18:00 iloveyou4ever: Hello,do you mind to do a testplay?
18:00 iloveyou4ever: it's a 6* map(not really 6* but few 1/6)
18:00 Kazaze: Hey! It will be my pleasure!
18:01 Kazaze: I'll try :3
18:01 iloveyou4ever: Thanks :D
18:01 *iloveyou4ever is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1364659 DJ Command - True Blue [DJ Command Mix] (Full Ver.)]
18:01 iloveyou4ever: it'd be great if you can do a quick irc mod with me too >_<
18:02 Kazaze: Yeah! I'll help :3
18:02 iloveyou4ever: cuz I cant figure out anymore errors..and I hope modders can spot sth that I can't
18:02 iloveyou4ever: Thanks a lot!
18:02 Kazaze: That would be my first irc c:
18:02 Kazaze: You're welcome
18:03 Kazaze: Hope I will be able to help
18:08 iloveyou4ever: sorry for such a hard map o.o
18:09 Kazaze: It's ok haha it's just me and my sucky skills
18:10 iloveyou4ever: focus on stream is ok :D
18:10 iloveyou4ever: if you cant play it then check some patterns of non-kiai time is also ok XD
18:11 Kazaze: I feel like 00:13:817 (23) - is unnecessary : It isn't mapped on any major sound
18:11 Kazaze: I'll do my best :')
18:12 iloveyou4ever: someone also said that before
18:12 iloveyou4ever: however I find it strange that keeping 00:14:000 (24,25,26,27) - as only kd kd
18:12 iloveyou4ever: seems a little boring
18:12 iloveyou4ever: also for flow purpose
18:14 Kazaze: You're right kd kd is a bit boring but still
18:14 Kazaze: I looks and sounds a bit odd
18:14 iloveyou4ever: I'll consider that..
18:14 Kazaze: ok
18:16 Kazaze: Any reasons why 00:26:805 (65,66,67,68) - is not hitsounded the same way as 00:15:098 (27,28,29,30) - I would personally make them the same since these two parts are mapped on the same melody
18:18 iloveyou4ever: nice catch!
18:18 iloveyou4ever: I cant spot that...
18:18 iloveyou4ever: changed!
18:19 Kazaze: Thx :b
18:19 Kazaze: Minor point I guess : 00:43:268 (116) - I would change to a d to highlight the vocals going lower on that note
18:21 iloveyou4ever: the distance from this and next note is quite far
18:21 iloveyou4ever: 2.5 beats
18:21 iloveyou4ever: I think need not highlight that
18:22 Kazaze: Ok that makes sense, no need for a change then
18:22 iloveyou4ever: ok!
18:24 Kazaze: I think you could add a note on 00:47:742 - according to the melody you're following, that would also create a great graduation from the doubles to a quadruple 1/4 and then to the streams a bit later - Kinda like a build-up
18:24 iloveyou4ever: there's already a note there o.o
18:24 Kazaze: No?
18:25 iloveyou4ever: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8695197
18:25 Kazaze: Oh sorry
18:25 Kazaze: That's 00:47:742 (12) -
18:25 Kazaze: I was refering to 00:47:651 -
18:25 Kazaze: Sowy
18:26 iloveyou4ever: check this part 03:08:322 -
18:26 Kazaze: Ah that makes sense now, ok!
18:30 iloveyou4ever: and I need to sleep 30 min later :c
18:30 iloveyou4ever: but nvm keep going :D
18:31 Kazaze: What about moving 01:56:523 (598) - to 01:56:706 - and then adding a note on 01:56:889 - / I feel like this structure would follow the melody better
18:31 Kazaze: Oh :v
18:32 iloveyou4ever: that'd be too dense I think
18:33 iloveyou4ever: I want to leave 1/2 space like 01:56:706 - and 01:56:889 -
18:34 Kazaze: 02:53:139 (416) - sound the same as 02:53:322 (417) - I would change it to a d / the repetition of d would emphasize even better the following 1/6 which is k sounds in majotity
18:34 Kazaze: Ok
18:34 iloveyou4ever: 02:53:139 - is still following the background ''clap'' sound
18:35 Kazaze: but there's a very distinct drum sound on there too, the same one that 02:53:322 (417) - is following so idk, I guess it's up to you
18:36 iloveyou4ever: I'd say clap sound is more dominant here
18:37 iloveyou4ever: and also following the consistent music element here(sry for bad english)
18:37 iloveyou4ever: the clap sound
18:38 Kazaze: Don't you worry about your english, mine is bad too :D
18:38 Kazaze: I get you
18:38 Kazaze: clap sound it is then! :3
18:38 iloveyou4ever: ok!
18:39 Kazaze: 04:09:236 (321,322,323,324,325,326,327) - Should be the same as 00:15:098 (28,29,30,31,32,33,34) - shouldn't it?
18:39 Kazaze: so change 04:10:334 (327) - to k
18:40 Kazaze: same for 04:56:066 (659,660,661,662,663,664,665) - (Is there a reason for that then?)
18:40 iloveyou4ever: I changed this 00:16:195 - to d
18:41 Kazaze: Ok that's consistent now
18:41 iloveyou4ever: yes
18:42 Kazaze: Aaaand I guess that's all I would have to say :v
18:43 iloveyou4ever: any other consistency issue?
18:43 iloveyou4ever: you really help me a lot on that :D
18:43 Kazaze: Oh thanks :D
18:43 Kazaze: I'm looking :b
18:44 iloveyou4ever: Thx :D
18:44 Kazaze: Minor stuff : Change 05:01:370 (684) - to a d?
18:44 Kazaze: so 05:01:005 (682,683,684,685) - will be hitsounded just like 04:59:541 (676,677,678,679) -
18:44 Kazaze: since they're following the same melody
18:46 iloveyou4ever: OK!
18:46 Kazaze: Also 00:28:268 (70,71,72,73) - should be like 00:16:561 (35,36,37,38) - ?
18:47 iloveyou4ever: is following vocal here
18:47 Kazaze: Oh ok
18:47 iloveyou4ever: also want to highlight 00:29:548 (74) - this
18:47 Kazaze: ok!
18:49 Kazaze: 04:10:883 (328,329,330) - you could change this a bit so it's more similar to 00:16:561 (35,36,37,38) -
18:50 Kazaze: kkd or add a note so it's the exact same
18:50 iloveyou4ever: emm but the artist sucks
18:50 iloveyou4ever: he didnt put a piano sound on 04:10:700 -
18:50 Kazaze: Oh you're right
18:50 iloveyou4ever: also here is a calm part after kiai time,I want to leave more breaks here
18:50 Kazaze: kdk is a nice fit then
18:51 Kazaze: yeah ok
18:51 iloveyou4ever: ye
18:51 Kazaze: kkd wouldn't have this notion of up-down-up melody kdk has
18:52 iloveyou4ever: yeah
18:55 Kazaze: 00:25:158 (62,63) - Ctrl+g ? in all the other similar parts : 04:07:590 (317,318,319,320) - and 04:54:419 (655,656,657,658) - it "k d dk"
18:56 iloveyou4ever: I think the vocal are different
18:56 iloveyou4ever: also does this pitch
18:57 iloveyou4ever: the ''ha'' sound on 00:25:890 - is obviously high pitch
18:57 iloveyou4ever: I want to highlight that
18:57 Kazaze: Hum ok
18:57 iloveyou4ever: 04:08:322 - ''did'' sound in here is not that obvious and strong imo
18:58 Kazaze: I agree
18:59 Kazaze: I think that's it then!
19:00 iloveyou4ever: Thanks so much at all :D
19:00 iloveyou4ever: I couldn't spot out consistency issue at all XD maybe I should pay more attention on that
19:00 Kazaze: you're welcome! I'm so glad I helped!
19:00 iloveyou4ever: post the log and take kudos?
19:00 Kazaze: Ok ! :3