ShadowLord wrote:

Here you go :]

http://puu.sh/6Wis

Mik-ey wrote:

ShadowLord wrote:

Here you go :]

http://puu.sh/6Wis

Thanks

I was asking for a Mod, now I get a Guest Diff. LoL

OzzyOzrock wrote:

INSTEAD OF GOING UNDER

The source is definitely not Lego Rock Band. It was simply on that game.

SakiK wrote:

hi-;D from mod req
all of suggestion
[general]
fine

[Too ShallowLord!]
02:10:714 (5) - new combo

[ShadowDeep]
00:06:425 (5) - new combo
00:08:492 (10) - new combo
00:09:009 (1) - remove new combo
01:22:911 (5) - new combo
01:24:461 (1) - add clap to begin slider
01:26:270 (3) - add clap
03:02:135 (3) - new combo
03:12:471 (9) - new combo

[Too Deep!]
00:29:681 (7) - new combo
00:32:781 (6) - new combo? /nah.
00:36:657 (8) - new combo
00:49:319 (1) - add a finish
01:00:947 (2) - spacing /I see nothing wrong there. =P
01:24:461 (5) - new combo? /No.
01:38:156 (6) - 1grid down
02:23:893 (3) - new combo? /I leave it like that.

[Too Shiek!]
sorry, I don't understand 1/6beatsnap modding /Wait what!? O___o

I love sum41;D fight!

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

hihi~!

For [too collab!]
the only thing i got is:
[01:24:461] (6,7,8,9) the space is a bit larger than other streaming parts..personnally. /thought so. >_>
nice hit sound ~!

For [too shiek!] /Yeah, Shiek style. Nobody likes it actually. =P
to me,there are some weird jumps like :
[01:06:545] (1)
01:40:999 (1)
02:28:285 (1,2,3) -
Also,
02:48:613 u could add some notes there.

For [too deep!]
02:24:926 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - the sliders i think is a bit liner. /Don't really get it, I leave it like that for now.

For [shadow deep]
i think its good~!
but the hit sound is not that good as other diffs.

For [ too shallowLord!]
GOOD~!

Another problem is that there are a lot of long spinners,so personally i think u need to make it shorter. /Play Sky Ferreira - One.

All the mods are only suggestions, im a new mapper and modder.
BTW, i like sum41, cauz they ROCK~!

Yeah! Sum 41 FTW! ^^

ShadowSoul wrote:

taken request from #modreqs

Too ShallowLord
00:04:875 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Whistles sounds better in this full part :3 /Don't think so

Too Deep
00:15:727 (2,3) - Remove them /Nah
00:16:244 (4) - NC here /^
00:58:104 (6) - ^
01:01:980 (6) - ^
01:03:531 (1) - Remove there
01:04:306 (4) - Add NC
01:06:115 (8) - ^
01:06:890 (1) - Remove
01:08:440 (5) - Add
01:14:900 (7) - ^
02:20:792 (7) - ^
02:26:735 (4) - ^
02:28:802 (8) - ^
02:35:004 (6) - ^
03:18:673 (6) - ^
03:22:807 (4) - ^
03:24:875 (9) - NC since it's offbeat /You're sure about that?

The Diff looks fine .. just try to make some sliders more beautiful :3

Too Shiek ! /Waiting for Shiek <_<
Overall
Hitsounds are Bad.
00:35:365 (5) - New Combo
00:40:533 (7,1,2,3,4) - hard to read .. may change it ?
00:48:027 (6,7,8,9) - that looks ugly .. anyway new combo on (9)
00:50:094 (1) - Remove nc here
01:01:980 (8) - NC
01:03:014 (1) - Remove
01:04:306 (4) - NC
01:28:595 (1,1) - Remove .. why need that Combo spam ..
01:34:539 (7) - NC
01:36:864 (2) - NC here since it's anti jump
02:13:040 (9) - NC
02:14:073 (1) - Remove
02:24:022 (1) - ^
02:25:185 (7) - Add
02:25:701 (1) - Remove
02:30:869 (6) - Add

Sorry for that New Combo spams :p

Btw .. i dunno why but i can't open Collab in Editor /WTF!?!

bmin11 wrote:

[Collab]
(MiTiai) /Not sure I should fix it because he wasn't online for a long time.
The spacing is incredibly small compare to the Slider Velocity. Plays weird IMO
00:36:657 (1,2) - Two circles, then a slider would have fitted better IMO
00:39:241 (3) - Start the slider here (yes, move #4 to this timing), and then end it at the red tick. If you have done it this way, add a note on the big white tick
00:59:138 (4,5,6) - these aren't equally spaced
(MiK-ey)
03:24:358 (8) - Add finish

[Sheik] /Will be fixed soon!
00:44:022 (2) - Remove the clap
00:46:864 (2) - ^
00:46:993 (3) - Remove the clap the at end
01:16:580 (11) - Stack this completely
01:18:906 (6) - Remove the clap
01:38:285 (6) - ^
01:53:402 (7) - Slider should start here
02:53:608 (11) - New combo

[Too Deep!]
01:00:172 (1) - Increase the spacing a bit. It's a lot easier to follow that way.
01:16:192 (4,5) - Ugly /I wanted to change that but always forgot lol.

Harder difficulties are lacking of creativity in general. Show your creativity a bit more :<
I wish I could be more creativ :<

Mythol wrote:

o/
General
Don't switch to x2.0 sv during final kiai, stick to x1.5 please. /But it fits better :C
Spacing for streams in all difficulties could be reduced.
Stick to one distance spacing for all triplets.
Stack Leniency really should be higher..

Too ShallowLord!
00:43:376 (6) - Fix this blanket. /What?
01:00:172 ~ 01:16:709 - This finish spam is not necessary at all.
01:29:112 - Note?
02:23:634 (1) - End this spinner on the previous white tick. (If I were a beginner, I'd go crazy on the spin and miss the next note for sure)
02:53:350 (1) - End spinner on previous white tick, follows the drum beat.

ShadowDeep
AR 7 is abit too high imo. /Changed to 6
Everything else seems fine~

Too Deep!
Does it have to be circle size 5? /Normal size what's wrong with it?
00:49:577 (1) - I feel this spinner fits better if you start it on the next red tick.
01:27:820 (6) - NC?
01:34:539 (6) - ^
02:12:006 (7) - ^
02:14:590 (1,2,3,4) - This finish spam doesn't fit

Too Shiek! /Didn't fix everything yet because somethings shiek should fix it.
All the streams could use smaller spacing.
00:26:063 (5) - Maybe http://puu.sh/gUQb (This looks really messy)
00:28:906 (6) - NC?
00:32:265 (5) - Please end this on the white tick.
00:40:533 (7,1,2,3,4) - If you're going to do this, lessen the spacing a little.
00:51:386 (7) - May I suggest a pattern like this, with the spinner moved as so. http://puu.sh/gUSm NC at the 7 if you plan to use this.
01:07:407 - Note?
02:51:541 (6) - NC?
02:55:546 (4) - This note slightly below the other 4.
03:01:102 (4) - NC
03:02:135 (7) - NC
03:15:572 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This spacing is huge.

Too Collab!
01:16:709 (1) - Remove finish.
01:20:585 (5) - NC
01:48:750 (2) - Needs a bigger spacing from the slider.
01:49:784 (7) - ^ + NC
01:50:818 (1) - ^
02:29:448 (3) - A little to the right would make it better.
03:02:135 ~ 03:16:606 - Jump placements seem extremely random, could use a little work.. /Replaced some notes.

As stated before, creativity is really lacking in the harder diffs. /I'm the most uncreative person in ther world \:D/
Hope this helped. ^^

gekkiii wrote:

The Collab!
01:50:301 (5) 1grid→
01:51:593 (7) 1grid↑
02:39:138 (1,3) remove clap?
Too Shiek!
00:18:828 (8) NewCombo
00:14:435 (5,6,7) 1grid←
Too Deep!
02:07:355 (7) NewCombo?
02:18:983 (4) ^?
ShadowDeep
00:33:298 (6) slider end isn't white line
00:35:107 (3) ^
Too ShallowLord!
01:39:190 (5) NewCombo

Good map!

Wasn't all that helpfull but thanks anyway.

1. Try to add some information in creator words of your difficulty names:
   
   Too ShallowLord! - Normal
   ShadowDeep - Hard (etc.)
2. Please make sure your kiai sections are snapped correctly
3. Resnap all sliders on all difficulties

1. 00:12:885 try this: http://puu.sh/vyuf
2. 00:15:469 this pattern would be cool: (you need to fix the spacing after it)
   

   176,148,15469,1,0
   144,232,15727,1,0
   368,232,15986,1,0
   336,148,16244,1,8

3. 00:28:647 try this: http://puu.sh/vyvO (better flow)
4. 00:48:544 try this pattern: http://puu.sh/vyxa
5. 01:08:440 another modder said, that the harder Diffs need more creativity: for example try this: http://puu.sh/vyym
6. 01:10:508 delete the repeat and add circles at add a slider or two circles at/from 01:11:541 and /to 01:11:800
7. 01:17:484 same case (try a curve, but not this zigzag)
8. 01:32:730 here should be a stream
9. 02:34:229 (4) make this symmetrical
10. 03:24:616 (9) try this: 03:24:616 instead of the other Slider

LKs wrote:

[Too Shiek!]
Avoid to use the same slider velocity as easiest diffs next time
00:52:420 (1) - Should be started from 00:52:032 - Fixed
01:30:017 (5) - Delete (this stream doesn't make sense, just add a triple at 01:30:146 normally) Removed it ;o
01:53:272 (6,7) - aw, you used a wide spacing for 1/4 beats here, I Fixed the Spacing , 7 is now closer to 6
and afterwards you used such 0.48x for 1/2 beats on 01:53:402 (7,1) - :\? yeaa...

Not going to mod a wall, but this map needs more works. Good luck.

CDFA wrote:

2 Diffs by ShadowLord? and only 1.5 diffs by the actual mapper? I think there's a rule saying that this isn't allowed.

CDFA wrote:

SHEEK: *Shiek
Claps on 2 and 4! >3<~
00:24:771 (3) - boring pattern! now its a stream
00:33:298 - Start kiai here. Fixed
00:35:365 (1) - boring pattern! hope its better now ;o
01:16:968 (1) - ^ other arrangement
01:21:102 (3) - ^ now its streamed.
01:24:978 - Start kiai here Fixed
01:55:469 (7) - NOT SURE WHY THIS SLOWS DOWN :> IDK ! xD fixed :'D
02:07:355 (9) - Not moe! wtf?
02:24:926 - Start kiai here Fixed
02:45:340 (1) - Boring pattern! now other pattern
02:52:316 (9) - ^ ^
02:53:608 (1) - DAFUQ YES!

intoon wrote:

from #modreq...


[Too Shiek!]



Hp drain -1, AR -1 , OD -1

00:16:502 (2) - x72 y224 Fixed
00:21:412 (4) - x152 y112 Fixed
00:21:929 (6,8) - look like hitburst hide reversearrow, maybe it's unrankable moved to other position
00:25:029 (5,6,7) - not good for reading moved..
00:30:714 (11,1) - loooooong jump?.. change short long? 4Insane never, but ok moved.
01:12:833 (5) - x104 y192 Fixed
01:16:192 (10,11,12) - not good stack changed it.
01:28:337 (5,6,1) - ;w; ?
01:30:146 (5) - change 2 notes Fixd
01:55:210 (6) - x208 y184 Fixed
02:10:197 (5,1) - looooong jump..... moved....
02:28:285 (1,1) - ctrl + R Fixed
02:46:115 (4,5) - complex partten... never complex...

Good Luck~

1. not sure about the "Easy" ^^ it is more a hard .. and if it were a Easy the diff spread would not be complet ... Easy - ... - Hard - Insane .. not good. Just call it Normal and everything is okay for me xD
2. your song has a kbit/s of 320. 192 is allowed maximum ...

1. 00:18:311 (5) - could you make the slider completly symmetrical. So Sliderend is on same hight as sliderbeginning?
2. 00:20:637 (2,4) - make both sliders 1/2 longer please
3. 00:29:681 (4,5,6,7) - flow is better if the bow of (6) is facing in the other direction so (4,5,6) are a nice curve
   
   sum thing like this

   
4. 00:31:748 (1) - a reason why you should call this a Normal and not Easy. Spinner is way to short for Easy
5. 00:43:117 (5,6) - I know what you did there. But could you please put (6) a bit down on the Y-axis? Plays/feels alot better for me
6. 01:12:058 (1) - dunno remove new combo and add nc to 01:14:125 (3) - this. Or just put a nc to (3)
7. 01:53:918 (3) - new combo
8. 01:58:053 (3) - ^
9. 02:10:456 - add note
10. 02:43:014 - add spinner until 02:44:564 -
11. 02:51:024 - add note
12. 02:53:091 - ^
13. 02:57:743 - not that sure but i would add a note here too
14. overall some finishes are to loud. Mostly on the non KIAI parts. Just lower volume there and everything is fine for me

1. 01:11:024 (3) - on top of (1,2) and use ctrl + g on 01:11:541 (1,2) - that plays nice, too
2. 01:24:461 (1) - a bit weird that the slider starts way before the KIAI and ends later then it starts ...
3. 01:50:818 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - not sure but i would like to stack (4) with the rest. Or have (4) not stacked under (3)
4. 02:51:024 - add note and 02:53:091 - too. Sounds weird at the moment

1. 01:43:324 - maybe lower volume slightly so it fits to the vocal echo
2. 01:55:210 (5) - stack with 01:54:177 (1) -
3. same as the other diffs. The finish is a bit too loud in the non KIAI parts
4. nothing really to complain. But i have to say that i am no fan of sliderstreams you used in 3rd KIAI part

1. 00:14:952 (6,7) - either stack with slider or put further away
2. 00:25:029 (5) - slider is to slow destroys flow of previous notes
3. 00:26:063 (7,8) - bad spacing. Slider (8) is to far away and music does not indicate jump really. Lower it to 2.5x or lower
4. 00:28:906 (6) - new combo
5. 00:32:265 (5) - slider is to slow again :<
6. 01:15:676 (7,8,9,10) - can't explain why this is weird. but it is weird
7. 01:21:102 (3,4) - stack does not really fit
8. 01:28:337 (5,6,1) - please constant jump of 2.5x I would lower it to 2.2x but that is idk . not my decision xD
9. 01:36:347 (5,6) - pointless jump. The next notes after (6) indicate a jump far clearer
10. 01:53:918 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - could you implement some jumps maybe?
11. 02:27:769 (6,1) - well like before. The jump here is not so good indicated in the music like the following notes
12. 02:47:407 (8) - ctrl + g please, has a better flow
13. 02:53:608 (1) - if you map to vocals. Don't cut it out suddenly. This slider should go until 02:55:417 - . The stream you used fits the music but not the vocals. That is kind of weird
14. 02:55:676 (5) - new combo

1. 00:14:435 (7,8) - no stack please. Plays way better with flow
2. 00:21:670 - add note
3. 00:48:027 (2) - i would prefer ctrl + g but that would mean changing (3,4,5) orz
4. 00:50:999 (4,5,6,7) - slider stream is way to fast with that spacing lower it a ljust little
5. 02:39:396 (3,4) - this stack plays bad. The triplet leads to pressing (4) to early