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Sluggo1000
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M4M ^^, my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/647955

Easy

00:25:379 (1,1) - Switch these out with half beat sliders, it puts more emphasis on the bass! http://prntscr.com/g5xnt5
00:14:010 (3) - 00:35:484 (1) - 00:39:905 (4) - 01:05:168 (4) - 01:13:379 (1) - 01:20:958 (1) - 01:26:010 (1) - 01:28:537 (1) - These sliders exit the screen at some point. This would go against you in terms of quality, so I'd suggest you fix them. uwu
Otherwise, this map has a good slider-to-circle rhythm and alternation!

Chalwa's Normal

00:19:694 (5) - 01:02:010 (3) - 01:15:273 (6) - Same thing here with the sliders

Hard

00:02:010 (4) - 00:04:537 (4) - 00:09:905 (4) - 00:18:273 (2) - 00:34:221 (1) - 00:56:326 (3) - 01:07:694 (3) - 01:09:905 (1) - Outside the playfield again (sorry if I seem picky xd)

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Despite the objects outside the map, the maps above have a decently professional style and placement. I would mod the higher diffs, but I don't find myself qualified for that uwu Good luck with your mapping career!
Kyle Y

Normal modding request in my modding queue.
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Easy
  1. 00:02:326 - strong sound here, what I expected is a clickable objects. You can reverse 00:01:379 (2) - and place a circle at 00:02:326 -
  2. 00:21:589 (1) - will this spinner suitable here? I think it is quite short for Easy diff,
  3. 00:33:589 - what are this slider end follow for? vocal started 00:33:431 - .
  4. 00:58:694 - again, why reverse at this timing? here got no strong beat or vocal. I think it is better to reverse 2/1 beats slider to follow vocal. (reverse at 00:58:852 - )
  5. 01:18:431 (1,2) - ctrl+g for consistent pattern with 01:08:326 (1,2) -
  6. I see you use repeated rhythm, which is good in Easy.

Normal
  1. 00:11:642 (1) - remove nc for consistent the combo chain. you use nc per 2 beats, better to follow. (and there are few more)
  2. 00:39:273 (4,5) - You use circle here, but not for others with same rhythm. Please map it consistent
  3. 00:58:221 (1) - I am not oppose you use long slider to skip beats in the middle, but do not miss the strong beats. I think you can shorten the slider to 00:59:484 - and it is more reasonable and fit music.
  4. 01:19:379 (4) - I think you can have a better shape.
  5. 01:21:273 - ignoring the beat sound? why?
  6. 01:25:379 - why skipped, I think it is better to map this sound also, as you are following vocal at 01:20:958 (1,2,3,4) - and you still map for the forth sound. I suggest you can use 2/1 slider on 01:23:484 - and 01:24:747 - . and 01:24:747 - strong beat can be also mapped.
  7. 01:30:431 - it feels better for 1/2 reverse to me.

Hard
  1. 00:02:010 (4,5) - it is much more reasonable to reverse them, becasue 00:02:010 - and 00:02:089 - got even strength of beat sound. However, as a rubbish player, of course I hope you can use 1/4 reverse for twice instead of having a circle in the middle.
  2. 00:02:642 - strong beat, where you should place clickable object to emphasis the beat. Therefore, we usually avoid place slider end at big white tick.
  3. 01:19:379 (5,1) - not really a good pattern as the overlap is hard to read
  4. 01:30:116 (2) - are you sure to space out? It is rankable in Hard, but seems you definite continue 1/4 reversed slider stream is look like 00:10:537 (2) - this. If you spaced out, player may mis-read as 1/2 pattern.
  5. In fact, you can add little jump for Strong beats, like 00:02:642 - 00:05:168 - 01:30:905 (6) - etc. It is more fun to have jumps, otherwise, it may be boring.

Aki's Insane
  1. 00:17:326 (5,6) - flowing break from (5) to (6), which is not suitable to use becasue you didn't need to emphasis (6). But you can have breaking flow on 00:17:484 (6,1) - as 00:17:800 - is a strong beat.
  2. 00:21:510 (1) - should be start at 00:21:589 - , which here has a strong beat
  3. Sorry I am lazy on modding Insane
Akitoshi

Kyle Y wrote:

Aki's Insane
[notice]
  1. 00:17:326 (5,6) - flowing break from (5) to (6), which is not suitable to use becasue you didn't need to emphasis (6). But you can have breaking flow on 00:17:484 (6,1) - as 00:17:800 - is a strong beat. uhhh made more circular-flow like
  2. 00:21:510 (1) - should be start at 00:21:589 - , which here has a strong beat ok
  3. Sorry I am lazy on modding Insane
thanks!

osu file format v14

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Artist:Bentham
ArtistUnicode:Bentham
Creator:A r M i N
Version:Akitoshi's Insane
Source:潔癖男子!青山くん
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Topic Starter
A r M i N
@mazziv no fix
@Sluggo no fix, the objects dont leave the playing area

Kyle Y wrote:


Normal modding request in my modding queue.
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Easy
  1. 00:02:326 - strong sound here, what I expected is a clickable objects. You can reverse 00:01:379 (2) - and place a circle at 00:02:326 -
  2. 00:21:589 (1) - will this spinner suitable here? I think it is quite short for Easy diff, i want at least 1 spinner in the map
  3. 00:33:589 - what are this slider end follow for? vocal started 00:33:431 - . its fine like that imo
  4. 00:58:694 - again, why reverse at this timing? here got no strong beat or vocal. I think it is better to reverse 2/1 beats slider to follow vocal. (reverse at 00:58:852 - )
  5. 01:18:431 (1,2) - ctrl+g for consistent pattern with 01:08:326 (1,2) -
  6. I see you use repeated rhythm, which is good in Easy.

Hard
  1. 00:02:010 (4,5) - it is much more reasonable to reverse them, becasue 00:02:010 - and 00:02:089 - got even strength of beat sound. However, as a rubbish player, of course I hope you can use 1/4 reverse for twice instead of having a circle in the middle. ive seen a lot of other hard diffs use it so ill keep that
  2. 00:02:642 - strong beat, where you should place clickable object to emphasis the beat. Therefore, we usually avoid place slider end at big white tick.
  3. 01:19:379 (5,1) - not really a good pattern as the overlap is hard to read its okay imo
  4. 01:30:116 (2) - are you sure to space out? It is rankable in Hard, but seems you definite continue 1/4 reversed slider stream is look like 00:10:537 (2) - this. If you spaced out, player may mis-read as 1/2 pattern.
  5. In fact, you can add little jump for Strong beats, like 00:02:642 - 00:05:168 - 01:30:905 (6) - etc. It is more fun to have jumps, otherwise, it may be boring.
Chalwa

Tarrasky wrote:

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Chalwa's Normal

00:58:221 (1) - In my opinion is better the slider finish in 00:59:484 -, there's a intense song here and is more logical following the song I think it's fine >.<
01:20:958 (1,2,3,4) - hm not sure about this mapping, maybe is better you normal map here, with 1/1 sliders for example, if you want do this 2/1 circles sequence i recommend you do in 01:23:484 (1) - (look easy diff for example) Yes, i agree, but then SR is omre than 2.25* :/

gl, hope this helps ^^

Shiratoi wrote:

as per request


[chalwa's normal]
00:02:642 (1) - okie so youre following the drums right? so ending the sliders on a significant drum sound rhythmically sounds bad (ex. 00:03:116 (2) - 00:05:642 (2) - ) maybe do something like : https://puu.sh/x3wXk/ea59ab92a1.png cause theres no point in starting the slider on a red tick where the guitar is when youre following drums
00:11:800 (2) - what is this repeat following? if its the drums, it starts here 00:12:273 - . if youre following that sound here 00:11:642 - , its better if you just make it a long slider without repeat cause it isnt hitting anything right now
00:17:168 (4) - (where my cursor is) https://puu.sh/x3x4S/f1b9cae7db.png doing something like this sounds better since youre missing a really loud guitar beat here 00:16:379 - and youve been following the guitar since this section started. I can't understand your thing, it's a bit weird for me, so I'm keeping my pattern
00:17:800 - please be consistent on your rhythmm. you were following the guitar here 00:12:747 (1,2) - but you changed to drums.
00:25:379 (1) - actually the sound here isnt as "technical" as you think so a slider like this just looks out of place imo. a linear slider will work fine :)Is this any good reason and is it really bad for make here other slider? I don't think so
00:39:273 - change to sliders for consistency? For consistency with what?
00:45:589 (1) - whoa what happened to the middle of this slider square, cause it's easier way for me to make curve?
00:44:642 - since you were following vocals before, i think you should continue it : https://puu.sh/x3xgM/f597617a0a.png Your rhythm choise is worse for me than min, so no changes
00:51:116 - same thing here. i think you know how to fix this now~ no, i don't know C:
00:59:484 - too prominent of a beat to miss. better to end the long slider here imo since its a nice finisher before the kiai
01:01:852 - i explained this in easy, but i think its better to follow the drums on the red tick during the kiai since theyre a lot more prominent :/ I don't want to make this diff >2.25*
01:10:852 - from here to 01:24:747 - it sounds great though
01:26:326 (2) - change to note + 1/2 slider to hit the guitar sound here 01:26:484 - since youre following it based on 01:27:116 (4) -
01:29:010 - same thing here
01:30:431 (2,3) - change this to a 1/2 repeat? nope?


ganbatte

Sluggo1000 wrote:

#modreqs

M4M ^^, my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/647955


Chalwa's Normal

00:19:694 (5) - 01:02:010 (3) - 01:15:273 (6) - Same thing here with the sliders If you test the map you'll see nothing is exciting a screeen in-game c:


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Despite the objects outside the map, the maps above have a decently professional style and placement. I would mod the higher diffs, but I don't find myself qualified for that uwu Good luck with your mapping career!

Kyle Y wrote:


Normal modding request in my modding queue.
[]

Normal
  1. 00:11:642 (1) - remove nc for consistent the combo chain. you use nc per 2 beats, better to follow. (and there are few more) I wanted here to emphasise this guitar by new combo here.
  2. 00:39:273 (4,5) - You use circle here, but not for others with same rhythm. Please map it consistent
  3. 00:58:221 (1) - I am not oppose you use long slider to skip beats in the middle, but do not miss the strong beats. I think you can shorten the slider to 00:59:484 - and it is more reasonable and fit music.
  4. 01:19:379 (4) - I think you can have a better shape. I think this M is fine here
  5. 01:21:273 - ignoring the beat sound? why? Make a rest for newbie's fingers
  6. 01:25:379 - why skipped, I think it is better to map this sound also, as you are following vocal at 01:20:958 (1,2,3,4) - and you still map for the forth sound. I suggest you can use 2/1 slider on 01:23:484 - and 01:24:747 - . and 01:24:747 - strong beat can be also mapped.
  7. 01:30:431 - it feels better for 1/2 reverse to me. I think my rhythm is as good as yours

[*] Sorry I am lazy on modding Insane[/list][/notice]
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when you have no bn friends XD
Topic Starter
A r M i N

Venix wrote:


when you have no bn friends XD
meaaan
Mazziv
nice meme not even explaining why you dont apply anything
Topic Starter
A r M i N

Mazziv wrote:

nice meme not even explaining why you dont apply anything
sigh.. no 1/2 slider since the sound on red tick is not prominent enough for me
1 2 1 2 1 2 1 2 is a pretty common pattern to use so ill keep it
Ultra, as the highest diff is pretty alright imo
Mazziv
I see no reason for it other than it allows 6 digits to pass that part for free due to nc spam.
0109-
hi!

[artlu]
  • hs?
  1. 00:00:116 (1,2,3) - oh gosh big jumps at the beginning looks so silly and uncomfortable, players are like crash the retry button, furthermore, the density here is even higher than the guitar parts which starts from 00:02:642 (1) - and that's so inappropriate. At lease reduce the spacing a bit :(
  2. 00:09:352 (6,7,8) - make these streams blanket with 00:08:642 (3) - would visually better
  3. 00:30:510 (1) - placing a spinner here doesn't fit tbh, idk like it doesn't worth to move the cursor around. A long slow slider would defenitely do a better job. If you still want to keep the spinner, please extend to 00:32:326 - to cover all the vocal. There's no reason to have such a long recovery time like that
  4. 00:33:589 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - NC spam is meaningless, the music all stay the same. This looks like providing free hp, please consider controlling the nc appropriately
  5. 00:59:484 (1) - would suggest to stack this with 00:58:431 (2) - 's tail or the head. The drum sounds so strong that worth more spacing u know
  6. 01:00:747 (1,2,3) - idk if this is ok since the jumps are so sudden @@. Map the previous guitar sounds would be nice
  7. 01:01:063 (3,4,5) - i cant get why you place a triplet here like there's nothing sounds 1/4. why not place a 1/2 slider like 01:11:484 (4) - would be less sudden as well


[feb]
  1. 00:02:010 (1) - i actually can't see the reverse in default skin
  2. 01:30:905 (1) - this is so unpredictable and the music ended at 01:31:063 - pls don't try to make it complicated you can just place the same stuff as 01:30:589 (2) -
  3. complicate maps are good but sometime i don't know what you're trying to emphasize, please map things that the music provided
    like 00:53:010 (1) - i understand the concept of the maps that you use sv pretty much to emphasize things but this actually doesn't fit tbh, players would expect the same intense drum sounds and leave the slider after 1 tap. For the sake of playability, this would be much better if you replace with 2 circles to indicate that you're following the vocal.
  4. And here 00:53:642 (1) - you're making players clicking the place where there isn't anything please make 00:53:800 - clickable.


[chalwa]
  1. Check ai mod for distance snap things
  2. 00:13:221 (2,3,4,5) - wtf with this patterns this is so questionable lol xdd, pls map like 00:18:431 (2,3,4,5) - for consistency
  3. 00:44:642 (2) - what happened with this, you're following the vocal pretty well unless this, would suggest replacing this to a circle at 00:44:800 -


the gap between normal and hard is pretty big that the hard diff already have some kick sliders stuff and the big spacing overall

gl :>
Feb

0109- wrote:

hi!

[artlu]


[feb]
  1. 00:02:010 (1) - i actually can't see the reverse in default skin hmm ye it is, on the other hand its visible a bit as well, so either i make the sv higher or let the player retry the 2 secs he missed in his life.
  2. 01:30:905 (1) - this is so unpredictable and the music ended at 01:31:063 - pls don't try to make it complicated you can just place the same stuff as 01:30:589 (2) - 01:31:221 - the guitar string actually ends here tho. and its predictable judging from other maps where i did the exact same thing and not even on the end of the map
  3. complicate maps are good but sometime i don't know what you're trying to emphasize, please map things that the music provided
    like 00:53:010 (1) - i understand the concept of the maps that you use sv pretty much to emphasize things but this actually doesn't fit tbh, players would expect the same intense drum sounds and leave the slider after 1 tap. For the sake of playability, this would be much better if you replace with 2 circles to indicate that you're following the vocal. yea i kinda wanted to have the passive sound as the strongest sound, but it doesn't fit with the song if i leave out ther est of the guitar right. uh yeah these are circles now.
  4. And here 00:53:642 (1) - you're making players clicking the place where there isn't anything please make 00:53:800 - clickable. isn't this the same thingy ou mentioned above.

gl :>
Thinking about making the slidervelocity higher so the arrow is seen more. Even tho its almost impossible to sliderbreak on the slider since the sliderball doesn#t leave from where you are clicking initially. Uh yeah let's wait.

Didn't reply to mazziv because they said the same thing.

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[artlu]
  • hs?
  1. 00:00:116 (1,2,3) - oh gosh big jumps at the beginning looks so silly and uncomfortable, players are like crash the retry button, furthermore, the density here is even higher than the guitar parts which starts from 00:02:642 (1) - and that's so inappropriate. At lease reduce the spacing a bit :(since the sounds at the start are pretty strong i think jumps arent such a bad idea here :)
  2. 00:09:352 (6,7,8) - make these streams blanket with 00:08:642 (3) - would visually better cool idea
  3. 00:30:510 (1) - placing a spinner here doesn't fit tbh, idk like it doesn't worth to move the cursor around. A long slow slider would defenitely do a better job. If you still want to keep the spinner, please extend to 00:32:326 - to cover all the vocal. There's no reason to have such a long recovery time like that i would like to keep at least 1 spinner in the diff, but i also dont want it to reach that far since there is a prominent vocal sound on the big white tick
  4. 00:33:589 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - NC spam is meaningless, the music all stay the same. This looks like providing free hp, please consider controlling the nc appropriately Mazziv also suggested it but i dont really see a problem with a lot of other maps also doing the same concept
  5. 00:59:484 (1) - would suggest to stack this with 00:58:431 (2) - 's tail or the head. The drum sounds so strong that worth more spacing u know i originally had it like that but i fixed it in some irc, he said that it would just look better and i agreed, i dont want to change it back again tbh
  6. 01:00:747 (1,2,3) - idk if this is ok since the jumps are so sudden @@. Map the previous guitar sounds would be nice in the end its the kiai right, and i think there should be a noticible change when going from non kiai to kiai
  7. 01:01:063 (3,4,5) - i cant get why you place a triplet here like there's nothing sounds 1/4. why not place a 1/2 slider like 01:11:484 (4) - would be less sudden as well fixed




the gap between normal and hard is pretty big that the hard diff already have some kick sliders stuff and the big spacing overall

gl :> ty
i had to think like 5min what you mean with artul xDD
Kyle Y

A r M i N wrote:

Normal Modding
Song: [url=https://osu.ppy.sh/s/646741]
Bentham - White (TV SIZE) [/url]

thanks :D
How a smart way to break my format.
-Sylvari
Hello it's mod from my queue

[Akitoshi's Insane]
00:05:168 (1,2,3,4) - Why this has exactly same distance between this circles? 00:05:168 (1,2) - These two sounds are much stronger than rest.
00:44:326 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here the intensivity of the song is equal on each circle. So why 00:44:958 (3,4) - are diffrent length.
01:27:116 (6,3) - Stack it.

[NeoSL's Insane]
Good Diff.

[Feb's Extra]
00:02:010 (1) -

osu! Ranking Criteria wrote:

  1. Reverse arrows on sliders must not be completely visually obstructed by other hit objects with the default or beatmap-specific skin. Covering up reverse arrows on sliders can result in sliders being ambiguous to read.
Actually it's unreadble. At least I couldn't sightread that

00:04:853 (3) - NC?
00:48:747 (1,2,1,2) - It's same intensivity of song. So why you made bigger spacing between 00:49:063 (1,2) ?

[Battle's Extra]
01:10:537 (6,3) - This overlap is not nice.

[Ultra]
01:01:852 (7,2) - Stack it.
01:13:537 (2,4) - Same ^
Battle

Manteith wrote:

[Battle's Extra]
01:10:537 (6,3) - This overlap is not nice. Well, the overlap is visible for maybe like .5 seconds and it's gone, plus I'm not gonna restructure an entire pattern just for something that's barley noticable in gameplay lol

Mazziv wrote:

[Battle's Extra]
00:04:694 - why dont follow the guitar here? I chose to follow the drums here, which is why each like white tick has a jump for them so ye
pretty solid diff i really like the 1/4 memes you put in the kiai thx me2
osu file format v14

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Source:潔癖男子!青山くん
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JiruPiru
Hi there! This is your mod from my queue.

The Easy and Hard diffs are fine I think

00:25:379 (1,1) - These do not need to be mapped as they are not important sounds in the song (same for any other diff)

Nice pp map lol
Chewin

General Stuff
  1. Correct your SB directory, it is not working atm.
  2. You could make the combo colours consistent between diffs.
  3. Feb's Extra's Kiai is not the same of others for no reason.
  4. 116 ms leadin is nothing. Edit it to 2000ms at least, because your map starts so fast.

Easy
  1. This 1/4 custom hitsound on the first part is a bit annoying ew I would set it each 2 white ticks instead.The kiai looks so poor without the same hitsounding. It should be the opposite XD
  2. 00:08:642 (3,4) - Is this variation of hitsounding intentional? If not, I guess you forgot to set on "Addition" the option "Normal".
  3. 00:20:958 (2) - Finish on this slider's head sounds pretty good, it would emphasize more the one on the tail as well. I would add it because after all those drums this one sounds so empty without a forced hitsound.
  4. 00:21:589 (1) - Add finish on the end
  5. 00:25:379 (1,1,1) - Add whistles on first 2 and adf whistle + finish on the 3rd
  6. 01:20:958 (1) - This slider is unrankable, it's set out of screen.
  7. 01:30:431 (4) - Try to place this somewhere else, it touches the HP bar and it's not good to watch

Chalwa's Normal
  1. 00:08:958 (4) - I would add an addition normal hitsound here, this slider looks so empty @.@
  2. 00:12:747 (1,2,3,4,5) - As I said above about this part, it looks so empty without hitsounds compared to the next part that it's full of 1/1 drum hitsounds
  3. 00:21:431 (1) - Finish on this slider's tail would be great
  4. 00:32:484 (1) - I would avoid this for a normal diff, it looks weird to play after a long break time. I would just start an 1/1 slider 1/2 earlier, on 00:32:326 - to 00:32:642 -, it would be the best thing to do, IMO.
  5. 00:42:589 (1,2) - I do not like this rhythm choice, honestly. I would set this other one, instead: https://puu.sh/x97Kh.png
  6. 01:07:063 (4) - This slider would flow much better if flipped horizontally. Just move the 2nd point to x:76 y:264
  7. 01:19:379 (4) - I think this slider is ugly to watch, no offense :c Try to make something else more beautiful

Hard
  1. 00:02:247 (5) - I would remove this circle honestly, I think it's unnecessary on an Hard diff there
  2. 00:05:958 (5,1) - This overlap is horrible to watch.. Set it 1.30x further than previous one and earlier than next one to keep consistency
  3. 00:12:747 (1,3) - Just stack them, it's much better to watch. Same for next ones like 00:15:273 (1) - and 00:18:432 (3) - and 00:20:958 (3) - . Same for next ones like 00:33:590 (3) - , but I won't mention them anymore, I guess you got it.
  4. 00:21:431 (5) - This circle looks so bad placed there, I would make a triangle with previous (4) and (3)'s tail. Place it to x:172 y:208
  5. 00:21:589 (1) - Same then normal, add finish on the end
  6. 00:55:694 (1,2) - I would swap New combo, if yes, do the same for 00:56:958 (1,2) -
  7. 01:20:010 (1) - Don't do this please. Playing it with HD for an hard diff is pretty cancer :\ Just try to make something like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8835598

Akitoshi's Insane
  1. 00:21:589 (1,1) - This sounds bad. Just remove the circle and extend the spinner by 1/2 :P The spinner on that red tick is just useless, there is not any sound there!
  2. 00:47:800 (5) - I am not sure about this slider. It looks like we can avoid this trying something else. What about if you moved it's tail up? For 2 reasons: it plays much better, it is not hidden anymore under previous slider. I mean something like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8835686 I can already imagine you will hesitate this because it would break the flow with next slider, but you could move and fix the 00:48:116 (1) as well if you decide to follow this suggestion.
  3. 00:51:747 (1,2) - Switch NC, and add NC on 00:52:694 (5) -
  4. 01:05:484 (5) - It's covered by HP bar. I would move this a bit down. Maybe restack it with (3) and move the tail on up-right
  5. 01:16:221 (3) - HP bar :S
  6. 01:30:905 (4) - What about setting a NC here? It would be a nice trolling but good choice

NeoSL's Insane
  1. I already told the mapper I won't mod all maps because I do not have the time, but I gave a fast look and I found this that absolutely needs to be fixed: 00:01:852 (4) - this antijump is so random, just place it somewhere else following the same logic of previous jumping pattern and set a new combo on 00:02:010 (5) to balance it

Ultra
  1. 00:02:010 (5) - I would set NC here because it's a different jump from previous elements. I would even do it because it would warn about the stream and to reduce the combo of this pattern compared to the previous ones
  2. 00:21:510 (1) - Same of other diff
  3. I have nothing to say for this diff. I testplayed it before checking the editor and it was just fine and fun to play.

Battle's Extra
  1. 00:21:431 (1) - Same of other diffs
  2. 00:41:326 (5,6,7,1) - I think this is a bit exagerated xD I would reduce their distance a bit
  3. 01:12:668 (4,5) - Stack it with 01:12:431 (3)'s tail or just place it a bit down it, i do not like where you placed it actually :\
  4. 01:12:905 (6) - Remove grid snap and perfectly on the same line of the slider, at x:395 y:8
  5. 01:28:852 (3) - Place to x:256 y:336 to make a triangle and to make it more comfortable to play
  6. 01:30:905 (1) - Placing it to x: 256 y:368 makes the jump from 01:30:747 (9) - better to play (for both suggestions, I testplayed the map).

That's it. I wish you good luck and I hope it helped!
Topic Starter
A r M i N

Chewin wrote:

General Stuff
  1. Correct your SB directory, it is not working atm. Venix is working on a new Storyboard anyways ^^
  2. You could make the combo colours consistent between diffs.
  3. Feb's Extra's Kiai is not the same of others for no reason. kiais can differ from each diff, he probably changed it
  4. 116 ms leadin is nothing. Edit it to 2000ms at least, because your map starts so fast.

Easy
  1. This 1/4 custom hitsound on the first part is a bit annoying ew I would set it each 2 white ticks instead.The kiai looks so poor without the same hitsounding. It should be the opposite XD I dont get what you mean i am sorry xD
  2. 00:08:642 (3,4) - Is this variation of hitsounding intentional? If not, I guess you forgot to set on "Addition" the option "Normal".
  3. 00:20:958 (2) - Finish on this slider's head sounds pretty good, it would emphasize more the one on the tail as well. I would add it because after all those drums this one sounds so empty without a forced hitsound. I agree, it sounds emty but i added a normal clap
  4. 00:21:589 (1) - Add finish on the end doesnt sound good imo sorry^^
  5. 00:25:379 (1,1,1) - Add whistles on first 2 and adf whistle + finish on the 3rd
  6. 01:20:958 (1) - This slider is unrankable, it's set out of screen.
  7. 01:30:431 (4) - Try to place this somewhere else, it touches the HP bar and it's not good to watch

Hard
  1. 00:02:247 (5) - I would remove this circle honestly, I think it's unnecessary on an Hard diff there
  2. 00:05:958 (5,1) - This overlap is horrible to watch.. Set it 1.30x further than previous one and earlier than next one to keep consistency sorry but what overlap haha
  3. 00:12:747 (1,3) - Just stack them, it's much better to watch. Same for next ones like 00:15:273 (1) - and 00:18:432 (3) - and 00:20:958 (3) - . Same for next ones like 00:33:590 (3) - , but I won't mention them anymore, I guess you got it. i did it that way for better reading^^
  4. 00:21:431 (5) - This circle looks so bad placed there, I would make a triangle with previous (4) and (3)'s tail. Place it to x:172 y:208 its fine imo ^^
  5. 00:21:589 (1) - Same then normal, add finish on the end doesnt sound good ^^
  6. 00:55:694 (1,2) - I would swap New combo, if yes, do the same for 00:56:958 (1,2) - no sorry^^
  7. 01:20:010 (1) - Don't do this please. Playing it with HD for an hard diff is pretty cancer :\ Just try to make something like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8835598

Ultra
  1. 00:02:010 (5) - I would set NC here because it's a different jump from previous elements. I would even do it because it would warn about the stream and to reduce the combo of this pattern compared to the previous ones
  2. 00:21:510 (1) - Same of other diff i think a finish hitsound doesnt fit here ^^
  3. I have nothing to say for this diff. I testplayed it before checking the editor and it was just fine and fun to play. <3

That's it. I wish you good luck and I hope it helped! probably the best mod i got so far thanks :D
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Tarrasky wrote:

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00:13:221 (3) - move to x451 y265 to blanket with 00:13:063 (2) - I don't wany to blanket this one.

DJ Lucky wrote:

01:00:116 - Honestly this just feel empty - I understand u want a pause but the sounds in the background makes it feel like I should be pressing some circles at least - I don't add a beat here, doesn't have any sounds.

01:04:379 (1) - the distance right here and right here 01:06:905 (1) - is different - they both capture the same impact but the first 1 jump distance is a bit longer than the 2nd - This may be my poor judgment but may reduce the distance bit?Well......doesn't matter imo.

Also I notice that 01:09:273 (1) - has less emphasis than I feel it should when comparing it to 2 previously mentions - a simply change in the distance to have a bigger jump could fix thisNo.

Mazziv wrote:

[NeosSKL]
00:14:010 (1) - move this to x68 y312 or something to have a nice hexagonJust I made triangle. hexagon doesn't matter in this part at all.

Chewin wrote:

I already told the mapper I won't mod all maps because I do not have the time, but I gave a fast look and I found this that absolutely needs to be fixed: 00:01:852 (4) - this antijump is so random, just place it somewhere else following the same logic of previous jumping pattern and set a new combo on 00:02:010 (5) to balance itMusic gets lower, so I reduced little bit, and players don't misread it as 1/4.
Thanks for mod!
@Armin could you add a video in my map?
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