773 (6) - a
2017-09-02 16:31 Ponchiwi: 03:42:719 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:31 Ponchiwi: 03:43:259 (4) - a
2017-09-02 16:31 Ponchiwi: 03:44:340 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:31 Ponchiwi: 03:45:421 (7) - a
2017-09-02 16:31 Ponchiwi: 03:50:827 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:32 Ponchiwi: 03:53:800 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:32 Ponchiwi: 03:54:070 (8) - a
2017-09-02 16:32 Ponchiwi: 03:55:962 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:32 Ponchiwi: 03:56:232 (6) - a
2017-09-02 16:32 Ponchiwi: 03:57:854 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:32 Ponchiwi: 03:58:124 (7) - a
2017-09-02 16:32 Ponchiwi: no no
2017-09-02 16:32 Ponchiwi: the last dont add it
2017-09-02 16:33 Ponchiwi: in the next slider do it
2017-09-02 16:33 Goddess Aqua: 03:58:394 (8) - a?
2017-09-02 16:33 Ponchiwi: yep
2017-09-02 16:33 Ponchiwi: 03:59:205 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:33 Goddess Aqua: okay
2017-09-02 16:33 Ponchiwi: 04:08:394 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:33 Ponchiwi: 04:09:205 (6) - a
2017-09-02 16:33 Ponchiwi: 04:15:692 (6) - a
2017-09-02 16:34 Ponchiwi: 04:16:502 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:34 Ponchiwi: 04:17:854 (6) - a
2017-09-02 16:34 Ponchiwi: 04:18:935 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:34 Ponchiwi: 04:20:016 (5) - a
2017-09-02 16:34 Ponchiwi: 04:21:097 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:34 Ponchiwi: 04:22:178 (5) - a
2017-09-02 16:34 Ponchiwi: 04:22:989 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:34 Ponchiwi: 04:26:232 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:34 Ponchiwi: 04:26:502 (9) - a
2017-09-02 16:35 Ponchiwi: 04:28:665 (7) - a
2017-09-02 16:35 Ponchiwi: 04:29:205 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:35 Ponchiwi: 04:45:692 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:35 Ponchiwi: 04:47:854 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:35 Ponchiwi: 04:48:124 (6) - a
2017-09-02 16:35 Ponchiwi: 04:48:394 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:36 Ponchiwi: 04:51:638 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:36 Ponchiwi: 04:52:719 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:37 Ponchiwi: 04:54:340 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:37 Ponchiwi: 04:54:611 (6) - a
2017-09-02 16:37 Ponchiwi: 04:54:881 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:37 Ponchiwi: 04:56:502 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:37 Ponchiwi: 04:56:773 (6) - a
2017-09-02 16:37 Ponchiwi: 04:57:043 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:38 Ponchiwi: 05:02:989 (1) - d
2017-09-02 16:38 Ponchiwi: 05:03:259 (7) - a
2017-09-02 16:38 Ponchiwi: it's all :D
2017-09-02 16:38 Goddess Aqua: thanks a lot owo
Sorceress
Mod request from PM

[
Sakura Blossom
]
  1. 00:08:124 (3) - There's a clear vocal and a slight piano sound on 00:08:394 - so I'd suggest to make this slider repeat there instead
  2. 00:11:367 (6) - Same as above, make this repeat on 00:11:638 -
  3. 00:15:692 (4,5,6) - There's some very strong vocals here that the current timeline misses a bit. I'd start with deleting 00:15:962 (5) - as I don't really hear anything at 00:15:962 - Then make 00:15:692 (4) - a 1/1 slider ending at 00:16:232 - Then move 00:16:773 (5) - back half a beat to 00:16:502 - and then add a note at 00:17:313 (6) - It would be quite straightforward to make 00:15:692 (4) - a C shaped slider and then have a dash to 00:16:502 (5) - at around x:352 and then maybe put 00:17:313 (6) - at around x:336. I think that should fit with the style of your map
  4. The comboing here seems a little off around here. I'd NC on 00:11:367 (6) - 00:13:529 (4) - 00:15:692 (4) - and then remove the NCs on 00:12:448 (1) - 00:14:611 (1) -
  5. 00:23:800 (4) - Distance to this feels just a bit too low, try moving it to a bit more left to around x:192
  6. 00:43:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - There's quite a few direction changes in this short bit and it feels a little complicated compared to the rest of the difficulty. I'd recommend moving 00:44:070 (4,5,6) - to x:432 so it flows on from 00:43:800 (3) - Then select the head of 00:44:611 (1) - and move it to x:224 so the distance from 00:44:340 (6) - is still the same
  7. 00:46:773 - Vocal and piano sound here, I'd rework this part to include a note here
  8. 00:47:313 (4,5,6,1) - Emphasis seems to be in the wrong place here. The distance is greatest to 00:47:854 (6) - yet 00:47:584 (5) - is a stronger beat and 00:48:124 (1) - an even stronger beat. I'd rework this part to have a lower distance to 00:47:854 (6) - and a dash to 00:48:124 (1) -
  9. 00:50:286 - This is a fairly strong downbeat so I would recommend not ending a slider here. I'd shorten 00:49:746 (1) - to end at 00:50:016 - and add a new note on 00:50:286 - with a dash to it
  10. 00:52:448 (1) - This hyper is quite strong, I'd nerf it just a little to about x:96 to make the movement afterwards a little easier
  11. 00:54:340 (2) - This also ends on a noticeable downbeat worthy of a dash to it, I'd make this in to individual notes
  12. 01:00:557 - Quite a strong sound missed here, I'd start 01:00:421 (5) - here and add a note back in at 01:00:421 - to replace the old slider head
  13. 01:01:638 - Same as above
  14. 01:05:421 (1) - I'd make this a repeater for the vocal and piano on 01:05:692 -
  15. 01:10:827 (1) - Remove the NC here and NC at 01:11:908 (3) - instead
  16. 01:24:340 (6) - This vertical slider feels a little out of place to me, I'd try curving it a bit
  17. 01:29:205 (1) - I'd make this repeat too
  18. 01:42:178 (1) - I'd rework this to include a note on 01:42:448 -
  19. 01:57:584 (2) - Distance feels just a little high to this, I'd recommend nerfing it by a grid space or so
  20. 02:16:232 (1) - Remove the NC here and add one at 02:16:773 (3) -
  21. 02:17:313 (5) - Again I think this would be worth reworking to include a note at 02:17:584 -
  22. 02:18:665 (1) - Remove this NC
  23. 02:22:719 (1) - I'd end this at 02:22:989 - and add a new slider starting on 02:23:259 - ending at 02:23:529 (2) -
  24. 02:44:881 (1) - Make a repeater?
  25. 02:45:962 (3) - Note at 02:46:232 -
  26. 03:42:178 - I think a note here would be a good fit
  27. 04:12:448 (1,2,3,4) - I'd space these out a little more just to make the movement a bit more comfortable
  28. 04:17:854 (1) - Get this repeating on that sweet red tick
  29. 04:22:178 (1) - Maybe hyper to this? It feels like 04:20:016 (1,2,3,4) - is building up to it
  30. 04:41:638 (1) - Repeat on the red tick
Hope this is helpful!
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