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Since I don't have experience playing 5*+ maps, so mods will focus on the aesthetics and general visualization of the map.
[Comments]
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▵03:16:769 (1) - starting from this part the song features guitar heavily, inducing more 1/2 sliders like in 03:17:496 (1) - , to some map-able parts like 03:20:405 (3,4) - would make this part better
[Bunkachou]
▴The map is inconsistent with slider shapes (linear and curved 1/4 sliders). Although there maybe some justifications but they would probably not consistent as well throughout the map. Example include this one: 02:13:133 (3) . Would be better if the slider shape uses like the next section(02:14:224 (1) )
▵01:52:224 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - They have the same sound so don't make the first two look different from the latter two pairs
▴02:06:224 (5) - ctrl+shift+R selection centre, 12 degrees, to make it visually better
▵02:08:133 (2) - Prev: 0.75x Next: 0.73x, make both become 0.72x to fit with 02:07:769 (2) -
▴02:09:315 (3,1) - Why not stack these two overlapped slider?
▵02:10:678 (2) - Prev: 0.75x Next: 0.71x
▴02:14:405 (2) - Make this slider angle better
▵02:16:042 (3) - Considering the slider pairs you have used, try to make this a 180 degree rotation of 02:16:042 (4) -, or vice versa, for map fluency
▴02:22:951 (1) - This slider should not be looking like this, just make it like other ones instead. If not, at least make it like 02:27:315 (1) -
▵02:34:405 (3,1) - Really intriguing slider angle of 3, this should definitely be better if it leads players to move upwards instead of downwards
▴02:45:315 (7,8,1) - They are too further apart
▵02:57:315 (2,3,4) - All of these sliders' angles can be better to be honest
▴02:58:405 (4) - Make this angle better so it slides towards the following streaming section better
▵03:08:042 (1,2) - lower 2, so it flows better, plus it fits the visual look of the next pair
▴03:15:315 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - The song has yet changed from calm to intense part, you should not increase SV here, or you make it a stream, which also provide transitioning of song intensities
▵03:29:133 (3) - NC here and remove the NC 03:29:850 (1) - ?
▴03:57:541 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This looks bizarre, try to make it spirals better maybe?
▵04:06:339 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above ^
▴04:13:695 (1,2) - This does not fit at all, when other notes are spaced far apart and given these two sounds are very loud
▵04:16:003 (1,2) - Same as above ^
▴04:17:878 (6) - Why not Ctrl+g this?
▵04:35:486 - Since you are following the vocal before 04:35:486, this should be mapped with a note as it has a rather noticeable vocal sound
▴04:47:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This spacing is too hard even for a 6.1* map
▵05:05:147 (9) - NC this?
▴05:22:602 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as above and above^^
▵05:23:329 - I don't think you need a kiai here, it sounds the same as 03:16:769
▴05:31:147 (4) - I suspect the curvy turn of this slider correspond to the guitar sound, but I don't suggest it because other parts in this kiai section don't follow like that. So it would be weird and random
▵05:37:693 (4,3) - These two sliders' curvature don't really have any backing up from the song
▴05:46:602 (1) - The sudden increse in spacing of this note in this way is not that good in fact
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I hope they can provide support to the map. Thanks for M4Ming with me
Good luck with approval