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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sonntag, 15. Oktober 2017 at 23:02:06

Artist: xi
Title: Time Files
Tags: xi
BPM: 200
Filesize: 1805kb
Play Time: 01:40
Difficulties Available:
  1. Evening & Morning (5,99 stars, 801 notes)
  2. Normal (1,97 stars, 163 notes)


Download: xi - Time Files
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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2nd Beatmap. Much better than the 1st. Hope you enjoy :D
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When you said 'beginner xi map' I was expecting an easy diff but this is just mayhem (as a good thing).

Evening & Morning
01:26:264 this spaced stream is better off curved
00:11:458 (1,2,3) ctrl+g on 2
00:40:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6) don't do this

I feel like there are more problems but I'm just too distracted by this awesome music! Good luck! :)

I feel like a lot of new mappers try to make the next hard stream map and I'm just sitting here making easy diffs for fun
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PotatoJet wrote:

When you said 'beginner xi map' I was expecting an easy diff but this is just mayhem (as a good thing).

Evening & Morning
01:26:264 this spaced stream is better off curved is it?
00:11:458 (1,2,3) ctrl+g on 2 nah that would be much more struggling
00:40:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6) don't do thiswhy not i made that because the music was repetetive and so did i here!

I feel like there are more problems but I'm just too distracted by this awesome music! Good luck! :)
thxthx :D

I feel like a lot of new mappers try to make the next hard stream map and I'm just sitting here making easy diffs for fun
maybe yeah xd

Thanks for the mod :D
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c:
[Evening & Morning]
  1. 00:02:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - It's pretty weird to these this mapped differently, in terms of slider use, to parts like - 00:05:243 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - , considering that you continued mapping to the style in the latter.
  2. 00:06:968 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - It seems you were trying to emphasize the increase in pitch at 00:07:268 (1,2,3,4) - . I think this part would be better if you were to change DS in 00:06:968 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:07:568 (1,2,3,4) - to be the same as the previous ones, leaving the one left "pop out".
  3. 00:19:568 (1,2,3) - This part feels too cramped. Spread out the slider.
  4. 00:23:168 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - imo these objects stand out by having different patterns, when they don't really have to due to the lack of significant changes in the song.
  5. 00:30:368 (5) - NC would be nice here.
  6. 00:31:568 (1,1,1) - Please follow this NC pattern throughout this part or section of the song. Put NCs in parts like 00:33:968 (1,5,9) - .
  7. 00:49:418 (9,1) - This small spacing can be jarring to play. Move 00:49:568 (1) - somewhere farther from 00:49:418 (9) - , or maybe the other way around idk xd
  8. 00:49:568 - Hm... I think the spacings of the circles here should have less spacing. This part of the song isn't too intense.
  9. 00:59:543 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - The stream shape here could be better. It looks a bit uneven.
  10. 01:19:268 (5,1) - Shouldn't this part be like 01:14:468 (4,5,1) - ?
  11. 01:27:968 (1,2) - 01:23:168 (1,2) - I feel like there should be consistency between these.
  12. 01:38:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Stream should start somewhere close to 01:38:468 (13) - just like the recent streams.
Be sure to complete the difficulty spread.
Hope this helps. Good luck!
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hey, my part of the M4M from my queue.
Evening & Morning

first of all, why is the preview point at the start? i think 00:12:368 would make a better preview personally :/
next, the black bars on the background don't look very good.
ok now for the actual mod
00:04:268 (2) - missing a whistle here
00:04:568 (3) - change this to a clap
00:15:668 (8) - remove the clap sound from the very end of this
00:15:968 (1,2,3) - these slider shapes don't look very good
00:20:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - make this stream more circular
00:26:918 (2,3,4) - what's going on here lol. stack this please
00:27:968 (1) - more unpleasant looking slider shapes
00:28:568 (3,4) - try moving these sliders either up or down to create a more staggered look
00:30:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - make this stream more circular aswell
00:31:568 (1) - new combos here are weird
00:40:118 (1,2,3,4,5) - the overlaps on these don't look too good, plus 00:40:268 (2,3) overlaps more than the other sliders
00:45:968 (1) - there isn't a finish sound on the head
00:49:568 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - imperfect square
00:55:568 (1) - no finish sound on the head here either :/
00:57:968 (1,2,3,4) - the way (1) and (2) overlap looks kinda bad
00:59:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - make this stream flow better
01:15:743 (9,10) - remove clap sounds
01:18:068 (8) - same with the end and middle of this

fun map. good luck with this!
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00:49:718 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This section of the stream should be curved
01:25:868 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - I think this should be a series of jumps and not a stream (it matches the intensity better)
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-Harpuia- wrote:

c:
[Evening & Morning]
  1. 00:02:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - It's pretty weird to these this mapped differently, in terms of slider use, to parts like - 00:05:243 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - , considering that you continued mapping to the style in the latter. well a whole section is mapped like this so it shouldnt be that confusing right?
  2. 00:06:968 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - It seems you were trying to emphasize the increase in pitch at 00:07:268 (1,2,3,4) - . I think this part would be better if you were to change DS in 00:06:968 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:07:568 (1,2,3,4) - to be the same as the previous ones, leaving the one left "pop out".
  3. 00:19:568 (1,2,3) - This part feels too cramped. Spread out the slider. fixed
  4. 00:23:168 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - imo these objects stand out by having different patterns, when they don't really have to due to the lack of significant changes in the song. i made variety so it shouldnt be boring right?
  5. 00:30:368 (5) - NC would be nice here. fixed
  6. 00:31:568 (1,1,1) - Please follow this NC pattern throughout this part or section of the song. Put NCs in parts like 00:33:968 (1,5,9) - . fixed
  7. 00:49:418 (9,1) - This small spacing can be jarring to play. Move 00:49:568 (1) - somewhere farther from 00:49:418 (9) - , or maybe the other way around idk xd fixed xd
  8. 00:49:568 - Hm... I think the spacings of the circles here should have less spacing. This part of the song isn't too intense. fixed
  9. 00:59:543 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - The stream shape here could be better. It looks a bit uneven. fixed
  10. 01:19:268 (5,1) - Shouldn't this part be like 01:14:468 (4,5,1) - ? yes sry. fixed
  11. 01:27:968 (1,2) - 01:23:168 (1,2) - I feel like there should be consistency between these. what do you mean by that?
  12. 01:38:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Stream should start somewhere close to 01:38:468 (13) - just like the recent streams.
put it closer
Be sure to complete the difficulty spread.
Hope this helps. Good luck!
Thank u and thx for the mod :D
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- titan wrote:

hey, my part of the M4M from my queue.
Evening & Morning

first of all, why is the preview point at the start? i think 00:12:368 would make a better preview personally :/ idk what it does but im following u with this xd
next, the black bars on the background don't look very good. idk what do do about this
ok now for the actual mod
00:04:268 (2) - missing a whistle herewrong. I doubled the gap for whistle and clap because at this tiny part the song is calmer.
00:04:568 (3) - change this to a clap ^
00:15:668 (8) - remove the clap sound from the very end of this fixed
00:15:968 (1,2,3) - these slider shapes don't look very good why not? theyre blanketed and curved
00:20:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - make this stream more circular fixed
00:26:918 (2,3,4) - what's going on here lol. stack this please idk what happned lol. fixed
00:27:968 (1) - more unpleasant looking slider shapes lul
00:28:568 (3,4) - try moving these sliders either up or down to create a more staggered lookok... fixed
00:30:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - make this stream more circular aswelllooks cirular enough for me
00:31:568 (1) - new combos here are weirdthis section is slightly different from the start section so thats why i made this
00:40:118 (1,2,3,4,5) - the overlaps on these don't look too good, plus 00:40:268 (2,3) overlaps more than the other sliders fixed
00:45:968 (1) - there isn't a finish sound on the head fixed
00:49:568 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - imperfect square fixed
00:55:568 (1) - no finish sound on the head here either :/fixed
00:57:968 (1,2,3,4) - the way (1) and (2) overlap looks kinda badfixed
00:59:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - make this stream flow betterfixed
01:15:743 (9,10) - remove clap soundsfixed
01:18:068 (8) - same with the end and middle of this
fixed
fun map. good luck with this!
thx for the mod and that compliment. Proud that i mainly mapped this song good and only fked up the hitsounds. GL with ur map
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From my modding queue~

Sorry for the late mod, school plz, elsword plz, Touhou plz

anyways here it is!

General
It shows 0 kbps on my details but, if its anything below 150, try to get better music




Evening and Morning
(Wouldn't Morning and Evening be better?)

00:20:468 (7,1) - try to properly connect these
00:26:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too easy and linear for jumps
00:50:693 (16,1) - connect these properly, and 1 cannont be seen as a proper slider
00:54:593 (4,5) - connect properly



I see nothing wrong, and xi map should clearly have less spaces than that!

But seriously, the rhythm is good, but some parts are lacking creativity like the literal square jumps that were repeated 3 times

Good map, but finish the hitsound pls :c
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Thanks for making fun map
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thx :D
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Normal diff Work in Progress.
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From #modreqs

00:06:968 (4) - Avoid 1/2 sliders with multiple reverses
00:13:568 (3) - Move the red anchor so that the slider goes up when the sound changes (first white tick)
00:15:968 (3) - ^
00:20:768 (4,5) - Avoid sliders with multiple reverses
00:23:168 (3) - Same thing as before
00:25:568 (1) - No no no. You can't just change it to 1/3 like this, the tail isn't even snapped. Also no multiple reverses
00:27:968 (3,1) - You know what i am about to say, move the red anchor
00:30:968 (4) - Multiple reverses
00:42:968 (2,3) - That is hard to read for a normal. New plays don't know how sliders work fully yet
00:46:568 (2,3) - ^
00:56:168 (2,3,4,5) - How are new players actually meant to read that?

I think i will just be repeating myself with the same points over and over again so i will stop there.
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m4m

[evening and morning]
  1. you have a bunch of unjustified overlaps, fix those since they make your map look more messy than it should
  2. 00:15:968 (1) - stuff like this is a bit too curvy, which leads to these being overemphasized. straighten out the curves a bit to
  3. holy shit those hitsounds hurt, pls lower hs volume and change sampleset to soft so theyre easier on the ears
  4. a note on rhythm consistency - from 00:02:768 - the streams were on every 2nd and 4th beat exclusively, but after 00:05:168 - they begin to show up on exclusively 1st and 3rd beats. stick with one or the other to make rhythm more clear in what it's emphasizing.
  5. 00:04:268 (2) - shouldnt this be a stream too since that 1/4 thing in the background (like the one at 00:03:068 (2,3,4,5) - ) is also present? either way i think itd reflect the song better than using a reverse slider
  6. 00:06:668 (1) - remove nc, 00:06:443 (2,3,4,1) - is one whole section
  7. 00:06:968 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - having consistent spacing the entire stream works better than decreasing it slightly near the end imo, especially since they way you have it right now makes this really uncomfy to aim
  8. 00:13:418 (11,1) - should be spaced further apart, 1 is p important
  9. 00:25:568 (1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - right now it's not really clear that this is 1/3, maybe nc 4 at the very least to indicate 1/3
  10. 00:33:668 (5) // 00:38:468 (5) - reverse 1/4 would work here, since this is different from 00:32:468 (5) - in that you have a prominent pitch change or something here
  11. 00:35:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same problem as 00:25:568 (1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
  12. 00:40:118 (1,2,3,4,5) - make these a bit more vertical, right now they look too close for comfort and it looks kinda ugly (also equal spacing)
  13. 00:52:868 (1) - make these face in the same direction as 00:52:567 (1,2,2,1) - for visual consistency within the pattern
  14. 00:57:968 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - squares + 90 degree rotated copypasted slders would make this look way neater trust me
  15. 01:25:568 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) // 01:35:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) // 01:39:968 (1,2,3,4,5) - same problem once again as 00:25:568 (1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
  16. 01:37:268 (13,1) - would be better spaced out to prevent notelock, and also to make these readable as 2 separate streams rather than 1 continous one


the mod is already long enough as it is so im not gonna mod normal orz

good luck!
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Hello mod from my queue~
General
  1. I'd rather use that repeating, more "chorus-like" section for the kiai time. (like the one from 00:12:368 - to 00:31:568 - and 01:12:368 - to 01:31:568 - ) Repeating choruses are pretty common places to kiai, but it's also possible to prefer kiai some middle sections that could contain solos for example or something other that is intense and so on. This middle section here though doesn't feel any more intense than the repeating ones (more like I feel it's calmer imo) and it's lacking any distinct differentiation for it to be some kind of solo part. All in all, it's not like it's really wrong to kiai it, but to me it doesn't feel as fitting as the others would.
Normal
  1. 00:09:968 (1) - while it normally would make sense on the white tick, here there are no sounds there and it kinda feels off because of that. Possible simple solution would be to for example just make the hitsound on the end muuuch quieter so that the spinner kinda fades out instead of having loud clear point where it ends. Or just move the ending point to some more relevant tick (but that's more complicated here)
  2. 00:25:568 (1) - doesn't work too well, the slider is catching every other sound which in case of 1/3 doesn't really fit the emphasis (which is every 3 sounds instead. Same with the other one at 01:25:568 (1) -
  3. 00:45:368 (4,5,6) - probably not good idea on normal, but atleast NC this rhythm then. Same with 00:54:968 (4,5,6) - and so on if you do the same thing
Evening & Morning
  1. 00:13:268 (10,11) - little more space? Or angle? Anyways so that it doesn't remind of 1/4 like it currently kinda does (even though the spacing is pretty high for that)
  2. 00:23:168 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - not really agreeing with these rhythms here. 00:24:068 (3,4) - is fine, the sounds are there and so on. 00:23:168 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - for these, you can't really emphasis the melody 1/2 with these kicksliders since the melody is 1/2 for only like the first beat. The actual rhythm in the measure (1/2 for beat -> 1/4 for beat -> 1/2 for beat -> 1/4 for beat) supports couple of these rhythms, but then for example 00:23:468 (1,2) - feels like it is lacking objects instead. Anyways, doing the rhythms the way they are is easy way to improve it (how you use sliders and circles for them is up to you)
  3. All this kiai feels kinda overmapped rhythmically (well, the rhythms are there though) as in how it feels a lot more intense than I feel the music is. Kinda fine now as it is kiai, but if you decide to shift the kiai for the other parts, you should tune this down somewhat. Also, for the 2nd half, definitely do something that differs from the first half of this. (As in about 01:01:568 - and so on where the melody changes some rhythms). Like, make something that expresses the change in the song better than somewhat similar 1/4 stuff as the parts before
  4. Visuals could use some tuning as well, but those can wait until the larger lines are tuned little
Good luck!
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