basic00:24:535 (24535|0,24535|3) - why is this double? no extra sound for it
00:25:798 (25798|0,25798|1) - ^
00:35:272 (35272|3) - move to 2 for flow and reduce focus on col 4
00:38:746 (38746|1) - move to 1 for playability
01:03:693 (63693|0,63693|3) - same as double suggestion
01:10:641 (70641|1,70641|0) - ^
01:16:325 (76325|3,76325|2) - ^
01:17:588 (77588|0,77588|1) - ^
01:20:114 (80114|3,80114|0) - ^
01:22:325 (82325|3,82404|2,82483|1,82562|0) - try avoiding 1/4 in basic diff
01:40:325 (100325|0,100325|3,100325|1) - why suddenly triple when theres no extra sound?
01:42:535 (102535|0,102614|1,102693|2,102772|3) - same as 1/4 ^^
01:46:956 (106956|3,107114|3) - avoid this in basic
HP is too low, increase to 7
Decent chart
novice00:14:272 (14272|3) - ghost note
00:16:798 (16798|3) - ^
00:19:325 (19325|0) - ^
00:21:377 (21377|2,21693|0) - flip for pitch
00:21:535 (21535|1) - ghost note
00:41:220 (41220|1,41456|2) - wrong snaps, should be 00:41:193 - and 00:41:430 -
00:51:377 (51377|2,51377|0,51377|1,51693|1,51693|3,51693|2) - not sure why you used this pattern when theres no sound for this
00:59:588 (59588|0,59904|0,60220|0,60535|0,60851|0,61167|0) - anchor
01:02:746 (62746|1,63062|1,63377|1,63693|1) - ^
01:12:062 (72062|1) - ghost note
01:32:114 - add note for kick
01:37:325 - missing note?
01:48:851 (108851|3,109167|3,109483|3,109798|3) - anchor
Mediocre chart, look out for snap error
advanced00:20:114 (20114|0) - what is this following?
00:32:114 (32114|0,32430|0,32746|0,33062|0,33377|0,33693|0,34009|0) - try rearranging some notes
00:34:325 (34325|3,34483|2,34641|1,34798|2,34956|3,35114|2,35272|1,35430|2,35588|3,35746|2,35904|1,36062|2,36220|3,36377|2,36535|1) - don't repeat the pattern over and over, it gets boring
00:41:193 - refer to novice suggestion
00:41:904 (41904|3,41983|2,42062|1,42141|0) - no sound for this
00:46:009 - missing note?
00:46:798 - ^
00:51:693 (51693|2,51693|1,51693|3) - no sound for triple
00:58:325 (58325|3,58641|3,58956|3,59272|3,59588|3,59904|3,60220|3,60535|3,60851|3,61167|3) - col 4 bias/anchor
01:03:062 (63062|1,63062|0,63062|2) - no sound for triple
01:03:693 (63693|0,63693|3,63693|2) - ^
01:04:325 (64325|1,64325|3,64325|0) - ^
01:05:430 - triple should be here
01:05:588 (65588|1,65588|0,65588|3) - no sound for triple
01:07:956 - triple should be here
01:08:114 (68114|2,68114|3,68114|1) - no sound for triple
01:08:746 (68746|0,68746|3,68746|1) - ^
01:09:377 (69377|1,69377|0,69377|2) - ^
01:10:483 - triple should be here
01:10:641 (70641|2,70641|3,70641|1) - no sound for triple
01:11:904 (71904|0,71904|3,72220|0,72220|3) - should not be double, no sound for it
01:34:009 (94009|0,94062|1,94114|2) - wrong snap, should be 1/4
01:39:272 (99272|1,99325|2,99377|3) - ^
Increase HP to at least 8
I get the feeling that you mapped this via "feeling", not much about following the track
just add note 
