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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 8 апреля 2018 г. at 21:48:33

Artist: Aoshima Moka (CV: Mimori Suzuko)
Title: kibo refrain
Source: OneRoom
Tags: one_room extended tv size カントク kantoku akitoshi corinn vanucik Komore [c_u_r_i] curi c_u_r_i schoolboy
BPM: 172
Filesize: 1542kb
Play Time: 00:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. Akitoshi's Harder (3,84 stars, 117 notes)
  2. Curi's Insane (4,44 stars, 120 notes)
  3. Easy (1,49 stars, 45 notes)
  4. Hard (2,89 stars, 89 notes)
  5. Light Insane (4,09 stars, 114 notes)
  6. Normal (1,92 stars, 60 notes)
  7. schoolboy's Extra (5,57 stars, 156 notes)
  8. vanucik's Expert (5,05 stars, 148 notes)


Download: Aoshima Moka (CV: Mimori Suzuko) - kibo refrain
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mp3 Shadren
harder akitoshi's normal
insane curi
Expert v anucik
Extra schoolboy
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check log
2017-12-18 08:04 Djulus: owo
2017-12-18 08:04 Djulus: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1494973 Aoshima Moka(CV: Mimori Suzuko) - Kibou Refrain]
2017-12-18 08:04 Djulus: 4ekni
2017-12-18 08:04 m3gB3g: уруй айзал
2017-12-18 08:04 m3gB3g: айхал
2017-12-18 08:04 m3gB3g: эмиэ уан рум да?
2017-12-18 08:05 Djulus: УРуУЙ
2017-12-18 08:05 Djulus: ага
2017-12-18 08:05 Djulus: акитошиттан кэтэьэбин ремап инсейны
2017-12-18 08:05 m3gB3g: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1494973 Aoshima Moka(CV: Mimori Suzuko) - Kibou Refrain [Last]]
2017-12-18 08:06 m3gB3g: бля хули так коротко
2017-12-18 08:06 m3gB3g: ахаахахахахах
2017-12-18 08:06 Djulus: :DDDDDD
2017-12-18 08:06 m3gB3g: ласт диффа круто
2017-12-18 08:06 m3gB3g: только я бы лично сделал больше спейса в общем
2017-12-18 08:06 Djulus: оу
2017-12-18 08:07 m3gB3g: мощь песни не передается
2017-12-18 08:07 Djulus: так я по спейсингу делал
2017-12-18 08:08 Djulus: зацени хс кстати
2017-12-18 08:08 m3gB3g: инсейн до середины слабоват
2017-12-18 08:08 m3gB3g: в плане флоу
2017-12-18 08:08 m3gB3g: хс звучит нормально
2017-12-18 08:09 Djulus: оу
2017-12-18 08:09 Djulus: инсейн хуета сразу скажу
2017-12-18 08:09 m3gB3g: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1494971 Aoshima Moka(CV: Mimori Suzuko) - Kibou Refrain [Hard]]
2017-12-18 08:09 m3gB3g: 00:13:056 (4) -
2017-12-18 08:09 m3gB3g: вот это слева поставь а не справа
2017-12-18 08:09 m3gB3g: слева лучше флоуится
2017-12-18 08:10 Djulus: ну ок
2017-12-18 08:11 m3gB3g: лоу диффы хороши
2017-12-18 08:11 m3gB3g: замапай фармильную ласт диффу чтоб примерно был 5*
2017-12-18 08:12 Djulus: да не
2017-12-18 08:12 Djulus: я не умею
2017-12-18 08:12 m3gB3g: 00:27:358 (5,6,7) - ахчатан биэр
2017-12-18 08:12 m3gB3g: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1494973 Aoshima Moka(CV: Mimori Suzuko) - Kibou Refrain [Last]]
2017-12-18 08:13 m3gB3g: 00:27:707 (7) - правее
2017-12-18 08:13 m3gB3g: хсы подходят
2017-12-18 08:13 Djulus: okay
posted
mod v1 \:3/


Easy

00:06:253 (4,1) - you could blanket these two ! https://puu.sh/yKjJx/77fc4a4de1.png

00:13:230 (2,3) - idk but the transition of these two is kinda weird, how about making it adding a 1/1 slider on 00:13:230 - i feel like that would play somewhat better instead having that mini break

00:16:021 - ^^^^^^

Normal

00:20:904 (1) - why is this slider straight, how about making it the same shape as 00:21:602 (2) - looks cuter~

Hard

00:02:765 (1) - shouldnt this slider start here 00:02:590 - ??? cus thats where that strong vocal sound actually is

00:05:556 - same as above ^^^^^^ should be here 00:05:381 -

00:27:532 (4) - same like i said in easy, why is this slider not the same as 00:27:183 (3) - would look cuter !!

00:30:323 (3) - NC so people know that slider got a diff. sv

Toshi insane

00:02:765 (1) - if you decide to map vocals this slider should start here 00:02:590 - if you're following the guitar, gud !! even tho i feel like the vocals are stronger than the guitar ;)

other than that, i dont really feel like the emphatize thingies aka. 00:06:428 (4,5,6,7) - 00:11:835 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 00:17:416 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - and so on~ are necessary. but oh well ~

Last

How about making this od 7.5 NOT 8 !!!! since toshi insane is already 7. OORR you do toshi insane 6.5 and keep last 7, idk ~

all fine i guess ;o;


nice little map and good luck with it :3 !
posted
m4m from my q. my mappu: https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/696085#osu/1474641

Harumachi clov...no

[Easy]
00:25:090 (3,4) - maybe two slider to fit guitar
00:30:759 (1) - add a note here?
00:30:759 (1) - 1/4 gap in easy diff is not proper. at least 1/1

[Normal]
00:13:579 (6,1) - and 00:16:021 (2,3,1) - you gotta choose one for cosistency
00:25:788 (2) - can you just use copy and paste from 1 to build this slider
00:30:759 (1) - same as Easy. But i do remember someone used 1/2 gap in Normal diff tho (but 1/4 is not acceptable)

[Hard]
00:12:445 (2) - try delete this. don't have to be that intense
00:30:556 - add clap plz. really weird to play

[Last]
00:02:416 (5) - try to put two circle here, maybe stack at the head of this slider.
00:04:858 (5) - move this a bit upward since it get too closer to 00:05:381 (7) - , seems crowded
00:07:649 (3) - minor stack problem. hope you remembered closing grid snap when checking snap issue
00:12:532 (1,2) - why 1/4? like 00:15:323 (1,2) - you just ignored
00:22:300 (3,4,1) - u dont have to keep ds here man... these overlap are really meaningless
00:30:585 - clap

guess that's all for me :3 GL!
posted

Kotori-Chan wrote:

Toshi insane

00:02:765 (1) - if you decide to map vocals this slider should start here 00:02:590 - if you're following the guitar, gud !! even tho i feel like the vocals are stronger than the guitar ;)cymbal crashes on 00:02:765 - so ye. also im keeping consistency for being clickable on every cymbals so xd

other than that, i dont really feel like the emphatize thingies aka. 00:06:428 (4,5,6,7) - 00:11:835 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 00:17:416 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - and so on~ are necessary. but oh well ~ it's insane my dude
thanks!1
posted

Kotori-Chan wrote:

mod v1 \:3/


Easy

00:06:253 (4,1) - you could blanket these two ! https://puu.sh/yKjJx/77fc4a4de1.pngi prefer dont use blankets on this diff

00:13:230 (2,3) - idk but the transition of these two is kinda weird, how about making it adding a 1/1 slider on 00:13:230 - i feel like that would play somewhat better instead having that mini break hmm, on high bpm 1/1 and 3/4 slider kinda weird imo
00:16:021 - ^^^^^^

Normal

00:20:904 (1) - why is this slider straight, how about making it the same shape as 00:21:602 (2) - looks cuter~ ok

Hard

00:02:765 (1) - shouldnt this slider start here 00:02:590 - ??? cus thats where that strong vocal sound actually is yes

00:05:556 - same as above ^^^^^^ should be here 00:05:381 - fixed

00:27:532 (4) - same like i said in easy, why is this slider not the same as 00:27:183 (3) - would look cuter !! yes

00:30:323 (3) - NC so people know that slider got a diff. sv ok

Toshi insane

00:02:765 (1) - if you decide to map vocals this slider should start here 00:02:590 - if you're following the guitar, gud !! even tho i feel like the vocals are stronger than the guitar ;)

other than that, i dont really feel like the emphatize thingies aka. 00:06:428 (4,5,6,7) - 00:11:835 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 00:17:416 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - and so on~ are necessary. but oh well ~

Last

How about making this od 7.5 NOT 8 !!!! since toshi insane is already 7. OORR you do toshi insane 6.5 and keep last 7, idk ~ ye

all fine i guess ;o;


nice little map and good luck with it :3 !
thanks for mod gl you too

Ametrin wrote:

m4m from my q. my mappu: https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/696085#osu/1474641

Harumachi clov...no :eyes:

[Easy]
00:25:090 (3,4) - maybe two slider to fit guitar cool i did it
00:30:759 (1) - add a note here? what
00:30:759 (1) - 1/4 gap in easy diff is not proper. at least 1/1 ye

[Normal]
00:13:579 (6,1) - and 00:16:021 (2,3,1) - you gotta choose one for cosistency i prefer first consistency
00:25:788 (2) - can you just use copy and paste from 1 to build this slider i guess i did
00:30:759 (1) - same as Easy. But i do remember someone used 1/2 gap in Normal diff tho (but 1/4 is not acceptable)

[Hard]
00:12:445 (2) - try delete this. don't have to be that intense since in hard diff didn't have a stacked double 1/4 so i did tripple, plays cool imo
00:30:556 - add clap plz. really weird to play no reason here to put clap, but i fixed rhythm (unsnapped object) just replaced slider end on blue tick

[Last]
00:02:416 (5) - try to put two circle here, maybe stack at the head of this slider. stack looks weird imo and i prefer follow instrumental
00:04:858 (5) - move this a bit upward since it get too closer to 00:05:381 (7) - , seems crowded yes
00:07:649 (3) - minor stack problem. hope you remembered closing grid snap when checking snap issue oki
00:12:532 (1,2) - why 1/4? like 00:15:323 (1,2) - you just ignored aesthetics
00:22:300 (3,4,1) - u dont have to keep ds here man... these overlap are really meaningless its ok
00:30:585 - clap no reason put clap here

guess that's all for me :3 GL!
thanks for mod, very helpful, btw gl you too with your map
posted
I didn't find anything with the lower diffs xd

Insane
Sorry to say but it seems you got the glitch where updating map deletes it. From my knowledge only known fix is to change the diff name :(
ok onto mod
00:12:183 (2) - maybe make this a reverse 1/4 slider like 00:11:137 (3) - so the drums are mapped
00:16:370 (5) - stack with 00:15:672 (3) -
00:23:695 (1) - blanket could be better
00:27:707 (7) - make this stack 00:27:009 (3) - like how 00:27:532 (6) - stacks with 00:27:183 (4) - like the visual spacing of the overlap should be the same imo


extra
00:12:183 (8) - maybe nc this since the stream direction changes.
00:17:765 (7,8,9,10,1) - super subjective but I feel this half of the stream's angle is kinda ugly I like how you had a definite change in the first stream, so basically I feel you could make this more like 00:11:835 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
00:20:207 (5) - I get your trying to emphasis but maybe you could make this parallel with 00:19:858 (3,4) - plays more comfortably imo.
00:22:649 (1,2,3) - maybe move this triple so the 1 stacks with 00:21:951 (5) -
00:24:567 (4,5,6) - maybe reduce spacing on 6 so it's a perfect triangle
00:29:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - seX

fun map :D
posted

Nevo wrote:

I didn't find anything with the lower diffs xd

Insane
Sorry to say but it seems you got the glitch where updating map deletes it. From my knowledge only known fix is to change the diff name :(should be fixed now
ok onto mod
00:12:183 (2) - maybe make this a reverse 1/4 slider like 00:11:137 (3) - so the drums are mapped following vocal its fine imo
00:16:370 (5) - stack with 00:15:672 (3) - ok
00:23:695 (1) - blanket could be better ye
00:27:707 (7) - make this stack 00:27:009 (3) - like how 00:27:532 (6) - stacks with 00:27:183 (4) - like the visual spacing of the overlap should be the same imo sure


extra
00:12:183 (8) - maybe nc this since the stream direction changes.
00:17:765 (7,8,9,10,1) - super subjective but I feel this half of the stream's angle is kinda ugly I like how you had a definite change in the first stream, so basically I feel you could make this more like 00:11:835 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
00:20:207 (5) - I get your trying to emphasis but maybe you could make this parallel with 00:19:858 (3,4) - plays more comfortably imo.
00:22:649 (1,2,3) - maybe move this triple so the 1 stacks with 00:21:951 (5) -
00:24:567 (4,5,6) - maybe reduce spacing on 6 so it's a perfect triangle
00:29:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - seX

fun map :D
thanks
posted
Q

[General]
  1. Does countdown necessary? you should turn off it at all diffs.
  2. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9815779 Insane diff is crooked, could you re upload it?


[Easy]
  1. 00:11:137 (3,4) - for seeing this, mouse(or tablet)'s moving is going little bit sharp way, this has about 90 degree angle flow, looks little bit weird, in my suggestion, if you should follow the flow about the sliders' like this, map's flow can be more smooth and soft.
  2. 00:27:881 (3) - you made this just straight slider, but if you use same slider with 00:26:486 (1) - , then this pattern can have symmetrical pattern, and map's pattern looks more stable. like this.
  3. 00:30:672 (1) - Spinnerend is weird way? you should end this spinner at 00:36:253 - as you did at other diffs lol, It looks just your minor mistake lol


[Normal]
  1. 00:04:335 - I felt weird because this part doesn't have beat here, this part has good vocal sound to emphasis and you can make it, even if you add a beat here, doesn't matter with drum sounds, my suggestion is this or this.
  2. 00:05:381 - this part flows same rhythm with 00:02:590 (3) - , but the previous part has beat and this part doesn't have beat? I think you should add a beat at here for consistency of rhythm.
  3. 00:06:951 (1,2,3) - 00:08:346 (1,2,3) - As you know, this part has good vocal sounds to emphasize, but you didn't add only for following downbeats, I think you should emphasize vocals, Not only for downbeats.
  4. 00:12:532 (4) - You missed NC here, you added NC as 1 downbeats, then this part should be NCed like others.
  5. 00:16:021 (2,3) - this part doesn't have hitsounds? you missed Hitsounds at here.
  6. 00:13:579 (6,1) - 00:16:370 (3,1) - this two parts are the only parts that you followed vocal, do you have any reason for following vocals ONLY this part? I think you should follow drum sounds, as you did at others, this part is weird little bit. Or you can add some vocal beats overall.
  7. 00:18:811 (2,3) - for following vocals, you can swap this part's rhythm. this part looks just following downbeats, too.
  8. 00:20:207 (2,3) - ^, but if you will not apply above mod, you should add a beat at 00:20:730 - , for consistency with 00:19:335 (3) - . music flows same with 00:18:811 (2,3) - . then you can set consistency for better quality about this maps.
  9. 00:27:881 (1) - this part is weird, too. because you followed vocal without any reasons, too. Suddenly following other sounds can be weird, if you add a beat at 00:28:230 - , rhythm can be better imo.


[Hard]
  1. 00:02:067 - you missed hitsounds at here.
  2. 00:02:590 (5) - you missed Nc here, you followed Nc with 1 beats, should be added NC
  3. 00:03:114 - here is, too. you missed hitsounds.
  4. 00:02:590 (5) - 00:04:160 (1) - 00:05:381 (1) - for seeing this parts, you can emphasis in here, but why you didn't make jump? this looks little bit weird, 00:13:230 (4,1) - 00:14:974 (4,1) - 00:16:370 (5,1) - this parts, flows same song, you added jump. Then you should add jump here, too.
  5. 00:06:428 - this part has weird hitsound? This hitsound doesn't necessary imo.
  6. 00:18:811 (3,4) - 00:20:207 (3,4) - you followed vocals at previous part, for seeing consistency with previous part, you should follow vocals at here, too.
  7. 00:24:567 - add clap? you added claps at 00:25:963 - 00:27:358 - , which has same part of music.
  8. 00:29:276 (3) - 1/3. listen carefully one more.


[Akitoshi]
  1. This part doesn't have custom combocolor? other diffs are set color, then you should add custom color, just basic color looks too bland
  2. 00:06:428 (4,5,6,7) - overmapping imo. this part doesn't have any special sounds. but why you added this weird patterns? I think you should follow just drums, you didn't overmapped like this at other parts.
  3. 00:09:218 (4) - has weird hitsound, you should set same hitsounds with 00:07:823 (4) - for consistency. music flows same.
  4. 00:11:050 (6) - if you add whistle sound, then this par's drum expression will be better. this part have same sound with other whistle sounds.
  5. 00:11:835 (4,5,6,7) - could you add hitsounds for colorful sound? this sound looks empty comparing with this part's intense.
  6. 00:16:544 (1) - do you have any reason using this slider? for seeing this map, you didn't try this special-shaped slider. only using at here without any reason looks not so good. 00:25:090 (1,3) - are, too
  7. 00:23:085 (8) - I know you did't add hitsound for follwing vocal, then since you follow vocal, you can delete this beat, hitsound follows vocal, notes follow drums,.... this are really weird for listening, set one thing which will you follow. if you want follow drum, 00:23:085 (8) - add clap here.


[Insane]
  1. 00:04:509 (3,4) - you followed vocal sound seeing 00:01:370 (1,2) - are sliders, then this part should be slider for consistency of follwing sounds.
  2. 00:11:137 (3,1) - This linear overlap looks messy little bit. I suggest you two things, s1 / s2. other patterns are, too.
  3. 00:12:532 (1,2) - overmapping. you didn't add this kicksliders at 00:15:323 (1,2) - . then you should delete this if you don't have any reasons.
  4. 00:14:974 (4,1,2) - weird flow? I think you can make better flow, current pattern's moving looks hard.
  5. 00:24:393 (3,4) - for listening this song, 00:24:567 - has trumpet sounds, then I think swapping rhythms could be better for consistency.
  6. 00:29:276 (1,2,3,4) - same problem with hard diffs, 1/3 is right rhythm. Akitoshi added 1/3,


[vanucik's Extra]
  1. For seeing this map, I think this map is just flowing without any special things, just pattern has jump. It looks really weird.
  2. 00:07:649 (5,6) - different intense with 00:09:044 (5,6) - , set consistency for better map's expression.
  3. 00:11:835 (4) - Add NC for dividing patterns as you did at 00:10:963 (1,2,3) - , i think you divided pattern with 00:10:963 (1,2,3) - 00:11:311 (1,2,3) - , then it should have same NC terms.
  4. 00:20:120 - you should add NC here for seeing 00:18:724 (3) - , this part should be consistent because music flows consistent.
  5. 00:22:997 (4) - same as above, this part divided pattern with 00:22:649 (1,2,3) - 00:22:300 (1,2,3) - , then you should add NC 00:22:997 (4) - for better expressions of patterns.
  6. 00:26:137 (5,6) - 00:27:532 (5,6) - these two pattern's music flows same, but your intense is different, 00:26:137 (5,6) - has not so big DS, but 00:27:532 (5,6) - has Big jumps? I think you should fix this for set consistent DS in here.


GL
posted
Hi from my Queue :D

[General]
This mp3 makes my ears hurt :( what is this

[Easy]
  1. 00:09:742 (1,2,3,4) - Consider a rhythm like this insead? http://puu.sh/yKGnm/1e4c3540e1.jpg So it could follow the vocals being held then faster again :)
  2. 00:13:230 (2,3) - I see what you're following, but the 3/2 pause still felt a bit awkard for the difficulty level. How about a reverse slider instead? http://puu.sh/yKGpk/a7fba9a0dd.jpg So you'd still map the same things, just in a slightly easier way to follow.
    >00:16:021 (2,3) - same
  3. 00:18:114 (1,3) - It would be REALLY nice if these were curved the same amount to be nice and matching. Like so: http://puu.sh/yKGt6/770e793bb9.jpg

[Normal]

  1. 00:12:532 - Uhhh.. add NC. It's the start of the new musical section. It really deserves one.
  2. 00:15:323 (1,2,3,1) - Why did your spacing suddenly go from 1.0 to 1.1? Seems like a mistake, I recommend adjusting it to be 1.0 like the rest of the map.
  3. 00:16:021 (2) - missing clap
  4. 00:23:521 (4) - missing hitsound


[Hard]
  1. 00:02:590 (1) - uhhh.. missed nc, looking at your patterns in the map.
  2. 00:11:137 (1,2) - Suddenly adding these 1/4 reverses felt really weirdly out of place when the drums they're following aren't super obvious.
  3. 00:15:672 (3) - I think mapping this as a 1/1 slider takes the emphasis away from 00:16:544 (1) - that's clearly following a held strong vocal, when 00:15:672 (3) - is more a simplification of the song. I reccomend adding 2 1/2 sliders, at 00:15:672 - and 00:16:021 -
  4. 00:27:881 (1,3) - I think it'd be cute if these could be curved the same amount instead of totally different :D
  5. 00:29:276 (3) - hitsounds on this slider are really noisy, possibly lower the volume on the repeats some? also, shouldn't this be 1/3...
  6. 00:29:974 (2) - why is this slider on 1/3? there aren't 1/3 drums here to support it, and you're skipping over the sound at 00:30:149 -


[Akitoshi's Insane]
Where are your combocolours.

  1. 00:19:509 - missing finish
  2. 00:20:904 - missing finish
  3. 00:23:259 - looking at what the prior triples are mapping, the note feels missing here, since there is another drum at this time.


[Insane]
this difficulty got cursed with the update bug, rip. (maybe rename it to something like "Heavy Insane" like the opposite of a light insane since it's rated harder than akitoshi's insane!!)

  1. 00:12:532 (1,2) - deciding to do these at 1/4 sliders felt very out of place, especially when 00:15:323 (1,2) - is just circles??


[vanucik's Extra]
  1. 00:04:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern felt really random and off. 00:04:509 (3) - a stronger sound, is given the same spacing from 2 as 2 is from 1, but then 00:04:683 (4) - has far larger spacing, despite being weaker in the song, and the spacing just gets bigger even though the song isn't particularly growing in intensity. On top of that, it doesnt seem to be forming into any pattern in particular, so as a whole it just comes together as a really random jumpspam. It also takes away from 00:05:381 (8,9,1) - by making it part of the general increase, even though 00:05:381 (8,9,1) - is actually notably strong.
  2. 00:07:125 (2,3,4) - for real, i dont see what these jumps are supposed to be emphasizing @_@
  3. 00:10:439 (3,3) - why
  4. 00:13:753 (1,3) - why
  5. 00:22:997 (4) - NC? since you decided to 00:22:649 - nc this even.
  6. 00:27:881 - suddenly halving the sv here when the song hasn't noticable fading out yet was really sudden and awkward :/
  7. 00:29:625 (1) - why not add nc so it's clearer these are triplets?
  8. 00:29:974 (1,2,1,2) - try to align this to share the same axis as 00:29:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , so it'd be nice and symmetrical as a whole :>? currently it's like, http://puu.sh/yLtSz/58be0156b2.jpg that, so 00:29:974 (1,2,1,2) - ends up looking offly to the right.
posted


[Easy]
00:30:672 (1) - why doesn't it end on the downbeat?

[Normal]
raise OD to like 5 lol

[Hard]
lower ar to like 7 would even out spread a lot more also raid OD to like 6-7 lol
00:29:276 (3) - this is 1/3
00:30:323 (1) - 1/2 slider would make more sense with the music

[A. Insane]
combo colors d

[Other Insane]
00:12:881 (3,4) - 3/4 sliders here sound really awk, just use 1/2 sliders
00:26:835 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - the jump pattern here doesn't really make sense in that there's really nothing special going on in the music but you're patterning it like there is lol, idg why it's not just a mix of circles and sliders cuz just circles doesn't really go along w/ the intensity
00:29:276 (1,2,3,4) - 1/3

[v. Extra]
00:29:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - lol this just feels really out of place considering the rest of the map is fairly generic jumps, transitioning from that to either alternating or like 250 something single tapping seems pretty harsh, maybe consider using repeat sliders instead? if not i dont mind, this is a pp farm set anyways and it'd be pretty funny to have people break but then again it's also unfair gameplay lol

[Other Extra]
00:17:242 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - whats with this really long stream? for a majority of it there's no sounds on the blue ticks :L
00:18:986 (2,3,4) - there's nothing on the blue :L
00:19:422 (6) - d
00:23:171 (3,4) - lol
00:26:486 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - full screen jumps are pretty inappropriate especially since the intensity has not changed at all cuz this is an anime song lol
00:29:276 (1,2,3,1,2) - 1/3

top diff feels way too overdone cuz there's quite a bit of overmapping
posted
Easy
00:03:463 (4) - 00:06:253 (4) - 00:17:416 (4) - It would be good if you made these into circles. There are vocals on both the head and the tail so it would fit nicely and it would also increase the circle to slider ratio
posted

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[General]
  1. Does countdown necessary? you should turn off it at all diffs. ye
  2. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9815779 Insane diff is crooked, could you re upload it?
donne

[Easy]
  1. 00:11:137 (3,4) - for seeing this, mouse(or tablet)'s moving is going little bit sharp way, this has about 90 degree angle flow, looks little bit weird, in my suggestion, if you should follow the flow about the sliders' like this, map's flow can be more smooth and soft. fixed
  2. 00:27:881 (3) - you made this just straight slider, but if you use same slider with 00:26:486 (1) - , then this pattern can have symmetrical pattern, and map's pattern looks more stable. like this. agree
  3. 00:30:672 (1) - Spinnerend is weird way? you should end this spinner at 00:36:253 - as you did at other diffs lol, It looks just your minor mistake lol
wat a mistake :facepalm: should be fixed now

[Normal]
  1. 00:04:335 - I felt weird because this part doesn't have beat here, this part has good vocal sound to emphasis and you can make it, even if you add a beat here, doesn't matter with drum sounds, my suggestion is this or this.
  2. 00:05:381 - this part flows same rhythm with 00:02:590 (3) - , but the previous part has beat and this part doesn't have beat? I think you should add a beat at here for consistency of rhythm.
  3. 00:06:951 (1,2,3) - 00:08:346 (1,2,3) - As you know, this part has good vocal sounds to emphasize, but you didn't add only for following downbeats, I think you should emphasize vocals, Not only for downbeats.
  4. 00:12:532 (4) - You missed NC here, you added NC as 1 downbeats, then this part should be NCed like others.
  5. 00:16:021 (2,3) - this part doesn't have hitsounds? you missed Hitsounds at here.
  6. 00:13:579 (6,1) - 00:16:370 (3,1) - this two parts are the only parts that you followed vocal, do you have any reason for following vocals ONLY this part? I think you should follow drum sounds, as you did at others, this part is weird little bit. Or you can add some vocal beats overall.
  7. 00:18:811 (2,3) - for following vocals, you can swap this part's rhythm. this part looks just following downbeats, too.
  8. 00:20:207 (2,3) - ^, but if you will not apply above mod, you should add a beat at 00:20:730 - , for consistency with 00:19:335 (3) - . music flows same with 00:18:811 (2,3) - . then you can set consistency for better quality about this maps.
  9. 00:27:881 (1) - this part is weird, too. because you followed vocal without any reasons, too. Suddenly following other sounds can be weird, if you add a beat at 00:28:230 - , rhythm can be better imo.
all fixed

[Hard]
  1. 00:02:067 - you missed hitsounds at here.
  2. 00:02:590 (5) - you missed Nc here, you followed Nc with 1 beats, should be added NC
  3. 00:03:114 - here is, too. you missed hitsounds.
  4. 00:02:590 (5) - 00:04:160 (1) - 00:05:381 (1) - for seeing this parts, you can emphasis in here, but why you didn't make jump? this looks little bit weird, 00:13:230 (4,1) - 00:14:974 (4,1) - 00:16:370 (5,1) - this parts, flows same song, you added jump. Then you should add jump here, too. add some pattern with same rhythms its fine imo
  5. 00:06:428 - this part has weird hitsound? This hitsound doesn't necessary imo. idk but issue on mp3 i guess
  6. 00:18:811 (3,4) - 00:20:207 (3,4) - you followed vocals at previous part, for seeing consistency with previous part, you should follow vocals at here, too. idk what you mean
  7. 00:24:567 - add clap? you added claps at 00:25:963 - 00:27:358 - , which has same part of music.
  8. 00:29:276 (3) - 1/3. listen carefully one more.


[Akitoshi]
  1. This part doesn't have custom combocolor? other diffs are set color, then you should add custom color, just basic color looks too bland
  2. 00:06:428 (4,5,6,7) - overmapping imo. this part doesn't have any special sounds. but why you added this weird patterns? I think you should follow just drums, you didn't overmapped like this at other parts.
  3. 00:09:218 (4) - has weird hitsound, you should set same hitsounds with 00:07:823 (4) - for consistency. music flows same.
  4. 00:11:050 (6) - if you add whistle sound, then this par's drum expression will be better. this part have same sound with other whistle sounds.
  5. 00:11:835 (4,5,6,7) - could you add hitsounds for colorful sound? this sound looks empty comparing with this part's intense.
  6. 00:16:544 (1) - do you have any reason using this slider? for seeing this map, you didn't try this special-shaped slider. only using at here without any reason looks not so good. 00:25:090 (1,3) - are, too
  7. 00:23:085 (8) - I know you did't add hitsound for follwing vocal, then since you follow vocal, you can delete this beat, hitsound follows vocal, notes follow drums,.... this are really weird for listening, set one thing which will you follow. if you want follow drum, 00:23:085 (8) - add clap here.


[Insane]
  1. 00:04:509 (3,4) - you followed vocal sound seeing 00:01:370 (1,2) - are sliders, then this part should be slider for consistency of follwing sounds.
  2. 00:11:137 (3,1) - This linear overlap looks messy little bit. I suggest you two things, s1 / s2. other patterns are, too.
  3. 00:12:532 (1,2) - overmapping. you didn't add this kicksliders at 00:15:323 (1,2) - . then you should delete this if you don't have any reasons.
  4. 00:14:974 (4,1,2) - weird flow? I think you can make better flow, current pattern's moving looks hard.
  5. 00:24:393 (3,4) - for listening this song, 00:24:567 - has trumpet sounds, then I think swapping rhythms could be better for consistency.
  6. 00:29:276 (1,2,3,4) - same problem with hard diffs, 1/3 is right rhythm. Akitoshi added 1/3,


[vanucik's Extra]
  1. For seeing this map, I think this map is just flowing without any special things, just pattern has jump. It looks really weird.
  2. 00:07:649 (5,6) - different intense with 00:09:044 (5,6) - , set consistency for better map's expression.
  3. 00:11:835 (4) - Add NC for dividing patterns as you did at 00:10:963 (1,2,3) - , i think you divided pattern with 00:10:963 (1,2,3) - 00:11:311 (1,2,3) - , then it should have same NC terms.
  4. 00:20:120 - you should add NC here for seeing 00:18:724 (3) - , this part should be consistent because music flows consistent.
  5. 00:22:997 (4) - same as above, this part divided pattern with 00:22:649 (1,2,3) - 00:22:300 (1,2,3) - , then you should add NC 00:22:997 (4) - for better expressions of patterns.
  6. 00:26:137 (5,6) - 00:27:532 (5,6) - these two pattern's music flows same, but your intense is different, 00:26:137 (5,6) - has not so big DS, but 00:27:532 (5,6) - has Big jumps? I think you should fix this for set consistent DS in here.


GL

Noffy wrote:

Hi from my Queue :D

[General]
This mp3 makes my ears hurt :( what is this

[Easy]
  1. 00:09:742 (1,2,3,4) - Consider a rhythm like this insead? http://puu.sh/yKGnm/1e4c3540e1.jpg So it could follow the vocals being held then faster again :)
  2. 00:13:230 (2,3) - I see what you're following, but the 3/2 pause still felt a bit awkard for the difficulty level. How about a reverse slider instead? http://puu.sh/yKGpk/a7fba9a0dd.jpg So you'd still map the same things, just in a slightly easier way to follow.
    >00:16:021 (2,3) - same
  3. 00:18:114 (1,3) - It would be REALLY nice if these were curved the same amount to be nice and matching. Like so: http://puu.sh/yKGt6/770e793bb9.jpg

[Normal]

  1. 00:12:532 - Uhhh.. add NC. It's the start of the new musical section. It really deserves one.
  2. 00:15:323 (1,2,3,1) - Why did your spacing suddenly go from 1.0 to 1.1? Seems like a mistake, I recommend adjusting it to be 1.0 like the rest of the map.
  3. 00:16:021 (2) - missing clap
  4. 00:23:521 (4) - missing hitsound
fixed all

[Hard]
  1. 00:02:590 (1) - uhhh.. missed nc, looking at your patterns in the map.
  2. 00:11:137 (1,2) - Suddenly adding these 1/4 reverses felt really weirdly out of place when the drums they're following aren't super obvious. its fine
  3. 00:15:672 (3) - I think mapping this as a 1/1 slider takes the emphasis away from 00:16:544 (1) - that's clearly following a held strong vocal, when 00:15:672 (3) - is more a simplification of the song. I reccomend adding 2 1/2 sliders, at 00:15:672 - and 00:16:021 - hmm when i put 2 1/2 sliders looks for me weirdly
  4. 00:27:881 (1,3) - I think it'd be cute if these could be curved the same amount instead of totally different :Dhmm idk i'll do it maybe
  5. 00:29:276 (3) - hitsounds on this slider are really noisy, possibly lower the volume on the repeats some? also, shouldn't this be 1/3...
  6. 00:29:974 (2) - why is this slider on 1/3? there aren't 1/3 drums here to support it, and you're skipping over the sound at 00:30:149 -


[Akitoshi's Insane]
Where are your combocolours.

  1. 00:19:509 - missing finish
  2. 00:20:904 - missing finish
  3. 00:23:259 - looking at what the prior triples are mapping, the note feels missing here, since there is another drum at this time.


[Insane]
this difficulty got cursed with the update bug, rip. (maybe rename it to something like "Heavy Insane" like the opposite of a light insane since it's rated harder than akitoshi's insane!!)

  1. 00:12:532 (1,2) - deciding to do these at 1/4 sliders felt very out of place, especially when 00:15:323 (1,2) - is just circles??


[vanucik's Extra]
  1. 00:04:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern felt really random and off. 00:04:509 (3) - a stronger sound, is given the same spacing from 2 as 2 is from 1, but then 00:04:683 (4) - has far larger spacing, despite being weaker in the song, and the spacing just gets bigger even though the song isn't particularly growing in intensity. On top of that, it doesnt seem to be forming into any pattern in particular, so as a whole it just comes together as a really random jumpspam. It also takes away from 00:05:381 (8,9,1) - by making it part of the general increase, even though 00:05:381 (8,9,1) - is actually notably strong.
  2. 00:07:125 (2,3,4) - for real, i dont see what these jumps are supposed to be emphasizing @_@
  3. 00:10:439 (3,3) - why
  4. 00:13:753 (1,3) - why
  5. 00:22:997 (4) - NC? since you decided to 00:22:649 - nc this even.
  6. 00:27:881 - suddenly halving the sv here when the song hasn't noticable fading out yet was really sudden and awkward :/
  7. 00:29:625 (1) - why not add nc so it's clearer these are triplets?
  8. 00:29:974 (1,2,1,2) - try to align this to share the same axis as 00:29:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , so it'd be nice and symmetrical as a whole :>? currently it's like, http://puu.sh/yLtSz/58be0156b2.jpg that, so 00:29:974 (1,2,1,2) - ends up looking offly to the right.

Battle wrote:



[Easy]
00:30:672 (1) - why doesn't it end on the downbeat?

[Normal]
raise OD to like 5 lol

[Hard]
lower ar to like 7 would even out spread a lot more also raid OD to like 6-7 lol
00:29:276 (3) - this is 1/3
00:30:323 (1) - 1/2 slider would make more sense with the music

[A. Insane]
combo colors d

[Other Insane]
00:12:881 (3,4) - 3/4 sliders here sound really awk, just use 1/2 sliders
00:26:835 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - the jump pattern here doesn't really make sense in that there's really nothing special going on in the music but you're patterning it like there is lol, idg why it's not just a mix of circles and sliders cuz just circles doesn't really go along w/ the intensity
00:29:276 (1,2,3,4) - 1/3

[v. Extra]
00:29:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - lol this just feels really out of place considering the rest of the map is fairly generic jumps, transitioning from that to either alternating or like 250 something single tapping seems pretty harsh, maybe consider using repeat sliders instead? if not i dont mind, this is a pp farm set anyways and it'd be pretty funny to have people break but then again it's also unfair gameplay lol

[Other Extra]
00:17:242 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - whats with this really long stream? for a majority of it there's no sounds on the blue ticks :L
00:18:986 (2,3,4) - there's nothing on the blue :L
00:19:422 (6) - d
00:23:171 (3,4) - lol
00:26:486 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - full screen jumps are pretty inappropriate especially since the intensity has not changed at all cuz this is an anime song lol
00:29:276 (1,2,3,1,2) - 1/3

top diff feels way too overdone cuz there's quite a bit of overmapping
no reply=fix
btw fixed Kisses
thanks for mods
posted

Nevo wrote:

I didn't find anything with the lower diffs xd

Insane
Sorry to say but it seems you got the glitch where updating map deletes it. From my knowledge only known fix is to change the diff name :(
ok onto mod
00:12:183 (2) - maybe make this a reverse 1/4 slider like 00:11:137 (3) - so the drums are mapped
00:16:370 (5) - stack with 00:15:672 (3) -
00:23:695 (1) - blanket could be better
00:27:707 (7) - make this stack 00:27:009 (3) - like how 00:27:532 (6) - stacks with 00:27:183 (4) - like the visual spacing of the overlap should be the same imo


extra
00:12:183 (8) - maybe nc this since the stream direction changes. no real sence imo
00:17:765 (7,8,9,10,1) - super subjective but I feel this half of the stream's angle is kinda ugly I like how you had a definite change in the first stream, so basically I feel you could make this more like 00:11:835 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - it's fine
00:20:207 (5) - I get your trying to emphasis but maybe you could make this parallel with 00:19:858 (3,4) - plays more comfortably imo. fine too
00:22:649 (1,2,3) - maybe move this triple so the 1 stacks with 00:21:951 (5) - ill rework this pattern
00:24:567 (4,5,6) - maybe reduce spacing on 6 so it's a perfect triangle ok
00:29:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - seX anti-double-time-mod pattern :D:D:DD:D:D

Neoskylove wrote:

[vanucik's Extra]
  1. For seeing this map, I think this map is just flowing without any special things, just pattern has jump. It looks really weird.
  2. 00:07:649 (5,6) - different intense with 00:09:044 (5,6) - , set consistency for better map's expression. i see no difference in this patterns
  3. 00:11:835 (4) - Add NC for dividing patterns as you did at 00:10:963 (1,2,3) - , i think you divided pattern with 00:10:963 (1,2,3) - 00:11:311 (1,2,3) - , then it should have same NC terms. yea
  4. 00:20:120 - you should add NC here for seeing 00:18:724 (3) - , this part should be consistent because music flows consistent. useless spam
  5. 00:22:997 (4) - same as above, this part divided pattern with 00:22:649 (1,2,3) - 00:22:300 (1,2,3) - , then you should add NC 00:22:997 (4) - for better expressions of patterns. ye
  6. 00:26:137 (5,6) - 00:27:532 (5,6) - these two pattern's music flows same, but your intense is different, 00:26:137 (5,6) - has not so big DS, but 00:27:532 (5,6) - has Big jumps? I think you should fix this for set consistent DS in here. да


GL

Noffy wrote:

[vanucik's Extra]
  1. 00:04:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern felt really random and off. 00:04:509 (3) - a stronger sound, is given the same spacing from 2 as 2 is from 1, but then 00:04:683 (4) - has far larger spacing, despite being weaker in the song, and the spacing just gets bigger even though the song isn't particularly growing in intensity. On top of that, it doesnt seem to be forming into any pattern in particular, so as a whole it just comes together as a really random jumpspam. It also takes away from 00:05:381 (8,9,1) - by making it part of the general increase, even though 00:05:381 (8,9,1) - is actually notably strong. this song is full of percussion instruments + vocals in first three notes was emphasized with jumps
  2. 00:07:125 (2,3,4) - for real, i dont see what these jumps are supposed to be emphasizing @_@ there is no vocals and i tried to map this f0king claps and whistles
  3. 00:10:439 (3,3) - why because
  4. 00:13:753 (1,3) - why because
  5. 00:22:997 (4) - NC? since you decided to 00:22:649 - nc this even. ye
  6. 00:27:881 - suddenly halving the sv here when the song hasn't noticable fading out yet was really sudden and awkward :/ ye sorry i'm really deaf with my 50$ headphones
  7. 00:29:625 (1) - why not add nc so it's clearer these are triplets? remapped
  8. 00:29:974 (1,2,1,2) - try to align this to share the same axis as 00:29:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , so it'd be nice and symmetrical as a whole :>? currently it's like, http://puu.sh/yLtSz/58be0156b2.jpg that, so 00:29:974 (1,2,1,2) - ends up looking offly to the right. remapepd

Battle wrote:

[v. Extra]
00:29:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - lol this just feels really out of place considering the rest of the map is fairly generic jumps, transitioning from that to either alternating or like 250 something single tapping seems pretty harsh, maybe consider using repeat sliders instead? if not i dont mind, this is a pp farm set anyways and it'd be pretty funny to have people break but then again it's also unfair gameplay lol i'm just kidding


thanks
posted
Привет.

UPD I'm Sorry Tarrasky :с

Tarrasky's True Love


  1. 00:02:939 (2,3) - Кривоват стак. Или это так задумано.. или это надо поправить .
  2. 00:05:207 (3,1) - почему бы сёркл не поставить на конец слайдера? Чтобы сделать треугольник. Ну и конечно ж 00:05:032 (2,4) - подправить после этого.
  3. 00:13:230 (6,1) - мб тут 00:13:753 (1) - поставить бланкетом с концом 00:13:230 (6) - ?
  4. 00:15:933 (4,5,6,1) - блак
  5. 00:19:858 (3) - мб тут поиграть с DS и поставить его между 00:18:637 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ?
  6. 00:23:172 (4,1) - не далековато ли?

    00:19:858 (3) - 00:20:730 (2) - поставь уже ровно на глаз :)
vanucik's Extra


  1. 00:03:114 (3) - А ну лучше будет поставить его на конец слайдера 00:02:067 (3) - , а 00:03:288 (4) - передвинуть на x:470 y:206 ?
  2. 00:03:811 (6) - Если выполнишь ^ сделай стак с 00:03:114 (3) -
  3. 00:06:951 (1) - мб стак с началом 00:05:904 (2) - ?
  4. 00:07:649 (5,6) - мне кажется чучуть не ровно
  5. 00:08:346 (1,6) - лучше бланкет сделай
  6. 00:13:404 (5,6,7,1) - а вот тут тоже чучуть не ровно
  7. 00:14:974 (5,3) - ^
  8. 00:16:195 (6,1) - ^
  9. 00:26:137 (5) - подвинь его ближе к 00:25:090 (1) -
Light Insane


  1. 00:04:335 (2,6) - стакни с 00:05:904 (2) -
  2. 00:04:160 (1) - мб его на конец 00:04:509 (3) - ?
  3. 00:04:509 (3) - не ахти наложение. Мб подвинешь его повыше или стакни с 00:06:951 (1) -
  4. 00:09:218 (4) - стакни с концом 00:08:346 (1) -
  5. 00:11:486 (1) - мб поровнее его поставишь ? По отношению к 00:11:137 (3) -
  6. 00:16:021 (4,1) - бланкет
  7. 00:20:207 (3,1) - ^
  8. 00:23:346 (3,1) - ^
  9. 00:18:114 (1,4) - стак поправь
  10. 00:23:695 (1,1,2,3) - ^
  11. 00:22:649 (4) - Подвинь куда нить на x: 142 y: 157
  12. 00:27:881 (1,2,3) - Не красиво. 00:28:579 (3) - выгни нормально
Akitoshi's Insane


  1. 00:04:858 (4,5) - Blanket
  2. 00:27:881 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:06:951 (1,3) - stack and 00:07:823 (4) - x:178 y:262
  4. 00:12:881 (3,5) - mb stack ?
  5. 00:19:509 (1,3) - ^ and fix 00:20:381 (4) -
Hard


  1. 00:04:160 (1,1) - стакни
Normal


  1. 00:04:160 (1,2) - а зачем так резко менять направление? Тут вот аж оверлап образовался 00:03:463 (2) -
  2. 00:16:370 (3,1) - мб стак?
Easy

Чекни AiMod DS.

Собстна все. Удачи
posted
since stix modded for brazilian mapper tarrasky in russian i'll translate in english (he cant translate in english cuz dont understand lol)
00:02:939 (2,3) - crooked stack. or its okay... or should fix it...
00:05:207 (3,1) -why not to put circle on sliderend? like to do triangle. and 00:05:032 (2,4) - fix up
00:13:230 (6,1) - maybe here 00:13:753 (1) - replace and blanket with 00:13:230 (6) - sliderend?
00:15:933 (4,5,6,1) - fix blanket
00:19:858 (3) - maybe replace that circle somewhere like 00:18:637 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this?
00:23:172 (4,1) - too far?
00:19:858 (3) - 00:20:730 (2) - unstack i geuss
posted

Neoskylove wrote:

[Akitoshi]
  1. This part doesn't have custom combocolor? other diffs are set color, then you should add custom color, just basic color looks too bland
  2. 00:06:428 (4,5,6,7) - overmapping imo. this part doesn't have any special sounds. but why you added this weird patterns? I think you should follow just drums, you didn't overmapped like this at other parts. synth
  3. 00:09:218 (4) - has weird hitsound, you should set same hitsounds with 00:07:823 (4) - for consistency. music flows same.
  4. 00:11:050 (6) - if you add whistle sound, then this par's drum expression will be better. this part have same sound with other whistle sounds.
  5. 00:11:835 (4,5,6,7) - could you add hitsounds for colorful sound? this sound looks empty comparing with this part's intense.
  6. 00:16:544 (1) - do you have any reason using this slider? for seeing this map, you didn't try this special-shaped slider. only using at here without any reason looks not so good. 00:25:090 (1,3) - are, too im boring ass anime mapper and these are the only hope for being bit unique pls dont kill it
  7. 00:23:085 (8) - I know you did't add hitsound for follwing vocal, then since you follow vocal, you can delete this beat, hitsound follows vocal, notes follow drums,.... this are really weird for listening, set one thing which will you follow. if you want follow drum, 00:23:085 (8) - add clap here. added 00:23:259 - for drums

Noffy wrote:

[Akitoshi's Insane]
Where are your combocolours.

  1. 00:19:509 - missing finish
  2. 00:20:904 - missing finish
  3. 00:23:259 - looking at what the prior triples are mapping, the note feels missing here, since there is another drum at this time.

[/list]

Stix wrote:

Akitoshi's Insane


  1. 00:04:858 (4,5) - Blanket not noticeable
  2. 00:27:881 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:06:951 (1,3) - stack and 00:07:823 (4) - x:178 y:262 not my type
  4. 00:12:881 (3,5) - mb stack ? ^ stacking them plays weird
  5. 00:19:509 (1,3) - ^ and fix 00:20:381 (4) - ^

thanks!

renamed my diff to Harder cuz Light Insane > Insane looks rly wrong

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 1021
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.5

[Metadata]
Title:Kibou Refrain
TitleUnicode:希望リフレイン
Artist:Aoshima Moka(CV: Mimori Suzuko)
ArtistUnicode:青島萌香(CV: 三森すずこ)
Creator:Djulus
Version:Akitoshi's Harder
Source:OneRoom
Tags:one_room extended tv size カントク kantoku akitoshi corinn vanucik
BeatmapID:1496274
BeatmapSetID:648225

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8.8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"E3NsDDp.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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кволити маппинг
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HI FROM MY QUEUE p/6414560/

excuse I didn't mod 1 month so I can be mistaken!

things:
Red - higly recommended
Amber - higly recommended
Blue - higly recommended
Alabama Crimson - higly recommended
Black - higly recommended
Green - higly recommended
Amethyst - higly recommended
Baby Pink - higly recommended


  • [Tarrasky's True Love]
  1. 00:26:486 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I suggest to increase spacing for better reflect music!
  2. 00:01:370 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - cntrl+shifr+s and drag the slider to the right!
  3. 00:03:463 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest to make that pattern for strong vocals!!!
  4. 00:04:160 (1,2,3,4) - and to make here also for consistence!
  5. 00:04:858 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - awesome pattern!!! but u can improve flow smh like this:
  6. 00:06:428 (4,5,6,7,8) - nice stream! I suppose its a c-c-challenge map???? you can make stream more conveniently here so! and [b]NC for[/b] A E S T H E T I C S
  7. 00:30:759 (1) - WHY spinner??>>>> music hasn't ended yet u can put more jumps or streams MORE pp, example:

OTHERS DIFFS LOOKS GOOD! Mukyu~ HOPE THIS GET TO RANKED

KD PLS !!
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