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Baby's Breath - Habataki no Birthday [Taiko]

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JUDYDANNY
1,519 posts
Joined October 2011
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JUDYDANNY
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2022年12月20日 at 21:48:06

Artist: Baby's Breath
Title: Habataki no Birthday
Source: 天使の3P!
Tags: Taiko スリーピース Tenshi no three piece
BPM: 181
Filesize: 1861kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.38 stars, 206 notes)
  2. Kantan(SV100 ODHP10) (1.63 stars, 120 notes)
  3. Kantan (1.63 stars, 120 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (3.36 stars, 334 notes)
  5. Oni (4.31 stars, 451 notes)
Download: Baby's Breath - Habataki no Birthday
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アニメ『天使の3P！（スリーピース）』主題歌
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Ending → kusabi
Last edited by JUDYDANNY , edited 13 times in total.
yuzu__rinrin
943 posts
Joined July 2014
yuzu__rinrin
Rankedするまでがましまろです
JUDYDANNY
1,519 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
JUDYDANNY

yuzu__rinrin wrote:

Rankedするまでがましまろです
Y O U T A
109 posts
Joined September 2014
Y O U T A
hi~ 早速modしに来ました～

いや～神曲です　マジで最高です

[Kantan]

・00:15:618 (3) - k? 音の高さ的にkを置いても良いかと思いました

・00:47:276 (2) - D and 00:49:928 (6) - K ほかのdiffもこの配色になっていたので統一させてはどうでしょうか

[Futsuu]

・00:16:281 (6,7,8) - k d k kantanと連動してここもkdkにしたほうが音にあってると思いました

・00:43:463 (8) - change to D and 00:43:961 (9,10) - d d 00:40:812 (1) - ここのシンバルをKで拾っているので
統一させて、あとのk kに変化を与えると良いと思いました

[Muzukashii]

・00:16:281 (9,10,11) - k d k Futsuuと同じ指摘です

・00:29:209 (17) - delete すこし密度が高い気がするので、休憩をいれてあげると良さそうです

・01:06:668 (12) - change to d and move to 01:06:834 - vocal寄りの配置にすると叩きやすい譜面になると思いました

・01:27:055 (40) - d ここはkを置かずにdでスッと演奏を終える感じに（意味が分からない）したいです

[Oni]

・00:29:209 (19) - delete Muzukashiiと同様です

以上です

Oniに関しては非の打ち所がない良い譜面でした　めっちゃノリノリです

ランクド楽しみにしてます！






潤たんかわいい
Saikoro
78 posts
Joined March 2011
Saikoro
2年ぶりのmodです。見ないでください。

[Kantan]
  1. 00:18:933 (5) - change to k?
  2. 00:58:546 (7) - vocalだけを取るのは控えてるようなので00:58:712 - に移動？
  3. 00:59:044 - add d 特に上を採用した場合は。
[Futsuu]
  1. 01:27:220 - ラストちょっと難しいですねえ～ Kantan,Futsuuは思い切って終点を01:27:055 - にしてもいいかも・・・
[Muzukashii]
  1. 01:21:253 (20) - k d k kkk d k k 最後に盛り上げたい？
[Oni]
  1. 00:43:049 - add d ここは拾いたいですね～
いい譜面でした！無理してひねり出したものなのですべて無視してくださいね :D
せっかく頼まれたのに力になれなくて申し訳ない。今から樹海に行って首吊ってきます。
iloveyou4ever
825 posts
Joined September 2014
iloveyou4ever
Hi via forum pm :3

[Kantan]
Nice diff!

[Futsuu]
00:25:563 (2) - k?
:arrow: 00:23:574 (11,12,1,2,3,4,5) - It's boring to have 7 dons here imo

00:41:640 - remove
:arrow: seems a bit overdone in futsuu

01:21:419 (14) - add k?
:arrow: can act as final challenge for the kiai time?Also can remain structure for 01:19:596 (8,9,10) - as triplet

[Muzukashii]
00:17:441 - change to d
:arrow: for variation

00:22:165 - move to 00:21:999 -
:arrow: better to leave a space on 00:22:165 - to emphasize predominant guitar sounds for 00:22:248 (3,4) -

00:43:132 - change to d
:arrow: can emphaisize next finisher also vocal has a lower pitch here compared with 00:43:463 -

01:22:331 - add k?
:arrow: act as a final challenge for the kiai time

01:26:226 - remove this
:arrow: for spread

[Oni]
00:17:524 - move to 00:17:193 - ?
:arrow: For variation

00:36:668 - change to k?
:arrow: just think flow will be better if you change this

01:15:784 - add k
:arrow: for progression as 01:16:281 (1,1,1) - has triplet here,I think it's better to make here be 1/2

Good map!
Good luck :)
mod my map please senpai >_<
yuzu__rinrin
943 posts
Joined July 2014
yuzu__rinrin

yuzu__rinrin wrote:

Rankedするまでがましまろです
from いんげーむ

ready for modの前に色々言ったからkds貰って帰ります(?)

[Kantan]
  1. 00:42:303 (4) - delete
    Drumとvocalで置いたと思います。
    ですが、裏拍って難しいものなので取る音を絞って消してしまってもいいんじゃないかなって思いました。
    00:41:972 (3,5) - でのシンバル(?)で合わせればよいかと。

  2. 01:27:220 (2) - move to 01:27:055 -
    最後合わせたい... 合わせたくない？
    なんか終わりのノーツ合ってないと締まりが悪いというか... Kantanでも合わせてほしい。。。
    全難易度で見れば今の位置でもbetterだけど、結局は01:27:055 - から始まってるギターのうねりだし何か違和感。。。
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:52:414 - add k...?
    いれたらむずくなるかなぁ...
    vocalがあるのと、3が赤線始点なのでいくらか赤線から始まるのを避ける感じに。

  2. 01:27:220 (4) - same as Kantan,
    終点がどうたらこうたら

[Muzukashii]
  1. 01:27:220 (4) - delete
  2. 00:09:320 (12) - delete
    Drumに合わせてるのは分かります。
    ですがこの部分はそんな曲も激しいわけでもないしvocalの言い切りの部分でbreak作っちゃった方がきれいに見えました。

  3. 01:15:618 (1,1) - ctrl+g(finishの状態も入れ替えで)
    せっかく音程変わってるのにD-k-D-kkDだと変化なくてウ～ンって感じなので、
    別難易度と大音符を合わせてD-d-K-kkDにしてみればどうかなって思った

  4. 01:27:220 (41) -
    すっきりしないし削りたい、頼む、お願い

[Oni]

  • 一番気合入ってるんだから言うことないだろ～W
  1. 01:11:889 (5) - delete
    ここは削りたいなあ～
    とくに目立つ音はないし、01:11:972 (6) - にvoのアクセントがあるのでそこを始点にしたい

  2. 01:15:618 (1,1) - same as Muzu
    ウ～ンのやつ

  3. 01:27:220 (62) -
    すっきりしないし削りたい、頼(ry
これ以上ゆっくりやっても見つからないと思うのでやめます！
good luck~!
gaston_2199
1,140 posts
Joined February 2015
gaston_2199
Hi!
Sorry delay :|
NM...? from PM ~
Some clarifications:
  • k = kat d = don K = big kat D = big don
  1. It's just suggestions/corrections, you are free to accept them or not.
  2. If you accept my suggestions/corrections, apply also in similar parts.
  3. If you don't accept my suggestions/corrections, clarify why you do not accept them.
[
General
]
  1. All fine~
[
Kantan
]
  1. 00:37:165 (4) - Personally the use of only dons does something ... monotonous? Because I hear snares sound from there, then I would change this to 00:37:165 (4) - to kat
  2. 00:41:309 (2,3) - Ctrl+G, 00:41:972 (3) - is more higher and for vocal
  3. 00:43:463 (6) - Add finisher, I think is very noticeable to ignore it
  4. 00:43:961 (7) - kat by properties vocal
[
Futsuu
]
  1. 00:19:928 (2,3) - For the guitar pitch, I suggest swap those notes
  2. 00:41:640 (3) - It feels of over, I suggest remove it to keep track of the vocal
  3. 01:22:414 - Add note to follow the vocal and keep consistency with 01:19:762 (9) -
[
Muzukashii
]
  1. 00:28:546 (15,16,17,18) - kddk fits better with the vocal
  2. 01:04:182 (13,14) - Swap those notes, fits with the vocal and the snare in 01:04:347 (14) -
[
Oni
]
  1. 00:15:867 (13) - The triplet is here 00:16:198 - imo, is more high than 00:15:867 -.
  2. 00:21:502 - Same as above (yeah, you can keep this 00:18:436 (12,13,14) - for don't make 5plet with 00:18:933 (16,17,18) - )
  3. 00:23:491 (2) - For guitar properties, will be kat
  4. 01:07:082 (20) - I don't think it's neccesary add triplet, haven't sound.
  5. 01:11:309 - I think this is more noticeable to ignore, make it kdk 1/2
  6. 01:14:458 (1,1,1,1,1) - It feels rare when you play,why not try with dkddk? Fits better imo
  7. 01:27:220 (62) - kat, have the same sound that 01:27:055 (61) -
That's all, really good mapset.
Good luck~
JUDYDANNY
1,519 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
JUDYDANNY
"Y O U T A"
hi~ 早速modしに来ました～

いや～神曲です　マジで最高です

[Kantan]
・00:15:618 (3) - k? 音の高さ的にkを置いても良いかと思いました
:arrow: 少し考え中, dkkはkiaiでのパターンとモロ被りになるので
・00:47:276 (2) - D and 00:49:928 (6) - K ほかのdiffもこの配色になっていたので統一させてはどうでしょうか
:arrow: changed
[Futsuu]
・00:16:281 (6,7,8) - k d k kantanと連動してここもkdkにしたほうが音にあってると思いました
:arrow:　no, 1つのパターンとしてドラムを意識した構成を成立させている為序盤から土台を崩したくないです
・00:43:463 (8) - change to D and 00:43:961 (9,10) - d d 00:40:812 (1) - ここのシンバルをKで拾っているので
統一させて、あとのk kに変化を与えると良いと思いました
:arrow: Dだけchanged

[Muzukashii]

・00:16:281 (9,10,11) - k d k Futsuuと同じ指摘です
:arrow: same Futsuu.
・00:29:209 (17) - delete すこし密度が高い気がするので、休憩をいれてあげると良さそうです
:arrow: 全体的にMuzukashii自体の密度も高めなので入れなくてもよいと思いますが、少し検討しておきます
・01:06:668 (12) - change to d and move to 01:06:834 - vocal寄りの配置にすると叩きやすい譜面になると思いました
:arrow: ボーカルでもこのリズムの方が妥当だと思います、2-2は抑揚としてはしっくりこない
・01:27:055 (40) - d ここはkを置かずにdでスッと演奏を終える感じに（意味が分からない）したいです
:arrow: changed~
[Oni]

・00:29:209 (19) - delete Muzukashiiと同様です
:arrow: hihatフォロー、nope
以上です
Oniに関しては非の打ち所がない良い譜面でした　めっちゃノリノリです
ランクド楽しみにしてます！

潤たんかわいい
:arrow: ありがとうございました、がんばります！
潤かわいい(ﾉ∀`

"Saikoro"
2年ぶりのmodです。見ないでください。
:arrow: No、見ます。
[Kantan]
  1. 00:18:933 (5) - change to k?
    :arrow: 割り込んだような音なので少し迷ってます、kにするとkが多くなるので
  2. 00:58:546 (7) - vocalだけを取るのは控えてるようなので00:58:712 - に移動？
    :arrow: 00:57:220 (5,6,7) - で１つのパターンとしてみています
  3. 00:59:044 - add d 特に上を採用した場合は。
    :arrow: no change
[Futsuu]
  1. 01:27:220 - ラストちょっと難しいですねえ～ Kantan,Futsuuは思い切って終点を01:27:055 - にしてもいいかも・・・
    :arrow: :arrow: changed~
[Muzukashii]
  1. 01:21:253 (20) - k d k kkk d k k 最後に盛り上げたい？
    :arrow: スライダーもあることなのでこのままで
[Oni]
  1. 00:43:049 - add d ここは拾いたいですね～
    :arrow: ふむ...入れてみましょう
いい譜面でした！無理してひねり出したものなのですべて無視してくださいね :D
せっかく頼まれたのに力になれなくて申し訳ない。今から樹海に行って首吊ってきます。
:arrow: modありがとうございました！助かりました、樹海のおともにミカンの缶詰でも持って行って実況放送してください。

"iloveyou4ever"
Hi via forum pm :3

[Kantan]
Nice diff!

[Futsuu]
00:25:563 (2) - k?
:arrow: 00:23:574 (11,12,1,2,3,4,5) - It's boring to have 7 dons here imo
:arrow: applied.
00:41:640 - remove
:arrow: seems a bit overdone in futsuu
:arrow: Sure~
01:21:419 (14) - add k?
:arrow: can act as final challenge for the kiai time?Also can remain structure for 01:19:596 (8,9,10) - as triplet
  • :arrow: added other place instead.
[Muzukashii]
00:17:441 - change to d
:arrow: for variation
  • :arrow: no change, prefer to keep the based flow.
00:22:165 - move to 00:21:999 -
:arrow: better to leave a space on 00:22:165 - to emphasize predominant guitar sounds for 00:22:248 (3,4) -
  • :arrow: its not smoothing well, Current seems to be better.
00:43:132 - change to d
:arrow: can emphaisize next finisher also vocal has a lower pitch here compared with 00:43:463 -
  • :arrow: keep the consistent with 00:40:480 (25,1) - .
01:22:331 - add k?
:arrow: act as a final challenge for the kiai time
  • :arrow: Current seems good too to put the slider. for the final.
01:26:226 - remove this
:arrow: for spread
  • :arrow: fiixed
[Oni]
00:17:524 - move to 00:17:193 - ?
:arrow: For variation
  • :arrow: same as Muzukashii, no change.
00:36:668 - change to k?
:arrow: just think flow will be better if you change this
  • :arrow: distortion sounds low, d fits as music.
01:15:784 - add k
:arrow: for progression as 01:16:281 (1,1,1) - has triplet here,I think it's better to make here be 1/2
  • :arrow: personal things, I want to put single note there, to emphasized the vocal.
Good map!
Good luck :)
mod my map please senpai >_<

:arrow: Thanks for mod(´◉◞౪◟◉)

"yuzu__rinrin"

yuzu__rinrin wrote:

Rankedするまでがましまろです
from いんげーむ

ready for modの前に色々言ったからkds貰って帰ります(?)

[Kantan]
  1. 00:42:303 (4) - delete
    Drumとvocalで置いたと思います。
    ですが、裏拍って難しいものなので取る音を絞って消してしまってもいいんじゃないかなって思いました。
    00:41:972 (3,5) - でのシンバル(?)で合わせればよいかと。
    :arrow: Drumとvocalで置いたと思います、ですが難しいのでremoveかなって思いました。

  2. 01:27:220 (2) - move to 01:27:055 -
    最後合わせたい... 合わせたくない？
    なんか終わりのノーツ合ってないと締まりが悪いというか... Kantanでも合わせてほしい。。。
    全難易度で見れば今の位置でもbetterだけど、結局は01:27:055 - から始まってるギターのうねりだし何か違和感。。。
    :arrow: 終わりは多分人によって感じ方違うと思うけど消しました
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:52:414 - add k...?
    いれたらむずくなるかなぁ...
    vocalがあるのと、3が赤線始点なのでいくらか赤線から始まるのを避ける感じに。
    :arrow: ドラムフローとして適切じゃないと思ったので別のところ入れました
  2. 01:27:220 (4) - same as Kantan,
    終点がどうたらこうたら
    :arrow: fix

[Muzukashii]
  1. 01:27:220 (4) - delete
    :arrow: fix
  2. 00:09:320 (12) - delete
    Drumに合わせてるのは分かります。
    ですがこの部分はそんな曲も激しいわけでもないしvocalの言い切りの部分でbreak作っちゃった方がきれいに見えました。
    :arrow: バスドラム配置を大前提の上で他はそのごまかしで置いて大筋が崩れる為no change
  3. 01:15:618 (1,1) - ctrl+g(finishの状態も入れ替えで)
    せっかく音程変わってるのにD-k-D-kkDだと変化なくてウ～ンって感じなので、
    別難易度と大音符を合わせてD-d-K-kkDにしてみればどうかなって思った
    :arrow: nochange, D-d-Kだと その手前のdの単符がものすごくウ～ンってなる
  4. 01:27:220 (41) -
    すっきりしないし削りたい、頼む、お願い
    :arrow: fix

[Oni]

  • 一番気合入ってるんだから言うことないだろ～W
  1. 01:11:889 (5) - delete
    ここは削りたいなあ～
    とくに目立つ音はないし、01:11:972 (6) - にvoのアクセントがあるのでそこを始点にしたい
    :arrow: fixed
  2. 01:15:618 (1,1) - same as Muzu
    ウ～ンのやつ
    :arrow: fixed
  3. 01:27:220 (62) -
    すっきりしないし削りたい、頼(ry
    :arrow: fixed
これ以上ゆっくりやっても見つからないと思うのでやめます！
good luck~!

:arrow: ゆっくりでいいと言ったのに随分と早くて草、ありがとうございました！

"gaston_2199"
Hi!
Sorry delay :|
NM...? from PM ~
[
Kantan
]
  1. 00:37:165 (4) - Personally the use of only dons does something ... monotonous? Because I hear snares sound from there, then I would change this to 00:37:165 (4) - to kat
    :arrow: changed, trial :3
  2. 00:41:309 (2,3) - Ctrl+G, 00:41:972 (3) - is more higher and for vocal
    :arrow: (3) is lower (bass pitch), vocal pitch is same.
  3. 00:43:463 (6) - Add finisher, I think is very noticeable to ignore it
    :arrow: added
  4. 00:43:961 (7) - kat by properties vocal
    :arrow: fixed
[
Futsuu
]
  1. 00:19:928 (2,3) - For the guitar pitch, I suggest swap those notes
    :arrow: its same flow as 00:14:624 (2,3) - , 00:17:276 (2,3) - . It seems better to keep the consistent.
  2. 00:41:640 (3) - It feels of over, I suggest remove it to keep track of the vocal
    :arrow: removed!
  3. 01:22:414 - Add note to follow the vocal and keep consistency with 01:19:762 (9) -
    :arrow: added~
[
Muzukashii
]
  1. 00:28:546 (15,16,17,18) - kddk fits better with the vocal
    :arrow: keep the spread colors and, vocal sounds better (refer to Oni colors).
  2. 01:04:182 (13,14) - Swap those notes, fits with the vocal and the snare in 01:04:347 (14) -
    :arrow: fixed~
[
Oni
]
  1. 00:15:867 (13) - The triplet is here 00:16:198 - imo, is more high than 00:15:867 -. :arrow: I wont think so, current is better.
  2. 00:21:502 - Same as above (yeah, you can keep this 00:18:436 (12,13,14) - for don't make 5plet with 00:18:933 (16,17,18) - )
    :arrow: same as above.
  3. 00:23:491 (2) - For guitar properties, will be kat
    :arrow: agreed
  4. 01:07:082 (20) - I don't think it's neccesary add triplet, haven't sound.
    :arrow: keep the power balance, to adjust the dense. Its better than airy playing to me.
  5. 01:11:309 - I think this is more noticeable to ignore, make it kdk 1/2
    :arrow: bass guitar pitch variation, I wont ignore that... for going to next part.
  6. 01:14:458 (1,1,1,1,1) - It feels rare when you play,why not try with dkddk? Fits better imo
    :arrow: vocal kat-times, much better than dkddk as climax.
  7. 01:27:220 (62) - kat, have the same sound that 01:27:055 (61) -
    :arrow: :arrow: removed
That's all, really good mapset.
Good luck~
:arrow: Thanks to useful mod !(´◉◞౪◟◉)
Thanks for mods!(¦3[___]
Last edited by JUDYDANNY , edited 1 time in total.
JUDYDANNY
1,519 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
JUDYDANNY
Moved to pending.
Raytoly
606 posts
Joined March 2016
Raytoly
yo M4M (testplay and chack)
general
00:03:684 change to d?
00:05:010 why don't move to 00:04:845 sound is here
WTF bookmark
Kantan
00:20:253 change to k
00:28:215 (4,5) change to k?
00:38:160 try k k kdk? it's opposite with 00:35:508
e_e look good for me
Futsuu
look good
Muzukashii
hey 00:27:220 I think from here if use d k kdk k k kdk this look good and will opposite with 00:24:900
Oni
00:15:857 now is low sound change to d? And other points
00:28:712 move to 00:28:375 and 00:30:038 move to 00:28:707 if use please 00:29:209 use kdkkd
00:41:723 add d

nice map (my map is look normal...)
good luck :)
Waribashi
638 posts
Joined January 2013
Waribashi
hi MODしまつううう for M4M
[Kantan]
00:58:546 (7) - move to 00:58:712 (7) -
ウーーーーンここは迷いどころさんですがドラムの音に全てを託してみませんか？
[Futsuu]
00:33:519 (20) - change to d?
[Muzukashii]
00:30:038 (20) - delete
あまりギュウギュウにしなくてもいいかなと感じました
00:36:668 (6) - delete
うーん 偶数にしたいというのだけであれば4連でも理にかなってるかなーと
00:47:110 (7) - delete
BIGをめちゃくちゃに強調させたい
00:49:762 (17) - delete
^
00:51:916 (2) - delete or move to 00:51:751 (2) -
ここ二連が三つ繋がっててちょっと不自然
[Oni]
00:36:668 (8) - delete
muzu同様
00:51:916 (2) - delete or move to 00:51:751 (2) -
^

これ以上ケチ付けるの辛くなったのでこれくらいにします･･･
もうすでに死ぬほど整ってるので全部無視してもらって結構です()
RANKED頑張ってくださいね :)
JUDYDANNY
1,519 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
JUDYDANNY
"Cocoaaa"
yo M4M (testplay and chack)
general
00:03:684 change to d?
:arrow: following the guitar.
00:05:010 why don't move to 00:04:845 sound is here
:arrow: following the guitar.
WTF bookmark
:arrow: thats my style eternity (¦3[___]
[Kantan]00:20:253 change to k
:arrow: following the bass drum as usual. there're no high pitch special sound.
00:28:215 (4,5) change to k?
:arrow: following the bass drum as usual. ^
00:38:160 try k k kdk? it's opposite with 00:35:508
:arrow: same.
e_e look good for me
[Futsuu]look good
[Muzukashii]hey 00:27:220 I think from here if use d k kdk k k kdk this look good and will opposite with 00:24:900
:arrow: following the bass drum as usual. there're no high pitch special sound.
[Oni]00:15:857 now is low sound change to d? And other points
:arrow: to keep a conistent with snare as usual.
00:28:712 move to 00:28:375 and 00:30:038 move to 00:28:707 if use please 00:29:209 use kdkkd
:arrow: following the bass drum as usual. there're no high pitch special sound.
00:41:723 add d
:arrow: nope, seems early to special 1/4.

nice map (my map is look normal...)
good luck :) :arrow: thanks (´◉◞౪◟◉)
"KitajimaYN"
hi MODしまつううう for M4M\
[Kantan]
00:58:546 (7) - move to 00:58:712 (7) -
ウーーーーンここは迷いどころさんですがドラムの音に全てを託してみませんか？
:arrow: リズムややこしくなるだけなのでやめておきます
[Futsuu]
00:33:519 (20) - change to d?
:arrow: Futsuuだけフローの見方がかなりややこしいですがコンシスなんとかで00:28:878 -ココ
[Muzukashii]
00:30:038 (20) - delete
あまりギュウギュウにしなくてもいいかなと感じました
:arrow: むしろここのhihatは最優先事項...
00:36:668 (6) - delete
うーん 偶数にしたいというのだけであれば4連でも理にかなってるかなーと
:arrow: ドラムが勝手に偶数になってたのでしたいわけでもないです。次のddd1/4もあるのでこれで理にかなってるかなーと思います
00:47:110 (7) - delet
BIGをめちゃくちゃに強調させたい
:arrow: スネアもあるしボーカルもあるし、消すとスカスカ感半端ない
00:49:762 (17) - delete
^
:arrow: サメ
00:51:916 (2) - delete or move to 00:51:751 (2) -
ここ二連が三つ繋がっててちょっと不自然
:arrow: Muzuだけdelete.
[Oni]
00:36:668 (8) - delete
muzu同様
:arrow: muzu同様no change
00:51:916 (2) - delete or move to 00:51:751 (2) -
^
:arrow: ドラム通りなので別に不自然でもないと思います

これ以上ケチ付けるの辛くなったのでこれくらいにします･･･
もうすでに死ぬほど整ってるので全部無視してもらって結構です()
RANKED頑張ってくださいね :)
:arrow: がんばります(´◉◞౪◟◉)
Thanks for mod~(¦3[___]
aabc271
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1,315 posts
Joined August 2009
aabc271
Hi, m4m here from your queue
Didn't mod for like 3 years so I hope this is fine :3

[General]

• 00:24:900 - Volume 80% -> 60~70%
80% seems to cover the quieter music quite a lot. Also 00:06:336 sounds louder but still 70% used

[ Oni]

• 00:28:215 - Maybe consider patterns like this?
Hitsound and rhythm consistency with 00:24:900 (1,2,4,5,6) where d is used at 1/1 frequency

• 00:50:259 - Maybe this?
Another possible pattern that fits well to the drums

• 01:03:104 (7) - Delete?
So that section 01:02:027~01:07:331 only contains longer 1/4 near the end at 01:06:502, similar to section 01:12:635~01:15:287 where 01:14:458 has 5-plets. Also no significant sound to support?

• 01:11:309 - Maybe this?
01:11:640 contains an audible drum kick but not 01:11:806

[ Muzukashii]

• 00:21:916 - k kkk -> kkk k?
00:22:248 has heavier drum, so leaving removing 1/4 note before it helps the emphasis

• 00:24:071 (20) - K?
To contrast with 21 which has no guitar and sounds lower-pitched than 20

• 00:28:215 - Consider this?
Similar to oni's suggestion. Pattern consistency with 00:25:563

• 00:51:088 (23) - d
Fits well with vocal pitch. Also makes a nice contrast with 00:48:104 (11,12)

• 01:06:668 (12) - Delete and add d at 01:06:834?
Removing note at :668 seems to represent this vocal section 01:05:508~01:06:502 well enough imo

[ Futsuu]

• 00:26:557 (4) - Delete?
Similar to oni's suggestion. Deleting makes 00:26:889 dkd, which is consistent with 00:29:541

• 00:58:381 (12) - Delete?
Change in rhythm at 00:57:220 could be difficult for new players. Red line only notes with 1/1 spacing only is probably easier?

[ Kantan]

• 00:28:878 (5) - k?
00:24:900~00:30:204 are all d, which could sound too monotonous?

• 00:51:419 - Maybe this?
Easier rhythm for new players to understand. Also fits reasonably well with the drum

Overall nicely made, so not many suggestions :3
Good luck :)
JUDYDANNY
1,519 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
JUDYDANNY
"aabc271"
Hi, m4m here from your queue
Didn't mod for like 3 years so I hope this is fine :3

[General]

• 00:24:900 - Volume 80% -> 60~70%
80% seems to cover the quieter music quite a lot. Also 00:06:336 sounds louder but still 70% used
:arrow: changed 70%!
[ Oni]

• 00:28:215 - Maybe consider patterns like this?
Hitsound and rhythm consistency with 00:24:900 (1,2,4,5,6) where d is used at 1/1 frequency
:arrow: keep the build up to follow the piano and vocal there. I wont keep the monotone.

• 00:50:259 - Maybe this?
Another possible pattern that fits well to the drums
:arrow: changed "k-d-d-k---d" (no use 1/4) there.

• 01:03:104 (7) - Delete?
So that section 01:02:027~01:07:331 only contains longer 1/4 near the end at 01:06:502, similar to section 01:12:635~01:15:287 where 01:14:458 has 5-plets. Also no significant sound to support?
:arrow: Okay~


• 01:11:309 - Maybe this?
01:11:640 contains an audible drum kick but not 01:11:806
:arrow: keep the rhythm to focus the main(vocal) accent. >_< I believe that K on 01:11:309 can cover the a little ><

[ Muzukashii]

• 00:21:916 - k kkk -> kkk k?
00:22:248 has heavier drum, so leaving removing 1/4 note before it helps the emphasis
:arrow: plays not well, I prefer to focus the guitar part high priority.

• 00:24:071 (20) - K?
To contrast with 21 which has no guitar and sounds lower-pitched than 20
:arrow: changed don(19) instead.

• 00:28:215 - Consider this?
Similar to oni's suggestion. Pattern consistency with 00:25:563
:arrow: same as Oni, no change.

• 00:51:088 (23) - d
Fits well with vocal pitch. Also makes a nice contrast with 00:48:104 (11,12)
:arrow: lol, okay!

• 01:06:668 (12) - Delete and add d at 01:06:834?
Removing note at :668 seems to represent this vocal section 01:05:508~01:06:502 well enough imo
:arrow: seems to not well vocal imo. And if make there, It continues 3 times (o-oo-oo-o), I wont keep that rhythm ...

[ Futsuu]

• 00:26:557 (4) - Delete?
Similar to oni's suggestion. Deleting makes 00:26:889 dkd, which is consistent with 00:29:541
:arrow: changed kat instead.

• 00:58:381 (12) - Delete?
Change in rhythm at 00:57:220 could be difficult for new players. Red line only notes with 1/1 spacing only is probably easier?
:arrow: Okay.

[ Kantan]

• 00:28:878 (5) - k?
00:24:900~00:30:204 are all d, which could sound too monotonous?
:arrow: keep, I want to make a monotone once.

• 00:51:419 - Maybe this?
Easier rhythm for new players to understand. Also fits reasonably well with the drum
:arrow: hm... nope, there too lots of accents on the red...

Overall nicely made, so not many suggestions :3
Good luck :)
Thanks aabc!!ヾ(๑>◡<)ﾉ"
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