Easy
00:28:928 - This part feels so empty instead using 2/1 slider here 00:27:881 (3) - why not use 2 1/1 sliders to emphasize guitar feels much better this way when playing.
Hard
00:18:637 (2,3) - 00:20:032 (2,3) - since 00:18:812 (3,3) - this 2 beats are strong why not increase the ds between 00:18:637 (2) - and 00:18:812 (3) - they are as strong as this 00:18:114 (1,1) -
Light Insane
00:01:370 - -> 00:12:532 - Let's talk about sections a bit. The timestamps I linked here form one section, which is similar to the rhythms used after 00:12:532 -
Now, what I'd like you to focus on is what these two sections have in common and what they don't...
00:02:765 (1,2) - Imo your choice to map the first section with 1/2 slider and circle instead of 1/1 slider isn't the best. You may be emphasizing guitar there but but you didn't do that here 00:16:544 (1) - and there. For this rythm players will still focus on the rhythm used for the previous patterns, so you should do something that satisfies both rhythms.
Now, what I'd like you to focus on is what these two sections have in common and what they don't...
00:02:765 (1,2) - Imo your choice to map the first section with 1/2 slider and circle instead of 1/1 slider isn't the best. You may be emphasizing guitar there but but you didn't do that here 00:16:544 (1) - and there. For this rythm players will still focus on the rhythm used for the previous patterns, so you should do something that satisfies both rhythms.
vanucik's Expert
00:10:963 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 00:13:404 (5,6,7) - this is highly personal, but instead of constant DS'd lines I would have went for stacks instead. On this part doing straight ahead jumps is a lot harsher than doing back and forth movements.
00:22:300 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - kinda the same ^ but idk if it would work as well... The fact you put a more stressing pattern on this part is what makes it stand out to me tho
00:22:300 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - kinda the same ^ but idk if it would work as well... The fact you put a more stressing pattern on this part is what makes it stand out to me tho
Komore's Extra
These are all i could notice thanks for your cooperation!00:01:021 (1) - Just making sure everything is alright. Golden rule of mapping: the song is your ruler, you should follow what it does otherwise your map will feel not appropriate for the song. There is nothing to emphasized and feels so out place when playing.
00:01:893 (3,4) - Is it intentional or 00:02:068 (4) - is just there.
00:27:881 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - looks kinda random, but I guess it's the 2017 trend to do this, heh... A tornado pattern seems to be the easiest way to represent it as in the song. Also wouldn't these be better off as a single combo? The rhythm looks like being a whole stanza with the last beat being particularly more emphasized.
00:01:893 (3,4) - Is it intentional or 00:02:068 (4) - is just there.
00:27:881 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - looks kinda random, but I guess it's the 2017 trend to do this, heh... A tornado pattern seems to be the easiest way to represent it as in the song. Also wouldn't these be better off as a single combo? The rhythm looks like being a whole stanza with the last beat being particularly more emphasized.