><Zexous wrote:
sorry for late responses all my gd got swamped with mods and i didn't notice
kms tbh
Mazziv wrote:
boombayah
[Basic]
00:33:114 (1) - maybe use a different slider shape here due to a different sound as before? good idea to do so looking back on it
00:41:631 (1) - remove nc? u didnt nc here before mhm
00:48:071 (1) - i suggest you a 1/1 1/1 1 3/2 reverse slider and repeat that after the 3/2 rvs slider yeahy, fixed rhythm
01:27:343 (1) - maybe you could emphasize the sound here better with a 1/1 reverse slider? didn't use a reverse but did swap/use a 1/1
Hpocks wrote:
Modding only the two easy diffs because I stick to what I know bestRenumi's BASIC nice format owo
• 00:05:631 (2) - Why is the tail of this completely silent? cuz there'snothing there you're releasing to nothing that's what you get passive rhythnm boyues
• 00:32:340 (1,1) - I think it would be a good idea if these two sliders has different shapes, as each slider is representing a very different noise. fixed in mod above
• 00:57:889 (3) - I dont really understand the use of 6/4 sliders in this whole section, when the strong points are represented on different points (seen in pic). The 6/4 sliders work much better in the kaiaiaia, but arent really applicable here. An assortment of sliders / circles prioritizing the strong points I pointed out would be much better here. This applies to all the 6/4 sliders up to 01:02:252 (3) -. did rhythm things but also kinda based on the top mod
•01:49:161 (1) - offscreen slider smh my head not a problem anymore cause you know mod
• 01:58:434 (1) - Wouldnt a spinner better represent the fading out of the song here? i was looking to do this but i was wasiting for mods to come in and point it out but i forgot >>
- titan wrote:
hi from my queuebasic
[spoilerbox]00:16:276 (5,6) - blanket holy heck that's nazi okay
00:32:340 (1,1,2) - it's hard to hit these when they're highly spaced and break flow pfff it's fine.
00:33:889 (2,3) - blanket h,mm
00:39:308 (1,2) - it works better here bc of the flow i guess yay (? >>
01:34:980 (1,2) - feels like blanket (and shape of 1) could be improved i tinkered around with it a bit eeeee not too sure
Einja wrote:
modding a few more diffs (no kds)
[renumi]
00:48:616 (2,3) - pls don't let these touch each other fixed with mods above (i forget which but one of them hh,hgh
01:49:161 (1) - Offscreen LOL ^
01:50:252 (2) - touches hp bar ^
01:55:707 (4) - nc mhm
AyanokoRin wrote:
- I have a bit of trouble with how you handle slider turns : remember that beginners still fully follow slider paths, so they essentially act as streams ; thus, you’d want the turns to be on strong beats ( for example, 00:04:663 (1) where the turn might be better at 00:05:050 ; or 00:10:663 (1) - where it could be at 00:11:050 or 00:11:437 ). i think turns on strong beats is more of a suggestion if you will, i'm not a big fan of them either ee
- Moreover, the flow breaks around the map might make it harder that intended ; remember, sliders act as streams. While breaking the flow is recommended on strong beats such as 00:19:953 (1) or 00:21:502 (1), doing it where the song doesn’t call for it, such as 00:16:469 (6) or 01:46:434 (3) ( especially in a section where the rhythm is denser than usual ), can add unnecessary difficulty. they're finnne. and imo i really don't think players follow it 1000000%, it's perfectly playable ee
- 00:48:071 (1,2,3) - not sure how I feel about this rhythm ; 00:48:616 (2) - could be following the piano’s changing pitch since it follows the same rhythm ( which you did at 01:40:434 (1), so why not do it here as well ? ) mods
- 00:57:889 (3) - again, I don’t get the rhythm here, it feels artificial since 00:58:434 is left away and the turn is at 00:58:298 instead while it’s a weak beat ; I suggest a 2/1 slider into a circle to catch 00:58:434 mods abov
- 01:49:161 (1) - this slider is slightly offscreen in 1920x1080, which is unrankable. Also blanket is off lo zzzzzzz
- 01:50:252 (2) - not necessarily unrankable, but this touches the hp bar, so I’d personally consider moving it down ; up to you though fixed with mods above
sososo sorry for the late responses (i did a tiny bit iof self modding also), i'll promise to be more active in thread now >>Tarrasky wrote:
Renumi's BASIC
Jumps is unranked in lowstar00:02:147 (2,3) - please do this 1,30x i don't understand your point >.<
00:05:050 - not sure if is necessary ignore this moment, maybe can be mapped like a sliderfinish i kinda jyust did a cruve not hapy about it though
Pretty sure in thie slider 00:05:631 (2) - the reverse arrow are unecessary, i cant hear nothing in 00:06:018 - for map releasin to nioting, plus i did reverse so transition into next note is a bit smoother
The distance between 00:19:953 (1,2) - is a bit bigger, please do 1,30x wha
00:23:147 (1) - This spin is so long for a Normal difficulty, i recommend you do normal mapping with sliders and circles here ...nothanks
maybe add a spin here 01:58:571 - like everyone have done in the mapset yeah D':
kroytz apply hitsounds for me if it's not too much trouble
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