Tenshi-nyan wrote:

heya.

General
The BG pics are quite big in filesize. Try to compress them a bit to allow for a smaller total size.
No custom hitsounds? Please, for the love of *your respective lord here*, add some custom hitsounds. At least a custom clap.
Talking about hitsounds, I noticed that the placement of the claps in all diffs is weird. In a bad way. Make sure to only add them where the music plays a similar sound - don't make up your own rythm.

normal-hitclap,normal-hitclap2 added

Insane
01:02:193 (6) - Add NC to make the jump easier to read. k

Normal
AR + 1 k

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Ai
00:20:485 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - are those Combos really necessary?
00:41:064 (4,5,6) - this stream doesn't make sense, there's nothing similar in the music.
00:54:143 (6,8) - remove claps.
01:00:363 (5) - ^
01:06:582 (9) - add NC

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Muya
00:18:473 (6) - what is this slider snapped to? Snap it to normal 1/4. what? 1/6 is better
00:25:607 - 00:49:387 - the part sounds very, very dry. Add some hitsounds to it. better now
00:37:497 (1,2,3) - I do not like this Anti-jump. I like this jump.
01:41:521 (5) - snap to 1/4. same as 00:18:473 (6)

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Easy]
01:24:875 (3) - end at 01:26:156 ? follow the vocal here is better fixed
no issues , totally rankble , but kinda boring to play.. ;__;

[Normal]
00:17:558 (3) - start at 00:17:375 ? follow the music better fixed
00:56:156 (3) - this slider can blanket better k
01:15:363 (1) - delete it ? it is too fast after a spinner. if you don't want to delete it , then spinner end at 01:14:448 plz
spinner end at 01:14:448,fixed

[Insane]
00:08:778 (1,2) - make this 2 sldier more far away 0.0? fixed

wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]
00:12:619 (1) - finish here as well? there's also chamber sound here (you can make this slightly softer than the finish of spinner)
fixed
00:25:790 (1) - ^ fixed
00:38:778 (5,6) - put them in symmetrical position like (176,184)? sorry,no change for now ;_;
00:54:692 (7) - whistle here sounds nice~ k
01:14:997 (1,2) - this notes belongs to the last sentence, so new combo at (2)? fixed
01:51:034 (2) - finish added~

I suggest that 0:25 ~ 0:48 would sound better by using S in contrast with the N:C1/C2 in the last part of the song.
sorry,no change for now ;_;(It will change, if there is point out from other modder)

[Normal]
00:28:168 (3) - remove whistle as it don't seems to fit the music here, and you didn't put whislte in the last note of next combo. fixed~

not mush problem in normal and easy, I'll take up the taiko diff~ thanks<3 waiting for taiko diff~

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Ai]
00:23:960 (1) - it touched HP bar. make this one not straight plz , make it wave , cuz the slider speed is changed here , if a straight slider again , it is kinda confusing
01:51:125 (1) - add some timing sections to make the volume go down smoothly

wmfchris wrote:

[Ai]
duplicated timeline 37680, you can decide to delete or not

00:01:461 (1) - add whistle here, or remove whistle in (1) in next combo
01:26:887 (4) - right 1 grid lv4 to make it symmetrical

Not much problem here, I like the change in SV here~
Not against it, but hitsound in 0:25 ~ 0:48 is a bit too loud for me and it covers the original song >_<
(but the hitsound pattern itself is ok)

AisamaDX wrote:

wmfchris wrote:

Not much problem here, I like the change in SV here~

Almost fixed. Not change SV.
Thanks mod!

392,136,26339,6,0,B|320:76|244:132,1,160,8|0
192,244,27802,2,0,B|108:244,2,79.9999999999999,8|0|8
300,316,29265,2,0,B|360:244|304:168,1,160,8|0

-Gamu- wrote:

[Easy]

●00:26:339 (1,2,3) - 提案です　私はこのほうがいいと思います

392,136,26339,6,0,B|320:76|244:132,1,160,8|0
192,244,27802,2,0,B|108:244,2,79.9999999999999,8|0|8
300,316,29265,2,0,B|360:244|304:168,1,160,8|0

少し修正しましたー

[Normal]

●00:34:387 (5) - Add a new combo? fix


[Insane]

●00:37:680 (1) - ここ連打に変える　希望です　http://puu.sh/9ezp 変えましたー
●00:39:144 (10) - Add a new combo? ok