1. Versteckter Daemon (5,13 stars, 1926 notes)

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http://www.nuclearblast.de/en/label/music/band/discography/details/3369920.71053.erdentempel.html

Shinsekai- wrote:

hi~~~

[Vertecker Damon]

La diff en si esta hermosa pero puedes agregar un poquito de tu ritmo para hacerla mas entretenida... En que sentido te preguntaras, Bueno un ejemplo puede ser esto 00:15:233 (14) - ahi puedes agregar una kat ( agregando esta nota, Puedes fingir estar siguiendo el platillo de fondo... Como un ritmo largo """""""""""LARGO""""""""" ) queda muy feo, en esta parte sólo sigo el 1/4 del keyboard
- por que no cambiar aqui a kkk 00:41:258 (7,8,9) - ? asi puedes marcar mas las siguientes notas un poquito y tambien el pequeño cambio que hay en el sonido o un kdk tambien funciona le da mas caracter a aquella zona ( nota... Si haces esto tendrias que cambiar uno o los dos en todos los tiplets que tienen el mismo sonido ) pero si tienen casi el mismo sonido

- DON 00:58:658 (1) - , por esto 01:03:458 (1) - xD consistencia (?) en serio?

- sigue los platillos aqui 01:28:658 (10,14,20,21) - puede ser bueno ( para no decir Fino y confundirte todo ) what

- cambiala a k 02:05:858 (1) - el sonido del timbre te parece a ti que estoy mapeando el sonido de las campanillas

- ^ 03:08:258 (1) - the

- si me gustaria que el ultimo kiai no tenga tantas pausas como por ejemplo aqui 04:44:408 (24) - , 04:34:808 (24) - algo asi... aunque ya de por si es mas dificil que todos los demas.. las pausas son rítmicas. Si te fijas no he seguido ciegamente la música sino que he improvisado un ritmo propio

el resto para mi esta demasiado bello... Alto map wn <3 keep working tyty

Nepuri wrote:

Hihi!

[General]

Tags: Add "Erdentempel", the album which this song appeared in?
Add "daemon" or "dämon" to the tags? Its the German ways to spell Demon as in your diffname (Tbh i caught myself typing dämon and wondering where your map was) added erdentempel but dämon was already a tag lmao

[Versteckter Dämon]

01:05:333 (8) - delete or make this a don:
Since this and previous sections are just dons, and occasional extra dons for the nondrum instruments, this kat stands out too much.
If the kat werent there, 01:05:558 (11) - (which is important sound to make a kat out of) would stand out even more from the rest of the section, and also signals the upcoming stream even better. it contrasts from the previous and following note and there is no "fast snap" to base off a 1/6th pattern so dkddk works just fine

02:04:358 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) -
I dont really see where those patterns come from.
Especially 02:04:658 (12) - this k, that lands on a kick drum
02:04:808 (13,14,15,16,17) - and this entire 5let, that actually sounds more like a kkddk because of the snare and kick drums.
It just doesnt sound that right to me tbh, but maybe you have a reason for that, idk. listen to the vocalist, hear his crescendo starting at 02:04:358 (8) - which I made a don to further contrast with 02:04:508 (10,12) - as they are the peak of the pattern. The other pattern merely has a flow+connective purpose for the longer 9plet ahead.

02:58:658 - This section:
02:58:658 (1) - Theres a Bell noise and strong guitar strum, Finish? I don't care about the bell, and I can't really feel the guitar as strong as to warrant a finisher
03:01:058 (11,12,13) - 2 strong guitar strums here, i dont see emphasis on it tho? Maybe finish it similar to what you did at 03:03:458 (2) - the emphasis of the finishers you pointed out lies on the percussion there though, not on the guitar
03:08:258 (1,2,3) - again strums and bell sound not emphasized ;;
03:10:658 (12,13,14) - strums here, no emphasis D: similar responses to all ^
03:12:758 (22) - cymbal sound that was a finisher in the first half of section, but isnt here. Make it consistent by either finishing both or unfinishing both
03:13:058 (1) - same goes for this don

04:32:258 - In this kiai i find it weird that the strong guitar strums on every 2 downbeats are mostly avoided.
Cursor on 04:34:808 - (the not mapped strum)

Maybe this (and everywhere else where the strum is avoided) can be turned into smth like

this?
I thought consistently skipping the beat would actually give the signal that the rhythm I created was intentional lol. Think about the vocal pauses, I try to emphasize all of them with these gaps.
05:02:483 - add a d to make it more resemblant like the sections near the start of the song? too much d k ddk already


Hm, i guess that would be all i found.
Over all i like the SV in the kiais aswell as the general idea of the sections outside it.
Good luck with this Map!
(Have some stars for obvious german reasons) whoa ty