ask and ye shall recieve
00:12:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this stream looks ugly imo. also plays weird since the piano doesnt really change all that much but the angle deviation is really harsh. better to tone it down. its better to keep it simple and do a curve http://puu.sh/yLubQ/1ab228eaed.jpg
00:15:114 (7,8) - maybe start as a kickslider? ya know, just to give 00:15:308 (1) - that extra kick. you NC'd it anyway so might as well? looks better too. hopefully.
00:17:050 (2) - extend the repeat by 1 tick; theres a sound 00:17:340 - here
00:17:921 - same here
00:19:179 (9) - NC maybe?
00:57:616 (5,2) - woah nice overlap man (it isnt, please fix it) try this http://puu.sh/yLuje/e71dbbb319.jpg
01:38:661 - imo its better to add a note here just to make it feel less empty.
01:47:389 (3) - maybe put it in a more visible spot?
01:48:071 (1,2,3) - im sure you have space to align it perfectly. it aint perfect but you get the idea http://puu.sh/yLur4/c4df77c7d8.jpg