1. flw34tfg (5.43 stars, 924 notes)
2. Planet Oni (6.99 stars, 1155 notes)
3. sdfgdfghty (4.58 stars, 805 notes)

yuzu__rinrin wrote:

pyon

Greenshell wrote:

Greetings, via mod ticket

this is only a quick look at Kantan and Planet Oni, as the set is missing an Oni yet.

there goes your ticket :^)

General:

Your mp3 is 320kbps, I've lowered it to 192kbps for you, offset needs to be re-adjusted though. lel your edit ninja'd my mod
>oops lol sorry lul

Tags: The 4th KAC Original Song Contest オリジナル楽曲コンテスト SDVX
add these
Rest is 100% good, if anyone is asking for the source, there you go
>metadata <3333333333333333 thanks!

Footnote: Everything mentioned in the mod is using the current offset, so apply the recompressed mp3 and new offset AFTER you've applied or not applied my suggestions.


[Kantan]

00:10:768 (14,15) - ctrl+g? melody is decreasing while the current pattern implies an increase, also to make a counterpart to 00:12:375 (16,17,18) -
>fixed

01:08:090 onwards - wtf 1/2
>well, i can't think more better in now, and its 1/2 maybe can acceptable because the dense of circle is very less imo.

As for the second Kiai, I'm concerned about the consecutive mapping, as there don't exist any 4/1 breaks throughout, even if there are 3/1 breaks
>agree too. delete 01:28:447 - and 01:37:018 - so that can make break and also emphasize finisher after this.

01:36:482 (169,170,171,172) - I'd change this to d kkd, sounds better and it creates a counterpart to 01:34:340 (164,165,166,167) -
>deleted part after above fix. thanks!

01:58:982 (213) - finish? a normal note feels underwhelming for such a strong sound. this suggestion applies for all diffs
>keep for consistency with other diff. lwl

[Planet Oni]

00:18:536 (156) - wtf 2x SV, how am I supposed to read this without any warning
>lolololol fixed 1.5~

00:51:348 (312) - kat? I know you want to keep emphasis on 00:51:482 (313) - but since you skip the rising 1/4 8-bit thing between those notes this should work fine, but mostly maintain flow within the stream pattern
>ye, but also wanna consistency of stream with 00:53:358 (334,335,336) - , like 00:55:500 (358,359,360) - with 00:57:643 (382,383,384) - , so maybe keep now

01:46:661 (859,860,861,862,863,864) - if my ears aren't tricking me, the snapping for these notes should be 3/4, not 2/3
>fixed -v-

Call me back when the set is complete, it's no use doing all diffs right now (and I'm too fucking tired to do all atm).
>lolol ok~

Consified wrote:

Lets go M4M~

General

Lmao I have a big question mark that this song has no tags.
btw good song good map :p
>now exist! thanks to green =v=

Planet

00:14:116 (108,109,110,111) - kkkd? the drum pitch it from high to low
>fixed
00:18:402 (156) - d? i think here change to d will be better,you can keep as you like.
>most reason to keep is the emphasize 00:18:536 (157) - , and also has same kickbass sound to me. sorry ;w;
00:29:987 (112) - delete,i hear no sound
>for the next stream flow, keep now
01:00:590 (418,419,420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448,449) - use ddkdkkdk pattern? ddddkkkk too simple i think
>little want to fix, but wanna emphasize 01:02:732 (450,451,452,453,454,455,456,457) - ddkkddkk pattern with similar sound, keep now.
01:07:554 - k d k?match the intro (btw if you accept it you can change it in all diff too)
>wow why i don't put from now! thanks~ i'll be put it with SV when offset request is deliver.

inner oni

00:02:197 (4,5,6) - change to 1/6,you use 1/6 in 00:14:116 (85,86,87,88) - too so i think you can add it
>fixed and other 1/6 place also fixed
01:29:786 (382,383,384,385) - kkd kkd
01:38:357 (467,468,469,470) - ddk ddk
>both keep cause finisher just after 1/4 stream seems little awkward to me.

muzu

01:08:090 (348) - k,since you put k in inner oni and planet diff
>wow change inner and planet oni in here to d! lolol thans
01:58:715 (611) - change to d? i think it will make the end better
>for the consistency with other stream, keep now

Ok that's the end because i am suck at kantan and futsuu and i dont want to mass your map up
>same to lpololol
Good luck for ranked!

about 6 hours ago
can i ask offset?
while changing mp3, offset changed little =v=;;

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/643875

Thanks in advance~

437,267.857142857143,4,1,0,80,1,0
10213,267.857142857143,4,1,0,80,1,0
49721,267.857142857143,4,1,0,80,1,0
76640,267.857142857143,4,1,0,60,1,0
102220,267.857142857143,4,1,0,80,1,1

Le_Crapougnard wrote:

about 6 hours ago
can i ask offset?
while changing mp3, offset changed little =v=;;

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/643875

Thanks in advance~

I changed the offset to 437 but sometimes, the measure doesn't fit exactly with the music so i did this :

437,267.857142857143,4,1,0,80,1,0
10213,267.857142857143,4,1,0,80,1,0
49721,267.857142857143,4,1,0,80,1,0
76640,267.857142857143,4,1,0,60,1,0
102220,267.857142857143,4,1,0,80,1,1

It could be better, hope it will help

really thanks for helping but i think doesn't fit in the onbeat =v=;;
sorry ;w;

Marm wrote:

hey, my part of the m4m here a bit late orz (but not 1 week late as I promise :p)

planet

00:04:059 - a note here fits well as theres a synth sound (also covers the 1/4 note at 00:04:126 and the triplet plays better with a note before)
>quite charming, but wanna focus on drum here, keep now.
00:16:246 (129,130,131,132) - ctrl+g one of these doubles, repeating them doesn't play well (also would keep consistency with what you did at 00:11:960 (85,86,87,88) - ). Do the same on similar parts if you agree.
>ok fixed=v=
00:16:648 (133) - can change this to kat for the super high pitch synth sound.
>super ultra high pitch but base is drum kick, so maybe keep here.
00:19:862 - this section would play better if you only mapped the really important sounds at 3/4 rhythm. looks a bit overmapped the way it is now since it's not as intense as the kiai (the ministreams are good but not the triplets as the important sounds are in the middle of it, making it weak). Another option would be to change the triplets to dkd or kdk as the different colours give more emphasis on the synth itself. (Like 00:22:139 (35,36,37) - )
>here is almost same melody and beat, just kiai's pitch down ver. =v=;; need some think to me here.
00:23:746 (51,52) - Ctrl+g for mirrored patterns as it plays better and fits the song better too.
>fixed
00:39:349 - good place for a note as it's the same as previous note. (and the 3/2 rhythm is really cool too :p)
00:41:492 - same as above.
>sounds good. fix both.
00:43:032 (223) - Deleting this note gives more emphasis on the k k k following the vocals, making it really stand out. If you're afraid of "not following the drums" you're ok as you didn't do it on 00:44:371 too.
>ye exactly "not following the drums" =v=, wanna put kick sound here. and 00:44:371 have only synth sound ^^

inner

00:01:514 - filling the strong drum sounds here is better than the finisher on the kat (or you can keep both if you yolo).
>good. fixed
00:04:059 - same as planet.
>also same answer =v=
00:11:960 (71,72,73,74) - Same suggestion as for the doubles in the planet diff. do the same on similar parts if you agree.
>ok~ fixed
00:17:585 - missing note before the stream?
>term before start big stream =v=. keep now
00:19:862 - similar suggestion as planet on this section.
>(similar answer)
00:39:818 - missing note?
>ye, thanks fined~
00:43:032 (23) - could delete for the same reason as planet.
>couldnt delete for the same reason as planet

I spent 1 minute searching for oni and didn't see it wasn't ready yet orz.
>LOL sorry not ready yet =v=

muzu

00:04:059 - same as other diffs.
>stop same thing ;w;
00:05:532 - you can add a note for the drum sound if you want.
>added
00:06:603 - same as above.
>added~
00:19:862 - following the synth at 3/4 is really better imo orz, sorry for insisting on this one (3/4 isn't hard for muzu).
>no, hard @p@
01:58:300 - you can add a note for a death ending on the map as the song supports it :p
>don wanna - DEAD END -

futsuu

Overall the non-kiai parts are way denser compared to the kiai. Try to change what you map to reverse that. I'd recommend to decrease the amount of triples you use as it's quite hard for futsuu on this bpm.
00:34:059 (103,104) - move these notes 1/1 backwards as 00:34:059 is the same sound as 00:33:255 and 00:33:791 is an important beat as it's a big white tick.
>well, ok fix some in futsuu, include this suggestion. thanks =v=

kantan

00:04:327 (6,11) - I think these are too hard for kantan if you want to keep the note at the red line. Same for similar parts.
>good. deleted
01:09:818 (113) - , 01:14:103 (121) - and 01:18:389 (127) - I'd recommend to remove these notes on the red line as there's no breaks after the note on the white tick, making it too complex for kantan.
>have even quite rest time after this, and same color at the calm part. wanna keep now

That's it from me.
Nice song! Good luck on this one, I want to see this ranked :^)