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Naoki Maeda & Tatsuya Shimizu - Red Zone

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Acme Deizd Void
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, July 31, 2017 at 11:39:12 PM

Artist: Naoki Maeda & Tatsuya Shimizu
Title: Red Zone
Source: beatmania IIDX
Tags: tatsh zeami ddr jubeat
BPM: 165
Filesize: 2111kb
Play Time: 01:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. Speedrave (5.12 stars, 528 notes)
Download: Naoki Maeda & Tatsuya Shimizu - Red Zone
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Mashed
Hi!

[Speedrave]
00:04:730 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - I want to suggest this to fit the rhythm better!
00:18:730 (6,7,8,9,10) - Fix these spacing please!
00:37:093 (1,2,3) - Spacing between 2 and 3 needs to be bigger.
00:37:457 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Spacing between 8 and 9 need to be smaller
01:02:911 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Just a comment, but damn this part looks sick. :)
01:43:093 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing here too!

This map looks insane and looks really fun
Not sure if it can be ranked :?
Topic Starter
Acme Deizd Void

Mashed wrote:

Hi!

[Speedrave]
00:04:730 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - I want to suggest this to fit the rhythm better!
00:18:730 (6,7,8,9,10) - Fix these spacing please!
00:37:093 (1,2,3) - Spacing between 2 and 3 needs to be bigger.
00:37:457 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Spacing between 8 and 9 need to be smaller
01:02:911 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Just a comment, but damn this part looks sick. :)
01:43:093 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing here too!

This map looks insane and looks really fun
Not sure if it can be ranked :?
Fixed.
Thanks :D
coco
Speedrave
00:32:366 (6,7,8,9) - NC (new combo) here. Start of a new phrase.
00:33:093 (10,11,12,13,14) - and 00:34:547 (5,6,7,8,9) - Could use NC to make it easier to read.
00:37:093 (1,2,3) - It's too spaced out here. The spacing should be something more like 00:36:002 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) since the music doesn't change its rhythm.
00:36:002 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - Moving the stack on top of the slider would make it easier to follow.
00:39:639 (9,10,11,12) - NC since it's on the 1 beat of the bar of the music.
00:45:457 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe I'm just bad but I find it hard to snap to the streams.
01:01:820 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest this shape or something similar because now the 1/1 gaps and 1/2 gaps are more noticeable.
01:33:820 (1) - This slider too fast
01:35:639 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4) - As much as I like sliders like these, I don't think they are rankable.

I'm a new mapper/modder as well, so if there's anything you disagree with please share! I'd love to learn different perspectives :)

Edit: Please mod https://osu.ppy.sh/s/645549 rather than the map I asked for before.
Topic Starter
Acme Deizd Void

cococolaco wrote:

01:33:820 (1) - This slider too fast
It was on purpose actually. If you notice the speeds of previous 2, they are built up for this one.

cococolaco wrote:

I'm a new mapper/modder as well, so if there's anything you disagree with please share! I'd love to learn different perspectives :)

Edit: Please mod https://osu.ppy.sh/s/645549 rather than the map I asked for before.
Sure thing
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