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Kicco - Miracle * Feel Free

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sahuang
2,293 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
sahuang
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年9月29日 at 20:30:12

Artist: Kicco
Title: Miracle * Feel Free
Source: タユタマ2 -After Stories-
Tags: my angel azusa kalibe misure Lump of Sugar galgame eroge op you are the only one tayutama tayutai 水野大輔 Daisuke Mizuno
BPM: 150
Filesize: 2403kb
Play Time: 01:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Happy Ending (4.37 stars, 398 notes)
  2. Hard (3 stars, 280 notes)
  3. Kalibe's Easy (1.45 stars, 100 notes)
  4. Misure's Insane (3.89 stars, 315 notes)
  5. Normal (1.92 stars, 202 notes)
Download: Kicco - Miracle * Feel Free
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Here is Tayutama again.

Kicco - Amazing sky https://osu.ppy.sh/s/518097

Same combo~~

Last edited by sahuang , edited 27 times in total.
Testo
603 posts
Joined November 2014
Testo
hi, m4m from your q
[Happy Ending]
  1. 00:13:239 - not mapped 00:13:439 - mapped
  2. 00:14:939 (2) - slider will fit more I think
  3. 00:14:939 (2) - are you sure about this skip
  4. 00:18:139 (3) - this beat is very strong but spacing is lower than 00:17:939 (2) -
  5. 00:30:139 (4) - I think 2 notes will be better
  6. 00:36:939 (1) - maybe angle like this http://i.imgur.com/0HMmQT1.png but idk
[Misure's Insane]
  1. 00:01:539 01:00:139 01:00:539 - why you ignore this
  2. 00:55:939 (7) - maybe kickslider for beats change emphasis
  3. 01:24:739 (8,1) - why different flow against 01:21:539 (8,1) - 01:18:339 (8,1) -
  4. 01:15:339 - 80% volume in kiai in all diffs but not in yours
[ErMei's Hard]
  1. http://i.imgur.com/7v8bmNO.png
  2. 00:20:539 (10,1) - 00:17:339 (10,1) - inconsistent
  3. 01:41:139 (1) - maybe 3 notes?
  4. 01:18:139 - I think its bad to ignore this
  5. 01:22:139 (2,4) - why you don't copy (1)
normal and easy is pretty clean
gl
Kilabarus
999 posts
Joined May 2015
Kilabarus
2nd nazi mod!!!

General:

  1. Fix tags in ErMei's Hard
  2. 01:49:539 - Why spinner in all diffs ends here? Imo sound stops on 01:49:339 - so I can't see a proper reason for extending slider's length
Kalibe's Easy:

  1. Turn off Widescreen Support
  2. 00:14:539 (1) - I strongly recommend you to map strong sound on 00:14:939 - and not skip it. Like really, this rhythm is much better here, tho you can change 2nd slider to 1/2 reverse slider because you use this sort of sliders in your next patterns to show difference between 00:14:539 (1) - and 00:15:339 (2) -
  3. 00:17:739 (4) - Same ^
  4. 00:35:339 (3,4) - Blanket is reeeeaaalyy off, fix plz
  5. 01:00:339 (2,3) - I would remove reverse on the first slider and make 1/2 reverse slider on 01:01:139 - here. This pattern is better rhythmically and it's still very easy to play!
  6. 01:39:339 (7,8) - These are two completely different sounds, maybe change second slider into 3 circles?
Ok, diff is good, but your blankets if uffffffffff for me, If you try to map blankets -> do it properly and accurately, but it's only my opinion, so good job anyway!

Normal:

  1. 00:25:739 (4,5) - Don't know what was the idea of this rhythm here, but it's kinda awkward imo. Especially when you completely ignore strong sound on 00:26:339 - here, I recommend you to map it somehow as it is really loud one
  2. 00:51:939 - again, strong sound is missing here
ErMei's Hard:

  1. Set combo colours
  2. Turn off Widescreen Support
  3. 00:01:739 (1,2,3,4) - Feels clumsy, 00:02:339 (2) - too close to 00:01:739 (1) - and 00:02:339 (2,3) - is kinda meh in the beginning of the map
  4. Bad blankets all over the map :cry: :cry:
  5. 00:39:539 (7) - 2 circles is better for emphasizing vocals
Your rhythm in kiai seems kinda random to me, you switch from mapping actual beats to mapping vocals and it's not good imo

Misure's Insane:

  1. 00:20:939 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Here you follow vocals, sliders on red ticks and 00:33:739 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - here you follow actual beats, kinda strange in my eyes because these parts are pretty similar
  2. 01:00:339 (5) - NC maybe? Spacing is the same as here 00:59:739 (3,4) - so it can be kinda hard to read
Happy Ending:

  1. 00:06:939 (3) - Strong sound on the tail of a slider feels awkward ( 00:11:739 (2) - same )
  2. 00:14:939 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - There is like no difference in between of these jumps except spacing, but sounds are completely different + 00:15:139 (3) - is a weak sound and it has 2,27x spacing, but 00:15:339 (4,5) - are strong sounds and they have lower spacing, very strange
  3. 00:33:339 (2,3,4,5,1) - Stream shape is meeh


Waiting for your mod~

GL!!
Misure
951 posts
Joined September 2012
Misure

Testo wrote:

[Misure's Insane]
  1. 00:01:539 01:00:139 01:00:539 - why you ignore this
    :arrow: I'd like to catch cymbol only here
  2. 00:55:939 (7) - maybe kickslider for beats change emphasis
    :arrow: will be sudden so... will considerate it more later
  3. 01:24:739 (8,1) - why different flow against 01:21:539 (8,1) - 01:18:339 (8,1) -
    :arrow: to imply rhythm change after that
  4. 01:15:339 - 80% volume in kiai in all diffs but not in yours
    :arrow: there's no need to be the same for them imo xd

MashaSG wrote:

General:
  1. 01:49:539 - Why spinner in all diffs ends here? Imo sound stops on 01:49:339 - so I can't see a proper reason for extending slider's length
    :arrow: yeah I'll keep the same as what other diff do lol
Misure's Insane:

  1. 00:20:939 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Here you follow vocals, sliders on red ticks and 00:33:739 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - here you follow actual beats, kinda strange in my eyes because these parts are pretty similar
    :arrow: I think the second part is stronger, so I did this xd
  2. 01:00:339 (5) - NC maybe? Spacing is the same as here 00:59:739 (3,4) - so it can be kinda hard to read
    :arrow: no need for this I think, which may make it fragmented, also it's enough for playing to read it
thx both!

Codesu
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61739
Countdown: 0
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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Miracle Feel Free
TitleUnicode:ミラクル☆フィールフリー
Artist:Kicco
ArtistUnicode:Kicco
Creator:My Angel Azusa
Version:Misure's Insane
Source:タユタマ2 -After Stories-
Tags:Lump of Sugar galgame eroge op you are the only one tayutama tayutai
BeatmapID:1371454
BeatmapSetID:644688

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moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
moonlightleaf

Testo wrote:

hi, m4m from your q

[ErMei's Hard]
  1. http://i.imgur.com/7v8bmNO.png
    //fix
  2. 00:20:539 (10,1)
    //fix
    00:17:339 (10,1) - inconsistent
    // on purpose
  3. 01:41:139 (1) - maybe 3 notes?
    // 3 notes is a little confused ...
  4. 01:18:139 - I think its bad to ignore this
    // keep
  5. 01:22:139 (2,4) - why you don't copy (1)
// ah ah lazy lol
normal and easy is pretty clean
gl

MashaSG wrote:

2nd nazi mod!!!


ErMei's Hard:

  1. Set combo colours
    //fix
  2. Turn off Widescreen Support
    //fix
  3. 00:01:739 (1,2,3,4) - Feels clumsy, 00:02:339 (2) - too close to 00:01:739 (1) - and 00:02:339 (2,3) - is kinda meh in the beginning of the map
    //fix
  4. Bad blankets all over the map :cry: :cry:
    //ah ah , just random :)
  5. 00:39:539 (7) - 2 circles is better for emphasizing vocals
//fix

Your rhythm in kiai seems kinda random to me, you switch from mapping actual beats to mapping vocals and it's not good imo
// hmm... i think this is not so bad :P

Waiting for your mod~

GL!!
thank you all :)

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272,183,90339,2,0,P|299:204|333:213,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,176,90739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,96,90939,2,0,P|470:117|488:148,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,232,91339,6,0,B|462:269|484:304|484:304|471:335|485:367,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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252,364,92339,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,288,92538,2,0,L|217:218,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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304,244,97139,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,228,97339,2,0,P|186:219|152:226,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Shiratori
525 posts
Joined April 2015
Shiratori
easy
00:17:739 (4) - 这个折返怎么回事 感觉没跟上轨 1/1滑条吧
00:35:339 (3,4) - 没包好
01:27:339 (8) - 怎么只有这个滑条sampleset是drum

normal
00:18:539 (2,3) - 这种地方我其实想换1/2折返的
00:27:339 (1) - 为什么是drum 呢
00:31:139 (2) - 这个 应该是长音 滑条吧【】
00:48:539 (4) -
https://puu.sh/x9AVm/9cefb45bdd.png
节奏改成这样？ 原来的感觉有点迷

在上面我摸不懂 纯属凑字了
hard
00:02:339 (2,3) - 这个 我觉得 hard这么玩不太好吧
00:02:939 (4,5) - 没包好
00:02:939 (5,6) - 没包好
00:06:139 (4,5) - ^
00:06:539 (5,6) - ^
00:08:139 (1,2) - ^
01:11:539 (7) -
https://puu.sh/x9Bp5/524c3f79aa.png
01:27:939 (9,10,1) - 我觉得 有点丑 移开吧
01:41:139 (1) - 自定个音效组然后塞个空wav也能静音这个吧


Emm, it seems that someone not good at Chinese. I'm sorry

摸不动摸不动 太神了
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/646943 my map
Last edited by Shiratori , edited 1 time in total.
sahuang
2,293 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
sahuang
@kalibe translation to 3 sentences(idk why the fuck he's using Chinese lol

to 1/1 slider?reverse seems not following music
blanket(as you can see from picture lol
why is sampleset drum for here only
kunka
1,566 posts
Joined July 2012
kunka
hi~ bonus mod
I hope this will help.
Happy Ending

  1. 00:01:539 (7,1) - hmm,,I don't like to put 1/2note at the end of the stream. But it can't be enforced because it's a mapper preference. In my case, I'll stack it to 00:00:939 (1) - . Because it is easy to recognize and does not feel stress in playing.
  2. 00:12:939 (1,2,3,4) - I felt a sense of incompatibility in the rhythm. Tbh, I think it's an unnatural overmap. Would you change to simple? https://puu.sh/x9C04.jpg Or like a 01:39:339 (1,2,3,4) -
  3. 00:56:739 (4,5) - The 00:56:739 - vocal is strong and also the next lyrics are starting from 00:57:139 - . So you'd better snap by ctrl+G.
  4. 00:58:339 (2,3) - ^
Misure's Insane

  1. 00:01:539 - This sound is at the end of a sound of 00:00:939 (1,2,3) - . So I don't think we should get rid of it. I recommend that you add a circle or change 00:01:339 (3) - to reverse.
  2. 00:15:339 (3,4) - Interval is the same as the 1/4, so it causes confusion. I recommend that you increase the spacing. At least like a 00:16:339 (2,3) -
  3. 00:18:539 (3,4) - ^
  4. 00:59:739 (3,4,5) - Rhythm is 1/2 and 1/1. But the spacing is the same, so it will cause confusion. I recommend move of 01:00:339 (5) -
  5. 01:41:139 (1,2) - This sound is 1/2. It must be changed like a Happy Ending diff.
ErMei's Hard

  1. 00:36:137 - There is error of slider-end. https://puu.sh/x9BdO.jpg
  2. 01:01:539 (6,1) - It is recommended to stack to 01:01:539 (6) - , considering the aesthetic elements. https://puu.sh/x9DkY.jpg
  3. 01:14:139 (8,9) - This phrase stands out with 1/2slider and circles. So I think 01:14:139 (8) - is enough for 1/1slider.
  4. 01:27:539 (8,9,10) - Is there a need for a stack? I think it will be easier to recognize by removing the stack.
Normal

  1. 00:26:139 (5) - Vocal and sound are present in 00:26:339 - , not 00:26:139 - . I recommend that you change it to 1/2slider and move it to 00:26:339 -
Kalibe's Easy

  1. 00:14:539 (1,4) - Need to pick up a 00:15:139 - and 00:18:339 - sounds? I think the 1/1 slider * 2 is appropriate https://puu.sh/x9DWj.jpg
gl ;)
Starfy
1,046 posts
Joined November 2012
Starfy
Hello

[General]
-Offset should be 1727 instead of 1739

[Kalibe's Easy]
-00:20:939 (1) - Move the last slider point to x=176, y=152 for better blanket
-00:25:739 (5) - Why not make the slider less curve to better the blanket (move the middle slider point to x=232, y=308)
-00:56:139 (3) - Maybe it is just some picky things but I feel weird when playing this slider. Since the direction of 00:52:939 (1) - is clockwise while 00:54:539 (2) - is anti-clockwise. I suppose you would make a clockwise direction slider in 00:56:139 (3) - to make a parallel pattern but it actually doesn't. It would be cool if you can adjust their flow to make them move consistently
-01:23:339 (4) - The blanket looks not good. Maybe move the middle slider point to x=403, y=184 to better the blanket
-01:31:339 (3,4) - You made a parallel structure in 01:28:139 (1,2) - but you didn't do the same thing in 01:31:339 (3,4) - . Why not make 01:32:939 (4) - parallel to 01:31:339 (3) - in order to increase the consistency?
-01:37:739 (5) - You might move the middle slider point to x=74, y=127 and move the last slider point to x=92, y=194 for better blanket. The current one looks not really good...
-01:41:139 (8) - Why not use another shape of slider to represent the sound here since 01:39:339 (7,8) - share the same shape and same combo but they didn't represent the same sound. Using another shape of slider here could give a better emphasis to the sharp drum sound

[Normal]
-00:20:927 (1) - Not blanketed well. I can't give a good solution to better the blanket but just a kind reminder http://puu.sh/x9EDi/12c428fd54.jpg
-00:27:339 (1,2,3) - Why the sound pattern is differed from other similar sound such as 00:20:939 (1,2,3) - ? It sounds a bit inconsistent so why not unify the sound pattern?

[ErMei's Hard]
-00:35:938 (6) - Unsnapped
-00:02:339 (2,3) - Why they are stacked? You did't do the same thing in 00:03:939 (6,7) - / 00:05:539 (2,3) - . It makes the flow pattern really inconsistent and uncomfortable. I suggest that you separate them to maintain good consistency and flow.
-00:03:339 (5) - Move the last slider point to x=192, y=265 for better blanket
-00:03:939 (6) - Is this supposed to be blanketed? If so, move the middle slider point to x=223, y=126 and move the last slider point to x=189, y=122 for better blanket
-00:04:939 (1) - Push the second slider point slightly righter could better the blanket
-00:08:139 (1) - Move the last slider point to x=116, y=303 to make a better blanket
-00:13:939 (7,8,9) - This pattern is a bit too hard to read because of the instrument sound pattern. I prefer using another pattern to make this rhythm more playable and readable. For example, https://puu.sh/x9FeA/7d53e8da95.jpg
-You did't stack 00:17:339 (10,1) - but you stacked in 00:20:539 (10,1) - . And it shows that the pattern is not really consistent. I suggest that you should unify the pattern (stack or not to stack) in order to increase the consistency.
-00:38:339 (4) - The "tick" is too small that it makes the slider shape a bit weird. Try to extend more the "tick" to make the slider look better. For example, http://puu.sh/x9Fth/a5efa0f411.jpg
-01:02:539 (3) - Add a new combo makes more sense
-01:11:939 (8,9) - Swapping their NC would give more musical sense imo
-01:13:539 (5,6) - It is not really necessary to emphasize all the sound in hard. Why not make a little break by using a 1/1 slider here to make a better focus on what are you trying to emphasize most. For example, http://puu.sh/x9FDh/6dc21c0bdf.jpg
-01:17:339 (7,8) - The sound pattern is a little bit weird imo since you skipped 01:17:539 which is a mappable vocal. Therefore, you might try to rearrange the sound pattern to give a better emphasis like http://puu.sh/x9FHq/36aba66a65.jpg
-01:20:539 (7,8) - Same as above, the sound pattern could be rearranged as http://puu.sh/x9FJA/bfdb7ce5ad.jpg . Now 01:21:539 - can be mapped since it has a stronger sound then 01:18:339 -
-01:23:539 There is a mappable vocal here. It would be cool if you map it. There is an example for sound pattern, http://puu.sh/x9FMr/10bc4fc9ee.jpg
-01:27:539 (8,9,10,1) - It is too challenging to read in Hard difficulty. Strongly suggest that you separate them to give a better readability. And there is not musical sense that you stacked them, it gives a weird expression of the song.
-01:40:339 (7,8,9) - Same as before, it looks too hard to read. There is a suggested sound pattern, https://puu.sh/x9FRf/0fa91e7a84.jpg
-The map has a lot of problem of blanket that I can mention them all. Please be careful about them such as 00:24:139 (1) - / 00:37:939 (3,4) - / 00:47:539 (3,4) - . Remember to utilize the approach circle to blanket them well.

[Misure's Insane]
-00:01:539 - There is a really mappable sound here. It would be really cool if you map it
-00:05:739 (3) - Move the middle slider point to x=271, y=284 and move the last slider point to x=232 , y=276 for better blanket
-00:15:339 (3,4,5) - I cannot see any reason that 00:15:339 (3,4) - should be attached... Attaching them gives a really weird musical transition when I'm playing. You can simply place them closer just like what you did in 00:16:339 (2,3) - or just directly stack them.
-00:59:939 (4,5) - Personally opinion. Why not give them a new combo to emphasize the strong finish sound?
-01:01:339 (2) - I think clickable object would fit more here since both of the sound are really strong. Using 2 circle notes here could give a strong emphasis to the drum sound.

[Happy Ending]
-00:14:539 (1) - Why using reverse slider here? The sound should be similar with 00:17:739 (1,2,3) -
-01:09:727 (3) - Picky thing. I know it is the corner of the playfield but suddenly stacking it would be inconsistent since you didn't stack them in 01:02:927 (2,3) -
-01:41:727 (2) - Isn't it a bit off-screen?

Good luck!
Sandrew
538 posts
Joined March 2014
Sandrew
hi m4m
[easy]
00:12:939 (7) - add a hitsound on slider's tail as there is a heavy sound
00:25:739 (5) - blanket
01:15:739 (2,3) - ^
01:43:139 (1) - maybe make this spin advance to 01:42:539（forgive me if there is any rule fobiding this
[normal]
00:52:139 (4,5) - put them like 00:41:539 (4,5) - , may fit the vocal better
01:22:539 (3) - adjust this slider's tail a little to make the overlap look better
01:41:739 (2) - blanket
[hard]
00:01:739 (1,2) - this kind of pattern looks a little strange, as it's the only use in starting part, make them a little further or change them into patterns like 00:08:139 (1,2)
00:03:339 (5) - blanket
00:06:539 (5) - ^, it will be better to have a special check on blanket again
00:15:739 (5) - change this into a note, if you keep the slider, it has no difference with 00:14:939 (2) - , but they are different in music performance, not addding pattern on 00:15:939 will fit the music well
00:18:939 (5) - ^
00:20:539 (10) - why stack here, you make 1/1 a little overlap in other places
00:37:539 (2) - make a straight slider here, fit the previous slider well
00:46:539 (1) - you can simplfy beats here to fit the slower part, patterns now can't perform a slower feeling
01:06:139 (2,4,6) - you follow the vocal well before and after, but not this place, why
01:27:539 (8,9,10) - a 1/2 stack is hard to read for players in this level
01:41:539 advance the 5% green line to 01:41:339
[insane]
00:01:539 miss a drum
00:05:739 (3) - blanket
00:40:739 (3) - a 1/1 slider fit the vocal and can also avoid to put a clap on the next slider's tail
can't give any advice on HE diff, I'm sorry
GL to this map :)
sahuang
2,293 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
sahuang

Testo wrote:

hi, m4m from your q
[Happy Ending]
  1. 00:13:239 - not mapped 00:13:439 - mapped changed to kick slider
  2. 00:14:939 (2) - slider will fit more I think all fixed
  3. 00:14:939 (2) - are you sure about this skip all fixed
  4. 00:18:139 (3) - this beat is very strong but spacing is lower than 00:17:939 (2) - all fixed
  5. 00:30:139 (4) - I think 2 notes will be better nah i want aesthetics
  6. 00:36:939 (1) - maybe angle like this http://i.imgur.com/0HMmQT1.png but idk ok modified a bit
normal and easy is pretty clean
gl
Very useful mod, thanks man :)

MashaSG wrote:

2nd nazi mod!!!

Normal:

  1. 00:25:739 (4,5) - Don't know what was the idea of this rhythm here, but it's kinda awkward imo. Especially when you completely ignore strong sound on 00:26:339 - here, I recommend you to map it somehow as it is really loud one fixed
  2. 00:51:939 - again, strong sound is missing here id like to map but it will be too hard so i have to drop this
Happy Ending:

  1. 00:06:939 (3) - Strong sound on the tail of a slider feels awkward ( 00:11:739 (2) - same ) probably fine for this
  2. 00:14:939 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - There is like no difference in between of these jumps except spacing, but sounds are completely different + 00:15:139 (3) - is a weak sound and it has 2,27x spacing, but 00:15:339 (4,5) - are strong sounds and they have lower spacing, very strange i fixed this
  3. 00:33:339 (2,3,4,5,1) - Stream shape is meeh but this plays really well
Waiting for your mod~

GL!!

Amamiya Kanade wrote:

normal
00:18:539 (2,3) - 这种地方我其实想换1/2折返的 no need
00:27:339 (1) - 为什么是drum 呢 fixed
00:31:139 (2) - 这个 应该是长音 滑条吧【】fine
00:48:539 (4) -
https://puu.sh/x9AVm/9cefb45bdd.png
节奏改成这样？ 原来的感觉有点迷 fixed

在上面我摸不懂 纯属凑字了

Emm, it seems that someone not good at Chinese. I'm sorry

摸不动摸不动 太神了
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/646943 my map

kunka wrote:

hi~ bonus mod
I hope this will help.
Happy Ending

  1. 00:01:539 (7,1) - hmm,,I don't like to put 1/2note at the end of the stream. But it can't be enforced because it's a mapper preference. In my case, I'll stack it to 00:00:939 (1) - . Because it is easy to recognize and does not feel stress in playing. did something
  2. 00:12:939 (1,2,3,4) - I felt a sense of incompatibility in the rhythm. Tbh, I think it's an unnatural overmap. Would you change to simple? https://puu.sh/x9C04.jpg Or like a 01:39:339 (1,2,3,4) - well for this one i made 00:13:139 (2) - kick slider because there's indeed some sound at blue tick
  3. 00:56:739 (4,5) - The 00:56:739 - vocal is strong and also the next lyrics are starting from 00:57:139 - . So you'd better snap by ctrl+G.
  4. 00:58:339 (2,3) - ^all fixed

Normal

  1. 00:26:139 (5) - Vocal and sound are present in 00:26:339 - , not 00:26:139 - . I recommend that you change it to 1/2slider and move it to 00:26:339 -fixed

gl ;)
Thanks for everyone and kunka for extra mod~~
Misure
951 posts
Joined September 2012
Misure

kunka wrote:

Misure's Insane

  1. 00:01:539 - This sound is at the end of a sound of 00:00:939 (1,2,3) - . So I don't think we should get rid of it. I recommend that you add a circle or change 00:01:339 (3) - to reverse.
    :arrow: 1/2 gap is not enough to get the next beat imo, which is kinda fast when I play, so I finally make it like this
  2. 00:15:339 (3,4) - Interval is the same as the 1/4, so it causes confusion. I recommend that you increase the spacing. At least like a 00:16:339 (2,3) -
  3. 00:18:539 (3,4) - ^
    :arrow: I'd keep them cautz rhythm here give me a feeling like 'weak-weak-strong', so I make jumps at the third one; also it may be enough to read that interval for players I think
  4. 00:59:739 (3,4,5) - Rhythm is 1/2 and 1/1. But the spacing is the same, so it will cause confusion. I recommend move of 01:00:339 (5) -
    :arrow: moved some
  5. 01:41:139 (1,2) - This sound is 1/2. It must be changed like a Happy Ending diff.
    :arrow: that 1/2 beat is so weak that I'd rather reagard it as a single circle, then 1/8 sliders is just an extra stuff to add a feeling of pause imo xd

Starfy wrote:

[Misure's Insane]
-00:01:539 - There is a really mappable sound here. It would be really cool if you map it
:arrow: I feel it so dense to use 1/2 interval here when playing, so I decided to make it like this to give more time to recover
-00:05:739 (3) - Move the middle slider point to x=271, y=284 and move the last slider point to x=232 , y=276 for better blanket
:arrow: kk fixed this
-00:15:339 (3,4,5) - I cannot see any reason that 00:15:339 (3,4) - should be attached... Attaching them gives a really weird musical transition when I'm playing. You can simply place them closer just like what you did in 00:16:339 (2,3) - or just directly stack them.
:arrow: the melody gives me a feeling like 'weak-weak-strong'; also I really love the set of pattern
-00:59:939 (4,5) - Personally opinion. Why not give them a new combo to emphasize the strong finish sound?
:arrow: I'd rather to make them as a set of circles here xd
-01:01:339 (2) - I think clickable object would fit more here since both of the sound are really strong. Using 2 circle notes here could give a strong emphasis to the drum sound.
:arrow: similar reason as above, I'd like to emphasize the beat afterwards

Sandrew wrote:

[insane]
00:01:539 miss a drum
:arrow: yea it's on purpose, to give more time for players to get the next beat
00:05:739 (3) - blanket
:arrow: fixed
00:40:739 (3) - a 1/1 slider fit the vocal and can also avoid to put a clap on the next slider's tail
:arrow: umm I'd rather to catch vocals here xd
thx everyone! :)

Codesu
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61739
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Miracle Feel Free
TitleUnicode:ミラクル☆フィールフリー
Artist:Kicco
ArtistUnicode:Kicco
Creator:sahuang
Version:Misure's Insane
Source:タユタマ2 -After Stories-
Tags:my angel azusa kalibe moonlightleaf misure Lump of Sugar galgame eroge op you are the only one tayutama tayutai
BeatmapID:1371454
BeatmapSetID:644688

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

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moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
moonlightleaf

Amamiya Kanade wrote:

hard
01:41:139 (1) - 自定个音效组然后塞个空wav也能静音这个吧
//这个不改了

kunka wrote:

hi~ bonus mod
I hope this will help.
ErMei's Hard

[*]01:14:139 (8,9) - This phrase stands out with 1/2slider and circles. So I think 01:14:139 (8) - is enough for 1/1slider.
//no , it's all as this after this point in after
gl ;)

Starfy wrote:

Hello

[ErMei's Hard]
-01:13:539 (5,6) - It is not really necessary to emphasize all the sound in hard. Why not make a little break by using a 1/1 slider here to make a better focus on what are you trying to emphasize most. For example, http://puu.sh/x9FDh/6dc21c0bdf.jpg
// keep mine

-01:17:339 (7,8) - The sound pattern is a little bit weird imo since you skipped 01:17:539 which is a mappable vocal. Therefore, you might try to rearrange the sound pattern to give a better emphasis like http://puu.sh/x9FHq/36aba66a65.jpg
// i don't follow that at this part

-01:20:539 (7,8) - Same as above, the sound pattern could be rearranged as http://puu.sh/x9FJA/bfdb7ce5ad.jpg . Now 01:21:539 - can be mapped since it has a stronger sound then 01:18:339 -
// ^

-01:23:539 There is a mappable vocal here. It would be cool if you map it. There is an example for sound pattern, http://puu.sh/x9FMr/10bc4fc9ee.jpg
// ^

Good luck!
OK, thank you all , no reply = fix

文件我还是用qq传给你吧 :)
sahuang
2,293 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
sahuang

Starfy wrote:

Hello

[General]
-Offset should be 1727 instead of 1739 changed

[Normal]
-00:20:927 (1) - Not blanketed well. I can't give a good solution to better the blanket but just a kind reminder http://puu.sh/x9EDi/12c428fd54.jpg tried, dunno if i can do better
-00:27:339 (1,2,3) - Why the sound pattern is differed from other similar sound such as 00:20:939 (1,2,3) - ? It sounds a bit inconsistent so why not unify the sound pattern? fixed

[Happy Ending]
-00:14:539 (1) - Why using reverse slider here? The sound should be similar with 00:17:739 (1,2,3) -
they are not really the same if you listen closely, in that the first place has some 1/4 drums.
-01:09:727 (3) - Picky thing. I know it is the corner of the playfield but suddenly stacking it would be inconsistent since you didn't stack them in 01:02:927 (2,3) - fixed
-01:41:727 (2) - Isn't it a bit off-screen? adjusted a bit, its actually fine

Good luck!
thanks

@Sandrew all fixed thx
Kyuukai
1,511 posts
Joined December 2014
Kyuukai
hi
Easy
nothing much to say, will just point out visual issues
00:14:527 (1,2) - blanket
00:24:127 (4,5) - ^
00:35:327 (3,4) - ^
00:42:327 (4,5) - ^
01:37:327 (4,5) - ^

Normal
00:19:727 (5,1) - blanket
00:29:527 (5,6) - Maybe deleting the 5 and move the 6 to the 5's old timeline would be better, you've done breaks on the section before
nothing much to say too xd

Hard
00:22:527 - should be clickable imo
00:56:127 - should be clickable
01:01:527 (6,1) - Maybe you could overlap like 00:17:327 (10,1) -
01:18:527 (1,2) - It's the only time you do this, maybe you should try to follow what u've done before & after for consistancy ? moreover they look really close together xd

Insane
01:08:927 (1,2) - this is too different from 01:02:527 (1,2) - the player might missread
01:16:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Theses have 2 different sound sets, 01:16:927 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 01:17:927 (6,7,8) - so maybe you can do smth to separate them xd
01:20:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:23:327 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^

Happy Ending
00:32:527 (3) - That sound is not really audible, maybe a break would be better, it's as audible as 00:20:127 - but you've done a break here xd
00:35:727 (2,3,4,5,6) - what are theses jumps mapped for xd
00:55:127 (3,4) - maybe you should overlap em' and NC the 4 like 00:59:927 (2,1) -
01:07:127 (1) - that should start on 01:07:327 - it sound really weird atm, I mean it's mapped on vocals but 01:07:727 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - theses are following the instrumentals and it's the only time where you skip a big white tick

Good luck !
Garden
Nomination Assessment Team
1,343 posts
Joined June 2013
Garden
General:
为啥combo里有个黑的.. 在一堆亮色当中很不搭阿
tag op->opening
以及metadata, 原title里的那个star不用变成*什么的吗?

Kalibe mapping easy wow:
00:14:527 (1) - 00:17:727 (4) - i strongly recommend you reconsider the rhythm here, skipping 00:14:927 - 00:15:327 - downbeats make it sound really weird
01:00:327 (2) - consider making a circle at 01:00:327 - and start the slider from 01:00:727 - due to the holding sound
01:41:127 (8) - maybe nc, it sounds sth different

Normal:
没啥问题，01:34:527 - 开始可以考虑改逆时针移动，和开头一样一半正一半逆，你从副歌结束后连续转了好几圈（

二妹:
可hp5，考虑到normal hp4 insane hp6
00:16:727 (8,9,10,1) - 1的位置加不高的ar让这儿看上去有点挤.. 至少稍微调整下让 00:16:727 (8,1) - 不碰到？
00:33:127 (7,8,9) - 用 https://puu.sh/xc7wU/4662ad24e5.png ? 鼓和前面还是不太一样的
00:52:527 (8) - 00:49:327 (8) - 类似的1/4鼓和1/2 vocal，也考虑用一样的节奏阿
01:06:127 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这里忽然不跟vocal我有点懵 :o
01:17:327 (7) - 01:20:527 (7) - 01:23:327 (6) - 考虑换成滑条和圈的组合来跟vocal? 这里曲子节奏本身就比较紧凑，可以不用省略一部分vocal

Misure:
00:01:327 (3) - 加个圈影响结构的话不如这个直接加个折返
美丽了

HE:
00:11:127 (6,7,1) - 这个开不开stack view都没stack好的位置是闹哪样
00:21:927 (3,4) - ctrl-g节奏? 后面一小段我看基本多少都有跟vocal
00:30:327 - 这里乱入鼓，考虑滑条换俩圈
01:06:927 (6,7) - 这里vocal连续四个音节感觉放跳比较好，加上这里白线起三连跟1/4打起来很怪，考虑67换个1/4滑条好变跳
01:21:727 (1) - 可以跳远点，有点拘泥于这个三角的感觉

以下主观音效摸随便看着加一些好了.. 就感觉你这音效有点太清淡了，有的地方感觉像是漏了有的是加了效果会比较好
00:01:027 (2) - normal sample
00:01:527 (7) - finish
00:13:527 - whistle
00:13:927 (3) - soft whistle
00:14:127 (1) - 改成normal sample drum addition, 你24clap貌似是跟normal一个音色
01:39:927 - 01:40:327 - 01:40:527 - 同前
00:16:727 (4) - 00:19:927 (4) - 00:23:927 (5) - 00:26:727 (3) - 00:30:327 - 00:32:127 (1) - 00:33:127 - 00:52:127 (4) - 00:54:327 (4) - 00:55:527 (4,5) - 00:59:927 (2) - 01:14:527 (4,5) - 额外加个clap比较好
00:33:727 - 00:40:127 - 00:41:727 - 00:42:327 - 00:43:327 - 00:44:127 - 00:46:527 - 00:50:327 - 00:51:327 - 00:52:927 - 00:56:127 - 加个finish比较好，因为你音量这段不响加上了也不吵
00:45:727 (4) - whistle换clap然后 00:45:927 (5) - whistle跟vocal
00:49:327 (5,6,7,8) - 00:52:527 (6,7,8,9) - 等等这种其实你换normal sample也不吵吧…
01:15:327 - 到kiai结束白线可以全上clap
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
moonlightleaf

Kyuukai wrote:

hi

Hard
00:22:527 - should be clickable imo
// keep this
00:56:127 - should be clickable
//change to 3notes
01:01:527 (6,1) - Maybe you could overlap like 00:17:327 (10,1) -
//fix
01:18:527 (1,2) - It's the only time you do this, maybe you should try to follow what u've done before & after for consistancy ? moreover they look really close together xd
//fix
Good luck !
thank you :)

Garden wrote:

二妹:
可hp5，考虑到normal hp4 insane hp6
//好
00:16:727 (8,9,10,1) - 1的位置加不高的ar让这儿看上去有点挤.. 至少稍微调整下让 00:16:727 (8,1) - 不碰到？
//好
00:33:127 (7,8,9) - 用 https://puu.sh/xc7wU/4662ad24e5.png ? 鼓和前面还是不太一样的
//好
00:52:527 (8) - 00:49:327 (8) - 类似的1/4鼓和1/2 vocal，也考虑用一样的节奏阿
//好
01:06:127 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这里忽然不跟vocal我有点懵 :o
//kiai 我都是跟的人声吧,就不跟那个vocal了
01:17:327 (7) - 01:20:527 (7) - 01:23:327 (6) - 考虑换成滑条和圈的组合来跟vocal? 这里曲子节奏本身就比较紧凑，可以不用省略一部分vocal
// ^
感谢 :)

还是用qq传你文件 :P
Misure
951 posts
Joined September 2012
Misure

Kyuukai wrote:

Insane
01:08:927 (1,2) - this is too different from 01:02:527 (1,2) - the player might missread
:arrow: both of them are unusually overlapped so it's easy to read them imo xdd
01:16:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Theses have 2 different sound sets, 01:16:927 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 01:17:927 (6,7,8) - so maybe you can do smth to separate them xd
:arrow: maybe yeah, but I think keep the consistency is also a good choice here, so I keep them lol
01:20:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:23:327 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^

Garden wrote:

Misure:
00:01:327 (3) - 加个圈影响结构的话不如这个直接加个折返
:arrow: 这里我想了很久感觉还是空个3/4的间隔比较合适(虽然被很多人提了这里), 1/2间隔这里莫名感觉很赶 最后一下音也相对轻就这样吧_(:з」∠)_
美丽了
:arrow: 然后音效那边稍微参考改了几个 主要那段相对平和的那部分的normal sample和finish还是跳掉了 感觉可能还是吵了点（
thx both! :)

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sahuang
2,293 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
sahuang

Garden wrote:

General:
为啥combo里有个黑的.. 在一堆亮色当中很不搭阿 黑灰色。。头发颜色
tag op->opening op没问题的，以前一直这样，opening感觉有点多余（一般人搜图可能都搜op）
以及metadata, 原title里的那个star不用变成*什么的吗? 问过了，*直接省略。必要的话到时候我再recheck

Normal:
没啥问题，01:34:527 - 开始可以考虑改逆时针移动，和开头一样一半正一半逆，你从副歌结束后连续转了好几圈（
其实就两三圈，主要是改略麻烦orz

HE:
00:11:127 (6,7,1) - 这个开不开stack view都没stack好的位置是闹哪样 这个是stack bug，我修了下感觉很难再改进了
00:21:927 (3,4) - ctrl-g节奏? 后面一小段我看基本多少都有跟vocal 00:22:127 - downbeat不是很好换节奏
00:30:327 - 这里乱入鼓，考虑滑条换俩圈 ok
01:06:927 (6,7) - 这里vocal连续四个音节感觉放跳比较好，加上这里白线起三连跟1/4打起来很怪，考虑67换个1/4滑条好变跳 ok
01:21:727 (1) - 可以跳远点，有点拘泥于这个三角的感觉 稍微往外拉了点，这边不好跳太大不然没法和后面衔接

音效看着改了，这音效主要是参考之前那首tayutai的，歌曲风格几乎一样于是音效也差不多了
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moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
moonlightleaf
好像 发了之前没改花园摸的那个diff ,

现在这个改了摸的,

嘤嘤嘤
osu file format v14

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Title:Miracle Feel Free
TitleUnicode:ミラクル☆フィールフリー
Artist:Kicco
ArtistUnicode:Kicco
Creator:sahuang
Version:ErMei's Hard
Source:タユタマ2 -After Stories-
Tags:my angel azusa kalibe moonlightleaf misure Lump of Sugar galgame eroge op you are the only one tayutama tayutai
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480,107,100327,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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