akuma123 wrote:

❤ Team Love Deluxe Mania Queue ❤


This is the mod that you asked for in our queue, Let's start with this

Columns = (1/2/3/4)

Mage's Lv.24

Well, the intro feels good, there is no much problems but:
00:02:228 and similars - Maybe you could follow the pitch with the notes, something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8680057, not necessary but i think it will be better. i don't think so
00:07:750 - You missed a note, delete a note on the previous triple and add a note there xD. Okay, but i don't think i need to delete note from previous triple heh

Now the first stream, it has a simple structure and it feels good, the hand balance is fine too
Except 00:20:773 - That pattern at that BPM is pretty rough to do (really uncomfortable), and i dont think that trill fits that sound, it sounds more like stairs to me, but well, i suggest you to re arrange that little section. huh? this pattern is pretty easy and comfortable to play
00:25:682 - There is no beat or snare sound so that should not be a double. Delete a note. You're right
00:30:728 - I dont like the way you put the doubles to the synthesizer, not putting doubles on the first note, so the first suggestion i will do is to put the doubles on the first note of the sythesizer. Now, the other suggestion is to simply just delete all those doubles and just keep the doubles for the beat and the triples for the snare because i think that section already have enough doubles and with the extra doubles of the synthesizer it just looks bad, but that is my opinion, you can just ignore it if you want. I get your point, but if i'll follow your suggestion, then i'll lost variety of patterns
00:45:046 and 00:45:591 and 00:46:137 -Those should be triples because of the snare, add a note. oops, added!

Now the rest.
00:48:046 - 00:56:756 - I think this section does not follow the pitch properly, maybe re arrange it to something like this, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8680750 ,
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8680764 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8680777 i rearrenged

And finally the last JS.
01:11:756 - That is definitely not 1/4, is 1/6. Fixed
01:16:119 - Definitely you need to re arrange that section, it doesnt even follow the pitch to have those patterns, something like this will work https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8680881 naaahhh, just 1243 burst is boring!
01:26:226 - That stair does not follow the pitch, the pattern should be a repeating stair of 4321 but that will be to boring i think, so maybe try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8680920 ok
01:30:863 - That should be a triple and...
01:30:999 - That should be a double. ^ i make it to highlight 01:30:999 - this sound
01:34:136 and 01:34:681 - those should be triples. yep
01:37:136 - That should be a double, it is just a beat, not a snare or a cymbal. piano
01:37:545 - Same ^
01:39:317 - Same. ^

And i guess that is all in this diff, is fine i guess.

And that is all, the map was decent, with some more mods it will be ready for rank.

Good luck with the mapset

riunosk wrote:

from queue 1234

general

some difficulties do not have kiai, please fix

o ji

00:19:887 (19887|2) - ghost note? Fixed
00:34:750 (34750|2) - ^ Fixed
01:11:619 (71619|1,71756|1,71892|1,72028|1) - anchor Fixed
Pretty weird chart

gud luk for renk

riunosk wrote:

from queue 1234

general

some difficulties do not have kiai, please fix | Yeah I know. I'm lazy sometimes :c

6

00:52:409 (52409|3,52409|2) - probably one note is enough for this sound
Pretty decent chart but feels pretty oddly timed

11

00:56:756 - maybe add another note for consistency? (same sound)
01:01:119 - ^
01:08:619 (68619|2,68892|2,69165|2) - seems unnecessary | Oh, repatterned~
01:43:817 (103817|1,103954|2,104090|1,104363|2,104499|1,104636|2,104772|1) - focus on col 2 and 3 intended? | So conceived
Decent chart

9+10 = 21

00:05:432 (5432|1,5637|1,5773|1,5955|1) - some form of anchor
00:27:182 (27182|2,27318|2,27455|2,27591|2) - ^
00:38:091 (38091|1,38228|1,38364|1,38500|1) - ^
00:38:637 (38637|3,38773|3,38909|3,39046|3,39182|3) - ^
01:20:756 (80756|1,80892|1,81028|1,81165|1,81301|1,81437|1,81574|1) - intentional? | Yes, but repatterned ~
01:40:817 (100817|0,100954|0,101090|0,101226|0) - anchor
01:42:317 (102317|1,102454|1,102590|1,102726|1,102863|1) - ^
Look out for anchors | Oh lol. Will try to avoid them

gud luk for renk

error_exe777 wrote:

heyyyy from my queue

kiai is not present in some diffs, please fix it.

1|2|3|4

Lv. 6

00:10:137 (10137|0,10137|1) - this double is unnecessary | Hmm. I want to highlith there a more loud sound than other. Nice english, idk how to explain it .-.

00:12:046 (12046|2,12591|2) - move one of these to column 4, the pattern is boring | 3rd note moved ~

00:17:159 (17159|0) - why tf is this snapped to the 1/4 when there is a louder sound on the 1/2 tick below it. please change this

00:25:887 (25887|2) - again ^^ | Done Yeah, it's pretty good

00:13:137 - in this section, sliders like 00:15:046 (15046|3) - are inconsistent and don't really represent anything. i recommend rethinking this section | LNs follows 1/4. But I'm listening and plaing it now and I agree, it's awkward. Will think :thinking:

00:34:614 (34614|2) - again with the weird 1/4, i won't mention it again

01:01:119 (61119|3,61119|1) - this doubles seems unnecessary | Bell sound

01:13:665 (73665|2,73937|2) - eh | Moved to 4

Lv.11

00:04:273 (4273|2,4409|0) - if you want to do this, move the LN back to 00:04:273 - it should be moved back either way tbh

00:27:318 - rip column 3. please include him
All accepted

Lv.21

00:43:682 - if the sliders here are representing the kinda synthy sound, then why didn't you include it here 00:30:591 - and 00:32:773 - and 00:34:955 - and 00:37:137 | Added ~

01:45:590 - 1/8 here, and not here 01:20:756 - ? | I think it's for Extra From now it's repatterned

great diff

sorry for the lazy mod, best of luck!

eyes wrote:

Mage's Lv.24
Добавь киаи.
00:08:773 (8773|0,8909|0) - этого можно избежать И зачем же?
00:10:409 - добавь лн до 00:10:818 Ну ладна
00:24:864 (24864|0,25000|1,25000|0,25137|1) - дизбаланс, перемести какой нибудь джек на правую руку Не вижу дизбаланса
00:30:046 (30046|2,30591|2,30728|2,30864|2) - зочем Мне кажется, ты видишь дизбаланс там где его нет
00:48:046 - квадр, тут тарелка, больше звуков чем здесь 00:52:409 Ну ладна
01:01:119 - трипл должен быть Не)
01:16:392 - трипл Не, тогда придется 1/4 джек делать, а это будет слишком жеска
01:21:846 - лн Вай нот
01:35:363 (95363|0,95363|2,95431|3,95431|1,95499|2,95499|0,95636|3,95636|1) - CTRL+H, будет сбалансированнее из-за 01:34:886 (94886|2,95022|2,95226|2,95363|2,95499|2) Хорошо
01:46:954 - трипл/квадр Ладненько

atian540 wrote:

hii AJIekceu NM request

1|2|3|4

general

un-check widescreen support if you don't use SB in Lv.11, OWJI, Mage diff

OWJI's Lv.15

00:03:318 (3318|2) - move col 1 00:03:455 (3455|0,3523|1,3591|2) - ctrl+H 00:04:409 (4409|1) - col 3 Done
01:01:119 - try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8898178 Nope
01:06:028 - ^^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8898191 Nope
01:18:301 (78301|2) - delete or move col 2 Moved
01:21:846 - add LN nope

thats all,i hope this helpful
good luck~

atian540 wrote:

hii AJIekceu NM request

1|2|3|4

Lv.6

00:03:182 - add note and this LN 00:03:182 (3182|1) - move to 00:03:318 - and end in 00:03:591 -
00:05:500 - add note
maybe this 00:20:773 (20773|1) - delete and add note in 00:21:046 - 00:21:318 - 00:21:591 -
00:34:818 (34818|2) - delete
00:52:409 - i think 2 note is better
00:57:301 (57301|0,57846|3,58392|1,58937|2,59483|3,60028|1,60574|0) - suggest change to LN to white line

Lv.11

00:17:091 - add note
00:25:818 - ^ | it may be hard to hit for Normal diff, so nope
00:46:137 - 00:46:682 - delete 1 note i don't hear cymbal

thats all,i hope this helpful
good luck~

• lv.6

  00:05:228 (5228|3) - this LN must end at 00:05:500 (5500|1) -
  00:05:500 (5500|1) - change become LN and end at 00:05:773 (5773|1) -
  00:20:637 (20637|2) - maybe it's too hard for easy if you put note here,I suggest you to remove this
  00:43:682 (43682|1) - LN end at white line
  00:44:091 (44091|3) - LN must begin from white line imo,then end at 00:44:500 (44500|0) -
  01:38:840 (98840|1) - add 1 note at col 2?it's a sound but empty pattern

• lv.11

  01:31:408 (91408|0) - move to blue line below to consistent like this sample 00:17:159 (17159|3) -

• OWJI's lv.15

  00:17:364 (17364|3) - add 1 note at col2?
  00:21:864 (21864|3,21864|2) - better if become triple note imo
  00:38:500 (38500|2) - add 1 note here?
  00:48:046 (48046|0) - and this 00:52:409 (52409|3) - holding LN up to 5 seconds?it's too boring so I think you can add some notes
  01:09:301 (69301|2) - add 1 note?
  01:21:846 (81846|1) - you can add 1 LN at col2 from this cuz there is a sound that you ignored

[ Blaze ] wrote:

hi,NM req on Illusionary Border Queue
feel free to reject Blaze if it's awkward

column
l1l2l3l4l

• lv.6

  00:05:228 (5228|3) - this LN must end at 00:05:500 (5500|1) -
  00:05:500 (5500|1) - change become LN and end at 00:05:773 (5773|1) - | That's more better. Also added note for kick in 4th column
  00:20:637 (20637|2) - maybe it's too hard for easy if you put note here,I suggest you to remove this | ~
  00:43:682 (43682|1) - LN end at white line
  00:44:091 (44091|3) - LN must begin from white line imo,then end at 00:44:500 (44500|0) - | Well, if you talking about sound like there 00:39:728 (39728|2) - (bell kick or smth like this) then I may say that I don't follow this sound Oh, definitely not this sound. Anyway, current position of notes on timeline imo is more better follows the rhythm and for newbies is easier to hit. So I'll not change a logic of patterns~
  01:38:840 (98840|1) - add 1 note at col 2?it's a sound but empty pattern | Hmm, let's try it, but I'll add to 1st column

• lv.11

  01:31:408 (91408|0) - move to blue line below to consistent like this sample 00:17:159 (17159|3) - | Right~

whoaa another PIU! I shoot star cuz it's PIU xD
overall,it's a good map.goodluck alexey

[ Blaze ] wrote:

hi,NM req on Illusionary Border Queue
feel free to reject Blaze if it's awkward

column
l1l2l3l4l

• OWJI's lv.15

  00:17:364 (17364|3) - add 1 note at col2? Done
  00:21:864 (21864|3,21864|2) - better if become triple note imo Done
  00:38:500 (38500|2) - add 1 note here? Added note at 00:38:228 -
  00:48:046 (48046|0) - and this 00:52:409 (52409|3) - holding LN up to 5 seconds?it's too boring so I think you can add some notes Added
  01:09:301 (69301|2) - add 1 note? Done
  01:21:846 (81846|1) - you can add 1 LN at col2 from this cuz there is a sound that you ignored Done

whoaa another PIU! I shoot star cuz it's PIU xD
overall,it's a good map.goodluck alexey

ChochoaLatte- wrote:

Req from my queue
free to reject
1|2|3|4

Mod

• 
  Lv.6

1. 00:21:046 (21046|1) - how about to move these note to 00:21:046 (21046|2) - | Maybe
2. maybe mapping bell sound like on this section 00:48:591 - | It's logical but I want to give a break for conveyor and player, so no for now ~
3. 00:49:682 - ^
4. 00:50:773 - ^
5. 00:51:864 - ^ and else
6. 01:03:301 (63301|2,63574|1,63846|3,64119|0,64392|2) - well im being confused on first try, but gj i like it :3 | Thank you
7. 01:36:317 (96317|0) - wrong place, are you? cymbal here 01:36:454 (96454|0) - | Just note for simple hold releasing and quiet sound (veru quiet for EZ lol). Btw moved~
   Great chart <3
   
   Lv.11
8. 00:17:773 (17773|2,17909|1) - maybe flip these like 00:17:773 (17773|2,17909|3) - | Maybe
9. 00:06:864 (6864|1,7137|2,7409|1) - each note has a difference pitch so ,
10. you can move these 00:07:137 (7137|2) - to col 4, and these note 00:07:409 (7409|1) - to col 1
11. 00:07:682 (7682|2) - move to 00:07:682 (7682|1) -
12. 00:07:955 - maybe like this 00:07:955 (7955|2,8228|0,8500|3,8773|0,8773|1) - | All accepted
13. miss a cymbal here 01:40:408 - ? | Yeah
    nice chart
    
    sorry if not helps enough
    gl

FadillSan wrote:

NM req from my queue~
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

Lv.15

00:15:318 (15318|3,15318|2) - move to 23 Done
00:17:364 - add double here Done
00:19:546 - add single note Done
00:20:773 (20773|0,20773|3,21046|2,21046|1,21318|3,21318|2,21591|1,21591|0,21864|3,21864|2) - how about make it LN ? I'll think about it
00:24:046 (24046|2,24046|3) - move to 23 Done
00:25:000 - add single Done
00:26:091 (26091|1) - make it double Done

Sorry just a little mod, good luck~

ChochoaLatte- wrote:

Lv.15
[*]00:48:591 - add note for bell? Done

[*]00:49:682 - ^ Done

[*]00:50:773 - ^ Done

[*]00:51:864 - ^ Done

[*]00:52:955 - ^ etc Done

[*]01:20:756 - plz, can you delete this ln 01:20:756 (80756|3) - ? Done

so you can make this 01:20:687 (80687|2,80892|2,81096|2,81301|2,81506|2) - more comfortable xd
pretty solid chart <3

1. Check the length time not sure about this in all the diff must be consistent so this.
   
2. Disable the "widescreen" in diff gd's.

1. 00:52:409 - i think it's time to add note for this diff and improve the spread of the next diff
2. 01:05:210 (65210|2) - remove this LN and 01:05:483 - add note? is to emphasize that sound + cymbal sound that i hear there but you should remove this too 01:04:392 (64392|1) - for consistency
3. 01:10:528 (70528|3) - move column 3? is less anchor than the 4
4. 01:16:119 (76119|2) - same reason and considering like 01:18:301 -
5. 01:25:136 - is better add note to emphasize the cymbal
6. 01:40:954 (100954|1,101022|2) - control + ← it's a bit empty on the left at that time

1. 00:10:273 (10273|0) - this LN should start in 00:10:409 - since end 00:10:887 - the sound voice effect idk
2. 00:19:546 (19546|0) - move column 2 to reduce the anchor in column 1
3. 00:26:364 (26364|3) - feel this a little uncomfortable by many keys in it column so move to the 2?
4. 00:30:182 - etc.. i not know what sound follow but i think should be consistent in the other diff example:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:32:364 (32364|1,32500|0) - control + g this structure is best seen with that sound blow imo
6. 00:52:955 (52955|0,52955|2) - remove it there is no clear sound and strong considering the following diff that only has simple note
7. 00:57:028 - etc.. same reason^
8. 01:10:596 - missing note sound is high there
9. 01:14:619 (74619|0) - is better column 2 for balance
10. 01:21:846 (81846|0) - LN end to 01:22:460 -
11. 01:24:710 (84710|1) - control + → then extends LN to 01:25:136 - it feels better regarded
12. 01:36:999 - add LN like 01:37:136 (97136|1) - ? sound similar there
13. 01:41:431 - add note for sound piano you follow 1/4 01:41:022 (101022|1,101158|1) -

1. 00:04:273 - remove this note the sound is not as strong as 00:04:409 - or unless you add there
2. 00:10:273 - this LN should start in 00:10:409 - since you end 00:10:887 - the sound effect here idk
3. 00:15:728 (15728|2,15864|2) - you should change it to another column to reduce the anchor of that column since it is also n little empty on the left
4. 00:30:046 - would be cool if we add LN 1/2 matches the effect imo
5. 01:09:028 (69028|0,69165|0) - control + h? better balance also the sound is not so similar that 01:09:301 (69301|1,69301|0) -
6. 01:14:210 - etc.. add note? for emphasize sound strong + cymbal there
7. 01:21:846 - add LN for effect like 00:10:137 - is similar

Etsu wrote:

hi, mod requested from my queue.


[OWJI's Lv.15]

1. 00:52:409 - i think it's time to add note for this diff and improve the spread of the next diff Done
2. 01:05:210 (65210|2) - remove this LN and 01:05:483 - add note? is to emphasize that sound + cymbal sound that i hear there but you should remove this too 01:04:392 (64392|1) - for consistency Didn't removed LN but added note
3. 01:10:528 (70528|3) - move column 3? is less anchor than the 4 Re-annaged pattern
4. 01:16:119 (76119|2) - same reason and considering like 01:18:301 - Done
5. 01:25:136 - is better add note to emphasize the cymbal Done
6. 01:40:954 (100954|1,101022|2) - control + ← it's a bit empty on the left at that time Done

Etsu wrote:

hi, mod requested from my queue.

[General]
Columns: 1|2|3|4

1. Check the length time not sure about this in all the diff must be consistent so this.
   
2. Disable the "widescreen" in diff gd's.

[Lv.21]

1. 00:10:273 (10273|0) - this LN should start in 00:10:409 - since end 00:10:887 - the sound voice effect idk
2. 00:19:546 (19546|0) - move column 2 to reduce the anchor in column 1
3. 00:26:364 (26364|3) - feel this a little uncomfortable by many keys in it column so move to the 2?
4. 00:30:182 - etc.. i not know what sound follow but i think should be consistent in the other diff example: | idk how to name this sound effect D: but it's not same sound like 00:30:046 - . LNs which started from this poind are shortened~
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:32:364 (32364|1,32500|0) - control + g this structure is best seen with that sound blow imo | Good idea
6. 00:52:955 (52955|0,52955|2) - remove it there is no clear sound and strong considering the following diff that only has simple note | Accepted ~
7. 00:57:028 - etc.. same reason^ | Eeemm, but there is a kick sound :thinking:
8. 01:10:596 - missing note sound is high there
9. 01:14:619 (74619|0) - is better column 2 for balance | Oh, sure
10. 01:21:846 (81846|0) - LN end to 01:22:460 -
11. 01:24:710 (84710|1) - control + → then extends LN to 01:25:136 - it feels better regarded | <3
12. 01:36:999 - add LN like 01:37:136 (97136|1) - ? sound similar there | LNs in this part are followind piano sound so no
13. 01:41:431 - add note for sound piano you follow 1/4 01:41:022 (101022|1,101158|1) - | There is 1/6 in this part and LN following this sound [ [/list]

_wwwww wrote:

Hi, from mod queue

Sorry I'm late , was busy with social stuffs.

Column 1/2/3/4

Mod

[General]

Metadata is fine, but it is recommended to use hitsounds if you are aiming for ranked. | I know, will add them later
01:05:415 - Snap the preview point.

[Lv. 6]

00:43:546 (43546|2) - This note is kinda random (negligeable) | I dont think so Strong sound, first was there 00:43:341 - , but it may be hard for Easy difficulty. But don't put note there 00:43:546 - is unfollowing music I think. Also it's for better feeling music.

[Lv. 11]

00:15:591 (15591|1) - Move to 1, to avoid same positions as previously. | Accepted ~
00:40:137 - Would add a note to 2, to make consistent patterns | I want to highlith there this sound 00:40:273 - so extra note in previous beat is.. extra

That's all.

Good luck

tailsdk wrote:

From Tails modding que

Lv.6

ehm remove this note 00:43:546 (43546|2) - | Well, second advice, okay Removed~
these three Ln's 01:36:045 (96045|2,97545|3,99726|0) - maybe remove them | Changed to single notes
01:42:590 (102590|2,102999|0,103136|3,103545|2,103681|1,104090|3,104226|0,104636|2,104772|1,105181|0) - the LN's are too long for the sound and move the single note with them | Don't fully understand. Btw moved notes 1/2 down and shortened LNs 1/2 down too

Lv.11

00:24:728 (24728|1,24864|3,25000|0,25137|2,25409|1,25546|3,25887|0,26091|2) - maybe change some of them to go the other way very one sided | Repatterned a bit
missing this sound 00:31:409 -
here again 00:33:591 -
00:34:682 (34682|0) - move to 00:34:614 -
00:35:773 - missing sound
00:37:955 - ^
00:40:137 - ^
00:42:318 - ^
maybe add a note here in this sound? 00:43:341 - | It's not for Normal diff imo
00:44:500 - missing note | All same moments - I want to "highlight" sounds like 00:42:455 (42455|0) - so note between this sound and previous similar sound will be excess
00:54:591 - add note
00:55:750 - ^
extend this LN 01:45:590 (105590|0) - | Good

Good Luck with the map
if the mod didnt help no kudos

Insp1r3 wrote:

OWJI's Lv.151|2|3|4

00:06:591 (6591|2,6591|1,6864|3,7137|0,7409|1,7682|3,7682|2,7955|1,8228|2,8500|3,8773|1,8773|0) - I would make these doubles Done

00:21:318 (21318|2) - Move to 1 Done

00:30:046 (30046|2) - I would move this to 2 and make it an LN, it seems quite empty without it Done

00:52:409 (52409|2,52409|1) - Delete 2 or 3 Done

01:18:301 (78301|1) - Delete Done

01:22:119 (82119|1) - Move to start at 1:21:846 and finish on the same red line as 01:22:119 (82119|0,82119|3) Done

01:27:317 (87317|2,87317|1,87317|3) - Make this a single - 01:29:499 (89499|2,89499|1) - This is the same sound but is mapped as a double Changed for double

Very nice map! Good luck on getting it ranked!